WolfyArmato- wrote:

HOI!!
jacks hell lol
00:33:899 - http://puu.sh/qqI8p/29fb365fa2.PNG I think do like this, will be suitable with this instrument
01:23:099 (83099|1,83270|2) - Ctrl+H ?
02:41:099 - 02:42:470 - 02:43:842 - do the triple notes here, because 02:45:213 do triple

sorry for short mods
I think overall is good now ~
GL on ranking!
This will be ranked in 1 week

1. Off set 1014 !

Checkmate

00:57:642 (57642|2,57685|3,57727|2,57770|3) - I think this is hard recommend change 00:57:727 (57727|2,57770|3,57813|1,57856|0,57899|2,57899|3) -

01:22:842 (82842|2,82885|3) - personal opinion ctrl j is more looks clean

01:22:927 (82927|0,83099|2) - i dont think this LNs doesnt need (maybe Ghost note?) so delete them and add note 01:22:927 - col1

01:32:099 (92099|0,92142|1) - consider about 01:32:142 (92142|1,92185|2,92270|1,92356|2,92442|1) - i think 01:32:099 (92099|0,92142|1) - ctrl j is good

01:36:385 (96385|0,96385|3) - i dont understand why is here 2note

01:39:042 (99042|3,99127|2,99213|3,99299|2,99385|3,99470|2,99556|3,99642|2) - worry about this
so my suggestion: http://puu.sh/qtMhj/bb85a99d5c.jpg

01:42:299 (102299|2,102385|2,102470|3,102556|3,102642|2,102727|2,102813|3,102899|3) - so many jack to right hand for balance need to move
http://puu.sh/qtMln/d68c32aec5.jpg this is more good i guess

01:45:556 (105556|2,105556|1,105556|3,105642|2,105727|3,105813|3) - same need to move
my suggestion: 01:45:813 (105813|3) - move 1 01:45:899 (105899|0) - move 4

02:37:327 (157327|0,157370|1,157413|3,157456|2,157499|0,157542|1,157585|3,157627|2) - this part i think more need harder. i think making a difference to here unlike 00:50:527 (50527|2,50570|3,50613|1,50656|0,50699|2,50742|3,50785|1,50827|0) - will be better
http://puu.sh/qtMzo/c3bb855a9a.jpg how about this? owo

02:48:299 (168299|0,168342|1,168385|2,168427|3,168470|0,168513|1,168556|2,168599|3) - same like above
http://puu.sh/qtMEP/61ea07c67d.jpg my suggestion

02:59:270 (179270|3,179313|2,179356|1,179399|0,179442|3,179485|2,179527|1,179570|0) - same
http://puu.sh/qtN1c/8dcc3c51c3.jpg suggestion!

03:30:042 (210042|3) - ghost?

03:36:899 (216899|2) - ghost?

03:42:385 (222385|2) - same

04:01:327 (241327|3,241327|0,241327|2,241413|1,241499|0,241499|3,241585|2) - can 8snap here like 03:50:356 (230356|0,230356|3,230399|2,230442|1,230485|0,230527|3,230570|2,230613|1,230656|0) -

04:07:842 - ~ 04:17:442 - use 8snap here so many same pattern in kiai

Okorin wrote:

may want to source うみねこのなく頃に, as the thing it closely resembles is BGM from EP1 of Umineko. Tagging Chiru is kinda uh

eyes wrote:

:roll:

00:04:173 (4173|1) - starts in 00:03:916
00:05:373 (5373|3) - ^> 00:05:330
00:06:702 (6702|0) - ^> 00:06:616
00:08:759 - add ln
00:09:616 (9616|2) - starts 00:09:444
00:12:273 (12273|3) - ^> 00:12:144
00:15:102 (15102|0) - ^> 00:14:930
00:16:387 (16387|1) - ^> 00:16:302
00:17:759 (17759|2) - ^> 00:17:630
00:19:773 (19773|0) - ^> 00:19:687
00:20:544 (20544|3) - ^> 00:20:416
00:22:002 (22002|0) - ^> 00:22:044
00:23:030 (23030|2,23373|1) - wtf? Поставь здесь ноту> 00:22:944. И вместо >00:23:030 (23030|2,23373|1) поставь 1 лн.
00:26:073 (26073|2) - starts > 00:25:902
00:27:316 (27316|0) - ^> 00:27:273
00:28:687 (28687|2) - ^> 00:28:602
00:30:702 - add ln, ends here > 00:31:259
00:31:473 (31473|3) - starts >00:31:430
00:32:716 (32716|1) - ^> 00:32:630

01:45:059 (105059|0,105059|1) - -1 note
02:06:144 (126144|1,126144|3,126144|0,126230|2,126316|0,126402|1,126402|2,126487|0,126487|3,126573|1,126573|2,126659|0,126659|2,126659|3,126744|1,126830|3,126830|0,126916|1,126916|2,127002|3,127002|0,127087|1,127087|2) - не думаешь, что это слишком сложно для таких слабых звуков
02:07:173 (127173|0,128544|3,129916|1,132659|0) - и т.д. сделай на остальных колонках бурсты
02:10:944 - бурст

• [Checkmate]

1. 00:05:287 - use 25% you can here the vocal start at here
2. 00:08:759 (8759|3) - same as this one
3. 00:53:630 - hmm... idk if its a good idea to change the 1/8 stair here, it sounds the same as other 1/8 sound. if you want to make a little different, maybe you should change the pattern from 00:53:459 - , cause here it change to the lower pitch imo
4. 01:06:402 - M.A.M.A pattern lol
5. 02:07:259 - how about delete this one, make a little "stop" feeling, and its easier to play the 1/8
6. 02:37:344 (157344|3,157430|3,157516|3) - this just so hard, 1/4 jack in one hand and mix with 1/8 lol, use something like this pls 02:59:287 -
   
   i think thats all from me, sry for short mod, i think you can reduce some double and use it only for the snare.
   i like the SB!
   good luck
   

SanadaYukimura wrote:

Hey my dear dear Shana
1 2 3 4

• [Checkmate]

1. 00:05:287 - use 25% you can here the vocal start at here
2. 00:08:759 (8759|3) - same as this one
3. 00:53:630 - hmm... idk if its a good idea to change the 1/8 stair here, it sounds the same as other 1/8 sound. if you want to make a little different, maybe you should change the pattern from 00:53:459 - , cause here it change to the lower pitch imo
4. 01:06:402 - M.A.M.A pattern lol
5. 02:07:259 - how about delete this one, make a little "stop" feeling, and its easier to play the 1/8
6. 02:37:344 (157344|3,157430|3,157516|3) - this just so hard, 1/4 jack in one hand and mix with 1/8 lol, use something like this pls 02:59:287 -
   
   i think thats all from me, sry for short mod, i think you can reduce some double and use it only for the snare.
   i like the SB!
   good luck

semyon422 wrote:

Mod

01:01:687 - удали одну ноту, там нет того ударного звука (как вот здесь например 01:03:059)
01:04:430 - ^
01:07:173 - ^
01:09:916 - ^
01:12:659 - ^
01:15:402 - ^

01:53:459 - удали ноту, звук сильно тихи для дабла (по сравнению с остальными)

01:58:602 - вот здесь добавить мелких ЛНов, как в начале парта с ЛНами, либо 2 ЛНа, как замапано на 02:01:344
02:04:259 - вот здесь, думаю, нехватает ЛНа

02:30:059 (150059|2) - не слышу, удали
02:32:802 (152802|0) - ^
02:35:544 (155544|2) - ^
02:55:687 - может здесь убрать мелкие ЛНЫ или заменить на обычные ноты? звук еле слышен

03:02:630 (182630|2) - rm
03:03:316 (183316|1) - ^
03:04:002 (184002|1) - ^
03:05:373 (185373|3) - ^
03:06:059 (186059|0) - ^
03:06:744 (186744|3) - ^
03:08:116 (188116|0) - ^
03:08:802 (188802|3) - ^
03:09:487 (189487|0) - ^
03:10:859 (190859|3) - ^
03:11:544 (191544|3) - ^
03:12:230 (192230|3) - ^
03:13:602 (193602|1) - ^
03:14:287 (194287|2) - ^
03:14:973 (194973|0) - ^
03:16:344 (196344|3) - ^
03:17:030 (197030|0) - ^
03:17:716 (197716|2) - ^
03:19:087 (199087|2) - ^
03:19:773 (199773|1) - ^
03:20:459 (200459|2) - ^
03:21:830 (201830|2) - ^
03:22:859 - add
03:24:573 (204573|3) - rm
03:38:973 (218973|0) - ^
03:44:459 (224459|1) - ^

04:55:344 (295344|1,295687|3,296716|1,298087|2,299459|3,299802|0,300830|0,301173|2,302202|1,302544|2,302887|0,305287|2,306316|2,306659|2,307687|3,308030|2) - вот эти вообще не слышу, может они и есть, но слишком незаметные

Protastic101 wrote:

Team Grimoire o.o

column 1|2|3|4

I suck at chess

00:05:287 (5287|3,6616|0,8716|3) - Control H this for pitch relevancy since 00:05:287 (5287|3) is lower in pitch than 00:06:616 (6616|0)
00:22:944 - maybe wanna add a note here for the light "kong" drum hit that echoes for a bit?
00:28:602 (28602|2,30702|0) - Consider ending these notes at 00:31:173 since the vocal takes a pause for breath here.
00:46:944 (46944|2) - Why not start this LN at 00:46:259 since the cymbal begins there? 00:46:944 is during the cymbal so it would come a little unexpectedly.
00:59:287 (59287|0,59287|2,59287|1) - Since this is a kick, wouldn't it make more sense to be mapped as a double instead of a triple? You've mapped the other kicks in this section as doubles like at 00:56:544 (56544|1,56544|0) . Idk, mapper's choice I guess.
01:01:344 - No offense, but I think that this section is a little overmapped, mainly due to the doubles on every 1/2 beat like 01:01:516 (61516|2,61516|0) - 01:01:859 (61859|1,61859|3) - 01:02:202 (62202|3,62202|0) - that are mapped to the same instruments like 01:02:287 (62287|1,62459|1,62630|2) meaning they aren't any louder or heavier than the notes on the 1/4, so why are they doubles? Ok, I can hear a bass synth on every 1/2 beat, but it's honestly too quiet for a section like this. It'd be better to focus on kicks/snares imo.
01:13:002 (73002|3,73173|3,73344|3,73516|3,73687|3) - This is a pretty large anchor. Try doing this to reduce it to just a few notes long:

1. 01:13:087 (73087|2) - 2
2. 01:13:173 (73173|3) - 3
3. 01:12:916 (72916|1) - 1
4. 01:12:830 (72830|0) - 2
5. 01:13:002 (73002|0) - 3

01:34:087 (94087|2,94173|2) - I know that this jack is supposed to lead into the next section, but I think it'd be easier to read and predict if you started the jacks at the beginning of the new section at 01:34:259 rather than 1/2 beat before. Maybe move 01:34:087 (94087|2) to 1
01:44:116 (104116|3,104287|3,104802|1) - I think it'd be better to only map the drums in this measure to accent the sudden loss in intensity of the music.
02:06:230 (126230|1,126744|1) - ^^
02:06:830 - Also, shouldn't there be another note here for the sound like at 02:06:916 (126916|0,126916|1) ?
02:28:773 (148773|0,148773|3,148859|1,148859|0,148944|0,148944|3,149030|2,149030|3) - I think that this is really excessive since you already used a 1/4 jump burst for this, but with 1/8 notes, it becomes insanely fast and difficult to hit, while the sound is the same intensity. A simple 1/8 burst like the ones you did at 00:51:916 would be better imo.
04:01:859 (241859|3,241859|2,241944|1) - Control J these notes since the kick comes on 04:01:944 which is 1/4.
05:07:859 (307859|1,308030|2) - Control H? It's to avoid a 1/2 jack with 05:08:030 (308030|2,308202|2)
05:12:659 (312659|2,313002|3) - These notes are really quiet due to the fade out of the music; while they're not ghost notes, I'd still suggest removing them just to give that final fade out feel to the end of the chart and song.

I apologize about the short mod, and I'm sorry if I came off as rude or whatever. Those are only suggestions, so apply whatever works best for you.

SanadaYukimura wrote:

Hey my dear dear Shana

ajeemaniz wrote:

SanadaYukimura wrote:

Hey my dear dear Shana

small mods, actually this kind of music is hard to mod but

i use chrome, screw firefox lmao

00:30:744 (30744|0) - sounds earlier, maybe 1/12 at 00:30:687 - fixed
00:54:402 (54402|2,54444|3) - ctrl+j for variation fixed
01:58:602 (118602|1,118773|0) - 02:01:344 (121344|3,121516|2) - 02:03:916 (123916|1,124087|3,124259|0) - use 1/4 LN here fixed
03:23:973 - until 03:44:373
from this phase why don't you change the LN into note in 03:23:973 (203973|3,204144|1,204487|3,204659|0,204830|3) - and emphasize these 03:24:316 (204316|3,204402|2,204487|1,205002|0,205087|1,205173|2,205687|1,205773|2,205859|3,206030|0,206202|1,206373|1,206459|0,206544|1,206630|2,206716|3) - synthesizer & the epic drum bass, since you already did this in previous phase

02:08:030 (128030|0,128202|3,128373|0) - 02:09:402 (129402|3,129573|0,129744|1) - 02:10:773 (130773|1,130944|2) - 02:13:516 (133516|2,133687|2,133859|1) - i'd use single stream and remove this, so the structure will more emphasizing the growl
02:18:916 (138916|1,139087|2,139259|3) - and you can remove this too, to focus at 02:18:830 (138830|3,139002|0,139173|1,139344|0) -
02:30:059 (150059|2) - 02:32:802 (152802|0) - etc etc not sure if ghost.. remove? fixed
02:38:887 (158887|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5993964 fixed

02:42:659 (162659|3,162744|2) - o.. just noticed this might be 1/8.. there's many similar part too in this phase
04:03:916 (243916|3) - to 1? actually keeping is fine too =A=)a fixed

yep, that's it.. hope it helps :3a
good luck!

Alsty- wrote:

hi shana :u
i hope this is will be usefull :c if u think my suggestion breaking your style ignore it ! :u
1|2|3|4

mod

01:01:002 (61002|2,61002|3) - i think triple more fits here? no, after 1/8 bursts this it will be difficult
01:27:059 - http://puu.sh/r3Wwm/4a588c94a6.jpg that small sound bother me , add on it ? :c or make it the reverse of this section 01:32:544 - good catch
01:32:630 - add single here :/ added
02:06:744 - add here , i hear some sound there. added
02:09:230 - add single , make it same with 02:14:716 - 02:09:230 - here double for balance
02:09:830 (129830|3,129830|2) - maybe reduce this to single , its a bit awkward for me :/ it's alright
02:20:887 (140887|2,140973|1) - ctrl +h no
02:34:430 - http://puu.sh/r3X0q/0e61fe49dc.jpg more fits with pitch ? , tbh im a bit boring with jumptrill :u yes, changed
02:35:716 - add notes here and http://puu.sh/r3X7t/5a338d1c0b.jpg yes, changed
02:38:030 - make it same with 02:34:430 - fixed
02:40:602 - ohh i love this kind of LNs <3 good <3
03:25:173 - LN ? its similliar with 03:24:487 - and 03:25:859 - :/ or it supposed to be like 03:25:173 - and 03:27:916 - @@ ooops, i missed this point, fixed
04:01:859 (241859|1,241944|2) - ctrl + j ? yes, fixedб there was a big load on hands
04:17:802 - triple no, here same sound 04:18:316 -
i want more , but i cant find anything after 2x checking @@

i love that drrrrttttttt 1/8 sound :u 1star for that :u
GL shana , cya :u

MrDurian wrote:

Hi shana =w=

some irc modding

2016-09-09 22:18 MrDurian: shana, could we do IRC mod?
2016-09-09 22:18 MrDurian: if u have time now
2016-09-09 22:18 [Shana Lesus]: what map ?
2016-09-09 22:19 MrDurian: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1045859 Team Grimoire - Rougoku STRIP (Grimoire crossbreed rmx) [Checkmate]]
2016-09-09 22:19 [Shana Lesus]: ф
2016-09-09 22:19 [Shana Lesus]: a
2016-09-09 22:19 [Shana Lesus]: lol
2016-09-09 22:19 [Shana Lesus]: yes, i have time
2016-09-09 22:19 MrDurian: kay
2016-09-09 22:19 MrDurian: 01:01:687 (61687|2) - missing note?
2016-09-09 22:20 [Shana Lesus]: there is no bass
2016-09-09 22:20 [Shana Lesus]: as 01:01:687 (61687|2) -
2016-09-09 22:20 [Shana Lesus]: 01:02:373 -
2016-09-09 22:20 [Shana Lesus]: *
2016-09-09 22:20 MrDurian: okay
2016-09-09 22:21 MrDurian: 01:06:487 (66487|2) - maybe move to 3, easier to play
2016-09-09 22:21 [Shana Lesus]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6053522 owo
2016-09-09 22:21 [Shana Lesus]: this note in 3 column
2016-09-09 22:21 MrDurian: fuck
2016-09-09 22:21 [Shana Lesus]: xD
2016-09-09 22:22 MrDurian: i meant to 2 XDD
2016-09-09 22:22 [Shana Lesus]: aaaa
2016-09-09 22:22 [Shana Lesus]: 01:06:487 (66487|2,66573|1,66659|2) - i do ctrl + h
2016-09-09 22:22 [Shana Lesus]: better i think
2016-09-09 22:22 MrDurian: 01:17:373 (77373|3,77373|2,77459|0,77459|3,77459|1) - here u have like i told
2016-09-09 22:22 MrDurian: before
2016-09-09 22:22 MrDurian: can be too
2016-09-09 22:23 [Shana Lesus]: oh yes, fixed
2016-09-09 22:26 MrDurian: 01:34:602 (94602|0,94687|0) - what are these jacks for, like I don't hear thing u may hear
2016-09-09 22:26 MrDurian: nvm
2016-09-09 22:26 MrDurian: 01:36:487 (96487|3,96573|3) - but here pitch is getting higher
2016-09-09 22:27 [Shana Lesus]: i think these jacks fine owo
2016-09-09 22:27 MrDurian: they are fine
2016-09-09 22:27 MrDurian: but pitch
2016-09-09 22:31 MrDurian: 01:44:802 (104802|1) - maybe this to 1 and 01:44:887 (104887|0) - to 2 because lower pitch in01:44:802 (104802|1) -
2016-09-09 22:31 [Shana Lesus]: yes !
2016-09-09 22:31 [Shana Lesus]: good catch
2016-09-09 22:31 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
2016-09-09 22:32 MrDurian: 01:47:802 (107802|3) - this to 3
2016-09-09 22:32 MrDurian: pitch
2016-09-09 22:32 [Shana Lesus]: ok
2016-09-09 22:32 [Shana Lesus]: rip jack :/
2016-09-09 22:32 [Shana Lesus]: xD
2016-09-09 22:32 MrDurian: rip ;/
2016-09-09 22:34 MrDurian: 01:52:773 (112773|0,113030|2) - ctrl+g and ctrl+h for pitch?
2016-09-09 22:35 [Shana Lesus]: 01:53:030 (113030|3,113116|3,113287|3,113373|3) - this will be hard yo play
2016-09-09 22:35 [Shana Lesus]: maybe
2016-09-09 22:36 MrDurian: oke
2016-09-09 22:36 MrDurian: 01:55:859 (115859|2,115944|0) - one sound
2016-09-09 22:37 [Shana Lesus]: fixed !
2016-09-09 22:37 MrDurian: 01:58:602 (118602|0) - I think these should be 2 1/2 lns
2016-09-09 22:38 MrDurian: but like there's 1/4 sounds too
2016-09-09 22:38 MrDurian: so dunno
2016-09-09 22:38 MrDurian: from red tick 1/4 sounds to white tick
2016-09-09 22:38 [Shana Lesus]: too fixed
2016-09-09 22:38 [Shana Lesus]: i miss this moment x_x
2016-09-09 22:39 MrDurian: 01:56:373 (116373|2) - no sound?
2016-09-09 22:39 [Shana Lesus]: aaa ? there are sound
2016-09-09 22:40 MrDurian: 01:57:059 (117059|1,117230|1) - here is sound too
2016-09-09 22:40 MrDurian: so add
2016-09-09 22:41 [Shana Lesus]: aaa
2016-09-09 22:41 [Shana Lesus]: yes
2016-09-09 22:44 MrDurian: 02:07:173 - from here maybe add notes on sounds like 02:08:459 (128459|2) -
2016-09-09 22:45 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
2016-09-09 22:46 MrDurian: 02:40:602 (160602|1,160602|0,160687|3,160773|1,160773|2,160859|0,160944|3,160944|1,161030|2) - I love them
2016-09-09 22:46 MrDurian: lns for life
2016-09-09 22:47 MrDurian: 02:41:030 (161030|2) - there's no sound for ln
2016-09-09 22:47 MrDurian: these should be 1/2 lenght
2016-09-09 22:47 MrDurian: or 1/4
2016-09-09 22:47 MrDurian: no, 1/4
2016-09-09 22:48 MrDurian: 02:51:573 (171573|1,171573|3,171659|2,171744|1,171744|0,171830|3,171916|2,171916|0) - maybe reduce them to 1
2016-09-09 22:48 [Shana Lesus]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6053758 better ?
2016-09-09 22:48 MrDurian: ugh
2016-09-09 22:48 MrDurian: not these
2016-09-09 22:48 MrDurian: 02:52:944 (172944|2,172944|3,173030|0,173116|1,173116|2,173202|3,173287|1,173287|0) -
2016-09-09 22:48 MrDurian: these
2016-09-09 22:49 MrDurian: the sound is soo faint
2016-09-09 22:49 MrDurian: hey, 02:54:744 (174744|1) - here u have no ln
2016-09-09 22:50 MrDurian:
2016-09-09 22:50 [Shana Lesus]: aaa
2016-09-09 22:50 [Shana Lesus]: fail
2016-09-09 22:50 [Shana Lesus]: all fixed
2016-09-09 22:52 MrDurian: 02:53:802 (173802|3) - are these to that "aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa"
2016-09-09 22:52 MrDurian: ?
2016-09-09 22:52 MrDurian: in the background
2016-09-09 22:53 [Shana Lesus]: yes
2016-09-09 22:54 [Shana Lesus]: 02:56:202 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6053803 fixed
2016-09-09 22:55 MrDurian: 02:55:173- here sound changes
2016-09-09 22:55 MrDurian: kinda
2016-09-09 22:56 MrDurian: after end of kiai (03:02) maybe leave only 1 note for every sound?
2016-09-09 22:56 MrDurian: 03:23 are additional sounds
2016-09-09 22:56 MrDurian: so they can be these second notes
2016-09-09 22:57 MrDurian: and leave only 1 note on red ticks
2016-09-09 22:59 [Shana Lesus]: 03:04:430 (184430|2,184430|0,184602|2,184602|3) - you mean this ?
2016-09-09 22:59 MrDurian: yeah
2016-09-09 22:59 MrDurian: its calm part
2016-09-09 23:00 MrDurian: 03:02:373 (182373|2) - and remember about lns in here
2016-09-09 23:01 MrDurian: or nvm
2016-09-09 23:01 MrDurian: and in second suggestion add notes at 03:23:973 (203973|1,204316|3,204659|1) -
2016-09-09 23:02 MrDurian: 03:26:544 (206544|3) - delete from here
2016-09-09 23:02 MrDurian: red ticks
2016-09-09 23:03 MrDurian: 04:16:216 (256216|1) - ghost
2016-09-09 23:03 [Shana Lesus]: aaaaa
2016-09-09 23:03 [Shana Lesus]: all fixed
2016-09-09 23:05 MrDurian: 04:03:916 (243916|0) - maybe to 2?
2016-09-09 23:06 MrDurian: no "anchor" on 1
2016-09-09 23:06 [Shana Lesus]: fixed !!
2016-09-09 23:06 [Shana Lesus]: anchor no need
2016-09-09 23:06 [Shana Lesus]: it's hell
2016-09-09 23:07 MrDurian: 03:48:830 (228830|2,228830|1) - delete one note maybe
2016-09-09 23:07 [Shana Lesus]: deleted
2016-09-09 23:08 MrDurian: check last kiai more
2016-09-09 23:08 MrDurian: it's a bit inconsistent
2016-09-09 23:08 MrDurian: You add notes for kicks and these "voice" things yeah?
2016-09-09 23:08 MrDurian: 03:56:030 (236030|2,236202|1,236373|2,236544|0,236716|3) - sounds in here
2016-09-09 23:10 [Shana Lesus]: oki
2016-09-09 23:10 MrDurian: 04:32:887 (272887|3) - deled tis
2016-09-09 23:10 MrDurian: delet
2016-09-09 23:10 MrDurian: *
2016-09-09 23:11 [Shana Lesus]: deleted
2016-09-09 23:11 MrDurian: 04:38:373 (278373|2) - and this
2016-09-09 23:12 MrDurian: 04:40:773 (280773|2,280944|3,281116|1) - make it 2 3 4 and 04:41:287 (281287|2) - 2 for pitch?
2016-09-09 23:13 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
2016-09-09 23:13 MrDurian: 05:04:430- maybe make volume a bit lower from there
2016-09-09 23:14 MrDurian: 05:12:316 (312316|0) - delete this?
2016-09-09 23:14 [Shana Lesus]: yes
2016-09-09 23:14 [Shana Lesus]: deleted
2016-09-09 23:14 [Shana Lesus]: thank you for mod
2016-09-09 23:14 MrDurian: or make it note
2016-09-09 23:14 MrDurian: but not ln
2016-09-09 23:15 [Shana Lesus]: okok
2016-09-09 23:15 MrDurian: a bit late mod, but youre welcome :3
2016-09-09 23:15 MrDurian: (how to save irc)
2016-09-09 23:15 [Shana Lesus]: very useful
2016-09-09 23:15 [Shana Lesus]: in fact
2016-09-09 23:15 MrDurian: thanks ;33

HXJ_Crafter wrote:

Hi. ( ) I'm noob in modding
If you don't like pls ignore sry
...From my m4m request in shana's modding queue?
4k Column | 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 |
(Important & unimportant)

4K Checkmate

00:06:616 (6616|3) - start at 00:06:702 (the former LN end at it too)
00:08:716 (8716|0) - 00:08:759
00:12:144 (12144|3) - 00:12:230
00:22:044 (22044|0) - 00:21:959
00:23:416 (23416|1) - 00:23:373
00:28:602 (28602|2) - 00:28:687
01:01:344 (61344|0,61344|2,61344|3) - delete one?
01:04:430 - Add one https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6068258??
01:07:173 - ^ but not important
01:09:916 - ^ bni
01:12:316 - delete one, 01:12:659 - add one? I think the second is harder than the first one.
01:55:859 - Add one note, I think
02:08:544 and 02:09:230 -, Which sound is harder?
02:34:430 - 02:38:030 - well in my opinion, this is not a strong sound but difficult ;w; Idk if it's good for this
02:42:830 (162830|0) - Delete one to make the same
02:48:316 - hmmm.. seems bad
03:02:030 - one note and one LN here is better
03:15:744 (195744|2,195744|3) - why 2 LN here?
03:48:573 - add one here and avoid jack? 03:54:059 03:59:544 04:05:030 -
05:02:716 (302716|2,304430|1) - Start/End at 05:04:087 and delete one note.

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

last

01:46:773 (106773|2,106859|3,106944|2) - switch column of them, balance more balance imo
01:56:202 - if long notes are for instruments
01:56:373 (116373|3) - 01:57:059 (117059|2) - 01:59:116 (119116|0) - 02:04:602 (124602|1) - 02:05:287 (125287|0) - should be remove, not matching

02:06:573 (126573|2,126659|2) - while this jack with double is not good to handle anyways so i would recomended to remove this
03:00:659 (180659|0) - missed a hold for snare sound like 03:01:173 (181173|3,181687|0) -

03:02:030 - well, not force but just opinion, since this map is approval, so i would recomended a part of break because non stop 5 minutes is kind of pain
and this part should be the easiest part of the map, single 1/4 stream would be enough (or short long note 1/2)
keep going like that till 03:23:973 -

03:23:973 - to 03:44:544 - add 2 notes for bass and continue that 1/4
(but i would recomended to remove long notes)

irc

2016-09-16 19:10 Kuo Kyoka: hi shana
2016-09-16 19:11 Kuo Kyoka: i have something to say about Grimoire
2016-09-16 19:12 [Shana Lesus]: Hi Kuo, what ?
2016-09-16 19:13 Kuo Kyoka: i saw you also remove storyboard, that's fine but i came for diffspread
2016-09-16 19:13 Kuo Kyoka: im not too sure
2016-09-16 19:13 Kuo Kyoka: i mean, if you add diffs like easy,normal,hard etc. so even it's aboved 5 minutes it remain as ranked maps
2016-09-16 19:14 [Shana Lesus]: ok
2016-09-16 19:14 [Shana Lesus]: i delete ez and hd diff
2016-09-16 19:14 Kuo Kyoka: oh no
2016-09-16 19:14 Kuo Kyoka: hmm you can add a extra diff (normal)
2016-09-16 19:16 [Shana Lesus]: gap will not matter ?
2016-09-16 19:16 Kuo Kyoka:  it matter im afraid
2016-09-16 19:16 [Shana Lesus]: or
2016-09-16 19:16 [Shana Lesus]: ok Kuo
2016-09-16 19:16 [Shana Lesus]: never mind
2016-09-16 19:16 [Shana Lesus]: i remove now ez and hd diff
2016-09-16 19:16 Kuo Kyoka: well it's depend on you
2016-09-16 19:20 [Shana Lesus]: sorry for the removal of the SB , I do not know how to solve a problem with the size of the picture
2016-09-16 19:20 Kuo Kyoka: hmm i can mod checkmate now if you had time
2016-09-16 19:20 Kuo Kyoka: and that's okay, no need to sorry about that
2016-09-16 19:21 [Shana Lesus]: i have time now
2016-09-16 19:21 Kuo Kyoka: but hmm, that intro 1/8 drill, recall me some maps just get dq because of that
2016-09-16 19:21 Kuo Kyoka: idk it's fine or not
2016-09-16 19:21 Kuo Kyoka: 00:50:544 - 
2016-09-16 19:23 [Shana Lesus]: hmm, i ask many people for testplay and no one complained on 1/8
2016-09-16 19:25 Kuo Kyoka: maybe same case with this https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5468169
2016-09-16 19:25 Kuo Kyoka: im totally fine with it
2016-09-16 19:25 Kuo Kyoka: but just QAT
2016-09-16 19:28 [Shana Lesus]: but then the map will not have be diversity
2016-09-16 19:28 [Shana Lesus]: oh my god
2016-09-16 19:28 Kuo Kyoka: im trying to check intro long notes
2016-09-16 19:29 Kuo Kyoka: 00:05:287 (5287|0) - on 00:05:330 - i guess so
2016-09-16 19:29 Kuo Kyoka: 1/8
2016-09-16 19:29 Kuo Kyoka: 00:06:702 (6702|3) - move to 00:06:659 - 
2016-09-16 19:29 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
2016-09-16 19:30 Kuo Kyoka: 00:08:759 (8759|0) - move to 00:08:802 - 
2016-09-16 19:30 [Shana Lesus]: 00:05:330 (5330|0) - end here 00:06:659 -  ?
2016-09-16 19:30 Kuo Kyoka: hmm
2016-09-16 19:30 Kuo Kyoka: better fix begins of each long notes first
2016-09-16 19:31 Kuo Kyoka: then you can fix ends of them alter
2016-09-16 19:31 Kuo Kyoka: later*
2016-09-16 19:31 [Shana Lesus]: aaa
2016-09-16 19:31 [Shana Lesus]: 00:06:573 - end here
2016-09-16 19:31 Kuo Kyoka: okay im confusing
2016-09-16 19:31 Kuo Kyoka: where i should start again lol
2016-09-16 19:31 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
2016-09-16 19:32 [Shana Lesus]: wait
2016-09-16 19:32 [Shana Lesus]: i upd diff
2016-09-16 19:33 [Shana Lesus]: updated
2016-09-16 19:35 Kuo Kyoka: can i fix long note intro and give the diff to you?
2016-09-16 19:35 [Shana Lesus]: sure
2016-09-16 19:36 [Shana Lesus]: I trust you my Kuo
2016-09-16 19:36 Kuo Kyoka: thank you my shana <3
2016-09-16 19:36 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION hugs 
2016-09-16 19:37 [Shana Lesus]: ACTION hugs Kuo >w<
2016-09-16 19:54 Kuo Kyoka: i think better now http://puu.sh/rdaao/24bda75675.osu
2016-09-16 19:56 [Shana Lesus]: sure, thank you very much
2016-09-16 19:57 [Shana Lesus]: updated
2016-09-16 19:59 Kuo Kyoka: 01:00:659 - how about a little break here? http://puu.sh/rdamU/c9cc1026eb.jpg
2016-09-16 20:00 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
2016-09-16 20:00 [Shana Lesus]: good idead
2016-09-16 20:02 Kuo Kyoka: 01:01:687 - lost a note on here i guess
2016-09-16 20:02 Kuo Kyoka: for snare
2016-09-16 20:02 Kuo Kyoka: + add whistle if you argee
2016-09-16 20:03 Kuo Kyoka: 01:04:430 - same
2016-09-16 20:03 Kuo Kyoka: 01:07:173 - 
2016-09-16 20:03 [Shana Lesus]: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6105714
2016-09-16 20:04 Kuo Kyoka: no i mean something like this http://puu.sh/rdaym/a09c16d9a2.jpg
2016-09-16 20:05 [Shana Lesus]: a
2016-09-16 20:05 [Shana Lesus]: ok
2016-09-16 20:06 [Shana Lesus]: 01:01:687 - here and here 01:02:373 - different sounds
2016-09-16 20:07 Kuo Kyoka: i think it's same snare
2016-09-16 20:07 Kuo Kyoka: but your choice
2016-09-16 20:07 [Shana Lesus]: 01:02:373 - here kick too
2016-09-16 20:07 [Shana Lesus]: 01:01:687 - here snare only owo
2016-09-16 20:08 [Shana Lesus]: oki
2016-09-16 20:08 Kuo Kyoka: hmm
2016-09-16 20:08 Kuo Kyoka: i guess you're right
2016-09-16 20:08 Kuo Kyoka: my bad 
2016-09-16 20:08 [Shana Lesus]: no no >w<
2016-09-16 20:08 Kuo Kyoka: hhh
2016-09-16 20:10 Kuo Kyoka: 01:36:402 (96402|0,96573|3) - 
2016-09-16 20:10 Kuo Kyoka: hmm better change them
2016-09-16 20:10 Kuo Kyoka: not kind of jack sound i guess so
2016-09-16 20:12 [Shana Lesus]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6105778 fixed
2016-09-16 20:14 Kuo Kyoka: hmm
2016-09-16 20:14 Kuo Kyoka: kinda strange
2016-09-16 20:14 Kuo Kyoka: what kind of sound you follow for jack
2016-09-16 20:15 [Shana Lesus]: 01:34:602 (94602|0,94687|0,94773|3,94859|3) - this sound
2016-09-16 20:16 [Shana Lesus]: I hear the sound a repeating here
2016-09-16 20:16 Kuo Kyoka: hmm
2016-09-16 20:16 Kuo Kyoka: but it feel like different pitch
2016-09-16 20:16 Kuo Kyoka: 01:35:373 (95373|3,95544|0) - them too, different
2016-09-16 20:18 Kuo Kyoka: better remove these jacks
2016-09-16 20:18 Kuo Kyoka: i think all different pitch
2016-09-16 20:19 [Shana Lesus]: I think jacks is good emphasize this moment, if i change on the pitch, the card will be boring and monotonous
2016-09-16 20:19 [Shana Lesus]: as c18
2016-09-16 20:19 [Shana Lesus]: lol
2016-09-16 20:19 [Shana Lesus]: map*
2016-09-16 20:19 Kuo Kyoka: blame composer lol
2016-09-16 20:19 [Shana Lesus]: lol \ :D /
2016-09-16 20:19 Kuo Kyoka: well kind of ramdom jack like say a jb also get dq
2016-09-16 20:19 Kuo Kyoka: but depend on you anyways
2016-09-16 20:20 [Shana Lesus]: after you check, i ask qat about 1/8 and jacks
2016-09-16 20:20 [Shana Lesus]: dont worry Kuo >w<
2016-09-16 20:21 Kuo Kyoka: okay hh
2016-09-16 20:21 Kuo Kyoka: 01:44:802 (104802|0,104973|3) - remove
2016-09-16 20:21 Kuo Kyoka:  if you follow only bass now
2016-09-16 20:21 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
2016-09-16 20:21 [Shana Lesus]: yes
2016-09-16 20:21 [Shana Lesus]: i agree
2016-09-16 20:22 [Shana Lesus]: 01:44:887 (104887|1) - can i move to 1 ?
2016-09-16 20:22 [Shana Lesus]: 01:45:230 (105230|1,105316|1) - because jack
2016-09-16 20:23 Kuo Kyoka: that's fine
2016-09-16 20:23 Kuo Kyoka: the next up part just urgh
2016-09-16 20:23 [Shana Lesus]: oki
2016-09-16 20:24 [Shana Lesus]: shaper patterns ver 2 lol
2016-09-16 20:26 Kuo Kyoka: well just say quality is first, dont care what everyone say about your map, but the part around that just kind of bad to me, but if you think it's fine so i have no other opinions too
2016-09-16 20:28 Kuo Kyoka: 02:08:544 - 02:09:916 - 02:12:659 - 02:14:030 - 02:15:402 - 02:16:773 - 02:18:144 - 02:19:516 - 02:20:887 - 02:22:259 - 02:23:630 - 02:25:002 - 02:26:373 - just simple bass why 3 notes here
2016-09-16 20:28 [Shana Lesus]: thank you for you opinions <3
2016-09-16 20:28 Kuo Kyoka: 02:27:830 (147830|1,147916|1,148002|0,148087|0,148173|2,148259|2,148344|3,148430|3) - nope, just nope
2016-09-16 20:29 Kuo Kyoka: better stick to the music than add random jack which ruin the rhythm itself
2016-09-16 20:29 Kuo Kyoka: remove 1/4 on here will be better
2016-09-16 20:29 [Shana Lesus]: 02:27:916 - jacks deleted
2016-09-16 20:30 Kuo Kyoka: 02:28:516 (148516|0,148516|1) - simple instrument, not worth for for 2 notes
2016-09-16 20:30 Kuo Kyoka: better remove it if you already removed 1/4
2016-09-16 20:31 Kuo Kyoka: 02:34:516 (154516|2,154516|1) - same, no reason to put it on here
2016-09-16 20:33 [Shana Lesus]: fixed
2016-09-16 20:33 [Shana Lesus]: all
2016-09-16 20:33 [Shana Lesus]: 3 notes too
2016-09-16 20:33 Kuo Kyoka: 02:35:887 (155887|2,155887|3) - remove a note
2016-09-16 20:34 Kuo Kyoka: 02:38:116 (158116|2,158116|1) - remove, because this instrument you didn't add 2 notes like before
2016-09-16 20:34 [Shana Lesus]: +
2016-09-16 20:34 Kuo Kyoka: 02:40:344 (160344|2) - same
2016-09-16 20:34 Kuo Kyoka: but you can keep here if you want
2016-09-16 20:35 [Shana Lesus]: 02:41:716 - and here ?
2016-09-16 20:36 [Shana Lesus]: 02:40:344 - here i keep
2016-09-16 20:38 Kuo Kyoka: depend on you
2016-09-16 20:38 Kuo Kyoka: you can keep
2016-09-16 20:39 [Shana Lesus]: but here 02:35:887 - and here 02:38:116 - i agree with you
2016-09-16 20:39 Kuo Kyoka: 03:02:030 - this part suppose to me easiest
2016-09-16 20:40 Kuo Kyoka: to be*
2016-09-16 20:40 Kuo Kyoka: for break after that kind of 1/4 1/8
2016-09-16 20:43 Kuo Kyoka: 03:02:030 - to 03:44:544 - hmm
2016-09-16 20:43 Kuo Kyoka: well i will leave this to other BNs then
2016-09-16 20:44 [Shana Lesus]: ok
2016-09-16 20:44 Kuo Kyoka: abcdefjghiklmopqrstuvxyz
2016-09-16 20:44 Kuo Kyoka: long notes ????
2016-09-16 20:44 Kuo Kyoka: ah nvm
2016-09-16 20:45 Kuo Kyoka: 03:48:573 (228573|1) - remove
2016-09-16 20:45 Kuo Kyoka: 03:51:316 (231316|1) - remove
2016-09-16 20:45 Kuo Kyoka: 03:54:059 (234059|1) - 
2016-09-16 20:45 Kuo Kyoka: 04:05:030 (245030|1) - 
2016-09-16 20:46 Kuo Kyoka: 04:07:859 - i just cant argee with this
2016-09-16 20:46 Kuo Kyoka: the next up part
2016-09-16 20:46 [Shana Lesus]: 1/8?
2016-09-16 20:46 Kuo Kyoka: yes
2016-09-16 20:47 [Shana Lesus]: ok
2016-09-16 20:47 [Shana Lesus]: i fix is part now
2016-09-16 20:48 [Shana Lesus]: 04:12:359 (252359|3,252402|2,252444|0,252487|1,252530|3,252573|2,252616|1) - is 1/8 i can keep ?
2016-09-16 20:49 [Shana Lesus]: all 1/8 fixed on 1/4 normal notes
2016-09-16 20:49 Kuo Kyoka: if only that so it's fine
2016-09-16 20:49 Kuo Kyoka: but
2016-09-16 20:49 Kuo Kyoka: you should ask QAT for all 1/8 you used
2016-09-16 20:49 Kuo Kyoka: same case as Chilarity i would say
2016-09-16 20:51 [Shana Lesus]: ok
2016-09-16 20:51 Kuo Kyoka: the rest of the map is fine i guess so
2016-09-16 20:51 Kuo Kyoka: idk if you are deep relationship with ExPew but i think he can give you good opinion
2016-09-16 20:54 [Shana Lesus]: maybe
2016-09-16 20:55 Kuo Kyoka: hmm you gonna ask QAT?
2016-09-16 20:55 Kuo Kyoka: tbh
2016-09-16 20:55 [Shana Lesus]: yes, but now Blocko and Feerum offline
2016-09-16 20:55 Kuo Kyoka: kind of song like that is almost same with 
2016-09-16 20:55 Kuo Kyoka: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/708015 Team Grimoire - Grimoire of Crimson [Unknown Crypt]]
2016-09-16 20:55 Kuo Kyoka: but this map is more clear 
2016-09-16 20:56 [Shana Lesus]: aaa
2016-09-16 20:56 [Shana Lesus]: this map
2016-09-16 20:57 [Shana Lesus]: 02:23:260 (143260|0,143303|1,143345|2,143387|3,143430|1,143472|0,143515|2,143557|3,143599|0,143642|1,143684|2,143726|3,143769|1,143811|0,143854|2,143896|3) - lol
2016-09-16 20:57 [Shana Lesus]: and i dont get dq for this
2016-09-16 20:58 Kuo Kyoka: because it's only a certain part
2016-09-16 20:58 Kuo Kyoka: not like intro or that chorus ending
2016-09-16 21:02 Kuo Kyoka: idk if you have discord
2016-09-16 21:02 Kuo Kyoka: if yes then it's easier to get feerum or blocko
2016-09-16 21:03 [Shana Lesus]: o
2016-09-16 21:03 [Shana Lesus]: Feerum online
2016-09-16 21:03 Kuo Kyoka: oh lol
2016-09-16 21:49 [Shana Lesus]: Kuo http://puu.sh/rdfjx/0c16f53b6a.JPG
2016-09-16 21:50 and then chilarity got dq *clap clap*
2016-09-16 21:50 Kuo Kyoka: but if you want you can keep them
2016-09-16 21:50 Kuo Kyoka: you can recheck them one more time before get bubble check
2016-09-16 21:56 [Shana Lesus]: maybe i leave from this map , too much trouble
2016-09-16 21:56 [Shana Lesus]: anyway thank you
2016-09-16 21:57 Kuo Kyoka: ??
2016-09-16 21:57 Kuo Kyoka: umm no
2016-09-16 21:57 Kuo Kyoka: can be rank
2016-09-16 21:57 Kuo Kyoka: if you want
2016-09-16 21:57 Kuo Kyoka: some parts need rearrange yeah but it can be rank

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Team Grimoire - RougokuSTRIP (Grimoire crossbreed rmx) [OsuMania modding]

[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: Okay
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay
- Metadata: Okay
- Folder’s problem: None
- Hitsound: Okay
- Timing: Okay
- Other: Okay

Bubbled #1

Congratulations!

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

[Easy]
00:44:459 - add a note on here for vocal, kind of corrupt if it doesnt have it
02:27:744 (147744|0) - change this to long note too, sound weird when it doesnt have other does
04:06:487 - one note only for cymbal

[Magic exists]
01:22:602 (82602|3) - still missing a note for snare
03:00:659 - add a note on 1st for snare sound
04:07:859 - to 04:17:116 - i mean snare sound not drill hh (example http://puu.sh/rngR0/841f4efe09.jpg)

only them