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Got it00:02:400 (6,8) - One of the bigger problems in the map is the overlapping like this, making the mapping look awkward and hard to read
fixed00:05:661 (5) - This slider seems out of place because there isn't anything it would follow here 00:05:661 - . I guess there is a less noticeable sound there but it shouldn't be like that.
I feel like this is fine since It fits the voice, so I'll leave it there for now, unless there are people who find it weird as well.00:11:661 (4) - Try to keep up with the theme of slider + 2 notes/ 4 1/2s mapped, and NC this
The drums that play on 00:11:661 (4,5,6,7) - Progressively get louder,so I think that sliders wouldn't be giving much impact,therefore putting jumps.00:20:378 (3) - Just map this into the stream because there is a sound here 00:20:469 -
Done00:21:378 - Same here. Notable sound that should be mapped
Done00:21:651 (3,4,5,6,7) - These are the kind of stacks i meant about earlier.
This looks and plays much better than the current one (3|4). Same for the 5|6|7
thx <300:23:105 (1) - This kinda kills the overall flow
How so? I feel that a slider fits there more since there isn't a distinct kick or sound thats being played,and that 2 or 3 notes would be awkward to play.00:25:837 - Missing a notable beat here
Done00:29:110 (5,6,7,8) - This pattern has nothing to do with the 4 notes before it, NC the 5
Done00:31:292 (6,1) - Here is another occuring problem. The 6 should be NCd instead of the currently NCd slider
Done00:35:502 (1,2) - Here is the same thing
Done00:53:822 (5,5) - When creating pp maps, i'd recommed you to use combos of 4 notes. NC these
Done00:56:004 (1,3,4,5) - Blanket properly?
Done01:06:175 (7) - Don't use 1/8s for finish sounds. Just a normal circle and a finish hitsound
Done01:09:639 (3) - Middle point of these 3/4 sliders follows absolutely nothing. No beats, no vocals.
Done01:33:094 (5) - NC
Done01:34:912 (3) - Another confusingly stacked note that intentionally makes the map really hard to read
Yes,it was intentional, I'll leave it there unless more people tell me to change it.01:48:367 (1) - What even is this bezier slider...
Curved the slider a bit01:48:367 (1,1,1) - If you have these NCd you should NC this 01:50:549 (2) - aswell just to keep up with the theme
Done02:00:004 (1) - Flow killer, also there is no wubs the slider shape would support
Done02:08:013 (5) - 4 note thingy for pp jumps w/e, NC for clarification reasons and so on
Done02:13:458 (2,6) - This is one of the more annoying overlaps as the (2) makes reading the back and forth jump really hard
Done02:18:186 (4) - I hope you know what i am going to suggest here
Yep02:19:459 (4,5) - You started the jumps already, why stop here? You could just continue with the jumps. The melody would support that much better than the sliders anyway.
It feels really weird when you follow the vocals for the whole kiai part but then suddenly stop here 02:37:822 (3) - . You should keep following the vocals or not follow them at all.
fixed02:42:913 (4,5,1) - It feels weird to have the triplet in the other end of the slider where it ends. Consider on changing the slider or moving these 02:43:368 (5,1) - to the other side.
made it into 3 notes instead,jumps I meant.Also it feels much more logical to have this 02:43:640 (2) - NCd than this 02:43:459 (1) -
02:44:368 (5,5) - & 02:51:654 (5) - The 4 note NC thingy for pp jumps
Done02:53:277 (4) - You could NC this as you have this NCd 02:47:095 (1) - . They have the same idea
Done02:55:277 (4,6,7) - As i mentioned before don't use 1/8s for finish sounds. Just a normal circle and a finish hitsound
Done02:58:004 (5) - Honestly this should be NCd as the following pattern has nothing to do with these 02:54:368 (1,2,3,4) -
Done03:14:718 (5) - Move this to x136|y56 so it's symmetrical with these 03:14:174 (1,2) -
Done03:15:640 - From here on (for the jump part) Check that every 3/1 and 1/1 is NCd
Done03:21:821 (5) - Make this a 1/3 reverse slider. It follows the drums much better than the current one.
Done03:36:367 (9) - Stack this with the (7) so the stacks in that pattern make sense overall
Done03:40:185 (3,5) - I'm ok with the back and forth jump right before this one but the overlap seems bit too much (atleast for me). Here is the same thing 03:41:640 (4,6) -
Done03:46:912 - Clickable. The final reverse point of that slider has a way higher beat. Also add NCs 03:46:185 (5,4) -
Done03:50:943 (1) - Prev 4.43x, Next 0,77x. Move this 03:51:033 (2) - alteast so it doesn't overlap
Done04:04:912 (5,6,7) - Really awkward overlap with 04:04:184 (1,2,3) -
fixed04:11:650 - to 04:23:276 - and 04:34:923 - to 04:58:195 - . They should not be kiai at all because they aren't that interesting and the melody isn't special at all. Also the jump part is a build up for real kiai so they shouldn't be kiai either
Done04:14:458 (9,1) - You can't have 1/4s compeletely stacked like here
Done04:19:640 (5) - Different pattern should be on a different combo (NC)
Done04:34:192 (7,8) - You're holding back the DS quite alot here but the DS here 04:34:556 (8,1) - skyrocketed for some reason even though the distance timeline wise is just 1/4.
Consider on doing something like this Donefixed04:39:286 (6) - Move the red anchor to the middle of the head and tail of the slider, having it on one side makes it look awkward unless there is same kind of a slider mirrored or the slider completes flow.
I made it so that It'd curve when the voice of the singer changes tone04:51:650 (5,5,5,5,4) - & 05:10:559 (5,5) - NC
Done05:03:650 (1,2) - I'm not sure but i think this is unrankable because it visibly overlaps with other sliders, making it almost impossible to read with hidden
I placed it slightly below the above one so it should be visible,not sure if rankable thoAlso this part 05:14:195 - to 05:28:048 - shouldn't be kiai either
Done05:18:200 - Missing a beat here
Done05:20:564 - ^
Done05:26:564 (5) - Aaaand NC