Mika Kobayashi - Through My Blood · forum

Janpai

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-06-25T06:35:15+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, October 07, 2016 at 5:14:04 AM

Artist: Mika Kobayashi
Title: Through My Blood
Source: 甲鉄城のカバネリ
Tags: Koutetsujou no Kabaneri of the Iron Fortress Mumei Episode 4 BGM Background Music OST Original Soundtrack 澤野弘之 sawano hiroyuki cAnON Akitoshi
BPM: 192
Filesize: 5940kb
Play Time: 01:56
Difficulties Available:

Akitoshi's Insane (4.65 stars, 338 notes)
Easy (1.54 stars, 115 notes)
Hard (3.38 stars, 312 notes)
Misery (5.35 stars, 436 notes)
Normal (2.2 stars, 212 notes)

Download: Mika Kobayashi - Through My Blood
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Please ask me before using the mp3 because I had a hard time cutting this one

MAPSET:

Easy - Janpai Remapped 09/11/2016

Normal - Janpai

Hard - Janpai

Akitoshi's Insane - Akitoshi

Misery - Janpai

Many thanks to ByBy and IamKwaN for the metadata confirmations!

Lyrics

Through My Blood

Am I still in the glum nightmare?
Or am I mere stoned?

Tiny bit of reason still remains in my right hand
That power of ache
Will just keep me alive

Can't touch nothing 'bout the world
But truth almost has revealed
Then smash out the future told
Its time to end this miseries

Latch off my vagus nerve
What color is my blood red, black or white
Now I'm getting ready
Oh, where are my frenemies?

Have I gone so mad?
The pain's through my blood

Aimer - Through My Blood by HB24

Last edited by Janpai 2016-10-07T20:16:06+00:00, edited 62 times in total.

Zallies

499 posts

Joined April 2015

Zallies 2016-06-26T05:29:21+00:00

can i do atleast hard?

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-06-26T06:13:39+00:00

Sorry but I'll be doing all the easy diffs xD

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-06-27T17:26:16+00:00

asdwqeqweqwdsads

~~tanginang mga gd reqs to nauubos na idea ko holy~~
so ye gonna mod sth even i actually cant

[Akitoshit's Insane]

Re-map wtf with those SV that's why I hate 2014~ maps stop ur mapping career you weeb fake asian lols

[Misery]

Increase OD? Extras nowadays have pretty high OD because pepe
00:45:110 (2,3) - CTRL + G? This is pretty unexpected to drop the jump liek dis
00:47:922 (2,1) - uhm maybe move this two for maintain blanket thingy so, stack this 2 on tail of 00:49:329 (1) -
00:52:610 (2,3,4) - between 00:51:672 (2,3,4) - well idk if this is variation, but make them same placement pattern would be nice since the emphasis of le song is pretty same as well xd
00:55:891 (1,2,3) - well this is just my shitty taste opinion but ye this works smoother >>https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5486700
00:57:766 (1) - sooo your 00:58:391 (3) - is V shaped so why not here as well?
SPOILER
01:05:735 (2,3) - DS x1.5 works here imo, x1.2 is too near xd
01:11:516 (4) - move to 300|138 for where the almost center of 01:10:891 (1,2) - was, yes. almost.
01:19:329 (1) - well im fking picky about this kind of placement, you can re-shape a bit for making blanket with 01:18:391 (1) - You just move that slider on timeline to see the ripples of circles/sliders >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5486795
01:24:641 (3) - parallel with 01:24:016 (1) - ? You did almost all of your previous patterns so ya
01:38:079 (1,2) - between 01:36:204 (1) - well ya hitting 01:38:547 (3) - after current 01:38:079 (1,2) - is somewhat misread as triples lol maybe consider to extend 3/4 slider to 1/1 liek your prev one
01:43:704 (1) - trim to 1/2? Since the section from 01:41:829 - to 01:48:391 - you only used 3/4 slider just here xd
01:56:360 (4,5,1) - M O R E E M P H A S I S P L E A S E > > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5486840

more lazymod for e-n

Easy

00:18:391 (2) - Please be gay
SPOILER
00:30:579 (1) - Ayaw kong nabubuntis yung flow so here we go boiz tiem for nazi
SPOILER
00:55:891 (3) - should be ended on 00:56:360 - imo, follow vocal here looks gud
01:13:704 (1) - Aimod didn't say out of the area but hey x:-35 is too much xd

Normal

00:18:391 (3,4) - Try this one?
SPOILER
00:40:657 - place back to default break time? easy doesn't have dat one
00:42:766 (3,4,1,2,3) - try this pattern? idk this is just my selfishness from mapped too much meme normals lul
SPOILER
00:48:860 - vocals ends with here, but you placed something on 00:49:016 - that feels so awkward so try this one? Maybe this 1/2 usage is still safe. if not move 00:49:016 (4) - to 00:48:860 -
SPOILER
00:52:766 (4) - ^
00:59:172 (2,3,4) - well I have 2 options here for my shitty preference
op1
op2
01:06:672 (2,3,4) - im not sure, ^ or
SPOILER
01:14:172 (2,3,4) - same
01:18:860 (5) - extend to 1/1 and start it on 01:18:860 - would be nice
01:55:891 (1) - lol dat ending, try this?
SPOILER

mumei's armpits was so underrated :<

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-06-28T09:15:35+00:00

Akitoshi wrote:
asdwqeqweqwdsads

~~tanginang mga gd reqs to nauubos na idea ko holy~~
so ye gonna mod sth even i actually cant
[Akitoshit's Insane]
Re-map wtf with those SV that's why I hate 2014~ maps stop ur mapping career you weeb fake asian lols #RespectAkitoshi

[Misery]
Increase OD? Extras nowadays have pretty high OD because pepe okay raised to 8.5 xD really dunno what extra's diff setup xD
00:45:110 (2,3) - CTRL + G? This is pretty unexpected to drop the jump liek dis I think it's pretty readable and for emphasis at the drum
00:47:922 (2,1) - uhm maybe move this two for maintain blanket thingy so, stack this 2 on tail of 00:49:329 (1) - okay
00:52:610 (2,3,4) - between 00:51:672 (2,3,4) - well idk if this is variation, but make them same placement pattern would be nice since the emphasis of le song is pretty same as well xd idk why i placed it like that xD fixed
00:55:891 (1,2,3) - well this is just my shitty taste opinion but ye this works smoother >>https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5486700 suuureeee
00:57:766 (1) - sooo your 00:58:391 (3) - is V shaped so why not here as well? i like this flow reminds me of HabiHolic lol xD
SPOILER
01:05:735 (2,3) - DS x1.5 works here imo, x1.2 is too near xd #BlameMapper fixed xD
01:11:516 (4) - move to 300|138 for where the almost center of 01:10:891 (1,2) - was, yes. almost. sureee
01:19:329 (1) - well im fking picky about this kind of placement, you can re-shape a bit for making blanket with 01:18:391 (1) - You just move that slider on timeline to see the ripples of circles/sliders >> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5486795 well but I'll see more opinions cuz I don't see any problem here xD
01:24:641 (3) - parallel with 01:24:016 (1) - ? You did almost all of your previous patterns so ya kkkkk
01:38:079 (1,2) - between 01:36:204 (1) - well ya hitting 01:38:547 (3) - after current 01:38:079 (1,2) - is somewhat misread as triples lol maybe consider to extend 3/4 slider to 1/1 liek your prev one just stacked it on 4
01:43:704 (1) - trim to 1/2? Since the section from 01:41:829 - to 01:48:391 - you only used 3/4 slider just here xd okayyy
01:56:360 (4,5,1) - M O R E E M P H A S I S P L E A S E > > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5486840
i'm bad fixed xD

more lazymod for e-n

Easy
00:18:391 (2) - Please be gay I like straights and i don't like this slider being gay :3
SPOILER
00:30:579 (1) - Ayaw kong nabubuntis yung flow so here we go boiz tiem for nazi but I like this slider meme xD
SPOILER
00:55:891 (3) - should be ended on 00:56:360 - imo, follow vocal here looks gud okieeeeeeeeee
01:13:704 (1) - Aimod didn't say out of the area but hey x:-35 is too much xd okay fixed xD
Normal
00:18:391 (3,4) - Try this one? surebol
SPOILER
00:40:657 - place back to default break time? easy doesn't have dat one i don't understand what to do here I just put a break time and idk how that blue highlight came there xD
00:42:766 (3,4,1,2,3) - try this pattern? idk this is just my selfishness from mapped too much meme normals lul I was mainly following the drums here xD
SPOILER
00:48:860 - vocals ends with here, but you placed something on 00:49:016 - that feels so awkward so try this one? Maybe this 1/2 usage is still safe. if not move 00:49:016 (4) - to 00:48:860 - Same ^^ xD
SPOILER
00:52:766 (4) - ^
00:59:172 (2,3,4) - well I have 2 options here for my shitty preference
op1
op2
01:06:672 (2,3,4) - im not sure, ^ or Same as above, sorry but I have to deny xDD
SPOILER
01:14:172 (2,3,4) - same
01:18:860 (5) - extend to 1/1 and start it on 01:18:860 - would be nice but the drums would be ignored and I don't like ignoring drums xD
01:55:891 (1) - lol dat ending, try this? suuuureeee
SPOILER
mumei's armpits was so underrated :< mumei is a meme

thanks mr. akitoshitzxc for the mod xD i think my normal is too bad lol :v T^T someone help me aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2016-07-02T10:21:52+00:00

Greetings! Metadata check as you requested

Artist: 澤野弘之 feat. 小林未郁
Romanised Artist: Hiroyuki Sawano feat. Mika Kobayashi
Title: Through My Blood
Source: 甲鉄城のカバネリ
Music and Composer: Hiroyuki Sawano
Vocal: Mika Kobayashi

Reference: https://www.aniplexplus.com/itemsSfwbLxL http://kabaneri.com/soundtrack/ http://miccabose.com/page/2/ <- It says there about the song in which she participated as vocal.
Moreover,there's another version of this song which have as vocal Aimer (it is named Hiroyuki Sawano feat. Aimer). I hope it's fine the metadata >.<

Good Luck!

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-07-02T15:47:10+00:00

hi oko!
ohwait

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-07-03T01:28:09+00:00

ByBy13 wrote:
Greetings! Metadata check as you requested

Artist: 澤野弘之 feat. 小林未郁
Romanised Artist: Hiroyuki Sawano feat. Mika Kobayashi
Title: Through My Blood
Source: 甲鉄城のカバネリ
Music and Composer: Hiroyuki Sawano
Vocal: Mika Kobayashi

Reference: https://www.aniplexplus.com/itemsSfwbLxL http://kabaneri.com/soundtrack/ http://miccabose.com/page/2/ <- It says there about the song in which she participated as vocal.
Moreover,there's another version of this song which have as vocal Aimer (it is named Hiroyuki Sawano feat. Aimer). I hope it's fine the metadata >.<

Good Luck!

Thanks a lot! <3
Please post some mods below xD Kabaneris are ready 3:)

Sotarks

3,493 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2016-07-04T11:20:55+00:00

Hi! M4M from my queue~.

Misery

00:39:954 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you could low the sv down here could be sexy
01:20:266 (1) - try ctrl g this and place it 355/193, it's sexy af
01:26:204 (2) - how to break combo

nice pp

Akitoshit's Norm.. (wait wat?) INSANE ??!

Since you are using slow SV (that is awesome) but I would like to see more emphasis on clap like 00:12:766 (1) - this, like you could space this more so the player can feel the emphasis on the claps here, having a slow SV will help a lot! I won't notice all of them, but yeah consider emphasis all your claps here! (Only clap slider tho)
00:56:829 (1) - It will be sexy af that you use high SV for kiai, I felt like it's missing some intensity here, like the begining was awesome, but the first note of the kiai I was like "zzzzzz", maybe a 2,50 SV minimum could be cool, but this is just my opinion tho.
01:11:672 (3) - Why this hitsound on this note ? It's better to put it on 01:11:829 (1) - xD

Really cool diff!

Feel free to not mod my map if it's not helpful, I didn't find much me noob modder :'(
GL~

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-07-04T13:44:02+00:00

Sotarks wrote:
Akitoshit's Norm.. (wait wat?) INSANE ??!
AKITOSHIT MAPPED INSANE? OMG
Since you are using slow SV (that is awesome) but I would like to see more emphasis on clap like 00:12:766 (1) - this, like you could space this more so the player can feel the emphasis on the claps here, having a slow SV will help a lot! I won't notice all of them, but yeah consider emphasis all your claps here! (Only clap slider tho) true, put them further a bit
00:56:829 (1) - It will be sexy af that you use high SV for kiai, I felt like it's missing some intensity here, like the begining was awesome, but the first note of the kiai I was like "zzzzzz", maybe a 2,50 SV minimum could be cool, but this is just my opinion tho. well after this slowest part 00:55:891 (1,2) - , 1.5 is just okay enough imo, I trimmed 00:56:829 (1) - into 1/1 sliders to make it more spammy look on the beginning of the kiai.
01:11:672 (3) - Why this hitsound on this note ? It's better to put it on 01:11:829 (1) - xD I repeated on this part like 7~10times, and yes. Some crashing cymbals sounds was actually starting there. Idk if im just getting near to deaf or sth, I will consider it xd

Really cool diff! Akitoshit now upgraded from Normal to Insane!1!11!1

Thanks mr.Soterks♥

armpits

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Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-07-04T21:24:45+00:00

I will burn your ~~house~~ armpits if this meme wouldn't go rank afufufufu jk
~~will reply later after school xD~~ tadaima xD

Sotarks wrote:
Hi! M4M from my queue~.

Misery
00:39:954 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you could low the sv down here could be sexy I think 0.5x is already fine xD
01:20:266 (1) - try ctrl g this and place it 355/193, it's sexy af too much space for a clap xD
01:26:204 (2) - how to break combo I think it's fine xDDD not my job to make everything easier well I'll gather more opinions tho

nice pp PP meme
Feel free to not mod my map if it's not helpful, I didn't find much me noob modder :'( I'll mod it anyway xDD
GL~

Thank you senpai!

Chihara Minori

1,235 posts

Joined December 2013

Chihara Minori 2016-07-05T14:08:58+00:00

NM From my Weekend Modding Queue

Normal

Normal:
• 00:22:141 (3) - miss curve
• 00:30:579 (1,2) - slight blanket
• 00:56:829 (1) - move it a bit left to emph (3,4)
• 01:01:516 (3) - so plain, curve?
• 01:04:329 (1,2) - another slight, and add light right curve for (2)
• 01:18:391 (4) - increase curve
• 01:19:016 (5) - move the end a bit left like b4
• 01:34:329 (1) - this? http://puu.sh/pR6rU/f8eb87cdf5.jpg
• 01:48:391 (1) - as well http://puu.sh/pR6uN/8bf692602c.jpg
• 01:53:079 (1,3) - blanket, (1) need a curve imo

Hard

Hard:
• 01:01:047 (3) - stack with (4) instead, or just sparate it
• 01:06:204 (1,2,3,5) - you can decrease ds consistently actually
• 01:08:547 (3) - same as fist mod
• 01:54:485 (6,1) - blanket?
flows well

There's my mod, good luck

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-07-05T23:36:01+00:00

eclipselotus wrote:
NM From my Weekend Modding Queue

Normal
Normal:
• 00:22:141 (3) - miss curve okay
• 00:30:579 (1,2) - slight blanket kkk
• 00:56:829 (1) - move it a bit left to emph (3,4) I think it's fine
• 01:01:516 (3) - so plain, curve? okay
• 01:04:329 (1,2) - another slight, and add light right curve for (2) it's fine for me ;w;
• 01:18:391 (4) - increase curve ^^
• 01:19:016 (5) - move the end a bit left like b4 ^^
• 01:34:329 (1) - this? http://puu.sh/pR6rU/f8eb87cdf5.jpg i like the current one xD
• 01:48:391 (1) - as well http://puu.sh/pR6uN/8bf692602c.jpg sure
• 01:53:079 (1,3) - blanket, (1) need a curve imo fine imo

Hard
Hard:
• 01:01:047 (3) - stack with (4) instead, or just sparate it I like this stack xD
• 01:06:204 (1,2,3,5) - you can decrease ds consistently actually but I want to be consistent with the jumps xD
• 01:08:547 (3) - same as fist mod ^^
• 01:54:485 (6,1) - blanket? ^^
flows well

There's my mod, good luck

Thanks for the mod!

tatemae

841 posts

Joined November 2014

tatemae 2016-07-07T13:31:11+00:00

yo from my qe

Misery

00:11:829 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This looks uneven :/ try changing it to star-pattern imo, 00:11:829 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - or cntrl+g
00:14:641 (1) - plain slider instead since it fits the instruments a lot better imo
00:16:516 (1) - same as above
00:56:829 (1) - 1/1?
01:04:641 (2,3,4,5) - cntr+g
01:07:766 (3) - cntrl+h for better flow
01:08:079 (1) - ^
01:26:204 (2,1) - stack imo, it is intuitively played better

Good luck~

CernTheLion

165 posts

Joined February 2015

CernTheLion 2016-07-08T01:08:17+00:00

Hi, M4M

Easy

01:02:141 (3,1) - fix this blanket
01:36:204 (1,2) - ^
01:47:454 (1,2) - you can also do a blanket here, it's up to you

Normal

00:27:766 (2,3) - fix this (just a bit)
01:14:641 (3,4,1) - try to do a perfect triangle here, that's weird :/
01:15:579 (1,2,3) - same
01:18:235 (3) - this beat sounds really weird, try to move it at 01:18:079 -
01:38:079 (1,2,3,4) - fix this square

Hard

00:58:704 (1,2) - you can also do a blanket, it's up to you here
01:13:704 (1,2) - fix this blanket
01:29:641 (3,5) - ^
01:36:204 (1,2) - ^
01:50:266 (4,2) - maybe a stack with the tail of the slider, tho
01:54:485 (6,1) - blanket

Akitoshi's Insane

Why this slider 00:15:579 (1) - is shorter than 00:11:829 (1,1) - these?
00:23:079 (1) - same
00:32:454 - why there are any notes here? o.o
00:47:454 - same
01:01:047 (5,2) - blanket
01:12:766 (3) - NC here (New Combo)
01:56:672 (4) - place a circle instead of a slider here

Misery

00:16:985 (2,3) - stack
00:26:360 (3,1) - fix this (just a bit)
01:18:235 (6,4) - stack
01:41:829 (1,3) - blanket
01:52:141 (1,1) - fix this one too

Map seems good, nice work ^^

Fanteer

483 posts

Joined February 2016

Fanteer 2016-07-08T01:26:40+00:00

M4M

Easy
00:28:704 (3,4) - i think,you can vary the sliders. You can add a curve and change them but they
must be the same
00:30:579 (1) - because of the vocals, then you can put reverse slider
01:00:579 (1,2) - 2 straight slider look ugly
01:32:454 (1,2) - ^

Normal
00:15:891 (2,3) - I have a friend newcomer and it is terribly furious from such moments when,
after a sharp slider note. I do not know what to do in Normal 00:21:204 (1,2) - such moments even
normal but with a note ...
01:19:329 (1,1) - so-so looks

[size=150]Hard
01:06:204 (1,2,3,5) - 4 straight slider successively

Akitoshi's Insane
00:53:704 (2,3,4,5,6) - monotone jumps 45 degrees
01:33:391 (3,4,5,6,7) - seriously, You can come up with interesting. for example
http://puu.sh/pU5yf/1fa4aa33bc.jpg]
perhaps this is some sort of trick mapper,but it looks monotonous

Misery
01:05:891 (3,6) - fix blanket
01:18:079 (5) - I do not agree with this note,because overlap. put a note on x308 y292
01:25:891 (1,2) - Please http://puu.sh/pU6hU/dda89946e4.jpg

Good Luck

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-07-08T01:54:15+00:00

Fixed some minor problems from 2 previous mod, Sorry SherryCherry, I didn't apply any of your mod so no kd xD I'm really tired atm to reply, will get into your maps soon xD Thanks guys~ updated, waiting for Akitoshi

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-07-08T03:51:01+00:00

-Bumblebee- wrote:
Why this slider 00:15:579 (1) - is shorter than 00:11:829 (1,1) - these? it isn't I added a curve?
00:23:079 (1) - same same?
00:32:454 - why there are any notes here? o.o I'm following drums and vocals, not guitars.
00:47:454 - same same
01:01:047 (5,2) - blanket
01:12:766 (3) - NC here (New Combo)
01:56:672 (4) - place a circle instead of a slider here nah. I can clearly hear the echo.

Fanteer wrote:
Akitoshi's Insane
00:53:704 (2,3,4,5,6) - monotone jumps 45 degrees I can't see any issue there though.
01:33:391 (3,4,5,6,7) - seriously, You can come up with interesting. for example
http://puu.sh/pU5yf/1fa4aa33bc.jpg] wew, seems pretty crowded xd I took reference from some CRN maps I guess
perhaps this is some sort of trick mapper,but it looks monotonous No, I'm not even a trick mapper. I just found this song deserves a slow sliders how the lyrics flow. And I can't get it how I did monotonous, the song is not DnB or Brain power thingy that I can put any variation of streams when we heard O-oooooooooo AAAAE-A-A-I-A-U- JO-oooooooooooo AAE-O-A-A-U-U-A- E-eee-ee-eee AAAAE-A-E-I-E-A-JO-ooo-oo-oo-oo EEEEO-A-AAA-AAAA, and I'm not on the highest diff yet. So I believe it's better to keep consistency than variation on my diff. It's up to you if you'll agree or not. We have own way to do the things anyway.

no reply=fixed. thanks

O-oooooooooo AAAAE-A-A-I-A-U- JO-oooooooooooo AAE-O-A-A-U-U-A- E-eee-ee-eee AAAAE-A-E-I-E-A-JO-ooo-oo-oo-oo EEEEO-A-AAA-AAAA

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HabiHolic

5,373 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2016-07-09T04:06:14+00:00

M4M!

[General]

i think this map use double BPM. i think better 96BPM. change please.

[Easy]

00:18:391 (2) - made blanket here.

SPOILER

00:25:891 (2,3) - patten is swap? i think frist slider better for playing.
00:34:329 ~ 00:41:829 - I don't understand this part break.

[Normal]

00:34:329 ~ 00:41:829 -same Easy diff
00:54:954 (1,3) - NC swap please. cuz start voice 00:55:891 (3) - this.

[Hard]

00:34:329 ~ 00:41:829 -same Easy diff
00:55:891 (3) - Slider SV change part so NC here.
00:57:297 (2,3,5) - bad spacing..
01:01:204 (4,5) - anti jump patten here.
01:06:672 (2) - same(^)
01:56:204 (4,5,6) - patten sugguest

SPOILER

Nice map Good Luck!

Insane and Misery diff is fine~

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-07-09T05:25:48+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
M4M!

[General]

i think this map use double BPM. i think better 96BPM. change please. 192 is the correct BPM I guess, i tried 96 but it doesn't fit in the song

[Easy]

00:18:391 (2) - made blanket here. sure
SPOILER

00:25:891 (2,3) - patten is swap? i think frist slider better for playing. Second tick has drums so I made it clickable
00:34:329 ~ 00:41:829 - I don't understand this part break. I think the break here is kinda ideal because there's no drums here and this is very calm

[Normal]

00:34:329 ~ 00:41:829 -same Easy diff Same reason
00:54:954 (1,3) - NC swap please. cuz start voice 00:55:891 (3) - this. but I don't want to break my NCing pattern

[Hard]

00:34:329 ~ 00:41:829 -same Easy diff ^^
00:55:891 (3) - Slider SV change part so NC here. sure
00:57:297 (2,3,5) - bad spacing.. It's a jump for the drums
01:01:204 (4,5) - anti jump patten here. ^^
01:06:672 (2) - same(^) ^^
01:56:204 (4,5,6) - patten sugguest I think the current one is fine
SPOILER

Nice map Good Luck!

Insane and Misery diff is fine~

Thanks Habi :> Why you didn't use the mp3 I gave to you *le cries xD

domSaur

1,263 posts

Joined December 2013

domSaur 2016-07-09T09:53:40+00:00

how2mod
my part of the bargain.... if you could even call it that.

hard

00:15:891 (2,3) - maybe change this into a circle and a 1/2 slider bec i don't think there's any prominent clickable beat at 00:16:204
00:23:391 (2) - stack this on (3)'s head to emphasize both of their whistles
00:56:360 (2,3) - this is smth i don't quite see even for hards.. im pretty sure you could still leave 00:56:672 - w/o smth to click since it's not exactly a dominant beat and it makes even for the players of this range to hit this and then move on to (1) w/o having probs.. but if you rly wanna keep it maybe you could at the very least stack 00:56:829 (1) - to 00:56:672 (3) -

master aki

00:19:797 (2,3) - maybe you could switch these.. the slider would be emphasize the synth/guitar/whatever instrument that begins on 00:19:797 -
00:24:329 (5,6) - don't follow if you don't want to turn this into a 1/2 instead.. and also to help give more emphasis on the next pattern
01:03:079 (3) - you can also get this a little closer to 01:03:391 (1) - since this isn't really a prominent beat(at least not as big as the next big tick that comes after)and doesn't rly need as much distance for emphasis
01:46:204 (3,4) -this kinda kills the rising/building intensity of the song(since you've already began going full xexxar at this section anyway). at the very least turn 01:46:204 (3) - into 2 circles instead and leave (4) as a transition

misery

00:17:610 (2) - move this somewhere around x:30 y:153. slightly extend the distance between (1) and (2) and also so it'd go downwards
01:10:735 (6) - move this slightly closer since the entire 01:10:891 (1,2,3,4,5) - is pretty much just a transition for the grand beat at 01:11:829 (1) -

wtf am i even pointing out.
dunno if these are of any help but eh ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-07-09T12:44:28+00:00

domSaur wrote:
akitoshit
00:19:797 (2,3) - maybe you could switch these.. the slider would be emphasize the synth/guitar/whatever instrument that begins on 00:19:797 - ??? 00:20:110 - as circle is lame
00:24:329 (5,6) - don't follow if you don't want to turn this into a 1/2 instead.. and also to help give more emphasis on the next pattern too repetitive imo, due to 00:22:141 (3,4,5) - maybe I can do somewhat called variation.
01:03:079 (3) - you can also get this a little closer to 01:03:391 (1) - since this isn't really a prominent beat(at least not as big as the next big tick that comes after)and doesn't rly need as much distance for emphasis
01:46:204 (3,4) -this kinda kills the rising/building intensity of the song(since you've already began going full xexxar at this section anyway). at the very least turn 01:46:204 (3) - into 2 circles instead and leave (4) as a transition so if I turn 01:46:204 (3) - to two circle, where they should be? Back-and-forth? I guess not...

no comment = fixed
Thanks for the check w

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Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-07-10T00:39:28+00:00

domSaur wrote:
how2mod
my part of the bargain.... if you could even call it that.

hard
00:15:891 (2,3) - maybe change this into a circle and a 1/2 slider bec i don't think there's any prominent clickable beat at 00:16:204 It's for the guitar
00:23:391 (2) - stack this on (3)'s head to emphasize both of their whistles but it would be the only objects would have stack on that section and I really aimed that there would be no jumps for the non-kiai section xD
00:56:360 (2,3) - this is smth i don't quite see even for hards.. im pretty sure you could still leave 00:56:672 - w/o smth to click since it's not exactly a dominant beat and it makes even for the players of this range to hit this and then move on to (1) w/o having probs.. but if you rly wanna keep it maybe you could at the very least stack 00:56:829 (1) - to 00:56:672 (3) - You're kinda right but I'll see more opinions about this xD
misery
00:17:610 (2) - move this somewhere around x:30 y:153. slightly extend the distance between (1) and (2) and also so it'd go downwards sure
01:10:735 (6) - move this slightly closer since the entire 01:10:891 (1,2,3,4,5) - is pretty much just a transition for the grand beat at 01:11:829 (1) - but I personally like the jump pattern here >_<

wtf am i even pointing out.
dunno if these are of any help but eh ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Thanks for the mod! updated~

Zallies

499 posts

Joined April 2015

Zallies 2016-07-10T03:50:11+00:00

M*M yo
hi jantoshi

[Misery]

00:31:516 (1,2) - is this really necessary?
00:33:391 (1) - improve
00:36:204 (1) - improve http://puu.sh/pWppJ/90ed93289b.jpg
01:03:235 (6) - move to the left more
01:04:016 (3) - http://puu.sh/pWptu/fc3df6d1aa.jpg
01:05:891 (3) - make the same with 01:04:329 (1) -
01:07:141 (1) - improve http://puu.sh/pWpwV/321432ecfb.jpg
01:07:766 (2,3) - move to the left and improve http://puu.sh/pWpyX/c03f3f26c2.jpg
01:12:766 (1) - rotate 10 degree selection centre
01:14:641 (1,1) - make the same, looks weird to me
01:25:891 (1,2) - 1/1 suggetion, slow part
01:30:579 (1,2) - weird 01:36:204 (1) - looks like this is look
01:38:079 (1,2) - ^
01:50:735 (4,5) - improve 5
01:53:860 (5) - more up

[Akitoshi's Insane]

00:29:641 (4) - curve
00:37:141 (2) - http://puu.sh/pWpQf/51e68be2c3.jpg ?
01:19:172 (4) - 232|56
01:20:579 (5,6,7) - idk this
01:25:891 (1) - improve
01:44:641 (6) - nc
01:51:984 (4) - http://puu.sh/pWpXS/6f81c9edf8.jpg

[Hard]

00:15:579 (1,2) - pls curve
00:33:079 (3) - ^
00:55:579 (2,1) - improve
01:18:391 (4) - more up
01:25:891 (1) - slow part then http://puu.sh/pWq7F/8837eaed59.jpg
01:27:454 (3) - down cufve
01:27:454 (3,6) - if no on ^, then make the same with 6 (same din eh XD)
01:28:704 (1) - http://puu.sh/pWqbH/3eec601807.jpg
01:54:954 (1) - more up
01:56:672 (6) - 36|228

[Normal]

00:21:204 (1) - same with 00:20:266 (2) -
00:25:422 (2) - idk this
00:59:172 (2) - can u make the red line middle
01:37:141 (3) - ^

How to be better Modder :c
GL~!

Janpai

1,288 posts

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Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-07-10T06:17:26+00:00

No changes for me, seems like you pointed out things because you like to change them the way you want and you don't even give a reason why I should change or follow your suggestion, will kd if Aki will apply something :v no h8 please

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-07-10T12:42:51+00:00

zeroallies wrote:
[Akitoshi's Insane]
00:29:641 (4) - curve why?
00:37:141 (2) - http://puu.sh/pWpQf/51e68be2c3.jpg ? no
01:19:172 (4) - 232|56 why? Vocal itself is still strong
01:20:579 (5,6,7) - idk this idk why is that wrong too
01:25:891 (1) - improve Improve what? Slidershape? What if I'll say I set some weird shape because of the guitar?
01:44:641 (6) - nc no. Consistency will break
01:51:984 (4) - http://puu.sh/pWpXS/6f81c9edf8.jpg That was for incoming vocals on 01:52:141 (5) - so no.

no change, sorry :<
edit: Well let me explain why I didn't applied those, I can't see the reason why I need to change it. Yes, you didn't explained at least a brief one.

Janpai wrote:
No changes for me, seems like you pointed out things because you like to change them the way you want and you don't even give a reason why I should change or follow your suggestion.

Last edited by Akitoshi 2016-07-10T18:51:26+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Squichu

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Joined November 2012

Squichu 2016-07-10T13:08:07+00:00

hey there~~ c:

General
Consider using a different hitsound set starting here 00:26:829 - to 00:34:329 - ? The strong sound matches the other parts very well, but here it's a bit too loud, imo.
Also the break afterwards feels a little weird to me. Might be just me, but the part where the break is is different from the rest of the song and I kinda expect it to be mapped so you can show the variety the song provides. Imo it would be nice to shorten the break a bit in E/N/H, so you have at least something of it mapped. example Easy: http://puu.sh/pWHT6.jpg ; example Normal: http://puu.sh/pWHXL.jpg ; example Hard: http://puu.sh/pWI9s.jpg
00:55:891 - in all diffs - should be hitsounded, imo, players should get some feedback on accuracy here.

Easy
I like the simplicity of the beginning, but I think you could add some variety, because clicking the same rhythm for ~15 seconds gets a bit boring. You could just turn some 1/2 slider + circle rhythms into 1/2 reverses, maybe even each second one. (00:12:766 (2,3) - 00:16:516 (2,3) - 00:20:266 (2,3) - 00:24:016 (2,3) - ); same applies to the part after Kiai
00:30:579 (1) - to break the monotonous rhythm here, consider emphasizing the vocals better? http://puu.sh/pWIkC.jpg
00:42:766 (2,3) - ctrl+g rhythm would work better with the strong sound at 00:43:391 - . Also 00:42:766 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - feel compared to 00:41:829 (1) - a bit too much. You could split 00:41:829 (1) - up so it matches with the rest, or you could change the other objects to something a little simpler? example: http://puu.sh/pWIDO.jpg
00:46:516 (2,3) - ctrl+g rhythm for same reason as ^
also here 00:50:266 (2,3) - , especially because of the vocals here, matches much better imo .o.
01:47:454 (1,2) - there were so many nice blankets before, why not here? :c http://puu.sh/pWISs.jpg ?
Overall the diff looks nice, but I think you could nerf some patterns here and there, because with this bpm and so many clickables in a row (at some parts) this becomes pretty challenging for beginners. (This is just my personal preferance and you absolutely don't have to follow this, but I think you could sacrifice mapping some beats for the sake of keeping it a little easier and emphasize the vocals instead. o: )

Normal
00:15:891 (2,3) - and 00:18:704 (4,5) - maybe try reverse sliders instead, the last sounds don't have much impact, which matches better with a reverse/sliderend than another circle
00:19:329 (1) - to 00:26:829 (1) - consider re-arranging this part slightly so players don't move in a circle for the whole intro?
00:27:766 (2,3,4) - try http://puu.sh/pWJsW.jpg instead? Because sound at 00:28:391 - is clearly louder than 00:28:079 - so would be better to switch (2,3) and to keep it simple turn (3,4) into a slider? Same for 00:31:516 (2,3,4) -

Hard
00:25:891 (4,5,6) - if you listen closely you'll notice a sound on (5)s tail and that there's nothing on (4)s and (6)s, so consider changing this to http://puu.sh/pWJWA.jpg ?
00:28:079 (5) - try 1/2 reverse slider to emphasize the sound on the red tick? (00:26:829 (1) - matches better because there's no sound in the middle and 00:28:704 (1,4) - match the vocals, but (5) is different, so imo better to change)
00:31:829 (5) - same here
00:56:360 (2) - works better if snapped to 1/2, imo. There haven't been any 1/4s so far, so this looks pretty confusing compared to the rest and also plays a little Idk what to call it.. bumpy? Migth also be because of the slowdown, which isn't very clear. hmh. (Maybe you want to try emphasizing the vocals differently by using circles? example: http://puu.sh/pWKiL.jpg ; that way you'd also add a small jump to the start of Kiai)
01:41:516 (5) - why's only this one a slider, it's the same sound as (1,2,3,4) > split into circles?
01:56:204 (4) - replace with two circles? Same sounds as (5,6)

Akitoshi's Insane
I like the design of this diff. o.o But the sliders in the first part, basically until Kiai, have a little to no effect on gameplay. Players don't have to move at all to get 300, which is imo pretty boring after a while. It's just > move to slider > stay there for a few beats > clear some small jump patterns > repeat.. s:
00:32:454 - and 00:47:454 - any reasons for these gaps? You don't really need breaks, the pace of the song doesn't change, melody goes on.. feels weird to me, you could map them just as well?
01:11:360 (1) - NC looks pretty unnecessary to me. o-o

Can't pass Misery, so I'll have to skip that, sorry. u.u
Good luck!

Akitoshi

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Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-07-10T18:47:37+00:00

Squichu wrote:
Akitoshi's Insane
I like the design of this diff. o.o But the sliders in the first part, basically until Kiai, have a little to no effect on gameplay. Players don't have to move at all to get 300, which is imo pretty boring after a while. It's just > move to slider > stay there for a few beats > clear some small jump patterns > repeat.. s: ~~I want to give pp to people~~ Well, slow slider helps to emphasize the song itself imo. I can even hear it's only 96bpm, so I made it pretty calm which is some players will bored :l
00:32:454 - and 00:47:454 - any reasons for these gaps? You don't really need breaks, the pace of the song doesn't change, melody goes on.. feels weird to me, you could map them just as well? I had doubt on these parts sorry, I mapped it now xd
01:11:360 (1) - NC looks pretty unnecessary to me. o-o 01:10:891 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - is just monstrata things ▲▼▲▼▲

Thank you pikachu!

ang cute ko putaaaaaaaaaaa

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anna apple

1,245 posts

Joined March 2014

anna apple 2016-07-10T23:02:15+00:00

hey -- from my queue,

idk if its the songs fault or what but every now and then a note seems unsnapped. I checked AI and it seems fine..

Misery

00:15:891 (2,3) - 00:18:860 (2) - 00:21:516 (3,4) - 00:23:391 (2,3) - how come you stack these notes? what is significant about the song to make you do this at these points? it feels kind of random. all I can say it, after listening to each instrument individually, I can't tell why you did this. so the reason should be more clear. aka what is being emphasized etc..
00:26:829 - in this section it seems a bit random too but it doesn't really matter because it slows the pace down when the pace of the song slows down
00:47:454 (1) - 00:47:141 (4) - fix blanket xd
01:08:391 (2,3) - have these unstacked bc you don't have a pattern after that where you stack that sound

akitoshi

I can't see any issues

hard

I can't see any issues

-NanoRIPE-

2,037 posts

Joined October 2013

-NanoRIPE- 2016-07-11T01:03:18+00:00

Hey hey ~ NM Request from my q

[General]
looks fine ~

[Easy]
00:21:204 (1,2) - blanket (for cosistent pattern with 00:17:454 (1,2) )
01:47:454 (1,2) - it would be great if u make it blanket :>

[Normal]
none ~

[Hard]
00:44:329 (3) - ctrl j?

[Insane]
hey again xd akitoshi ~
00:11:829 until 00:26:829 hmm why u make the slider velocity to 0,80x? its too slow D: (the beat on this part looks fast)
01:09:954 (1,2) - ctrl g? (for better rhythm imo)
01:45:266 (1) - i think it would be better if u make slider here and also NC (for consistency pattern)

[Misery]
00:31:360 (3) - remove finish (it looks weird)

GL ~ and sorry for short mod ;w; and my terrible english
this mapset looks great D: it will ranked quickly

Akitoshi

2,684 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2016-07-11T06:11:52+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
[Insane]
hey again xd akitoshi ~ hi
00:11:829 until 00:26:829 hmm why u make the slider velocity to 0,80x? its too slow D: (the beat on this part looks fast) im howwol wigns xddddddddd
01:09:954 (1,2) - ctrl g? (for better rhythm imo) I know your concern, but there's two whistles(drums) both on 01:09:954 - and 01:10:110 - .
01:45:266 (1) - i think it would be better if u make slider here and also NC (for consistency pattern) I fixed after this part to make consistent with this section xd

thank you!

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Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-07-11T10:04:49+00:00

~~will reply and update soon (will edit this post), I have to deal with school stuff atm xD~~

Squichu

Squichu wrote:
hey there~~ c:

General
Consider using a different hitsound set starting here 00:26:829 - to 00:34:329 - ? The strong sound matches the other parts very well, but here it's a bit too loud, imo. idk what to use ;w;
Also the break afterwards feels a little weird to me. Might be just me, but the part where the break is is different from the rest of the song and I kinda expect it to be mapped so you can show the variety the song provides. Imo it would be nice to shorten the break a bit in E/N/H, so you have at least something of it mapped. example Easy: http://puu.sh/pWHT6.jpg ; example Normal: http://puu.sh/pWHXL.jpg ; example Hard: http://puu.sh/pWI9s.jpg I think break is pretty idel for me because drum hits stops there and vocals are really quiet here
00:55:891 - in all diffs - should be hitsounded, imo, players should get some feedback on accuracy here. sure

Easy
I like the simplicity of the beginning, but I think you could add some variety, because clicking the same rhythm for ~15 seconds gets a bit boring. You could just turn some 1/2 slider + circle rhythms into 1/2 reverses, maybe even each second one. (00:12:766 (2,3) - 00:16:516 (2,3) - 00:20:266 (2,3) - 00:24:016 (2,3) - ); same applies to the part after Kiai but patterns and flow would be ruined here and I'm really lazy to do so maybe I'll do a remap then
00:30:579 (1) - to break the monotonous rhythm here, consider emphasizing the vocals better? http://puu.sh/pWIkC.jpg I think the current rhythm fits more
00:42:766 (2,3) - ctrl+g rhythm would work better with the strong sound at 00:43:391 - . Also 00:42:766 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - feel compared to 00:41:829 (1) - a bit too much. You could split 00:41:829 (1) - up so it matches with the rest, or you could change the other objects to something a little simpler? example: http://puu.sh/pWIDO.jpg It's not really a strong sound, infact the drum hit was stronger than that
00:46:516 (2,3) - ctrl+g rhythm for same reason as ^
also here 00:50:266 (2,3) - , especially because of the vocals here, matches much better imo .o. ^^
01:47:454 (1,2) - there were so many nice blankets before, why not here? :c http://puu.sh/pWISs.jpg ? not intended to do a blanket here xD
Overall the diff looks nice, but I think you could nerf some patterns here and there, because with this bpm and so many clickables in a row (at some parts) this becomes pretty challenging for beginners. (This is just my personal preferance and you absolutely don't have to follow this, but I think you could sacrifice mapping some beats for the sake of keeping it a little easier and emphasize the vocals instead. o: ) Seeing the mod feels like I need to do some remap xD

Normal
00:15:891 (2,3) - and 00:18:704 (4,5) - maybe try reverse sliders instead, the last sounds don't have much impact, which matches better with a reverse/sliderend than another circle suree
00:19:329 (1) - to 00:26:829 (1) - consider re-arranging this part slightly so players don't move in a circle for the whole intro? don't have ideas for now xD
00:27:766 (2,3,4) - try http://puu.sh/pWJsW.jpg instead? Because sound at 00:28:391 - is clearly louder than 00:28:079 - so would be better to switch (2,3) and to keep it simple turn (3,4) into a slider? Same for 00:31:516 (2,3,4) - fixed

Hard
00:25:891 (4,5,6) - if you listen closely you'll notice a sound on (5)s tail and that there's nothing on (4)s and (6)s, so consider changing this to http://puu.sh/pWJWA.jpg ? yeah but for the guitar at least and a sudden pause for that part is really awkward imo
00:28:079 (5) - try 1/2 reverse slider to emphasize the sound on the red tick? (00:26:829 (1) - matches better because there's no sound in the middle and 00:28:704 (1,4) - match the vocals, but (5) is different, so imo better to change)
00:31:829 (5) - same here fixed both ^^
00:56:360 (2) - works better if snapped to 1/2, imo. There haven't been any 1/4s so far, so this looks pretty confusing compared to the rest and also plays a little Idk what to call it.. bumpy? Migth also be because of the slowdown, which isn't very clear. hmh. (Maybe you want to try emphasizing the vocals differently by using circles? example: http://puu.sh/pWKiL.jpg ; that way you'd also add a small jump to the start of Kiai) snapped to 1/2
01:41:516 (5) - why's only this one a slider, it's the same sound as (1,2,3,4) > split into circles? I wan't to give players from clicking xDD
01:56:204 (4) - replace with two circles? Same sounds as (5,6) sure

Can't pass Misery, so I'll have to skip that, sorry. u.u
Good luck!

alt F4 (unicode sucks imo)

[alt][F4] wrote:
hey -- from my queue,

idk if its the songs fault or what but every now and then a note seems unsnapped. I checked AI and it seems fine..

Misery
00:15:891 (2,3) - 00:18:860 (2) - 00:21:516 (3,4) - 00:23:391 (2,3) - how come you stack these notes? what is significant about the song to make you do this at these points? it feels kind of random. all I can say it, after listening to each instrument individually, I can't tell why you did this. so the reason should be more clear. aka what is being emphasized etc.. It's not random imo, even if they we're stacked, it doesn't mean that it's not emphasized, I just feel that stacking those notes are better than separated because drum hit are close to each other
00:26:829 - in this section it seems a bit random too but it doesn't really matter because it slows the pace down when the pace of the song slows down it's slows down i guess ._. idk why you feel random here
00:47:454 (1) - 00:47:141 (4) - fix blanket xd sure
01:08:391 (2,3) - have these unstacked bc you don't have a pattern after that where you stack that sound I think this is called variation i guess xD

-NanoRIPE-

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
Hey hey ~ NM Request from my q

[General]
looks fine ~

[Easy]
00:21:204 (1,2) - blanket (for cosistent pattern with 00:17:454 (1,2) )
01:47:454 (1,2) - it would be great if u make it blanket :> fixed all, this one is already mentioned by many people so yeah blanket like what you want xD

[Normal]
none ~

[Hard]
00:44:329 (3) - ctrl j? fine for me

[Misery]
00:31:360 (3) - remove finish (it looks weird) why =w=

GL ~ and sorry for short mod ;w; and my terrible english It's ok, Ik the feeling that you can't contribute some good things so no need to be sorry xD
this mapset looks great D: it will ranked quickly

thanks for modding guys!

Garden

Nomination Assessment Team

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Garden 2016-07-15T08:45:11+00:00

e,n diffs look perfectly fine to me
[Hard]

can emphasize quite some finishes (e.g. 01:00:579 (1) - ) with a cute jump instead of keeping ds
well actually i don't really get where u jump and where u don't.. like 01:01:204 (4,5) - , if u jump for the drum then featuring a jump here 01:02:922 (3,4) - feels more consistent right?

[Akitoshi's Insane]

01:56:516 (3) - stack on 01:55:735 (4) - maybe cuz overlap here doesn't look that neat to me and drawing a large triangle like 01:56:047 (6,1,2,3) - plays a bit forced imo

[Misery]

silence those extended sliders' ends maybe cuz some of them stand for nothing in the music, current is kinda noisy to me
00:40:891 (4) - stack this note on 00:41:047 (5) - is much more intuitive for reading imo. in similar pattern usage like 00:39:172 (5,6,7) - , there's a 1/1 gap in between, that's why i didn't react to 00:40:891 (4,5) - nicely on the first try
01:48:391 (1) - i somewhat feel this slider should be snapped to 1/6, if u listen with 25% speed and compared it with previous 1/2 drums, u will find it comes a bit later.. it doesn't intefere with gameplay tho

nothing constructive from me

i think the set is already ready now, best of luck~

Janpai

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Joined March 2015

Topic Starter

Janpai 2016-07-15T23:49:44+00:00

Garden wrote:
e,n diffs look perfectly fine to me
[Hard]
can emphasize quite some finishes (e.g. 01:00:579 (1) - ) with a cute jump instead of keeping ds
well actually i don't really get where u jump and where u don't.. like 01:01:204 (4,5) - , if u jump for the drum then featuring a jump here 01:02:922 (3,4) - feels more consistent right? yeah but too lazy to rearrange patterns atm xD
[Misery]
silence those extended sliders' ends maybe cuz some of them stand for nothing in the music, current is kinda noisy to me
00:40:891 (4) - stack this note on 00:41:047 (5) - is much more intuitive for reading imo. in similar pattern usage like 00:39:172 (5,6,7) - , there's a 1/1 gap in between, that's why i didn't react to 00:40:891 (4,5) - nicely on the first try sure
01:48:391 (1) - i somewhat feel this slider should be snapped to 1/6, if u listen with 25% speed and compared it with previous 1/2 drums, u will find it comes a bit later.. it doesn't intefere with gameplay tho just made it like the following sliders
nothing constructive from me i think the set is already ready now, best of luck~

Thank you very much

Zallies

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Zallies 2016-07-16T06:44:16+00:00

Janpai wrote:
No changes for me, seems like you pointed out things because you like to change them the way you want and you don't even give a reason why I should change or follow your suggestion, will kd if Aki will apply something :v no h8 please

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