Sakura Hana wrote:

Please take in mind that some of theese errors are suggestions not directions, feel free to take or leave anything or edit as you see fit.

[osz File Scan!]
BG name is too big, try using a different name of something simpler like BG.jpg or something then editing the name in the osu files accordingly. I've renamed it BG.jpg
star.png isnt needed for a custom beatmap skin, this is used only to show the star rating of a map in the beatmap listing. Deleted
Did you ask cyclone for permission to use his skin elements? Yes ^^

[General]
Pure white combo color hurts the eyes, specially during kiai, i recommend you change it. I've changed it to grey, it should be fine now

[Neetfantasia]
What's with all the semi-curvy sliders? for example: 00:04:963 (2), 00:05:878 (6), 00:06:427 (1), 00:07:890 (4), 00:08:439 (6), and many others, you should try to make smoother curves outta them or just make them linear instead. For example theese:

SPOILER

Doesnt take too mcuh effort =/
00:08:439 (6,2) - (6) is partially overlapping (2) can you rearrange them? overlaps tend to look ugly.
02:38:256 (1) - Would look better if the curve angle was on the opposite side.

I'll catch Neethime IG

[Hard]
Imo this is a Hard+
00:39:719 (1,2) - Could look better curved like for example:

SPOILER

01:13:378 (1) - This could also use more work, here's a suggestion:

SPOILER

02:23:622 (1,2,3,4) - wth spacing? O_O (1) seems too close to (2)

Everything is fixed

[Normal]
00:19:414 (1) - Out of bounds.

Fix'd

[Easy]
Why is the kiai time here longer? You should probably end it at 01:36:792 which is where all the other diffs end their kiai.
01:10:451 (4) - Out of bounds.
01:30:939 (1) - ^

LRJ should have fixed everything

Well that's all i could find, i may recheck this later for a star

Sakura Hana wrote:

Ok rechecking.

[General]
Gray combo color can cause confusion during tag play in multiplayer.

Combo1 : 103,56,146
Combo2 : 255,150,100
Combo3 : 254,210,107
Combo4 : 252,125,122

Sakura Hana wrote:

Ok rechecking.

[General]
Gray combo color can cause confusion during tag play in multiplayer.

Fixed now, thank you lovhin456 !

[Timing]
I just noticed that your offset seems to be off, -10 ms please, also it seems to be half a beat off, meaning the metronome ticks on silences and the drum seems to be right in between them at the start, this of course means that, that drum must be the main beat a.k.a the white ticks, not the red.

Fixed

Neetfantasia
Looks alright now.

[Lunatic]
I think it could use higher approach rate. I should raise it by 1 or 2 ?
Otherwise it looks ok

[wmf's Taikofantasia]
[...]
Fix'd by wmf :)

[Normal]
Looks fine now

[LRJ's Easy]
[...]
LRJ will fix that

EDIT : Fix'd


Ok that's about it, PM In-game once again for a recheck after you've fixed the stuff, still not good enough for me to give it a star

lovhin456 wrote:

Use this instead then:

Combo1 : 103,56,146
Combo2 : 255,150,100
Combo3 : 254,210,107
Combo4 : 252,125,122

+ add wmfchris to tags

aabc271 wrote:

Hi~
Here is my taiko mod~
Mod request by wmfchris

[...]

Magicphoenix wrote:

Gogogo get it ranked =D

manten wrote:

nice fight!

karenying wrote:

Fight69, I love your map><

• Lol bookmarks going out of the timing bar.
  Shouldn't you add another tag saying "_LRJ_" since "LRJ" is not the full username?

• .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  02:15:583 (2) - move two squares down

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Use some more Finish hitsounds at the first part too?
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  01:24:912 (1) - intentionally unstacked?

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  Use some more Finish hitsounds at the first part too?
  .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
  00:09:180 (5) - new combo?
  00:54:729 (2,3) - hardly readable, this change of spacing doesn't fit since it's the only one you used.

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  I think this map kicks ass using Circle Size Normal.

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  As far as i can see, no problems.

Drafura wrote:

[LRJ's Easy]
00:55:827 (2,3,4) - I think this should sounds better using "normal" HS on sliders starts notes, then maybe lower one point the whistle volume (hate this HS but sounds pretty good here just a bit loud for me).
01:06:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

[Normal]
01:10:461 (3,4,5) - Use finish
02:36:620 - Try this :

I think the 2 reverse slider is kinda weird here but this way is more natural for me

[Lunatic]
00:06:802 (9) - Here I found this slider more natural using speed x2 and start end :

01:38:266 (5,6,7) - Think you should use the three same sliders the fast one or the slow one.

[NeetFantasia]
Seems good for me.

adam5396 wrote:

Star'd

lepidopodus wrote:

Ok, as the owner of the mapset requested, I modded Taiko map.
Basically these are all suggestions cause there are no signifficant problems.

Wmf's Taikofantasia
Well, someone mentioned about 999. This song is almost 3 minutes long so I don't care about that.
Wow, I can see quite hard and long streams. (Oh, it's just my feeling about patterns so never mind XD)
00:10:095 (46) - k? (a.k.a add whistle or clap?)
00:10:278 (X) - If you fixed 00:10:095 (46), how about adding d(a.k.a normal note)
00:19:241 (103,104,105,106) - How about k k d k or k k k d? --- seems weird
01:21:802 (39,40,41,42,43) - How about k d d k? (so there's no note in 01:22:168 if you do this)
01:29:394 (84,85) - How about deleting these?
01:32:229 (97,98) - How about change 97 to k and deleting 98? --- I think it's fine
01:34:241 (106 ~ 110) - How about moving this to 01:34:059 and add a note in 01:34:790?
01:40:095 (155) - How about d?
01:41:193 (162,163) - How about deleting these? ---I think it's fine
02:05:705 (325) - How about k?
02:43:937 (574) - How about k?

As I mentioned, these are all suggestions. So do not take this too serious. Anyway, Have a star...

1. Timing looks perfect to me
2. I don't think "Theme" and "Stage 7" should be in the tags. I know why you put them in there, but I think they are too vague to be good tags.
3. The skin seems to have elements from Cyclone's touhou skin, but it doesn't use the hitcircles? I would've put the hitcircles in as well, but I guess the reason they are not in there is because you don't like them.
4. Your comboburst is too wide. The maximum size is the size of the comboburst from the standard skin, which is 388x787, while yours is 460x640. Can you shrink the burst down so it fits the max size?
5. The comboburst is facing the wrong way too, I think. Right now it faces away from the screen when it appears. Can you flip it horizontally so it looks in the right direction?

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi ~
I wanted to try my luck with a spinner set :3
http://www.mediafire.com/?9fuw6g33z22gbfv
Feel free to use or not :3 also you're missing the score-x and score-percent, also if you do use this spinner set then add the spinner-osu, spinner-spin and spinner-clear of the touhou skin by cyclone :3

Cyclone wrote:

.................My skin doesn't have any of those.

Cyclone wrote:

The fonts are actually sprites from Scarlet Weather Rhapsody.

Doomsday wrote:

Yeah, too bad another Necrofantasia map got ranked before this one. I know what it's like (DJPop and his Taboo Tears You Up map. Derp).
Oh well, let's make this one better than that one, even if I haven't seen that one yet.

1. Timing looks perfect to me
2. I don't think "Theme" and "Stage 7" should be in the tags. I know why you put them in there, but I think they are too vague to be good tags. Fix'd
3. The skin seems to have elements from Cyclone's touhou skin, but it doesn't use the hitcircles? I would've put the hitcircles in as well, but I guess the reason they are not in there is because you don't like them. Yeah, I don't like them very much... ._.
4. Your comboburst is too wide. The maximum size is the size of the comboburst from the standard skin, which is 388x787, while yours is 460x640. Can you shrink the burst down so it fits the max size? I've uploaded another combo burst, should, also, the maximum size is 500x767, not 388x787 xD ( http://puu.sh/e7H )
5. The comboburst is facing the wrong way too, I think. Right now it faces away from the screen when it appears. Can you flip it horizontally so it looks in the right direction?

I've changed the combo burst, so it's fixed

[LRJ'S EASY] (The guy who had his own map for this song still made a difficulty? Hmm)

Seems pretty solid. Maybe there is too many 1/4 streams, but it's alright.

01:33:510 (3) - Remove this beat? Feels somewhat more natural without it imo. Fix'd

[NORMAL]

Well done. Yeah, It overlaps a lot, but it plays very well I think.

[WMF'S TAIKOFANTASIA]

I can't say I liked this. Your patterns felt way too random for me, and very little seemed to make sense. I'm not a taiko god, but I'm an avid Taiko player, and I don't really like this one.

[LUNATIC]

You really could have mapped to the chorus better in this one. I can see where you did map to, but where you could have put some awesome long sliders, you put constant 1/4 beats (e.g at 01:14:851 (5,6,7,8)). Maybe keep that in mind, even though I think that's just how I would map it.

00:09:180 (1,2,3,4) - Remove these jumps? I don't quite like them. I can't see how they fit into the music so they end up feeling random. Fix'd
00:39:729 (1,2) - ^ Same with these, even though they are not quite as bad, but they're not great either.
00:41:193 (4,5) - ^
02:36:437 (4,5) - Was this intentional? I don't think it was, since this feels like a jump that shouldn't be there. Could you close that gap?

Everything should be ok here ^^

[NEETFANTASIA]

[...]

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi ~
I wanted to try my luck with a spinner set :3
http://www.mediafire.com/?9fuw6g33z22gbfv
Feel free to use or not :3 also you're missing the score-x and score-percent, also if you do use this spinner set then add the spinner-osu, spinner-spin and spinner-clear of the touhou skin by cyclone :3

fartownik wrote:

[Easy]

01:06:071 (1,2) - Oh, cool, whistles, but they're out of place and it doesn't seem that they were used anywhere else in the map so why use them in this part? Fix'd

[Neetfantasia]

[...]

[Lunatic]

01:38:632 (6) - Confusing hidden slider repeat, replace. Fix'd


Thass all, starred.

yaya wrote:

[Neet]
01:48:510 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/27918

hm others fine

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- NeetFantasia:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  I think this map kicks ass using Circle Size Normal.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- NeetFantasia:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  I think this map kicks ass using Circle Size Normal.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- NeetFantasia:

• .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  I think this map kicks ass using Circle Size Normal.

Fight69 wrote:

Well, I haven't used Circle Size Normal, because I hate small circles and it was in "Opinion", so I've thought "I think it's fine like that" since I hate them, but I've never thought this will be so important... :/

Odaril wrote:

THAT SPINNER. I could absolutely not see my cursor while spinning. It made me miss and fail on Neetfantasia.

lovhin456 wrote:

Odaril wrote:

THAT SPINNER. I could absolutely not see my cursor while spinning. It made me miss and fail on Neetfantasia.

You mean, you couldn't see where your cursor was when spinning because the cursor blend with the spinner-circle ?? That's weird because the spinner-circle has dark colors while the cursor is a blue, not to bright but you can notice it very easily.

Odaril wrote:

I spin extremely close to the center of the screen, and pretty fast, so I can't see the cursor in detail, and by the time I actually spot it, it's too late.
I was not blaming the spinner, anyway. This is a problem I had, thus, other people might have had it too, so I thought it could be a good idea to point it out.