Yeah, too bad another Necrofantasia map got ranked before this one. I know what it's like (DJPop and his Taboo Tears You Up map. Derp).
Oh well, let's make this one better than that one, even if I haven't seen that one yet.
- Timing looks perfect to me
- I don't think "Theme" and "Stage 7" should be in the tags. I know why you put them in there, but I think they are too vague to be good tags.
- The skin seems to have elements from Cyclone's touhou skin, but it doesn't use the hitcircles? I would've put the hitcircles in as well, but I guess the reason they are not in there is because you don't like them.
- Your comboburst is too wide. The maximum size is the size of the comboburst from the standard skin, which is 388x787, while yours is 460x640. Can you shrink the burst down so it fits the max size?
- The comboburst is facing the wrong way too, I think. Right now it faces away from the screen when it appears. Can you flip it horizontally so it looks in the right direction?
[LRJ'S EASY] (The guy who had his own map for this song still made a difficulty? Hmm)
Seems pretty solid. Maybe there is too many 1/4 streams, but it's alright.
01:33:510 (3) - Remove this beat? Feels somewhat more natural without it imo.
[NORMAL]Well done. Yeah, It overlaps a lot, but it plays very well I think.
[WMF'S TAIKOFANTASIA]
I can't say I liked this. Your patterns felt way too random for me, and very little seemed to make sense. I'm not a taiko god, but I'm an avid Taiko player, and I don't really like this one.
[LUNATIC]You really could have mapped to the chorus better in this one. I can see where you did map to, but where you could have put some awesome long sliders, you put constant 1/4 beats (e.g at 01:14:851 (5,6,7,8)). Maybe keep that in mind, even though I think that's just how I would map it.00:09:180 (1,2,3,4) - Remove these jumps? I don't quite like them. I can't see how they fit into the music so they end up feeling random.
00:39:729 (1,2) - ^ Same with these, even though they are not quite as bad, but they're not great either.
00:41:193 (4,5) - ^
02:36:437 (4,5) - Was this intentional? I don't think it was, since this feels like a jump that shouldn't be there. Could you close that gap?
[NEETFANTASIA]01:17:778 (3,4,5) - Remove these jumps too? I didn't really like these either. They just come out of nowhere and don't seem to be mapped to anything. Adding jumps for jumps sake doesn't work well imo.
02:07:534 (1,2,3,4) - ^ (as nice as they look, I don't think they play as well as that)
It seems alright, but the harder-end difficulties are a bit hit-and-miss. The easier difficulties are very nice, and even though the harder ones aren't too bad, they felt a bit too overmapped for my tastes.
Starred