Guest
home
beatmaps
rankings
community
store
help
forum
  1. Forums
  2. Beatmaps
  3. Ranked Beatmaps (Archived)

Arctic Monkeys - From the Ritz to the Rubble

posted
Total Posts
67
show more
Izzz
265 posts
Joined July 2015
Izzz
arctic monkeys more like fartic monkeys am i right
EZ
¯\_(ツ)_/¯
NM
00:16:424 (2) - Make this regular 1/1 slider pls

00:16:897 - Add circle here, kinda like how you did at 00:18:318 (1,2,3)

00:19:581 (1) - Add red node around 2/3 through the slider because thats when the vocals happen

00:25:108 - Add circle

00:26:529 (2) - 1/1 slider maybe? If you do, do the red node thing I suggested earlier.
HD
00:15:002 (2) - Move the red node to around where the slider is at the white tick to fit the music better. Then move the slider to the right a bit, so it looks like this

00:37:266 (1) - Move the red node over to around where the slider is at the red tick to fit the music better.

00:45:003 (1) - This caught me off guard when playing through, maybe move it so it doesn't overlap with where the previous double was. You don't really need to fix this as much at 00:50:055 (1) - 00:55:108 (1) - etc. because then the player can tell when that note takes place.

IN
¯\_(ツ)_/¯

EX
¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Nice map :Y
Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Milan-
"did some modding"
2016-07-24 16:30 Milan-: also curve more 00:37:739 (2) - pls xd
2016-07-24 16:30 BOUYAAA: fuck my cojmputer is laaaaaaagging
2016-07-24 16:31 BOUYAAA: idk idc about solo sets
2016-07-24 16:31 BOUYAAA: idkidcidkidc
2016-07-24 16:32 BOUYAAA: did the curve thingy
BOUYAAA
396 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
BOUYAAA
fixed everything thanks!

@Joezapy getting to your mod asap
Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Secretpipe


Hello Jean Dujardin!

[General]
  1. 1. what drugs is your countdown on
    2. delet countdown kds pls
  2. It only matters for Nightcore, converts and the pulsating logo in song select but it triggers me that the timing is so off in the break, making it offset 60.037 with 179,0 BPM would be much better HOLY FUCK THAT EVEN LINES UP WITH THE NEXT SECTION I DIDN'T EVEN TRY TO ACHIEVE THAT LOL NOICE
  3. Have you considered about making a spinner that does until 01:02:699 -? o:
  4. I just realized that you only hitsounded Extra yet so prolly nvm me but I'll keep the point anyways: It seems a bit lackluster that there isn't any regular hitsounding except for the claps, especially the intro always feels very empty, how about adding some soft-whisltes on the bass-notes or smth?
[Extra]
  1. 00:19:581 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This combo really sticks out because it's like ten times more dense than all others, and I don't think anybody expects to suddenly follow the vocals so closely when they aren't always focused on anyways
    This applies to Insane and Hard too
  2. 00:41:055 (1,2) - This seems quite low-emphasized / slowing down, is there any particular reason for that?
[Insane]
  1. 01:43:264 (1) - Maybe put this somewhere to the right of the previous combo instead because right now it's basically just continuing the pattern even though it's quite a special note which could use a special place imo
  2. some of those zigzag-patterns felt a bit 'boring' to play because of the initial low spacing, I'd feel like making it a bit more evened by increasing the initial spacing and not increasing it between the patterns so much would feel way better tbh
    00:53:687 (3,4) is especially standing out here because it's so much lower than the rest of the second-combo-spacings
[Hard]
  1. 00:16:108 (2,3,4) - HARRHARR MY FAVOURITE TYPE OF MODDING: There's a followpoint visible here because auto-stacking fucked your DS up lol pls nerf
  2. 00:19:818 (2,3) - If you keep this rhythm I'd at least not space this more than any other regular 1/2s, = don't make it have a visible followpoint because the rhythm is already quite unconventional so irregular spacing doesn't really help xd
  3. 00:41:055 (1,2,3,4) - Why is this spaced so low all of a sudden o:
  4. Coming from the higher diffs I don't really like how you did the four-beat-patterns in this diff, each combo is vastly different to the others and especially the stack-pairs felt pretty awkward to play for me, also I find it a bit weird that you only do the custom-stack-thingy after the last of those patterns, imo it's confusing especially there because that gap is only 1/1 whereas the others would be 3/2 and thus less potentially confusing, also music-wise I'd not custom-stack the last ones out of all because a 'different part' starts there.. :/
    (also for some reason I misread and fucked up 01:32:843 (2,1) but none others for some reason lol wth)
[Normal]
  1. 00:45:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You mostly don't put any NC in these in the first Kiai but you mostly do in the second Kiai, choose one
    oh, there are no Kiais lol
    same for Easy
[Easy]
  1. I feel like the section until the first bookmark could use less density for as it feels a bit overloaded for an Easy and for more contrast to the next section
  2. 00:38:529 (3) - I'm not a big fan of using those randomly xd
  3. 00:42:318 (1,2,3) - Why not make all of these 3/2? D: Takes away all the specialness from this musical pattern imo :(
  4. 01:07:896 (1,2) - If you made this one a 3/2-reverse one too then it would differentiate to the bass doing different stuff at 01:09:159 (3,4) and that would be great imo
BOUYAAA
396 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
BOUYAAA
joe

Joezapy wrote:

arctic monkeys more like fartic monkeys am i right no
[box=EZ]¯\_(ツ)_/¯
NM
00:16:424 (2) - Make this regular 1/1 slider pls i'd rather have a 1/1 slider here cuz there is a bass sound on the 1/2

00:16:897 - Add circle here, kinda like how you did at 00:18:318 (1,2,3) that's nice actually

00:19:581 (1) - Add red node around 2/3 through the slider because thats when the vocals happen idk not necessary imo

00:25:108 - Add circle i get why you say that but there is no way to do it without fuckign everything up and still density is already pretty high in this place idk

00:26:529 (2) - 1/1 slider maybe? If you do, do the red node thing I suggested earlier. nah bass sound deserves a repeat
HD
00:15:002 (2) - Move the red node to around where the slider is at the white tick to fit the music better. Then move the slider to the right a bit, so it looks like this doine it think?

00:37:266 (1) - Move the red node over to around where the slider is at the red tick to fit the music better. there is no sound here so it doesn't matter imo

00:45:003 (1) - This caught me off guard when playing through, maybe move it so it doesn't overlap with where the previous double was. You don't really need to fix this as much at 00:50:055 (1) - 00:55:108 (1) - etc. because then the player can tell when that note takes place. good point

IN
¯\_(ツ)_/¯

EX
¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Nice map :Y[/box]


Thanks for the mod Joe!

Ok act casually now

Pipe secrete

Secretpipe wrote:



Hello Jean Dujardin!

[General]
  1. 1. what drugs is your countdown on idk i'll ask him if he sells
    2. delet countdown kds pls
  2. It only matters for Nightcore, converts and the pulsating logo in song select but it triggers me that the timing is so off in the break, making it offset 60.037 with 179,0 BPM would be much better HOLY FUCK THAT EVEN LINES UP WITH THE NEXT SECTION I DIDN'T EVEN TRY TO ACHIEVE THAT LOL NOICE that fucks things up rly bad i'll discuss that with the right people again
  3. Have you considered about making a spinner that does until 01:02:699 -? o: i haven't because spinners go against my ethical values, especially on slow held parts like that one, spinning as fast as you can on a part of the music where literally nothing happens is just dumb to me lol
  4. I just realized that you only hitsounded Extra yet so prolly nvm me but I'll keep the point anyways: It seems a bit lackluster that there isn't any regular hitsounding except for the claps, especially the intro always feels very empty, how about adding some soft-whisltes on the bass-notes or smth? i know i wanted to hitsound the kick at first but is skip quite alot of them so idk if i should really do that. I also tried to do somethign with the bass but it's not rythmically consistent so it doesn't sound very nice to me. I'll try a few more things but i doubt they will work out
[Extra]
  1. 00:19:581 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This combo really sticks out because it's like ten times more dense than all others, and I don't think anybody expects to suddenly follow the vocals so closely when they aren't always focused on anyways
    This applies to Insane and Hard too the guy is almost screaming here lul, why would i not follow vocals that's just weird
  2. 00:41:055 (1,2) - This seems quite low-emphasized / slowing down, is there any particular reason for that? yea the pitch is lowering and the song seems like it's lowering in intensity to prepare for the chorus (idk it's hard to explain really) but this is definately done on purpose, i do that in the secon kiai too
[Insane]
  1. 01:43:264 (1) - Maybe put this somewhere to the right of the previous combo instead because right now it's basically just continuing the pattern even though it's quite a special note which could use a special place imo placed it on the left
  2. some of those zigzag-patterns felt a bit 'boring' to play because of the initial low spacing, I'd feel like making it a bit more evened by increasing the initial spacing and not increasing it between the patterns so much would feel way better tbh i buffed them a little i know they seems a bit boring but the point is to make it interesting for people that are playing lower insanes, also the jumps are pretty big for what you can see in those kind of difficulties anyways so i guess the target audience will appreciate it?
    00:53:687 (3,4) is especially standing out here because it's so much lower than the rest of the second-combo-spacings yea this one is rip
[Hard]
  1. 00:16:108 (2,3,4) - HARRHARR MY FAVOURITE TYPE OF MODDING: There's a followpoint visible here because auto-stacking fucked your DS up lol pls nerf how did you even see that xd
  2. 00:19:818 (2,3) - If you keep this rhythm I'd at least not space this more than any other regular 1/2s, = don't make it have a visible followpoint because the rhythm is already quite unconventional so irregular spacing doesn't really help xd NC'd ok nerfed :( idk why people mention these sort of things because havign these slight changes in DS won't affect the player at all lol
  3. 00:41:055 (1,2,3,4) - Why is this spaced so low all of a sudden o: same as extra, slowdown before kiai explosion
  4. Coming from the higher diffs I don't really like how you did the four-beat-patterns in this diff, each combo is vastly different to the others and especially the stack-pairs felt pretty awkward to play for me, also I find it a bit weird that you only do the custom-stack-thingy after the last of those patterns, imo it's confusing especially there because that gap is only 1/1 whereas the others would be 3/2 and thus less potentially confusing, also music-wise I'd not custom-stack the last ones out of all because a 'different part' starts there.. :/ funny you'd mention that since you complained about the insane's jumps being boring. Anyways i decided to do this kind of stuff because : having a regular 1/2 pattern with distance snap for each one would just feel super bland and messy, having only sliders would be too easy compared to what i do in normal and insane and having 4 jumps is too much for obvious reasons. double jumps are absolutly no problem for people sigle tapping. I get your point with the different part but things are way easier to read when they are stacked then when they have random spacing. As for the confusing part, i think we made a nice compromise with the last mod, i suggest you read it and give me your opinion
    (also for some reason I misread and fucked up 01:32:843 (2,1) but none others for some reason lol wth)
[Normal]
  1. 00:45:003 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You mostly don't put any NC in these in the first Kiai but you mostly do in the second Kiai, choose one
    oh, there are no Kiais lol yes there are what are you talkign about???
    same for Easy
[Easy]
  1. I feel like the section until the first bookmark could use less density for as it feels a bit overloaded for an Easy and for more contrast to the next section no way, new players fall asleep when playing easies already
  2. 00:38:529 (3) - I'm not a big fan of using those randomly xd well be a fan!!!
  3. 00:42:318 (1,2,3) - Why not make all of these 3/2? D: Takes away all the specialness from this musical pattern imo :( eh. 3/2 patterns=too hard to read, there is a finish on the sliderend anyways
  4. 01:07:896 (1,2) - If you made this one a 3/2-reverse one too then it would differentiate to the bass doing different stuff at 01:09:159 (3,4) and that would be great imo did cuz i i had that idea for a long time now lol

Thanks for the mod secretpipe!!

also i changed some patterns slightly in extra (increases and decreases in spacing mostly) to make it look a bit more structured but that's probably just to make it less triggering to me
Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Milan-
people say that's what i'm not milan-
Ashton
1,932 posts
Joined February 2016
Ashton
MILANS- DIFF
00:12:003 (1,2,3) - blanket 1 and 3 better
00:17:529 (2,3) - blanket 2 and 3 better
00:18:713 (6,7) - remove this overlap, I know it was intentional but tbh it looks weird
00:23:213 (4) - this ends in a weird spot, maybe consider ctrl + g
00:24:634 (1,2) - I think you can blanket these a little better
00:27:792 (3,4,1) - stack 3 on 1
00:28:424 (1,2) - curve 1 and blanket 2 in 1 by straight ing it out
00:33:318 (4) - ctrl + g
00:37:897 (3,4,1) - blanket 3 and 1 or just remove the overlap between 3 and 1
00:37:897 (3,4,1) - ctrl + g
01:40:896 (2,3,1,1) - the small slider 2 and the small slider 1 are overlapping eachother in a weird way


Sorry for the typos, but hopefully this helped!
BriedisLT
46 posts
Joined August 2013
BriedisLT
Thank's for the help, Bouboi.

Milan-'s good shit :ok_hand:
I don't think "shit" can be in a map's name, Milan. 👌

00:13:108 (4,5) - awkward overlap, can throw you off while playing and also 00:13:108 (4) - is vocal-based, which isn't really good.
00:15:634 (4,6) - overlap, looks like intentional, but meh
00:18:713 (6,7) - no... not even vocals...
00:23:213 (4,1) - same as first, consider chaning 00:23:213 (4) - into two circles, sounds better imo
00:26:371 (2) - I don't like how it flows, this coming from a circular flow fanboi, might be ok tho
00:31:266 (2) - this is quite obscured by the slider, maybe make it 2x DS
00:33:318 (4) - it's time to stop, 00:33:318 - circle here and that's enough, there's no music to base this slider on.
00:38:529 (1) - overlap
00:39:318 (3) - awkward-ish, try brainstorming how this can be changed
00:40:897 (4) - nope
00:42:003 (5) - disliking the intentional overlap
00:42:318 (1,2,3) - up -- 00:43:266 (1,2,3) - back and forth -- 00:44:213 (1,2,3) - ??? make layout as the first one or similar
00:43:581 (3,2) - also overlap
00:46:266 (2) - only 1/2 apart and below a slider, obscure
00:53:529 (2,1) - overlap, might be ok
00:53:687 (3,1) - overlap
01:09:001 (4) - eh.. mixed feelings
01:12:317 (3) - 1/4 backslider based on nothing
01:15:001 (4,5,6) - maybe ctrl + g and bigger DS
01:15:317 - circle can work here
01:16:738 (1) - overlap, also NC and same distance and place where slider end was
01:20:212 (4,1) - not very likeable monstrosity
01:20:054 (3) - circle on 01:20:054 - instead sounds better
01:24:120 - guitar starts here, 01:24:159 (4) - has nothing to do with it, meaning 01:24:159 (4) - is based on nothing... or I might be pretending to understand))
01:33:633 (3,5) - overlap

Extra
00:22:108 (1,4) - overlap?
00:24:634 (1,3) - intentional, but it triggers me :^)
00:26:529 (3,4) - might want to make same distance with 00:25:897 (1) - and 00:25:581 (4) -
00:38:055 (3) - overlapping meh, I'd put it on ~X:14 with 2x DS
00:39:792 (1,4) - overlap
yeah... A E S T H E T I C S
BOUYAAA
396 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
BOUYAAA

BriedisLT wrote:

Extra
00:22:108 (1,4) - overlap?
00:24:634 (1,3) - intentional, but it triggers me :^)
00:26:529 (3,4) - might want to make same distance with 00:25:897 (1) - and 00:25:581 (4) -
00:38:055 (3) - overlapping meh, I'd put it on ~X:14 with 2x DS
00:39:792 (1,4) - overlap

every overlap thing is intentional, the first one is not visible while playing, did the same distance thing
yeah... A E S T H E T I C S
Thanks!!!
Nezzar
117 posts
Joined June 2009
Nezzar
newbie modding o.o
[All]
01:04:890 (1) - AI mods complaining about this note being unsnapped (appeared in insane, milan's diff, hard)

[Extra]
00:43:266 (1,2,3,4) - does not quite match the following 4 & the previous four, consider something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5718703
00:58:424 (1,2) - maybe larger distance
01:21:001 (2,3) - missing a beat in between? maybe make a slider from middle to the origianl position of 3 will be better
01:24:948 (3,4) - larger distance? or closer to 5

[Milan-'s good shit ok_hand]
00:47:371 (1,2,3) - a bit hard to catch, maybe make them all facing same direction?

[Insane]
00:52:424 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:43:266 from extra

[Hard]
00:50:055 (1) - seems it does not look good under low ar
01:43:264 (1) - suggesting single note as a slider here is a bit weird

[Normal & Easy]
Nothing spotted

Just a few opinion :p sorry for short mod :(
BOUYAAA
396 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
BOUYAAA

DenierNezzar wrote:

newbie modding o.o
[All]
01:04:890 (1) - AI mods complaining about this note being unsnapped (appeared in insane, milan's diff, hard) did

[Extra]
00:43:266 (1,2,3,4) - does not quite match the following 4 & the previous four, consider something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5718703 no idc about super consistency in my diffs the feeling they have while playing is the same and i think that's what matters

00:58:424 (1,2) - maybe larger distance yes buffed it a little bit
01:21:001 (2,3) - missing a beat in between? maybe make a slider from middle to the origianl position of 3 will be better the stop is here on purpose because the song "stops" here
01:24:948 (3,4) - larger distance? or closer to 5 the distance feels just right to me for reasons i already mentionned in Secretpipe's mod

[Insane]
00:52:424 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:43:266 from extra same thing too

[Hard]
00:50:055 (1) - seems it does not look good under low ar can't do too much about that, it sticks out to make sure readability is at it's best
01:43:264 (1) - suggesting single note as a slider here is a bit weird i'll leave that here for not since it follows the music

[Normal & Easy]
Nothing spotted

Just a few opinion :p sorry for short mod :(
Thanks for the mod!
Last edited by BOUYAAA , edited 1 time in total.
Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Milan-
thanks fixed some of the suggestions!!!
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: ARCTIC TIMING.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 81
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 12002,22108,32213,42318,60003,64897,75476,85581,103266
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 2.699999

[Metadata]
Title:From The Ritz To The Rubble
TitleUnicode:From The Ritz To The Rubble
Artist:Arctic Monkeys
ArtistUnicode:Arctic Monkeys
Creator:BOUYAAA
Version:Milan-'s good shit :ok_hand:
Source:
Tags:rock alternative punk garage blues thatever people say that's what i'm not milan-
BeatmapID:1039328
BeatmapSetID:415039

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4.3
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"mcOzISY.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,60237,64297
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
12003,315.789473684211,4,2,1,70,1,0
12003,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,70,0,0
21792,-142.857142857143,4,2,1,70,0,0
22108,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
42318,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
42792,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,60,0,0
43266,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
43739,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,60,0,0
44213,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
44845,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
47371,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
47845,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,70,0,1
48318,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
48792,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,70,0,1
49266,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
49739,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
52424,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
52897,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,70,0,1
53371,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
53845,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,70,0,1
54318,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
54792,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
57476,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
57950,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,70,0,1
58424,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
58897,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,70,0,1
59371,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
60003,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
60037,337.078651685393,4,2,1,70,1,0
64897,315.789473684211,4,2,1,60,1,0
65370,315.789473684211,4,2,1,60,1,0
65370,-125,4,2,1,60,0,0
85580,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
86054,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,60,0,0
86527,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
87001,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,60,0,0
87475,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,60,0,0
88106,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
90633,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
91106,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,70,0,1
91580,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
92054,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,70,0,1
92527,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
93317,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
95685,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
96159,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,70,0,1
96633,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
97106,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,70,0,1
97580,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
98370,-90.9090909090909,4,2,1,70,0,1
100738,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
101212,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,70,0,1
101685,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
102159,-166.666666666667,4,2,1,70,0,1
102633,-83.3333333333333,4,2,1,70,0,1
103264,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 244,137,132
Combo2 : 163,200,121
Combo3 : 120,193,233
Combo4 : 241,199,135

[HitObjects]
197,93,12003,6,0,P|164:58|118:47,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,170,12476,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,153,12634,2,0,P|285:120|296:74,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,0,13108,2,0,L|404:2,1,23.9999992675781,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
450,24,13266,2,0,L|355:5,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
503,85,13739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
423,101,13897,2,0,P|407:119|399:141,1,47.9999985351563,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
461,242,14213,2,0,P|430:224|395:223,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,233,14529,6,0,L|400:338,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,192,15003,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,266,15160,2,0,P|249:240|233:187,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,62,15634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,94,15792,2,0,P|212:86|172:86,1,47.9999985351563,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,52,16108,2,0,P|336:44|377:44,1,47.9999985351563,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
478,122,16424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,122,16581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
375,201,16739,2,0,L|382:281,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
379,288,17055,6,0,P|423:269|485:276,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,246,17529,1,0,0:0:0:0:
307,327,17687,2,0,P|259:328|215:309,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
309,246,18160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
311,164,18318,2,0,L|294:53,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,55,18713,2,0,P|333:64|351:60,1,47.9999985351563,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,32,18950,2,0,P|374:42|357:52,1,47.9999985351563,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,143,19266,2,0,P|194:143|161:128,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,118,19581,6,0,L|66:123,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
66,130,19897,2,0,P|50:109|38:80,1,47.9999985351563,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
30,226,20213,2,0,L|115:221,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,214,20529,2,0,P|130:234|143:264,1,47.9999985351563,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,350,20845,6,0,P|206:303|262:265,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,344,21318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
314,229,21476,2,0,P|322:252|322:276,1,47.9999985351563,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,201,21792,6,0,B|201:160|201:160|222:105,1,83.9999974365235,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,107,22108,6,0,L|366:101,1,128,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,234,22581,2,0,L|307:228,1,128,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,201,23055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
263,327,23213,2,0,P|253:314|242:304,1,32,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,343,23371,6,0,P|231:313|143:310,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,178,23845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,211,24003,2,0,P|165:196|145:171,1,64,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,0,24318,2,0,L|224:96,1,96,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,114,24634,6,0,P|257:86|345:86,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
414,209,25108,2,0,P|350:210|297:177,1,128,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
434,46,25581,2,0,L|436:126,1,64,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
502,315,25897,6,0,L|511:188,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,327,26371,2,0,L|408:283,1,32,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
391,195,26529,1,0,0:0:0:0:
317,296,26687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
193,312,26845,2,0,L|86:296,1,96,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
83,283,27160,6,0,P|67:223|96:167,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,232,27634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
215,70,27792,2,0,P|198:97|193:129,1,64,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,222,28108,2,0,P|340:190|323:163,1,64,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,63,28424,6,0,L|65:74,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,171,28897,2,0,P|165:174|121:218,1,128,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,337,29371,2,0,L|101:324,1,96,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,319,29687,6,0,L|220:308,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,181,30160,2,0,L|227:170,1,128,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,353,30634,2,0,P|321:323|321:291,1,64,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
461,172,30950,6,0,P|431:210|425:257,1,96,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
434,274,31266,1,8,0:0:0:0:
355,181,31424,1,0,0:0:0:0:
239,253,31581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,208,31739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
71,382,31897,1,8,0:0:0:0:
102,377,31976,1,8,0:0:0:0:
133,374,32055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
165,369,32134,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,361,32213,6,0,P|229:331|238:252,1,128,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,147,32687,2,0,L|241:142,1,128,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,232,33160,1,8,0:0:0:0:
241,336,33318,2,0,P|252:323|263:314,1,32,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,351,33476,6,0,P|273:323|361:328,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,241,33950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,201,34108,2,0,P|332:173|340:142,1,64,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,230,34424,2,0,L|109:220,1,96,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,206,34739,6,0,P|67:245|85:332,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,138,35213,2,0,P|203:76|171:22,1,128,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,85,35687,2,0,L|88:94,1,64,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
263,168,36003,6,0,L|123:186,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,300,36476,2,0,L|226:293,1,32,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,272,36634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,376,36792,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,370,36950,2,0,L|443:355,1,96,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,368,37266,6,0,P|465:322|435:238,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
487,115,37739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
393,172,37897,2,0,P|361:176|330:167,1,64,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,18,38213,2,0,P|479:9|511:13,1,64,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,186,38529,6,0,P|333:187|258:128,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
149,32,39003,2,0,P|165:77|158:124,1,96,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,137,39318,2,0,L|101:133,1,32,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,229,39476,2,0,L|66:234,1,96,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,244,39792,6,0,P|116:278|132:338,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,207,40266,2,0,P|254:241|238:301,1,128,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
181,150,40739,1,8,0:0:0:0:
378,117,40897,2,0,P|365:108|348:102,1,32,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,136,41055,6,0,P|336:108|253:109,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
415,229,41529,1,0,0:0:0:0:
315,269,41687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
295,375,41845,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,251,42003,1,12,0:0:0:0:
298,251,42318,6,0,L|250:261,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,144,42476,2,0,L|347:154,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
497,43,42634,2,0,L|449:53,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
249,18,42792,6,0,P|307:13|350:52,1,119.999996337891,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,171,43266,6,0,L|216:120,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,0,43424,2,0,L|126:47,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,178,43581,2,0,L|300:127,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
123,133,43739,6,0,L|140:260,1,119.999996337891,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,327,44213,6,0,L|231:261,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
313,163,44371,2,0,L|305:97,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
409,324,44529,2,0,L|401:258,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
462,95,44687,1,8,0:0:0:0:
466,107,45003,5,0,0:0:0:0:
313,163,45160,1,12,0:0:0:0:
467,212,45318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,55,45476,2,0,P|295:52|241:79,1,88.000002685547,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,249,45792,2,0,L|312:162,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
153,82,46108,5,0,0:0:0:0:
321,152,46266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
130,233,46424,2,0,L|16:219,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,114,46739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,302,46897,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,221,47055,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,221,47371,6,0,L|346:213,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,114,47529,2,0,L|286:121,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
149,28,47687,2,0,L|95:20,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
55,195,47845,6,0,P|111:182|139:131,1,119.999996337891,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
253,0,48318,6,0,L|258:65,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,245,48476,2,0,L|249:180,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,42,48634,2,0,L|348:107,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,289,48792,6,0,P|355:238|411:225,1,119.999996337891,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
485,366,49266,6,0,L|412:358,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,313,49424,2,0,L|317:301,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
479,223,49581,2,0,L|406:215,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,189,49739,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,176,50055,5,0,0:0:0:0:
97,278,50213,1,12,0:0:0:0:
170,133,50371,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,288,50529,2,0,P|307:302|363:284,1,88.000002685547,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,95,50845,2,0,P|386:131|381:175,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
491,183,51160,5,0,0:0:0:0:
290,154,51318,1,0,0:0:0:0:
419,287,51476,2,0,L|324:277,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,193,51792,1,0,0:0:0:0:
250,336,51950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
83,331,52108,1,8,0:0:0:0:
83,330,52424,6,0,P|99:313|121:305,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,133,52581,2,0,P|197:148|185:168,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,235,52739,2,0,P|50:226|74:226,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
294,316,52897,6,0,P|244:310|210:248,1,119.999996337891,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,184,53371,6,0,L|336:251,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,14,53529,2,0,L|324:83,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,184,53687,2,0,L|422:251,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,124,53845,6,0,P|334:88|395:95,1,119.999996337891,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,206,54318,6,0,P|460:198|441:183,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,205,54476,2,0,P|285:227|300:246,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,316,54634,2,0,P|430:313|389:324,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
258,378,54792,1,8,0:0:0:0:
270,367,55108,5,0,0:0:0:0:
117,333,55266,2,0,P|99:304|103:242,1,88.000002685547,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,273,55581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
117,142,55739,1,0,0:0:0:0:
211,273,55897,2,0,L|308:261,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,99,56213,6,0,L|204:73,1,176.000005371094,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,142,56687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
211,273,56845,2,0,P|226:231|222:188,1,88.000002685547,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,47,57160,1,8,0:0:0:0:
131,47,57476,6,0,P|96:61|76:64,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
275,110,57634,2,0,P|240:96|220:93,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
401,26,57792,2,0,P|366:40|346:43,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,213,57950,6,0,P|321:187|378:198,1,119.999996337891,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,340,58424,6,0,P|363:312|365:275,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,183,58581,2,0,P|486:195|460:200,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,93,58739,2,0,P|344:90|368:93,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,213,58897,6,0,P|214:187|157:198,1,119.999996337891,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,296,59371,5,8,0:3:0:0:
136,94,59529,1,8,0:3:0:0:
24,212,59687,1,4,0:3:0:0:
59,133,59845,1,4,0:3:0:0:
127,330,60037,5,4,0:0:0:0:
434,100,64897,5,8,0:0:0:0:
273,141,65054,1,8,0:0:0:0:
454,21,65212,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,140,65370,6,0,P|215:114|153:121,1,128,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,246,65843,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,172,66001,2,0,B|391:107|391:107|365:50,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
449,256,66475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,329,66633,6,0,L|218:319,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,158,67106,2,0,L|321:148,1,128,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,179,67580,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,179,67738,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,61,67896,6,0,P|381:119|399:179,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,295,68370,2,0,P|304:234|281:176,1,128,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
170,113,68843,1,8,0:0:0:0:
97,242,69001,2,0,L|150:237,1,32,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,254,69159,6,0,L|215:241,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,378,69633,2,0,P|261:375|234:360,1,64,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,332,69948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
313,254,70106,2,0,P|305:208|319:162,1,96,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,149,70422,6,0,L|217:118,1,96,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
223,118,70738,2,0,P|214:86|218:43,1,64,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
427,90,71054,2,0,L|419:235,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
466,316,71527,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,215,71685,6,0,L|332:358,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,217,72159,1,0,0:0:0:0:
466,316,72317,2,0,L|458:360,2,32,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,217,72633,2,0,P|410:185|421:133,1,64,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
486,34,72948,6,0,L|345:51,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
227,175,73422,2,0,L|99:160,1,128,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,53,73896,1,8,0:0:0:0:
243,66,74054,1,0,0:0:0:0:
330,186,74212,1,0,0:0:0:0:
322,199,74370,1,0,0:0:0:0:
370,75,74527,1,8,0:0:0:0:
227,175,74685,5,8,0:3:0:0:
218,188,74764,1,8,0:3:0:0:
208,200,74843,1,8,0:3:0:0:
341,293,75001,1,4,0:3:0:0:
332,306,75080,1,4,0:3:0:0:
322,318,75159,1,4,0:3:0:0:
497,175,75475,6,0,P|435:186|380:155,1,128,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,295,75948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
335,252,76106,2,0,P|272:257|227:300,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,168,76580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
231,313,76738,5,0,0:0:0:0:
119,233,76896,2,0,P|105:205|103:173,1,64,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,80,77212,2,0,L|64:68,1,128,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,181,77685,2,0,L|338:171,1,96,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,160,78001,6,0,P|378:195|369:280,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,182,78475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,84,78633,2,0,P|441:43|466:14,1,64,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,160,78948,2,0,L|276:150,1,64,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,271,79264,6,0,P|342:256|255:291,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,343,79738,2,0,P|141:359|70:337,1,96,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
81,337,80054,2,0,L|77:288,1,32,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,144,80212,2,0,L|169:247,1,96,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,257,80527,6,0,L|152:109,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,82,81001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,9,81159,2,0,L|260:136,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,82,81633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,91,81791,6,0,L|54:74,1,96,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,67,82106,1,8,0:0:0:0:
117,164,82264,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,242,82422,2,0,L|77:235,1,64,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,165,82738,2,0,P|225:172|190:204,1,96,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,225,83054,6,0,L|197:357,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,231,83527,2,0,L|371:104,1,128,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,304,84001,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,274,84159,2,0,L|456:230,1,32,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
461,287,84317,6,0,L|471:159,1,128,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,12,84791,1,0,0:0:0:0:
378,116,84948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,156,85106,1,0,0:0:0:0:
393,125,85264,5,12,0:0:0:0:
393,125,85580,6,0,P|416:124|440:120,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,44,85738,2,0,P|273:43|249:39,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,203,85896,2,0,P|288:181|294:158,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
118,48,86054,6,0,P|123:99|182:142,1,119.999996337891,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,241,86527,6,0,P|81:227|102:216,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,299,86685,2,0,L|234:284,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,352,86843,2,0,P|88:331|107:315,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,200,87001,6,0,P|234:199|193:158,1,119.999996337891,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,20,87475,6,0,P|237:41|237:86,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,79,87633,2,0,P|395:60|404:38,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,222,87791,2,0,P|433:230|409:233,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
277,205,87948,1,8,0:0:0:0:
293,200,88264,5,0,0:0:0:0:
142,251,88422,1,12,0:0:0:0:
311,292,88580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,147,88738,2,0,L|231:57,1,88.000002685547,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,89,89054,2,0,L|83:176,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
101,327,89370,5,0,0:0:0:0:
180,168,89527,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,349,89685,2,0,L|281:331,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
171,269,90001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
347,275,90159,1,0,0:0:0:0:
273,135,90317,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,135,90633,6,0,P|264:157|260:180,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,29,90791,2,0,P|383:14|405:5,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
345,185,90948,2,0,P|354:207|368:226,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,22,91106,6,0,P|221:29|181:71,1,119.999996337891,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
127,213,91580,6,0,P|132:189|132:165,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,15,91738,2,0,P|73:38|73:62,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,257,91896,2,0,P|214:235|228:208,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
19,169,92054,6,0,P|17:228|36:285,1,119.999996337891,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,347,92527,6,0,L|93:343,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,256,92685,2,0,L|212:252,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,165,92843,2,0,L|329:161,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,156,93001,1,8,0:0:0:0:
174,146,93317,5,0,0:0:0:0:
295,256,93475,1,12,0:0:0:0:
323,93,93633,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,212,93791,2,0,L|374:204,1,88.000002685547,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,89,94106,2,0,L|319:81,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,266,94422,5,0,0:0:0:0:
402,125,94580,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,266,94738,2,0,P|235:268|192:258,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,204,95054,1,0,0:0:0:0:
229,89,95212,1,0,0:0:0:0:
411,21,95370,1,8,0:0:0:0:
427,33,95685,6,0,P|404:41|385:56,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,243,95843,2,0,P|287:228|299:208,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,138,96001,2,0,P|461:147|437:147,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
241,77,96159,6,0,P|184:61|131:86,1,119.999996337891,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,208,96633,6,0,L|185:137,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
45,98,96791,2,0,L|56:27,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,243,96948,2,0,L|132:290,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,126,97106,6,0,P|286:69|260:16,1,119.999996337891,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,85,97580,6,0,L|219:69,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,221,97738,2,0,L|270:211,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
113,174,97896,2,0,L|201:158,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,140,98054,1,8,0:0:0:0:
386,131,98370,5,0,0:0:0:0:
448,302,98527,2,0,P|459:260|453:217,1,88.000002685547,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,172,98843,1,0,0:0:0:0:
479,125,99001,1,0,0:0:0:0:
302,57,99159,2,0,L|211:54,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,213,99475,6,0,L|304:195,1,176.000005371094,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
389,240,99948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,382,100106,2,0,P|297:341|301:298,1,88.000002685547,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,146,100422,1,8,0:0:0:0:
374,146,100738,6,0,P|392:124|399:97,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,91,100896,2,0,P|243:93|266:100,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,281,101054,2,0,P|295:253|270:223,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,84,101212,6,0,P|140:141|185:178,1,119.999996337891,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,81,101685,6,0,P|242:83|219:90,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
79,212,101843,2,0,L|11:198,1,47.9999985351563,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,249,102001,2,0,P|275:251|298:258,1,47.9999985351563,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
161,384,102159,6,0,P|139:329|152:271,1,119.999996337891,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,168,102633,5,8,0:3:0:0:
79,212,102791,1,8,0:3:0:0:
201,117,102948,1,4,0:3:0:0:
116,130,103106,1,4,0:3:0:0:
280,257,103264,5,4,0:0:0:0:

btw how to snap 01:00:037 - ?
BOUYAAA
396 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
BOUYAAA
01:00:037 - is snapped on the white tick before the timing point, it's fixed now

Updated!
Stjpa
886 posts
Joined July 2013
Stjpa
i hate extras

and the singer is stoned af

[Easy]
  1. 00:14:529 (1) - Mostly just gonna point aesthetic things for this diff because it's p good. How about flattening this slider a little more? So something like this. Just looks cleaner and fits better to the map since you used a lot of straight sliders (worst reasoning ever lol).
  2. 00:46:739 (4) - Are you sure that you don't wanna curve it a bit? Flow is so cut off this way.
  3. 00:59:371 (3,4) - Spacing error.
  4. 01:21:791 (2,3) - Lower density comes out of a sudden lol.

    Other than that I find it quite random how you used the 3/2 repeat slider, maybe place them like every third measure or whenever the guitar is the most audible? That would make the diff itself probably easier too since the SR is kinda high due the 1/1 spam at some places.

[Normal]
  1. I don't really understand why you use a lot of different rhythms in the beginning where some even seem to be for vocals and later on you permanently use the one for the guitar in the background. Pretty sure that would be kind of confusing for newer plays since they won't be able to figure out what they need to listen to.
  2. 00:45:003 (1,2) - I think having them stacked would be way easier for the player since the vocals don't have a strong emphasis itself and the other objects are still more focused on the instruments rather than the vocals.
  3. Maybe it's just me but the second kiai sounds like it has some more hitsounding and thus gives more rhythm feedback than for example the first or third one. Intended?
  4. 00:52:424 (1,2) - Considering that you mapped these sounds with two 1/2 sliders all the time you might wanna stick to that as the player most likely will remember that and not expect anything else. And you never used somewhere else the same pattern for this sound xd.
  5. 01:09:633 - Shouldn't here be a circle like on 01:19:738 ?

[Hard]
  1. HP6 seems quite harsh to me because it's a bit hard to build up the HP again after missing some objects.
  2. 00:19:818 (2) - Stronger sound on slidertail LUL. Why don't you just copy the same pattern from before to emphasize this properly?
  3. 00:21:476 (3) - I guess this should have two circles as well because it has another sound on the tail unlike the other ones.
  4. 00:35:687 (3,3) - If this overlap was intended you might wanna make it overlap the same as 00:23:055 (3,1) . I'm a consistency nazi ok.
  5. 00:44:371 (2,3) - I can't tell if this flow is even appropriate for people in this skill level. When I spectated people who approximately play Hard diffs they followed every pattern as precisely as possible. So the flow you chose here would make it really weird for them because they're not sliders. 00:49:424 (2,3) - This one is a bit different tho because they just have to move down and not have to change the direction twice in a very short time. But you have to change them anyway because the following pattern is not overlapping with 00:44:687 (4) - which you did later on all the time.
  6. 01:11:370 (3,1) - Feels somewhat odd that there was no emphasis at all before so you might wanna put one here for the vocals? But I suck at emphasis modding anyway, I'm more like a consistency / pattern guy eks dee.
  7. 01:31:580 (1,2,3,4) - Mfw you never stacked before and suddenly this appears.

[Insane]
  1. 00:14:213 (4) - The flow to the next object feels really weird since (1) forces you to follow the slider properly rather than doing a straight movement through it. And since (4) also shows more to the right it's a bit counter intuitive. So just CTRL + H it to make it similar to 00:18:003 (4,1) . (jesus I really can't mode flow lol)
  2. 00:27:634 (2) - Shouldn't it be closer to the previous one than to the next one to emphasize the snare harder than the guitar?
  3. 01:12:948 (1,2) - When this pattern appeared before ( 01:09:791 (3,4) ) it felt more like it was for the vocals as they were not worth any emphasis at all but this one is somewhat confusing. A slider would probably more appropriate because of the longer S he's saying.
  4. 01:24:948 (3,4) - Better emphasize a strong vocal with sum custom stack right?????? :^)
Not much to say about this diff, the custom stacks just feel kinda random but that's it.

[Expert]
  1. 00:12:950 (4,5,1) - Pretty sure there are some more places where you could have used triplets but for some reason you only used them here.
  2. 00:39:476 (3,4,1,2,3) - The vocals aren't even close to being dense enough to use 5 circles in a row imo.

Mod is not as good as I wanted it to be, but this map seems to be pretty fine already but since I rarely feel safe to nominate something that contains a harder diff and I really couldn't mod this anyway I'm not going to do it. Sorry mate.
BOUYAAA
396 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
BOUYAAA

Stjpa wrote:

i hate extras me too!!!!

and the singer is stoned af me too!!!!

[Easy]
  1. 00:14:529 (1) - Mostly just gonna point aesthetic things for this diff because it's p good. How about flattening this slider a little more? So something like this. Just looks cleaner and fits better to the map since you used a lot of straight sliders (worst reasoning ever lol). lul
  2. 00:46:739 (4) - Are you sure that you don't wanna curve it a bit? Flow is so cut off this way. i think it's fine as the downwards movement is kept curve wouldn't achieve much, it just makes things messy imo
  3. 00:59:371 (3,4) - Spacing error. oops
  4. 01:21:791 (2,3) - Lower density comes out of a sudden lol. if we're talking about clicking patterns this is the exact same density as the whole map has

    Other than that I find it quite random how you used the 3/2 repeat slider, maybe place them like every third measure or whenever the guitar is the most audible? That would make the diff itself probably easier too since the SR is kinda high due the 1/1 spam at some places. Easy diffs deserve to be a bit more than 2/2 spam because what new players usually do is that they start out playing normal because anything lower has so simplified rythms and low AR it is actually harder to follow. As for the 3/2 sliders i highly doubt they add copmplexity to the diff as they do not have to be clicked (hence the usage of repeat sliders...) pretty sure this is pretty common tbh

[Normal]
  1. I don't really understand why you use a lot of different rhythms in the beginning where some even seem to be for vocals and later on you permanently use the one for the guitar in the background. Pretty sure that would be kind of confusing for newer plays since they won't be able to figure out what they need to listen to. Rythm is used in different ways in the beginning because bass pattern is not consistent. This also makes up for some variety and fun rythm. When drum layer comes in the song's rythm becomes very consistent and thus my mapping tries to reflect that.
  2. 00:45:003 (1,2) - I think having them stacked would be way easier for the player since the vocals don't have a strong emphasis itself and the other objects are still more focused on the instruments rather than the vocals. stacks kill readability. Also i don't get your point lol, from a pure emphasis perspective 00:45:160 (2) - totally deserves some spacing as there is a finish hitsound on it's head
  3. Maybe it's just me but the second kiai sounds like it has some more hitsounding and thus gives more rhythm feedback than for example the first or third one. Intended? uh no it's not intentional i think it's fixed now
  4. 00:52:424 (1,2) - Considering that you mapped these sounds with two 1/2 sliders all the time you might wanna stick to that as the player most likely will remember that and not expect anything else. And you never used somewhere else the same pattern for this sound xd. yea good point
  5. 01:09:633 - Shouldn't here be a circle like on 01:19:738 ? no for song intensity reasons

[Hard]
  1. HP6 seems quite harsh to me because it's a bit hard to build up the HP again after missing some objects. HP6 is pretty standard for herd level diffs and my ncing doesn't do naything special, this should be fine
  2. 00:19:818 (2) - Stronger sound on slidertail LUL. Why don't you just copy the same pattern from before to emphasize this properly? Idk what you mean, there is no similar pattern before. I do this to emphasize vocals correctly, i do this in all my diffs. I tried to avoid doing 2*1/4 gaps in a row, that slider fits very well.
  3. 00:21:476 (3) - I guess this should have two circles as well because it has another sound on the tail unlike the other ones. did
  4. 00:35:687 (3,3) - If this overlap was intended you might wanna make it overlap the same as 00:23:055 (3,1) . I'm a consistency nazi ok. Blankets though :(
  5. 00:44:371 (2,3) - I can't tell if this flow is even appropriate for people in this skill level. When I spectated people who approximately play Hard diffs they followed every pattern as precisely as possible. This should be fine, single tappers should be able to play that ez pz So the flow you chose here would make it really weird for them because they're not sliders. 00:49:424 (2,3) - This one is a bit different tho because they just have to move down and not have to change the direction twice in a very short time you realise these play like a stack yea. But you have to change them anyway because the following pattern is not overlapping with 00:44:687 (4) - which you did later on all the time. further explanation on that in "secretpipe" 's mod. It serves as an introdution to what notes are snaped to. The first one is different to teach the player that in further repetitions of that chorus the he will have to be careful because it is 1/1 and not 1/2 (even though imo, approach circles should be enough)
  6. 01:11:370 (3,1) - Feels somewhat odd that there was no emphasis at all before so you might wanna put one here for the vocals? But I suck at emphasis modding anyway, I'm more like a consistency / pattern guy eks dee. eks dee
  7. 01:31:580 (1,2,3,4) - Mfw you never stacked before and suddenly this appears. mfw no face

[Insane]
  1. 00:14:213 (4) - The flow to the next object feels really weird since (1) forces you to follow the slider properly rather than doing a straight movement through it. And since (4) also shows more to the right it's a bit counter intuitive. So just CTRL + H it to make it similar to 00:18:003 (4,1) . (jesus I really can't mode flow lol) i made u a nice drawing explaining why i think it's not that bad http://puu.sh/qQr33/34297caf69.jpg i think i did a pretty good job on it. i'm an art major btw
  2. 00:27:634 (2) - Shouldn't it be closer to the previous one than to the next one to emphasize the snare harder than the guitar? i don't think this matters as both are very strong beats. The beat with the bass sound is the second most important beat in the measure (it's a syncope of the 3rd beat)
  3. 01:12:948 (1,2) - When this pattern appeared before ( 01:09:791 (3,4) ) it felt more like it was for the vocals as they were not worth any emphasis at all but this one is somewhat confusing. A slider would probably more appropriate because of the longer S he's saying. uh yea idk what i'm doing
  4. 01:24:948 (3,4) - Better emphasize a strong vocal with sum custom stack right?????? :^) Of course not!
Not much to say about this diff, the custom stacks just feel kinda random but that's it.

[Expert]
  1. 00:12:950 (4,5,1) - Pretty sure there are some more places where you could have used triplets but for some reason you only used them here. i don't like experimenting with overmaps that much. This is for vocals
  2. 00:39:476 (3,4,1,2,3) - The vocals aren't even close to being dense enough to use 5 circles in a row imo. opinions

Mod is not as good as I wanted it to be, but this map seems to be pretty fine already but since I rarely feel safe to nominate something that contains a harder diff and I really couldn't mod this anyway I'm not going to do it. Sorry mate. Kill me
Hey thanks for the mod i really appreciate it !
Stjpa
886 posts
Joined July 2013
Stjpa
Where's my kd. :(
BOUYAAA
396 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
BOUYAAA

Stjpa wrote:

Where's my kd. :(
lol oops

my mistake i'll give you one more
Exote
416 posts
Joined April 2013
Exote
a bit of this, a bit of that
01:59 Exote: hey?
01:59 BOUYAAA: hii
01:59 Exote: ouou
01:59 *Exote is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/904009 Arctic Monkeys - From The Ritz To The Rubble [Normal]]
01:59 Exote: pretty good song
01:59 Exote: and ugh
01:59 Exote: i was looking through the set
01:59 BOUYAAA: Thanks!
02:00 Exote: there are different DSs in normal diff
02:00 Exote: idk if they are by mistake or intentional
02:00 BOUYAAA: uh
02:00 BOUYAAA: can you point them out
02:00 Exote: 00:16:424 (2,3,1) - 
02:00 Exote: this for example
02:00 BOUYAAA: pretty sure they are mistakes
02:00 Exote: the intro is mapped with 0,8 DS as far as i see
02:00 Exote: and then
02:00 Exote: yea
02:01 Exote: this is a clear example
02:01 Exote: 00:16:897 (3) -  spaced further than 2 and closer to 1
02:01 BOUYAAA: indeed
02:01 Exote: 00:17:687 (2,1) - 
02:01 Exote: those two as well
02:02 Exote: 00:24:318 (3,1) - 
02:02 Exote: etc
02:02 BOUYAAA: what the hell happenned
02:02 BOUYAAA: xd
02:02 Exote: lmao xd
02:02 Exote: no idea
02:02 Exote: 00:29:687 (1,2) - those arent 0,9 either
02:02 Exote: and it's 0,9, not 0,8* my bad
02:03 Exote: if u have different sv i guess thats fine, but sv stays consistent throughout the whole map ;/\
02:03 BOUYAAA: yes i'll have to fix it
02:03 Exote: looks like
02:03 BOUYAAA: this is not intentional
02:03 Exote: its mostly the beginning
02:03 Exote: 00:50:055 (1,2) - or no
02:03 Exote: damn
02:03 Exote: i have no idea how such stuff happen
02:03 Exote: lol
02:04 Exote: yeap,the final part is like this too, so like better check the entire diff
02:04 Exote: i want to mod ur set tbhhh
02:04 BOUYAAA: i mapped the thing in several sessions lul so that might explain it
02:05 BOUYAAA: i'l recheck everything yea
02:05 Exote: ohhhh
02:05 Exote: yeaaah
02:05 BOUYAAA: no idea why this is a thing
02:05 Exote: well u might have forgotten to switch DS
02:06 BOUYAAA: well it doesn't really matter tbh, i'll have to recheck everything anyways
02:06 Exote: yep
02:06 Exote: anyway
02:06 Exote: i'd tone down hard's od down to 6 and insane to 7
02:07 Exote: expert diff is really fun btw
02:07 Exote: love the kiai jumps
02:08 BOUYAAA: i think milan bullies me into reducing insane's od a little
02:08 BOUYAAA: i'll compare it with whatever other insane of the same skill level have
02:08 Exote: i'd be cool, even tho it's only jumps od is still a bit harsh for a 4.5 diff
02:08 Exote: it*
02:09 BOUYAAA: yea you're porbably right
02:09 BOUYAAA: i'l most likely reduce it by .5 or something
02:09 Exote: thats fine as well
Cryptic
551 posts
Joined December 2013
Cryptic
From my queue - I love your maps + song choices so I'm glad you requested.
This'll be a light check, just things that really stand out to me. I'll come back to it when I'm feeling a bit better.

[Easy]
  1. 01:09:790 (3,1) - Fix the DS here to be more consistent.
  2. 01:21:791 (2,3) - Kind of weird to throw this pattern in so late in the song. I think that this should be standardized to be similar to the rest of the map before going forward.
[Normal]
  1. In general I'm a bit confused by the DS shift in this difficulty, is it intentional and if so, why?
  2. 00:43:582 (2,1,2) - In order to follow your DS patterns here, the distance between 2>1 should be approx 1.0.
  3. 00:47:055 (3,1) - Fix the DS here as well.
  4. 00:48:634 (2,1) - This distance between these is the same as you were using before the "chorus" but not the same as here: 00:47:687 (2,1) - . Are these inconsistencies or what?
  5. My mod will mostly be repeating itself so I'll cut off this part here, let me know whats up with the weird DS shifts on this diff. (Sure, DS shifts are allowed in Normals, but they should make sense and if there is a pattern here I think its too complex for a Normal.)
[Hard]
  1. Skipping over this for now, getting some more opinions on some concerns I have that are potentially purely subjective.
[Insane]
  1. 00:42:318 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think the DS change here should be a bit more consistent between the 3 (so the changes between the three should be more consistent) which would better reflect the music. This applies to basically all the jumps like this so I'll only list it here.
  2. 00:52:424 (1,2,3,4) - Why the different pattern here?
  3. 01:09:791 (3,4) - 01:19:896 (4,5) - 01:24:948 (3,4) - Why not just do a regular stack here since thats what you were doing in the beginning? Is this for variation? And if so, why?
  4. 01:30:633 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - No matter how I look at it these are way too small.
  5. Basically long story short, standardize those jumps more since its the same musically. If you want to add variation, have the pattern vary in an ABAB format or something along that line.
[Milan-'s Insane]
  1. Tbh some of these 3/4th sliders sound really awkward. The ones that really stood out to me are 00:16:739 (9) - 00:18:318 (5) - 01:10:106 (4) - Honestly just silencing them should be fine, all of them or just the ones that are really abrasive. Diff itself looks solid, but I'll give it a more thorough check when I come back to this.
[Expert]
  1. 00:31:897 (6,7,8,9,1) - Whats with the decel stream here? It feels kind of clunky IMO. I think its probably because it doesn't start deceling until 00:32:055 (8) - and so it just ends up looking like you ran out of room and had to condense the end.
  2. 01:41:685 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - The design of these definitely puts the emphasis on the wrong notes. Note how the 3,4s of both get less emphasis than the initial 1,2s and also how the 2>3 spacing gets the most emphasis by a fairly good margin.
Yeah, call me back when you get another BN and I'll do a more thorough check then. Or if you can't find one which seems to be a common occurrence now-a-days just call me back in a week or two.
Yuii-
2,503 posts
Joined July 2013
Yuii-
I am stalking Cryptic!! Give him kds, not me!!!

Finish hitsound is extremely loud, consider lowering the volume of green lines whenever you are using them on the Kiai. 00:52:424 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Turns out to be super loud, for example. Try around 50%~55% volume on sections like that. And same applies whenever you are using any Finish hs.

As for the Hard difficulty, the only thing I am able to say it might look weird is 00:50:055 (1) - (and 01:27:948 (4,1) - of course). Better spacing them like every other double+break. If you do that, you might want to reconsider changing 00:54:634 (2,1) - since it'd be the only time you'd overlap 1/1 after a break... or are you doing it anywhere else? For example, in the other Kiai (the one at the very end), there are two examples of an overlap being stacked after a break with a slider.
Also, 01:04:897 (1) - placing that circle in the other side of the triangle flows way better with 01:05:370 (1) - .
Last, but not least, 00:21:476 (1,2) - these should be stacked.

Everything else is 8-)
Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Milan-

Cryptic wrote:

[Milan-'s Insane]
  1. Tbh some of these 3/4th sliders sound really awkward. The ones that really stood out to me are 00:16:739 (9) - 00:18:318 (5) - 01:10:106 (4) - Honestly just silencing them should be fine, all of them or just the ones that are really abrasive. Diff itself looks solid, but I'll give it a more thorough check when I come back to this.
Uhm not sure what to say tbh.. the first and third ones are totally mapping to a background guitar/bass sound, second is like introducing vocals for the next pattern. I don't like much silencing sliders, they tend to destroy the harmony I want to create. All are on purpose ;( thank for mod!
BOUYAAA
396 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
BOUYAAA

Cryptic wrote:

From my queue - I love your maps + song choices so I'm glad you requested. Thanks dude!
This'll be a light check, just things that really stand out to me. I'll come back to it when I'm feeling a bit better.

[Easy]
  1. 01:09:790 (3,1) - Fix the DS here to be more consistent.yes
  2. 01:21:791 (2,3) - Kind of weird to throw this pattern in so late in the song. I think that this should be standardized to be similar to the rest of the map before going forward. shouldn't be a problem since clicking pattern isn't anything special but did it anyways because i never do 1/1 circles anyways
[Normal]
  1. In general I'm a bit confused by the DS shift in this difficulty, is it intentional and if so, why? nothing here is intentional, i went through the diff (again) to make sure it's the same everywhere. everything should be fixed now.
  2. 00:43:582 (2,1,2) - In order to follow your DS patterns here, the distance between 2>1 should be approx 1.0.
  3. 00:47:055 (3,1) - Fix the DS here as well.
  4. 00:48:634 (2,1) - This distance between these is the same as you were using before the "chorus" but not the same as here: 00:47:687 (2,1) - . Are these inconsistencies or what?
  5. My mod will mostly be repeating itself so I'll cut off this part here, let me know whats up with the weird DS shifts on this diff. (Sure, DS shifts are allowed in Normals, but they should make sense and if there is a pattern here I think its too complex for a Normal.)
[Hard]
  1. Skipping over this for now, getting some more opinions on some concerns I have that are potentially purely subjective.
[Insane]
  1. 00:42:318 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I think the DS change here should be a bit more consistent between the 3 (so the changes between the three should be more consistent) which would better reflect the music. This applies to basically all the jumps like this so I'll only list it here. I actually have reasonign for this. I don't usually put too much attention in perfect consistency in my maps. I think it won't benefit me in this case as the concept in itself (spacing increasing gradually) is respected throughout the whole map. Gameplay isn't affected by this as the DS used shouldn't matter as much in the higher difficulties, i usually place my objects without using any DS at all and try to juge if things look and feel consistent by testpaying. If anything i think changing this would be detrimental to my map, because the human brain adapts very easily to repetition and considering i use very similar patterns i think having slight inconsistencies helps (Side note : this concept of avoiding repetition is applied in music too where artists manually unsnap notes - by amounts that are often too small to notice - so the brain can't "adapt" to the melody that easily. This is the reason why some songs are such a headache to time sometimes, musicians are well aware that their timing is inconsistent, but they are also probably aware what benefits it has on the listener. If you think these things are interesting you can google it, i think the term for it is "swing" and there should be a few articles talking about it.) I hope this wall of text makes sense to you lol
  2. 00:52:424 (1,2,3,4) - Why the different pattern here? should be more like the others now
  3. 01:09:791 (3,4) - 01:19:896 (4,5) - 01:24:948 (3,4) - Why not just do a regular stack here since thats what you were doing in the beginning? Is this for variation? And if so, why? oh us the ones after the intro are sopposed to be unstacked a little in this diff, so i unstacked this one : 00:26:529 (3,4) - and another one later i forgot to put the timestamp, things should be how they were intended now
  4. 01:30:633 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - No matter how I look at it these are way too small. buffed
  5. Basically long story short, standardize those jumps more since its the same musically. If you want to add variation, have the pattern vary in an ABAB format or something along that line.
[Expert]
  1. 00:31:897 (6,7,8,9,1) - Whats with the decel stream here? It feels kind of clunky IMO. I think its probably because it doesn't start deceling until 00:32:055 (8) - and so it just ends up looking like you ran out of room and had to condense the end. i remapped that part in reverse, that's why this was a thing lol. I guess it looked cool so it didn't bother me that much, shoudl be fixed now.
  2. 01:41:685 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - The design of these definitely puts the emphasis on the wrong notes. Note how the 3,4s of both get less emphasis than the initial 1,2s and also how the 2>3 spacing gets the most emphasis by a fairly good margin. your timestamp is weird but it should be good now
Yeah, call me back when you get another BN and I'll do a more thorough check then. Or if you can't find one which seems to be a common occurrence now-a-days just call me back in a week or two. squichu liked the song and said he's gonna check the map, idk when though.
Thanks alot!
BOUYAAA
396 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
BOUYAAA
Hey it's xX-Yuii-Xx !!!!

Yuii- wrote:

I am stalking Cryptic!! Give him kds, not me!!! no B)

Finish hitsound is extremely loud, consider lowering the volume of green lines whenever you are using them on the Kiai. 00:52:424 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Turns out to be super loud, for example. Try around 50%~55% volume on sections like that. And same applies whenever you are using any Finish hs. mmmh, maybe i just have shitty headphones but they are just loud enough imo, reduced volume by like 10% though

As for the Hard difficulty, the only thing I am able to say it might look weird is 00:50:055 (1) - (and 01:27:948 (4,1) - of course). Better spacing them like every other double+break. If you do that, you might want to reconsider changing 00:54:634 (2,1) - since it'd be the only time you'd overlap 1/1 after a break... or are you doing it anywhere else? For example, in the other Kiai (the one at the very end), there are two examples of an overlap being stacked after a break with a slider. These are intentional, i strongly feel 1/1 gaps are wayyyy more readable when they are close to each other. Each 1/1 gap is stacked here i think except the first which should have been the first iteration of that pattern. The one who suggested that is Joezapy, i think doing this is a smart way to introduce the player to the complexity of the rythm and the pattern while not overwhelming him by doing both at the same time. The idea is that the first time the player will encounter the rythm he will learn how it goes and that should be making it easier when he encounters the stacked 1/1 pattern later on. Would be cool if you could read his mod and tell me what you think about it. The guy is 60k too, so his feedback might be valuable on this i feel.
Also, 01:04:897 (1) - placing that circle in the other side of the triangle flows way better with 01:05:370 (1) - . done i think?
Last, but not least, 00:21:476 (1,2) - these should be stacked. yes

Everything else is 8-)
Thanks!!!
Last edited by BOUYAAA , edited 2 times in total.
Cryptic
551 posts
Joined December 2013
Cryptic
Also just as a quick note, I headed over to the official website to do a light metadata check and if you look here I believe the correct title would be "From the Ritz to the Rubble" rather than the current capitalization.

Feel free to get a second opinion on that.
BOUYAAA
396 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
BOUYAAA

Cryptic wrote:

Also just as a quick note, I headed over to the official website to do a light metadata check and if you look here I believe the correct title would be "From the Ritz to the Rubble" rather than the current capitalization.

Feel free to get a second opinion on that.
https://images-na.ssl-images-amazon.com ... Qw83lL.jpg

Ok this is confusing. On their official youtube channel they capitalize every first letter even though they don't do it on the album cover lol https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EqkBRVukQmE

I should probably go with the official website though
This guy agrees (also he's a bn we should trust him!!!) :
http://puu.sh/riid8/952ceb54a7.jpg
Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Milan-
they said it changes when the sun goes down
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
quite mild mapping, cute
BOUYAAA
396 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
BOUYAAA
Applied Sieg's hitsounds, made some changes to it and reported Milan for that joke
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg
now rank it, lol
actually idk if I'm free to bubble it but quality is really good
Ascendance
Elite Mapper
4,225 posts
Joined July 2013
Ascendance

BOUYAAA wrote:

Applied Sieg's hitsounds, made some changes to it and reported Milan for that joke
Be sure to post the logs if you're giving kudosu.
Sieg
3,981 posts
Joined February 2012
Sieg

Ascendance wrote:

BOUYAAA wrote:

Applied Sieg's hitsounds, made some changes to it and reported Milan for that joke
Be sure to post the logs if you're giving kudosu.
kd is given for the major help with hitsounding, there is no logs tho, thanks for your attention
Ascendance
Elite Mapper
4,225 posts
Joined July 2013
Ascendance
You should probably deny your kd then :d
It's on the BN test :P
BOUYAAA
396 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
BOUYAAA
glad to see I'd have failed the bn test!
2016-09-24 19:13 Sieg: yo dude, would you mind to give me a try to make something with hitsounds on your AM's beatmap? quite awesome expert diff btw
2016-09-24 19:15 BOUYAAA: hi thanks!
2016-09-24 19:15 BOUYAAA: You mean you wanna try to hitsound my map?
2016-09-24 19:15 Sieg: kind of I'll just try and leave it for you to decide if any
2016-09-24 19:16 BOUYAAA: yea sure
2016-09-24 19:16 Sieg: niice
2016-09-24 19:16 Sieg: thanks
2016-09-24 22:11 Sieg: yo https://puu.sh/rmuXA/41bc88fa62.zip try them, you don't have to use ofc :3 don't forget to backup first
2016-09-24 22:12 Sieg: tho they simple
2016-09-24 22:15 BOUYAAA: checking in a sec

Idk if milan still wants to make changes to his diff but Squichu seems busy with work. I don't think he'll mind if someone else bubbles. Feel free to do so if you want. I'll annoy cryptic later.
Ascendance
Elite Mapper
4,225 posts
Joined July 2013
Ascendance
If he HITSOUNDED your map, he definitely doesn't get kd. I thought he was just helping with your hitsounds. He can't bubble it either.
Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Milan-
wat r u doing ascendance
Ascendance
Elite Mapper
4,225 posts
Joined July 2013
Ascendance

Milan- wrote:

wat r u doing ascendance
kiling myself
BOUYAAA
396 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
BOUYAAA
The map was already hitsounded before he arrived with the same patterns lol. If he would have provided the new samples and suggested his changes (which there arn't many of) via a simple mod it would have achieved the same thing. I think the KD was very well deserved as he provided time and ressources I wouldn't have had to try and improve my map.

z
Exote
416 posts
Joined April 2013
Exote
is this happening pls faster
BOUYAAA
396 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
BOUYAAA
trying to bend spacetime as we speak
Bonsai
1,212 posts
Joined July 2011
Bonsai
Nobody really cares how this stuff is treated and it doesn't really matter either, either grab your kudosu or feel free to icon it lol, I grab kds for timings too / have nominated mapsets where I reworked a lot of complicated timing too, it's not like there's gonna be any issue with that anyways~
show more
Please sign in to reply.

New reply

0
8 / 67