nanda2009 wrote:
hey
[Mochi's Normal]
- there's still some unused inherited points, mainly the one used to silencing (00:42:077), fix them
- 00:09:494 (1,2,3,4) - For me, you can try to focus on the vocal instead of piano, because it's the loudest one to be heard on this part, also you mappe the vocal after this fixed
- tbh for me patterns like 00:34:827 (3,4,5) is pretty difficult, because 3 is a short repeating slider which makes it difficult to know when will it end, which makes this hard too sightread. You can keep it though because there's already an easier difficulty but I personally will change it to a 1/2 slider, as it fits with the bass and vocal that's fine imo
- 00:51:493 (1) - you can extend this one to 00:54:160 or maybe add a note there, it's empty there, and you already make 01:14:827 (1,1) so why not? nope i want to keep some breaks here
wow
Modem wrote:
Placeholder :3
Okay, M4M is here~ >w</Mochi's Normal
* 00:11:327 - How about add a note at this part? Since you consistently mapping her voice at 00:09:494 (1,2) , 00:12:160 (1,2,3,4) , 00:15:160 (1,2,3,4,5) , and 00:17:493 (1) it's too much imo, changed the pattern before
* 00:38:493 (6,1) - This blanket could be improved by making this slider -> 00:38:827 (1) a bit less curvy like this :
Then, move the next slider -> 00:39:493 (2) into x:111 y:270 to fix the distance snap
* 00:44:493 (2) - How about moving the red point of this slider's frame right to the middle in order to have better emphasize of her voice? nope
* 00:51:493 (1) - Lower down the volume of this spinner into 25%. Because using 50% volume at this spinner was a bit too noisy, since the music is kinda low here and Kano's voice is more dominant yea fix
* 01:02:827 (1) - Remove the clap and only use the finish instead, since the voice of the clap was somehow disturbing the finish hitsound which emphasizing the cymbal from the main music i see
* 01:11:493 (3) - Would be nice if you emphasizing her voice by making this slider into a perfectly 'v'-shaped slider nah
Halfslashed wrote:
M4M
[Mochi's Normal]
01:02:493 (6,1) - You could blanket these. done
01:16:827 (1) - Why did you deviate from the rhythm here at 00:20:827 (1,2)? i want a variation, it's not a problem
01:19:493 (2) - Here as well, but corresponding to 00:23:493 (2,3) this time.
That's all I have to say, great set, good luck!
Kalibe wrote:
m4m late aaaa
[Mochi's Normal]
- 00:22:827 (1) - I also hear a clap in this head. great catch, fixed
- 00:54:827 - Those whistles sounds really noisy and not fitting song at all tbh~ Maybe cause you used CS:51 here, when later 01:05:493 - you switched into CS:50, change that to CS:50 too. yes
- 01:25:493 (3,4,5,6) - How about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/qeewa/dfa2ba58a4.jpg okay
Ok, that's all from me. Good luck o/
thanks for moddingSmokeman wrote:
m4m
Nromal
00:09:494 - i guess you are mapping the vocal line here
first pattern feels very onky to play
- 00:09:994 (2) - stretch it out to 00:10:660 - so its capture the whole vocal note
- (00:11:327 - you could add a note here aswell) changed rhythm
00:54:827 - mb reduce the lenths of the bell hitsounds. They overlap with eachother and make it awkward to listen to (or dont use them) yes
01:12:160 (4,5,6,1) - wierd rythm choice imo. I woul have 01:12:827 - and 01:13:160 - be clickable. the way you have it atm you creat a 3/2 gab between fix on my own 01:12:993 (6) - and 01:13:493 (1) - . http://puu.sh/qevDL/6834f6182e.jpg or http://puu.sh/qevFQ/45181247bd.jpg
01:14:827 (1,1) - you could argue that the gab between those is a bit too short for a normal dif map. (you coudl change 01:16:827 (1) - with a single circle on 01:17:160 - ) nah 2 beats is fine for normals
01:25:493 (3) - http://puu.sh/qevSR/2f36518d41.jpg a rythm like this would play alot smoother than what you have atm.
didnt rly like the insane difs. I dont think i could mod those right now :/
imo the lower difs still look a bit clunky at time and I belive they could use some polish
other than that i wish you best of luck!
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