Sorry for taking so long to get to this. >_>
[General]
So many difficulties ending at different points in the song. :/
yznoob's mIx is too long for ranking and will have to go for approval if some of the map isn't truncated (play time needs to be less than 240 seconds)
With your own difficulties, it's appreciated that you keep your break times and kiai times consistent. As it is, easy feels as if it was far too many breaks.
04:10:285 - Mapping after this point in the song feels wasteful imo. It's long enough as it is, and with one of the difficulties going beyond the play time barrier for ranking, I'd really suggest truncating that part of the map.
Hard+ is the only difficulty with a preview point. Please add to it all difficulties in the same place.
Remove "rin" and "kagamine" from tags since it's in the artist field.
Add Toraboruta-P to tags (composer/video)
It's strange to see Len used in the various skin elements considering the song.
[Easy, Normal, and Hard+, ignore's Hard]
01:27:429 - There's no need for this uninherited timing section. Please remove it.
01:29:143 - ^
[Easy]
AR and OD are really really high for an Easy difficulty. I'd recommend somewhere around this:
Where you chose to end the map feels odd considering it's right in the middle of the most powerful part of the piece. You also have your kiai still running and timing sections all over afterward. Please map this until the end, or at least until a more appropriate spot.
00:47:786 (1,2) - Could you arrange these so they're not overlapping each other so much?
02:24:214 (1,4) - ^
03:03:428 (1,1) - Yeah, this doesn't look very good at all. Please don't overlap so much with sliders. ><
02:58:285 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Also, way too many new combos. Try doing a new combo every other slider instead.
03:10:285 (1) - Move this right one grid. Also would be better if it ended at 03:12:000 -
03:13:714 - Start kiai here
03:32:571 (1,1,1,1) - Please avoid using continuous new combos like this. It messes with the HP drain metric.
The last kiai section felt kind of bland since it was all mapped linearly. Try to make it more flowy and smooth for a better visual effect.
[Normal]
00:39:429 (7,1) - These big jumps between combos are fairly large for a Normal. Think you can tone them down a little bit to what you did later on at 00:51:000 (5,1) - ?
00:49:714 (1) - Really soon after a spinner for a normal. Please give a bit more time for recovery.
00:53:143 (1,2) - Check your spacing here
01:17:143 (1) - Soon after spinner again
All these tiny combos seem to have no gameplay justification, so:
01:19:072 (1) - Remove new combo
01:21:000 (1) - ^
01:22:500 (1) - ^
01:23:572 (1) - ^
01:24:429 (1) - ^
01:42:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'm really not liking all of these streams of notes for a normal. There's so much more music you can follow that isn't just a long sequence of 1/8th notes.
03:01:714 (1,2,3,4) - This kind of stacking tends to work if you have a higher AR and faster sliders. With this setup, it's not very visually appealing. I'd try something else.
Open up your .osu file through the File -> Open .osu in notepad.
Hit control + F and enter 217714. On that line that shows up, enter this in that line's place.
360,144,217714,2,2,B|360:0|88:0|88:168|88:344|360:344|360:200,1,640,2|6
You'll end up with this:
Parts of this felt really linear and not that great to look at (straight lines with hard-edged turns) and the excessive 1/8th note streams made this kind of bland to play, plus possibly a little too hard for a Normal. Try going through this and see what you can do to maybe make this more appealing to a normal-level player.
[Hard+]
You should really end this where Normal ends.
01:19:929 (9) - Use 1/4 snap here, not 1/8. :/
01:23:357 (10) - ^
01:27:429 (1,1,1) - Just make it one combo please. There are later instances that you should change into just one combo as well. I'll leave it to you to change them back.
01:46:285 (1,2,3) - These don't really fit the song that well.
01:59:357 (6) - :/
02:47:357 (4) - ^ etc. etc.
02:54:857 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Why? It's a slow part of the song... I don't see why you want to go off making up your own faster rhythms for that.
[ignore's Hard]
HP Drain 1 and OD 1? Seriously? Raise those up. A lot.
Waaay too many slider speed changes too. Guidelines are at 3 a map, which includes the 1x, though I do agree that what you've used is quite tasteful.
From 03:48:001 (1) - to 03:53:144 (5) - is kinda boring since you're doing the same thing. Over. And over. And over. Mix it up a bit after the echos stop.
[Wmf's Taiko]
01:59:893 - Strange spot to stop the kiai.
02:03:429 (201) - During this section, doesn't it feel like overkill to you playing that many notes for such a slow part of the song?
04:07:286 - Move this to the beginning of the spinner.
[yznoob's mIx]
As stated earlier, you need to truncate the length of this map (i recommend ending where Normal does) otherwise it needs to go for approval.
00:19:714 (1) - This note seems unnecessary.
00:50:357 (2,3,4,5) - This doesn't feel like a good spot for accelerated spacing.
02:03:429 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - What? Why? This is the SLOW part of the song, not the asfldj stream section. -_-
02:09:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - More inappropriate accelerated spacing.
02:50:143 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:57:000 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ etc. etc. They don't fit at all. :/
03:00:857 (1,2,3,4) - This is still the slow part of the song. Why streams?
03:01:714 (1,2,3,4) - ^ etc. etc.
03:12:000 - Hold sliders that use an uninherited timing section are now considered unrankable. Please map something else here.
Phew, there you go. Keep working at it!
