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Topic Starter
Hello~ Here from my mania queue.
General
Quick thing concerning hitsounds: 03:06:914 (186914|1,187171|2,187428|0,187600|3,187857|1,188114|2,188285|0,188542|3,188800|1) - Please turn the hitsounds on these down, or use the soft sample set because this is a very soft part. This goes for all difficulties. Note: After modding some of the difficulties, I've noticed there are a lot of parts where you should use a softer hitsound (mainly the parts like the very beginning section of the song before the drums come in and towards the end). Try something like this maybe? http://puu.sh/nUM3E.wav
I would turn down the HP and OD of HD to 7.5 because 8 seems a bit too harsh for a 2.8* diff.
I would turn down the HP and OD of HD to 7.5 because 8 seems a bit too harsh for a 2.8* diff.
Muu's NM
01:13:942 (73942|3,74114|2) - Control J. You've used this same type of pattern multiple times, just in different lanes.
02:42:228 (162228|0,162228|1,162400|2,162571|1,162742|0,162914|2,162914|3,163085|1,163257|2,163428|3) - I would also suggest using a different pattern here because you've used this multiple times already, so it feels a little monotonous.
03:06:914 to 03:09:657 - I think you should make this the same as the other two difficulties, because it's like a transitional part, and it's not too difficult for a novice player to do.
03:36:228 (216228|0,216314|1,216400|2) - Control H. This is the exact same as 01:49:257 (109257|0,109342|1,109428|2), so I'd would just flip the entire measure horizontally.
03:53:542 to end - Use a different hitsound for this entire section because the one you have now doesn't fit with the song at this part. I'd suggest a soft hitsound of sorts.
02:42:228 (162228|0,162228|1,162400|2,162571|1,162742|0,162914|2,162914|3,163085|1,163257|2,163428|3) - I would also suggest using a different pattern here because you've used this multiple times already, so it feels a little monotonous.
03:06:914 to 03:09:657 - I think you should make this the same as the other two difficulties, because it's like a transitional part, and it's not too difficult for a novice player to do.
03:36:228 (216228|0,216314|1,216400|2) - Control H. This is the exact same as 01:49:257 (109257|0,109342|1,109428|2), so I'd would just flip the entire measure horizontally.
03:53:542 to end - Use a different hitsound for this entire section because the one you have now doesn't fit with the song at this part. I'd suggest a soft hitsound of sorts.
Muu's HD
00:55:257 and 00:58:000 and 01:00:742 and 01:02:114 and 01:03:485 and 01:04:171 - I think you could make these triples to accent the drums. As of now, there's no differentiation between the normal snare hits and the finish hits.
01:38:114 to 01:41:885 - Why did you stop with the LN's? The sound hasn't stopped, so I think you should add some simple LN's to represent that synth sound going in the background.
01:49:085 to 01:50:114 - ^^Same as above.
02:22:342 - Right here I would suggest an SV, at .5 Here's the timing points if accepted:
01:38:114 to 01:41:885 - Why did you stop with the LN's? The sound hasn't stopped, so I think you should add some simple LN's to represent that synth sound going in the background.
01:49:085 to 01:50:114 - ^^Same as above.
02:22:342 - Right here I would suggest an SV, at .5 Here's the timing points if accepted:
142342,-200,4,3,1,20,0,0(I hope I did that right). In case that doesn't work because I'm bad at this, it ends at 02:22:685
142685,-100,4,3,1,20,0,0
Muu's MX
Super short mod for MX lol.03:39:228 (219228|0) - Remove? I can't tell what this note is supposed to represent.
thanks protastic :3 it helps muchProtastic101 wrote:
Hello~ Here from my mania queue.GeneralQuick thing concerning hitsounds: 03:06:914 (186914|1,187171|2,187428|0,187600|3,187857|1,188114|2,188285|0,188542|3,188800|1) - Please turn the hitsounds on these down, or use the soft sample set because this is a very soft part. This goes for all difficulties. Note: After modding some of the difficulties, I've noticed there are a lot of parts where you should use a softer hitsound (mainly the parts like the very beginning section of the song before the drums come in and towards the end). Try something like this maybe? http://puu.sh/nUM3E.wav
I would turn down the HP and OD of HD to 7.5 because 8 seems a bit too harsh for a 2.8* diff.
i would keep this and just volume down those part, the beginning and ending. Also i would keep for hp on hd toohp isn't based on the star rate
Muu's NM01:13:942 (73942|3,74114|2) - Control J. You've used this same type of pattern multiple times, just in different lanes. oh yeesgot it. Also fyi, if u do CTRL + J it would reverse the HS too.
02:42:228 (162228|0,162228|1,162400|2,162571|1,162742|0,162914|2,162914|3,163085|1,163257|2,163428|3) - I would also suggest using a different pattern here because you've used this multiple times already, so it feels a little monotonous. sure changed some pattern before this one
03:06:914 to 03:09:657 - I think you should make this the same as the other two difficulties, because it's like a transitional part, and it's not too difficult for a novice player to do. sure ><b
03:36:228 (216228|0,216314|1,216400|2) - Control H. This is the exact same as 01:49:257 (109257|0,109342|1,109428|2), so I'd would just flip the entire measure horizontally. mah i'll keep this because it would be jacked w/ this LN 03:35:714 (215714|2) -
03:53:542 to end - Use a different hitsound for this entire section because the one you have now doesn't fit with the song at this part. I'd suggest a soft hitsound of sorts. i'll just volume it down because hitsound thingy is something creator decide~ if he want me to HSed, i'd like to give a keysounded for this kind of part:3Muu's HD00:55:257 and 00:58:000 and 01:00:742 and 01:02:114 and 01:03:485 and 01:04:171 - I think you could make these triples to accent the drums. As of now, there's no differentiation between the normal snare hits and the finish hits. i would keep this because i already planned before to make both snare and finish double
01:38:114 to 01:41:885 - Why did you stop with the LN's? The sound hasn't stopped, so I think you should add some simple LN's to represent that synth sound going in the background. o now mention it xD i longer this LN 01:37:771 (97771|1) - than adding some simple ln :3
01:49:085 to 01:50:114 - ^^Same as above.
02:22:342 - Right here I would suggest an SV, at .5 Here's the timing points if accepted:142342,-200,4,3,1,20,0,0(I hope I did that right). In case that doesn't work because I'm bad at this, it ends at 02:22:685i'm not kind of sv change lover xD
142685,-100,4,3,1,20,0,0Muu's MXSuper short mod for MX lol.03:39:228 (219228|0) - Remove? I can't tell what this note is supposed to represent. yay well noticed xD moved to 03:39:400 -
update
http://puu.sh/nVhin/e069ebfb0a.rarI wanna mod your normal diff but you said you were remapping it somewhere in the thread. Have you finished remapping it yet or?
Topic Starter
Updated
and Normal is not for mod
and Normal is not for mod
Topic Starter
Bro 6 difficulties easy kill me, yea trying to learn how spread works
0|1|2|3
I guess this is the second time the RRM team is visiting this song.
Sorry that I can't mod anything lower than 3.5*
MX
00:10:342 - It might be a good idea to add a note here to keep the sounds represented consistent (I'm assuming that the single clicks are supposed to represent the short synths.)
00:11:028 - Same goes for here.
00:47:028 - to 00:55:257 - I'm pretty sure that the synths are 1/2 here but idk if the single click notes are supposed to represent what I'm hearing.
01:33:228 (93228|1,93314|1) - This might be a bit hard to hit.
01:41:885 - to 01:44:628 - Somewhat undermapped imo.
01:46:685 - Drum here.
02:44:971 - to 03:26:114 - The single clicks here are pretty inconsistent. The sounds you skipped seem pretty random (if this happened because you couldn't spot the sounds, PM me. Maybe I can help finding them.)
03:31:428 (211428|0) - Moving this to 2 might make it easier to hit.
03:40:514 - Drum here.
03:41:885 - ^
03:44:628 - ^
03:52:857 - Drum here as well. I'm assuming that you skipped a drum note here to make this section less crowded. You can fix this by adding a note at 3 and moving 03:52:942 (232942|2) - to 0 , 03:53:028 (233028|3) - to 2, 03:53:114 (233114|0) - to 3 and 03:53:200 (233200|3) - to 0.
00:11:028 - Same goes for here.
00:47:028 - to 00:55:257 - I'm pretty sure that the synths are 1/2 here but idk if the single click notes are supposed to represent what I'm hearing.
01:33:228 (93228|1,93314|1) - This might be a bit hard to hit.
01:41:885 - to 01:44:628 - Somewhat undermapped imo.
01:46:685 - Drum here.
02:44:971 - to 03:26:114 - The single clicks here are pretty inconsistent. The sounds you skipped seem pretty random (if this happened because you couldn't spot the sounds, PM me. Maybe I can help finding them.)
03:31:428 (211428|0) - Moving this to 2 might make it easier to hit.
03:40:514 - Drum here.
03:41:885 - ^
03:44:628 - ^
03:52:857 - Drum here as well. I'm assuming that you skipped a drum note here to make this section less crowded. You can fix this by adding a note at 3 and moving 03:52:942 (232942|2) - to 0 , 03:53:028 (233028|3) - to 2, 03:53:114 (233114|0) - to 3 and 03:53:200 (233200|3) - to 0.
Feel free to reject any of my suggestions
Good luck on ranking.
thankies <3Minseo2000 wrote:
From the RRM Mania Modding Queue
0|1|2|3
I guess this is the second time the RRM team is visiting this song.
Sorry that I can't mod anything lower than 3.5*MX00:10:342 - It might be a good idea to add a note here to keep the sounds represented consistent (I'm assuming that the single clicks are supposed to represent the short synths.) yus but the ln itself already represented that short sync and vocal
00:11:028 - Same goes for here.
00:47:028 - to 00:55:257 - I'm pretty sure that the synths are 1/2 here but idk if the single click notes are supposed to represent what I'm hearing. single click on these part are for organ thingy sound and the ln for chord
01:33:228 (93228|1,93314|1) - This might be a bit hard to hit. that should insane diff work i guess since it just a jack :"
01:41:885 - to 01:44:628 - Somewhat undermapped imo. i think so but then i decided to follow the organ and drum sound. could u suggest me something?
01:46:685 - Drum here.
02:44:971 - to 03:26:114 - The single clicks here are pretty inconsistent. The sounds you skipped seem pretty random (if this happened because you couldn't spot the sounds, PM me. Maybe I can help finding them.)
03:31:428 (211428|0) - Moving this to 2 might make it easier to hit. oh yes <3 moved
03:40:514 - Drum here.
03:41:885 - ^
03:44:628 - ^
03:52:857 - Drum here as well. I'm assuming that you skipped a drum note here to make this section less crowded. You can fix this by adding a note at 3 and moving 03:52:942 (232942|2) - to 0 , 03:53:028 (233028|3) - to 2, 03:53:114 (233114|0) - to 3 and 03:53:200 (233200|3) - to 0.mah, i just followed snare drum and kick. i don't hear both on these section
Feel free to reject any of my suggestions
Good luck on ranking.
Topic Starter
cause I feel like it is not up to the quality I want (though it is fun to play), I think BNs will think that the difficulty spread inside the map is too consistent despite the intensity of the song, aesthetic and stuff., and I think a remap would be the right thing to do, though I should add a link for people who still wants it.
EDIT; updated post to include my original "onodera" diff if you want JUMPS 4 DAYZ
EDIT; updated post to include my original "onodera" diff if you want JUMPS 4 DAYZ
A little random mod here about Undecided aka the newer Onodera diff.
[Undecided]
Test Play
Since you removed the Old Onodera diff, how about renaming this one to Onodera and renaming the old now unsubmitted one?
00:15:485 (5) - Missing NC?
00:24:400 (5) - Is the whistle on the slider on purpose? If not, remove it.
00:34:685 (5) - Missing NC?
01:14:457 (7) - ^
01:18:571 (7) - ^
01:21:314 (6) - ^
01:35:371 (3) - Missing Clap?
01:39:828 (5) - Remove whistle, set sampleset to auto and additions to normal? Also add normal sampleset on reverse?
01:42:228 (2) - Missing Clap?
01:43:600 (3,4,5) - Impressive flow! I like it
01:46:000 (5) - Missing NC?
01:46:685 (1) - Remove NC?
01:47:371 (4) - Add NC?
01:46:342 (7) - Add Clap?
01:46:857 (2) - Add Normal Sampleset?
01:47:371 (4) - Add NC?
01:48:228 (7) - Add Normal Sampleset?
02:01:085 (7) - Add NC?
02:05:200 (6) - ^
02:10:685 (7) - ^
02:13:257 (6) - ^
02:24:742 (2) - Add clap?
03:31:600 (1) - Might be hard to read? Although in the test play, I did it just fine.
03:32:971 (5) - Add NC
03:35:200 (6) - Add Normal Sampleset?
03:35:714 (1) - ^
03:42:228 (3) - Add clap on sliderstart?
03:43:771 (4) - Set the sampleset to Auto, set additions to Normal, then add whistle?
03:43:942 (5) - Add NC?
03:44:114 (6) - Set the sampleset to Auto, set additions to Normal, then add whistle?
03:44:285 (7) - Set the sampleset to Auto, then Add Clap?
03:45:314 (1) - Add Normal Sampleset?
03:46:171 (5) - ^
03:46:857 (2) - Add clap on reverse?
04:10:000 (3) - Best heart 2k16!
This difficulty is pretty well made, has a good flow, and has interesting hitsounding. Is your mapping style inspired by Monstrata? Anyway, since the diff is good enough, my mod would kinda nazi'ish
[Undecided]
Test Play
Since you removed the Old Onodera diff, how about renaming this one to Onodera and renaming the old now unsubmitted one?
00:15:485 (5) - Missing NC?
00:24:400 (5) - Is the whistle on the slider on purpose? If not, remove it.
00:34:685 (5) - Missing NC?
01:14:457 (7) - ^
01:18:571 (7) - ^
01:21:314 (6) - ^
01:35:371 (3) - Missing Clap?
01:39:828 (5) - Remove whistle, set sampleset to auto and additions to normal? Also add normal sampleset on reverse?
01:42:228 (2) - Missing Clap?
01:43:600 (3,4,5) - Impressive flow! I like it
01:46:000 (5) - Missing NC?
01:46:685 (1) - Remove NC?
01:47:371 (4) - Add NC?
01:46:342 (7) - Add Clap?
01:46:857 (2) - Add Normal Sampleset?
01:47:371 (4) - Add NC?
01:48:228 (7) - Add Normal Sampleset?
02:01:085 (7) - Add NC?
02:05:200 (6) - ^
02:10:685 (7) - ^
02:13:257 (6) - ^
02:24:742 (2) - Add clap?
03:31:600 (1) - Might be hard to read? Although in the test play, I did it just fine.
03:32:971 (5) - Add NC
03:35:200 (6) - Add Normal Sampleset?
03:35:714 (1) - ^
03:42:228 (3) - Add clap on sliderstart?
03:43:771 (4) - Set the sampleset to Auto, set additions to Normal, then add whistle?
03:43:942 (5) - Add NC?
03:44:114 (6) - Set the sampleset to Auto, set additions to Normal, then add whistle?
03:44:285 (7) - Set the sampleset to Auto, then Add Clap?
03:45:314 (1) - Add Normal Sampleset?
03:46:171 (5) - ^
03:46:857 (2) - Add clap on reverse?
04:10:000 (3) - Best heart 2k16!
This difficulty is pretty well made, has a good flow, and has interesting hitsounding. Is your mapping style inspired by Monstrata? Anyway, since the diff is good enough, my mod would kinda nazi'ish
Appudato~~~~~~~~ (Update~~~)
Chitoge Bonus diff lol
Chitoge Bonus diff lol
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192,108,113544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,260,113716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,116,113887,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,36,114058,1,0,0:0:0:0:
4,176,114229,5,0,0:0:0:0:
36,204,114315,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,224,114401,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,228,114486,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,216,114572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,196,114658,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,184,114743,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,184,114829,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,200,114915,6,0,L|344:252,1,45
456,312,115086,2,0,L|448:256,1,45
324,132,115258,6,0,L|332:196,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,252,115429,2,0,L|440:196,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,56,115601,6,0,P|300:36|232:96,1,180,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Fixed everything I do use a hexagrid but I don't think the flow follow monstrata's mapsShizuku- wrote:
A little random mod here about Undecided aka the newer Onodera diff.
[Undecided]
Test Play
Since you removed the Old Onodera diff, how about renaming this one to Onodera and renaming the old now unsubmitted one?
00:15:485 (5) - Missing NC?
00:24:400 (5) - Is the whistle on the slider on purpose? If not, remove it.
00:34:685 (5) - Missing NC?
01:14:457 (7) - ^
01:18:571 (7) - ^
01:21:314 (6) - ^
01:35:371 (3) - Missing Clap?
01:39:828 (5) - Remove whistle, set sampleset to auto and additions to normal? Also add normal sampleset on reverse?
01:42:228 (2) - Missing Clap?
01:43:600 (3,4,5) - Impressive flow! I like it
01:46:000 (5) - Missing NC?
01:46:685 (1) - Remove NC?
01:47:371 (4) - Add NC?
01:46:342 (7) - Add Clap?
01:46:857 (2) - Add Normal Sampleset?
01:47:371 (4) - Add NC?
01:48:228 (7) - Add Normal Sampleset?
02:01:085 (7) - Add NC?
02:05:200 (6) - ^
02:10:685 (7) - ^
02:13:257 (6) - ^
02:24:742 (2) - Add clap?
03:31:600 (1) - Might be hard to read? Although in the test play, I did it just fine.
03:32:971 (5) - Add NC
03:35:200 (6) - Add Normal Sampleset?
03:35:714 (1) - ^
03:42:228 (3) - Add clap on sliderstart?
03:43:771 (4) - Set the sampleset to Auto, set additions to Normal, then add whistle?
03:43:942 (5) - Add NC?
03:44:114 (6) - Set the sampleset to Auto, set additions to Normal, then add whistle?
03:44:285 (7) - Set the sampleset to Auto, then Add Clap?
03:45:314 (1) - Add Normal Sampleset?
03:46:171 (5) - ^
03:46:857 (2) - Add clap on reverse?
04:10:000 (3) - Best heart 2k16!
This difficulty is pretty well made, has a good flow, and has interesting hitsounding. Is your mapping style inspired by Monstrata? Anyway, since the diff is good enough, my mod would kinda nazi'ish
Topic Starter
LOL too bad OD 6.9 isn't a thing kappa
@Inversal I updated it
@Inversal I updated it
Heya late mod from my Q
General
Chitogesided
Really fun map! so bit of nazi here
ayy also nice diff so nazi bit inc aswell
goodluck with ranking nice song!
sorry for the late mod
General
- I see you've only hitsounded the expert so far so you can always Copy hitsounds for the other diffs once the extra is fully hitsounded
- 00:10:342 (1,1,1,2) - => (1,2,3,1) in terms of NC
- 00:19:600 (1,2,3,4) - first the return than the circle here fits better because the first 3 notes are paired
- 00:40:171 (1,2) - bit of an overlap
- 00:41:542 (1,2) - each individual control + g would make this pattern flow really nice and you got an initianal jump aswell for emphasizing
- 00:55:600 (2) - what do you think about changing this ino 2 circles + 1/2 slider so got the hold vocal aswell, feels empty now
- 01:00:057 (2) - NC
- 01:19:257 (5,1) - what do you think about 1/1 slider and 2 circles here for catching the extended vocal
- 01:21:828 - assuming your mapping the vocals here so missing beat, if the drum 01:22:171 - missed this drum
- 01:37:428 (3) - few pixels offscreen place the slider end a biit more up left
- 02:11:371 (2) - NC
- 02:33:485 - missing drum beat
- 03:15:142 (3) - NC
- 03:37:771 (4) - Control + J was a bit too stiff to play
- 03:47:714 (4) - NC
- 00:16:514 (5) - control + J flow better from (4)
- 00:25:428 (2,3) - in terms of placement, change these around so (2) 120)° and (3) -120° will play alot better
- 02:16:000 (7) - NC sv change
- 02:17:542 (1,2) - green line at (1)
- 02:19:428 (6) - stacking bit off with (8) and (10)
- 02:24:057 (5,6) - control g
- 03:03:314 (2) - bit too hard to read imo with all the stacking, maybe place around 280/348
- 03:45:485 (2) - at least make 1 end visible here for readability
Chitogesided
Really fun map! so bit of nazi here
- 00:32:628 (3) - maybe 2 circles instead since the end has a drum here
- 00:51:485 (8,9) - could you place them at 144/44, reduce the jump a bit and gives a better angle from (7)
- 00:51:828 (10) - point the end to the left instead
- 01:11:370 (10) - add a finish
- 01:27:657 (4) - just an idea here, didn't like the flow in this part
- 01:55:085 (5) - place at 248/328 this part will flow a lot better
- 02:44:628 (11) - x400/y104 so you got more of the same angle as the stream
- 04:03:485 (2,3) - NC both because sv changes
ayy also nice diff so nazi bit inc aswell
- 00:19:599 (1,8) - stack
- 00:28:857 (5,6,1) - this being completly liniar coming from the angle of (4) makes this flow really bad imo, try to work around it maybe rotate (1) by 45°
- 00:40:000 (7,1) - increase the ds here this deseves a jump, maybe make a triangle with 00:39:485 (4,5) -
- 00:47:028 (1,2,3,4) - yeah dunno why you didn't do it like the other diffs, the vocals end on the red tick aswell so there's nothing to extend here
- 01:06:228 (1,5) - stack
- 01:33:314 (10) - this being blanketed with the stream would be nice here and make 01:32:971 (9) - curve this a bit more
- 01:56:285 (4,5) - small overlap
- 02:22:342 (6) - extend by 1/8
- 04:10:000 (3) - niiicee but NC, same as previous slider for sv change
goodluck with ranking nice song!
sorry for the late mod
i want cri TwT
Topic Starter
Sorry muu-chan but the quality is just too low not many mods can help me rank it, I would essentially be remapping everything. You're always welcome to take your GD and rank it
Kind sir, would you mind if I asked where did you find the mp3 for this Asterisk remix? (´･_･`)
I love this map. and cute songs. Please rank!
Topic Starter
Maybe in the future I'll come back and remap the lower diffs and rank it, I might just request 2 GDs. I might also need consider can I make something better now considering it's been 5 months, and my mapping style changed a lot in the past 5 monthMomoka wrote:
I love this map. and cute songs. Please rank!
this map just keep coming back to me lol
Topic Starter
Me tooBinguo wrote:
want do map
I have no time.
It's a good beatmap 
Topic Starter
I'm starting to think I can push this for loved
I wish this one revived :")
Topic Starter
I can but I'm not very inspired by the song at the momentMuu-chan wrote:
I wish this one revived :")
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