A contract to be fulfilled as exchange of mod.
Song: Aimer with chelly (EGOIST) - ninelie (REDSHiFT x Vesuvia Remix) (Alsty-)
Note:
• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I do not bite rawr.
• If I suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, dont forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.
[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
AiMod:
• 192kbps audio bitrate is a must, fix the mp3.
Column:
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4K - |1|2|3|4|
[Hyper Koutetsujou]
SPOILER
OD HP are quite high despite its hyper.
Suggesting: OD 7.5 | HP 7.5
00:02:683 (2683|1,2851|0,3020|1,3188|3) - I think it is better if this is the stair patterned or alternate stair one because of that stair changing pitch. Suggesting: http://puu.sh/qhokH/b2a1a7e9fa.png which fits along with the 00:03:357 (3357|0,3526|2,3694|1,3863|3) - . If accepted, you can use it as well on the other similar sounds after.
00:09:424 (9424|1) - move to 1 different pitch than 00:09:087 (9087|1) -
00:10:267 (10267|2,10436|1,10604|0) - ctrl H which fits more for the pitch going low and gives a clear vision before the LNs.
00:21:559 - until 00:22:908 - It is better to put LNs here as it has more long sounds and even stronger long sound than 00:10:773 (10773|2,11110|1,11447|0,11784|3) -
00:27:964 (27964|2) - move to 4 for the violin-like sound pitch shift
00:48:188 (48188|1) - would be better if its on column 3 for better execution of 00:48:526 (48526|0,48694|0,48863|0,49031|0) -
00:49:368 - suggesting: http://puu.sh/qhoyo/90c0b153b7.png for the percussion roll = stairs, and doubles on 2|3 as it differs on pitch than 00:47:177 (47177|1,47177|0,47683|0,47683|1) -
00:51:896 (51896|3,52065|2,52233|1,52402|0) - feels awkward as it doesn't actually follows any long sound within 1/2 measures. Would be better if you follow the vocal + the bass synth at the background which will be something like this: http://puu.sh/qhoHl/c4624f5e0a.jpg
01:00:997 (60997|0) - move to 3 to give a better view for 01:01:334 (61334|1,61503|0,61503|1,61672|1,61672|0) - also to avoid eerie feeling for left hand. If applied, might as well 01:01:334 (61334|1) - move to 1 for more comfortable execution.
01:08:919 (68919|1,69003|0) - I suggest to swap column so it can be 1 , 2 , 3|4 This will make the current phase more comfortable to players. Apply it as well for: 01:09:256 (69256|2,69340|3,69593|1,69677|0,69930|2,70014|3) -
01:18:694 (78694|0) - you can change this to LN until 01:19:200 - but with that, you need to rearrange 01:19:200 (79200|2,79200|0) -
01:28:469 (88469|0,88469|1) - ctrl H for more comfortable pattern.
02:17:514 - add note to 4 here, since same sound as previous notes. Also it won't be hard to shift to 3|4 and 1|2 since its on 1/2 measure line (red and white).
02:18:863 (138863|0,138947|1,139031|3,139115|2,139200|1,139284|0,139368|2,139452|3,139537|0,139621|1,139705|2,139790|3,139874|2,139958|1,140042|0,140127|1) - The snap should be 1/3 and must be fixed immediately
02:20:211 - until 02:21:559 - much better if there's an LN for that loud long sound effect.
03:52:739 (232739|2) - remove sudden double here without additional instrument. It should be atleast at 03:52:908 - since there's a "yeah" vocal similar to 03:52:233 (232233|0,232233|1) -
Suggesting: OD 7.5 | HP 7.5
00:02:683 (2683|1,2851|0,3020|1,3188|3) - I think it is better if this is the stair patterned or alternate stair one because of that stair changing pitch. Suggesting: http://puu.sh/qhokH/b2a1a7e9fa.png which fits along with the 00:03:357 (3357|0,3526|2,3694|1,3863|3) - . If accepted, you can use it as well on the other similar sounds after.
00:09:424 (9424|1) - move to 1 different pitch than 00:09:087 (9087|1) -
00:10:267 (10267|2,10436|1,10604|0) - ctrl H which fits more for the pitch going low and gives a clear vision before the LNs.
00:21:559 - until 00:22:908 - It is better to put LNs here as it has more long sounds and even stronger long sound than 00:10:773 (10773|2,11110|1,11447|0,11784|3) -
00:27:964 (27964|2) - move to 4 for the violin-like sound pitch shift
00:48:188 (48188|1) - would be better if its on column 3 for better execution of 00:48:526 (48526|0,48694|0,48863|0,49031|0) -
00:49:368 - suggesting: http://puu.sh/qhoyo/90c0b153b7.png for the percussion roll = stairs, and doubles on 2|3 as it differs on pitch than 00:47:177 (47177|1,47177|0,47683|0,47683|1) -
00:51:896 (51896|3,52065|2,52233|1,52402|0) - feels awkward as it doesn't actually follows any long sound within 1/2 measures. Would be better if you follow the vocal + the bass synth at the background which will be something like this: http://puu.sh/qhoHl/c4624f5e0a.jpg
01:00:997 (60997|0) - move to 3 to give a better view for 01:01:334 (61334|1,61503|0,61503|1,61672|1,61672|0) - also to avoid eerie feeling for left hand. If applied, might as well 01:01:334 (61334|1) - move to 1 for more comfortable execution.
01:08:919 (68919|1,69003|0) - I suggest to swap column so it can be 1 , 2 , 3|4 This will make the current phase more comfortable to players. Apply it as well for: 01:09:256 (69256|2,69340|3,69593|1,69677|0,69930|2,70014|3) -
01:18:694 (78694|0) - you can change this to LN until 01:19:200 - but with that, you need to rearrange 01:19:200 (79200|2,79200|0) -
01:28:469 (88469|0,88469|1) - ctrl H for more comfortable pattern.
02:17:514 - add note to 4 here, since same sound as previous notes. Also it won't be hard to shift to 3|4 and 1|2 since its on 1/2 measure line (red and white).
02:18:863 (138863|0,138947|1,139031|3,139115|2,139200|1,139284|0,139368|2,139452|3,139537|0,139621|1,139705|2,139790|3,139874|2,139958|1,140042|0,140127|1) - The snap should be 1/3 and must be fixed immediately
02:20:211 - until 02:21:559 - much better if there's an LN for that loud long sound effect.
03:52:739 (232739|2) - remove sudden double here without additional instrument. It should be atleast at 03:52:908 - since there's a "yeah" vocal similar to 03:52:233 (232233|0,232233|1) -
[Another Kabaneri]
SPOILER
Suggestind OD 8 | HP 8
00:10:773 (10773|0,10815|1,10857|2,10899|3,10941|0,10983|1,11026|2,11068|3,11110|0,11152|1,11194|2,11236|3,11278|0,11320|1,11363|2,11405|3,11447|0,11489|1,11531|3,11573|2,11615|0,11658|1,11700|3,11742|2,11784|1,11826|0,11868|3,11910|2,11952|1,11995|0,12037|3,12079|2,12121|1) - The right snap is only 1/4 for the violin-like sound. 1/8 is too much. Must be fixed.
00:47:177 (47177|0,47177|1,47683|3,47683|2,48188|1,48188|0) - These LNs length are not snapped on 1/2 measure lines. Same with the upcoming LNs of Synthesizers, Must be fixed.
00:48:652 (48652|3,48652|2,48820|1,48820|0,48989|0,48989|1) - These doubles are not snapped on the 1/2 measure lines as well. Correct them and must be immediately fixed.
02:18:947 (138947|1,138947|0,139073|0,139073|1,139200|3,139200|2,139284|0,139284|1,139410|3,139410|2,139537|1,139537|0,139621|2,139621|3,139705|1,139705|0,139832|2,139832|3,139958|1,139958|0,140084|2,140084|3) - same as Hyper, the notes should be at 1/3 snap.
03:10:099 - until 03:31:672 - you might want to buff/add more notes in this time section as it is really easy for the last difficulty not to mention its intense and fast part of the song. You can note for the 1/4 hihat and map every 1/2 red lines with singles. Your choice~
03:55:773 - add note to 1 or even at 4 since final sound is stronger than 03:55:604 (235604|2,235604|1) -
00:10:773 (10773|0,10815|1,10857|2,10899|3,10941|0,10983|1,11026|2,11068|3,11110|0,11152|1,11194|2,11236|3,11278|0,11320|1,11363|2,11405|3,11447|0,11489|1,11531|3,11573|2,11615|0,11658|1,11700|3,11742|2,11784|1,11826|0,11868|3,11910|2,11952|1,11995|0,12037|3,12079|2,12121|1) - The right snap is only 1/4 for the violin-like sound. 1/8 is too much. Must be fixed.
00:47:177 (47177|0,47177|1,47683|3,47683|2,48188|1,48188|0) - These LNs length are not snapped on 1/2 measure lines. Same with the upcoming LNs of Synthesizers, Must be fixed.
00:48:652 (48652|3,48652|2,48820|1,48820|0,48989|0,48989|1) - These doubles are not snapped on the 1/2 measure lines as well. Correct them and must be immediately fixed.
02:18:947 (138947|1,138947|0,139073|0,139073|1,139200|3,139200|2,139284|0,139284|1,139410|3,139410|2,139537|1,139537|0,139621|2,139621|3,139705|1,139705|0,139832|2,139832|3,139958|1,139958|0,140084|2,140084|3) - same as Hyper, the notes should be at 1/3 snap.
03:10:099 - until 03:31:672 - you might want to buff/add more notes in this time section as it is really easy for the last difficulty not to mention its intense and fast part of the song. You can note for the 1/4 hihat and map every 1/2 red lines with singles. Your choice~
03:55:773 - add note to 1 or even at 4 since final sound is stronger than 03:55:604 (235604|2,235604|1) -
[Overall]
Really nice song pick~ Thank you for the M4M and Goodluck~