Okay, you don't have to do everything I suggested! If you don't like my suggestion, just leave it the way you like!
This will have to do with rhythm more than the general stuff00:13:530 (3) - You missed some notes with this back and forth slider. Make it end on the red tick that is in the middle of it and place a note where the end of the back and forth slider was like this ->
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/656850800:16:258 (3) - ^ Same
00:18:985 (4) - Make this slider a back and forth slider. Sounds better!
00:20:178 (6) - Remove it! Sounds better without it!
00:22:394 (4) - Make this slider a back and forth slider!
00:22:905 (5) - Remove it! ^
00:24:439 (3,4) - You missed a note between these two objects, on the blue ticket! Sounds better!
00:25:633 (6) - Remove it!
00:27:167 (3,4) - You missed a note between these two objects, on the blue ticket! Sounds better
00:32:621 (3,4) - ^ You missed a note! Sounds better!
00:35:348 (3) - Do the same thing as
"You missed some notes with this back and forth slider. Make it end on the red tick that is in the middle of it and place a note where the end of the back and forth slider was like this -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6568508"
00:36:371 (5) - Remove this slider and replace it with a circle on the red tick!
00:38:076 (3) - Do the same thing as
"You missed some notes with this back and forth slider. Make it end on the red tick that is in the middle of it and place a note where the end of the back and forth slider was like this -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6568508"
00:39:098 (4,1) - Place a circle between these two objects, on the blue tick. Sounds better in my opinion!
00:40:803 (4) - Make this slider a back and forth slider!
00:43:530 (3) - ^ Same
00:46:258 (3) - ^ Same
00:48:644 (3,4) - You missed a note between these two objects. Place one on the blue tick! Sounds better!
00:49:667 (5,1) - You missed a note between these two objects. Place one on the blue tick! Sounds Better
00:51:712 (5) - Do the same thing as
"You missed some notes with this back and forth slider. Make it end on the red tick that is in the middle of it and place a note where the end of the back and forth slider was like this -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6568508"
00:54:098 (4,5) - Place a note between these two objects, on the blue tick!
00:54:780 (5) - Make this back and forth slider a normal slider, sounds better in my opinion!
01:03:814 (7) - In my opinion, it sounds better if you remove it!
01:08:076 (4) - Make this a back and forth slider! Sounds better!
01:09:439 (1) - Replace this back and forth slider with a normal slider!
01:12:167 (1) - You missed a lot of notes with this back and forth slider! I can hear his voice changing on blue tickets!
01:14:723 (7) - Sounds better if you remove this!
01:18:133 (2) - ^ Remove it
01:19:496 (5) - ^ Remove it
01:21:542 (4) - ^ Remove it
01:24:439 (3) - Do the same thing as
"You missed some notes with this back and forth slider. Make it end on the red tick that is in the middle of it and place a note where the end of the back and forth slider was like this -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6568508"
01:27:167 (4) - Do the same thing as
"You missed some notes with this back and forth slider. Make it end on the red tick that is in the middle of it and place a note where the end of the back and forth slider was like this -> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6568508"
01:28:189 (6,1) - A note between these two objects doesn't sound bad!
01:29:894 (3,4,5) - You missed a note between these two objects, on the blue tick! Sounds better!
01:31:087 (6) - ^ Remove it
01:37:223 (2) - Remove it!
01:41:996 (5) - Sounds better if you remove it!
01:49:496 (6) - Sounds better if you remove it!
01:51:201 (2) - ^
01:52:905 (6) - ^
01:53:758 (2,3,1,2) - There are a lot of sounds that you missed here! Consider mapping them since this is a hard difficulty!
01:56:144 (2) - Remove this and make this 01:55:803 (1) - longer so it ends on the red tick, where the circle was. Sounds better.
01:56:996 (3) - Remove it! Sounds better!
02:03:814 (6) - Remove it! Sounds better!
02:06:371 (7) - Remove this and make this slider 02:06:030 (6) - longer so it ends on the red tick where the circle was
02:14:723 (9) - Remove it, sounds better without it!
02:18:133 (2) - Remove it! Sounds better!
02:18:644 (4) - Remove it and make this slider 02:18:303 (3) - longer so it ends on the red tick! Sounds better.
02:20:178 (7) - Remove it! Sounds better
02:24:951 (6) - Remove it! Sounds better!
02:25:803 (1,2,3) - I'd replace this with a back and forth slider for better flow!
02:34:496 (2) - Sounds better if you remove it!
02:41:485 (8) - Make this a back and forth slider
02:41:996 (9) - Remove this! Sounds better
02:42:508 (2) - This is wrong. This repetitive slider shouldn't be starting on the red tick, but on the blue tick!
02:55:121 (1,2,3,4) - This is weird to play! Try leaving a bit more space between them
03:41:995 (7) - Remove this!
03:42:677 (8) - Remove this!
03:44:552 (6) - Replace this slider with a circle on the red tick! Sounds better!
03:46:427 (2) - Remove this!
03:46:938 (3,4) - Place a note on the blue tick between these objects!
03:47:449 (5) - Remove this! Sounds better!
03:49:154 (2) - Remove this! Sounds better!
04:00:063 (2) - Remove this! Sounds better!
04:03:813 (7) - ^ Same
04:27:336 (2) - ^Same