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[DBF]

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[DBF] 2009-05-31T20:24:18+00:00

osuplayer111 wrote:
00:10:80 (9) - New combo.
00:14:33 (17) - ^
00:18:08 (27) - ^
00:21:83 (37) - ^
00:25:36 (47) - ^
00:28:45 (55) - ^
00:31:98 (66) - ^
00:35:51 (76) - ^
00:39:04 (86) - ^
00:42:57 (95) - ^
00:46:09 (105) - ^
00:49:62 (119) - ^
01:21:39 (11) - ^
01:24:92 (20) - ^
01:28:45 (27) - ^
01:31:98 (39) - ^

oh,lol,thank you

Takuma

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Takuma 2009-05-31T21:00:49+00:00

First off, the difficulty names are waaay too long!
Please rename them to a simple Easy, and Hard.

Try an offset of 7,258 ms.

- Easy:
01:06:39 (2,3,4) - New combos?

That's really it, actually.
Starred.

Larto

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Larto 2009-05-31T22:21:03+00:00

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tieff

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tieff 2009-06-01T13:58:02+00:00

No problem, exsept:

[Hard]
01:12:99 (3) - Clap here.
01:13:875 - Clap.
01:20:05 (3) - Clap.
01:20:493 - Clap.
01:23:58 (3) - Clap.
01:24:022 - Clap.

Starred.

Alace

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Alace 2009-06-01T14:51:27+00:00

i think offset is late
try offset 7244
everything is good
you need a bat pro at timing to rank this
shoot a star

anonymous_old

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anonymous_old 2009-06-01T20:42:24+00:00

General
Resnap timing sections.
Really love your storyboard and use of kiai. (Your kiai is very unique here! I love it.)

Easy
Decrease Overall Difficulty.
Decrease Stack Leniency so 01:16:94 (6,2) do not stack.
Last timing section not needed.

No real issues here other than my preference of combos...
00:12:09 (3) - Replace under the slider.
00:24:89 (5) - New combo?
00:31:94 (6) - New combo?
00:33:71 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:28:42 (5) - New combo.

Hard
HP drain rate?! Are you serious? O_o
Recheck your vertical and horizontal sliders and make sure they're perfectly strait.

Only major problem I see is with sliders not stacking.

00:18:49 (3) - Move over (4).
00:20:69 (9) - Move under (8).
00:21:14 (10) - Move under (9) after above.
00:41:21 (7) - Move under (6). Other sliders are fine so move them with.
00:45:40 (9) - Move under (8).
01:08:12 (5) - Move under (4).
01:18:93 (5) - Move under (4).
01:21:80 (2) - Move under (1).
01:22:24 (3) - Move under (2).
01:31:06 (3) - Move under (2).
01:31:94 (1) - Move under (4).
01:31:94 (1,1) - wat.

EDIT:
00:49:15 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:49:59 (3) - New combo.

Mogsy

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Mogsy 2009-06-04T18:26:27+00:00

Blanket statement:
No hitsound type established?

Easy:
Definitely make more the hitsounds a bit more varied. In this case, the Finish sound is very overused, and it has its moments, but a lot of phrases could deal with Claps instead of Finishes. If you'd like me to go more in depth, I'd be glad to, just tell me.

Hard:
-00:01:06 (1) - This could benefit from a Whistle.
-00:05:03 (1) - This could benefit from a normal Finish.
-00:22:24 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:22:68 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-Repeat those last two points for the following beats:
-00:23:12 (2)
-00:23:56 (1)
-00:25:33 (1)
-00:25:77 (2)
-00:26:21 (1)
-00:26:65 (2)
-00:27:09 (1)
-00:27:53 (2)
-00:29:30 (3)
-00:29:74 (1)
-00:30:18 (2)
-00:30:62 (1)
-00:31:06 (2)
-00:31:50 (1)
-00:31:94 (2)
-00:32:39 (1)
-00:32:83 (2)
-00:33:27 (1)
-00:33:71 (2)
-00:24:00 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:24:89 (4) - ^
Overall, I'm going to say the same thing about this that I said about Easy: this would benefit from hitsound variety.

Popping the bubble due to these problems across the board. I didn't get too into specifics as far as hitsounds go, since it IS your map. I'd just think that variety would improve this.

[DBF]

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[DBF] 2009-06-04T20:46:41+00:00

Update.

Mogsy

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Mogsy 2009-06-04T22:53:53+00:00

Easy:
-00:51:361 to 01:09:008 needs hitsounds.
-01:11:214 onwards, you seemed to ignore my advice again. Fix this.
-01:31:50 (5) - Finish goes here.
Otherwise, it's fine.

Hard:
What I suggested for it was bastardized (IE you took absolutely NONE of what I said and pretty much screwed it up). Fix it CORRECTLY this time. I apologize for being harsh, but that will get it done.

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vytalibus 2009-06-07T19:58:58+00:00

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[DBF]

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[DBF] 2009-06-08T00:55:45+00:00

vytalibus wrote:
Call me soft, but I'm bubbling this.

:O i like you,vytalibus. <3

Last edited by [DBF] 2010-02-03T20:32:01+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

[DBF]

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[DBF] 2009-06-08T01:13:31+00:00

Mogsworth's fixes done.

Mogsy

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Mogsy 2009-06-08T13:48:09+00:00

[DBF] wrote:
Mogsworth's fixes done.

You're kidding, right?
Download: BanYa - Phantom ([DBF]) [Hard].osu

Yes, I'm still popping it. Why? Because Hard needs to have a less boring array of hitsounds.

What do I mean? There are sections entirely without hitsounds, there are sections that call for claps, you WAY overuse finishes...that sort of stuff.

[DBF]

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[DBF] 2009-06-08T14:41:41+00:00

Mogsworth wrote:
[DBF] wrote:
Mogsworth's fixes done.
You're kidding, right?
[attachment=0:add00]BanYa - Phantom ([DBF]) [Hard].osu[/attachment:add00]

Yes, I'm still popping it. Why? Because Hard needs to have a less boring array of hitsounds.

What do I mean? There are sections entirely without hitsounds, there are sections that call for claps, you WAY overuse finishes...that sort of stuff.

Done.

deepsea

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deepsea 2009-06-10T17:09:27+00:00

See nothing wrong, take the teletubby bubble.

Mogsy

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Mogsy 2009-06-11T23:30:20+00:00

Hard:
-The section starting at 00:07:24 (1) - It's best to do the hitsounds here as if you were doing them at the section starting at 01:10:77 (1) as well.
-00:35:03 (4) - Add a Finish.
-00:50:47 (2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - This entire section needs hitsounds. Add them.
-01:10:77 (1) - Add a Finish.

Fix and I'll rank.

[DBF]

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[DBF] 2009-06-12T11:28:50+00:00

Mogsworth wrote:
Hard:
-The section starting at 00:07:24 (1) - It's best to do the hitsounds here as if you were doing them at the section starting at 01:10:77 (1) as well.
-00:35:03 (4) - Add a Finish.
-00:50:47 (2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - This entire section needs hitsounds. Add them.
-01:10:77 (1) - Add a Finish.

Fix and I'll rank.

Thanks for fix's,done.