Yoshino Nanjo - Kimi o Sagashi ni [CatchTheBeat|Osu] · forum

sahuang

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-07-17T06:45:43+00:00

I can't understand, if Extra is mapped by both you and Dynamix, then why not call it Collab Extra?
I find it not respectful to just name it as Extra tbh... Cuz it seems like u ignored Dynamix(tho he is afk atm lo

Shad0w1and

1,586 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

Shad0w1and 2016-07-17T15:26:56+00:00

sahuang wrote:
I can't understand, if Extra is mapped by both you and Dynamix, then why not call it Collab Extra?
I find it not respectful to just name it as Extra tbh... Cuz it seems like u ignored Dynamix(tho he is afk atm lo

I completely remapped EX, it's 90% my piece now, if I decide to delete two patterns from him, it will become 100% my work, because I and other modder find his EX need a remap to get ranked but he decided to afk atm.
It will be easier to delete his diff tbh, but I spent 5 hours to remap his 2 hours speed mapped GD. If you would call this collab, I would rather to just delete his tag and patterns to make this my own piece.

sahuang

2,294 posts

Joined December 2014

sahuang 2016-07-17T23:01:13+00:00

Ok then, quite misleading that you wrote Extra: me & Dynamix in description but anyways...zzz

Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2016-07-17T23:41:59+00:00

Honestly, I'd be offended if someone re-mapped my map and called it a "Collab".

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2016-07-18T00:41:27+00:00

Little wrote:
Honestly, I'd be offended if someone re-mapped my map and called it a "Collab".

let me know, i will add he to blacklist

Shad0w1and

1,586 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

Shad0w1and 2016-07-18T01:11:54+00:00

this is not a collab in theory, most rhythm errors & unmapped sections & spacing errors are all fixed during my remapping and mod fixing.
but I do respect some of his ideas as they made this Extra more fun than my main diff.
so I still write his name in CW and keep him in the tag. I am not happy with the fact that he spent in total 3 hours to make a Diff then decide to afk and do not fix anything.
what did I keep during the remapping:
01:07:738 (1,2,3) - inspired by original idea(not the same)
01:14:595 (4,5,6) - keep
01:18:195 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - inspired by original idea(not the same)
00:53:338 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - this is the only part I did not fix any rhythm errors, and worked well. (remapped patterns)

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-07-23T00:37:05+00:00

Fixed some things from mods and on my own. Thank you! And sorry for late:3

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rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

rew0825 2016-07-24T08:53:09+00:00

Hello from my Modding Queue

[Motomeru]

00:06:709 (1,3) - Reduce the sliders. it should curve or anything for better. Ex.
00:10:824 (3,4) - How about (3) - x:80 , (4) - x:48.
00:10:995 (1,2,3) - I think 1/2 is better than 1/4. Delete (2) and Reduce slider (1) to 1/2 and move (3) to x:160
00:15:966 (2) - move to x:336
00:16:138 - Add circle on x:176, 00:16:309 (1,2) - move this part to x:320 for Hdash between 00:16:395 (2,1) -, Delete 00:16:652 (2) - and Reduce 00:16:481 (1) - to 1/2
00:23:338 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This part is too easy. Can you change? >>> 00:23:852 (2) - move to x:272, 00:24:538 (4) - move to x:240, 00:24:709 (1) - change to curve left, 00:25:224 (2) - move to x:192
00:30:024 (4) - move to x:352
00:57:109 (4,1,2) - This part I think it's hard because 00:57:281 (1,2) - is far. Can you change? >>> 00:57:109 (4) - move to x:128, 00:57:281 (1) - move to x:384 and 00:57:452 (2) - move to x:480
00:58:824 (1) - Reduce this slider to near 00:58:481 (3) - it's hard to catch it.

[Ascendance's Rain]

01:09:109 (3) - move to x:416
01:11:852 (3) - move to x:392

Overall looks Ok

Good luck

Shad0w1and

1,586 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

Shad0w1and 2016-07-24T17:31:04+00:00

rew0825 wrote:
Hello from my Modding Queue

[Motomeru]
00:06:709 (1,3) - Reduce the sliders. it should curve or anything for better. Ex.
00:10:824 (3,4) - How about (3) - x:80 , (4) - x:48.
00:10:995 (1,2,3) - I think 1/2 is better than 1/4. Delete (2) and Reduce slider (1) to 1/2 and move (3) to x:160
00:15:966 (2) - move to x:336
00:16:138 - Add circle on x:176, 00:16:309 (1,2) - move this part to x:320 for Hdash between 00:16:395 (2,1) -, Delete 00:16:652 (2) - and Reduce 00:16:481 (1) - to 1/2
00:23:338 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This part is too easy. Can you change? >>> 00:23:852 (2) - move to x:272, 00:24:538 (4) - move to x:240, 00:24:709 (1) - change to curve left, 00:25:224 (2) - move to x:192
00:30:024 (4) - move to x:352
00:57:109 (4,1,2) - This part I think it's hard because 00:57:281 (1,2) - is far. Can you change? >>> 00:57:109 (4) - move to x:128, 00:57:281 (1) - move to x:384 and 00:57:452 (2) - move to x:480 nerfed 00:56:766 (2,4,2) - should be fine now
00:58:824 (1) - Reduce this slider to near 00:58:481 (3) - it's hard to catch it.
[/list]

Good luck

thx for mod

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2016-07-24T23:57:50+00:00

[Mitsuketa]

00:01:395 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Idk why you're putting s many circles in a row already in the intro, especially since the piano is quite off sync with the music... I can't justify like half of these circles tbh xP Timing seems off here too
00:10:309 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This sounds so off xP. The stream begins before the song actually starts the 1/4's. Like, I think it begins on 00:10:424 - on 1/6's...
00:27:109 (2) - Can't really hear anything here either. I would just put two 1/1 sliders here instead, with 1/2 gaps in between.
01:09:366 (2) - Sounds overmapped too... I think its just a 5 note sttream xP.
01:19:909 (2,3,4) - Keep this less cluttered. 2 and 4 shouldn't overlap.

[Extra]

00:32:081 (4,5,1) - This spacing is just confusing because of how big you made the jump from 4>5. it resembles the spacing for 5>1. Can you make them more different pls.
00:33:966 (3,1) - Relating to the above, why isn't there a jump here? When you put it on 4>5 from above? I think spacing concept could be improved between these two sections.

[Misure's Hard]

00:38:082 (4,1,2) - This is quite confusing imo cuz of the stacks xP. Can you spread the circles apart and not stack everything here? cuz its annoying having to play a 1/1 and then a 1/2 stack. It's really easy to misread here xP

[Normal]

00:17:509 (3,4) - Better to use a parallel arrangement here. I think Ctrl+H arrangement is hard to see when the sliders are different lengths, and it ends up looking a bit messy.
00:22:995 (4,1) - This should be spacing a bit farther apart. It shows as 1.20x, but the SV's are different. I'd use 1.50x spacing here. Basically, get it to resemblet he spacing of 00:21:452 (5,1) - visually, not based on DS.
01:01:224 (6,3) - The arrangement of 01:00:195 (5,6) - with the blanket could be nicer.
01:21:452 (2,4) - Blanket can be better.

[Medium]

Why isnt the intro mapped :S.
I'd rename this to Normal, and your current normal can be renamed to Advanced.

[]

Set looks good, but please get someone to check the timing for that point I mentioned, before calling me back.

TicClick

Global Moderator

4,422 posts

Joined February 2011

TicClick 2016-07-25T00:22:28+00:00

00:08:081 (1,2) - are off (too early).

00:10:309 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) is supposedly this (5 × 1/3rd notes), note the first circle omitted (captured slider for clarity):

SPOILER

There's also a regular 1/4th beat triplet starting at 00:10:824 - :

SPOILER

As for 00:01:395 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5), last five notes are properly snapped, but 00:01:566 (2,3,4) are not, because piano sounds are unstable.

*shrug*

Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2016-07-25T01:46:53+00:00

Listened to the part at 00:10:309 a bunch.
It sounds closest to 1/3 beats.

If you listen carefully, you'll hear that the note that seems to start at 00:10:424 is a B-flat (makes sense—this song is in F major), and
the pitch that occurs at 00:10:995 is an A.
The run definitely sounds diatonic, but the instrumentalist fudges the end of the run by compressing the last three notes (because his 7-note run doesn't fit in 6 notes).
You can hear the run B-flat, C, D, E, F, (G), A where the G is kind of skipped over because it doesn't fit.

So yeah, this is actually 1/3 starting at 00:10:424

Fixed my diff: http://f.ttle.li/Wttm.zip

My lame excuse for 00:08:081 (5) is (unless Shad0w1and decides to re-time the map,) that the grace note falls close enough to the red tick.

Shad0w1and

1,586 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

Shad0w1and 2016-07-25T03:05:20+00:00

Monstrata wrote:
[Mitsuketa]

00:01:395 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Idk why you're putting s many circles in a row already in the intro, especially since the piano is quite off sync with the music... I can't justify like half of these circles tbh xP Timing seems off here too not off to me tbh, but I nerfed the jumps, now is much easier
00:10:309 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This sounds so off xP. The stream begins before the song actually starts the 1/4's. Like, I think it begins on 00:10:424 - on 1/6's...
00:27:109 (2) - Can't really hear anything here either. I would just put two 1/1 sliders here instead, with 1/2 gaps in between.
01:09:366 (2) - Sounds overmapped too... I think its just a 5 note sttream xP. It is overmapped to highlight the strings, not really for any drum beats snapping.
01:19:909 (2,3,4) - Keep this less cluttered. 2 and 4 shouldn't overlap.

[Extra]

00:32:081 (4,5,1) - This spacing is just confusing because of how big you made the jump from 4>5. it resembles the spacing for 5>1. Can you make them more different pls. due to NC its not that hard to play, but I adjusted a bit (3.5x-2.0x to 3.4x-2.2x)
00:33:966 (3,1) - Relating to the above, why isn't there a jump here? When you put it on 4>5 from above? I think spacing concept could be improved between these two sections. I would say that spacing for downbeat does not have to be increased every time, the EX diff I am aiming for better structure since people always call my map shit because I do not structure at all Xd. NC will help a lot on readings, so I think its fine.

[Normal]

00:17:509 (3,4) - Better to use a parallel arrangement here. I think Ctrl+H arrangement is hard to see when the sliders are different lengths, and it ends up looking a bit messy. I personally do not like to have parallel arrangement when spacing is close.
00:22:995 (4,1) - This should be spacing a bit farther apart. It shows as 1.20x, but the SV's are different. I'd use 1.50x spacing here. Basically, get it to resemblet he spacing of 00:21:452 (5,1) - visually, not based on DS. arrangement I looked at my green lines,
I think the SV change is noticeable, and because the sv also decreased on 00:22:995 - , which makes the 00:22:995 (4) - overlaped to (3), that should make sense to players that SV is changing (normally they should be separate in kiai)
01:01:224 (6,3) - The arrangement of 01:00:195 (5,6) - with the blanket could be nicer.
01:21:452 (2,4) - Blanket can be better.

[Medium]

Why isnt the intro mapped :S.
I'd rename this to Normal, and your current normal can be renamed to Advanced.
I will keep current mapping and Naming

[]

Set looks good, but please get someone to check the timing for that point I mentioned, before calling me back.

Misure，这里改成1/3snap 00:10:482 (3) -

Little

2,509 posts

Joined November 2012

Little 2016-07-25T03:46:15+00:00

Monstrata wrote:
Why isnt the intro mapped :S.

Shad0w1and wrote:
I will keep current mapping

He asked you a question...

Shad0w1and

1,586 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

Shad0w1and 2016-07-25T03:59:17+00:00

Well the Medium diff I only want to map the strings, I do not really care about other tracks in this diff. So those tracks on intro kinda make no much sense to me, if I follow vocal on intro, thats 1/2 snapping mapping (consider 00:23:681 - 00:23:852 - ), so do the piano (starting 00:30:881 - Xd), and I could not find a simple rhythm to map, and I do not want to make compromise to the rhythm since my kiai followed the strings pretty well.
So I leave them blank Xd.

Misure

952 posts

Joined September 2012

Misure 2016-07-25T04:30:17+00:00

ok fixed, thanks for your mod!

also did something at about 00:10:482 as what TicClick, Little and Shad0w1and talked about

Codesu

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TitleUnicode:きみを探しに
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ArtistUnicode:南條愛乃
Creator:Shad0w1and
Version:Misure's Hard
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Tags:Grisaia no Rakuen - LE EDEN DE LA GRISAIA - fripSide Nanjou Dynamix Little CloudSplash16 Misure Narcissu Ascendance
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-rage

425 posts

Joined August 2013

-rage 2016-07-27T21:47:54+00:00

[hi aseancdence big fan]

00:04:824 (3,4,5) - notes are way too vertical, could have more movement.
00:19:738 (4,5,1) - notes feel really appart from eachother, could make 5 a Hdash or move it closer.
00:27:281 (4,1) - there's no noise on the red tic which the 4 starts on, maybe you could add a note on 00:27:366 - then make it follow by the slider instead? it follows the sound better.
00:30:195 (1) - slider feels really vertical, could have more movement there.
00:32:938 (1) - ^
00:42:709 (2) - ^ may i add that this is kindof a flow stopper i find, could hjave more movement.
00:51:452 (3,4) - ^ technicly not a slider, but this feels pretty vertical.

that's it from me, good luck!!

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2016-07-28T04:37:05+00:00

Giving this a standard icon for now. I think ctb diffs still need to be checked, but I'm not really qualified to check them yet (maybe soon).

Lanturn

osu! Alumni

3,912 posts

Joined March 2012

Lanturn 2016-07-28T05:27:43+00:00

00:01:395 - Timing could start here to be on the correct measure. This does affect NC and some visual effects.

I'm new to modding CTB, so have a bad mod?
[Acendance]

00:10:394 (2,3,4) - Some of these notes play on 1/3, refer to the other difficulties (extra)
00:31:395 (4,1,2) - not really a fan of how you hypderdash into the wall here, and then have to hypderdash from the wall again. It'd be great if it could be more centered somehow.
00:42:538 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Feels like too many hypdashes in this section. The Motomeru diff doesn't use that many in it.
00:51:109 (2,3,4,5) - idk I feel like the movement should be a bit more consistent instead of how you do > to (. If you don't understand, then I guess simple terms, it looks ugly!
00:57:966 (2,3) - To me, it feels like the Hyperdash should be on the strong vocals that play at 00:58:138 -
01:02:938 (4) - Missed NC if you care.
01:26:252 (3) - how about adding a slight curve here? just so it helps flow into the two big jumps at the end.

[motomeru]

00:25:395 (3,1) - I feel like the vocals could be emphasized more like in Ascendances diff. Try making the (3) a 1/2 slider and then have a small dash to where the (3)'s tail used to be.
00:58:481 (3) - Because of the guidline rule for hyperdashes on the edge, I suggest moving this to x496 since you use two here.
01:10:137 (2,3,5,6) - Maybe use the same DS for these notes? They're pretty similar to each other. You probably have to adjust 01:10:481 (4) - as well.

Hopefully something helps. >_< good luck!

Shad0w1and

1,586 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

Shad0w1and 2016-07-28T06:18:12+00:00

Lanturn wrote:
00:01:395 - Timing could start here to be on the correct measure. This does affect NC and some visual effects.

I'm new to modding CTB, so have a bad mod?

[motomeru]
00:25:395 (3,1) - I feel like the vocals could be emphasized more like in Ascendances diff. Try making the (3) a 1/2 slider and then have a small dash to where the (3)'s tail used to be. I just realized (3)'s tail need a movement, changed but not as you said.
00:58:481 (3) - Because of the guidline rule for hyperdashes on the edge, I suggest moving this to x496 since you use two here. I think it is not that hard consider that hdash is only 2x, most people who could catch previous fruits can catch this as well.
01:10:137 (2,3,5,6) - Maybe use the same DS for these notes? They're pretty similar to each other. You probably have to adjust 01:10:481 (4) - as well. does not matter I guess?
Hopefully something helps. >_< good luck!

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-07-28T06:19:19+00:00

Will take a look in the morning sorry for late><

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-07-28T14:31:10+00:00

rew0825 wrote:
Hello from my Modding Queue

[Ascendance's Rain]
01:09:109 (3) - move to x:416 I want to keep the consistent distances :<
01:11:852 (3) - move to x:392 same

Overall looks Ok

Good luck

lulu lemon wrote:
[hi aseancdence big fan]

00:04:824 (3,4,5) - notes are way too vertical, could have more movement. ok!
00:19:738 (4,5,1) - notes feel really appart from eachother, could make 5 a Hdash or move it closer. hdashed
00:27:281 (4,1) - there's no noise on the red tic which the 4 starts on, maybe you could add a note on 00:27:366 - then make it follow by the slider instead? it follows the sound better. I did it to add a bit more emphasis to the piano so no change here
00:30:195 (1) - slider feels really vertical, could have more movement there. it's made intentionally so there isn't too much movement in such a slow part.
00:32:938 (1) - ^ wha this has movement
00:42:709 (2) - ^ may i add that this is kindof a flow stopper i find, could hjave more movement. it redirects the flow in the other direction so e
00:51:452 (3,4) - ^ technicly not a slider, but this feels pretty vertical. curved
that's it from me, good luck!!

Lanturn wrote:
00:01:395 - Timing could start here to be on the correct measure. This does affect NC and some visual effects.

I'm new to modding CTB, so have a bad mod?
[Acendance]
00:10:394 (2,3,4) - Some of these notes play on 1/3, refer to the other difficulties (extra) cucked by snapping
00:31:395 (4,1,2) - not really a fan of how you hypderdash into the wall here, and then have to hypderdash from the wall again. It'd be great if it could be more centered somehow. I use the wall as a bit of a safety net for this antiflow hyper but i adjusted it a bit so it's not too uncomfortable anymore.
00:42:538 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Feels like too many hypdashes in this section. The Motomeru diff doesn't use that many in it. just a matter of style i guess :c
00:51:109 (2,3,4,5) - idk I feel like the movement should be a bit more consistent instead of how you do > to (. If you don't understand, then I guess simple terms, it looks ugly! a e s t h e t i c
00:57:966 (2,3) - To me, it feels like the Hyperdash should be on the strong vocals that play at 00:58:138 - it's already a hyperdash, and plus I decided to emphasize the higher noise here
01:02:938 (4) - Missed NC if you care. I care.
01:26:252 (3) - how about adding a slight curve here? just so it helps flow into the two big jumps at the end. nice
Hopefully something helps. >_< good luck!

thanks everyone for the mods!

rain

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Sc4v4ng3r

1,232 posts

Joined August 2014

Sc4v4ng3r 2016-08-28T10:24:10+00:00

Sorry for the delay ;-;

[General]

I am legit sorry but are the BGs connected with the series somehow, or are they just random? Also I would like to see a metadata proof as well.
Disable widescreen support on Medium, Little's Insane, Mitsuketa, Ascendance's Rain and Motomeru.

[Ascendance's Rain]

00:04:138 (1) - I'm surprised you can literally have no dashes in this part. Sure, it's the beginning of the song, but by Rain, players should be able to execute normal dashes almost perfectly, so it doesn't hurt to include some dashes in this part to emphasize on the piano. Like here for example. You can also make 00:02:595 (4) - this 2 separate circles, so that the second circle can have a dash to emphasize on the piano. There are some other places you can have dashes on, but those are the significant ones.
00:10:309 (1) - This one ain't too big of a deal, but if you hear the song at lower playback rate you can clearly hear there is no sound landing on this tick. It's kinda ambiguous, as if you hear it at 100% playback rate you will somewhat hear a sound at that tick, but to clearly indicate the silence on that tick I would remove this note.
00:12:195 (4) - This note could be easily misunderstood as a dash, due to 00:12:709 (2) - this note(a dash) being on the screen with this note - and the momentum from the previous notes really makes this anti-flow-ish pattern a little bit ambiguous for some players(like me for example). I would reduce down the distance so that it's clearly a walkable distance.
00:12:709 (2) - But on the other hand I can't really get this dash, as I can see that you are trying to follow that not-drum-instrument thing(I'm sure you get it) for hypers/dashes, but this follows the drums instead - and 00:12:366 (1) - this note isn't too much of a clear dash too, because of the reason stated above. Furthermore you just skipped over that drums on the latter note at 00:17:852 (1) - and even made a clear dash. So I would remove the dash on (2)(make sure it isn't too ambiguous), then make a clear dash on (1) to make them consistent.
00:19:224 (1) - Aw come on you made a hyper on 00:13:738 (1) - , but not even a dash here? You should have a hyper here.
00:22:481 (4) - I don't think this note's pitch doesn't warrant a hyper here, as the song's pitch itself already built down - you can clearly hear that the pitch is low here. I would rather make a dash, to at least emphasize on the pitch difference instead.
00:26:081 (1) - Like you did on the latter note at 00:28:824 (1) - , it could be good if you were to make a dash here, to emphasize on the piano.
00:34:138 (2) - In this calm section a dash to a hyper towards the other direction can be uncalled for, especially when generally the distances in this section were quite close - and the sound on this tick itself doesn't warrant a dash too. Plus messing up the dash here can mess up their next few movement which is certainly harsh. I would remove the dash entirely instead.
00:38:081 (3) - Not sure why you want to have a dash here, when all other similar snares like 00:36:709 (3) - , you didn't make one. It is not like this has any special instruments on it anyway; I would remove the dash. (Yea it is walkable but it is quite ambiguous too)
00:43:566 (4) - Come on, now you are using a hyper for this? Using a hyper here makes this note inconsistent with other snares, so I would instead remove the hyper here.
00:44:595 (3) - I don't get this hyper - it doesn't have a special instrument on it, and I can't even hear a cymbal on it as well. Vocal's pitch also seems quite similar to those normal movement as well, so I believe this should be a normal movement.
00:47:338 (1,2) - NC should be swapped as (2) marks the start of a new verse of the song.
00:53:338 (1,2) - This is quite a strong anti-flow pattern; you require a dash to catch (2)(and even (1)'s tail if you overshot (1)'s head a little bit). I would make (1) curved so that the tail of (1) can be at least easily catched, like this. Same applies for 00:54:709 (1) - .
00:59:338 (2) - The latter note at 01:10:309 (2) - used a hyper due to the strong vocals, so why not do it here too? The vocals are on a high pitch on this tick at least to support a hyper.
01:03:624 (3) - While I do get the hyper at 01:02:938 (1) - , this on the other hand has no strong instruments or vocals to support a hyper here. Yes, the latter note at 01:14:595 (3) - has a hyper, but that is only to emphasize on the strong instrument that is only present on that tick - not on this tick. So for that reason I would remove the hyper here.
01:12:538 (1,2,3,4,1) - Hypers on these notes feels really awkward; on the previous notes at 01:01:566 (1,2,3,1) - , only the downbeat measures were having hypers to emphasize on their strength, so having hypers on all these notes really overemphasizes the vocals, which is the same with the previous section - thus overemphasizing wouldn't be a good option here. I would instead remove hypers on those non-downbeat notes(like 01:13:052 (2,3,4) - ) to keep consistency with the previous section.
01:16:652 (1) - There shouldn't be a clap on the head as there's no snare landing there.

[Motomeru]

I'd assume this is an Overdose? Not too sure but there are some overdose elements in the difficulty, so I'll mod according to that.
00:02:595 (4) - The piano here isn't specially strong or anything so I would remove the dash here. Even if the dash isn't intended the dstance is quite far to induce a dash for the players.
00:10:995 (1,2) - This anti-flow really breaks the high momentum gained from the previous pattern - due to that it is really hard to catch (2). Instead, I would move (2) to the right side of (1) for a smoother transition.
00:15:452 (1,2,3,4,1) - Straight streams are by no means fine, but I seriously thought that you needed to dash in middle of the stream to catch all the fruits lol ;-; And maybe due to the dashing, the movement towards 00:15:794 (1,2) - (double anti-flow) could be a little awkward. I would either curve this stream or have their distances reduced by a bit.
00:16:481 (1,2,3) - Not too extreme here but it is still somewhat of an issue as this is very similar to the above notes' movement, and the distance between these notes are somewhat ambiguous too. I'm not too experienced in playing ctb but like above, you could have (2) on the left side of (1)(instead of right) so that a smoother transition is made.
00:21:795 (1,1,1) - I am aware that in standard you should be placing NCs on SV changes, but in ctb it isn't necessary; you rather follow the consistent pattern of NCs so that you don't create unintuitive HP drain(having their HP replenish every slider is just a no-no). This applies to all sliders which has a NC to signify the SV change, so please remove them(if they are not on downbeats, that is).
00:22:995 (1,1) - I can see that you are trying to make a dash here, but the second (1) is catchable without using a dash, defeating the purpose of this emphasizement. I would make 00:22:481 (1) - a little bit more vertical, so that 00:22:995 (1) - can be placed further at the left, to create a clearer dash towards 00:23:338 (1) - .
00:26:081 (1) - Again, you could increase the distance so that the dash becomes clearer here. You could curve this slider like this, then place further off the right.
00:44:595 (1,2,3) - I don't understand why would you want to have these to use dashes on all of them - it really gives special emphasis on nothing - even hearing the song without hitsounds proves that. Plus the NC on (1) isn't necessary as you've been placing NCs every 1 big white tick. So I would make their distances more closer so that they don't require dashes, and then I'll remove the NC on (1).
00:46:138 (1) - You don't need a NC here for the same reason like above. It's still in the same musical section as above so they should be obeying the same rule.
00:47:852 - to kiai - One thing I noticed here, is that you have NCs every downbeat(every 1st and 3rd white tick of every measure). Like what I'd mentioned above at 00:21:795 (1,1,1) - , lower combo in ctb creates an unintuitive HP drain. I would instead just stick with the pattern you'd been using(NC every 1 big white tick) for this section.
00:47:509 (1,1) - Movement towards the second (1) is really uncomfortable, as you really have to press dash to catch all the droplets of the second (1). I would highly recommend you to curve the second (1) or make it progress towards the left instead.
00:49:738 (2,3,1,2,3) - These again, require dashes to catch each individual fruits. Again, those dashes on 'non-special' ticks like 00:50:081 (1) - are not really required as they don't need extra emphasis, and even those upbeats doesn't need dashes as you've been following the vocals mainly for dashes. Again, I highly recommend you to remove dashes on 00:50:081 (1) - , or even 00:49:738 (2,3) - . Not going to mention all of them that requires dashes to catch most of the fruits in 1 combo, because there are just too many that I can list down ;-;
00:56:595 (1,2,3,4) - To be honest I feel that the distance between these notes are way too low; in fact they give way too less emphasis before the kiai, compared to the circles after these notes. I would increase each of their distances to be around ~4.2x instead.
00:59:852 (5,6,1) - The latter notes at 01:10:824 (5,6,1) - didn't use hypers on all of the notes, so to make them consistent, I would remove the hyper at 01:00:024 (6) - .
01:05:852 (1) - Since a snare doesn't land on the slider's head I would remove the clap as it is giving a false emphasis.
01:06:881 (5) - Personally I don't find this note to be strong enough to warrant a hyper; it is not a strong vocal syllabus like the others, and the instrument isn't too strong here, too. I would rather just make a dash instead.
01:09:281 (1) - NC again should be removed for the consistent pattern. Same goes for 01:13:566 (1) - .
Overall the whole map felt really dashy - while it may be fine for an Overdose, having a dashing distance for almost all the notes(except the ones in the piano part) doesn't really justify their strength well in a rhythmical sense, and it can get quite unintuitive to be played(players might as well just hold dash for the whole difficulty lol). The difficulty definitely could use some mods focusing more on the movement and such, but I'm not really experienced in that field ;-;
Just remember that you can use a lot more variety of movements than this(for example, instead of using anti-flow hypers, why not use a hyper pattern that follows the flow? etc.).

In conclusion I think the ctb difficulties could use more mods on them, especially on the highest difficulty cause I'm not sure about the movements.
GL!

Shad0w1and

1,586 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

Shad0w1and 2016-08-28T11:06:58+00:00

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:
Sorry for the delay ;-;

[General]
I am legit sorry but are the BGs connected with the series somehow, or are they just random? Also I would like to see a metadata proof as well.
Disable widescreen support on Medium, Little's Insane, Mitsuketa, Ascendance's Rain and Motomeru.
[Motomeru]
I'd assume this is an Overdose? Not too sure but there are some overdose elements in the difficulty, so I'll mod according to that.
00:02:595 (4) - The piano here isn't specially strong or anything so I would remove the dash here. Even if the dash isn't intended the dstance is quite far to induce a dash for the players.
00:10:995 (1,2) - This anti-flow really breaks the high momentum gained from the previous pattern - due to that it is really hard to catch (2). Instead, I would move (2) to the right side of (1) for a smoother transition. greatly reduced the DS, now is much easier to catch
00:15:452 (1,2,3,4,1) - Straight streams are by no means fine, but I seriously thought that you needed to dash in middle of the stream to catch all the fruits lol ;-; And maybe due to the dashing, the movement towards 00:15:794 (1,2) - (double anti-flow) could be a little awkward. I would either curve this stream or have their distances reduced by a bit.
00:16:481 (1,2,3) - Not too extreme here but it is still somewhat of an issue as this is very similar to the above notes' movement, and the distance between these notes are somewhat ambiguous too. I'm not too experienced in playing ctb but like above, you could have (2) on the left side of (1)(instead of right) so that a smoother transition is made. greatly reduced DS again
00:21:795 (1,1,1) - I am aware that in standard you should be placing NCs on SV changes, but in ctb it isn't necessary; you rather follow the consistent pattern of NCs so that you don't create unintuitive HP drain(having their HP replenish every slider is just a no-no). This applies to all sliders which has a NC to signify the SV change, so please remove them(if they are not on downbeats, that is). thank you fixed
00:22:995 (1,1) - I can see that you are trying to make a dash here, but the second (1) is catchable without using a dash, defeating the purpose of this emphasizement. I would make 00:22:481 (1) - a little bit more vertical, so that 00:22:995 (1) - can be placed further at the left, to create a clearer dash towards 00:23:338 (1) - .
00:26:081 (1) - Again, you could increase the distance so that the dash becomes clearer here. You could curve this slider like this, then place further off the right.
00:44:595 (1,2,3) - I don't understand why would you want to have these to use dashes on all of them - it really gives special emphasis on nothing - even hearing the song without hitsounds proves that. Plus the NC on (1) isn't necessary as you've been placing NCs every 1 big white tick. So I would make their distances more closer so that they don't require dashes, and then I'll remove the NC on (1).
00:46:138 (1) - You don't need a NC here for the same reason like above. It's still in the same musical section as above so they should be obeying the same rule.
00:47:852 - to kiai - One thing I noticed here, is that you have NCs every downbeat(every 1st and 3rd white tick of every measure). Like what I'd mentioned above at 00:21:795 (1,1,1) - , lower combo in ctb creates an unintuitive HP drain. I would instead just stick with the pattern you'd been using(NC every 1 big white tick) for this section.
00:47:509 (1,1) - Movement towards the second (1) is really uncomfortable, as you really have to press dash to catch all the droplets of the second (1). I would highly recommend you to curve the second (1) or make it progress towards the left instead.
00:49:738 (2,3,1,2,3) - These again, require dashes to catch each individual fruits. Again, those dashes on 'non-special' ticks like 00:50:081 (1) - are not really required as they don't need extra emphasis, and even those upbeats doesn't need dashes as you've been following the vocals mainly for dashes. Again, I highly recommend you to remove dashes on 00:50:081 (1) - , or even 00:49:738 (2,3) - . Not going to mention all of them that requires dashes to catch most of the fruits in 1 combo, because there are just too many that I can list down ;-;
00:56:595 (1,2,3,4) - To be honest I feel that the distance between these notes are way too low; in fact they give way too less emphasis before the kiai, compared to the circles after these notes. I would increase each of their distances to be around ~4.2x instead.
00:59:852 (5,6,1) - The latter notes at 01:10:824 (5,6,1) - didn't use hypers on all of the notes, so to make them consistent, I would remove the hyper at 01:00:024 (6) - .
01:05:852 (1) - Since a snare doesn't land on the slider's head I would remove the clap as it is giving a false emphasis. I think it is fine
01:06:881 (5) - Personally I don't find this note to be strong enough to warrant a hyper; it is not a strong vocal syllabus like the others, and the instrument isn't too strong here, too. I would rather just make a dash instead.
01:09:281 (1) - NC again should be removed for the consistent pattern. Same goes for 01:13:566 (1) - .
Overall the whole map felt really dashy - while it may be fine for an Overdose, having a dashing distance for almost all the notes(except the ones in the piano part) doesn't really justify their strength well in a rhythmical sense, and it can get quite unintuitive to be played(players might as well just hold dash for the whole difficulty lol). The difficulty definitely could use some mods focusing more on the movement and such, but I'm not really experienced in that field ;-;
Just remember that you can use a lot more variety of movements than this(for example, instead of using anti-flow hypers, why not use a hyper pattern that follows the flow? etc.).
In conclusion I think the ctb difficulties could use more mods on them, especially on the highest difficulty cause I'm not sure about the movements.
GL!

thanks a lot.
All fixed except that HS one, and made some more adjustments according to your sugguestion. later f
all BGs are related to the characters in the series.

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Ascendance

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Ascendance 2016-08-30T01:02:19+00:00

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:
Sorry for the delay ;-;

[General]
I am legit sorry but are the BGs connected with the series somehow, or are they just random? Also I would like to see a metadata proof as well.
Disable widescreen support on Medium, Little's Insane, Mitsuketa, Ascendance's Rain and Motomeru.
[Ascendance's Rain]
00:04:138 (1) - I'm surprised you can literally have no dashes in this part. Sure, it's the beginning of the song, but by Rain, players should be able to execute normal dashes almost perfectly, so it doesn't hurt to include some dashes in this part to emphasize on the piano. Like here for example. You can also make 00:02:595 (4) - this 2 separate circles, so that the second circle can have a dash to emphasize on the piano. There are some other places you can have dashes on, but those are the significant ones. I think the song is way too quiet here (though your suggestions are valid), but due to the way I mapped this with the difficulty slowly ramping up from no dashing in the quiet -> light hypers and normal dashing -> more intense dashes, I'd like to keep this as a stylistic thing.
00:10:309 (1) - This one ain't too big of a deal, but if you hear the song at lower playback rate you can clearly hear there is no sound landing on this tick. It's kinda ambiguous, as if you hear it at 100% playback rate you will somewhat hear a sound at that tick, but to clearly indicate the silence on that tick I would remove this note. You should know me by now <:
00:12:195 (4) - This note could be easily misunderstood as a dash, due to 00:12:709 (2) - this note(a dash) being on the screen with this note - and the momentum from the previous notes really makes this anti-flow-ish pattern a little bit ambiguous for some players(like me for example). I would reduce down the distance so that it's clearly a walkable distance. I changed it to be more clear as a dash instead.
00:12:709 (2) - But on the other hand I can't really get this dash, as I can see that you are trying to follow that not-drum-instrument thing(I'm sure you get it) for hypers/dashes, but this follows the drums instead - and 00:12:366 (1) - this note isn't too much of a clear dash too, because of the reason stated above. Furthermore you just skipped over that drums on the latter note at 00:17:852 (1) - and even made a clear dash. So I would remove the dash on (2)(make sure it isn't too ambiguous), then make a clear dash on (1) to make them consistent. I adjusted some distances, but the high pitch here is the reason I added the dash to break consistency. hopefully it should be more clear now.
00:19:224 (1) - Aw come on you made a hyper on 00:13:738 (1) - , but not even a dash here? You should have a hyper here. as you wish
00:22:481 (4) - I don't think this note's pitch doesn't warrant a hyper here, as the song's pitch itself already built down - you can clearly hear that the pitch is low here. I would rather make a dash, to at least emphasize on the pitch difference instead. Yeah but the similarity in sounds is the reason I've made the hyper. I felt it would be too inconsistent not to do so
00:26:081 (1) - Like you did on the latter note at 00:28:824 (1) - , it could be good if you were to make a dash here, to emphasize on the piano. was a bit hard but i fixed it up a bit
00:34:138 (2) - In this calm section a dash to a hyper towards the other direction can be uncalled for, especially when generally the distances in this section were quite close - and the sound on this tick itself doesn't warrant a dash too. Plus messing up the dash here can mess up their next few movement which is certainly harsh. I would remove the dash entirely instead. hmm I think it's fine but I reduced the distance a bit anyways~
00:38:081 (3) - Not sure why you want to have a dash here, when all other similar snares like 00:36:709 (3) - , you didn't make one. It is not like this has any special instruments on it anyway; I would remove the dash. (Yea it is walkable but it is quite ambiguous too) lower distance but kept the dash
00:43:566 (4) - Come on, now you are using a hyper for this? Using a hyper here makes this note inconsistent with other snares, so I would instead remove the hyper here. man your suggestions make my map look so ugly
00:44:595 (3) - I don't get this hyper - it doesn't have a special instrument on it, and I can't even hear a cymbal on it as well. Vocal's pitch also seems quite similar to those normal movement as well, so I believe this should be a normal movement. dunno tbh
00:47:338 (1,2) - NC should be swapped as (2) marks the start of a new verse of the song. am i an idiot
00:53:338 (1,2) - This is quite a strong anti-flow pattern; you require a dash to catch (2)(and even (1)'s tail if you overshot (1)'s head a little bit). I would make (1) curved so that the tail of (1) can be at least easily catched, like this. Same applies for 00:54:709 (1) - . the vocals are a bit sharp in this part, hence the antiflow. I did modify both sliders slightly so they should be 100% walkable, but they're mostly the same.
00:59:338 (2) - The latter note at 01:10:309 (2) - used a hyper due to the strong vocals, so why not do it here too? The vocals are on a high pitch on this tick at least to support a hyper. double hyper yay
01:03:624 (3) - While I do get the hyper at 01:02:938 (1) - , this on the other hand has no strong instruments or vocals to support a hyper here. Yes, the latter note at 01:14:595 (3) - has a hyper, but that is only to emphasize on the strong instrument that is only present on that tick - not on this tick. So for that reason I would remove the hyper here. memes probably
01:12:538 (1,2,3,4,1) - Hypers on these notes feels really awkward; on the previous notes at 01:01:566 (1,2,3,1) - , only the downbeat measures were having hypers to emphasize on their strength, so having hypers on all these notes really overemphasizes the vocals, which is the same with the previous section - thus overemphasizing wouldn't be a good option here. I would instead remove hypers on those non-downbeat notes(like 01:13:052 (2,3,4) - ) to keep consistency with the previous section. I wanted to amp up the difficulty in the second section a bit (it's nearer to the end, and you can tell I've used a bit more complex things here) so I'd like to keep it :3
01:16:652 (1) - There shouldn't be a clap on the head as there's no snare landing there. blame shad0w1and
In conclusion I think the ctb difficulties could use more mods on them, especially on the highest difficulty cause I'm not sure about the movements.
GL!

Thanks!

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-Sh1n1-

3,404 posts

Joined September 2012

-Sh1n1- 2016-08-31T22:38:44+00:00

Motomeru

00:00:538 (2,1) - 00:01:909 (4,1) - following your previous patterns, I'm wonder 'cause you didn't emphasize the same sound at 00:02:595 (4,5) -
00:17:509 (2,3,1,2) - why the same movement as 00:18:881 (4,5,1,2) -? try to add some variation
well is a bit unusual to see lots of sv changes on ctb, could be good on std but is a bit hard to read at modding cause I'm a modder/mapper who works with distance and when u add sv changes, distances don't have consistency through the whole diff... idk it's up to you, doesn't looks terrible :3 it's an advice for future projects maybe?
from 00:23:338 - to 00:30:881 - feels like a platter tbh, you could add a bit of more emphazis on vocals maybe? for example u could add a bit more of distance at 00:24:538 (4,1) - as you did on 00:22:995 (4,1) -
00:29:338 (2,3) - same as above, it deserve a little bit of more distance.
00:33:966 (3,4,5,6,1) - unconfortable jump and very unsightly tbh, u could use the same distance between 00:34:223 (6,1) - but press ctrl+h at 00:34:309 (1) -
00:35:681 (1,2) - when I use this kind of movements, I usually add more curve at such sliders cause the current one looks like an straight slider.
why 00:36:195 (2,3) - have less distance than 00:37:566 (2,3) - if the sound is basically the same.
00:41:681 (2,3) - is there a logical reason to reduce the distance here? try to be more consistent with your distances, take a look at 00:34:824 (2,3) - 00:36:195 (2,3) - 00:37:566 (2,3) - as a reference
00:44:938 (5,1) - another unsightly pattern detected, same as before, press ctrl+h at 00:45:281 (1) - but keep the same distance.
00:47:166 (3,4,5,6) - it feels like you skipped an important hyper dash here cuz high pitch.
00:53:852 (3,4) - remove the current hypedash or add at 00:55:224 (3,4) - for consistency, they have the same pattern but distances are not the same
00:56:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the current combo is a bit long considering the jumpy part (12 fruits omg), I strongly recommend you to cut at 00:56:938 -
01:07:566 (2,1) - you miss a hyperdash here, consistency with 01:07:738 (1,2,3) -, they have the same pitch.

I strongly recommend you Slider Tick Rate 2 on both difficultties, the main problem at Overdose is quality imo, try to fix such unsightly patterns, avoid antiflow unless is really needed. Hope to help you, just passing by~~

Misure

952 posts

Joined September 2012

Misure 2016-09-02T07:56:42+00:00

啊 hard里面01:17:167 (1) - 的NC回头帮我去掉一下...

Shad0w1and

1,586 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

Shad0w1and 2016-09-10T18:03:19+00:00

-Sh1n1- wrote:

Motomeru
00:00:538 (2,1) - 00:01:909 (4,1) - following your previous patterns, I'm wonder 'cause you didn't emphasize the same sound at 00:02:595 (4,5) - it is not the same to me.
00:17:509 (2,3,1,2) - why the same movement as 00:18:881 (4,5,1,2) -? try to add some variation I am not sure how to change this
well is a bit unusual to see lots of sv changes on ctb, could be good on std but is a bit hard to read at modding cause I'm a modder/mapper who works with distance and when u add sv changes, distances don't have consistency through the whole diff... idk it's up to you, doesn't looks terrible :3 it's an advice for future projects maybe?
from 00:23:338 - to 00:30:881 - feels like a platter tbh, you could add a bit of more emphazis on vocals maybe? for example u could add a bit more of distance at 00:24:538 (4,1) - as you did on 00:22:995 (4,1) -
00:29:338 (2,3) - same as above, it deserve a little bit of more distance.
00:33:966 (3,4,5,6,1) - unconfortable jump and very unsightly tbh, u could use the same distance between 00:34:223 (6,1) - but press ctrl+h at 00:34:309 (1) -
00:35:681 (1,2) - when I use this kind of movements, I usually add more curve at such sliders cause the current one looks like an straight slider.
why 00:36:195 (2,3) - have less distance than 00:37:566 (2,3) - if the sound is basically the same.
00:41:681 (2,3) - is there a logical reason to reduce the distance here? try to be more consistent with your distances, take a look at 00:34:824 (2,3) - 00:36:195 (2,3) - 00:37:566 (2,3) - as a reference
00:44:938 (5,1) - another unsightly pattern detected, same as before, press ctrl+h at 00:45:281 (1) - but keep the same distance.
00:47:166 (3,4,5,6) - it feels like you skipped an important hyper dash here cuz high pitch.
00:53:852 (3,4) - remove the current hypedash or add at 00:55:224 (3,4) - for consistency, they have the same pattern but distances are not the same
00:56:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the current combo is a bit long considering the jumpy part (12 fruits omg), I strongly recommend you to cut at 00:56:938 -
01:07:566 (2,1) - you miss a hyperdash here, consistency with 01:07:738 (1,2,3) -, they have the same pitch.

I strongly recommend you Slider Tick Rate 2 on both difficultties, the main problem at Overdose is quality imo, try to fix such unsightly patterns, avoid antiflow unless is really needed. Hope to help you, just passing by~~

uncommented=fixed
basically fixed all suggestions except first two. thanks so much man.
new semester throws hard on me xd

Sc4v4ng3r

1,232 posts

Joined August 2014

Sc4v4ng3r 2016-10-09T04:26:16+00:00

I like how my mods are 1 month apart
Sorry ;w;

[Ascendance's Rain]

01:00:195 (1) - Not too sure if you want to have dashes in middle of these kinds of sliders, because right now overdose uses an easier variant of this movement. The hyper is comparitively weaker than the other hypers, sure, but the fact that there is no easier ctb difficulty to actually 'prepare' the players for this kind of movement, this could be challanging. I would make this slider a lot more vertical to make the movement more lenient. The same applies for 01:04:309 (1) - .
Well other than that I'm fine with the difficulty, just the horizontal sliders in the kiai are what's bothering me.

[Motomeru]

00:37:052 (1,2) - This is unusually a very strong hyper in this section; becuse of the previous hypers, this hyper which is close to a screenjump(basically a dash from one corner of the screen to the other) might not be expected by players. Plus their sounds are the same really, so there is no reason for you to put extra emphasis on this. I would strongly recommend you to reduce the distance.
01:16:652 (1,4) - Basically throughout the whole kiai the movements were very sharp and harsh, so using vertical sliders like this, especially when the previous movements were dashes can be very uncomfortable to play. Of course, this is an overdose so this wouldn't matter too much, but obvsiouily more fluid movements are preferred. I would make them horizontal.
01:20:595 (2,3) - Just my opinion but since the vocal on this part is the strongest, I would ctrl+g these notes and move 01:20:938 (1,2,3) - these notes accordingly, to give extra emphasis.
The difficulty is certainly better in shape now; but I believe I need to go more in-depth in movement. I'll try to go more in-depth on movement next mod I do.(Maybe while waiting for me you could try to ask some of the higher ranking players for opinions on movement, but of course it is not compulsory)

That is all for me, GL!

Shad0w1and

1,586 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

Shad0w1and 2016-10-09T23:23:40+00:00

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:
I like how my mods are 1 month apart
Sorry ;w;

[Motomeru]
00:37:052 (1,2) - This is unusually a very strong hyper in this section; becuse of the previous hypers, this hyper which is close to a screenjump(basically a dash from one corner of the screen to the other) might not be expected by players. Plus their sounds are the same really, so there is no reason for you to put extra emphasis on this. I would strongly recommend you to reduce the distance.
01:16:652 (1,4) - Basically throughout the whole kiai the movements were very sharp and harsh, so using vertical sliders like this, especially when the previous movements were dashes can be very uncomfortable to play. Of course, this is an overdose so this wouldn't matter too much, but obvsiouily more fluid movements are preferred. I would make them horizontal.
01:20:595 (2,3) - Just my opinion but since the vocal on this part is the strongest, I would ctrl+g these notes and move 01:20:938 (1,2,3) - these notes accordingly, to give extra emphasis. I did not try to emphasise the vocal in this diff, because I have to divide the vocal beat to drum mapping anyways. Keep for now.
The difficulty is certainly better in shape now; but I believe I need to go more in-depth in movement. I'll try to go more in-depth on movement next mod I do.(Maybe while waiting for me you could try to ask some of the higher ranking players for opinions on movement, but of course it is not compulsory)
That is all for me, GL!

fixed all except one. I will see if I could ask someone for mod help xdd.

Yumeno Himiko

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Yumeno Himiko 2016-10-15T14:01:21+00:00

mod as requested

[Ascendance's Rain]
00:02:595 (4,1) - change this pattern to a circle and a 1/2 reverse slider? Not good to have a slider tail on white line, also it follows the vocal.
00:05:509 (1,2) - ^ If the previous one is accepted, you may make it a 1/2 reverse.
00:08:081 (4) - I'd like this slider moving another direction, ctrl+H on it and move it to x:296, move 00:08:595 (5) too if it's changed.
00:11:509 (2) - move to x:264 to emphasize the dash
00:18:366 (2) - x:288 to emphasize the dash
00:19:224 (1,2,3,4) - I'd like the ds getting smaller gradually here, by x:440 x:320 x:232 x:144, it feels nice and better than a plain move with a little curve.
00:51:966 (1,2) - It feels too close here since players may not be fast to realize that it doesn't needs a dash to cath this pattern. My suggestion is to add a little dash here, with slider 2 at x:216.
01:02:424 (3) - same problem as ^. x:248
01:09:452 (4) - ^ x:248
01:10:481 (3) - ^ x:296
01:17:681 (4) - ^ x:144

no big problems with this diff XD

[Motomeru]
00:02:938 (1,2) - 这里的dash可以强调一下
00:05:509 (3,1,2) - 同理
00:22:995 (4) - 这个slider往左走就能接hdash了
00:24:538 (4,1) - 像这种地方都是要加dash的，我就不一一强调了，QQ跟你说能听到鼓点的地方都是基本要一个dash，或者是hdash的在overdose里面都是这样

rest will chat in QQ, good luck with this diff!

Shad0w1and

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Topic Starter

Shad0w1and 2016-10-17T22:05:00+00:00

now waitting for asc

Ascendance

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Ascendance 2016-10-18T03:34:26+00:00

~~Placeholder reply, will do after school!~~

examination wrote:
mod as requested

[Ascendance's Rain]
00:02:595 (4,1) - change this pattern to a circle and a 1/2 reverse slider? Not good to have a slider tail on white line, also it follows the vocal. ok :3
00:05:509 (1,2) - ^ If the previous one is accepted, you may make it a 1/2 reverse. I think this one is fine though
00:08:081 (4) - I'd like this slider moving another direction, ctrl+H on it and move it to x:296, move 00:08:595 (5) too if it's changed. nice~
00:11:509 (2) - move to x:264 to emphasize the dash yup
00:18:366 (2) - x:288 to emphasize the dash sure
00:19:224 (1,2,3,4) - I'd like the ds getting smaller gradually here, by x:440 x:320 x:232 x:144, it feels nice and better than a plain move with a little curve. a bit different change.
00:51:966 (1,2) - It feels too close here since players may not be fast to realize that it doesn't needs a dash to cath this pattern. My suggestion is to add a little dash here, with slider 2 at x:216. good catch
01:02:424 (3) - same problem as ^. x:248
01:09:452 (4) - ^ x:248
01:10:481 (3) - ^ x:296
01:17:681 (4) - ^ x:144 all fix

no big problems with this diff XD

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:
I like how my mods are 1 month apart
Sorry ;w;

[Ascendance's Rain]
01:00:195 (1) - Not too sure if you want to have dashes in middle of these kinds of sliders, because right now overdose uses an easier variant of this movement. The hyper is comparitively weaker than the other hypers, sure, but the fact that there is no easier ctb difficulty to actually 'prepare' the players for this kind of movement, this could be challanging. I would make this slider a lot more vertical to make the movement more lenient. The same applies for 01:04:309 (1) - .
Well other than that I'm fine with the difficulty, just the horizontal sliders in the kiai are what's bothering me.
I curved most of them so they're less harsh.

That is all for me, GL!

Thank you both!

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64,304,51966,6,0,P|32:256|96:120,1,210.599990359498,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
216,112,52481,2,0,L|336:104,1,105.299995179749,8|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
176,72,52824,2,0,L|64:56,2,105.299995179749,8|8|8,0:3|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,128,53338,6,0,L|240:152,1,194.399994067383,6|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
96,168,53852,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,224,54195,1,8,0:1:0:0:
336,224,54366,2,0,L|208:224,1,97.1999970336915,8|8,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,144,54709,6,0,L|256:144,1,202.5,6|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
176,152,55224,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,80,55395,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,80,55566,2,0,L|48:80,2,101.25,8|8|8,0:3|0:1|0:3,0:0:0:0:
432,80,56081,6,0,P|480:136|384:232,1,210.599990359498,6|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
264,240,56595,1,10,0:1:0:0:
368,160,56766,1,8,0:1:0:0:
232,160,56938,2,0,P|176:192|40:144,1,210.599990359498,8|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,88,57452,1,8,0:3:0:0:
472,136,57624,6,0,L|352:136,1,93.1500017766953,10|8,0:1|0:3,0:0:0:0:
40,192,57966,2,0,L|160:192,1,93.1500017766953,8|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
432,256,58309,2,0,L|312:256,2,93.1500017766953,8|10|0,0:0|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,320,58824,6,0,P|64:256|136:136,1,226.799993078613,6|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
400,144,59338,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,136,59509,2,0,P|88:80|200:32,1,226.799993078613,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
336,64,60024,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,176,60195,6,0,P|144:224|296:152,1,226.799993078613,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
176,112,60709,2,0,L|56:112,1,113.399996539307,8|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
232,40,61052,2,0,L|368:40,1,113.399996539307,8|8,0:3|0:1,0:0:0:0:
472,40,61395,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,112,61566,6,0,P|104:208|216:232,1,226.799993078613,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
280,248,62081,2,0,L|416:192,1,113.399996539307,8|10,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
248,112,62424,2,0,L|128:112,2,113.399996539307,8|8|8,0:3|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,112,62938,6,0,P|96:152|256:88,1,226.799993078613,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
376,80,63452,1,8,0:0:0:0:
238,112,63624,2,0,P|190:168|302:256,1,226.799993078613,8|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
398,256,64138,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,248,64309,6,0,P|120:280|272:224,1,226.799993078613,6|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
344,224,64824,2,0,L|200:192,1,113.399996539307,8|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
352,144,65166,2,0,L|480:120,1,113.399996539307,8|8,0:3|0:1,0:0:0:0:
176,88,65509,2,0,L|48:72,1,113.399996539307,8|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
424,80,65852,6,0,P|496:152|384:232,1,226.799993078613,10|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,240,66366,1,8,0:1:0:0:
416,160,66538,1,8,0:3:0:0:
304,160,66709,2,0,L|176:160,2,113.399996539307,8|8|0,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,328,67224,6,0,P|0:256|40:120,1,226.799993078613,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,67738,2,0,P|400:192|456:152,1,113.399996539307,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,136,68081,2,0,P|128:144|48:112,1,113.399996539307,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,56,68424,6,0,P|496:128|392:160,1,226.799993078613,6|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
280,176,68938,1,8,0:3:0:0:
376,176,69109,2,0,L|432:176,2,56.6999982696534,8|0|8,0:1|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,176,69452,2,0,L|112:176,1,113.399996539307,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,312,69795,6,0,P|496:248|392:176,1,226.799993078613,6|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
160,176,70309,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,176,70481,2,0,L|416:176,1,113.399996539307,10|8,0:1|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,96,70824,2,0,L|128:96,1,113.399996539307,8|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,96,71166,6,0,P|496:152|392:240,1,226.799993078613,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
256,256,71681,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,256,71852,2,0,L|432:256,2,56.6999982696534,8|0|8,0:1|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
256,256,72195,2,0,L|120:256,1,113.399996539307,8|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,256,72538,6,0,P|480:192|376:112,1,226.799993078613,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
120,104,73052,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,104,73224,2,0,P|464:160|384:248,1,226.799993078613,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
112,248,73738,1,8,0:0:0:0:
488,256,73909,6,0,P|376:288|256:248,1,226.799993078613,6|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
136,256,74424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,256,74595,2,0,P|488:216|400:160,1,226.799993078613,10|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,152,75109,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,160,75281,6,0,P|144:128|272:168,1,226.799993078613,6|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
384,160,75795,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,160,75966,1,8,0:1:0:0:
384,160,76138,2,0,L|512:160,2,113.399996539307,8|8|8,0:3|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,160,76652,6,0,P|56:216|160:272,1,226.799993078613,2|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
264,256,77166,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,160,77338,2,0,L|-16:160,1,113.399996539307,10|8,0:1|0:3,0:0:0:0:
144,88,77681,2,0,L|272:88,2,113.399996539307,8|8|8,0:1|0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
432,80,78195,6,0,P|512:144|376:272,2,340.19998961792,6|8|8,0:0|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,72,79566,2,0,P|256:88|344:64,1,178.200005438233,10|0,3:1|3:0,3:3:0:0:
64,144,80252,2,0,P|32:216|112:288,1,178.200005438233,0|10,3:0|3:1,3:3:0:0:
200,288,80766,1,8,3:0:0:0:
432,296,80938,6,0,P|496:224|416:176,1,194.399994067383,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,168,81452,2,0,P|248:128|336:80,1,194.399994067383,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
408,64,81966,2,0,L|512:64,1,97.1999970336915,8|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
168,64,82309,6,0,P|120:136|216:192,1,194.399994067383,10|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,200,82824,2,0,P|368:232|288:312,1,194.399994067383,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
184,312,83338,2,0,L|304:312,1,97.1999970336915,8|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
24,208,83681,5,10,0:0:0:0:
119,223,83852,1,8,0:1:0:0:
215,208,84023,1,8,0:0:0:0:
488,144,84195,2,0,L|272:144,1,194.399994067383,6|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
400,144,84709,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,64,84881,2,0,P|80:144|176:184,1,194.399994067383,10|8,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
240,192,85395,6,0,L|376:192,1,97.1999970336915,8|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
208,128,85738,2,0,L|80:128,2,97.1999970336915,8|8|8,0:3|0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,112,86252,2,0,P|504:200|424:296,1,194.399994067383,10|10,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
144,320,86766,1,10,0:1:0:0:
496,312,86938,1,14,0:0:0:0:

Sc4v4ng3r

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Sc4v4ng3r 2016-10-22T06:23:31+00:00

Alright as requested
Rain looks clear so these are just few suggestions on the highest difficulty.

[Motomeru]

00:31:566 (1) - I expected at least a dash here as the piano pitch is quite high, you should be adding a dash in.
01:14:595 (3,4) - Personally repeating the same movement as the previous 2 sliders doesn't seem to give too much variety, considering that this difficulty uses a lot of anti-flow. Instead, I would move (2) to somewhere around x=12, then arrange these sliders in this to give a little more variety.
NCs are used really frequently in this difficulty; whilst having so much fruits on the plate feels awkward(trust me, it feels weird for me too), but having low combo counts such as 00:15:794 (1,2) - really makes the hp drain unintuitive.
00:10:595 (1,1) - So for example remove NC on these. It is going to make the fruit count higher, but that's how it fits for overdoses really. Plus you regain almost all of your lost hp if you did lose any previously due to the short combo counts, so I highly recommend you to remove these.
00:15:452 (1,1,1) - Same goes here.
00:16:995 (1) - I'm pretty sure you don't need a NC here either as this isn't a beginning of a new beat measure.
00:56:938 (1) - This isn't like standard where you need NC for readability purposes or anything - having low fruit count generally makes the map hell a lot more easier as I explained above. I would remove this NC, as well as 00:57:966 (1) - this for the same reason. Plus they are not even the beginning of a new stanza or a new beat measure.
01:07:738 (1,3) - Instead of giving (1) the NC, you could swap the NC on these 2 notes to give (3) an extra emphasis for the cymbals and the other prominent instruments landing there. Plus the combo count again gets way too short at 01:07:224 (1,2) - if you were to keep this NC.
01:08:938 (1) - Regardless of whether you applied the above or not, you should be removing this for the same reason.
01:19:052 (1) - You guessed it, this NC should be removed.
01:25:566 (1) - I swear this is the last one
Tl;dr is that your NC pattern gets really inconsistent during those streams. Just remember to keep a more consistent NC pattern in ctb.

Call me back.

Ascendance

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Ascendance 2016-10-23T00:12:12+00:00

waooooooooooooooooooooooo

Shad0w1and

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Shad0w1and 2016-10-23T01:05:59+00:00

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:
Alright as requested
Rain looks clear so these are just few suggestions on the highest difficulty.

[Motomeru]
00:31:566 (1) - I expected at least a dash here as the piano pitch is quite high, you should be adding a dash in.
01:14:595 (3,4) - Personally repeating the same movement as the previous 2 sliders doesn't seem to give too much variety, considering that this difficulty uses a lot of anti-flow. Instead, I would move (2) to somewhere around x=12, then arrange these sliders in this to give a little more variety. I have no idea how to fix this part tbh xdd, as I think current one is ok. if you could give your code for this I might change to what you say. xd
NCs are used really frequently in this difficulty; whilst having so much fruits on the plate feels awkward(trust me, it feels weird for me too), but having low combo counts such as 00:15:794 (1,2) - really makes the hp drain unintuitive.
00:10:595 (1,1) - So for example remove NC on these. It is going to make the fruit count higher, but that's how it fits for overdoses really. Plus you regain almost all of your lost hp if you did lose any previously due to the short combo counts, so I highly recommend you to remove these.
00:15:452 (1,1,1) - Same goes here.
00:16:995 (1) - I'm pretty sure you don't need a NC here either as this isn't a beginning of a new beat measure.
00:56:938 (1) - This isn't like standard where you need NC for readability purposes or anything - having low fruit count generally makes the map hell a lot more easier as I explained above. I would remove this NC, as well as 00:57:966 (1) - this for the same reason. Plus they are not even the beginning of a new stanza or a new beat measure.
01:07:738 (1,3) - Instead of giving (1) the NC, you could swap the NC on these 2 notes to give (3) an extra emphasis for the cymbals and the other prominent instruments landing there. Plus the combo count again gets way too short at 01:07:224 (1,2) - if you were to keep this NC.
01:08:938 (1) - Regardless of whether you applied the above or not, you should be removing this for the same reason.
01:19:052 (1) - You guessed it, this NC should be removed.
01:25:566 (1) - I swear this is the last one
Tl;dr is that your NC pattern gets really inconsistent during those streams. Just remember to keep a more consistent NC pattern in ctb.
Call me back.

Sc4v4ng3r

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Sc4v4ng3r 2016-10-24T12:03:54+00:00

For 01:14:595 (3,4) - , you can use this code :

code

12,116,74252,2,0,L|124:116,1,97.9999970092774,8|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,32,74595,2,0,L|510:32,1,97.9999970092774,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,196,74938,2,0,L|102:196,1,97.9999970092774,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

You wil have to rearrange the other notes accordingly though. Once this is applied or not(on your own accord), I'll actually set a bubble.

Shad0w1and

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Shad0w1and 2016-10-24T18:22:34+00:00

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:
For 01:14:595 (3,4) - , you can use this code :
code
12,116,74252,2,0,L|124:116,1,97.9999970092774,8|8,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,32,74595,2,0,L|510:32,1,97.9999970092774,10|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,196,74938,2,0,L|102:196,1,97.9999970092774,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
You wil have to rearrange the other notes accordingly though. Once this is applied or not(on your own accord), I'll actually set a bubble.

Yeah fixed it, looks great C:

Sc4v4ng3r

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Sc4v4ng3r 2016-10-26T12:00:12+00:00

Everything looks great now, let's push this forward!

Bubbled~

Circle - https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5353992

Kencho

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Kencho 2016-10-28T19:27:37+00:00

Qualified!

Pata-Mon

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Pata-Mon 2016-10-29T08:35:19+00:00

wpcap 真把ctb搞飞了
我是服的

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2016-10-29T10:42:05+00:00

Can you find me a reference for Nanjo Yoshino instead of Yoshino Nanjo, please?

AnatOWJIya

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AnatOWJIya 2016-10-29T13:32:45+00:00

Why are those slider's end not snapped? 0w0 (Extra)

Bara-

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Bara- 2016-10-29T13:40:49+00:00

I can't check right now to see if it's an issue, but please be aware, that unsnapped sliderends are not a problem if they are less than 5ms unsnapped (reference: p/5215153 and it's DQ post in "Report a Qualified Beatmap")

Edit: After looking at the .osu file and the timestamps in AImod, those are only 1-2ms unsnaps, and it therefore doesn't need a DQ

Shad0w1and

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Shad0w1and 2016-10-29T17:18:18+00:00

駿馬你之前查過的set 我直接抄的啊⋯⋯
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/310609
、、、隨意了、、、
我覺得兩種都無所謂，要dq就dq吧

Basically all nanjo's songs now have a metadata of "Nanjo Yoshino".
additionally, Yoshino Nanjo is not really used commonly as she do not have much activity involving english translation.
Nanjō Yoshino is also most commonly called name (as romanization) for nanjo. I personally think it is fine to use both. but anyways.
==
about snapping error, MA did not tell me it is unsnapped, so I did not realize there is a problem with rounding errors. but it should be fine it is only 1 ms error.

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2016-10-30T01:22:57+00:00

Preferred romanisation is a must since a year ago, so it is not a matter of "whatever". You may fix also the unsnapped objects.

Romanised Artist: Yoshino Nanjo

http://office-enjin.jp/profile/%E5%8D%9 ... %E4%B9%83/
http://nbcuni-music.com/yoshino_nanjo/index.html
http://nbcuni-music.com/fripside/conten ... 40000.html

Shad0w1and

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Shad0w1and 2016-10-30T02:00:16+00:00

then the first song by "Yoshino Nanjo" it is.

updated.

Kencho

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Kencho 2016-10-30T06:28:04+00:00

ok now looks fine

Rebubbled!

Shad0w1and wrote:
then the first song by "Yoshino Nanjo" it is.

Never mind, just now "Wada Kouji" also need to change to "Koji Wada" on current metadata rules .

Shad0w1and

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Shad0w1and 2016-10-30T06:53:27+00:00

Kencho wrote:
ok now looks fine

Rebubbled!

Shad0w1and wrote:
then the first song by "Yoshino Nanjo" it is.
Never mind, just now "Wada Kouji" also need to change to "Koji Wada" on current metadata rules .

wtf lol.
so the biggest dreamer is the last Wada Kouji map xd.
also Kenball I love you

Sc4v4ng3r

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Sc4v4ng3r 2016-10-31T09:42:09+00:00

Checked over everything and it looks cool to me /o Let's go again.

Requalified~

Shad0w1and

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Shad0w1and 2016-10-31T11:08:02+00:00

Thanks again!

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