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Alice
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Alice
irc: offset fix, tags

La easy de AgentYous est vraiment mauvaise, désolée. OK un easy c'est ennuyant mais là c'est carrément constitué de rien, je pense même pas que quelque chose comme ça peut être rankée. Si tu as trop de mal avec les easy, on fait une collab enitèrement, je peux te faire une Easy et une Lunatic, et tu t'occupes de la Normal et de la Hard. Mais là désolée, à moins qu'il la change carrément et qu'il se décide à faire quelque chose de correcte ça va pas. Si y'a besoin d'expliquer d'avantage je le ferais, pour le moment je dis ce que je vois hein.

Hard
00:04:029 (5) - Nouveau combo.
00:06:224 (10) - Nouveau combo.
00:09:151 (6) - Nouveau combo.
00:10:432 (9,10,11) - Pattern assez laid, et pas super lisible non plus en plus de ça. >_<
00:15:736 (6) - Nouveau combo.
00:19:029 (6) - Nouveau combo.
00:23:053 (6) - Jump? C'est particulièrement boring, faut l'admettre, cette musique est entrainante, je trouve.
00:37:504 (4,5,6,7) - Je suis pas très fane de ce que tu as fait là ;/ trouve un truc plus fun à jouer et qui sonne mieux? Dans toutes les musiques où y'a des bruits éloignés du genre y'a toujours quelque chose à faire entre ces deux bruits.
00:40:431 (3,4,5,6) -
00:46:742 (1) - ce spinner doit commencer à 00:47:016.
00:58:540 (1) - ce spinner doit commencer à 00:58:723.
Le kiai est trooop long, et ne correspond plus après 02:00:002
Tu dois couper le .mp3. Je comprends que mapper du ZUN c'chiant parce qu'au milieu du .mp3 y'a juste une pauvre répétition, mais faut surtout pas la laisser en plan comme ça, faut soit la mapper si on est courageux, soit faire du C/C mais c'est le mal et ça rendra ta map à chier <: (enfin pas tout le temps mais quand c'est des grosses parties c/c comme ça sérieux.. ;/) soit tu delete.
La meilleure solution reste de delete je trouve.


Dans l'ensemble, la [Hard] est pas trop mal, ça manque cruellement de patterns interessants mais bon, tu ne m'as pas l'air d'être un mappeur experimenté (je ne le suis pas non plus) alors ça arrive tout le temps.. Essaie de faire quelques petits jumps peut être, au niveau des sliders si tu veux toujours qu'il y ait une pointe de facilité... M'fin.
Star, bon début. (sauf pour la easy désolée D: )
AgentYous
131 posts
Joined February 2010
AgentYous
juste en dessous ma wifi a doublé mon post donc je reecris sur le meme post :cry:
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AgentYous
131 posts
Joined February 2010
AgentYous
Bon j'ai refaite la map
Fight69 la prochine fois fait une normal comme ca je sais combien de note faut mettre

Ca devrait etre bon la :|

Download: ZUN - Necrofantasia (Fight69) [AgentYous's Easy].osu
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AdRon Zh3Ro
916 posts
Joined August 2009
AdRon Zh3Ro
Hmm.
[*]you can change
[>>]you need to change
I think offset is 170.(resnap later)
Don't start a slider or cirlce right after a spiner, and then put it at extremely far from the center. it's very terrible to play and ain't funny.
Follow the rythm more clearly.
Use more hitsounds.
i don't like jumps but well......

*change the offset an then i'll do further moding.

[Hard]
*21:583/ Don't do that. It's not good to play.
>>1:19:661/ Spacing.
>>1:19:884/ ^
>>1:20:209/ ^
>>1:22:770/ ^
>>1:37:953/ ^
>>1:45:086/ ^
>>2:42:707/ ^
Yuji Tokaji
776 posts
Joined March 2009
Yuji Tokaji
Star~
Lemon Water_old
199 posts
Joined March 2010
Lemon Water_old
oh yes.
Fraolinch
577 posts
Joined November 2009
Fraolinch
C'est parti pour un ptit mod~

Cette couleur indique une suggestion.
Cette couleur signifie que tu pourrais faire comme indiqué.
Cette couleur signifie que tu dois faire comme indiqué.

AgentYous' Easy

Globalement la map est bien. Un peu plate peut-être. Mais c'est pas mal.

00:33:839 (1) - Aligne avec SHIFT.
00:45:546 (1,2,3) - Aligne avec SHIFT puis corrige la position de (4)
De 00:53:594 (1) - à 00:57:984 (6) - Pourquoi tant de finish ? Ça alourdi inutilement le son.
01:20:666 (7,8) - Spacing -> déplace une grille vers le haut, niveau 3.
01:19:203 (5) - New combo
01:22:130 (9) - ^
01:30:910 (5) - ^ + pourquoi pas un jump ?
01:42:617 (5) - New combo
01:44:812 (7,8) - Spacing -> déplace une grille vers le haut, niveau 3 (le c/c ça t'enlève du boulot, mais ça double les fautes).
01:45:544 (9) - New combo
01:51:397 (1) - Déplacement une grille vers la droite, niveau 3.
01:54:324 (5) - New combo
01:56:519 (8) - Alignement avec SHIFT.
02:10:421 (5) - ^
02:14:811 (5) - New combo
02:17:738 (9) - ^
02:38:225 (5) - ^
02:41:152 (9) - ^

Normal

Elle a l'air bien partie. J'aime bien sa structure globale. Une bonne [Normal].

00:30:912 (10) - New Combo
00:39:692 (11) - ^

Hard

Très bonne map. J'ai rien relevé de particulier. J'ai hâte que t'ajoute les HS :)
(un peu lourd à jouer par contre les spinners qui s'enchaîne rapidement sur des notes éloignées du centre).


Oh, et star~
Neethime
205 posts
Joined May 2010
Neethime
8-)

Download: Yukari's Theme - Necrofantasia.mp3
Neethime
205 posts
Joined May 2010
Neethime
8-) my diff completed,wish you could like it

Ah,one more thing

delete "theme" from tags

Source just be "Touhou"

You may add "Perfect Cherry Blossom" to tags if you like

Download: ZUN - Necrofantasia (Fight69) [Neetfantasia].osu
Fight69
1,639 posts
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Topic Starter
Fight69
Oh yeah !

Thanks you Neethime o/
Ekoro
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Joined March 2010
Ekoro
Ptit test de la diff "Neetfantasia"

Alors vu que je suis H Y P E R nul en mapping , j'dis rien.

Mon screenshot : ( Score satisfaisant , mais pas de Full Combo )

Scar
681 posts
Joined January 2009
Scar

Fight69 wrote:

SCAR EST UN GROS CONNARD ! BWAHAHAHAHAHA !!!
J'te bourre :3

Suggestions~

[Neet]

01:06:431 (2,3,4,5,2,3,4,5) - I don't like anti jump D:, but it's fine :>
01:09:357 (2,3,4,5) - a little unreadable imo
02:19:965 (3,4,5) - look weird
Cool diff' :3
I don't like Hitsounds, but I'm a bitch with hitsounds :>

[Mutsubite]
Oh pas fini o.o
KOM T NUL

[Hard]
01:19:235 (x) - ajoute une note
01:20:699 (x) - ^
01:22:162 (x) - ^
01:29:479 (x) - ^
01:30:942 (x) - ^
01:32:406 (x) - ^
01:41:186 (x) - ^
01:44:113 (x) - ^
01:45:576 (x) - ^
01:52:893 (x) - ^
01:54:356 (x) - ^
01:55:819 (x) - ^
02:05:697 (11) - allonge jusqu'au tick blanc avec un finish a la fin
02:07:526 (x) - Note en plus
02:08:990 (x) - ^
02:14:843 (x) - ^
02:18:868 (3) - allonge tick blanc
02:29:477 (x) - note
02:29:477 (x) - ^
02:30:940 (x) - ^
02:32:404 (x) - ^
02:38:257 (x) - ^
02:42:647 (x) - ^
Ajoute moi des HS o.o
Pour les ajout de notes la raison est que c'est chiant de pas repartir en 1/1 xD

[Normal]
Que dalle ici~
Sauf les HS :D

[AgentYous]
OMG OMG OMG
Please remove this fucking bad difficulty.
AgentYous is so retarded~


KOM T NUL LRJulien
Ekoro
3,522 posts
Joined March 2010
Ekoro
J'ai test toutes les diff^^
Screenshot ( Un petit bonus a la fin :D )

Bon j'ai pas de place , j'mets dans le post suivant ^^





Scar
681 posts
Joined January 2009
Scar

LRJulien wrote:

J'ai test toutes les diff^^
Screenshot ( Un petit bonus a la fin :D )

Bon j'ai pas de place , j'mets dans le post suivant ^^
T'es vraiment un attardé toi aussi ?
Les topics des maps servent pas à des spam comme ça.
Neethime
205 posts
Joined May 2010
Neethime
:D 02:19:965 (3,4,5) some placement change

And thanks for modding and test play :)

Download: ZUN - Necrofantasia (Fight69) [Neetfantasia].osu
AgentYous
131 posts
Joined February 2010
AgentYous
Tiens j'ai changé les cercles comme a dit Dagonpater

Mais je peux pas faire de Jumps pour une easy a mon goût.

Download: ZUN - Necrofantasia (Fight69) [AgentYous's Easy].osu
maay
410 posts
Joined September 2009
maay
[Normal]
00:17:957 (1, 2) 2 notes, what is this :o

(don't kd this, i'll come back when this is on pending :p)
star for now
Ekoro
3,522 posts
Joined March 2010
Ekoro
Bon j'vais mod. :)

[AgentYous's Easy]

00:32:375 ( 3,1 ) : C'est normal que le 3 et le 1 sont mal placés? Si oui , mets le sur la fin du Slider. ( 3 )
00:56:521 ( 4 ) : Spacing , décale 1 cran a gauche ( Grid level 3 )
01:06:765 ( 2 ) : Spacing , décale 1 cran a droite ( Grid level 3 )
01:10:972 ( 2,3 ) : Spacing , décale le 2 et le 3 | 1 cran en haut
01:14:081 ( 1 ) Encore Spacing , décale 2 crans en bas
01:52:129 ( 2,3 ) : Spacing , Décale le (2) et le (3) 1 cran a droite.

Voilà , que des erreurs de spacing :(

[Neetfantasia]

Rien a dire.
Fight69
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Topic Starter
Fight69

SuperMaay wrote:

[Normal]
00:17:957 (1, 2) 2 notes, what is this :o

(don't kd this, i'll come back when this is on pending :p)
star for now
Wtf ?! xD

Thank you for the star :D

LRJ wrote:

[AgentYous's Easy]

00:32:375 ( 3,1 ) : C'est normal que le 3 et le 1 sont mal placés? Si oui , mets le sur la fin du Slider. ( 3 ) Faut changer ca~
00:56:521 ( 4 ) : Spacing , décale 1 cran a gauche ( Grid level 3 ) Y a rien du tout -_-
01:06:765 ( 2 ) : Spacing , décale 1 cran a droite ( Grid level 3 ) Idem -_-
01:10:972 ( 2,3 ) : Spacing , décale le 2 et le 3 | 1 cran en haut Idem -_-
01:14:081 ( 1 ) Encore Spacing , décale 2 crans en bas Comment tu veut qu'il y ai une erreur de spacing ici ?! Y a un spinner juste avant... o.o
01:52:129 ( 2,3 ) : Spacing , Décale le (2) et le (3) 1 cran a droite. Y a rien du tout -_-

Voilà , que des erreurs de spacing C'est toi l'erreur xD
Mod bidon, pas de kudo
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Inozuma
596 posts
Joined June 2008
Inozuma
Hitsounds~
Download: ZUN - Necrofantasia (Fight69) [Hard].osu
Luvdic
2,113 posts
Joined July 2009
Luvdic
Neetfantasia

Stack leniency at minimum is unrankable as far as i know, so raise it.
01:08:992 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Not exactly a fan of these cause the 50/100/300's will cover the objects.... Although 01:10:455 (1,2,3) - may be okay

Hard:

Add preview time, preferably same a neetfantasia
Consider using lead time of 0.5 seconds like neetfantasia
Theres a bookmark point out of bounds >_>, you should delete it in with notepad cause i dont think you can inside of osu unless youre going to dleete all the bookmarks
00:06:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - These objects overlaps each others in a bad way, i suggest re arrange them, and make it look good. There are other parts that overlaps badly too, but not as bad as this part.
00:07:530 (7,8) - I usually dont mod distance spacing but this...
I dont really like the sudden change of difficulty at the start of the kiai time. I suggest to tone it down.
And also dont really like the over use of spinner at the end of the map. I suggest to reduce the use of them.

Normal:

Add preview time, preferably same a neetfantasia
Consider using lead time of 0.5 seconds like neetfantasia
Theres a bookmark point out of bounds >_>, you should delete it in with notepad cause i dont think you can inside of osu unless youre going to dleete all the bookmarks
I dont really like the over use of spinner at the end of the map specially for a "normal" difficulty. I suggest to reduce the use of them.

AgentYous:

Add preview time, preferably same a neetfantasia
Consider using lead time of 0.5 seconds like neetfantasia
Theres a bookmark point out of bounds >_>, you should delete it in with notepad cause i dont think you can inside of osu unless youre going to dleete all the bookmarks
01:10:423 (1,2,3) - I suggest to make the distance space between these objects even.
01:31:642 (2) - This object overlaps badly with scores... I suggest to move it away from it.

And btw, .osb file is still in there, delete it and do full submit.
I really enjoyed playing neetfantasia, so im only starring because of that difficulty >_>
Neethime
205 posts
Joined May 2010
Neethime
:D All fixed,thank you

Download: ZUN - Necrofantasia (Fight69) [Neetfantasia].osu
Ekoro
3,522 posts
Joined March 2010
Ekoro
Fight69 : Pourquoi tu m'as donné un kudo alors? XD
dvorak_old
294 posts
Joined February 2010
dvorak_old
as Lyby said, this song have 164.000 bpm at all point, 005 make enough difference at the end.
dNextGen
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dNextGen
8-)
Fight69
1,639 posts
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Topic Starter
Fight69

dvorak wrote:

as Lyby said, this song have 164.000 bpm at all point, 005 make enough difference at the end.
Whoops...>.>

@dNextGen : Thank you ! :)
Neethime
205 posts
Joined May 2010
Neethime
;)
Finally in pending now~ congratulations
Your [Hard] is much better than the previous version!Let me give you another star~
Fight69
1,639 posts
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Topic Starter
Fight69
Thank you so much Neethime ! :)
Zetsubou Sensei
295 posts
Joined December 2009
Zetsubou Sensei
Hey.

[LR Julien's Easy]
Overall Difficulty: -1
Unstack the notes that are stacked...they dont go well in easy.
Also, some notes are pretty close to when spinners end, this is tough for new players. I reccommend deleting some spinners, or moving some notes.

[Normal]
OMG 159 UNSNAPPED NOTES!! Fix these, make sure there properly on ticks!
00:54:359 (1) - extend this slider to end at 00:55:457
00:55:823 (2) - extend this slider to end at 00:56:920
02:00:213 (1) - extend this slider to end at 02:01:311
02:03:140 (4) - extend this slider to end at 02:04:237

[Hard]
Overall Difficulty: -1
Slider Velocity is to fast. Lower it and remap this difficulty.
^ Until done so...I won't mod this diff.

[Neetfantasia]
337 UNSNAPPED NOTES!!! FIX THEM!!
...


There still seems to be alot of problems with this map...Fix up as much as you can...Then contact me again (PM or In-game)

No Star ....For now...
ElecoR
67 posts
Joined March 2009
ElecoR
☆☆good☆star☆☆
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
Easy
01:13:750 (2,3) 1 grid right? (grid lv3)
Normal
00:47:408 (1) start 00:47:225 ??
Hard
01:50:701 (10) 1 grid left?
Neetfantasia
01:13:748 (1,2,3) spacing
01:21:430 (5,6,7,8) 1 grid down?

great map ~star :)
Neethime
205 posts
Joined May 2010
Neethime
I really want to know why "resnap all notes"is not available...D:
Anyway,I move all notes by hand and it seems fixed.

Download: ZUN - Necrofantasia (Fight69) [Neetfantasia].osu
Ekoro
3,522 posts
Joined March 2010
Ekoro

banvi wrote:

Easy
01:13:750 (2,3) 1 grid right? (grid lv3) Fixed. :)

Zetsubou Sensei wrote:

Hey. Hey >w<

[LR Julien's Easy]
Overall Difficulty: -1 Fixed. ;)
Unstack the notes that are stacked...they dont go well in easy. Fixed :P
Also, some notes are pretty close to when spinners end, this is tough for new players. I reccommend deleting some spinners, or moving some notes. Fixed , i delete some spinners :)
Download: ZUN - Necrofantasia (Fight69) [LRJulien's Easy].osu
Sushi
osu! Alumni
2,989 posts
Joined October 2008
Sushi
Some stuff on Irc~
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,958 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
Your Kiai continues almost for the whole minute.Maybe use several fountains instead? Or at least make short breaks.

[LRJulien's Easy]
The only I can suggest is adding finishes at the start of New Combos,in the moments like these:
00:30:945 (1) - Here.
00:36:798 (1) - And here.
00:42:652 (1) - Here,and etc.

But Finish hitsound doesn't sound pretty fine,so if you don't want to search for custom one,you may skip it.

Oh,and one more thing:

01:33:872 (4) - Delete,and start spinner from here.

[Normal]
I want you to increase OD by 1 tick.
00:29:481 (8) - Stack it with 00:28:018 (5).
01:03:140 (1,2,3,)- Huh? Jumps?
01:06:067 (1) - Just wth? What's this for? It's only a Normal.Use DS please and fix everything.

[Hard]
It's fine,but I'd like you to remove notes right after the spinners.
01:48:323 (1) - Like this.I hope you can remove this.

[Neetfantasia]
01:54:174 (2) - Allign.
Amethyst Wolf
184 posts
Joined April 2010
Amethyst Wolf
Attention:
If I put a '?' there, you can do that if you want.
If I put a '.' there, you have to do thet.
If I put a '+' there, that's mean "and the follow Hit Object".
All gril change in lv3. Remember follow hitobject's snap.
Remember to check distance after you fix your Hit Object.

[General]
- Don't you think that the kiai time are too long?

[LRJulien's Easy]
00:58:75(4) - Try to let the slider look like this?
SPOILER
01:19:23(1) - And so on.
SPOILER
01:26:55(3+)- Up 1 grid?
01:41:18(3) - Down and right 1 grid?
01:45:21(3) - Up 1 grid?
01:52:16(3) - Down 10 grid.
02:01:67(3) - Down and right 1 grid?

[Normal]
00:06:79(12)- The 2nd point of the slider up and left....0.5 grid?
00:35:33(8+)- Up and left 1 grid?
01:11:55(3) - Up 4 grid, right 1 grid?
01:17:04(2) - Change to a cricle? 2 beats here dosen't feel good.
01:18:50(5) - And so on.
01:22:89(2) - And so on.
01:28:75(8) - And so on.
01:40:09(7) - Try to let the slider look like this?
SPOILER
01:47:22(7) - Right 2 grid?

[Hard]
00:16:12(2) - Up and right 1 grid?
00:56:18(5) - Up 3 grid, right 1 grid?
01:43:38(2) - Down 1 grid?
01:43:75(3) - Down 2 grid?
01:55:64(5) - Down 1 grid?

[Neetfantasia]
00:30:57(3) - Up 1 grid?
00:30:94(1) - Up 2 grid?
01:15:57(7) - Make 3 beats here? 2 beats feel bad.


wmfchris
osu! Alumni
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wmfchris
since AVwolf has modded that I'm not to mod. But do you need taiko diff？
Fight69
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Fight69
Why not ? :D

You can do this taiko diff :)

EDIT : And yay for my 300th post ! xD
Jarby
2,962 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
Quite a solid map here. Good job.

LRJulien's Easy:

00:13:201 - Hard criteria: Note exists 366ms after spinner (less than 400ms). It's quite frustrating for new players.
01:11:737 - Unnecessary break. It worked on Hard, but it's bothersome here to have warning arrows come up while you're still playing through a section like this.

Normal:

Very lacking in hitsounds. Why don't you use claps and finishes?

Hard:

00:26:189 (4,5) - I don't like this spacing; even if it's intentional, it doesn't fit here.
01:36:798 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - A bit over the top, don't you think?
02:36:067 (3,4) - I don't like this spacing; even if it's intentional, it doesn't fit here.

Neetfantasia:

Resnap all notes. Also, the kiai here is shorter than all the others, fix that.
01:26:553 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - This can all be in the same combo.
01:53:625 (1) - Remove new combo, feels too short and out of place here.
02:20:332 (4,5) - Shorten the distance between these notes slightly. The jump is fine, but it feels just a little too long. Maybe.
02:39:722 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - This can all be in the same combo.
Neethime
205 posts
Joined May 2010
Neethime
;) Thanks for all modders,fixed some.

Download: ZUN - Necrofantasia (Fight69) [Neetfantasia].osu
Amethyst Wolf
184 posts
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Amethyst Wolf
no kds0.0?
Fight69
1,639 posts
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Topic Starter
Fight69
Whoops...

I thought I've already gived the kudosus o.o

Thank you for your mods and sorry :<

EDIT : All fix'd, thanks again !
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Ekoro
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Ekoro
All fixed. :)

Download: ZUN - Necrofantasia (Fight69) [LRJulien's Easy].osu
Tomoka Rin
Former osu! Champion: OWC#1
382 posts
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Tomoka Rin
star~
Fight69
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Topic Starter
Fight69
Thank you ! :)
AdRon Zh3Ro
916 posts
Joined August 2009
AdRon Zh3Ro
Hmm, lets begin...
[*]Change?
[>]Change!

Offset1.671?

Easy:
>1:00:76--1:01:122--1:02:219--1:02:768 Not use sections, delete them here.

Everything else seems okay.
Fight69
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Fight69

adron zhero wrote:

Hmm, lets begin...
[*]Change?
[>]Change!

Offset1.671? Done

Easy:
>1:00:76--1:01:122--1:02:219--1:02:768 Not use sections, delete them here. Deleted

Everything else seems okay.
Thank you ! :)
Kim Jin Seok
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Kim Jin Seok
Star+ :)
Fight69
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Fight69

Kim Jin Seok wrote:

Star+ :)
Thank you ! :)
lovhin456
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lovhin456
Hi ~

General;
- BG must be 1024x768 or 800x600
- Delete osb file and full sub
- Audio lead-in is not the same for all diff
- Nice skin :3
- Actually the scorebar doesn't go well...use the default one ??
- Use this colors for the circles ??
Combo1 : 86,2,155
Combo2 : 251,183,115
Combo3 : 251,91,64
Combo4 : 255,255,255
in all diff.

LRJulien's Easy;
- Why do you use so many linear sliders ?? )':
- 00:11:914 >> curve this better
- 00:39:719 (3, 4) >> curve this better
- 00:45:573 >> ^
- 01:14: 841 >> new combo
- 01:19:231 >> curve this better
- 01:35:329 >> first kiai time ends here
- 01:36:792 >> make a second kiai time that starts here
- 01:58:744 >> and ends here
- 02:07:524 >> new combo
- 02:36:792 >> new combo

Normal;
- 00:04:597 >> new combo
- 00:33:866 >> ^
- 00:38:256 >> ^
- Make kiai time the same as in LRJulien's Easy
- Ehh, is fine but you have some long combos that are necessary

* Can't really mod hard or insane but make the kiai time the same as in LRJulien easy ~
* Star ~ :3
Ekoro
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Ekoro
All fixed , thank you. :)

Download: ZUN - Necrofantasia (Fight69) [LRJulien's Easy].osu
vivi90722
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vivi90722
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Sakura
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Sakura
Please take in mind that some of theese errors are suggestions not directions, feel free to take or leave anything or edit as you see fit.

[osz File Scan!]
BG name is too big, try using a different name of something simpler like BG.jpg or something then editing the name in the osu files accordingly.
star.png isnt needed for a custom beatmap skin, this is used only to show the star rating of a map in the beatmap listing.
Did you ask cyclone for permission to use his skin elements?

[General]
Pure white combo color hurts the eyes, specially during kiai, i recommend you change it.

[Neetfantasia]
What's with all the semi-curvy sliders? for example: 00:04:963 (2), 00:05:878 (6), 00:06:427 (1), 00:07:890 (4), 00:08:439 (6), and many others, you should try to make smoother curves outta them or just make them linear instead. For example theese:
SPOILER
Doesnt take too mcuh effort =/
00:08:439 (6,2) - (6) is partially overlapping (2) can you rearrange them? overlaps tend to look ugly.
02:38:256 (1) - Would look better if the curve angle was on the opposite side.

[Hard]
Imo this is a Hard+
00:39:719 (1,2) - Could look better curved like for example:
SPOILER
01:13:378 (1) - This could also use more work, here's a suggestion:
SPOILER
02:23:622 (1,2,3,4) - wth spacing? O_O (1) seems too close to (2)

[Normal]
00:19:414 (1) - Out of bounds.

[Easy]
Why is the kiai time here longer? You should probably end it at 01:36:792 which is where all the other diffs end their kiai.
01:10:451 (4) - Out of bounds.
01:30:939 (1) - ^

Well that's all i could find, i may recheck this later for a star
Ekoro
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Ekoro
Done. *.*

Download: ZUN - Necrofantasia (Fight69) [LRJulien's Easy].osu
Fight69
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Topic Starter
Fight69

Sakura Hana wrote:

Please take in mind that some of theese errors are suggestions not directions, feel free to take or leave anything or edit as you see fit.

[osz File Scan!]
BG name is too big, try using a different name of something simpler like BG.jpg or something then editing the name in the osu files accordingly. I've renamed it BG.jpg
star.png isnt needed for a custom beatmap skin, this is used only to show the star rating of a map in the beatmap listing. Deleted
Did you ask cyclone for permission to use his skin elements? Yes ^^

[General]
Pure white combo color hurts the eyes, specially during kiai, i recommend you change it. I've changed it to grey, it should be fine now

[Neetfantasia]
What's with all the semi-curvy sliders? for example: 00:04:963 (2), 00:05:878 (6), 00:06:427 (1), 00:07:890 (4), 00:08:439 (6), and many others, you should try to make smoother curves outta them or just make them linear instead. For example theese:
SPOILER
Doesnt take too mcuh effort =/
00:08:439 (6,2) - (6) is partially overlapping (2) can you rearrange them? overlaps tend to look ugly.
02:38:256 (1) - Would look better if the curve angle was on the opposite side.

I'll catch Neethime IG

[Hard]
Imo this is a Hard+
00:39:719 (1,2) - Could look better curved like for example:
SPOILER
01:13:378 (1) - This could also use more work, here's a suggestion:
SPOILER
02:23:622 (1,2,3,4) - wth spacing? O_O (1) seems too close to (2)

Everything is fixed

[Normal]
00:19:414 (1) - Out of bounds.

Fix'd

[Easy]
Why is the kiai time here longer? You should probably end it at 01:36:792 which is where all the other diffs end their kiai.
01:10:451 (4) - Out of bounds.
01:30:939 (1) - ^

LRJ should have fixed everything

Well that's all i could find, i may recheck this later for a star
Neethime
205 posts
Joined May 2010
Neethime
Fixed,thanks for mod

Download: ZUN - Necrofantasia (Fight69) [Neetfantasia].osu
wmfchris
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wmfchris
sorry for late submission

Download: ZUN - Necrofantasia (Fight69) [Wmf's Taikofantasia].osu
Kurai
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Kurai
rgqhcfjhfhcqdfjgb


Green = Suggestion
Orange = You should fix it
Red = You need to fix it

[General]
Change dans les tag LRJulien par _LRJ_
Offset +20ms
Le BG doit être 1024*768
J'ai un SB dans mon dossier de ta map, si tu l'as, supprime&fullsubmit ^^

[LRJulien's Easy]
Renomme en "LRJ's Easy"
00:11:731 (5) - Enlève le finish au début; bouge 1/2 plus tôt (rallonge le aussi de 1/2)
Après, la partie qui suis est moche, donc voila pour rendre plus beau :
00:10:451 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/23502
00:13:378 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/23506
00:15:573 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/23507
00:18:500 (4) - Stack avec (2)
Sa rend un peu mieux je trouve, je trouvais cette partie vraiment moche >.<
00:15:573 (2,4) - supprime les whistle et ajoute des clap
01:08:988 (3) - Suppime le whitsle et ajoute un clap
01:23:256 (4) - ^
01:29:475 (3) - Supprime le clap
01:33:866 (1) - Bouge 1/2 plus tôt et allonge le de 1/2
01:57:280 (1) - ^

[Normal]
00:04:231 (5,1) - Quelque chose comme ca ? http://puu.sh/aoF
00:13:561 (3) - Supprime et fait de (2) un slider qui se termine la ou se terminait (3)
00:36:427 (4) - Clap
00:41:183 (2) - Clap a la fin
00:44:110 (3,4) - ^
01:26:366 (4) - Clap au début
01:27:280 (5) - o_o sonne totallement faux, supprime et ajoute une note a 01:27:829
01:38:073 (3) - Finish au début
01:41:000 (3) - ^
01:49:780 (3) - ^
01:52:707 (3) - ^
02:01:670 (4) - ^
02:11:914 (1) - Supprime le finish de début
02:14:658 (4) - Finish au début
02:16:122 (7) - Finish
02:24:902 (3) - Finish au début
02:26:366 (5) - ^
02:37:524 (1) - ^
02:38:988 (4) - ^


[Hard+]
Renomme en Hard, Hard+ sa fait gay.
00:04:780 (3) - Supprime le whistle sur le reverse
00:16:488 (3) - Supprime le whistle du début
00:17:219 (6) - ^
00:17:585 (7) - New combo
00:22:158 (1) - Supprime le whistle du reverse
00:23:622 (1) - Supprime le finish
00:33:500 (4) - Ajoute un clap
00:36:427 (1) - Supprime le whistle et ajoute un clap
00:37:890 (5) - ^
00:39:353 (8) - ^
00:40:817 (3) - ^
00:42:280 (6) - ^
00:42:646 (1) - Clap a la fin
00:43:744 (4) - Clap
00:44:475 (7) - Clap au début
00:45:207 (9) - ^
00:45:573 (1) - Clap a la fin
00:46:488 (3) - ^
00:58:012 (9) - Supprime le reverse et bouge 1/2 plus tard
00:58:744 (10) - New combo
01:02:585 (8) - ^
01:21:061 (6) - ^
01:26:549 (8) - ^
01:49:963 (8) - ^
01:53:256 (7) - Supprime le clap a la fin
01:53:805 (8) - Garde juste le clap du reverse
02:00:207 (1) jusqu'a la fin - Ajoute des clap comme sur le reste de la map
01:57:097 (3) - Met un finish ?
02:10:085 (6) - Met un finish a la fin
02:20:695 (1) - Bouge 1/4 plus tôt et extand le de 1/4
02:37:890 (8) - New combo
02:38:073 (9) - Finish au début
02:39:353 (13) - ^
02:44:110 (1) - Bouge 1/4 plus tôt et extand le de 1/4

[Neetfantasia]
Seems fine for me

Heuresement que j'ai pas fait un nazimod en plus xD
Sinon, quasiment que du Hitsoud :>
Ekoro
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Ekoro
All fix'd.

Download: ZUN - Necrofantasia (Fight69) [LRJ's Easy].osu
Sakura
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Sakura
Ok rechecking.

[General]
Gray combo color can cause confusion during tag play in multiplayer.

[Timing]
I just noticed that your offset seems to be off, -10 ms please, also it seems to be half a beat off, meaning the metronome ticks on silences and the drum seems to be right in between them at the start, this of course means that, that drum must be the main beat a.k.a the white ticks, not the red.

Neetfantasia
Looks alright now.

[Lunatic]
I think it could use higher approach rate.
Otherwise it looks ok

[wmf's Taikofantasia]
Max combo overflow, keep your combo to 999 or less
SPOILER
I may not be an expert on Taiko, but i think the notes kinda are very offtimed with the song itself at the beginning. And they also sound slightly off past the 1st spinner, the notes after the 2nd spinner sound off as well.

[Normal]
Looks fine now

[LRJ's Easy]
00:36:082 (2,1) - This might be a bit hard for an Easy.
01:19:252 (1) - Make the curve more smooth?
01:47:057 (2) - Make the curve more Symmetric?
02:09:009 (1) - Make more curvy? or completely linear? it's kind of in between right now.
02:13:399 (5,1) - Might be a bit too hard for an Easy.
02:19:252 (5,6) - ^
02:20:716 (1) - Extend to 02:22:910 ?

Ok that's about it, PM In-game once again for a recheck after you've fixed the stuff, still not good enough for me to give it a star
lovhin456
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Joined December 2008
lovhin456

Sakura Hana wrote:

Ok rechecking.

[General]
Gray combo color can cause confusion during tag play in multiplayer.
Use this instead then:
Combo1 : 103,56,146
Combo2 : 255,150,100
Combo3 : 254,210,107
Combo4 : 252,125,122
+ add wmfchris to tags
aabc271
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aabc271
Hi~
Here is my taiko mod~
Mod request by wmfchris

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

[Wmf's Taikofantasia]

00:44:312 (291~305) This stream is quite complicated compared to others. Maybe change 00:45:136 (300) to d to simply it a bit?

01:11:934 (1) I think the ending point of this slider is too close to the next note. Maybe end it at 01:13:032?

02:34:069 (497~508) I think this doesn't really match the music, but this is only a suggestion~

I think ending this song at 02:53:459 is better, but this is also only a suggestion~

______________________________
The followings are pattern mods~
These are all suggestions only~

00:49:800 (337~338) Delete these 2 notes?

00:55:654 (375~376) ^

01:09:190 (461) Move to 01:09:282?

01:17:788 (23) Move to 01:17:971?

01:20:715 (36) Delete this note?

01:21:264 (38) ^

01:23:642 (50) Move to 01:23:825?

01:30:959 (93) Move to 01:31:142?

01:32:971 (x) Add a note?

01:33:886 (106) Delete this note?

01:39:739 (154) ^

01:44:130 (184) Move to 01:44:312?

01:45:593 (194~195) Delete these notes?

01:48:154 (208~209) Delete these notes? If so, move 01:48:428 (211) to 01:48:611?

01:54:373 (247~249) Delete these notes?

02:17:514 (x) Add a note? If so, delete 02:17:697 (400~401)?

02:26:569 (446) Move this note to 02:26:660?



No errors found~ Nice job! :)
Star and good luck~
Magicphoenix
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Magicphoenix
Gogogo get it ranked =D
wmfchris
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wmfchris
fixed most of aabc's mod.

spinner: fixed

less than 999: no

Download: ZUN - Necrofantasia (Fight69) [Wmf's Taikofantasia].osu
manten
253 posts
Joined September 2009
manten
nice fight! :)
Fight69
1,639 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Fight69

Sakura Hana wrote:

Ok rechecking.

[General]
Gray combo color can cause confusion during tag play in multiplayer.

Fixed now, thank you lovhin456 ! :)

[Timing]
I just noticed that your offset seems to be off, -10 ms please, also it seems to be half a beat off, meaning the metronome ticks on silences and the drum seems to be right in between them at the start, this of course means that, that drum must be the main beat a.k.a the white ticks, not the red.

Fixed

Neetfantasia
Looks alright now.

[Lunatic]
I think it could use higher approach rate. I should raise it by 1 or 2 ?
Otherwise it looks ok

[wmf's Taikofantasia]
[...]
Fix'd by wmf :)

[Normal]
Looks fine now

[LRJ's Easy]
[...]
LRJ will fix that

EDIT : Fix'd


Ok that's about it, PM In-game once again for a recheck after you've fixed the stuff, still not good enough for me to give it a star
Thank you for your recheck, I'll PM you soon :)

lovhin456 wrote:

Use this instead then:
Combo1 : 103,56,146
Combo2 : 255,150,100
Combo3 : 254,210,107
Combo4 : 252,125,122
+ add wmfchris to tags
Thank you for your combo colors and for the tag (I've forgot it ! xD)

aabc271 wrote:

Hi~
Here is my taiko mod~
Mod request by wmfchris

[...]
Thank you for your Taiko mod ! :)

Magicphoenix wrote:

Gogogo get it ranked =D
I must rank it ! xD
Thank you for your star :)

manten wrote:

nice fight! :)
Thank you :D
Last edited by Fight69 , edited 2 times in total.
Kotone
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Kotone
Fight69, I love your map><
Ekoro
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Ekoro
>_>

Download: ZUN - Necrofantasia (Fight69) [LRJ's Easy].osu
Fight69
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Topic Starter
Fight69

karenying wrote:

Fight69, I love your map><
Really ? *.*

Yayz, this make me happy xD

Thank you for your star :)
Serval
232 posts
Joined June 2010
Serval
Star~
Card N'FoRcE
osu! Alumni
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Here since the beginning
Card N'FoRcE
- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)
  • Lol bookmarks going out of the timing bar.
    Shouldn't you add another tag saying "_LRJ_" since "LRJ" is not the full username?
- LRJ's Easy:
  • .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    02:15:583 (2) - move two squares down
- Normal:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Use some more Finish hitsounds at the first part too?
    .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    01:24:912 (1) - intentionally unstacked?
- Lunatic:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Use some more Finish hitsounds at the first part too?
    .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:09:180 (5) - new combo?
    00:54:729 (2,3) - hardly readable, this change of spacing doesn't fit since it's the only one you used.
- NeetFantasia:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    I think this map kicks ass using Circle Size Normal.
- Wmf's Taikofantasia:
  • .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    As far as i can see, no problems.
Fine, i really liked the "NeetFantasia".
Roddie
osu! Alumni
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Roddie
Hello o:

Blue: Suggestions.
Purple: Should be fixed in my opinion.
Red: Must be fixed.

LRJ's Easy:

01:17:412 (2)-Stack this with Fading 7?
01:18:144 (4, 1)-Move one grid up on 4. And fix the spacing on 1.

This snapshot is for the second thing I listed.

SPOILER

Normal:

00:32:412 (2, 3)-Remove those whistles from the end of those sliders and put claps instead?
01:24:912 (1)- Stack this on 2 properly.
01:26:376 (4)-Remove clap from the beginning of that slider and add a finish instead.
01:28:022 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
01:29:302 (4)-^

Wmf's Taikofantasia:

Don't have modding experience for that yet. So, I'll skip that one. ._.

Lunatic:

SPOILER
01:13:388 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider. And start Kiai time properly. Place the green line on the White tick.
01: 15:766 (8)-Add a finish on the end of that slider.
01:17:595 (4)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
01:18:876 (7)-Add a finish on that reverse arrow and remove finish from the end of that slider.
01:20:522 (3, 4)-Add a finish on 3 and remove a finish on 4.
01:21:985 (3, 4)-Add a finish on 3 and on 4, remove finish from the beginning of that slider.
01:22:900 (6)-Add a finish on the end of that slider.
01:29:302 (5)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
01:40:827 (4)-Add a finish on the end of that slider.
01:46:863 (11)-Add a finish.
01:49:424 (7)-Add a finish on the end of that slider.
01:52:717 (5)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
01:53:815 (8, 1)- Add a finish on the end of that slider on 8 and remove finish on 1.
01:55:644 (5)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider and remove finish from the end.
02:20:339 (8)-Add a finish one the end of that slider.
02:33:693 (3)-Add a finish.
02:36:620 (5)-Add a finish on the beginning of that slider.
02:39:363 (6)-Add a finish on the end of that slider and remove finish from the beginning.

Neetfantasia:

00:04:607 (1)-Remove whistle from the beginning of that slider and add a finish instead.
00:17:778 (1)-Remove finish from the beginning of that slider?

Nice map. :D

Good luck getting this ranked!

Star!
lepidopodus
3,548 posts
Joined November 2009
lepidopodus
Ok, as the owner of the mapset requested, I modded Taiko map.
Basically these are all suggestions cause there are no signifficant problems.

Wmf's Taikofantasia
Well, someone mentioned about 999. This song is almost 3 minutes long so I don't care about that.
Wow, I can see quite hard and long streams. (Oh, it's just my feeling about patterns so never mind XD)
00:10:095 (46) - k? (a.k.a add whistle or clap?)
00:10:278 (X) - If you fixed 00:10:095 (46), how about adding d(a.k.a normal note)
00:19:241 (103,104,105,106) - How about k k d k or k k k d?
01:21:802 (39,40,41,42,43) - How about k d d k? (so there's no note in 01:22:168 if you do this)
01:29:394 (84,85) - How about deleting these?
01:32:229 (97,98) - How about change 97 to k and deleting 98?
01:34:241 (106 ~ 110) - How about moving this to 01:34:059 and add a note in 01:34:790?
01:40:095 (155) - How about d?
01:41:193 (162,163) - How about deleting these?
02:05:705 (325) - How about k?
02:43:937 (574) - How about k?

As I mentioned, these are all suggestions. So do not take this too serious. Anyway, Have a star...
Fight69
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Topic Starter
Fight69
@Card N'FoRcE & Roddie :

Everything should be ok now, thank you so much ! :)
For the mods on Neethime's diff, he'll fix it himself (I don't want to destroy his diff orz)

@lepidopodus :

Thank you for your mod ^^
But I'll wait for wmfchris's response before giving you a kudo, sorry
Musty
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Joined February 2010
Musty
Great Job ;)

Star~
Drafura
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Drafura
[LRJ's Easy]
00:55:827 (2,3,4) - I think this should sounds better using "normal" HS on sliders starts notes, then maybe lower one point the whistle volume (hate this HS but sounds pretty good here just a bit loud for me).
01:06:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

[Normal]
01:10:461 (3,4,5) - Use finish
02:36:620 - Try this :

I think the 2 reverse slider is kinda weird here but this way is more natural for me

[Lunatic]
00:06:802 (9) - Here I found this slider more natural using speed x2 and start end :

01:38:266 (5,6,7) - Think you should use the three same sliders the fast one or the slow one.

[NeetFantasia]
Seems good for me.
adam5396
10 posts
Joined October 2009
adam5396
Star'd
Fight69
1,639 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Fight69

Drafura wrote:

[LRJ's Easy]
00:55:827 (2,3,4) - I think this should sounds better using "normal" HS on sliders starts notes, then maybe lower one point the whistle volume (hate this HS but sounds pretty good here just a bit loud for me).
01:06:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

[Normal]
01:10:461 (3,4,5) - Use finish
02:36:620 - Try this :

I think the 2 reverse slider is kinda weird here but this way is more natural for me

[Lunatic]
00:06:802 (9) - Here I found this slider more natural using speed x2 and start end :

01:38:266 (5,6,7) - Think you should use the three same sliders the fast one or the slow one.

[NeetFantasia]
Seems good for me.
Some things are done, thank you ^^

adam5396 wrote:

Star'd
Thank you ! :)
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2008
wmfchris
sorry for late responding

lepidopodus wrote:

Ok, as the owner of the mapset requested, I modded Taiko map.
Basically these are all suggestions cause there are no signifficant problems.

Wmf's Taikofantasia
Well, someone mentioned about 999. This song is almost 3 minutes long so I don't care about that.
Wow, I can see quite hard and long streams. (Oh, it's just my feeling about patterns so never mind XD)
00:10:095 (46) - k? (a.k.a add whistle or clap?)
00:10:278 (X) - If you fixed 00:10:095 (46), how about adding d(a.k.a normal note)
00:19:241 (103,104,105,106) - How about k k d k or k k k d? --- seems weird
01:21:802 (39,40,41,42,43) - How about k d d k? (so there's no note in 01:22:168 if you do this)
01:29:394 (84,85) - How about deleting these?
01:32:229 (97,98) - How about change 97 to k and deleting 98? --- I think it's fine
01:34:241 (106 ~ 110) - How about moving this to 01:34:059 and add a note in 01:34:790?
01:40:095 (155) - How about d?
01:41:193 (162,163) - How about deleting these? ---I think it's fine
02:05:705 (325) - How about k?
02:43:937 (574) - How about k?

As I mentioned, these are all suggestions. So do not take this too serious. Anyway, Have a star...
fixed~

Download: ZUN - Necrofantasia (Fight69) [Wmf's Taikofantasia].osu
sodamachine_old
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sodamachine_old
star
Fight69
1,639 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Fight69
Thank you sodamachine ! :)

I know, this map has been ranked by _LRJ_ a bit earlier but I'll still work on it (and I'll try to make it better than him, that's why I'm asking as much mods as I can >:3)
Doomsday
Featured Artist
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Joined July 2008
Doomsday
Yeah, too bad another Necrofantasia map got ranked before this one. I know what it's like (DJPop and his Taboo Tears You Up map. Derp).
Oh well, let's make this one better than that one, even if I haven't seen that one yet.

  1. Timing looks perfect to me
  2. I don't think "Theme" and "Stage 7" should be in the tags. I know why you put them in there, but I think they are too vague to be good tags.
  3. The skin seems to have elements from Cyclone's touhou skin, but it doesn't use the hitcircles? I would've put the hitcircles in as well, but I guess the reason they are not in there is because you don't like them.
  4. Your comboburst is too wide. The maximum size is the size of the comboburst from the standard skin, which is 388x787, while yours is 460x640. Can you shrink the burst down so it fits the max size?
  5. The comboburst is facing the wrong way too, I think. Right now it faces away from the screen when it appears. Can you flip it horizontally so it looks in the right direction?
[LRJ'S EASY] (The guy who had his own map for this song still made a difficulty? Hmm)

Seems pretty solid. Maybe there is too many 1/4 streams, but it's alright.

01:33:510 (3) - Remove this beat? Feels somewhat more natural without it imo.

[NORMAL]

Well done. Yeah, It overlaps a lot, but it plays very well I think.

[WMF'S TAIKOFANTASIA]

I can't say I liked this. Your patterns felt way too random for me, and very little seemed to make sense. I'm not a taiko god, but I'm an avid Taiko player, and I don't really like this one.

[LUNATIC]

You really could have mapped to the chorus better in this one. I can see where you did map to, but where you could have put some awesome long sliders, you put constant 1/4 beats (e.g at 01:14:851 (5,6,7,8)). Maybe keep that in mind, even though I think that's just how I would map it.

00:09:180 (1,2,3,4) - Remove these jumps? I don't quite like them. I can't see how they fit into the music so they end up feeling random.
00:39:729 (1,2) - ^ Same with these, even though they are not quite as bad, but they're not great either.
00:41:193 (4,5) - ^
02:36:437 (4,5) - Was this intentional? I don't think it was, since this feels like a jump that shouldn't be there. Could you close that gap?

[NEETFANTASIA]

01:17:778 (3,4,5) - Remove these jumps too? I didn't really like these either. They just come out of nowhere and don't seem to be mapped to anything. Adding jumps for jumps sake doesn't work well imo.
02:07:534 (1,2,3,4) - ^ (as nice as they look, I don't think they play as well as that)

It seems alright, but the harder-end difficulties are a bit hit-and-miss. The easier difficulties are very nice, and even though the harder ones aren't too bad, they felt a bit too overmapped for my tastes.

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lovhin456
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Joined December 2008
lovhin456
Hi ~
I wanted to try my luck with a spinner set :3
http://www.mediafire.com/?9fuw6g33z22gbfv
Feel free to use or not :3 also you're missing the score-x and score-percent, also if you do use this spinner set then add the spinner-osu, spinner-spin and spinner-clear of the touhou skin by cyclone :3
fartownik
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Joined December 2008
fartownik
[Easy]

This is not an easy, 1/2's make it a solid normal.

01:06:071 (1,2) - Oh, cool, whistles, but they're out of place and it doesn't seem that they were used anywhere else in the map so why use them in this part?


[Neetfantasia]

01:41:010 (6,1) - Sudden, odd and unintuitive jump. While testplaying I messed up only in this place, this is totally unexpectable.


[Lunatic]

01:38:632 (6) - Confusing hidden slider repeat, replace.


Thass all, starred.
Cyclone
osu! Hall of Famer
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Joined July 2008
Cyclone

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi ~
I wanted to try my luck with a spinner set :3
http://www.mediafire.com/?9fuw6g33z22gbfv
Feel free to use or not :3 also you're missing the score-x and score-percent, also if you do use this spinner set then add the spinner-osu, spinner-spin and spinner-clear of the touhou skin by cyclone :3

.................My skin doesn't have any of those.
lovhin456
1,959 posts
Joined December 2008
lovhin456

Cyclone wrote:

.................My skin doesn't have any of those.
Oh okk, I didn't know, I just supposed, maybe I can do them if you're okk with it ?? I just need to know what font you used. Also you're using a gradient from white to a pink with a black stroke right ??
Cyclone
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Cyclone
The fonts are actually sprites from Scarlet Weather Rhapsody.
lovhin456
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Joined December 2008
lovhin456

Cyclone wrote:

The fonts are actually sprites from Scarlet Weather Rhapsody.
Umm I see...I'll try to make something then *starts searching* I'll take that as a permission for making the spinner set words :3
EDIT: Finished! Hope you like it :3
http://www.mediafire.com/?mrdi2900pu96d00
Edit 2 !! Change anything that was there ^ for the stuff here :3
http://www.mediafire.com/?alrjw3r4l54us0v
Fight69
1,639 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Fight69

Doomsday wrote:

Yeah, too bad another Necrofantasia map got ranked before this one. I know what it's like (DJPop and his Taboo Tears You Up map. Derp).
Oh well, let's make this one better than that one, even if I haven't seen that one yet.

  1. Timing looks perfect to me
  2. I don't think "Theme" and "Stage 7" should be in the tags. I know why you put them in there, but I think they are too vague to be good tags. Fix'd
  3. The skin seems to have elements from Cyclone's touhou skin, but it doesn't use the hitcircles? I would've put the hitcircles in as well, but I guess the reason they are not in there is because you don't like them. Yeah, I don't like them very much... ._.
  4. Your comboburst is too wide. The maximum size is the size of the comboburst from the standard skin, which is 388x787, while yours is 460x640. Can you shrink the burst down so it fits the max size? I've uploaded another combo burst, should, also, the maximum size is 500x767, not 388x787 xD ( http://puu.sh/e7H )
  5. The comboburst is facing the wrong way too, I think. Right now it faces away from the screen when it appears. Can you flip it horizontally so it looks in the right direction?
I've changed the combo burst, so it's fixed

[LRJ'S EASY] (The guy who had his own map for this song still made a difficulty? Hmm)

Seems pretty solid. Maybe there is too many 1/4 streams, but it's alright.

01:33:510 (3) - Remove this beat? Feels somewhat more natural without it imo. Fix'd

[NORMAL]

Well done. Yeah, It overlaps a lot, but it plays very well I think.

[WMF'S TAIKOFANTASIA]

I can't say I liked this. Your patterns felt way too random for me, and very little seemed to make sense. I'm not a taiko god, but I'm an avid Taiko player, and I don't really like this one.

[LUNATIC]

You really could have mapped to the chorus better in this one. I can see where you did map to, but where you could have put some awesome long sliders, you put constant 1/4 beats (e.g at 01:14:851 (5,6,7,8)). Maybe keep that in mind, even though I think that's just how I would map it.

00:09:180 (1,2,3,4) - Remove these jumps? I don't quite like them. I can't see how they fit into the music so they end up feeling random. Fix'd
00:39:729 (1,2) - ^ Same with these, even though they are not quite as bad, but they're not great either.
00:41:193 (4,5) - ^
02:36:437 (4,5) - Was this intentional? I don't think it was, since this feels like a jump that shouldn't be there. Could you close that gap?

Everything should be ok here ^^

[NEETFANTASIA]

[...]
Thank you ^^

lovhin456 wrote:

Hi ~
I wanted to try my luck with a spinner set :3
http://www.mediafire.com/?9fuw6g33z22gbfv
Feel free to use or not :3 also you're missing the score-x and score-percent, also if you do use this spinner set then add the spinner-osu, spinner-spin and spinner-clear of the touhou skin by cyclone :3
OMG YES !
Thank you so much lovhin ! :)

fartownik wrote:

[Easy]

01:06:071 (1,2) - Oh, cool, whistles, but they're out of place and it doesn't seem that they were used anywhere else in the map so why use them in this part? Fix'd

[Neetfantasia]

[...]

[Lunatic]

01:38:632 (6) - Confusing hidden slider repeat, replace. Fix'd


Thass all, starred.
Thank you everybody ! :)
yaya
osu! Alumni
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Joined November 2008
yaya
[Neet]
01:48:510 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/27918

hm others fine
Fight69
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Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Fight69

yaya wrote:

[Neet]
01:48:510 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/27918

hm others fine
Fix'd, thank you ! :)
NatsumeRin
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NatsumeRin
...too late..?
just leave a star here first....
yaya
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Joined November 2008
yaya
fine for me
Ekoro
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Joined March 2010
Ekoro
Hoi~

GG pour la bubble !
Mafiamaster
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Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
Ranked!
Hakeru
2,360 posts
Joined May 2010
Hakeru
Grats ! :D
wmfchris
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Joined March 2008
wmfchris
congrats~
Yuji Tokaji
776 posts
Joined March 2009
Yuji Tokaji
Congratz ~
Fight69
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Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
Fight69
Thank you guys ^^
Ekoro
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Joined March 2010
Ekoro
Congrats !

3rd ranked map ! :D

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