Hi,as ur req)
[General]
delete the useless redline, only remain the first is enough.
[Easy]
01:13:479 (4,5,1,2,3) - im kinda worry if these notes too close for beginner
03:38:661 (1,2) - seems a little hard for read
04:25:328 (3) - should end at the next white tick( 04:26:068
i don't really good at with Easy diff, so a short mod.
[Normal]
the NC changes too frequently, i consider to use it every 8 bits
00:59:960 - the song do have sound here, i dont know why you skip it,add a not or try this
rhythm,does it feel better?
01:01:442 - ^ same as here
01:04:404 - ^
... and so on
01:43:108 (2) - this slider cover the follow notes, its unrankable ,separate them
01:03:108 (2,3,1,2,3,1) - the flow like this is too shape for this diff, try to make curve or obtuse angle
01:53:108 (2,3) - this flow also shape for players this level, try to clockwise it 60° will more fine.
02:55:514 (2,1) - dont suggest to put stack like this
03:28:105 (3) - miss notes, they are several 1/4 beats here
03:50:513 (1,2,1,2,1) - the rhythm here is wrong,you can try
this03:52:365 (3) - wrong rhythm, slider should start like
this04:00:143 (3) - better use two 1/2 sliders or 2notes + 1/2 slider instead.
[Hard]
00:28:294 (1,2) - too close, same here. dont rly get whats ur point.
00:32:183 (6,7,1) - balance the DS, dont suggest change DS so many times in hard,at last u should keep one DS in a part of music.
01:00:701 (9,1) - too far
01:00:145 (5,6,7,8,9) - there are 1/4 stream here,why u put like this
01:03:108 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^
01:43:386 - miss beat here , same as 01:46:349 - ,01:49:312 - ,01:52:275 -
02:14:219 (6) - end it 1/4 beat early
02:29:959 (1,2,3) - stack them?
03:51:254 (1) - end it 1/4 beat early
03:57:920 (3,4,5,6,1,2,1,1,1,1,1) - try to do some other pattern, a lot long 1/4 reverse sliders will boring.
[lunatic]
01:00:516 - miss sound here,add notes or u fix ur hitsouds for ur own rhythm , emphasis should at the second note.
01:29:034 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - NC spam here
01:37:923 (1,2,3) - too close?
02:16:442 (1) - claps here are too noisy, remove them
03:34:772 (6,7) - too close,hard to read
03:44:587 (3) - suggest to map the sound here, emphasis should not on the tail of slider
[Feast]
01:50:145 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - lel?
01:54:960 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - why do the pattern its not fit music
03:00:514 (13) - its 1/8 here
03:01:717 (2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - i cant read this
03:16:809 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - its rly confuse to read this
03:29:679 (7,1) - no need to stack them,the music coherent here
03:43:476 (5) - NC mb better
04:02:365 (1) - As the music back to soft,u should also reduce the difficulty.
I see someone blame about the map quality. im an old player and have seen all kinds of style.I think its not about if it is an old style map, as long as the rhythm and pattern fit the music, it will be ok.
Pls consider which i point out,and the same problem in the same rhythm if it has
No one starts like a talent in mapping, keep working on it, u will improve a lot) GL!