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Hatsune Miku - Hazy Moon

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Snowy Dream
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年12月23日 at 21:24:54

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Hazy Moon
Source: Vocaloid
Tags: Yumeko Yuki FankuX _Kiva Dark Append Ryuusei-P Sanjenin Nagi -U
BPM: 101
Filesize: 5121kb
Play Time: 04:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hazy (4.6 stars, 505 notes)
  2. Kiva (4.29 stars, 369 notes)
  3. Light (1.72 stars, 201 notes)
  4. S.Nagi's Taiko (4.96 stars, 869 notes)
  5. Yuki YukI (4.74 stars, 528 notes)
Download: Hatsune Miku - Hazy Moon
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Snowy Dream's 2nd map~
>.<
Storyboard by Yumeko Yuki and Snowy Dream
Lrc by Yumeko Yuki

[Light] by Snowy Dream
[Kiva] by _Kiva
[Hazy] by Snowy Dream
[Yuki YukI] by Yumeko Yuki
[S.Nagi's taiko] by Sanjenin Nagi -U
Kotone
>.<
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream
thanks star~
Amitiel_S
给你送东西来了 虽然晚了一天=。=
SPOILER
给你一颗星 :) !!

Download: lyricSB&guessdiff.rar
wang211926
star~ :)
ZSAAWQ
:|
sunny day
star ~
shenlan_old
;) star~
_Kiva
8-)
no doubt
star
Cirno
star w

三次下载(一次是用direct)均得到一相同文件,不可import,大概可以排除我的网络问题.也就是说文件有问题,需要重新full submit,大概
Selee
Full submit plz
安装失败
_Kiva
Hi amitiel and ddd
i ve modded a shorter version for normal difficulty
plz have a look

Download: Hatsune Miku - Hazy Moonlight (ddddd519) [Kiva's ShortHazy].osu
lbh87650310

_Kiva wrote:

Hi amitiel and ddd
i ve modded a shorter version for normal difficulty
plz have a look
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

_Kiva wrote:

Hi amitiel and ddd
i ve modded a shorter version for normal difficulty
plz have a look
thx~
But there's so many problems . You must fix them. :o
And as a normal diff,plz low the HP,AP and OD.
Is it a normal diff? :?
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream
thx for stars :)
_Kiva

ddddd519 wrote:

_Kiva wrote:

Hi amitiel and ddd
i ve modded a shorter version for normal difficulty
plz have a look
thx~
But there's so many problems . You must fix them. :o
And as a normal diff,plz low the HP,AP and OD.
Is it a normal diff? :?
Thx for feedback
lowered the difficulty and resnaped some notes
actually i want make it as a NORMAL+ XD

Download: Hatsune Miku - Hazy Moonlight (ddddd519) [Kiva's Hazy+].osu
wmfchris
sorry that I can't import you .osz, can you full upload and tell me again? >_<
FutakiKanata
不错的歌OAO
wmfchris
[AmiS Hazy]
0:57:236 (4) down 1 grid
1:01:394 (3,4,5) uneven spacing
1:05:552 (3) right 2 grids
2:11:040 (7,8) up 1 grid

[Hazy]
0:08:528 (8) down 1 grid
0:11:201 (3) right 1 grid
2:15:644 (4,5,6,7,8,9) down 1 grid
2:28:118 (5) left 1 grid

nice map and song, star^2~
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

wmfchris wrote:

[AmiS Hazy]
0:57:236 (4) down 1 grid
1:01:394 (3,4,5) uneven spacing
1:05:552 (3) right 2 grids
2:11:040 (7,8) up 1 grid

[Hazy]
0:08:528 (8) down 1 grid fixed
0:11:201 (3) right 1 grid fixed
2:15:644 (4,5,6,7,8,9) down 1 grid fixed
2:28:118 (5) left 1 grid fixed

nice map and song, star^2~
thx> <
Amitiel_S

wmfchris wrote:

[AmiS Hazy]
0:57:236 (4) down 1 grid
1:01:394 (3,4,5) uneven spacing
1:05:552 (3) right 2 grids
2:11:040 (7,8) up 1 grid
nice map and song, star^2~
All fixed...
Thx for mod :)

Download: Hatsune Miku - Hazy Moonlight (ddddd519) [AmiS Hazy].osu
banvi
General
Delete "miku" in tags. (Because this is used by artist.)

Light short
01:30:797 (3,4) spacing too far
01:50:399 (5) move 1 grid down
01:51:587 (1,2,3) move 1 grid left
01:56:933 (1) too short spinner for easy

Kiva's
00:05:261 (9) move 1 grid left
00:19:962 (1) I think better start red line(00:19:814)
00:24:863 (4) remove clap
00:35:555 (1) remove new combo
00:45:059 (1) move 2 grid down
00:46:841 (7) move 1 grid up
01:03:770 (7) move 1 grid up

Hazy
add hitsound ?_?
00:58:721 (5) instead of silder , add spinner? (00:58:721 ~ 01:00:503)
01:56:933 (6) adjust this slider more symmetrical

AmiS Hazy
00:51:296 (3) new combo
01:15:650 (3,4,5) move 1 grid left
01:16:838 (8,9,10) move 1 grid right
01:23:075 (2) move 1 grid up
01:55:448 (2) new combo
02:07:031 (2) move 1 grid down
03:34:794 (1) remove new combo

good map
_Kiva
thanks for moding. XD
trying to improve it 8-)
Amitiel_S

banvi wrote:

AmiS Hazy
00:51:296 (3) new combo fixed..
01:15:650 (3,4,5) move 1 grid left fixed..
01:16:838 (8,9,10) move 1 grid right fixed..
01:23:075 (2) move 1 grid up fixed..
01:55:448 (2) new combo fixed..
02:07:031 (2) move 1 grid down fixed..
03:34:794 (1) remove new combo I think it's better..
thanks a lot :)

Download: Hatsune Miku - Hazy Moonlight (ddddd519) [AmiS Hazy].osu
_Noel_Vermillion
Nice song
have to star it!
Garven
Aah, it's been so long I can't remember if I got this from #modReqs or it was a request. D:

[Storyboard]
There are a few of the lyric images that have some unnecessary transparency on the top and bottom (some also with left and right of image) Please try to crop that out.
Lyric 3 should appear a little earlier.
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Lyric夢.png",320,240 -> Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Lyricyume.png",320,240
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Lyric夢.png",320,240 -> Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Lyricyume.png",320,240
Arn't ci.png and yume.png the same thing?
Can you delete the thumbs.db from the folder?
Please reduce black.jpg, SB.jpg, and white.jpg to 800x600

[General]
The title is Hazy Moon.
Please see this thread for help in changing the artist name without duplicating your map set.
Also add Dark Append and Ryuusei-P to tags.
I am quite surprised at hearing a Miku song where she almost sounds natural.
There is no need to put commas between tags - just put a pace between each one.
BPM -> 101.000
Offset: 1,695
Don't forget to resnap all your notes.

[Light short]
Please use some hit sounds. There are plenty of opportunities to use finishes and whistles all over. At least give them a try. :D
HP Drain -2
AR -1
OD +1
Lead-in time: 1 second
00:05:261 (4,1) - This feels a bit far for such a super-slow beginning.
00:19:814 (1) - Have this start on the red tick.
00:37:337 (5) - New combo
00:42:089 (1) - Really too soon after a spinner of a difficulty this easy. You might be better off mapping through the spinner.
01:39:113 (1) - ^

[Kiva's Hazy+]
00:11:795 (4,5,6) - There a reason for this spacing change?
00:46:247 (5,6,7,1,2) - All this overlap looks really ugly
The hit sounds weren't used very well in this difficulty either. :/

[Hazy]
I don't think the claps fit this song at all.
01:31:391 (1) - I'm not sure what's going on with the repeat arrow on this slider, but you can move it a little and fix it?
04:03:031 (1) - You should silence the end of this slider

[AmiS Hazy]
Set lead-in time to 1 second
Please be aware that you can only have up to three slider speeds to keep this difficulty rankable. This includes the use of BPM altering to achieve slower-than .5 speeds. If anything, taking out the 2x sliders would probably not impact the map much.
00:10:904 (1) - There a reason this isn't stacked?
01:51:735 (8) - I'm not feeling this note. I'd delete it. It also won't make the stack at the end so weird looking, though if you refuse, at least adjust the entire stack down and to the right to compensate for the stack.
02:01:982 (7) - Uh, hidden sliders like this are unrankable. You can't tell it's a slider until it's too late.
Some of the changes from .5 to 2x felt kind of odd. And with it changing so much, I was watching out for that instead of just feeling the music through the beatmap. That translates into me not having very much fun with the map. :/
Topic Starter
Snowy Dream

Garven wrote:

Aah, it's been so long I can't remember if I got this from #modReqs or it was a request. D:

[General]
The title is Hazy Moon. Fixed
Please see this thread for help in changing the artist name without duplicating your map set. Thx a lot~ :)
Also add Dark Append and Ryuusei-P to tags. Fixed
I am quite surprised at hearing a Miku song where she almost sounds natural.
There is no need to put commas between tags - just put a pace between each one.
BPM -> 101.000
Offset: 1,695
Don't forget to resnap all your notes.

[Light short]
Please use some hit sounds. There are plenty of opportunities to use finishes and whistles all over. At least give them a try. :D
HP Drain -2Fixed
AR -1Fixed
OD +1Fixed
Lead-in time: 1 secondFixed
00:05:261 (4,1) - This feels a bit far for such a super-slow beginning.Fixed
00:19:814 (1) - Have this start on the red tick.Fixed
00:37:337 (5) - New comboFixed
00:42:089 (1) - Really too soon after a spinner of a difficulty this easy. You might be better off mapping through the spinner.Fixed
01:39:113 (1) - ^Fixed

[Hazy]
I don't think the claps fit this song at all.
01:31:391 (1) - I'm not sure what's going on with the repeat arrow on this slider, but you can move it a little and fix it? :?
04:03:031 (1) - You should silence the end of this slider Fixed
galbreaker
Good song :D
I'm sorry i can't do editing T_T
The 08 team_Bourdon
Hi~ ;)
Here is my some suggestion~

Kiva Hazy+
00:19:962 (1) - This spinner maybe start from 00:19:665 here is better??
01:10:601 (1) - why the KIAI Time at here only??

other diffs seem fine ~
nice map~
so star~~~~~ :D
Amitiel_S

Garven wrote:

[Storyboard]
There are a few of the lyric images that have some unnecessary transparency on the top and bottom (some also with left and right of image) Please try to crop that out.

Lyric 3 should appear a little earlier. fixed..

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Lyric夢.png",320,240 -> Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Lyricyume.png",320,240
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Lyric夢.png",320,240 -> Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Lyricyume.png",320,240
fixed..

[AmiS Hazy]
Set lead-in time to 1 second
Please be aware that you can only have up to three slider speeds to keep this difficulty rankable. This includes the use of BPM altering to achieve slower-than .5 speeds. If anything, taking out the 2x sliders would probably not impact the map much.
00:10:904 (1) - There a reason this isn't stacked? fixed..
01:51:735 (8) - I'm not feeling this note. I'd delete it. It also won't make the stack at the end so weird looking, though if you refuse, at least adjust the entire stack down and to the right to compensate for the stack. fixed..

02:01:982 (7) - Uh, hidden sliders like this are unrankable. You can't tell it's a slider until it's too late.
Some of the changes from .5 to 2x felt kind of odd. And with it changing so much, I was watching out for that instead of just feeling the music through the beatmap. fixed..
That translates into me not having very much fun with the map. :/
Thanks a lot :) :)

Download: Hatsune Miku - Hazy Moonlight (ddddd519) [AmiS Hazy].osu

Download: Hatsune Miku - Hazy Moonlight (ddddd519).osb
Cuuuuri
 
[AmiS Hazy]
I think the following.
00:03:479 (8) - [end at 00:04:071]
00:05:259 (3) - [^ 00:05:853]
00:07:637 (2) - [^ 00:08:823]
00:10:013 (5) - [^ 00:10:605]
00:13:576 (8) - [^ 00:14:170]
00:15:952 (4) - [^ 00:16:546]
00:23:081 (3) - [^ 00:23:378]

My English is very poor..xD
_Yue_old
awesome map
star this!
Garven
AmiS Hazy:

Resnap your notes and check your sliders for odd rhythms like 00:07:637 (2) - .

Don't kudosu please.
Amitiel_S
I'm sry for Resnap too late Because very busy these days :cry:
all Resnap

Download: Hatsune Miku - Hazy Moon (ddddd519) [AmiS Hazy].rar

Download: Hatsune Miku - Hazy Moon (ddddd519).osb
Sanjenin Nagi
I have made you a map of the map on this weblog do taiko? :?:

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