Hi. Here for some light modding. Hope this helps!
[Your Name]
00:24:473 (1) – This section would really benefit from an SV reduction
Also, for my sake, could you briefly explain your rhythm choices? It doesn't seem like you follow one instrument, so I'd like to be able to understand your perspective on these parts.
00:53:390 (4,1) – This DS felt weak considering how far apart the sliders were
00:56:086 (6,1) - ^
00:57:772 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) – Including more jumps would really benefit this section
01:28:952 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) – Try squiggling a little bit less: http://puu.sh/ryDRJ/b0a2c2d3f0.jpg
01:31:817 (2,3) – This DS felt a little weak to me, especially with the slider leniency.
01:48:502 (3) – You slowed down the map a lot with the previous sliders. I think increasing the note density would fit nicely with the increase in tempo of the the singer and drum, so try using three circles here instead.
[Insane]
00:24:473 (1) – This section would really benefit from an SV reduction
00:57:098 (1) – This spinner felt really disruptive of the rhythm.
01:18:334 (5) – NC?
01:19:682 – It's kind of awkward to not have anything here because the hitsound pattern suggests that something here which can lead to misreading 01:19:345 (10,1) - as a ½ note. (10) being a 1/1 slider makes more sense
01:21:367 (8,1) - ^
01:41:929 (3) – Downbeat being clickable might be nice: http://puu.sh/ryFvN/93dac6a169.jpg
Good luck!
[Your Name]
00:24:473 (1) – This section would really benefit from an SV reduction
Also, for my sake, could you briefly explain your rhythm choices? It doesn't seem like you follow one instrument, so I'd like to be able to understand your perspective on these parts.
00:53:390 (4,1) – This DS felt weak considering how far apart the sliders were
00:56:086 (6,1) - ^
00:57:772 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) – Including more jumps would really benefit this section
01:28:952 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) – Try squiggling a little bit less: http://puu.sh/ryDRJ/b0a2c2d3f0.jpg
01:31:817 (2,3) – This DS felt a little weak to me, especially with the slider leniency.
01:48:502 (3) – You slowed down the map a lot with the previous sliders. I think increasing the note density would fit nicely with the increase in tempo of the the singer and drum, so try using three circles here instead.
[Insane]
00:24:473 (1) – This section would really benefit from an SV reduction
00:57:098 (1) – This spinner felt really disruptive of the rhythm.
01:18:334 (5) – NC?
01:19:682 – It's kind of awkward to not have anything here because the hitsound pattern suggests that something here which can lead to misreading 01:19:345 (10,1) - as a ½ note. (10) being a 1/1 slider makes more sense
01:21:367 (8,1) - ^
01:41:929 (3) – Downbeat being clickable might be nice: http://puu.sh/ryFvN/93dac6a169.jpg
Good luck!