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Utatsuki Kaori - Hold on me ~Koi no Mahou~

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Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

Mihaugoku wrote:

Mod from the Queue :D

[Muzukashii]
00:06:735 (17) - there's no beat so i would remove. it's okay though - ok
Otherwise, it's good in my opinion!

[Oni]
00:12:092 (40,41,42) - i suggest a kdk or a dkk pattern here - no change
00:16:592 (58) - i would place a note here to match the vocal - add d
00:17:878 (64) - maybe change to d? there are two low sounds - ok.
01:26:557 (435) - i would add a k here since there's a sound - no change

I hope this mod helps!
Have a good day! :D
thank you for modding!
Electoz
1,886 posts
Joined May 2015
Electoz
Hi, from my modding queue~

[Easy]

  1. 00:36:079 (2,3) - Recheck DS pls.
  2. 01:06:092 (2,1) - Same as above, I can see you're running out of space on this one but pls make a consistent spacing since you already made the same spacing on 01:02:235 (4,1) with 1.0 DS
  3. 00:41:222 - Auto-whistle pls.
  4. 00:38:650 (4) - NC? For consistency with Normal.
  5. 00:45:508 (1) - In Easy we need to leave at least 4 white ticks after a spinner to be considered rankable, in this case I suggest either end a spinner on 00:47:222 or use a long slider to end on 00:48:079 instead.
[Normal]

  1. 01:03:521 (1,2) - DS
  2. 00:19:807 (1) - 01:07:807 (1) - Same as Easy (at least 2 ticks for Normal), you can still map normally instead of these spinners.
  3. 00:12:950 (1) - Remove NC here because you didn't put in some places which have a similar rhythm like 00:02:664 (4) - 00:06:092 (3) - 00:09:521 (4) .
  4. 00:21:937 (1) - 01:03:521 (1) - No need to NC these I think.
  5. 00:16:378 (3) - 00:18:950 (1) - Swap NC? Because in Easy and Hard you did NC on 00:16:378 .
  6. 00:48:508 (1) - 00:48:950 (2) - Same as above, kiai begins at 00:48:950 though.
  7. 00:59:235 (6) - NC
  8. 01:21:521 (1) - Remove NC pls for consistency with 01:14:664 (3) which has a similar rhythm.
  9. 00:18:092 - Missing finish.
  10. 00:47:222 (4,5) - Try this rhythm instead? Personally I think it fits the song better and also you don't have to leave a weird spacing between 00:47:222 (4,5) .
  11. 01:12:950 - 01:14:235 - 01:14:664 - 01:19:807 - 01:20:664 - 01:21:648 - Missing whistle.
  12. 01:24:950 (1,2) - You can use a denser rhythm here because the rhythm is building up at this point.
  13. Feels like there are more hitsound inconsistencies, please recheck your hitsounding for consistency across all diffs, and yeah I don't quite understand your reasoning for putting NCs so sry if those suggestions above aren't useful.
[Hard]

  1. 00:16:592 - Optional but a circle can be added here for vocal.
  2. 00:17:128 - There's a vocal landed here too, my suggestion is to add a circle here so it will become a triplet with 00:17:021 (3,4) . Same applies to 00:30:400 .
  3. 00:20:235 (1) - 01:08:021 (1) - Remove NC?
  4. 01:10:164 - Remove this beat? For consistency with 01:17:021 .
  5. 01:22:807 (4,5,6) - Stack is a bit off.
  6. 01:25:807 (5,6) - These claps feel so random, I recommend to add it on every kicks of these kicksliders.
Didn't mod Insane but there are some unsnapped green lines: 00:14:651 - 00:21:079 - 01:22:365 - 01:23:222 - 01:25:794
Hope this helps and good luck~
Chihara Minori
1,235 posts
Joined December 2013
Chihara Minori
M4M Here~

Easy
Easy
• 00:59:235 (1) - straight slider here
• 01:03:521 - missing note
• 01:06:950 - ^

Normal
Normal:
• 00:01:807 (3) - straight slider instead
• 00:06:092 (3,4) - this repeating not feel same with (1,2), better pattern
• 00:08:664 (3) - blanket
• 00:15:521 (2) - ^
• 00:18:950 (1) - make it more horizontal
• 00:23:650 (4) - move end slider to x432 y236
• 00:28:365 (1,2) - this transition not feel smooth
• 00:30:508 (4) - make it a bit vertical
• 00:31:793 (1) - blanket
• 00:32:650 (2) - move end slider to x280 y220
• 00:35:222 (1) - x312 y124
• 00:37:365 (5) - add light down curve
• 00:40:365 (4,5,1,2) - this pattern better http://puu.sh/pEhLP/900945680e.jpg
• 00:45:508 (1) - decrease this curve
• 00:59:235 (6) - NC
• 01:03:092 (1) - remove NC
• 01:10:592 (3,4) - use slider instead
• 01:17:450 (3,4) - ^

Hard
Hard:
• 00:04:378 (1) - increase curve
• 00:19:378 (5) - make this one horizontal and add light down curve on it
• 00:24:508 (1) - remove NC
• 00:31:365 (1) - ^
• 00:32:865 (1) - make this one vertical and add light right curve
• 00:46:365 (2,3) - blanket
• 01:04:378 (1) - remove NC
• 01:11:878 - missing note
• 01:21:092 (1) - remove NC

Insane
Insane:
dat bg
• 00:27:079 (2) - ctrl+g
• 00:34:793 (10) - NC
• 00:52:807 (2,3) - feel uncof tbh
• 01:14:664 (1) - increase curvee
yup thats it

There's my mod, good luck
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

Electoz wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~

[Easy]

  1. 00:36:079 (2,3) - Recheck DS pls.
  2. 01:06:092 (2,1) - Same as above, I can see you're running out of space on this one but pls make a consistent spacing since you already made the same spacing on 01:02:235 (4,1) with 1.0 DS
  3. 00:41:222 - Auto-whistle pls.
  4. 00:38:650 (4) - NC? For consistency with Normal.
  5. 00:45:508 (1) - In Easy we need to leave at least 4 white ticks after a spinner to be considered rankable, in this case I suggest either end a spinner on 00:47:222 or use a long slider to end on 00:48:079 instead.
[Normal]

  1. 01:03:521 (1,2) - DS
  2. 00:19:807 (1) - 01:07:807 (1) - Same as Easy (at least 2 ticks for Normal), you can still map normally instead of these spinners.
  3. 00:12:950 (1) - Remove NC here because you didn't put in some places which have a similar rhythm like 00:02:664 (4) - 00:06:092 (3) - 00:09:521 (4) .
  4. 00:21:937 (1) - 01:03:521 (1) - No need to NC these I think.
  5. 00:16:378 (3) - 00:18:950 (1) - Swap NC? Because in Easy and Hard you did NC on 00:16:378 .
  6. 00:48:508 (1) - 00:48:950 (2) - Same as above, kiai begins at 00:48:950 though.
  7. 00:59:235 (6) - NC
  8. 01:21:521 (1) - Remove NC pls for consistency with 01:14:664 (3) which has a similar rhythm.
  9. 00:18:092 - Missing finish.
  10. 00:47:222 (4,5) - Try this rhythm instead? Personally I think it fits the song better and also you don't have to leave a weird spacing between 00:47:222 (4,5) .
  11. 01:12:950 - 01:14:235 - 01:14:664 - 01:19:807 - 01:20:664 - 01:21:648 - Missing whistle.
  12. 01:24:950 (1,2) - You can use a denser rhythm here because the rhythm is building up at this point.
  13. Feels like there are more hitsound inconsistencies, please recheck your hitsounding for consistency across all diffs, and yeah I don't quite understand your reasoning for putting NCs so sry if those suggestions above aren't useful.
[Hard]

  1. 00:16:592 - Optional but a circle can be added here for vocal.
  2. 00:17:128 - There's a vocal landed here too, my suggestion is to add a circle here so it will become a triplet with 00:17:021 (3,4) . Same applies to 00:30:400 .
  3. 00:20:235 (1) - 01:08:021 (1) - Remove NC?
  4. 01:10:164 - Remove this beat? For consistency with 01:17:021 .
  5. 01:22:807 (4,5,6) - Stack is a bit off.
  6. 01:25:807 (5,6) - These claps feel so random, I recommend to add it on every kicks of these kicksliders.
Didn't mod Insane but there are some unsnapped green lines: 00:14:651 - 00:21:079 - 01:22:365 - 01:23:222 - 01:25:794
Hope this helps and good luck~
thank you for modding!Apply the almost.
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

eclipselotus wrote:

M4M Here~

Easy
Easy
• 00:59:235 (1) - straight slider here
• 01:03:521 - missing note
• 01:06:950 - ^

Normal
Normal:
• 00:01:807 (3) - straight slider instead
• 00:06:092 (3,4) - this repeating not feel same with (1,2), better pattern
• 00:08:664 (3) - blanket
• 00:15:521 (2) - ^
• 00:18:950 (1) - make it more horizontal
• 00:23:650 (4) - move end slider to x432 y236
• 00:28:365 (1,2) - this transition not feel smooth
• 00:30:508 (4) - make it a bit vertical
• 00:31:793 (1) - blanket
• 00:32:650 (2) - move end slider to x280 y220
• 00:35:222 (1) - x312 y124
• 00:37:365 (5) - add light down curve
• 00:40:365 (4,5,1,2) - this pattern better http://puu.sh/pEhLP/900945680e.jpg - a little change.
• 00:45:508 (1) - decrease this curve
• 00:59:235 (6) - NC - no hcange.
• 01:03:092 (1) - remove NC
• 01:10:592 (3,4) - use slider instead - ok.
• 01:17:450 (3,4) - ^

Hard
Hard:
• 00:04:378 (1) - increase curve
• 00:19:378 (5) - make this one horizontal and add light down curve on it
• 00:24:508 (1) - remove NC
• 00:31:365 (1) - ^
• 00:32:865 (1) - make this one vertical and add light right curve
• 00:46:365 (2,3) - blanket
• 01:04:378 (1) - remove NC
• 01:11:878 - missing note
• 01:21:092 (1) - remove NC

There's my mod, good luck
thank you for modding!update.
Lefia
674 posts
Joined August 2014
Lefia
Hi hi from M4M

mod
[Easy]

Recheck the angle of the slider

00:00:950 (1,2,3) fix the flow, like this?

00:14:235 (4) don't need to the red point of the slider
00:20:664 (2,2) overlap
00:28:365 - 00:44:650 don't like this part, this will make a big change here (if you want, click the box)
SPOILER





If not, i'll continue with the mod
00:33:508 (2,1) bad flow
01:00:950 (3) remove the second point of the slider

[Normal]

00:03:307 (5) bad flow, try smth like this

00:06:950 (4,1) bad flow
00:15:092 (1,2) the (1) can be blanket with (2)
00:17:235 (3,3) stack it properly
00:21:936 (2) remove NC
00:28:365 (6) NC
00:35:650 (2) move the slider to x:380 y:216
00:38:650 (2,3) try smth like this

00:48:508 (1,1) the (1) can be blanket with the other (1)

[Hard]

00:02:021 (2) ctrl + > 2 times and ctrl + g
00:05:235 (3) ctrl + j
00:08:664 (3) ctrl + h and ctrl + r , add 25, then move it to x:168 y:268
00:15:521 (3) it will be nice if you use this slider at 00:15:735
00:17:235 (6) the stream doesn't looks neat, move the slider to x:424 y:252
00:18:950 (4) it will be nice if you use this slider at 00:19:164
00:40:365 (1,2) bad flow
00:42:936 (2) 3/4 slider? why??
00:44:650 (2) ^
01:01:592 (4) the stream doesn't looks neat, move the slider to x:88 y:220
01:25:807 (5,6) rip hitsound, fix it

GL~
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

Lefia wrote:

Hi hi from M4M

mod
[Easy]

Recheck the angle of the slider

00:00:950 (1,2,3) fix the flow, like this?

00:14:235 (4) don't need to the red point of the slider
00:20:664 (2,2) overlap
00:28:365 - 00:44:650 don't like this part, this will make a big change here (if you want, click the box)
SPOILER





If not, i'll continue with the mod
00:33:508 (2,1) bad flow
01:00:950 (3) remove the second point of the slider

[Normal]

00:03:307 (5) bad flow, try smth like this

00:06:950 (4,1) bad flow
00:15:092 (1,2) the (1) can be blanket with (2)
00:17:235 (3,3) stack it properly
00:21:936 (2) remove NC
00:28:365 (6) NC
00:35:650 (2) move the slider to x:380 y:216
00:38:650 (2,3) try smth like this

00:48:508 (1,1) the (1) can be blanket with the other (1)

[Hard]

00:02:021 (2) ctrl + > 2 times and ctrl + g
00:05:235 (3) ctrl + j
00:08:664 (3) ctrl + h and ctrl + r , add 25, then move it to x:168 y:268
00:15:521 (3) it will be nice if you use this slider at 00:15:735
00:17:235 (6) the stream doesn't looks neat, move the slider to x:424 y:252
00:18:950 (4) it will be nice if you use this slider at 00:19:164
00:40:365 (1,2) bad flow
00:42:936 (2) 3/4 slider? why?? - to match the vocal
00:44:650 (2) ^ - ^
01:01:592 (4) the stream doesn't looks neat, move the slider to x:88 y:220
01:25:807 (5,6) rip hitsound, fix it

GL~
thank you for modding! When not writing,changed.
hikiko-
236 posts
Joined May 2015
hikiko-
hi chaica! this is really overdue, but it's from my queue orz
[General]
00:48:936 - i’m not sure why you’re using a red timing point for the kiai, but either way this isn’t snapped to the previous timing section
remove all the random bookmarks, especially in the muzu
[Muzukashii]
00:23:543 (71,72) - ctrl+g these two to follow the vocal, same reasoning as the corresponding spot in the oni (sorry for making you refer to later diffs, i modded the oni before this muzu)
00:30:936 (95) - change to k, also the same logic as the corresponding timestamp in the oni mod
00:31:793 (97) - change to d - a) this part is lower in pitch than the previous bar both in the vocals and in the chord progression, and b) this change would allow the current bar 00:31:793 (97,98,99,100,101,102) to reflect the direction of the vocal melody through the placement of the single k in each triplet
00:54:735 (182,183) - ctrl+g these two so that the movement of the melody from one note to another is reflected in the changing hitsounding
01:25:807 (315,316,317,318,319,320) - change these last two triplets to all ks, it would better reflect the buildup of the instrumental leading into the final finisher
[Oni]
00:11:450 (38,41) - ctrl+g these two notes so that the bar goes d d k d k k. this allows the increasing pitch of the vocal to be reflected by the additional k in the second half of the bar
00:23:543 (93,94) - ctrl+g these two? that way 00:23:222 (92,93,94,95) overall would follow the vocal. i don’t see any reason why this pattern should be the way it currently is
00:30:936 (128) - change this to a k, similarly to follow the vocals. i guess you could argue that this is a d to emphasize the downbeat, but you seem to be following vocals with your patterns so that wouldn’t make sense
00:33:293 (139) - change to a d? this would bring out the increasing chord progression between this measure and the next, as well as bring more significance to the abundance of ks at 00:33:507 (140,141,142) emphasizing the held-out vocal note
01:00:735 - add a k? i can understand that you’re maintaining consistent 1/1 breaks, but since these two bars form the end of one of the main vocal phrases, a longer section isn’t unwarranted
gl with rank!!
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

hikikochan wrote:

hi chaica! this is really overdue, but it's from my queue orz
[General]
00:48:936 - i’m not sure why you’re using a red timing point for the kiai, but either way this isn’t snapped to the previous timing section
remove all the random bookmarks, especially in the muzu - I think that this remains a good.remove bookmarks.
[Muzukashii]
00:23:543 (71,72) - ctrl+g these two to follow the vocal, same reasoning as the corresponding spot in the oni (sorry for making you refer to later diffs, i modded the oni before this muzu) -
00:30:936 (95) - change to k, also the same logic as the corresponding timestamp in the oni mod
00:31:793 (97) - change to d - a) this part is lower in pitch than the previous bar both in the vocals and in the chord progression, and b) this change would allow the current bar 00:31:793 (97,98,99,100,101,102) to reflect the direction of the vocal melody through the placement of the single k in each triplet - Change a little arrangement.
00:54:735 (182,183) - ctrl+g these two so that the movement of the melody from one note to another is reflected in the changing hitsounding - ok
01:25:807 (315,316,317,318,319,320) - change these last two triplets to all ks, it would better reflect the buildup of the instrumental leading into the final finisher - umm,no change.
[Oni]
00:11:450 (38,41) - ctrl+g these two notes so that the bar goes d d k d k k. this allows the increasing pitch of the vocal to be reflected by the additional k in the second half of the bar - ok.
00:23:543 (93,94) - ctrl+g these two? that way 00:23:222 (92,93,94,95) overall would follow the vocal. i don’t see any reason why this pattern should be the way it currently is - ^
00:30:936 (128) - change this to a k, similarly to follow the vocals. i guess you could argue that this is a d to emphasize the downbeat, but you seem to be following vocals with your patterns so that wouldn’t make sense - ok.
00:33:293 (139) - change to a d? this would bring out the increasing chord progression between this measure and the next, as well as bring more significance to the abundance of ks at 00:33:507 (140,141,142) emphasizing the held-out vocal note - ^
01:00:735 - add a k? i can understand that you’re maintaining consistent 1/1 breaks, but since these two bars form the end of one of the main vocal phrases, a longer section isn’t unwarranted - ok,
gl with rank!!
thank you for modding!update.
Foxy Grandpa
709 posts
Joined January 2015
Foxy Grandpa
Hi, from my queue~

Insane
00:02:235 (5) - It sounds better if you shorten this to the red tick and make it a repeat to where it originally ended
00:09:521 (1) - ^
00:31:579 (4,5,1) - Looks better if you move this up to blanket with the previous
00:39:722 (4,5,6,7,1) - Blanket 4,5,6 with 1.

Hard
00:06:092 (1,2,3) - I can't really hear what 2 is supposed to be in the song, you'd be better without it
01:01:592 (2,3,4) - Just move 2 over one space to the left ( Ctrl + <-- )

Normal
01:16:807 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I would make these look identical.

Thats about all i could find, good luck!
Rieri
905 posts
Joined December 2014
Rieri
Hello~ NM from my queue

Easy
  1. 00:02:664 (3) - It would be better if this slider was pointing to where the next note should be.
  2. 00:09:521 (3,1) - These two are almost touching..
  3. 00:27:508 (3,1) - It would be great if you could blanket this
  4. 00:36:936 (1) - you were adding new combos every full measure, why nc here?

Normal
  1. Hmm, did you use distance snap? I don't think you did.
  2. 00:12:092 (2,3) - make slider 2 point towards slider 3 for flow?
  3. 01:07:807 (1,1) - the break after the spinner is too short, make it 1/1 snap longer
  4. I honestly think you should remap with distance snap on, make some good flows and perfect blankets.

Hard
  1. REDUCE SLIDER VELOCITY. (1.4 is recommended.)
  2. 00:25:151 (1) - remove nc
  3. 00:32:008 (1) - ^
  4. 00:32:865 (1) - ^
  5. 01:12:092 (1) - ^
  6. 01:17:235 (1) - ^
  7. 01:18:950 (1) - ^
  8. 01:21:092 (1) - ^
  9. The reason why I only mentioned nc problems here is because the difficulty has a lack of flow, poor blankets, etc. You should take some time to fix those problems.

Momoka's diff looks fine, I think the calm parts of the song can be a bit easier with less jumps so you can tell the difference withe the bit more intense parts of the song.

Good luck with the mapset :D
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

ProEzreal wrote:

Hello~ NM from my queue

Easy
  1. 00:02:664 (3) - It would be better if this slider was pointing to where the next note should be.
  2. 00:09:521 (3,1) - These two are almost touching..
  3. 00:27:508 (3,1) - It would be great if you could blanket this
  4. 00:36:936 (1) - you were adding new combos every full measure, why nc here?

Normal
  1. Hmm, did you use distance snap? I don't think you did.
  2. 00:12:092 (2,3) - make slider 2 point towards slider 3 for flow?
  3. 01:07:807 (1,1) - the break after the spinner is too short, make it 1/1 snap longer
  4. I honestly think you should remap with distance snap on, make some good flows and perfect blankets. - Arrangement has been revised.remaped.

Hard
  1. REDUCE SLIDER VELOCITY. (1.4 is recommended.)
  2. 00:25:151 (1) - remove nc
  3. 00:32:008 (1) - ^
  4. 00:32:865 (1) - ^
  5. 01:12:092 (1) - ^
  6. 01:17:235 (1) - ^
  7. 01:18:950 (1) - ^
  8. 01:21:092 (1) - ^
  9. The reason why I only mentioned nc problems here is because the difficulty has a lack of flow, poor blankets, etc. You should take some time to fix those problems. - same as normal.std maping It is difficult unlike taiko mapping;w;

Momoka's diff looks fine, I think the calm parts of the song can be a bit easier with less jumps so you can tell the difference withe the bit more intense parts of the song.

Good luck with the mapset :D
thank you for modding~
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

FoxyGrandpa wrote:

Hi, from my queue~

Insane
00:02:235 (5) - It sounds better if you shorten this to the red tick and make it a repeat to where it originally ended
00:09:521 (1) - ^
00:31:579 (4,5,1) - Looks better if you move this up to blanket with the previous
00:39:722 (4,5,6,7,1) - Blanket 4,5,6 with 1.

Hard
00:06:092 (1,2,3) - I can't really hear what 2 is supposed to be in the song, you'd be better without it
01:01:592 (2,3,4) - Just move 2 over one space to the left ( Ctrl + <-- )

Normal
01:16:807 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I would make these look identical.

Thats about all i could find, good luck!
thank you for modding!I will review the arrangement
LeQuack
516 posts
Joined September 2015
LeQuack
NM from my Queue

Easy
  1. 00:05:664 (2) - Bring this down to be more in line with previous slider
  2. 00:54:092 (3) - Move right to follow on better from previous note
  3. 01:18:092 (3,1) - Make these symmetrical

Normal
  1. 00:30:079 (3) - Blanket
  2. 00:43:365 (4) - Move this down so that the 3,4 and 5 form a curved pattern
  3. 01:02:664 - This should be clickable as it is the start of a new phrase
  4. 01:07:807 (1) - This should be a slider
  5. 01:09:092 - and then add a note here

Hard
  1. 00:00:950 (1,2,3) - I think these can be stacked (at least 2 and 3 should be)
  2. 00:28:579 (2,3) - Have these be the same slider but rotated
  3. 00:45:508 (1,2) - Make these more differentiable so players can understand they are timed differently
  4. 01:01:700 (3) - Fix this so it lines up better
  5. 01:15:842 (5) - Move down and right one unit

Hope this mod helps :D
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

LeQuack wrote:

NM from my Queue

Easy
  1. 00:05:664 (2) - Bring this down to be more in line with previous slider - a little change
  2. 00:54:092 (3) - Move right to follow on better from previous notel - no change
  3. 01:18:092 (3,1) - Make these symmetrical - ^

Normal
  1. 00:30:079 (3) - Blanket - sure
  2. 00:43:365 (4) - Move this down so that the 3,4 and 5 form a curved pattern - ok
  3. 01:02:664 - This should be clickable as it is the start of a new phrase -
  4. 01:07:807 (1) - This should be a slider -
  5. 01:09:092 - and then add a note here

Hard
  1. 00:00:950 (1,2,3) - I think these can be stacked (at least 2 and 3 should be) - ok
  2. 00:28:579 (2,3) - Have these be the same slider but rotated - ^
  3. 00:45:508 (1,2) - Make these more differentiable so players can understand they are timed differently - change it
  4. 01:01:700 (3) - Fix this so it lines up better - ok
  5. 01:15:842 (5) - Move down and right one unit - a little change

Hope this mod helps :D
thank you for modding!update~
Momochikun
1,927 posts
Joined October 2012
Momochikun
hi

[momoka]
01:09:521 (1,3,4,5) - is this tiny overlap was did on purpose ? lol
01:18:950 (5) - i wonder why this isn't a triplet when you do 01:20:450 (2,3,4) - there's nothing at blue tick
00:48:079 (2) - tbh i was expecting something fast like 00:21:092 (1) -
gj well made bread

[Hard]
00:02:021 (4,5) - try swapping the rhythm ? (note first before slider) for better emphasizement on vocal
00:09:521 (1) - you kinda abuse this slider shape at the earlier section, try different slider ? just my humble though
00:14:450 (4,1) - may move this further because this could be missread as 1/4 pattern
00:22:793 (5,1) - doesn't visually appealing imo, try this one http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5541929 it plays and looks better
00:24:508 (1,2) - thus bad overlap can be avoided imo
00:35:222 (1,1) - just one nc between them because basically they're on the same rhythm phase
00:48:079 (2) - i feel like have seen this slider before.. well try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5541938
instead of mixing the whistle and clap at kiais, i'd go for whistle at 1 and 3 whitetick while the claps keep on the 2 and 4 tick for correct hitsounding
eg: clap here 00:49:378 - 00:50:235 - and whistle here 00:49:807 - 00:50:664 (1) - etc.
00:56:021 (2,3) - same as before zzzz
01:17:450 (2) - missing clap 01:18:307 (5) - , same
01:11:450 (5,2) - avoid this ?
01:03:307 (2,3) - dont you think they make conflict with 01:25:807 (5,6) - ? try create stuffs different from others to prevent confusion

[Normal]
00:12:950 (3,4) - need whistles to fit 00:09:521 (4,5) -
00:15:092 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - i think keep them to 1 nc per 2 downbeat is enough also it's consistent
00:59:235 (1,2) - avoid this on lower diffs
01:11:235 (1) - delete nc for previous reason
01:18:092 (1) - same zz
01:26:664 - it's kind of too loud imo, consider reducing volume

[Easy]
well i dont think the spread is fine considered this diff get tons of 2/1 breaks and overlapped 1/1 pattern while the normal is pretty dense. i'd consider make this harder


i cant do netpicky because uhhhh , well what you need is to learn more and more the basic of them
you dont need any blanket nazi mods because i think the whole map needs rhythm and structuric adjustment, try to seek some of your friends for in-depth help

good luck !
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

Momochikun wrote:

hi

[momoka]
01:09:521 (1,3,4,5) - is this tiny overlap was did on purpose ? lol
01:18:950 (5) - i wonder why this isn't a triplet when you do 01:20:450 (2,3,4) - there's nothing at blue tick
00:48:079 (2) - tbh i was expecting something fast like 00:21:092 (1) -
gj well made bread

[Hard]
00:02:021 (4,5) - try swapping the rhythm ? (note first before slider) for better emphasizement on vocal - sure
00:09:521 (1) - you kinda abuse this slider shape at the earlier section, try different slider ? just my humble though - Using the same 00:08:664 (3) -
00:14:450 (4,1) - may move this further because this could be missread as 1/4 pattern -
00:22:793 (5,1) - doesn't visually appealing imo, try this one http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5541929 it plays and looks better
00:24:508 (1,2) - thus bad overlap can be avoided imo
00:35:222 (1,1) - just one nc between them because basically they're on the same rhythm phase
00:48:079 (2) - i feel like have seen this slider before.. well try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5541938
instead of mixing the whistle and clap at kiais, i'd go for whistle at 1 and 3 whitetick while the claps keep on the 2 and 4 tick for correct hitsounding
eg: clap here 00:49:378 - 00:50:235 - and whistle here 00:49:807 - 00:50:664 (1) - etc.
00:56:021 (2,3) - same as before zzzz
01:17:450 (2) - missing clap 01:18:307 (5) - , same
01:11:450 (5,2) - avoid this ?
01:03:307 (2,3) - dont you think they make conflict with 01:25:807 (5,6) - ? try create stuffs different from others to prevent confusion
all fixed.
[Normal]
00:12:950 (3,4) - need whistles to fit 00:09:521 (4,5) - ok.
00:15:092 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - i think keep them to 1 nc per 2 downbeat is enough also it's consistent - ^
00:59:235 (1,2) - avoid this on lower diffs -
01:11:235 (1) - delete nc for previous reason - ok
01:18:092 (1) - same zz - ^
01:26:664 - it's kind of too loud imo, consider reducing volume - change volume 50%.

[Easy]
well i dont think the spread is fine considered this diff get tons of 2/1 breaks and overlapped 1/1 pattern while the normal is pretty dense. i'd consider make this harder


i cant do netpicky because uhhhh , well what you need is to learn more and more the basic of them
you dont need any blanket nazi mods because i think the whole map needs rhythm and structuric adjustment, try to seek some of your friends for in-depth help - Try to consider remapping.If unreasonable likely, ask someone the guest diff.

good luck !
thank you for modding!
tatemae
836 posts
Joined November 2014
tatemae
yo from my qe
Hard
00:03:307 (3,4) - can you blanket better?
00:10:807 (6,3) - shitty overlap, maybe stack?
00:16:592 (2) - curve it less
00:49:378 (3) - x 388 y 216 for better flow
00:56:021 (2,3) - The slight overlap looks a bit meh. Spacing inconsistency here
01:00:307 (4,5) - idk, but maybe blanket?
01:01:592 (2,3,4) - This stack too uneven too
01:03:307 (4,5) - same, shitty overlaps :/
01:06:735 (4,5) - ^
Good luck~
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

SherryCherry wrote:

yo from my qe
Hard
00:03:307 (3,4) - can you blanket better? - keep
00:10:807 (6,3) - shitty overlap, maybe stack?
00:16:592 (2) - curve it less
00:49:378 (3) - x 388 y 216 for better flow
00:56:021 (2,3) - The slight overlap looks a bit meh. Spacing inconsistency here
01:00:307 (4,5) - idk, but maybe blanket? -
01:01:592 (2,3,4) - This stack too uneven too
01:03:307 (4,5) - same, shitty overlaps :/
01:06:735 (4,5) - ^
Good luck~
thank you for modding!update~
MaridiuS
878 posts
Joined June 2014
MaridiuS
[Momoka's insane]

00:02:235 (5,2) - Fix blanket ;v
00:09:521 (1,2) - ^, a little bit less imperfect
00:15:521 (5,6) - not perfectly inversed
00:50:664 (1,2) - shouldn't this jump be as spaced as 00:49:378 (2,3) - ?
00:52:807 (2,3,4) - this flow might breaks someones aiming hand! it is too obtuse..
01:25:592 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - maybe lower jump from 4 to 1?

[hard]
00:05:235 (3) - it's angle is too soft compared to 00:04:378 (1) - , they should be more identical
00:42:079 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:50:664 (1,2) - isn't really blanketed, doesn't look good like this
00:58:164 (3,4) - u didn't usually make blankets this far away, i'd advise putting them closer
01:00:307 (4,5) - crude blanket, needs fixing imo
01:08:021 (1) - i think this out of screen is not allowed for rank.
01:12:950 (1,4) - i don't like this collision

good luck!
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

MaridiuS wrote:

[hard]
00:05:235 (3) - it's angle is too soft compared to 00:04:378 (1) - , they should be more identical - copy 00:04:378 (1) slider.
00:42:079 (1,2) - fix blanket - ok.
00:50:664 (1,2) - isn't really blanketed, doesn't look good like this - ^
00:58:164 (3,4) - u didn't usually make blankets this far away, i'd advise putting them closer
01:00:307 (4,5) - crude blanket, needs fixing imo - sure
01:08:021 (1) - i think this out of screen is not allowed for rank. - changed.
01:12:950 (1,4) - i don't like this collision - ^

good luck!
thank you for modding! update
lazygirl
506 posts
Joined February 2016
lazygirl
Hi from my queue for NM ^^

General:

Your kiai times are not consistent through the diffs, careful as this is a ranking criteria I think.

Easy diff:
Rythmically good ^^

00:08:235 (2,3) - Alignment is not perfect here
00:17:235 (2) - I wouldn't make this as angled in an Easy diff
00:26:222 (2,3,4) - Alignment again (sry i don't like it when it's just barely not perfectly aligned x) )
00:30:079 (3) - Move this down imo
01:05:235 (2) - Too angled again
01:06:521 (1,2) - Bad alignment
01:09:521 (1,2,3) - Alignment
01:23:235 (1,2) - Turn 2 around with ctr+h and ctr+j this doesn't look too nice

Other than that nice map

Normal:

Rythmically correct too.

01:23:235 (1,2) - blanket this more
00:41:651 (1,2) - NC on 2 not 1
00:46:365 (3,4) - more blanketting
01:21:521 (3,4,5) - put 4,5 in the same direction as the slider ends :) this might be confusing in such a low diff

Nice map otherwise

Hard:

Rythmically good.

00:20:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - Looks a little weird imo, rotate 3 by -30 and 4,5 by -60 or something like that, would look nice ^^
00:26:650 (1,3) - these don't look nice, make them smoother
00:33:508 (1) - this slider looks weird too
00:37:793 (3) - make the last straight bit a bit longer, it's not symmetrical (sry ocd senses tingling)
00:54:092 (1) - Make this completely straight imo
00:59:664 (3) - same
01:22:378 (4,5,6) - alignment is weird here

Nice diff, i prefer it to the easier ones ^^

Momoka's Insane:

Most enjoyable map in the set in my opinion :)

00:20:235 (3,4,5) - this is hard to play for a <4* map

Nothing more to say here, good luck getting this ranked :)
Ozato Fumika
Beatmap Nominator
3,379 posts
Joined July 2013
Ozato Fumika
fixed many things

reworked streams and some jumps modders told me

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404,225,34579,2,0,P|401:246|395:266,1,42.5,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,178,34793,1,10,0:0:0:0:
253,310,35008,1,10,0:0:0:0:
70,336,35222,6,0,P|36:259|37:175,1,170,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
147,45,35865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
147,45,35972,1,0,0:0:0:0:
147,45,36079,2,0,P|150:96|143:142,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,244,36508,2,0,P|253:193|260:147,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,73,36937,6,0,P|401:95|420:161,1,127.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
405,179,37365,2,0,P|454:167|494:162,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,277,37794,2,0,P|286:265|246:260,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,351,38222,1,10,0:0:0:0:
425,262,38437,1,0,0:0:0:0:
313,183,38651,6,0,P|302:124|292:39,1,127.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,24,39079,2,0,P|265:45|218:60,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,93,39508,1,2,0:0:0:0:
155,273,39722,1,0,0:0:0:0:
155,273,39829,1,0,0:0:0:0:
155,273,39937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
52,214,40151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,150,40365,6,0,P|295:211|274:307,1,170,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
398,308,41008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
398,308,41115,1,0,0:0:0:0:
398,308,41222,2,0,L|493:289,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,301,41651,1,10,0:0:0:0:
354,191,41865,1,2,0:0:0:0:
215,94,42079,6,0,P|177:148|193:221,1,127.5,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,243,42508,2,0,P|166:257|116:272,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,362,42937,2,0,P|340:320|330:279,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
451,264,43365,1,10,0:0:0:0:
331,155,43579,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,155,43687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,155,43794,6,0,P|404:129|434:60,1,127.5,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
457,54,44222,2,0,P|468:103|480:140,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
451,264,44651,2,0,P|403:249|365:240,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,226,45079,1,10,0:0:0:0:
260,96,45294,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,96,45401,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,96,45508,6,0,P|291:169|281:228,1,127.5,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,258,45937,2,0,P|319:242|367:236,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
173,345,46365,5,8,0:0:0:0:
145,328,46472,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,305,46579,1,8,0:0:0:0:
109,276,46686,1,8,0:0:0:0:
103,245,46793,1,10,0:0:0:0:
105,213,46900,1,8,0:0:0:0:
115,183,47007,1,10,0:0:0:0:
133,157,47115,1,10,0:0:0:0:
158,137,47222,6,0,P|135:55|106:5,2,127.5,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,55,48079,6,0,P|359:97|369:148,1,127.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,208,48508,6,0,B|341:181|284:190|284:190|234:240|154:203,1,191.250007295609
157,241,48950,6,0,P|164:296|165:338,1,85,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,213,49378,2,0,P|37:158|36:116,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,67,49807,1,0,0:0:0:0:
150,160,50021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
150,160,50128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
150,160,50235,1,10,0:0:0:0:
136,66,50450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,184,50664,6,0,P|312:171|358:165,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,262,51092,1,10,0:0:0:0:
171,197,51307,2,0,P|182:156|189:114,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,103,51735,2,0,P|286:61|271:22,1,85,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,111,52164,1,0,0:0:0:0:
429,111,52271,1,0,0:0:0:0:
429,111,52378,6,0,P|413:150|403:191,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,291,52807,2,0,P|366:300|405:317,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,200,53235,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,243,53450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
226,79,53664,2,0,P|244:137|244:179,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
53,53,54092,6,0,L|149:39,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,214,54521,2,0,L|12:228,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,125,54950,2,0,L|260:111,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,286,55378,2,0,L|123:300,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
282,187,55807,6,0,P|344:244|335:331,1,170,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
459,191,56450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
459,191,56557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
459,191,56664,2,0,P|447:238|442:297,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,118,57092,2,0,P|380:109|417:96,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,213,57521,5,2,0:0:0:0:
366,261,57735,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,118,57950,1,10,0:0:0:0:
234,213,58164,2,0,P|211:269|218:326,1,85,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
450,280,58592,2,0,P|445:237|426:200,1,85,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
331,118,59021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,118,59128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
331,118,59235,6,0,L|432:86,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,68,59664,1,10,0:0:0:0:
248,205,59878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,68,60092,1,2,0:0:0:0:
138,152,60307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
29,100,60521,2,0,L|6:14,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,52,60950,5,2,0:0:0:0:
47,212,61164,1,0,0:0:0:0:
162,268,61378,1,10,0:0:0:0:
240,169,61592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,169,61700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,169,61807,2,0,P|279:179|327:187,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,44,62235,2,0,P|413:54|365:62,1,85,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
335,66,62557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,51,62664,6,0,P|236:38|163:133,1,170,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,247,63307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
290,247,63414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
290,247,63521,2,0,P|283:191|277:159,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,330,63950,1,10,0:0:0:0:
75,223,64164,1,0,0:0:0:0:
75,223,64271,1,0,0:0:0:0:
74,223,64378,6,0,P|119:216|171:214,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
246,130,64807,2,0,P|239:88|236:45,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,45,65128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,45,65235,1,2,0:0:0:0:
326,22,65450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
158,117,65664,1,10,0:0:0:0:
259,239,65878,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,143,66092,6,0,P|447:168|445:259,1,170,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
310,320,66735,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,320,66842,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,320,66950,2,0,P|390:317|419:312,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,239,67378,2,0,P|179:242|150:247,1,85,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,158,67807,5,2,0:0:0:0:
275,38,68021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,120,68235,1,10,0:0:0:0:
420,249,68450,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,249,68557,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,249,68664,1,2,0:0:0:0:
175,197,68878,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,350,69092,2,0,P|278:276|228:207,1,127.5,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,197,69521,6,0,P|197:140|206:101,1,85,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,72,69950,1,10,0:0:0:0:
263,33,70164,1,0,0:0:0:0:
263,33,70271,1,0,0:0:0:0:
263,33,70378,2,0,P|274:73|290:113,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,170,70807,2,0,P|400:159|358:154,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,206,71235,5,2,0:0:0:0:
217,332,71450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,348,71664,1,10,0:0:0:0:
311,291,71878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
311,291,71985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
311,291,72092,1,2,0:0:0:0:
217,332,72307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
103,233,72521,2,0,L|200:213,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,57,72950,6,0,P|332:58|361:132,1,170,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,223,73592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,223,73700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,223,73807,2,0,P|286:272|294:320,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
151,221,74235,2,0,P|158:177|163:136,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,321,74664,6,0,P|112:302|35:282,2,170,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,221,75735,1,0,0:0:0:0:
247,153,75950,2,0,L|262:246,1,85,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,344,76378,5,2,0:0:0:0:
359,221,76592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
247,153,76807,2,0,P|201:169|166:180,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,56,77235,1,2,0:0:0:0:
301,56,77342,1,0,0:0:0:0:
301,56,77450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
379,121,77664,2,0,P|419:108|459:94,1,85,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,56,78092,5,2,0:0:0:0:
272,192,78307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,152,78521,1,10,0:0:0:0:
199,103,78735,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,192,78950,2,0,L|283:278,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,357,79378,1,10,0:0:0:0:
161,211,79592,1,0,0:0:0:0:
337,100,79807,6,0,P|389:149|374:244,1,170,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,69,80450,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,69,80557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,69,80664,2,0,P|226:51|271:32,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
251,241,81092,1,10,0:0:0:0:
234,136,81307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
62,237,81521,5,2,0:0:0:0:
191,353,81735,1,2,0:0:0:0:
234,136,81950,1,10,0:0:0:0:
158,270,82164,1,2,0:0:0:0:
158,270,82271,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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343,185,82592,2,0,L|300:188,1,42.5,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,347,82807,1,10,0:0:0:0:
443,249,83021,1,8,0:0:0:0:
443,249,83128,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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317,184,84307,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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338,329,85592,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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246,23,86664,5,10,0:0:0:0:
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

lazyboy007 wrote:

Hi from my queue for NM ^^

General:

Your kiai times are not consistent through the diffs, careful as this is a ranking criteria I think.

Easy diff:
Rythmically good ^^

00:08:235 (2,3) - Alignment is not perfect here
00:17:235 (2) - I wouldn't make this as angled in an Easy diff
00:26:222 (2,3,4) - Alignment again (sry i don't like it when it's just barely not perfectly aligned x) )
00:30:079 (3) - Move this down imo
01:05:235 (2) - Too angled again
01:06:521 (1,2) - Bad alignment
01:09:521 (1,2,3) - Alignment
01:23:235 (1,2) - Turn 2 around with ctr+h and ctr+j this doesn't look too nice

Other than that nice map

Normal:

Rythmically correct too.

01:23:235 (1,2) - blanket this more
00:41:651 (1,2) - NC on 2 not 1
00:46:365 (3,4) - more blanketting
01:21:521 (3,4,5) - put 4,5 in the same direction as the slider ends :) this might be confusing in such a low diff

Nice map otherwise

Hard:

Rythmically good.

00:20:021 (1,2,3,4,5) - Looks a little weird imo, rotate 3 by -30 and 4,5 by -60 or something like that, would look nice ^^
00:26:650 (1,3) - these don't look nice, make them smoother
00:33:508 (1) - this slider looks weird too
00:37:793 (3) - make the last straight bit a bit longer, it's not symmetrical (sry ocd senses tingling)
00:54:092 (1) - Make this completely straight imo
00:59:664 (3) - same
01:22:378 (4,5,6) - alignment is weird here

Nice diff, i prefer it to the easier ones ^^

Momoka's Insane:

Most enjoyable map in the set in my opinion :)

00:20:235 (3,4,5) - this is hard to play for a <4* map

Nothing more to say here, good luck getting this ranked :)
thank you for modding! fixed many things. update.
Plus4j
Beatmap Nominator
1,070 posts
Joined March 2014
Plus4j
hello m4m

[Easy]
00:00:950 (1,2,3,4) - where is hitsound?
00:04:378 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:08:235 (2,3,4) - bad follow
00:05:663 (3,4) - lost DS pls open AI mod check

[Normal]
00:01:807 (3,4,5) - very bad follow
00:06:092 (3,4) - ^
00:17:235 (1) - remove NC
00:18:092 (2) - NC
00:18:521 (1) - remove NC
00:20:664 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:01:378 (3) - this slider...very weird
00:06:092 (1,2,3,4) - very bad fillow,redo
00:11:878 (2,3) - not perfect blanket

overall:Hard follow very bed,my suggest is remap
GL~
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

Hey lululu wrote:

hello m4m

[Easy]
00:00:950 (1,2,3,4) - where is hitsound? - i forget.added
00:04:378 (1,2,3,4) - ^ - ^
00:08:235 (2,3,4) - bad follow - same previous sound
00:05:663 (3,4) - lost DS pls open AI mod check - ok

[Normal]
00:01:807 (3,4,5) - very bad follow - Is that so? I think that it is all right in this state
00:06:092 (3,4) - ^ - ^
00:17:235 (1) - remove NC - It has changed little
00:18:092 (2) - NC
00:18:521 (1) - remove NC
00:20:664 (1) - ^

[Hard]
00:01:378 (3) - this slider...very weird - It was straight close shape
00:06:092 (1,2,3,4) - very bad fillow,redo - a little change
00:11:878 (2,3) - not perfect blanket

overall:Hard follow very bed,my suggest is remap - umm,,,This is my mapping style...
GL~
thank you for modding! update.
eeezzzeee
979 posts
Joined August 2013
eeezzzeee
Hi from my queue

[Momoka's Insane]
Its good!
  1. 00:49:807 (3) - missing a whistle
  2. 01:12:950 (1) - ctrl+g?
[Hard]
about the hitsounds, you should be using whistle at every white tick (like in momoka's insane) because they are for the bass drum right? It occurs every white tick throughout most of this song, not just on the same one as claps
  1. 00:02:021 (4) - check DS
  2. 00:09:521 (4) - NC
  3. 00:10:807 (6,7,2,3) - this kind of stacking patterns are hard to read for this diff.. maybe just stack one of them and put the second one somewhere else?
  4. 00:16:164 - maybe you dont need the whistle here at the tail of the slider
  5. 00:19:592 - ^
  6. 00:20:021 (1,2,4,5) - another difficult stacking pattern
  7. 00:21:936 (2) - check DS
  8. 00:24:079 (3,4) - change to a slider? i think that would fit the music better because theres no vocal or anything here so it shouldnt have so many objects
  9. 00:30:937 (4,5) - ^
  10. 00:36:294 (3) - DS
  11. 00:41:222 (3) - maybe you can make this flow a different direction than the previous one. like http://puu.sh/q4Hsw/3e16e5852e.jpg or something
  12. 00:47:008 (3,1) - maybe you can try this rhythm so the player doesnt have to time that 3/4, which is in a very weird spot http://puu.sh/q4HBz/d27d9d3bf2.jpg
  13. 00:55:592 (4) - DS ( its ok for it to be off by a little but when its off by a lot it becomes noticable. i dont wanna point these out anymore so just go through the map and change any ds that is like higher than 1.02 or less than .98 :) )
  14. 01:00:521 (5,1) - these are really close, maybe move the circle to 257,179 to make a perfect triangle http://puu.sh/q4HNo/d759324641.jpg
  15. 01:01:164 (6,1) - swap NC
  16. 01:04:378 (7,1) - swap NC
  17. 01:07:807 (7,1) - swap NC
  18. 01:09:521 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - for the NC's here, try one of these two styles instead http://puu.sh/q4I5Q/c27202d7db.jpg or http://puu.sh/q4I6l/d5c506958c.jpg
  19. 01:16:378 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ^
  20. 01:19:807 (1,2) - blanket
  21. 01:22:700 (5) - try moving this one to 01:22:271 - i think that would sound much better
That's all from me, good luck! c:
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi from my queue

[Momoka's Insane]
Its good!
  1. 00:49:807 (3) - missing a whistle
  2. 01:12:950 (1) - ctrl+g?
[Hard]
about the hitsounds, you should be using whistle at every white tick (like in momoka's insane) because they are for the bass drum right? It occurs every white tick throughout most of this song, not just on the same one as claps - I'll think about it.
  1. 00:02:021 (4) - check DS
  2. 00:09:521 (4) - NC
  3. 00:10:807 (6,7,2,3) - this kind of stacking patterns are hard to read for this diff.. maybe just stack one of them and put the second one somewhere else?
  4. 00:16:164 - maybe you dont need the whistle here at the tail of the slider
  5. 00:19:592 - ^
  6. 00:20:021 (1,2,4,5) - another difficult stacking pattern
  7. 00:21:936 (2) - check DS
  8. 00:24:079 (3,4) - change to a slider? i think that would fit the music better because theres no vocal or anything here so it shouldnt have so many objects
  9. 00:30:937 (4,5) - ^
  10. 00:36:294 (3) - DS
  11. 00:41:222 (3) - maybe you can make this flow a different direction than the previous one. like http://puu.sh/q4Hsw/3e16e5852e.jpg or something
  12. 00:47:008 (3,1) - maybe you can try this rhythm so the player doesnt have to time that 3/4, which is in a very weird spot http://puu.sh/q4HBz/d27d9d3bf2.jpg
  13. 00:55:592 (4) - DS ( its ok for it to be off by a little but when its off by a lot it becomes noticable. i dont wanna point these out anymore so just go through the map and change any ds that is like higher than 1.02 or less than .98 :) )
  14. 01:00:521 (5,1) - these are really close, maybe move the circle to 257,179 to make a perfect triangle http://puu.sh/q4HNo/d759324641.jpg
  15. 01:01:164 (6,1) - swap NC
  16. 01:04:378 (7,1) - swap NC
  17. 01:07:807 (7,1) - swap NC
  18. 01:09:521 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - for the NC's here, try one of these two styles instead http://puu.sh/q4I5Q/c27202d7db.jpg or http://puu.sh/q4I6l/d5c506958c.jpg
  19. 01:16:378 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ^
  20. 01:19:807 (1,2) - blanket
  21. 01:22:700 (5) - try moving this one to 01:22:271 - i think that would sound much better
That's all from me, good luck! c:
fixed a lot.thank you for modding!
Underforest
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Underforest
Placeholding to mod back from M4M, sorry for long wait
Ozato Fumika
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined July 2013
Ozato Fumika
SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 48722
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Hold on me ~Koi no Mahou~
TitleUnicode:Hold on me ～恋の魔法～
Artist:Utatsuki Kaori
ArtistUnicode:詩月カオリ
Creator:chaica
Version:Momoka's Insane
Source:ラブライド・イヴ
Tags:short ver op opening eroge Love-Bride Eve LEVEL OCTAVE Girls Compilation C.G mix whitesoft I've Sound No_Dap Moeka Shioi Momoka
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BeatmapSetID:329118

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Renka
858 posts
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Topic Starter
Renka
update
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Momoka's Insane (*3.61)

Something's wrong!
Underforest
5,895 posts
Joined July 2015
Underforest
To be honest, I checked your map and is mostly fine, so no mod from me
BTW, I think Easy needs more rework with flow but rhythm and diffs are fine

Good luck and no kudosu!
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

Underforest wrote:

To be honest, I checked your map and is mostly fine, so no mod from me
BTW, I think Easy needs more rework with flow but rhythm and diffs are fine

Good luck and no kudosu!
thanks,I will reconsideration easy diff.
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka
updated.

Sonnyc wrote:

Momoka's Insane (*3.61)

Something's wrong!
ez?
rs_fadeaway
264 posts
Joined May 2010
rs_fadeaway
[Easy]
00:11:235 (1,2,3,4) - try to make the flow more comfortable, not like this too sharp
00:19:807 (3) - make the slider more balance, and i suggest to make a slider has 3 turning points,will more fit vocal.like http://puu.sh/qhsQU/d34414f6d1.jpg
00:21:936 (2,3,4,1) - same not suggest to make so sharp flow, not good for beginner
00:24:936 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^
00:40:365 (1) - also suggest to a 3 turning points slider, or 1 turning point
00:54:092 (4,5,1,2) - flow
01:02:664 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - looks kinda crowd for me :3
the rhythm is fine for me, but i think u should improve the problems above)

[Normal]
00:12:092 (2) - move it to 124;292 to balance the pattern, will looks more beautiful
00:15:521 (1,1) - Sry, but i dont really get the point of NC here
01:25:164 - the sound here is heavy mb u could make a reverse slider?

[Hard]
Consier to decrease SV , 1.6 seems a little faster. or u can increase the DS a little. coz when i testing，the cursor's move speed in sliders is much more faster than the speed moving between notes.
00:16:378 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - they are keep circling in the mid，why not separate them? will more neat.
01:10:592 (4) - anti-clockwise -30° seems pretty better, for both the flow and pattern

[Insane]
totally clear for me

All diffs' rhythm fine，but i think the low diffs still have improve space. GL
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

rs_fadeaway wrote:

[Easy]
00:11:235 (1,2,3,4) - try to make the flow more comfortable, not like this too sharp - ok
00:19:807 (3) - make the slider more balance, and i suggest to make a slider has 3 turning points,will more fit vocal.like http://puu.sh/qhsQU/d34414f6d1.jpg
00:21:936 (2,3,4,1) - same not suggest to make so sharp flow, not good for beginner - changed
00:24:936 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ - ^
00:40:365 (1) - also suggest to a 3 turning points slider, or 1 turning point -
00:54:092 (4,5,1,2) - flow
01:02:664 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - looks kinda crowd for me :3
the rhythm is fine for me, but i think u should improve the problems above) - It has been changed for clarity.

[Normal]
00:12:092 (2) - move it to 124;292 to balance the pattern, will looks more beautiful
00:15:521 (1,1) - Sry, but i dont really get the point of NC here
01:25:164 - the sound here is heavy mb u could make a reverse slider?

[Hard]
Consier to decrease SV , 1.6 seems a little faster. or u can increase the DS a little. coz when i testing，the cursor's move speed in sliders is much more faster than the speed moving between notes. - change SV1.4,and DS a 1.2
00:16:378 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - they are keep circling in the mid，why not separate them? will more neat.
01:10:592 (4) - anti-clockwise -30° seems pretty better, for both the flow and pattern

[Insane]
totally clear for me

All diffs' rhythm fine，but i think the low diffs still have improve space. GL
thank you for modding,update.
Nardoxyribonucleic
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Nardoxyribonucleic
Hi, here is the M4M as requested.

  • [General]
  1. 00:21:508 - the green line here could be removed as it is not in use.
  2. Video: There is a kissing scene at 0:41 which appears more nsfw than this. But I'm not sure whether it is still acceptable or not... lol
  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:27:079 (82) - consider removing this note for a 2/1 break ? Currently the difficulty is mapped in a way too consecutive, so a rest would be nice as vocal pauses.
  2. 00:27:722 (83) - you may change this note to k for a smoother flow if you apply ^
  3. 00:33:936 (103) - similar to 00:27:079 (82) - , you may move this note to 00:35:008 - for consistency.
  4. 00:31:793 (96,97,98,99,100,101) - dkd ddk would sound better if you change ^
  5. 00:37:258 (115,116) - swapping these notes to d k would follow the pitch increase more appropriately.
  6. 00:52:378 (171,172,173,174) - maybe use k ddd instead of d kkk to cohere with 00:59:450 (200,201,202) - ?
  7. 00:53:450 (177,178) - d k would fit the pitch drop across 00:53:664 (178,179) - well.
  8. 01:04:164 (220,221) - swap these notes to k d ? This would reflect the pitch increase among 01:04:378 (221,224,229) - nicely.
  9. 01:09:735 (245) - delete and move 01:10:164 (246) - to 01:10:378 - for another 2/1 rest ? Same reason as 00:27:079 (82) -
  10. 01:11:450 (251) - move this note to 01:11:664 - and change to k ? This would be easier to follow imo.
  11. 01:16:592 (274,275) - same suggestion as 01:09:735 (245) -
  12. 01:18:307 (280) - same as 01:11:450 (251) -
  13. 01:17:878 (278,279) - you can swap these notes to d k so that it would be consistent with 01:11:021 (249,250) -
  14. 01:24:735 (307) - maybe delete this note ? The 1/2 pattern is rather long at the moment.
  • [Oni]
  1. 00:52:592 (240,241,242) - maybe ddk to keep it consistent with 00:49:164 (221,222,223) - ?
  2. 00:53:235 (244,245,246,247) - kkd k would accompany the vocal in a way better.
  3. 01:03:735 (302,303,304,305,306) - consider changing these notes to kdk k d ? This would be less repetitive and cooler to play imo.
  4. 01:17:878 (385,386) - same as Muzukashii
You may call me back after that~ :D
Renka
858 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
Renka

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here is the M4M as requested.

  • [General]
  1. 00:21:508 - the green line here could be removed as it is not in use.
  2. Video: There is a kissing scene at 0:41 which appears more nsfw than this. But I'm not sure whether it is still acceptable or not... lol -
  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:27:079 (82) - consider removing this note for a 2/1 break ? Currently the difficulty is mapped in a way too consecutive, so a rest would be nice as vocal pauses.
  2. 00:27:722 (83) - you may change this note to k for a smoother flow if you apply ^ -
  3. 00:33:936 (103) - similar to 00:27:079 (82) - , you may move this note to 00:35:008 - for consistency.
  4. 00:31:793 (96,97,98,99,100,101) - dkd ddk would sound better if you change ^
  5. 00:37:258 (115,116) - swapping these notes to d k would follow the pitch increase more appropriately.
  6. 00:52:378 (171,172,173,174) - maybe use k ddd instead of d kkk to cohere with 00:59:450 (200,201,202) - ?
  7. 00:53:450 (177,178) - d k would fit the pitch drop across 00:53:664 (178,179) - well.
  8. 01:04:164 (220,221) - swap these notes to k d ? This would reflect the pitch increase among 01:04:378 (221,224,229) - nicely.
  9. 01:09:735 (245) - delete and move 01:10:164 (246) - to 01:10:378 - for another 2/1 rest ? Same reason as 00:27:079 (82) - umm. I changed this
  10. 01:11:450 (251) - move this note to 01:11:664 - and change to k ? This would be easier to follow imo.
  11. 01:16:592 (274,275) - same suggestion as 01:09:735 (245) -
  12. 01:18:307 (280) - same as 01:11:450 (251) -
  13. 01:17:878 (278,279) - you can swap these notes to d k so that it would be consistent with 01:11:021 (249,250) -
  14. 01:24:735 (307) - maybe delete this note ? The 1/2 pattern is rather long at the moment.
  • [Oni]
  1. 00:52:592 (240,241,242) - maybe ddk to keep it consistent with 00:49:164 (221,222,223) - ?
  2. 00:53:235 (244,245,246,247) - kkd k would accompany the vocal in a way better.
  3. 01:03:735 (302,303,304,305,306) - consider changing these notes to kdk k d ? This would be less repetitive and cooler to play imo.
  4. 01:17:878 (385,386) - same as Muzukashii
You may call me back after that~ :D
no comments:fixed.thank you for modding!
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Nardoxyribonucleic
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Nardoxyribonucleic
A quick recheck here. (no kd)

  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:47:544 (153,154) - maybe delete these notes instead for a 2/1 break ? This would also result in a better spread with Oni.
  2. 01:03:735 (216) - you may change this note to d to cohere with 01:07:164 (232) -
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