My queue
1|2|3|4|
In ADVANCED diff your mistakes were the LNs. With that LOT of LNs, new players may have problems in reading it. It was mainly your only mistake.
Good luck.
1|2|3|4|
NOVICE diff
Your mistake here was thinking that the only players that are going to play this are high acc guys that wants to score 1M. Well, there are new players to this game, and jacks like this (00:05:832 (5832|0,5990|0) - ) can be really hard for them. LN Shields are jacks too, by the way. Also, if you want to make fast doubles in easy diffs, I suggest you to do 1 hand only (https://puu.sh/s4e9L/6355b4bfe4.png).
Specific stuff:
00:24:780 (24780|0,25253|0) - I don't like this that much. I'll understand if you say no.
Suggestion: I would put those two notes (00:25:253 (25253|0,25569|1) - ) In 2| and 3|.
00:46:411 (46411|3,46727|3) - ^
00:50:674 (50674|3,50990|3) - LN Shield. "Oh but it's not a jack~" yea, but it's hard for new players. Believe me, easy patterns can be really hard for them.
00:59:043 (59043|3) - I see that you're trying to do alternates, but don't fix it in one note. You just spammed 4| for no reason.
01:11:359 (71359|3,71832|3) - Same LN Shield I said before.
01:19:885 (79885|2,80359|2) - I said it before.
Specific stuff:
00:24:780 (24780|0,25253|0) - I don't like this that much. I'll understand if you say no.
Suggestion: I would put those two notes (00:25:253 (25253|0,25569|1) - ) In 2| and 3|.
00:46:411 (46411|3,46727|3) - ^
00:50:674 (50674|3,50990|3) - LN Shield. "Oh but it's not a jack~" yea, but it's hard for new players. Believe me, easy patterns can be really hard for them.
00:59:043 (59043|3) - I see that you're trying to do alternates, but don't fix it in one note. You just spammed 4| for no reason.
01:11:359 (71359|3,71832|3) - Same LN Shield I said before.
01:19:885 (79885|2,80359|2) - I said it before.
In ADVANCED diff your mistakes were the LNs. With that LOT of LNs, new players may have problems in reading it. It was mainly your only mistake.
Good luck.