From my queue - I love your maps + song choices so I'm glad you requested.
This'll be a light check, just things that really stand out to me. I'll come back to it when I'm feeling a bit better.
[Easy]
This'll be a light check, just things that really stand out to me. I'll come back to it when I'm feeling a bit better.
[Easy]
- 01:09:790 (3,1) - Fix the DS here to be more consistent.
- 01:21:791 (2,3) - Kind of weird to throw this pattern in so late in the song. I think that this should be standardized to be similar to the rest of the map before going forward.
- In general I'm a bit confused by the DS shift in this difficulty, is it intentional and if so, why?
- 00:43:582 (2,1,2) - In order to follow your DS patterns here, the distance between 2>1 should be approx 1.0.
- 00:47:055 (3,1) - Fix the DS here as well.
- 00:48:634 (2,1) - This distance between these is the same as you were using before the "chorus" but not the same as here: 00:47:687 (2,1) - . Are these inconsistencies or what?
- My mod will mostly be repeating itself so I'll cut off this part here, let me know whats up with the weird DS shifts on this diff. (Sure, DS shifts are allowed in Normals, but they should make sense and if there is a pattern here I think its too complex for a Normal.)
- Skipping over this for now, getting some more opinions on some concerns I have that are potentially purely subjective.
- 00:42:318 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think the DS change here should be a bit more consistent between the 3 (so the changes between the three should be more consistent) which would better reflect the music. This applies to basically all the jumps like this so I'll only list it here.
- 00:52:424 (1,2,3,4) - Why the different pattern here?
- 01:09:791 (3,4) - 01:19:896 (4,5) - 01:24:948 (3,4) - Why not just do a regular stack here since thats what you were doing in the beginning? Is this for variation? And if so, why?
- 01:30:633 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - No matter how I look at it these are way too small.
- Basically long story short, standardize those jumps more since its the same musically. If you want to add variation, have the pattern vary in an ABAB format or something along that line.
- Tbh some of these 3/4th sliders sound really awkward. The ones that really stood out to me are 00:16:739 (9) - 00:18:318 (5) - 01:10:106 (4) - Honestly just silencing them should be fine, all of them or just the ones that are really abrasive. Diff itself looks solid, but I'll give it a more thorough check when I come back to this.
- 00:31:897 (6,7,8,9,1) - Whats with the decel stream here? It feels kind of clunky IMO. I think its probably because it doesn't start deceling until 00:32:055 (8) - and so it just ends up looking like you ran out of room and had to condense the end.
- 01:41:685 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - The design of these definitely puts the emphasis on the wrong notes. Note how the 3,4s of both get less emphasis than the initial 1,2s and also how the 2>3 spacing gets the most emphasis by a fairly good margin.