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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 5 февраля 2017 г. at 2:01:30

Artist: Team Grimoire
Title: RougokuSTRIP (Grimoire crossbreed rmx)
Source: うみねこのなく頃に
Tags: hardcore gothic -45 Umineko no Naku Koro ni 07th expansion うみねこのなく頃に散 D'va;;;;;;;;5 japanese Chiru
BPM: 175
Filesize: 31450kb
Play Time: 05:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. Checkmate [MX] - 4Key (4,78 stars, 3931 notes)
  2. Golden Truth [EZ] - 4Key (0,98 stars, 448 notes)
  3. Magic exists [HD] - 4Key (3,05 stars, 2041 notes)


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Magic doesn't exist?

Fierce battle on the chessboard





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2016-08-03 15:19 EYA-: я бы тебе посоветовал поменять начало 
2016-08-03 15:19 EYA-: ща скину
2016-08-03 15:20 EYA-: http://puu.sh/qomGj/3f0b320cc3.png
2016-08-03 15:20 EYA-: примерно вот так замапать вокал
2016-08-03 15:20 EYA-: хорошо заходит
2016-08-03 15:21 EYA-: без фулл лн партов
2016-08-03 15:21 [Shana Lesus]: так
2016-08-03 15:22 [Shana Lesus]: ты про какой момент
2016-08-03 15:22 [Shana Lesus]: время какое
2016-08-03 15:22 EYA-: самое начало
2016-08-03 15:23 EYA-: делать небольшие паузы между лнами
2016-08-03 15:23 EYA-: в 1\2
2016-08-03 15:25 EYA-: 00:03:899 -
2016-08-03 15:25 EYA-: вот здесь вот лн кончается
2016-08-03 15:25 [Shana Lesus]: fix
2016-08-03 15:25 [Shana Lesus]: я с таким снапом не очень офк
2016-08-03 15:26 EYA-: 00:05:099 -
2016-08-03 15:26 [Shana Lesus]: потом запостишь ирк, я дам куд
2016-08-03 15:26 EYA-: 00:05:099 - тут лн начинается
2016-08-03 15:26 [Shana Lesus]: fix
2016-08-03 15:26 EYA-: 00:05:099 - тут конец
2016-08-03 15:26 EYA-: ой
2016-08-03 15:26 EYA-: 00:06:470 -
2016-08-03 15:26 EYA-: тута
2016-08-03 15:26 [Shana Lesus]: я слышу тут начало
2016-08-03 15:26 [Shana Lesus]: 00:05:356 -
2016-08-03 15:26 EYA-: 00:06:642 - начало
2016-08-03 15:27 EYA-: на 100% кажется лучше звучит на том поинте
2016-08-03 15:28 [Shana Lesus]: пусть пока так останется
2016-08-03 15:28 EYA-: ок
2016-08-03 15:28 EYA-: 00:09:385 - конец лна
2016-08-03 15:28 EYA-: 00:09:556 - начало
2016-08-03 15:28 EYA-: 00:10:413 - конец
2016-08-03 15:29 EYA-: а лучше по 2 лна
2016-08-03 15:29 EYA-: за раз
2016-08-03 15:29 EYA-: с самого начала
2016-08-03 15:29 [Shana Lesus]: не не
2016-08-03 15:29 [Shana Lesus]: пусть так будет
2016-08-03 15:29 EYA-: 00:11:956 - конец
2016-08-03 15:29 EYA-: 00:12:127 - начало
2016-08-03 15:31 EYA-: 00:14:870 - конец
2016-08-03 15:32 [Shana Lesus]: исправил все
2016-08-03 15:32 EYA-: именно весь лн парт?
2016-08-03 15:32 [Shana Lesus]: не
2016-08-03 15:32 [Shana Lesus]: что ты написал
2016-08-03 15:33 EYA-: 00:16:070 - конец
2016-08-03 15:33 EYA-: 00:16:242 - начало, но тут тоже наверное я не прав
2016-08-03 15:34 [Shana Lesus]: вот эти лны не тронул
2016-08-03 15:34 [Shana Lesus]: все тут ок
2016-08-03 15:34 EYA-: 00:17:613 - конец
2016-08-03 15:35 EYA-: 00:19:499 - конец
2016-08-03 15:35 EYA-: 00:19:670 - начало
2016-08-03 15:36 EYA-: 00:20:356 - конец и начало нового
2016-08-03 15:37 EYA-: вот здесь может быть и не нужно свапать
2016-08-03 15:37 EYA-: 00:21:985 -
2016-08-03 15:37 [Shana Lesus]: некоторое пофиксил
2016-08-03 15:37 EYA-: 00:22:756 - конец
2016-08-03 15:37 EYA-: 00:22:927 - начало
2016-08-03 15:38 EYA-: еще тут мб +1 лн
2016-08-03 15:38 EYA-: и далее по 2
2016-08-03 15:38 EYA-: ну с того момента по 2 лна за раз
2016-08-03 15:39 [Shana Lesus]: пропустим те лны
2016-08-03 15:39 [Shana Lesus]: 00:50:356 - давай отсюда пойдем
2016-08-03 15:39 [Shana Lesus]: я еще повожусь над лнами
2016-08-03 15:39 [Shana Lesus]: может там и 3/4
2016-08-03 15:39 EYA-: кк
2016-08-03 15:39 [Shana Lesus]: снап дикий как на кримсоне
2016-08-03 15:39 EYA-: бурсты жесткие
2016-08-03 15:39 EYA-: но играбельные
2016-08-03 15:40 [Shana Lesus]: вместо них лны не буду ставить
2016-08-03 15:40 [Shana Lesus]: пусть разогревается народ
2016-08-03 15:40 [Shana Lesus]: :D
2016-08-03 15:40 EYA-: 00:52:756 - может без дабоа
2016-08-03 15:40 EYA-: дабла
2016-08-03 15:40 EYA-: а то народ по пизде пойдет от этого
2016-08-03 15:40 [Shana Lesus]: вроде на 175 играбельно
2016-08-03 15:41 [Shana Lesus]: знаешь
2016-08-03 15:41 [Shana Lesus]: где он не играбелен
2016-08-03 15:41 [Shana Lesus]: 00:55:499 -
2016-08-03 15:41 [Shana Lesus]: точнее сомневаюсь
2016-08-03 15:41 [Shana Lesus]: над таким даблом
2016-08-03 15:42 EYA-: тот джек мне не нравится
2016-08-03 15:42 EYA-: около дабла
2016-08-03 15:42 [Shana Lesus]: точно
2016-08-03 15:42 [Shana Lesus]: сейчас фиксану
2016-08-03 15:43 [Shana Lesus]:
00:59:613 - тут тоже поправил
2016-08-03 15:43 EYA-: ща даже скину
2016-08-03 15:44 EYA-: http://puu.sh/qonKd/3e78adee47.jpg
2016-08-03 15:44 EYA-: ?
2016-08-03 15:44 EYA-: хотя ща еще
2016-08-03 15:44 [Shana Lesus]: вот поверь
2016-08-03 15:44 [Shana Lesus]: это намного сложнее
2016-08-03 15:44 [Shana Lesus]: прожать
2016-08-03 15:45 [Shana Lesus]: джек в 3 колонке
2016-08-03 15:46 EYA-: http://puu.sh/qonOi/6e3d9cee97.jpg
2016-08-03 15:46 EYA-: вариант без джека
2016-08-03 15:46 [Shana Lesus]: так и сделал
2016-08-03 15:46 [Shana Lesus]: в двух местах
2016-08-03 15:46 EYA-: найс
2016-08-03 15:46 [Shana Lesus]: только оконцовка разная
2016-08-03 15:46 [Shana Lesus]: 01:01:327 - вот отсюда
2016-08-03 15:46 EYA-: 01:00:299 -
2016-08-03 15:46 [Shana Lesus]: мне кажется напряжно
2016-08-03 15:47 EYA-: нет
2016-08-03 15:47 EYA-: там все ок
2016-08-03 15:47 EYA-: 01:03:042 -
2016-08-03 15:47 EYA-: http://puu.sh/qonUm/d50f58f4a2.jpg
2016-08-03 15:48 [Shana Lesus]: 01:00:127 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5758864
2016-08-03 15:48 EYA-: ой
2016-08-03 15:48 EYA-: не тот спэп
2016-08-03 15:48 EYA-: http://puu.sh/qonWa/933f255c48.jpg
2016-08-03 15:48 [Shana Lesus]: это где
2016-08-03 15:48 [Shana Lesus]: тайм
2016-08-03 15:49 EYA-: 01:03:042 -
2016-08-03 15:49 EYA-: там тройной удар
2016-08-03 15:49 EYA-: можно 3 дабла в ряд поставить
2016-08-03 15:49 EYA-: вполне обосновано
2016-08-03 15:50 [Shana Lesus]: пока оставлю так
2016-08-03 15:50 EYA-: а еще у тебя видос запаздывает
2016-08-03 15:50 EYA-: лул
2016-08-03 15:50 [Shana Lesus]: блять
2016-08-03 15:50 [Shana Lesus]: вот
2016-08-03 15:50 [Shana Lesus]: я забыл
2016-08-03 15:50 [Shana Lesus]: оффсет вернуть
2016-08-03 15:50 [Shana Lesus]: сек
2016-08-03 15:54 [Shana Lesus]: о
2016-08-03 15:54 [Shana Lesus]: поправил
2016-08-03 15:54 [Shana Lesus]: хорошо что заметил, спасибо
2016-08-03 15:54 EYA-: ноу проблэм
2016-08-03 15:54 [Shana Lesus]: я просто качество апнул до идеала на лоу
2016-08-03 15:54 EYA-: на чем остановились
2016-08-03 15:56 [Shana Lesus]: 01:03:042 - тут
2016-08-03 15:56 EYA-: 01:26:870 (86870|2) - на 1колонку?
2016-08-03 15:56 EYA-: а не
2016-08-03 15:56 EYA-: норм
2016-08-03 15:56 EYA-: 01:03:596 -
2016-08-03 15:56 [Shana Lesus]: хорошая идея
2016-08-03 15:56 EYA-: отсюда ничего не вижу
2016-08-03 15:56 [Shana Lesus]: но 3 колонка пустует
2016-08-03 15:56 [Shana Lesus]: если ты про бурст
2016-08-03 15:57 [Shana Lesus]: будет напряжно прожимать
2016-08-03 15:57 [Shana Lesus]: этот подарок я сделал в конце
2016-08-03 15:57 EYA-: 01:28:156 (88156|2,88156|3) - облегчи ребятам жизнь
2016-08-03 15:57 EYA-: на 1 и 2
2016-08-03 15:58 EYA-: 01:28:242 (88242|1,88327|0,88327|2) - ctrl H
2016-08-03 15:58 [Shana Lesus]: фиксанул 1 28
2016-08-03 15:58 [Shana Lesus]: на счет даблов
2016-08-03 15:58 [Shana Lesus]: лучше 1 джек чем 2
2016-08-03 15:58 EYA-: 01:31:756 (91756|1,91842|2,91842|3,91842|0,91885|1,91927|3,91970|2,92013|0,92056|1,92099|3,92142|2,92185|0,92185|1) -
2016-08-03 15:58 EYA-: напряжно
2016-08-03 15:59 [Shana Lesus]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5758932
2016-08-03 15:59 [Shana Lesus]: да там чутка всего
2016-08-03 15:59 EYA-: да не
2016-08-03 15:59 EYA-: давай без триплета
2016-08-03 15:59 EYA-: без 4
2016-08-03 15:59 EYA-: 01:31:842 (91842|3) -
2016-08-03 16:01 EYA-: 01:34:585 (94585|0,94670|0,94756|1,94842|1,95270|3,95356|3,95442|2,95527|2,95956|1,96042|1,96127|2,96213|2,96299|3,96385|0,96385|3,96470|0,96642|3,96727|3) -
2016-08-03 16:01 EYA-: очень сложно играется
2016-08-03 16:02 [Shana Lesus]: ладно
2016-08-03 16:02 [Shana Lesus]: посоветую что-нибудь другое
2016-08-03 16:02 [Shana Lesus]: но с джеками
2016-08-03 16:02 EYA-: может с лнами?
2016-08-03 16:02 EYA-: а лучше с щилдами
2016-08-03 16:03 [Shana Lesus]: пример дай
2016-08-03 16:03 [Shana Lesus]: чтобы офй удобно было
2016-08-03 16:04 EYA-: 01:34:413 -
2016-08-03 16:04 EYA-: http://puu.sh/qooBn/a5427df175.jpg
2016-08-03 16:05 [Shana Lesus]: 01:34:413 (94413|3,94499|1,94585|2,94585|3) - с лном на таком спиде будет не приятно
2016-08-03 16:05 EYA-: 01:34:756 (94756|1) - на 3
2016-08-03 16:05 EYA-: 01:35:270 (95270|3) - это в лн
2016-08-03 16:05 EYA-: 01:35:356 (95356|3) - на 3
2016-08-03 16:05 EYA-: поприятней чем куча джеков
2016-08-03 16:05 EYA-: в любом случае
2016-08-03 16:06 EYA-: 01:35:442 (95442|2) - на 2
2016-08-03 16:07 EYA-: 01:35:527 (95527|2) - на 4
2016-08-03 16:07 EYA-: http://puu.sh/qooIk/f093979f66.jpg
2016-08-03 16:07 [Shana Lesus]: сек
2016-08-03 16:07 [Shana Lesus]: вот честно
2016-08-03 16:07 [Shana Lesus]: не хочу сюда лн пихать
2016-08-03 16:07 [Shana Lesus]: а подчеркнуть как-то надо
2016-08-03 16:07 EYA-: http://puu.sh/qooK5/f4a6d3d27f.jpg
2016-08-03 16:07 EYA-: нуу
2016-08-03 16:07 EYA-: примерно так
2016-08-03 16:09 EYA-: ладно
2016-08-03 16:09 EYA-: оставляем джеки
2016-08-03 16:09 EYA-: тоже легитно
2016-08-03 16:09 [Shana Lesus]: я понимаю что у тебя от них горит
2016-08-03 16:09 EYA-: 01:43:499 (103499|0,103499|1,103585|0,103670|1,103756|1,103842|0,103927|1,103927|0) -
2016-08-03 16:09 [Shana Lesus]: я буду ждать еще потом модов
2016-08-03 16:09 EYA-: немного упорото
2016-08-03 16:10 [Shana Lesus]: может заикнутся
2016-08-03 16:10 [Shana Lesus]: 01:34:413 (94413|3,94499|1,94585|2,94585|3) -
2016-08-03 16:10 [Shana Lesus]: ой
2016-08-03 16:10 [Shana Lesus]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5758994
2016-08-03 16:11 EYA-: вп
2016-08-03 16:11 EYA-: 01:50:013 (110013|3,110099|3,110270|3,110270|2,110356|3,110442|2,110527|2) -
2016-08-03 16:11 EYA-: немного не по балансу
2016-08-03 16:12 EYA-: свапни на 1 2 джек
2016-08-03 16:13 [Shana Lesus]: вот так ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5759004
2016-08-03 16:13 [Shana Lesus]: стоп
2016-08-03 16:13 EYA-: второй джек в 3 давай на 4
2016-08-03 16:13 [Shana Lesus]: нет
2016-08-03 16:14 [Shana Lesus]: какой
2016-08-03 16:14 [Shana Lesus]: именно
2016-08-03 16:14 EYA-: http://puu.sh/qop2D/933386270d.jpg
2016-08-03 16:14 [Shana Lesus]: 01:50:356 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5759014 ?
2016-08-03 16:15 [Shana Lesus]: Вадь
2016-08-03 16:15 [Shana Lesus]: сек
2016-08-03 16:15 EYA-: ты там добавил еще джек
2016-08-03 16:15 EYA-: ок
2016-08-03 16:15 [Shana Lesus]: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5759019 что ты думаешь об этом ?
2016-08-03 16:16 EYA-: годно
2016-08-03 16:16 EYA-: кстати да
2016-08-03 16:16 EYA-: миха тру пиздит
2016-08-03 16:16 EYA-: у тебя не 4.8
2016-08-03 16:16 EYA-: играется на 5.2
2016-08-03 16:16 [Shana Lesus]: вот интересно что тебе смщики скажут
2016-08-03 16:16 [Shana Lesus]: :D
2016-08-03 16:17 [Shana Lesus]: фак юр дифф
2016-08-03 16:17 [Shana Lesus]: брокен старрейт
2016-08-03 16:17 [Shana Lesus]: но пп
2016-08-03 16:17 [Shana Lesus]: 5.5
2016-08-03 16:17 [Shana Lesus]: фак
2016-08-03 16:17 [Shana Lesus]: 😆
2016-08-03 16:17 EYA-: я их на 3 буквы пошлю
2016-08-03 16:17 EYA-: Fuck you
2016-08-03 16:17 EYA-: ur skill sux
2016-08-03 16:17 EYA-: )
2016-08-03 16:17 [Shana Lesus]: и куча ко ко ко
2016-08-03 16:17 [Shana Lesus]: в твою сторону :D от дружков
2016-08-03 16:18 EYA-: ща бы авалона встретить
2016-08-03 16:18 EYA-: и рейпить его лс
2016-08-03 16:18 EYA-: чтобы бабл дал
2016-08-03 16:18 [Shana Lesus]: кстати
2016-08-03 16:18 [Shana Lesus]: говорил с бнами
2016-08-03 16:18 EYA-: на соу би ит
2016-08-03 16:18 [Shana Lesus]: то что ты в треде маппу кинул
2016-08-03 16:18 [Shana Lesus]: не катит она на ранк
2016-08-03 16:18 [Shana Lesus]: бабли а потом в трейд
2016-08-03 16:18 [Shana Lesus]: ибо ее не приняли
2016-08-03 16:19 EYA-: у кого бы баблить
2016-08-03 16:19 EYA-: юлька занята
2016-08-03 16:19 EYA-: ивининг тоже
2016-08-03 16:19 EYA-: какиказе пидр
2016-08-03 16:19 [Shana Lesus]: спрошу попозже
2016-08-03 16:19 [Shana Lesus]: попрошу чекнуть
2016-08-03 16:19 EYA-: авалон чет сдох
2016-08-03 16:19 EYA-: может палкой потыкать
2016-08-03 16:19 [Shana Lesus]: Авалон живой
2016-08-03 16:19 [Shana Lesus]: в ирл мало времени
2016-08-03 16:20 EYA-: он в сети не появлялся давно
2016-08-03 16:20 [Shana Lesus]: он появляется на минуты 5
2016-08-03 16:20 EYA-: ладн
2016-08-03 16:20 EYA-: го дальше
2016-08-03 16:20 [Shana Lesus]: давай
2016-08-03 16:21 EYA-: 01:53:613 (113613|0,113699|1,113785|0,113870|0,113956|1) - поменя стороной
2016-08-03 16:21 EYA-: чтоб джек на 2 был
2016-08-03 16:22 EYA-: 01:54:299 (114299|1,114385|2,114470|1,114556|1) -
2016-08-03 16:22 EYA-: ctrl+h
2016-08-03 16:23 EYA-: я тебе кудо подкинул
2016-08-03 16:23 [Shana Lesus]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5759062
2016-08-03 16:23 EYA-: норм
2016-08-03 16:23 [Shana Lesus]: спасибо Вадь
2016-08-03 16:24 [Shana Lesus]: это меня мотивирует :D
2016-08-03 16:24 EYA-: еще как :D
2016-08-03 16:24 EYA-: 01:53:613 (113613|1,113699|1,113785|2,113785|1,113870|1) -
2016-08-03 16:24 EYA-: бля
2016-08-03 16:24 EYA-: это у меня только там 4 ноты подряд?
2016-08-03 16:24 EYA-: а да
2016-08-03 16:24 EYA-: у меня
2016-08-03 16:25 [Shana Lesus]: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5759075 ?!
2016-08-03 16:25 EYA-: показалось
2016-08-03 16:25 EYA-: 01:56:185 (116185|1) - можно и без щилда
2016-08-03 16:25 EYA-: тут короткие лны
2016-08-03 16:26 EYA-: просто дабл
2016-08-03 16:26 EYA-: 1 4
2016-08-03 16:26 [Shana Lesus]: удалил
2016-08-03 16:27 EYA-: я потом замапаю свою изи версию для даунов
2016-08-03 16:27 EYA-: )
2016-08-03 16:27 EYA-: красиво
2016-08-03 16:27 EYA-: 02:16:413 (136413|1,136413|0,136499|0,136499|1,136585|2,136585|3,136670|3,136670|2) -
2016-08-03 16:28 [Shana Lesus]: о да
2016-08-03 16:28 [Shana Lesus]: сам это люблю
2016-08-03 16:28 EYA-: 02:26:356 (146356|0,146527|0,146699|0,146870|0,147042|0) -
2016-08-03 16:28 EYA-: а пальчики не устанут?
2016-08-03 16:28 EYA-: :D
2016-08-03 16:28 [Shana Lesus]: исправил
2016-08-03 16:28 [Shana Lesus]: якори не нужны
2016-08-03 16:28 EYA-: лично я пиздец сбиваюсь на таких моментах
2016-08-03 16:29 [Shana Lesus]: сделал зигзагом
2016-08-03 16:29 EYA-: wp
2016-08-03 16:30 EYA-: 02:42:470 (162470|0) -
2016-08-03 16:30 EYA-: может облегчить?
2016-08-03 16:30 EYA-: и 02:40:585 -
2016-08-03 16:31 EYA-: 02:43:327 -
2016-08-03 16:31 EYA-: 02:44:613 -
2016-08-03 16:31 EYA-: хотя нет
2016-08-03 16:31 EYA-: забей
2016-08-03 16:31 EYA-: мне кажется
2016-08-03 16:31 [Shana Lesus]: 02:41:099 - тут удалил
2016-08-03 16:32 [Shana Lesus]: 02:40:585 - тут тоже
2016-08-03 16:32 EYA-: 02:48:299 -
2016-08-03 16:32 [Shana Lesus]: 02:43:327 - тут нет
2016-08-03 16:32 [Shana Lesus]: хотя надо
2016-08-03 16:32 EYA-: этот момент нужно сделать как тут
2016-08-03 16:32 EYA-: 02:37:327 -
2016-08-03 16:32 EYA-: два спама
2016-08-03 16:32 [Shana Lesus]: о да
2016-08-03 16:32 EYA-: нужн
2016-08-03 16:32 EYA-: звуки 1 в 1
2016-08-03 16:33 [Shana Lesus]: чет я упустил этот момент
2016-08-03 16:33 EYA-: 02:59:270 -
2016-08-03 16:33 EYA-: и этот
2016-08-03 16:33 EYA-: накинет старрейта
2016-08-03 16:33 EYA-: будет хоть адекватно выглядеть
2016-08-03 16:34 [Shana Lesus]: не накинуло
2016-08-03 16:34 EYA-: 03:50:870 (230870|2,230870|0,230956|0,230956|2,231042|3,231042|0,231042|1) - немного потно, но сойдет
2016-08-03 16:35 EYA-: а можно сделать 12 12 34
2016-08-03 16:35 EYA-: без триплета
2016-08-03 16:35 [Shana Lesus]: вот
2016-08-03 16:35 [Shana Lesus]: надо коолдовать
2016-08-03 16:35 [Shana Lesus]: колдовать*
2016-08-03 16:36 EYA-: 04:05:442 (245442|1) - убери плиз
2016-08-03 16:36 EYA-: перед бурстом триплет не к чему
2016-08-03 16:36 [Shana Lesus]: убрал
2016-08-03 16:38 EYA-: 04:10:585 (250585|2) -
2016-08-03 16:38 EYA-: минус
2016-08-03 16:38 EYA-: этого
2016-08-03 16:38 EYA-: парня
2016-08-03 16:38 EYA-: запакуйте
2016-08-03 16:38 EYA-: у тебя все ударные по даблам
2016-08-03 16:38 [Shana Lesus]: а что с ним ?
2016-08-03 16:38 [Shana Lesus]: а
2016-08-03 16:38 EYA-: а тут триплет
2016-08-03 16:38 [Shana Lesus]: да
2016-08-03 16:39 [Shana
Lesus]: 04:10:585 (250585|0) - его убрал
2016-08-03 16:39 EYA-: 04:12:299 (252299|2) -
2016-08-03 16:39 EYA-: тоже триплет перед бурстом
2016-08-03 16:39 [Shana Lesus]: deleted
2016-08-03 16:39 [Shana Lesus]: sure
2016-08-03 16:39 [Shana Lesus]: same sh*t
2016-08-03 16:40 [Shana Lesus]: ой
2016-08-03 16:40 [Shana Lesus]: 04:14:185 - и тут04:14:527 - забыл ноты еще
2016-08-03 16:40 [Shana Lesus]: лох
2016-08-03 16:40 EYA-: ну вооот
2016-08-03 16:40 EYA-: вроде
2016-08-03 16:40 EYA-: я кончил
2016-08-03 16:40 [Shana Lesus]: 04:19:156 - от сюда еб стыд
2016-08-03 16:40 [Shana Lesus]: 😆
2016-08-03 16:41 [Shana Lesus]: от сюда ничего не напрягает ?
2016-08-03 16:41 EYA-: нет
2016-08-03 16:41 EYA-: (
2016-08-03 16:41 EYA-: )
2016-08-03 16:41 [Shana Lesus]: 04:28:413 - и до сюда
2016-08-03 16:41 [Shana Lesus]: лол
2016-08-03 16:41 EYA-: я привык
2016-08-03 16:41 [Shana Lesus]: щилды легко жать ?
2016-08-03 16:41 EYA-: к щилдам
posted
Мод
01:23:613 (83613|1,83613|0,83785|0,83785|1,83956|1,83956|0,84127|0,84127|1,84299|1,84299|0) - думаю, лучше ремапнуть

01:27:127 - ноту?

01:31:842 - добавь ноту, т.к. 01:27:727 - здесь и 01:33:213 - здесь при том же звуке ты используешь 3 ноты

01:42:042 - 01:42:727 - зачем здесь две ноты?

01:44:270 - ноту

01:45:127 - здесь, наверное, дабл?

01:58:585 - сюда дабл

01:58:670 - удали одну ноту

01:58:756 - добавь

02:23:613 - в остальных таких же местах ты начинал ЛН с одной нотой, а здесь почему то с двумя :?

02:30:899 - 02:31:585 - 02:31:756 - 02:31:927 - 02:33:299 - здесь должны быть ноты, но я полагаю, ты специально их не поставил, так что не буду дальше перечилсять

02:37:327 - тут по сути 1/8 чорд триллы, но лучше поставить православные 1/8 лесенки или какой-нибудь 1/8 бурст

02:45:042 - возможно стоит продолжить ЛНы, мне они нравятся

02:48:299 - об этом я говорил выше

02:59:270 - ^

Ну вроде все
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Спасибо ребята, очень полезные моды, все принято !!!
posted
Hi Shana! :3

here's my mod as requested~
feel free to reject if you're not satisfied with my suggestions~
Column = 1|2|3|4
~~~ open me ~~~
[Stalemate]
after a couple of testplays, some stuffs are bothering me so ill point those out... (just my suggestions and opinions tho :3)

- 00:53:956 (53956|0,54127|0,54342|0,54470|0,54642|0,54856|0,54985|0,55156|0) - these are not too friendly imo, how about mirror the patterns from 00:53:270 to 00:54:470 ? it will also sort out the hand balance here 00:53:099 (53099|3) - this note will broke the balance between 00:53:270 (53270|2,53313|3) in my experience because of last hit-to-first 1/8 flow (kinda like that xD)

- from 00:56:013 to 00:57:899 - mirror too, same reason from my mod above ^ to keep the hands balance and flowy

- 00:58:756 (58756|3,58799|2,58842|0,58885|1,58927|3,58927|2,58970|0,59013|1,59056|2,59099|0,59099|3) - mirror too, kinda same also on what i pointed above regarding these 00:58:456 (58456|3,58585|3,58756|3,58799|2) then to chop the flow you can ctrl + g this 00:58:756 (58756|0,58799|1)

- 00:59:270 (59270|3) - move to 3 also for these one 00:58:970 (58970|3,59099|3) then for 00:59:442 (59442|2,59485|3) ctrl + g to keep it flowy

- 00:59:956 (59956|0) - move to 2 same reason also to be able for these notes to keep up 00:59:785 (59785|0,60127|0)

- 01:00:556 (60556|3,60556|0) - i suggest you to move this to [23], that jacks makes it more hard to execute, it strain the hands more considering there are 1/8 notes before this...

- and also if you accept above... 01:00:642 (60642|1) - move this to 3 maybe, there's already too much pressure on the left side of the burst because of these 01:00:299 (60299|0,60299|1)

- maybe it is okay to remove 01:01:027 (61027|0,61070|1,61113|2,61156|3) this? and making 01:00:985 (60985|3,60985|2) these triple for the loud snare crash sound? i think it will be a good emphasis to the next pattern if there were a rest... just like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5766150

- i think this note 01:23:099 (83099|2) are not needed, it doesnt make any rememblance to make it double since the sound is too soft and also it feels weird to play having same density as 01:22:927

- if you follow double for every kick sounds... in this part 01:25:327 - should technically look like this... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5766337 similar on what you did hear 01:28:242

- 01:30:813 (90813|0,90813|3) - remove 1 note? it doesnt have kick sounds like i mention above ^

- pattern suggestion: ummm.. how about starting from 01:23:270 to 01:34:242 .... for a different pace, placing a rest after every 2 snare sounds like this 01:24:299
  • so... mind make these parts empty?
  1. 01:25:756 (85756|1) -
  2. 01:27:127 - (add the remaining empty after this),
  3. 01:28:499 (88499|2) - (and also for the reason of making this easier to play when making empty 01:28:327 (88327|0,88327|2,88413|1,88413|3,88413|0) :))
  4. 01:29:870 (89870|2) -
  5. 01:31:242 (91242|1) -
  6. 01:32:613 (92613|1) -
  7. 01:33:985 (93985|1) - (same like before about 01:33:813 (93813|3,93813|1,93899|3,93899|2,93899|0) - :))
    it really plays good imo :3 but still your choice


- 01:26:870 - make this pattern more simple? so it will be easier to execute? something similar to https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5766490

- 01:34:585 - i personally dont know about this jacks... consider repattern those? maybe it is just me...

- 01:44:870 - how about put some emphasis for this one? to feel more the climax for the next pattern like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5766510

- 01:56:356 (116356|1) - and 01:59:099 (119099|3) - maybe it is okay to remove these, it is fine being single because it doesnt have sounds like kick snare and also melody like 01:56:699 then add note here 01:56:185 for cymbals

- 02:02:870 (122870|3) - move to 3? more balance this way

- 02:22:242 - i feel a inconsistency here... i think you missed a 2/1 LN here?

- 02:23:442 (143442|3,143527|3) - i dont hear any sounds that can make this resemblance to jack... maybe change this?

- 02:28:499 (148499|3) - i think it is for the background synth but i think it is fine to remove this for comfortable flow

- 02:29:013 (149013|3,149056|2,149099|3) - this is not too friendly imo, how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5766655 ?

- 02:29:442 (149442|0) - maybe it is fine to remove this if you're making the background synth double or maybe this 02:29:356 (149356|0) ? it is nice to play if it is flowy

- 02:30:642 - same ^ (if you accept you can check for the others, kinda lazy xD)

- 03:12:985 (192985|2) - move to 4 to avoid 03:12:470 (192470|2,192642|2,192813|2,192985|2,193156|2)

- 03:07:499 (187499|0) - move to 2

- 03:08:185 (188185|3) - move to 3

- 03:34:927 (214927|0) - move to 2?

- 03:45:213 - in this part maybe change the pattern something like 3,[14][23][14][23][124] because the pattern here kinda break the hand balance 03:44:956 (224956|3,225042|3,225470|3,225556|3)

- 04:07:070 (247070|0,247156|3,247242|0) - mirror then 04:07:327 (247327|2) move to 1? i think it is more better

- 04:35:270 - i think you missed a note here

- 04:48:299 - i hear a synth here, add also same kind of sound with 04:48:470 (288470|1)

- 04:51:042 - add note same as above

- 04:53:613 - add note too

- 04:56:870 - 04:58:242 - 04:59:613 - etc... add note same sound with 04:58:927 also you did add here 04:55:499

- 04:19:156 - these killed me xD


yooshhh....
such a nice map shana :D
Goodluck~ <3
posted
Thank you Sora for a improving patterns in my map, i really needed this, a large part of your advices accepted.
posted
HOI!!
jacks hell lol
00:33:899 - http://puu.sh/qqI8p/29fb365fa2.PNG I think do like this, will be suitable with this instrument
01:23:099 (83099|1,83270|2) - Ctrl+H ?
02:41:099 - 02:42:470 - 02:43:842 - do the triple notes here, because 02:45:213 do triple

sorry for short mods :(:(
I think overall is good now ~
GL on ranking!
This will be ranked in 1 week
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WolfyArmato- wrote:

HOI!!
jacks hell lol
00:33:899 - http://puu.sh/qqI8p/29fb365fa2.PNG I think do like this, will be suitable with this instrument
01:23:099 (83099|1,83270|2) - Ctrl+H ?
02:41:099 - 02:42:470 - 02:43:842 - do the triple notes here, because 02:45:213 do triple

sorry for short mods :(:(
I think overall is good now ~
GL on ranking!
This will be ranked in 1 week


Thank you, all advices accepted ! :3
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\O/\O/\O/\O/\O/\O/\O/\O/\O/\O/
owo Owo oWo owO OwO OWO

  1. Off set 1014 !


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Checkmate
00:57:642 (57642|2,57685|3,57727|2,57770|3) - I think this is hard recommend change 00:57:727 (57727|2,57770|3,57813|1,57856|0,57899|2,57899|3) -

01:22:842 (82842|2,82885|3) - personal opinion ctrl j is more looks clean

01:22:927 (82927|0,83099|2) - i dont think this LNs doesnt need (maybe Ghost note?) so delete them and add note 01:22:927 - col1

01:32:099 (92099|0,92142|1) - consider about 01:32:142 (92142|1,92185|2,92270|1,92356|2,92442|1) - i think 01:32:099 (92099|0,92142|1) - ctrl j is good

01:36:385 (96385|0,96385|3) - i dont understand why is here 2note

01:39:042 (99042|3,99127|2,99213|3,99299|2,99385|3,99470|2,99556|3,99642|2) - worry about this
so my suggestion: http://puu.sh/qtMhj/bb85a99d5c.jpg

01:42:299 (102299|2,102385|2,102470|3,102556|3,102642|2,102727|2,102813|3,102899|3) - so many jack to right hand for balance need to move
http://puu.sh/qtMln/d68c32aec5.jpg this is more good i guess

01:45:556 (105556|2,105556|1,105556|3,105642|2,105727|3,105813|3) - same need to move
my suggestion: 01:45:813 (105813|3) - move 1 01:45:899 (105899|0) - move 4

02:37:327 (157327|0,157370|1,157413|3,157456|2,157499|0,157542|1,157585|3,157627|2) - this part i think more need harder. i think making a difference to here unlike 00:50:527 (50527|2,50570|3,50613|1,50656|0,50699|2,50742|3,50785|1,50827|0) - will be better
http://puu.sh/qtMzo/c3bb855a9a.jpg how about this? owo

02:48:299 (168299|0,168342|1,168385|2,168427|3,168470|0,168513|1,168556|2,168599|3) - same like above
http://puu.sh/qtMEP/61ea07c67d.jpg my suggestion :D

02:59:270 (179270|3,179313|2,179356|1,179399|0,179442|3,179485|2,179527|1,179570|0) - same
http://puu.sh/qtN1c/8dcc3c51c3.jpg suggestion!

03:30:042 (210042|3) - ghost?

03:36:899 (216899|2) - ghost?

03:42:385 (222385|2) - same

04:01:327 (241327|3,241327|0,241327|2,241413|1,241499|0,241499|3,241585|2) - can 8snap here like 03:50:356 (230356|0,230356|3,230399|2,230442|1,230485|0,230527|3,230570|2,230613|1,230656|0) -

04:07:842 - ~ 04:17:442 - use 8snap here so many same pattern in kiai


done!
posted
All fixed Wonki, thank you for mod \:3/
posted
may want to source うみねこのなく頃に, as the thing it closely resembles is BGM from EP1 of Umineko. Tagging Chiru is kinda uh
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Okorin wrote:

may want to source うみねこのなく頃に, as the thing it closely resembles is BGM from EP1 of Umineko. Tagging Chiru is kinda uh


Source fixed, Chiru added to tags, thank you Okorin !
posted
:roll:
00:04:173 (4173|1) - starts in 00:03:916
00:05:373 (5373|3) - ^> 00:05:330
00:06:702 (6702|0) - ^> 00:06:616
00:08:759 - add ln
00:09:616 (9616|2) - starts 00:09:444
00:12:273 (12273|3) - ^> 00:12:144
00:15:102 (15102|0) - ^> 00:14:930
00:16:387 (16387|1) - ^> 00:16:302
00:17:759 (17759|2) - ^> 00:17:630
00:19:773 (19773|0) - ^> 00:19:687
00:20:544 (20544|3) - ^> 00:20:416
00:22:002 (22002|0) - ^> 00:22:044
00:23:030 (23030|2,23373|1) - wtf? Поставь здесь ноту> 00:22:944. И вместо >00:23:030 (23030|2,23373|1) поставь 1 лн.
00:26:073 (26073|2) - starts > 00:25:902
00:27:316 (27316|0) - ^> 00:27:273
00:28:687 (28687|2) - ^> 00:28:602
00:30:702 - add ln, ends here > 00:31:259
00:31:473 (31473|3) - starts >00:31:430
00:32:716 (32716|1) - ^> 00:32:630

01:45:059 (105059|0,105059|1) - -1 note
02:06:144 (126144|1,126144|3,126144|0,126230|2,126316|0,126402|1,126402|2,126487|0,126487|3,126573|1,126573|2,126659|0,126659|2,126659|3,126744|1,126830|3,126830|0,126916|1,126916|2,127002|3,127002|0,127087|1,127087|2) - не думаешь, что это слишком сложно для таких слабых звуков :shock:
02:07:173 (127173|0,128544|3,129916|1,132659|0) - и т.д. сделай на остальных колонках бурсты
02:10:944 - бурст
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eyes wrote:

:roll:
00:04:173 (4173|1) - starts in 00:03:916
00:05:373 (5373|3) - ^> 00:05:330
00:06:702 (6702|0) - ^> 00:06:616
00:08:759 - add ln
00:09:616 (9616|2) - starts 00:09:444
00:12:273 (12273|3) - ^> 00:12:144
00:15:102 (15102|0) - ^> 00:14:930
00:16:387 (16387|1) - ^> 00:16:302
00:17:759 (17759|2) - ^> 00:17:630
00:19:773 (19773|0) - ^> 00:19:687
00:20:544 (20544|3) - ^> 00:20:416
00:22:002 (22002|0) - ^> 00:22:044
00:23:030 (23030|2,23373|1) - wtf? Поставь здесь ноту> 00:22:944. И вместо >00:23:030 (23030|2,23373|1) поставь 1 лн.
00:26:073 (26073|2) - starts > 00:25:902
00:27:316 (27316|0) - ^> 00:27:273
00:28:687 (28687|2) - ^> 00:28:602
00:30:702 - add ln, ends here > 00:31:259
00:31:473 (31473|3) - starts >00:31:430
00:32:716 (32716|1) - ^> 00:32:630

01:45:059 (105059|0,105059|1) - -1 note
02:06:144 (126144|1,126144|3,126144|0,126230|2,126316|0,126402|1,126402|2,126487|0,126487|3,126573|1,126573|2,126659|0,126659|2,126659|3,126744|1,126830|3,126830|0,126916|1,126916|2,127002|3,127002|0,127087|1,127087|2) - не думаешь, что это слишком сложно для таких слабых звуков :shock:
02:07:173 (127173|0,128544|3,129916|1,132659|0) - и т.д. сделай на остальных колонках бурсты
02:10:944 - бурст


все исправлено, ну ты в курсе :roll:
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Hi Shana~
mod as requested

nice song~ :)
col 1 2 3 4

00:30:702 - could add another LN here end 00:31:387 - since there is another vocal long sound here :3
01:01:344 - till 01:22:944 - hmmm, here could be a little less denser, i think sound like 01:01:516 (61516|2,61516|0,61859|1,61859|2,62202|1,62202|0,62544|3,62544|0) - can be reduced into a single note while u can use double note for all these kick sound like 01:03:059 (63059|1,63059|0,63230|1,63230|0,63402|2,63402|0) - this would make a neater pattern here
01:23:287 (83287|1) - move to 3? this jack seems random for me :d
02:24:316 - shouldn'nt here be triple note?
02:37:430 (157430|1,157430|2) - reduce a note here? they doesn't have the sync sound like 02:37:516 (157516|3,157516|2,157602|3,157602|0) -
02:48:402 (168402|3,168402|2) - same case here ^
03:01:087 (181087|0) - move up by 1? this would fit better to the clap sound
03:01:602 (181602|3) - move up by 1 like before if u accept
03:45:916 - till 04:06:830 - i found a little inconsistency here , at the beginning u have a variation pattern like 03:46:259 (226259|3,226259|2,226259|0,226430|2,226430|3,226602|3,226602|0,226944|0,226944|3,227116|3,227116|1,227287|1,227287|2) - which is really nice instead jumpstream till the end, but it suddenly double everything on every 1/2 beats, i would suggest to make it consistent with your beginning pattern here.

good luck~ ;)
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Hii Shana o/
Sorry for delay

4K = 1~4
Click Me!
[CheckMate]
  1. 01:56:716 (116716|3,116716|1,116716|2) - why triple?
  2. 01:58:859 (118859|3) - Emm missing place? I think you shold be do it here 02:01:259 - ?
    02:04:430 (124430|0) - delete then 02:04:259 (124259|0) - change to 1/2s LN? like this 02:01:344 (121344|3,121344|2,121430|1,121516|2,121516|0,121602|1,121687|3,121687|0,121773|2,121859|1) -
  3. 02:28:773 (148773|0,148773|3,148816|2,148859|1,148859|0,148902|2,148944|0,148944|3,148987|1,149030|3,149030|2,149073|1,149116|0,149116|3) - owo
  4. 03:34:944 (214944|0) - move to 2? give balance in columb 2 03:34:602 (214602|0,214773|0,214944|0,215116|0) -
  5. 03:45:744 (225744|3,225744|0) - should be one note? then 03:45:830 - double? Because no drum there. like this 03:44:716 (224716|1,224802|2,224802|3) -


Goodluck ~
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Thank you C_Star and Ami, most of the advice was accepted !!!
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Hey my dear dear Shana
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  • [Checkmate]
  1. 00:05:287 - use 25% you can here the vocal start at here
  2. 00:08:759 (8759|3) - same as this one
  3. 00:53:630 - hmm... idk if its a good idea to change the 1/8 stair here, it sounds the same as other 1/8 sound. if you want to make a little different, maybe you should change the pattern from 00:53:459 - , cause here it change to the lower pitch imo
  4. 01:06:402 - M.A.M.A pattern lol
  5. 02:07:259 - how about delete this one, make a little "stop" feeling, and its easier to play the 1/8
  6. 02:37:344 (157344|3,157430|3,157516|3) - this just so hard, 1/4 jack in one hand and mix with 1/8 lol, use something like this pls 02:59:287 -

    i think thats all from me, sry for short mod, i think you can reduce some double and use it only for the snare.
    i like the SB!
    good luck
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SanadaYukimura wrote:

Hey my dear dear Shana
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  1. 00:05:287 - use 25% you can here the vocal start at here
  2. 00:08:759 (8759|3) - same as this one
  3. 00:53:630 - hmm... idk if its a good idea to change the 1/8 stair here, it sounds the same as other 1/8 sound. if you want to make a little different, maybe you should change the pattern from 00:53:459 - , cause here it change to the lower pitch imo
  4. 01:06:402 - M.A.M.A pattern lol
  5. 02:07:259 - how about delete this one, make a little "stop" feeling, and its easier to play the 1/8
  6. 02:37:344 (157344|3,157430|3,157516|3) - this just so hard, 1/4 jack in one hand and mix with 1/8 lol, use something like this pls 02:59:287 -

    i think thats all from me, sry for short mod, i think you can reduce some double and use it only for the snare.
    i like the SB!
    good luck


My Sanada, your short mod useful for me, thank you <3
(All fixed)
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