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Demetori - Love Coloured Master Spark

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fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
fartownik
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2 listopada 2009 at 15:34:32

Artist: Demetori
Title: Love Coloured Master Spark
Source: Touhou
Tags: Touhou Marisa Kirisame
BPM: 195
Filesize: 3460kb
Play Time: 01:40
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2,3 stars, 114 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 523 notes)
  3. SteRRuM's Spark (5 stars, 369 notes)
  4. Xgor's Spark (3,53 stars, 136 notes)
Download: Demetori - Love Coloured Master Spark
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hai.
Thanks Xgor and SteRRuM for cool difficulties.
Last edited by fartownik , edited 27 times in total.
WubWoofWolf
Former osu! Champion: 2017
112 posts
Joined September 2008
WubWoofWolf
nice ~~star~~
matusiek3
78 posts
Joined September 2008
matusiek3
Really nice
I like it
star
SteRRuM
678 posts
Joined October 2008
SteRRuM
~Timing Post~

BPM: 195,00
Offset: 856
Resnap all notes
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
fartownik
Thanks. Fixed.
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
AHHH i will never beat this beatmap!
00:10:70 (1,1,1,1) - Unrankible spinners

Also i suggest you add some tags and shorten down the mp3 (if your not planning to map the whole song)

Also here is my difficulty :D (Change anything you don't like :) )
Download: Demetori - Love Coloured Master Spark (fartownik) [Xgor's Spark].osu

*star for support*
SteRRuM
678 posts
Joined October 2008
SteRRuM
Hey, here'z mai diff.
(This hard is really hard but whatever ;<)
EDIT1
Ryohan
794 posts
Joined July 2008
Ryohan
Nice song, nice map and hard diffs :D I liek it xD
Good luck with correcting diffs ;x
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442
[Easy]
fine

[Xgor's Normal]
fine

[Sterrums Spark]
00:28:54 (6) - new combo goes nice here
00:49:00 (6) - new combo here would help to let ppl kno to wait here for another beat, it kinda feels wrong otherwise

except them tiny things i really like this map :D

[Insane]
<3 the way this is mapped :) only 2 suggestions if you wanna use them
00:37:16 (7) - new combo would suit the pattern nice
00:39:62 (7) - ^

____________________________________
VERY VERY nice maps :) great job, have a star
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
fartownik
Sorry, but I think the combos are fine xD
Azure_Kite
osu! Alumni
3,217 posts
Joined February 2009
Azure_Kite
Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Easy]
No problems found :)

[Xgor's Spark]
00:33:77 (4) - The spacing here is inconsistent with the rest of the combo
01:25:16 & 01:27:62 - maybe an extra reverse on these parts. Maybe. Up to you
Other than that, no problems found :)

[SteRRuM's Spark]
00:08:24 (1) - The whistle slidersound on this sounds out of place. Can this be changed, or at least put whistle on the first part of the slider?
00:12:24 (1,2) - Same for these

00:50:39 (3) - Make a new combo for the triple stream here, or it's unlikely these will be accepted by a BAT.
00:59:93 (1,1,2,3) - Love it.
Great beatmap :D

[Insane]
00:10:70 (1,1,1,1) - These are unrankable. A minimum of 2000 points scored by Auto is required for a Ranked map
Other than that. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

I'll never finish Insane.

Great beatmap overall. Still needs a little refining but well on it's way. Starred
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
fartownik
Fixed some of your advices.
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

- Cut the mp3 if you can.

[Easy]

00:41:47 (3,4) - Maybe this sliders can be harder for new players.
00:50:08 (1,2) - ^ Etc.
01:39:31 (3) - New combo.

[Xgor's Spark]

00:18:08 (1) - A finish here would be nice.

[SteRRuM's Spark]

00:29:77 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:29:93 (2) - New combo.
00:50:08 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is too much confusing!
01:22:62 (1) - Too close from 01:22:08 (17)
01:38:08 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This jumps comes out from nowhere :S

[Insane]

Awesome!
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
fartownik
[Easy]
00:00:85 (1,2,3,4) - These beats feels useless.... please remove them - There are not useless...
00:23:31 (1,2,3) - Please move these beats 1 white tick forward - Hm... no...
00:33:77 (1,2,3) - It sounds soo much better with circles at 00:34:08 and 00:34:70 trust me... Remove these cirlces and place new ones at the places i pointed out - [b]I like it as it is.[/b]
01:10:08 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:23:31 (1,2,3) - ^

[SteRRuM]
00:52:85 (1,2,3,4,5) - I rather have a break here on this diff - I think SteRRuM wouldn't agree with this (me too)
Sorry but I think there's everything fine here :P
SteRRuM
678 posts
Joined October 2008
SteRRuM
:3
nazenaze
62 posts
Joined December 2008
nazenaze
actually nothing that would concern me.. not saying this about my fingers though.. :p
*star*
ccbp
411 posts
Joined August 2009
ccbp
easy: see pic


sterrum's spark
OA-1 makes it much enjoyable to most of the osu players

insane:
sorry I don't know how to mod this>_>
fartownik
2,189 posts
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Topic Starter
fartownik
Eee, you call this modding? o.o
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
Marisa's not supposed to be that big o__o"


~Easy~
00:51:00 (1) - start at 00:51:163 & add hitfinish

~Xgor's Spark~
Fine.

~SteRRuM's Spark~
Optional...
00:23:00 (3) - new combo
00:28:54 (6) - ^
00:37:47 (4) - remove new combo
00:38:39 (1) - new combo
00:39:93 (1) - remove new combo
01:03:62 (5) - new combo
01:04:08 (1) - remove new combo


~Insane~
Optional...
00:25:16 (1) - remove new combo
00:25:47 (3) - new combo
00:27:62 (1) - remove new combo
00:27:93 (2) - new combo
00:46:23 (8) - remove new combo
01:14:39 (1) - ^
01:14:70 (3) - new combo
01:16:85 (1) - remove new combo
01:17:16 (3) - new combo
01:19:31 (1) - remove new combo
01:19:62 (3) - new combo
01:29:62 (8) - remove new combo
01:29:77 (1) - new combo
01:39:31 (9) - ^
01:39:54 (1) - remove new combo
01:39:93 (6) - new combo
01:40:086~01:40:547 - add circles (streams)


+Star
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
fartownik
Hm, I refuse combo mods :)
nazenaze
62 posts
Joined December 2008
nazenaze
mp3 cut to 2:00.
http://rapidshare.com/files/298350304/04..mp3.html
this time everything should be fine - I've tested it :P
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
ouranhshc
i didn't really find anyting.

star~
mrtn
osu! Alumni
1,065 posts
Joined March 2008
mrtn
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Hitoshirenu Shourai
osu! Alumni
990 posts
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Hitoshirenu Shourai
Said in IRC, dunno if changed yet: +24 to current offset. Then all good. Tell me when changed, I'll bubble.

Edit: Bubbled.
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
Overall:
BPM is different on Sterrum's Spark: It's 195.000 there. Make the BPM 195.000 on all difficulties <.<"

Sterrum:
Add a Preview Point


*sadface*
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
*Facepalm*
I forgot to say this before but please add some tags (like ZUN Marisa and touhou)
nazenaze
62 posts
Joined December 2008
nazenaze
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Larto
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Larto
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Hitoshirenu Shourai
osu! Alumni
990 posts
Here since the beginning
Hitoshirenu Shourai
Fix the offset again. +24 (895)

Edit: Meh, dunno, just seems off in easier difficulties. Don't come crying to me if it's wrong. Rebubbled.
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
There seems to be a missing white.png in the folder, and looking at the .osb file, there is supposedly some storyboarding involved. Please fix this error or delete the .osb file all together and do a full submit~
fartownik
2,189 posts
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Topic Starter
fartownik
I deleted the .osb file. Waiting for rebubble :)
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
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Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
Great!
AngelHoney
2,155 posts
Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
nice map

star :D :D
ztrot
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ztrot
Ranked.
Cyclone
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Cyclone
Not meaning to bring up a old map, but this song came up randomly in my mp3 player. The artist is totally UI-70, not Demetori.
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