Whatever im gonna mod this anyways, regardless of whether you accept this as m4m or nah
Changing d/k is just my personal opinion what i hear
somehow i keep hearing bagpipes in the background where theres really some vocals of some kind
All diffs
Disable countdown <3
Jumps between oni inner and loveless in terms of note density are a bit.... harsh
Kantan0.70 sv lol
First of all, i am wondering whether you could halve the bpm to 140 but not move the notes, so they still land exactly on time but there is not as many annoying bar lines or do you have to change the bpm for the whole mapset then?
Why HP6?
00:48:001 - is the finisher really nessecary?
00:59:144 - k?
01:00:430 - in my opinion this is a d
01:36:859 (145, 146, 147, 148, 149, 150, 151, 152, 153) - in my opinion this would work better as d k d d k d d d k
02:03:859 - keeping in mind this is kantan, what i hear is BRBRBRBR (silence) BRBRBRRB. therefore i think removing (182) is a viable option
02:05:573 - same ^
Futsuu
Why HP6?
The same problem as with the Kantan, theres quite a lot of bar lines. Im not sure how to fix this but for the rest there's just a couple of notes where i think a change would be appropriate.
In the beginning the music follows a structure... why did you not map to that?
00:12:216 - i clearly hear this note as lower pitch, so d?
00:34:073 - would make more sense to move this note to 00:34:287 and make it a k
00:53:359 - d in my mind
00:54:537 - i dont feel this noise is obvious enough for a note... maybe just do a break here or make it d d on 00:54:430 and 00:54:644
Muzukashii
HP6 is still harsh
Because of the higher note density i dont think that the bar lines is a problem here
Lowering the SV seems appropriate here because to be fair this plays like it's half the bpm (not 1/4 patterns, just 1/2)
HP6 is a bit on the high side
02:00:859 - change to d imo
02:02:573 - change to k imo
For the rest i'd say change patterns like 02:07:287 (599, 600, 601, 602, 603) to k k k k d (so make them monocolor except for the last note)
Oni
OD6 and HP6 are harsh imo
00:48:001 - this finisher is perfectly justifyable but serious dude it's 280 bpm, have mercy xD
02:22:501 - maybe add a triple kkk here?
02:23:359 - triple here too?
The triples are just there to make the diff a bit more interesting because right now it is basically the muzu but with more pattern complexity, i think adding a few triples would be acceptable. It would move the Oni SR a bit more to the middle between muzu and inner as well
Inner Oni
oh hey thats nice there's 1/3 here O WAIT FUCK THIS IS SO FAST
OD7?....
First off, personally i hate patterns that are e.g. k k kkk or d ddd d (so basically a note followed up by a triple in the same color) i personally feel it would be nicer to change that to smth like e.g. k d kkd or d kdd k just to make it more playable to divide the strain over more fingers.
01:01:073 - example of the above :3
01:59:251 - this sort of stands out from the rest, what made you decide to make this a 5 burst instead of the triples we find err'where else?
02:08:787 - in my opinion kkkkd would fit
02:09:644 - ddddk?
02:10:716 - im hearing that the doubles start here so move the doubles here and then make a triple at 02:11:037 02:11:091 02:11:144
02:40:073 - maybe do ddddk kkd ?
Loveless Oni
wtf bro OD 8? HP3 is nice and forgiving though :3
will finish loveless oni mod soon, in school currently
Changing d/k is just my personal opinion what i hear
All diffs
Disable countdown <3
Jumps between oni inner and loveless in terms of note density are a bit.... harsh
Kantan
First of all, i am wondering whether you could halve the bpm to 140 but not move the notes, so they still land exactly on time but there is not as many annoying bar lines or do you have to change the bpm for the whole mapset then?
Why HP6?
00:48:001 - is the finisher really nessecary?
00:59:144 - k?
01:00:430 - in my opinion this is a d
01:36:859 (145, 146, 147, 148, 149, 150, 151, 152, 153) - in my opinion this would work better as d k d d k d d d k
02:03:859 - keeping in mind this is kantan, what i hear is BRBRBRBR (silence) BRBRBRRB. therefore i think removing (182) is a viable option
02:05:573 - same ^
Futsuu
Why HP6?
The same problem as with the Kantan, theres quite a lot of bar lines. Im not sure how to fix this but for the rest there's just a couple of notes where i think a change would be appropriate.
In the beginning the music follows a structure... why did you not map to that?
00:12:216 - i clearly hear this note as lower pitch, so d?
00:34:073 - would make more sense to move this note to 00:34:287 and make it a k
00:53:359 - d in my mind
00:54:537 - i dont feel this noise is obvious enough for a note... maybe just do a break here or make it d d on 00:54:430 and 00:54:644
Muzukashii
HP6 is still harsh
Because of the higher note density i dont think that the bar lines is a problem here
Lowering the SV seems appropriate here because to be fair this plays like it's half the bpm (not 1/4 patterns, just 1/2)
HP6 is a bit on the high side
02:00:859 - change to d imo
02:02:573 - change to k imo
For the rest i'd say change patterns like 02:07:287 (599, 600, 601, 602, 603) to k k k k d (so make them monocolor except for the last note)
Oni
OD6 and HP6 are harsh imo
00:48:001 - this finisher is perfectly justifyable but serious dude it's 280 bpm, have mercy xD
02:22:501 - maybe add a triple kkk here?
02:23:359 - triple here too?
The triples are just there to make the diff a bit more interesting because right now it is basically the muzu but with more pattern complexity, i think adding a few triples would be acceptable. It would move the Oni SR a bit more to the middle between muzu and inner as well
Inner Oni
OD7?....
First off, personally i hate patterns that are e.g. k k kkk or d ddd d (so basically a note followed up by a triple in the same color) i personally feel it would be nicer to change that to smth like e.g. k d kkd or d kdd k just to make it more playable to divide the strain over more fingers.
01:01:073 - example of the above :3
01:59:251 - this sort of stands out from the rest, what made you decide to make this a 5 burst instead of the triples we find err'where else?
02:08:787 - in my opinion kkkkd would fit
02:09:644 - ddddk?
02:10:716 - im hearing that the doubles start here so move the doubles here and then make a triple at 02:11:037 02:11:091 02:11:144
02:40:073 - maybe do ddddk kkd ?
Loveless Oni
wtf bro OD 8? HP3 is nice and forgiving though :3
will finish loveless oni mod soon, in school currently