Fixed some of your advices.
[Easy]Sorry but I think there's everything fine here
00:00:85 (1,2,3,4) - These beats feels useless.... please remove them - There are not useless...
00:23:31 (1,2,3) - Please move these beats 1 white tick forward - Hm... no...
00:33:77 (1,2,3) - It sounds soo much better with circles at 00:34:08 and 00:34:70 trust me... Remove these cirlces and place new ones at the places i pointed out - [b]I like it as it is.[/b]
01:10:08 (1,2,3) - Same as 00:23:31 (1,2,3) - ^
[SteRRuM]
00:52:85 (1,2,3,4,5) - I rather have a break here on this diff - I think SteRRuM wouldn't agree with this (me too)