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Utatsuki Kaori - Hold on me ~Koi no Mahou~

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MaridiuS
879 posts
Joined June 2014
MaridiuS
[Momoka's insane]

00:02:235 (5,2) - Fix blanket ;v
00:09:521 (1,2) - ^, a little bit less imperfect
00:15:521 (5,6) - not perfectly inversed
00:50:664 (1,2) - shouldn't this jump be as spaced as 00:49:378 (2,3) - ?
00:52:807 (2,3,4) - this flow might breaks someones aiming hand! it is too obtuse..
01:25:592 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - maybe lower jump from 4 to 1?

[hard]
00:05:235 (3) - it's angle is too soft compared to 00:04:378 (1) - , they should be more identical
00:42:079 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:50:664 (1,2) - isn't really blanketed, doesn't look good like this
00:58:164 (3,4) - u didn't usually make blankets this far away, i'd advise putting them closer
01:00:307 (4,5) - crude blanket, needs fixing imo
01:08:021 (1) - i think this out of screen is not allowed for rank.
01:12:950 (1,4) - i don't like this collision

good luck!
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

MaridiuS wrote:

[hard]
00:05:235 (3) - it's angle is too soft compared to 00:04:378 (1) - , they should be more identical - copy 00:04:378 (1) slider.
00:42:079 (1,2) - fix blanket - ok.
00:50:664 (1,2) - isn't really blanketed, doesn't look good like this - ^
00:58:164 (3,4) - u didn't usually make blankets this far away, i'd advise putting them closer
01:00:307 (4,5) - crude blanket, needs fixing imo - sure
01:08:021 (1) - i think this out of screen is not allowed for rank. - changed.
01:12:950 (1,4) - i don't like this collision - ^

good luck!
thank you for modding! update
lazygirl
506 posts
Joined February 2016
lazygirl
Hi from my queue for NM ^^

General:

Your kiai times are not consistent through the diffs, careful as this is a ranking criteria I think.

Easy diff:
Rythmically good ^^

00:08:235 (2,3) - Alignment is not perfect here
00:17:235 (2) - I wouldn't make this as angled in an Easy diff
00:26:222 (2,3,4) - Alignment again (sry i don't like it when it's just barely not perfectly aligned x) )
00:30:079 (3) - Move this down imo
01:05:235 (2) - Too angled again
01:06:521 (1,2) - Bad alignment
01:09:521 (1,2,3) - Alignment
01:23:235 (1,2) - Turn 2 around with ctr+h and ctr+j this doesn't look too nice

Other than that nice map

Normal:

Rythmically correct too.

01:23:235 (1,2) - blanket this more
00:41:651 (1,2) - NC on 2 not 1
00:46:365 (3,4) - more blanketting
01:21:521 (3,4,5) - put 4,5 in the same direction as the slider ends :) this might be confusing in such a low diff

Nice map otherwise

Hard:

Rythmically good.

00:20:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - Looks a little weird imo, rotate 3 by -30 and 4,5 by -60 or something like that, would look nice ^^
00:26:650 (1,3) - these don't look nice, make them smoother
00:33:508 (1) - this slider looks weird too
00:37:793 (3) - make the last straight bit a bit longer, it's not symmetrical (sry ocd senses tingling)
00:54:092 (1) - Make this completely straight imo
00:59:664 (3) - same
01:22:378 (4,5,6) - alignment is weird here

Nice diff, i prefer it to the easier ones ^^

Momoka's Insane:

Most enjoyable map in the set in my opinion :)

00:20:235 (3,4,5) - this is hard to play for a <4* map

Nothing more to say here, good luck getting this ranked :)
Ozato Fumika
3,379 posts
Joined July 2013
Ozato Fumika
fixed many things

reworked streams and some jumps modders told me

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Title:Hold on me ~Koi no Mahou~
TitleUnicode:Hold on me ～恋の魔法～
Artist:Utatsuki Kaori
ArtistUnicode:詩月カオリ
Creator:chaica
Version:Momoka's Insane
Source:ラブライド・イヴ
Tags:short ver op opening eroge Love-Bride Eve LEVEL OCTAVE Girls Compilation C.G mix whitesoft I've Sound No_Dap Moeka Shioi Momoka
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Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

lazyboy007 wrote:

Hi from my queue for NM ^^

General:

Your kiai times are not consistent through the diffs, careful as this is a ranking criteria I think.

Easy diff:
Rythmically good ^^

00:08:235 (2,3) - Alignment is not perfect here
00:17:235 (2) - I wouldn't make this as angled in an Easy diff
00:26:222 (2,3,4) - Alignment again (sry i don't like it when it's just barely not perfectly aligned x) )
00:30:079 (3) - Move this down imo
01:05:235 (2) - Too angled again
01:06:521 (1,2) - Bad alignment
01:09:521 (1,2,3) - Alignment
01:23:235 (1,2) - Turn 2 around with ctr+h and ctr+j this doesn't look too nice

Other than that nice map

Normal:

Rythmically correct too.

01:23:235 (1,2) - blanket this more
00:41:651 (1,2) - NC on 2 not 1
00:46:365 (3,4) - more blanketting
01:21:521 (3,4,5) - put 4,5 in the same direction as the slider ends :) this might be confusing in such a low diff

Nice map otherwise

Hard:

Rythmically good.

00:20:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - Looks a little weird imo, rotate 3 by -30 and 4,5 by -60 or something like that, would look nice ^^
00:26:650 (1,3) - these don't look nice, make them smoother
00:33:508 (1) - this slider looks weird too
00:37:793 (3) - make the last straight bit a bit longer, it's not symmetrical (sry ocd senses tingling)
00:54:092 (1) - Make this completely straight imo
00:59:664 (3) - same
01:22:378 (4,5,6) - alignment is weird here

Nice diff, i prefer it to the easier ones ^^

Momoka's Insane:

Most enjoyable map in the set in my opinion :)

00:20:235 (3,4,5) - this is hard to play for a <4* map

Nothing more to say here, good luck getting this ranked :)
thank you for modding! fixed many things. update.
Plus4j
Beatmap Nominator
1,070 posts
Joined March 2014
Plus4j
hello m4m

[Easy]
00:00:950 (1,2,3,4) - where is hitsound?
00:04:378 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:08:235 (2,3,4) - bad follow
00:05:663 (3,4) - lost DS pls open AI mod check

[Normal]
00:01:807 (3,4,5) - very bad follow
00:06:092 (3,4) - ^
00:17:235 (1) - remove NC
00:18:092 (2) - NC
00:18:521 (1) - remove NC
00:20:664 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:01:378 (3) - this slider...very weird
00:06:092 (1,2,3,4) - very bad fillow,redo
00:11:878 (2,3) - not perfect blanket

overall:Hard follow very bed,my suggest is remap
GL~
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

Hey lululu wrote:

hello m4m

[Easy]
00:00:950 (1,2,3,4) - where is hitsound? - i forget.added
00:04:378 (1,2,3,4) - ^ - ^
00:08:235 (2,3,4) - bad follow - same previous sound
00:05:663 (3,4) - lost DS pls open AI mod check - ok

[Normal]
00:01:807 (3,4,5) - very bad follow - Is that so? I think that it is all right in this state
00:06:092 (3,4) - ^ - ^
00:17:235 (1) - remove NC - It has changed little
00:18:092 (2) - NC
00:18:521 (1) - remove NC
00:20:664 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:01:378 (3) - this slider...very weird - It was straight close shape
00:06:092 (1,2,3,4) - very bad fillow,redo - a little change
00:11:878 (2,3) - not perfect blanket

overall:Hard follow very bed,my suggest is remap - umm,,,This is my mapping style...
GL~
thank you for modding! update.
eeezzzeee
979 posts
Joined August 2013
eeezzzeee
Hi from my queue

[Momoka's Insane]
Its good!
  1. 00:49:807 (3) - missing a whistle
  2. 01:12:950 (1) - ctrl+g?
[Hard]
about the hitsounds, you should be using whistle at every white tick (like in momoka's insane) because they are for the bass drum right? It occurs every white tick throughout most of this song, not just on the same one as claps
  1. 00:02:021 (4) - check DS
  2. 00:09:521 (4) - NC
  3. 00:10:807 (6,7,2,3) - this kind of stacking patterns are hard to read for this diff.. maybe just stack one of them and put the second one somewhere else?
  4. 00:16:164 - maybe you dont need the whistle here at the tail of the slider
  5. 00:19:592 - ^
  6. 00:20:021 (1,2,4,5) - another difficult stacking pattern
  7. 00:21:936 (2) - check DS
  8. 00:24:079 (3,4) - change to a slider? i think that would fit the music better because theres no vocal or anything here so it shouldnt have so many objects
  9. 00:30:937 (4,5) - ^
  10. 00:36:294 (3) - DS
  11. 00:41:222 (3) - maybe you can make this flow a different direction than the previous one. like http://puu.sh/q4Hsw/3e16e5852e.jpg or something
  12. 00:47:008 (3,1) - maybe you can try this rhythm so the player doesnt have to time that 3/4, which is in a very weird spot http://puu.sh/q4HBz/d27d9d3bf2.jpg
  13. 00:55:592 (4) - DS ( its ok for it to be off by a little but when its off by a lot it becomes noticable. i dont wanna point these out anymore so just go through the map and change any ds that is like higher than 1.02 or less than .98 :) )
  14. 01:00:521 (5,1) - these are really close, maybe move the circle to 257,179 to make a perfect triangle http://puu.sh/q4HNo/d759324641.jpg
  15. 01:01:164 (6,1) - swap NC
  16. 01:04:378 (7,1) - swap NC
  17. 01:07:807 (7,1) - swap NC
  18. 01:09:521 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - for the NC's here, try one of these two styles instead http://puu.sh/q4I5Q/c27202d7db.jpg or http://puu.sh/q4I6l/d5c506958c.jpg
  19. 01:16:378 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ^
  20. 01:19:807 (1,2) - blanket
  21. 01:22:700 (5) - try moving this one to 01:22:271 - i think that would sound much better
That's all from me, good luck! c:
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi from my queue

[Momoka's Insane]
Its good!
  1. 00:49:807 (3) - missing a whistle
  2. 01:12:950 (1) - ctrl+g?
[Hard]
about the hitsounds, you should be using whistle at every white tick (like in momoka's insane) because they are for the bass drum right? It occurs every white tick throughout most of this song, not just on the same one as claps - I'll think about it.
  1. 00:02:021 (4) - check DS
  2. 00:09:521 (4) - NC
  3. 00:10:807 (6,7,2,3) - this kind of stacking patterns are hard to read for this diff.. maybe just stack one of them and put the second one somewhere else?
  4. 00:16:164 - maybe you dont need the whistle here at the tail of the slider
  5. 00:19:592 - ^
  6. 00:20:021 (1,2,4,5) - another difficult stacking pattern
  7. 00:21:936 (2) - check DS
  8. 00:24:079 (3,4) - change to a slider? i think that would fit the music better because theres no vocal or anything here so it shouldnt have so many objects
  9. 00:30:937 (4,5) - ^
  10. 00:36:294 (3) - DS
  11. 00:41:222 (3) - maybe you can make this flow a different direction than the previous one. like http://puu.sh/q4Hsw/3e16e5852e.jpg or something
  12. 00:47:008 (3,1) - maybe you can try this rhythm so the player doesnt have to time that 3/4, which is in a very weird spot http://puu.sh/q4HBz/d27d9d3bf2.jpg
  13. 00:55:592 (4) - DS ( its ok for it to be off by a little but when its off by a lot it becomes noticable. i dont wanna point these out anymore so just go through the map and change any ds that is like higher than 1.02 or less than .98 :) )
  14. 01:00:521 (5,1) - these are really close, maybe move the circle to 257,179 to make a perfect triangle http://puu.sh/q4HNo/d759324641.jpg
  15. 01:01:164 (6,1) - swap NC
  16. 01:04:378 (7,1) - swap NC
  17. 01:07:807 (7,1) - swap NC
  18. 01:09:521 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - for the NC's here, try one of these two styles instead http://puu.sh/q4I5Q/c27202d7db.jpg or http://puu.sh/q4I6l/d5c506958c.jpg
  19. 01:16:378 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ^
  20. 01:19:807 (1,2) - blanket
  21. 01:22:700 (5) - try moving this one to 01:22:271 - i think that would sound much better
That's all from me, good luck! c:
fixed a lot.thank you for modding!
Underforest
5,895 posts
Joined July 2015
Underforest
Placeholding to mod back from M4M, sorry for long wait
Ozato Fumika
3,379 posts
Joined July 2013
Ozato Fumika
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379,121,77664,2,0,P|419:108|459:94,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,56,78092,5,2,0:0:0:0:
272,192,78307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,152,78521,1,10,0:0:0:0:
199,103,78735,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,78950,2,0,L|283:278,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,357,79378,1,10,0:0:0:0:
161,211,79592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
337,100,79807,6,0,P|389:149|374:244,1,170,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,69,80450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,69,80557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,69,80664,2,0,P|226:51|271:32,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,241,81092,1,10,0:0:0:0:
234,136,81307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
62,237,81521,5,2,0:0:0:0:
191,353,81735,1,2,0:0:0:0:
234,136,81950,1,10,0:0:0:0:
158,270,82164,1,2,0:0:0:0:
158,270,82271,1,2,0:0:0:0:
158,270,82378,6,0,L|234:277,1,42.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,185,82592,2,0,L|300:188,1,42.5,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,347,82807,1,10,0:0:0:0:
443,249,83021,1,8,0:0:0:0:
443,249,83128,1,8,0:0:0:0:
443,249,83235,6,0,P|432:198|417:158,1,85,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,94,83664,2,0,P|228:83|181:80,1,85,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,260,84092,5,10,0:0:0:0:
317,184,84307,1,2,0:0:0:0:
258,343,84521,1,10,0:0:0:0:
203,158,84735,1,2,0:0:0:0:
423,205,84950,5,10,0:0:0:0:
423,205,85164,1,10,0:0:0:0:
338,329,85378,1,10,0:0:0:0:
338,329,85592,1,10,0:0:0:0:
245,213,85807,6,0,L|220:156,3,42.5,10|10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,124,86235,2,0,L|312:85,3,42.5,10|10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,23,86664,5,10,0:0:0:0:
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka
update
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Momoka's Insane (*3.61)

Something's wrong!
Underforest
5,895 posts
Joined July 2015
Underforest
To be honest, I checked your map and is mostly fine, so no mod from me
BTW, I think Easy needs more rework with flow but rhythm and diffs are fine

Good luck and no kudosu!
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

Underforest wrote:

To be honest, I checked your map and is mostly fine, so no mod from me
BTW, I think Easy needs more rework with flow but rhythm and diffs are fine

Good luck and no kudosu!
thanks,I will reconsideration easy diff.
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka
updated.

Sonnyc wrote:

Momoka's Insane (*3.61)

Something's wrong!
ez?
rs_fadeaway
264 posts
Joined May 2010
rs_fadeaway
[Easy]
00:11:235 (1,2,3,4) - try to make the flow more comfortable, not like this too sharp
00:19:807 (3) - make the slider more balance, and i suggest to make a slider has 3 turning points,will more fit vocal.like http://puu.sh/qhsQU/d34414f6d1.jpg
00:21:936 (2,3,4,1) - same not suggest to make so sharp flow, not good for beginner
00:24:936 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
00:40:365 (1) - also suggest to a 3 turning points slider, or 1 turning point
00:54:092 (4,5,1,2) - flow
01:02:664 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - looks kinda crowd for me :3
the rhythm is fine for me, but i think u should improve the problems above)

[Normal]
00:12:092 (2) - move it to 124;292 to balance the pattern, will looks more beautiful
00:15:521 (1,1) - Sry, but i dont really get the point of NC here
01:25:164 - the sound here is heavy mb u could make a reverse slider?

[Hard]
Consier to decrease SV , 1.6 seems a little faster. or u can increase the DS a little. coz when i testing，the cursor's move speed in sliders is much more faster than the speed moving between notes.
00:16:378 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - they are keep circling in the mid，why not separate them? will more neat.
01:10:592 (4) - anti-clockwise -30° seems pretty better, for both the flow and pattern

[Insane]
totally clear for me

All diffs' rhythm fine，but i think the low diffs still have improve space. GL
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

rs_fadeaway wrote:

[Easy]
00:11:235 (1,2,3,4) - try to make the flow more comfortable, not like this too sharp - ok
00:19:807 (3) - make the slider more balance, and i suggest to make a slider has 3 turning points,will more fit vocal.like http://puu.sh/qhsQU/d34414f6d1.jpg
00:21:936 (2,3,4,1) - same not suggest to make so sharp flow, not good for beginner - changed
00:24:936 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ - ^
00:40:365 (1) - also suggest to a 3 turning points slider, or 1 turning point -
00:54:092 (4,5,1,2) - flow
01:02:664 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - looks kinda crowd for me :3
the rhythm is fine for me, but i think u should improve the problems above) - It has been changed for clarity.

[Normal]
00:12:092 (2) - move it to 124;292 to balance the pattern, will looks more beautiful
00:15:521 (1,1) - Sry, but i dont really get the point of NC here
01:25:164 - the sound here is heavy mb u could make a reverse slider?

[Hard]
Consier to decrease SV , 1.6 seems a little faster. or u can increase the DS a little. coz when i testing，the cursor's move speed in sliders is much more faster than the speed moving between notes. - change SV1.4,and DS a 1.2
00:16:378 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - they are keep circling in the mid，why not separate them? will more neat.
01:10:592 (4) - anti-clockwise -30° seems pretty better, for both the flow and pattern

[Insane]
totally clear for me

All diffs' rhythm fine，but i think the low diffs still have improve space. GL
thank you for modding,update.
Nardoxyribonucleic
osu! Alumni
3,009 posts
Joined May 2011
Nardoxyribonucleic
Hi, here is the M4M as requested.

  • [General]
  1. 00:21:508 - the green line here could be removed as it is not in use.
  2. Video: There is a kissing scene at 0:41 which appears more nsfw than this. But I'm not sure whether it is still acceptable or not... lol
  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:27:079 (82) - consider removing this note for a 2/1 break ? Currently the difficulty is mapped in a way too consecutive, so a rest would be nice as vocal pauses.
  2. 00:27:722 (83) - you may change this note to k for a smoother flow if you apply ^
  3. 00:33:936 (103) - similar to 00:27:079 (82) - , you may move this note to 00:35:008 - for consistency.
  4. 00:31:793 (96,97,98,99,100,101) - dkd ddk would sound better if you change ^
  5. 00:37:258 (115,116) - swapping these notes to d k would follow the pitch increase more appropriately.
  6. 00:52:378 (171,172,173,174) - maybe use k ddd instead of d kkk to cohere with 00:59:450 (200,201,202) - ?
  7. 00:53:450 (177,178) - d k would fit the pitch drop across 00:53:664 (178,179) - well.
  8. 01:04:164 (220,221) - swap these notes to k d ? This would reflect the pitch increase among 01:04:378 (221,224,229) - nicely.
  9. 01:09:735 (245) - delete and move 01:10:164 (246) - to 01:10:378 - for another 2/1 rest ? Same reason as 00:27:079 (82) -
  10. 01:11:450 (251) - move this note to 01:11:664 - and change to k ? This would be easier to follow imo.
  11. 01:16:592 (274,275) - same suggestion as 01:09:735 (245) -
  12. 01:18:307 (280) - same as 01:11:450 (251) -
  13. 01:17:878 (278,279) - you can swap these notes to d k so that it would be consistent with 01:11:021 (249,250) -
  14. 01:24:735 (307) - maybe delete this note ? The 1/2 pattern is rather long at the moment.
  • [Oni]
  1. 00:52:592 (240,241,242) - maybe ddk to keep it consistent with 00:49:164 (221,222,223) - ?
  2. 00:53:235 (244,245,246,247) - kkd k would accompany the vocal in a way better.
  3. 01:03:735 (302,303,304,305,306) - consider changing these notes to kdk k d ? This would be less repetitive and cooler to play imo.
  4. 01:17:878 (385,386) - same as Muzukashii
You may call me back after that~ :D
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here is the M4M as requested.

  • [General]
  1. 00:21:508 - the green line here could be removed as it is not in use.
  2. Video: There is a kissing scene at 0:41 which appears more nsfw than this. But I'm not sure whether it is still acceptable or not... lol -
  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:27:079 (82) - consider removing this note for a 2/1 break ? Currently the difficulty is mapped in a way too consecutive, so a rest would be nice as vocal pauses.
  2. 00:27:722 (83) - you may change this note to k for a smoother flow if you apply ^ -
  3. 00:33:936 (103) - similar to 00:27:079 (82) - , you may move this note to 00:35:008 - for consistency.
  4. 00:31:793 (96,97,98,99,100,101) - dkd ddk would sound better if you change ^
  5. 00:37:258 (115,116) - swapping these notes to d k would follow the pitch increase more appropriately.
  6. 00:52:378 (171,172,173,174) - maybe use k ddd instead of d kkk to cohere with 00:59:450 (200,201,202) - ?
  7. 00:53:450 (177,178) - d k would fit the pitch drop across 00:53:664 (178,179) - well.
  8. 01:04:164 (220,221) - swap these notes to k d ? This would reflect the pitch increase among 01:04:378 (221,224,229) - nicely.
  9. 01:09:735 (245) - delete and move 01:10:164 (246) - to 01:10:378 - for another 2/1 rest ? Same reason as 00:27:079 (82) - umm. I changed this
  10. 01:11:450 (251) - move this note to 01:11:664 - and change to k ? This would be easier to follow imo.
  11. 01:16:592 (274,275) - same suggestion as 01:09:735 (245) -
  12. 01:18:307 (280) - same as 01:11:450 (251) -
  13. 01:17:878 (278,279) - you can swap these notes to d k so that it would be consistent with 01:11:021 (249,250) -
  14. 01:24:735 (307) - maybe delete this note ? The 1/2 pattern is rather long at the moment.
  • [Oni]
  1. 00:52:592 (240,241,242) - maybe ddk to keep it consistent with 00:49:164 (221,222,223) - ?
  2. 00:53:235 (244,245,246,247) - kkd k would accompany the vocal in a way better.
  3. 01:03:735 (302,303,304,305,306) - consider changing these notes to kdk k d ? This would be less repetitive and cooler to play imo.
  4. 01:17:878 (385,386) - same as Muzukashii
You may call me back after that~ :D
no comments:fixed.thank you for modding!
Last edited by Renka , edited 1 time in total.
Nardoxyribonucleic
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Nardoxyribonucleic
A quick recheck here. (no kd)

  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:47:544 (153,154) - maybe delete these notes instead for a 2/1 break ? This would also result in a better spread with Oni.
  2. 01:03:735 (216) - you may change this note to d to cohere with 01:07:164 (232) -
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

A quick recheck here. (no kd)

  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:47:544 (153,154) - maybe delete these notes instead for a 2/1 break ? This would also result in a better spread with Oni.
  2. 01:03:735 (216) - you may change this note to d to cohere with 01:07:164 (232) -
all fixed.update
Nardoxyribonucleic
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Nardoxyribonucleic
The taiko difficulties look fine now. Feel free to call me back when standard section gets checked.

Taiko'd~
Shunao
1,906 posts
Joined February 2016
Shunao
Hey ~

This is your NM :)


General

  1. Nothing :)

Difficulties


Easy

  1. 01:07:807 (3) - You can move it a little it looks like it is too much to stick.
Nothing more I can say about his one. Good job! :)


Normal

  1. 01:24:950 (1) - ^
  2. 01:00:092 (2) - You could unstick it and move it towards the right.

Really a good map! I hope my mod was helpful. Good luck! :)
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

ShogunMoon wrote:

Hey ~

This is your NM :)


General

  1. Nothing :)

Difficulties


Easy

  1. 01:07:807 (3) - You can move it a little it looks like it is too much to stick. - ok.
Nothing more I can say about his one. Good job! :)


Normal

  1. 01:24:950 (1) - ^
  2. 01:00:092 (2) - You could unstick it and move it towards the right. - ok.

Really a good map! I hope my mod was helpful. Good luck! :)
thank you for modding,update.
-NanoRIPE-
2,042 posts
Joined October 2013
-NanoRIPE-
hi
a noob modder here to mod your map

[Easy]
00:05:663 (3,4) - bad pattern imo
00:12:950 (4) - move little bit up to avoid overlap with (2)?
00:33:070 (2,1) - would be great if you stacked it
00:43:793 (1) - ctrl h for better slider and also remove nc (it looks unnecessary)
00:47:222 (1) - the end of spinner must be here 00:48:079
01:00:521 (3) - clap?
01:23:235 (1,2) - make the red anchor on the middle

[Normal]
00:10:164 (5) - straight slider would be great
00:09:521 (4,5,4,5) - the position of these pattern looks same
00:15:092 (2,1) - imperfect blanket
00:59:235 (1,2) - bad flow
01:04:807 (2,3) - imperfect blanket
01:06:950 (3,2) - little bit overlap
01:14:664 (1) - ctrl j for better flow with previous objects
01:26:878 - spinner?

GL!
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

hi
a noob modder here to mod your map

[Easy]
00:05:663 (3,4) - bad pattern imo - change slider
00:12:950 (4) - move little bit up to avoid overlap with (2)? - keep
00:33:070 (2,1) - would be great if you stacked it - ^
00:43:793 (1) - ctrl h for better slider and also remove nc (it looks unnecessary) - ^
00:47:222 (1) - the end of spinner must be here 00:48:079 -
01:00:521 (3) - clap? - i missing;;
01:23:235 (1,2) - make the red anchor on the middle - ok.

[Normal]
00:10:164 (5) - straight slider would be great
00:09:521 (4,5,4,5) - the position of these pattern looks same
00:15:092 (2,1) - imperfect blanket - ok.
00:59:235 (1,2) - bad flow - change slider
01:04:807 (2,3) - imperfect blanket - ok.
01:06:950 (3,2) - little bit overlap -
01:14:664 (1) - ctrl j for better flow with previous objects
01:26:878 - spinner? - nope.

GL!
thank you for modding! update.
toara_fict
1,319 posts
Joined July 2012
toara_fict
TaikoModしようとしたらアイコン付いてました～のでStdすこしだけみました
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


[ Easy]
  1. 00:26:650 (3) - add clap & whisle Normalには入ってる

  2. 00:45:508 (1) - ^
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


[ Normal]
  1. 00:01:378 (2) - x209 y 109 ?

  2. 00:05:235 (2) - Ctrl+g 2回押して　( 00:04:378 (1) - こっちは押してる)

  3. 00:08:235 (2) - x24 y242 ( 00:08:664 (3) - とx軸同じにしてもいいんじゃない？ )

  4. 00:15:521 (1) - Ctrl+g 2回押して ( 00:15:092 (2) - ここのノーツにうまくハマるとおもう https://gyazo.com/664d7fc7b81190179010340e96944413 )

  5. 00:25:793 (2) - ^

  6. 00:39:508 (2) - これ00:39:508 (2) - とほんの少し形違うからコピーして貼り付けてxの軸同じにしてあげたほうがキレイになると思う

  7. 00:45:079 (3) - x85 y96

  8. 00:48:950 (1) - Ctrl+g 2回押して

  9. 01:05:235 (3) - ここ少しいじって01:04:807 (2) - ここの周りの円みたいなのに合わせて丸くしてあげるといいかも http://puu.sh/qBaOz/4f1ebcff93.jpg

  10. 01:06:950 (3) - ^

  11. 01:12:950 (1) - x91 y259 / 01:14:235 (2) - x188 y207 にしてあげると1.00xになる :3
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


[ Hard]
  1. 00:48:950 (1,2,3) - ここのノーツ重ねると00:50:021 (4,5,6) - こっちも単発３つかと思うから離してあげたほうがいいかも
    例えば00:48:950 (1) - x409 y95 00:49:164 (2) - x347 y151 とか http://puu.sh/qBbkQ/d57a7e5a12.jpg
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


[ Insane]
  1. Not to say. nice diff
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

最初見たときとクッソ変わっててびっくりした Good Luck
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

toara_fict wrote:

TaikoModしようとしたらアイコン付いてました～のでStdすこしだけみました
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


[ Easy]
  1. 00:26:650 (3) - add clap & whisle Normalには入ってる - 入れ忘れ

  2. 00:45:508 (1) - ^ - spinなので入れてない
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


[ Normal]
  1. 00:01:378 (2) - x209 y 109 ?

  2. 00:05:235 (2) - Ctrl+g 2回押して　( 00:04:378 (1) - こっちは押してる)

  3. 00:08:235 (2) - x24 y242 ( 00:08:664 (3) - とx軸同じにしてもいいんじゃない？ )

  4. 00:15:521 (1) - Ctrl+g 2回押して ( 00:15:092 (2) - ここのノーツにうまくハマるとおもう https://gyazo.com/664d7fc7b81190179010340e96944413 )

  5. 00:25:793 (2) - ^

  6. 00:39:508 (2) - これ00:39:508 (2) - とほんの少し形違うからコピーして貼り付けてxの軸同じにしてあげたほうがキレイになると思う

  7. 00:45:079 (3) - x85 y96

  8. 00:48:950 (1) - Ctrl+g 2回押して

  9. 01:05:235 (3) - ここ少しいじって01:04:807 (2) - ここの周りの円みたいなのに合わせて丸くしてあげるといいかも http://puu.sh/qBaOz/4f1ebcff93.jpg

  10. 01:06:950 (3) - ^

  11. 01:12:950 (1) - x91 y259 / 01:14:235 (2) - x188 y207 にしてあげると1.00xになる :3
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[ Hard]
  1. 00:48:950 (1,2,3) - ここのノーツ重ねると00:50:021 (4,5,6) - こっちも単発３つかと思うから離してあげたほうがいいかも
    例えば00:48:950 (1) - x409 y95 00:49:164 (2) - x347 y151 とか http://puu.sh/qBbkQ/d57a7e5a12.jpg
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


[ Insane]
  1. Not to say. nice diff
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

最初見たときとクッソ変わっててびっくりした Good Luck
thank you for modding! update.
Battquif
334 posts
Joined February 2013
Battquif
Hey ! From my queue !

[Momoka's Insane]

  • 00:02:235 (5) - You should map the voice here (it's an insane remember) and place a slider here 00:02:664 -
    00:09:521 (1) - ^
    00:50:235 (6,7) - Why low DS here ? place (7) to 34:105 ;)
[Hard]

  • 00:03:307 (3,4) - Fail Blanket :o
    00:12:092 (2) - You're using only sliders like (1), Why change ? :)
    00:14:450 (3) - I think you should space it from (2).
    00:39:508 (3) - More like this imo : http://puu.sh/qLvpN/a2bec2bfe3.png
Gud map ! Soon ranked as I can see :o
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

Battquif wrote:

Hey ! From my queue !


[Hard]

  • 00:03:307 (3,4) - Fail Blanket :o
    00:12:092 (2) - You're using only sliders like (1), Why change ? :)
    00:14:450 (3) - I think you should space it from (2).
    00:39:508 (3) - More like this imo : http://puu.sh/qLvpN/a2bec2bfe3.png
Gud map ! Soon ranked as I can see :o
thank you for modding! update
Ozato Fumika
3,379 posts
Joined July 2013
Ozato Fumika

Battquif wrote:

[Momoka's Insane]

  • 00:02:235 (5) - You should map the voice here (it's an insane remember) and place a slider here 00:02:664 - no sorry
    00:09:521 (1) - ^ same as above
    00:50:235 (6,7) - Why low DS here ? place (7) to 34:105 ;) ok
thanks~~

SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: love.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 48722
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.1

[Metadata]
Title:Hold on me ~Koi no Mahou~
TitleUnicode:Hold on me ～恋の魔法～
Artist:Utatsuki Kaori
ArtistUnicode:詩月カオリ
Creator:chaica
Version:Momoka's Insane
Source:ラブライド・イヴ
Tags:short ver op opening eroge Love-Bride Eve LEVEL OCTAVE Girls Compilation C.G mix whitesoft I've Sound No_Dap Moeka Shioi Momoka
BeatmapID:955696
BeatmapSetID:329118

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,130,"love.avi"
0,0,"miyu.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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272,350,69092,2,0,P|278:276|228:207,1,127.5,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,197,69521,6,0,P|197:140|206:101,1,85,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,72,69950,1,10,0:0:0:0:
263,33,70164,1,0,0:0:0:0:
263,33,70271,1,0,0:0:0:0:
263,33,70378,2,0,P|274:73|290:113,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,170,70807,2,0,P|400:159|358:154,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,206,71235,5,2,0:0:0:0:
217,332,71450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,348,71664,1,10,0:0:0:0:
311,291,71878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
311,291,71985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
311,291,72092,1,2,0:0:0:0:
217,332,72307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
103,233,72521,2,0,L|200:213,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,57,72950,6,0,P|332:58|361:132,1,170,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,223,73592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,223,73700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,223,73807,2,0,P|286:272|294:320,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,221,74235,2,0,P|158:177|163:136,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,321,74664,6,0,P|112:302|35:282,2,170,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,221,75735,1,0,0:0:0:0:
247,153,75950,2,0,L|262:246,1,85,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,344,76378,5,2,0:0:0:0:
359,221,76592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
247,153,76807,2,0,P|201:169|166:180,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,56,77235,1,2,0:0:0:0:
301,56,77342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,56,77450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
379,121,77664,2,0,P|419:108|459:94,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,56,78092,5,2,0:0:0:0:
272,192,78307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,152,78521,1,10,0:0:0:0:
199,103,78735,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,78950,2,0,L|283:278,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,357,79378,1,10,0:0:0:0:
161,211,79592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
337,100,79807,6,0,P|389:149|374:244,1,170,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,69,80450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,69,80557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,69,80664,2,0,P|226:51|271:32,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,241,81092,1,10,0:0:0:0:
234,136,81307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
62,237,81521,5,2,0:0:0:0:
191,353,81735,1,2,0:0:0:0:
234,136,81950,1,10,0:0:0:0:
158,270,82164,1,2,0:0:0:0:
158,270,82271,1,2,0:0:0:0:
158,270,82378,6,0,L|234:277,1,42.5,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,185,82592,2,0,L|300:188,1,42.5,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,347,82807,1,10,0:0:0:0:
443,249,83021,1,8,0:0:0:0:
443,249,83128,1,8,0:0:0:0:
443,249,83235,6,0,P|432:198|417:158,1,85,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,94,83664,2,0,P|228:83|181:80,1,85,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,260,84092,5,10,0:0:0:0:
317,184,84307,1,2,0:0:0:0:
258,343,84521,1,10,0:0:0:0:
203,158,84735,1,2,0:0:0:0:
423,205,84950,5,10,0:0:0:0:
423,205,85164,1,10,0:0:0:0:
338,329,85378,1,10,0:0:0:0:
338,329,85592,1,10,0:0:0:0:
210,220,85807,6,0,L|185:163,3,42.5,10|10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,152,86235,2,0,L|339:113,3,42.5,10|10|10|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,37,86664,5,10,0:0:0:0:
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka
update Momoka's Insane
AzureDoctor
196 posts
Joined January 2016
AzureDoctor
Here is your NM :)

General


  • Looking good!

Easy

You should change DS to 1.1x, as the notes overlap with 1.0x.
Otherwise, everything is looking good.

Normal

Fix the following blankets: 00:06:092 (3,4) - 00:29:222 (2,1) - 00:33:508 (1,2) - 00:48:508 (1,1) - 01:04:807 (2,3) - 01:06:521 (2,3) - 01:07:807 (1,2) -

00:15:521 (1) - Remove NC, add NC at 00:16:378 (2) - instead.
00:17:235 (1) - ^, add NC at 00:18:092 (2) -
00:18:950 (1) - ^, add NC at 00:19:807 (2) -
01:14:664 (1,2) - These could be blanketed.

Hard

Fix the following blankets: 00:08:450 (2,3) - 00:09:521 (1,2) - 00:19:378 (4,1) - 00:54:735 (2,3) -

Momoka's Insane

Didn't find anything here.

I hope my mod was helpful.
Good luck on rank :)
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

Annika Flina wrote:

Here is your NM :)

General


  • Looking good!

Easy

You should change DS to 1.1x, as the notes overlap with 1.0x.
Otherwise, everything is looking good. - change SV0.9

Normal

Fix the following blankets: 00:06:092 (3,4) - 00:29:222 (2,1) - 00:33:508 (1,2) - 00:48:508 (1,1) - 01:04:807 (2,3) - 01:06:521 (2,3) - 01:07:807 (1,2) - ok

00:15:521 (1) - Remove NC, add NC at 00:16:378 (2) - instead. - ok.
00:17:235 (1) - ^, add NC at 00:18:092 (2) -
00:18:950 (1) - ^, add NC at 00:19:807 (2) -
01:14:664 (1,2) - These could be blanketed.

Hard

Fix the following blankets: 00:08:450 (2,3) - 00:09:521 (1,2) - 00:19:378 (4,1) - 00:54:735 (2,3) - fix

I hope my mod was helpful.
Good luck on rank :)
thank you for modding!update.
-Nanaka-
815 posts
Joined July 2013
-Nanaka-

簡単

  1. 今時CS2はありえません、BPM、難易度を考えて3に変更しましょう、またHPも2で充分です
  2. 00:01:378 (2) - 始点より終点の音が強いのでそちらをクリックさせるべきです、また00:02:664 (4,1) - むだに音を空けるBPMでもありません、重要な音は00:03:307 - にあるVocalなので以下の音取りを試してみてください
    SPOILER
  3. 00:04:378 (1,2) - again、Ctrl+Gのrhythmにして00:05:235 - 00:05:664 - 消えないをクリックさせるべきです
  4. 00:08:235 (2) - Unsnap、またここは00:06:950 (5) - が1/1なので差別化の為00:07:807 (1) - はcircleで構いませんので00:08:235 (2,3) - のrhythmを入れ替えてみてください
  5. 00:09:521 (4) - 最初の画像のreverseに変更
  6. 00:11:235 (1,2) - ^
  7. 00:17:235 (2) - いろいろと音を無視しすぎです00:18:092 - の音は始点にもってくるべきなので以下のrhythmを試してください
    SPOILER
  8. 00:19:807 (3) - も00:20:021 - を始点に持ってきた方が良いので↑の画像のようにslider試してください
  9. 00:21:508 (1,2,3,4) - rhythmがちぐはぐです、00:30:079 (3) - みたいにフレーズに合わせreverseを持ってくるのは良いですがそれ意外では不要ですなのでここは00:24:936 (1,2,3,4) - と同じrhythmに変更しましょう
  10. 00:35:222 (1) - 手前がcircleなのでsliderの方がいいです、また00:35:650 (2) - は拾うような音でもありませんし1から2/1sliderにしましょう
  11. 00:48:950 (1,2,3,4,5) - 最初と同じですがこのセクションはClapもなってますし00:50:664 (4) - 始点より終点の方が音が強いのでそちらを頭にもってくるべきです
    SPOILER
  12. 00:56:235 (2,3) - ↑を変更した場合Ctrl+Gのrhythm
  13. 00:55:807 (1,2) - again、差別化の為1をsliderにしたいのでサビの最初の指摘の音取りに変更しましょう
  14. 00:59:664 (2,3) - ^01:00:092 - 01:00:521 - の隣りというフレーズは音取りを統一させた方がいいですなのでrhythm入れ替えるか00:59:235 - 1/1　01:00:092 - からcircle２個や1/1にしましょう
  15. 01:02:664 (1) - 01:00:950 (4) - がVocalにシフトしたので1は2/1slider+circleで充分です、01:02:664 (1,2) - からまたBackになると切り替わりが速すぎて初心者には難しいです
  16. 01:06:092 - 余程の事がないかぎりダウンビートは始点にもってきてください、この場合だとreverse消してcircle置くといいでしょう
  17. 01:09:521 (1) - again、01:12:521 - 次の事や音の強さ的にもここはcircleが良いと思うので以下
    SPOILER
  18. 01:12:950 (1,2,3,4) - の音取りはbe by your side.というフレーズで合わせた方が分かりやすいです、現状01:13:807 (2,3,4) - 2の終点から3.4が不明瞭です
    SPOILER
  19. 01:16:378 (1) - 上の指摘で手前がcircleに変わったはずなのでここもVocalに合わせてあげましょう
    SPOILER
  20. 01:19:807 (1,2,3,4) - be by your sideと同じrhythm

普通

  1. CS3.3～3.5
  2. 00:07:592 (5) - 00:04:164 - ここを無視したのでこのNoteは必要ありません、00:03:307 (5) - をreverseさせるのであればそのままでいいです
  3. 00:14:235 (3) - 1/2使うまでもないと思うので00:13:592 (2) - をreverseさせましょう
  4. 00:21:521 - からのセクションの1/2reverseの使用基準が良くわかりません00:23:650 (2) - Vocal取ったかと思えば00:27:079 (2) - みたいな謎なやつもありますし
    また仮に正しくVocalだけを拾ってもそれ意外がVocalメインなわけでもなく1/1rhythmからそこだけ1/2になるのは変です
    例えば00:23:650 (5) - を1/2reverseで取るのであれば画像のようなrhythmの方が自然に聴こえると思います
    SPOILER
    SPOILER
    お好きな方採用してください
  5. 00:27:508 - は始点にもってくるべきであり00:26:650 (1) - もVocal、rhythmともに伸びてるのでslider向きです
    SPOILER
  6. 00:30:079 (1,2,3) - もうめんどいので画像だけでいっすか？ｗ　
    00:30:079 (1) - の音伸びているのとドキドキというフレーズで音をまとめるべきです
    SPOILER
  7. 00:33:508 (1,2,3,4) - again
    SPOILER
  8. 00:35:222 (1) - 上の変更で手前がいそがしくなったのもありますが00:35:650 (2) - も新規で置く必要ない音です
    SPOILER
  9. 00:38:651 (1,1,2,3) - いろいろと音足りてませんし00:41:222 - 00:41:651 (1) - は同じ音なので同じNoteにしてください
    SPOILER
  10. 00:50:450 - 前後がVocalなのでここにcircleが必要です
  11. 00:54:092 (1,2) - rhythm入れ替え
  12. 00:55:378 (3) - 1/2sliderに変更
  13. 01:02:235 (3) - reverseに変えれますがKiaiタイムなのでこのままでもいいです
  14. 01:08:235 (5,6) - 何取ってるか分からないです、単純に00:19:807 (1,2,3) - と同じでいいのでは
  15. 01:09:521 - から
    SPOILER
  16. 01:12:950 - から
    SPOILER
  17. 01:16:378 - からは上二つを繰り返してください
  18. 01:24:950 (1) - 1/2reverseに変更

    Hardとのgapが激しいので指摘のように音を増やしてみてください

ヒットサウンドやNCは見ていません、変更終わり次第ツイッターなどでしらせてもらえればIRCでみます
Hardはその後ですね
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

-Nanaka- wrote:

簡単

  1. 今時CS2はありえません、BPM、難易度を考えて3に変更しましょう、またHPも2で充分です - std自体あまりやらないから知らなかった…
  2. 00:01:378 (2) - 始点より終点の音が強いのでそちらをクリックさせるべきです、また00:02:664 (4,1) - むだに音を空けるBPMでもありません、重要な音は00:03:307 - にあるVocalなので以下の音取りを試してみてください
    SPOILER
  3. 00:04:378 (1,2) - again、Ctrl+Gのrhythmにして00:05:235 - 00:05:664 - 消えないをクリックさせるべきです
  4. 00:08:235 (2) - Unsnap、またここは00:06:950 (5) - が1/1なので差別化の為00:07:807 (1) - はcircleで構いませんので00:08:235 (2,3) - のrhythmを入れ替えてみてください
  5. 00:09:521 (4) - 最初の画像のreverseに変更
  6. 00:11:235 (1,2) - ^
  7. 00:17:235 (2) - いろいろと音を無視しすぎです00:18:092 - の音は始点にもってくるべきなので以下のrhythmを試してください
    SPOILER
  8. 00:19:807 (3) - も00:20:021 - を始点に持ってきた方が良いので↑の画像のようにslider試してください
  9. 00:21:508 (1,2,3,4) - rhythmがちぐはぐです、00:30:079 (3) - みたいにフレーズに合わせreverseを持ってくるのは良いですがそれ意外では不要ですなのでここは00:24:936 (1,2,3,4) - と同じrhythmに変更しましょう
  10. 00:35:222 (1) - 手前がcircleなのでsliderの方がいいです、また00:35:650 (2) - は拾うような音でもありませんし1から2/1sliderにしましょう
  11. 00:48:950 (1,2,3,4,5) - 最初と同じですがこのセクションはClapもなってますし00:50:664 (4) - 始点より終点の方が音が強いのでそちらを頭にもってくるべきです
    SPOILER
  12. 00:56:235 (2,3) - ↑を変更した場合Ctrl+Gのrhythm
  13. 00:55:807 (1,2) - again、差別化の為1をsliderにしたいのでサビの最初の指摘の音取りに変更しましょう
  14. 00:59:664 (2,3) - ^01:00:092 - 01:00:521 - の隣りというフレーズは音取りを統一させた方がいいですなのでrhythm入れ替えるか00:59:235 - 1/1　01:00:092 - からcircle２個や1/1にしましょう
  15. 01:02:664 (1) - 01:00:950 (4) - がVocalにシフトしたので1は2/1slider+circleで充分です、01:02:664 (1,2) - からまたBackになると切り替わりが速すぎて初心者には難しいです
  16. 01:06:092 - 余程の事がないかぎりダウンビートは始点にもってきてください、この場合だとreverse消してcircle置くといいでしょう
  17. 01:09:521 (1) - again、01:12:521 - 次の事や音の強さ的にもここはcircleが良いと思うので以下
    SPOILER
  18. 01:12:950 (1,2,3,4) - の音取りはbe by your side.というフレーズで合わせた方が分かりやすいです、現状01:13:807 (2,3,4) - 2の終点から3.4が不明瞭です
    SPOILER
  19. 01:16:378 (1) - 上の指摘で手前がcircleに変わったはずなのでここもVocalに合わせてあげましょう
    SPOILER
  20. 01:19:807 (1,2,3,4) - be by your sideと同じrhythm

普通

  1. CS3.3～3.5
  2. 00:07:592 (5) - 00:04:164 - ここを無視したのでこのNoteは必要ありません、00:03:307 (5) - をreverseさせるのであればそのままでいいです
  3. 00:14:235 (3) - 1/2使うまでもないと思うので00:13:592 (2) - をreverseさせましょう
  4. 00:21:521 - からのセクションの1/2reverseの使用基準が良くわかりません00:23:650 (2) - Vocal取ったかと思えば00:27:079 (2) - みたいな謎なやつもありますし
    また仮に正しくVocalだけを拾ってもそれ意外がVocalメインなわけでもなく1/1rhythmからそこだけ1/2になるのは変です
    例えば00:23:650 (5) - を1/2reverseで取るのであれば画像のようなrhythmの方が自然に聴こえると思います
    SPOILER
    SPOILER
    お好きな方採用してください
  5. 00:27:508 - は始点にもってくるべきであり00:26:650 (1) - もVocal、rhythmともに伸びてるのでslider向きです
    SPOILER
  6. 00:30:079 (1,2,3) - もうめんどいので画像だけでいっすか？ｗ　
    00:30:079 (1) - の音伸びているのとドキドキというフレーズで音をまとめるべきです
    SPOILER
  7. 00:33:508 (1,2,3,4) - again
    SPOILER
  8. 00:35:222 (1) - 上の変更で手前がいそがしくなったのもありますが00:35:650 (2) - も新規で置く必要ない音です
    SPOILER
  9. 00:38:651 (1,1,2,3) - いろいろと音足りてませんし00:41:222 - 00:41:651 (1) - は同じ音なので同じNoteにしてください
    SPOILER
  10. 00:50:450 - 前後がVocalなのでここにcircleが必要です
  11. 00:55:378 (3) - 1/2sliderに変更
  12. 01:02:235 (3) - reverseに変えれますがKiaiタイムなのでこのままでもいいです
  13. 01:08:235 (5,6) - 何取ってるか分からないです、単純に00:19:807 (1,2,3) - と同じでいいのでは
  14. 01:09:521 - から
    SPOILER
  15. 01:12:950 - から
    SPOILER
  16. 01:16:378 - からは上二つを繰り返してください
  17. 01:24:950 (1) - 1/2reverseに変更

    Hardとのgapが激しいので指摘のように音を増やしてみてください

ヒットサウンドやNCは見ていません、変更終わり次第ツイッターなどでしらせてもらえればIRCでみます
Hardはその後ですね
thank you for modding!
-Atri-
3,047 posts
Joined March 2013
-Atri-
すみませんですが、ちょっと気になります、”himawari1.jpg”と”himawari3.jpg”が何の異なりますか。ザイズやイラストが同じように。。。


下手の日本語がすみませんでした。
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

KuranteMelodii wrote:

すみませんですが、ちょっと気になります、”himawari1.jpg”と”himawari3.jpg”が何の異なりますか。ザイズやイラストが同じように。。。


下手の日本語がすみませんでした。
It is different in line of sight.I'm going to have to think bg
-Sh1n1-
3,402 posts
Joined September 2012
-Sh1n1-
Hi~~ It seems that you need mods and I need fast kds haha

[Hard]

  1. 00:00:950 (1,2,3) - are you sure about the distance between such objects? keep your 1.20x of distance as you were doing trought the whole map or stack such notes.
  2. 00:03:307 (3,4) - blanquet could be inproved tbh, your mapping is based on blanquets so you should spend more time on that kind of pattern
  3. 00:05:235 (3) - try to make something mirrored of 00:04:378 (1) -, 00:05:235 (3) - remove, copy 00:04:378 (1) - and paste on 00:05:235 - then press ctrl+j and ctrl+h, finally adjust your distance.
  4. 00:06:092 (1,3) - same as above, is more for aesthetic when you have this kind of patterns as you did on 00:08:664 (3,4) -
  5. 00:14:450 (3,1) - stack or keep your current 1.20x, it's up to you, take a look to 00:19:807 (1,2) - 00:25:365 (3,4) - 00:32:222 (3,4) -
  6. 00:22:579 (4,5) - I suggest you to change the pattern tbh, or make it blanquet but the current one looks random and don't have any relation with previous objects, also another option could stack, but I sugest you to change 00:21:508 (1,2,3,4,5) - into this
  7. 00:25:579 (4,5) - wrong distance
  8. 00:26:650 (1) - unsightly, there are two ways to inprove this kind of slider: 1st one or 2nd one, it's up to you.
  9. 00:27:508 (3,4) - about the next pattern I strongly recommend you to make something like this to add more quality patterns
  10. 00:28:365 (1,2,3,4) - the next pattern could be something like this
  11. 00:32:436 (4,5) - move the tail of 00:32:865 (5) - a bit down.
  12. 00:36:508 (4,1) - about such sliders, I recommend you to make something like this and the next pattern could something like this
  13. 00:47:222 (1,1) - blanquet pls, try to help you with the aproach circle like this, sometimes you can uncheck grid snap (T) to have more precition
  14. 00:50:878 (2,3) - I don't want to continue with blanquets, take a look every pattern again to fix that
  15. 01:11:450 (2) - move the tail a bit to the right
  16. why 01:19:807 (1) - is giving the back to the previous pattern (01:19:164 (2,3) -)? it's called antiflow in std, sometimes feels good but at this case looks random
Hope to help you chaica-san :3 Good Luck >.<
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