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Mika Kobayashi - Through My Blood

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CernTheLion
165 posts
Joined February 2015
CernTheLion
Hi, M4M :D
Easy
  1. 01:02:141 (3,1) - fix this blanket
  2. 01:36:204 (1,2) - ^
  3. 01:47:454 (1,2) - you can also do a blanket here, it's up to you
Normal
  1. 00:27:766 (2,3) - fix this (just a bit)
  2. 01:14:641 (3,4,1) - try to do a perfect triangle here, that's weird :/
  3. 01:15:579 (1,2,3) - same
  4. 01:18:235 (3) - this beat sounds really weird, try to move it at 01:18:079 -
  5. 01:38:079 (1,2,3,4) - fix this square
Hard
  1. 00:58:704 (1,2) - you can also do a blanket, it's up to you here
  2. 01:13:704 (1,2) - fix this blanket
  3. 01:29:641 (3,5) - ^
  4. 01:36:204 (1,2) - ^
  5. 01:50:266 (4,2) - maybe a stack with the tail of the slider, tho
  6. 01:54:485 (6,1) - blanket
Akitoshi's Insane
  1. Why this slider 00:15:579 (1) - is shorter than 00:11:829 (1,1) - these?
  2. 00:23:079 (1) - same
  3. 00:32:454 - why there are any notes here? o.o
  4. 00:47:454 - same
  5. 01:01:047 (5,2) - blanket
  6. 01:12:766 (3) - NC here (New Combo)
  7. 01:56:672 (4) - place a circle instead of a slider here
Misery
  1. 00:16:985 (2,3) - stack
  2. 00:26:360 (3,1) - fix this (just a bit)
  3. 01:18:235 (6,4) - stack
  4. 01:41:829 (1,3) - blanket
  5. 01:52:141 (1,1) - fix this one too
Map seems good, nice work ^^
Fanteer
483 posts
Joined February 2016
Fanteer
M4M


Easy
00:28:704 (3,4) - i think,you can vary the sliders. You can add a curve and change them but they
must be the same
00:30:579 (1) - because of the vocals, then you can put reverse slider
01:00:579 (1,2) - 2 straight slider look ugly
01:32:454 (1,2) - ^

Normal
00:15:891 (2,3) - I have a friend newcomer and it is terribly furious from such moments when,
after a sharp slider note. I do not know what to do in Normal 00:21:204 (1,2) - such moments even
normal but with a note ...
01:19:329 (1,1) - so-so looks

[size=150]Hard
01:06:204 (1,2,3,5) - 4 straight slider successively

Akitoshi's Insane
00:53:704 (2,3,4,5,6) - monotone jumps 45 degrees
01:33:391 (3,4,5,6,7) - seriously, You can come up with interesting. for example
http://puu.sh/pU5yf/1fa4aa33bc.jpg]
perhaps this is some sort of trick mapper,but it looks monotonous

Misery
01:05:891 (3,6) - fix blanket
01:18:079 (5) - I do not agree with this note,because overlap. put a note on x308 y292
01:25:891 (1,2) - Please http://puu.sh/pU6hU/dda89946e4.jpg

Good Luck :D
Janpai
1,288 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Janpai
Fixed some minor problems from 2 previous mod, Sorry SherryCherry, I didn't apply any of your mod so no kd xD I'm really tired atm to reply, will get into your maps soon xD Thanks guys~ updated, waiting for Akitoshi :D
Akitoshi
2,685 posts
Joined August 2014
Akitoshi

-Bumblebee- wrote:

  1. Why this slider 00:15:579 (1) - is shorter than 00:11:829 (1,1) - these? it isn't I added a curve?
  2. 00:23:079 (1) - same same?
  3. 00:32:454 - why there are any notes here? o.o I'm following drums and vocals, not guitars.
  4. 00:47:454 - same same
  5. 01:01:047 (5,2) - blanket
  6. 01:12:766 (3) - NC here (New Combo)
  7. 01:56:672 (4) - place a circle instead of a slider here nah. I can clearly hear the echo.

Fanteer wrote:

Akitoshi's Insane
00:53:704 (2,3,4,5,6) - monotone jumps 45 degrees I can't see any issue there though.
01:33:391 (3,4,5,6,7) - seriously, You can come up with interesting. for example
http://puu.sh/pU5yf/1fa4aa33bc.jpg] wew, seems pretty crowded xd I took reference from some CRN maps I guess
perhaps this is some sort of trick mapper,but it looks monotonous No, I'm not even a trick mapper. I just found this song deserves a slow sliders how the lyrics flow. And I can't get it how I did monotonous, the song is not DnB or Brain power thingy that I can put any variation of streams when we heard O-oooooooooo AAAAE-A-A-I-A-U- JO-oooooooooooo AAE-O-A-A-U-U-A- E-eee-ee-eee AAAAE-A-E-I-E-A-JO-ooo-oo-oo-oo EEEEO-A-AAA-AAAA, and I'm not on the highest diff yet. So I believe it's better to keep consistency than variation on my diff. It's up to you if you'll agree or not. We have own way to do the things anyway.
no reply=fixed. thanks

O-oooooooooo AAAAE-A-A-I-A-U- JO-oooooooooooo AAE-O-A-A-U-U-A- E-eee-ee-eee AAAAE-A-E-I-E-A-JO-ooo-oo-oo-oo EEEEO-A-AAA-AAAA
osu file format v14

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Title:Through My Blood
TitleUnicode:Through My Blood
Artist:Hiroyuki Sawano feat. Mika Kobayashi
ArtistUnicode:澤野弘之 feat. 小林未郁
Creator:Janpai
Version:Akitoshi's Insane
Source:甲鉄城のカバネリ
Tags:Koutetsujou no Kabaneri of the Iron Fortress Mumei Episode 4 BGM Background Music OST Original Soundtrack cAnON Akitoshi
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HabiHolic
5,373 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
M4M!

[General]

i think this map use double BPM. i think better 96BPM. change please.

[Easy]

00:18:391 (2) - made blanket here.
SPOILER

00:25:891 (2,3) - patten is swap? i think frist slider better for playing.
00:34:329 ~ 00:41:829 - I don't understand this part break.

[Normal]

00:34:329 ~ 00:41:829 -same Easy diff
00:54:954 (1,3) - NC swap please. cuz start voice 00:55:891 (3) - this.

[Hard]

00:34:329 ~ 00:41:829 -same Easy diff
00:55:891 (3) - Slider SV change part so NC here.
00:57:297 (2,3,5) - bad spacing..
01:01:204 (4,5) - anti jump patten here.
01:06:672 (2) - same(^)
01:56:204 (4,5,6) - patten sugguest
SPOILER

Nice map Good Luck!

Insane and Misery diff is fine~
Janpai
1,288 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Janpai

HabiHolic wrote:

M4M!

[General]

i think this map use double BPM. i think better 96BPM. change please. :arrow: 192 is the correct BPM I guess, i tried 96 but it doesn't fit in the song

[Easy]

00:18:391 (2) - made blanket here. :arrow: sure
SPOILER

00:25:891 (2,3) - patten is swap? i think frist slider better for playing. :arrow: Second tick has drums so I made it clickable
00:34:329 ~ 00:41:829 - I don't understand this part break. :arrow: I think the break here is kinda ideal because there's no drums here and this is very calm

[Normal]

00:34:329 ~ 00:41:829 -same Easy diff :arrow: Same reason
00:54:954 (1,3) - NC swap please. cuz start voice 00:55:891 (3) - this. :arrow: but I don't want to break my NCing pattern

[Hard]

00:34:329 ~ 00:41:829 -same Easy diff :arrow: ^^
00:55:891 (3) - Slider SV change part so NC here. :arrow: sure
00:57:297 (2,3,5) - bad spacing.. :arrow: It's a jump for the drums
01:01:204 (4,5) - anti jump patten here. :arrow: ^^
01:06:672 (2) - same(^) :arrow: ^^
01:56:204 (4,5,6) - patten sugguest :arrow: I think the current one is fine
SPOILER

Nice map Good Luck!

Insane and Misery diff is fine~
Thanks Habi :> Why you didn't use the mp3 I gave to you *le cries xD
domSaur
1,263 posts
Joined December 2013
domSaur
how2mod
my part of the bargain.... if you could even call it that.


hard
  1. 00:15:891 (2,3) - maybe change this into a circle and a 1/2 slider bec i don't think there's any prominent clickable beat at 00:16:204
  2. 00:23:391 (2) - stack this on (3)'s head to emphasize both of their whistles
  3. 00:56:360 (2,3) - this is smth i don't quite see even for hards.. im pretty sure you could still leave 00:56:672 - w/o smth to click since it's not exactly a dominant beat and it makes even for the players of this range to hit this and then move on to (1) w/o having probs.. but if you rly wanna keep it maybe you could at the very least stack 00:56:829 (1) - to 00:56:672 (3) -
master aki
  1. 00:19:797 (2,3) - maybe you could switch these.. the slider would be emphasize the synth/guitar/whatever instrument that begins on 00:19:797 -
  2. 00:24:329 (5,6) - don't follow if you don't want to turn this into a 1/2 instead.. and also to help give more emphasis on the next pattern
  3. 01:03:079 (3) - you can also get this a little closer to 01:03:391 (1) - since this isn't really a prominent beat(at least not as big as the next big tick that comes after)and doesn't rly need as much distance for emphasis
  4. 01:46:204 (3,4) -this kinda kills the rising/building intensity of the song(since you've already began going full xexxar at this section anyway). at the very least turn 01:46:204 (3) - into 2 circles instead and leave (4) as a transition
misery
  1. 00:17:610 (2) - move this somewhere around x:30 y:153. slightly extend the distance between (1) and (2) and also so it'd go downwards
  2. 01:10:735 (6) - move this slightly closer since the entire 01:10:891 (1,2,3,4,5) - is pretty much just a transition for the grand beat at 01:11:829 (1) -

wtf am i even pointing out.
dunno if these are of any help but eh ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Akitoshi
2,685 posts
Joined August 2014
Akitoshi

domSaur wrote:

akitoshit
  1. 00:19:797 (2,3) - maybe you could switch these.. the slider would be emphasize the synth/guitar/whatever instrument that begins on 00:19:797 - ??? 00:20:110 - as circle is lame
  2. 00:24:329 (5,6) - don't follow if you don't want to turn this into a 1/2 instead.. and also to help give more emphasis on the next pattern too repetitive imo, due to 00:22:141 (3,4,5) - maybe I can do somewhat called variation.
  3. 01:03:079 (3) - you can also get this a little closer to 01:03:391 (1) - since this isn't really a prominent beat(at least not as big as the next big tick that comes after)and doesn't rly need as much distance for emphasis
  4. 01:46:204 (3,4) -this kinda kills the rising/building intensity of the song(since you've already began going full xexxar at this section anyway). at the very least turn 01:46:204 (3) - into 2 circles instead and leave (4) as a transition so if I turn 01:46:204 (3) - to two circle, where they should be? Back-and-forth? I guess not...
no comment = fixed
Thanks for the check w

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Title:Through My Blood
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Artist:Hiroyuki Sawano feat. Mika Kobayashi
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Janpai
1,288 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Janpai

domSaur wrote:

how2mod
my part of the bargain.... if you could even call it that.


hard
  1. 00:15:891 (2,3) - maybe change this into a circle and a 1/2 slider bec i don't think there's any prominent clickable beat at 00:16:204 :arrow: It's for the guitar
  2. 00:23:391 (2) - stack this on (3)'s head to emphasize both of their whistles :arrow: but it would be the only objects would have stack on that section and I really aimed that there would be no jumps for the non-kiai section xD
  3. 00:56:360 (2,3) - this is smth i don't quite see even for hards.. im pretty sure you could still leave 00:56:672 - w/o smth to click since it's not exactly a dominant beat and it makes even for the players of this range to hit this and then move on to (1) w/o having probs.. but if you rly wanna keep it maybe you could at the very least stack 00:56:829 (1) - to 00:56:672 (3) - :arrow: You're kinda right but I'll see more opinions about this xD
misery
  1. 00:17:610 (2) - move this somewhere around x:30 y:153. slightly extend the distance between (1) and (2) and also so it'd go downwards :arrow: sure
  2. 01:10:735 (6) - move this slightly closer since the entire 01:10:891 (1,2,3,4,5) - is pretty much just a transition for the grand beat at 01:11:829 (1) - :arrow: but I personally like the jump pattern here >_<

wtf am i even pointing out.
dunno if these are of any help but eh ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Thanks for the mod! updated~
Zallies
499 posts
Joined April 2015
Zallies
M*M yo
hi jantoshi

[Misery]
  1. 00:31:516 (1,2) - is this really necessary?
  2. 00:33:391 (1) - improve
  3. 00:36:204 (1) - improve http://puu.sh/pWppJ/90ed93289b.jpg
  4. 01:03:235 (6) - move to the left more
  5. 01:04:016 (3) - http://puu.sh/pWptu/fc3df6d1aa.jpg
  6. 01:05:891 (3) - make the same with 01:04:329 (1) -
  7. 01:07:141 (1) - improve http://puu.sh/pWpwV/321432ecfb.jpg
  8. 01:07:766 (2,3) - move to the left and improve http://puu.sh/pWpyX/c03f3f26c2.jpg
  9. 01:12:766 (1) - rotate 10 degree selection centre
  10. 01:14:641 (1,1) - make the same, looks weird to me
  11. 01:25:891 (1,2) - 1/1 suggetion, slow part
  12. 01:30:579 (1,2) - weird 01:36:204 (1) - looks like this is look
  13. 01:38:079 (1,2) - ^
  14. 01:50:735 (4,5) - improve 5
  15. 01:53:860 (5) - more up
[Akitoshi's Insane]
  1. 00:29:641 (4) - curve
  2. 00:37:141 (2) - http://puu.sh/pWpQf/51e68be2c3.jpg ?
  3. 01:19:172 (4) - 232|56
  4. 01:20:579 (5,6,7) - idk this
  5. 01:25:891 (1) - improve
  6. 01:44:641 (6) - nc
  7. 01:51:984 (4) - http://puu.sh/pWpXS/6f81c9edf8.jpg
[Hard]
  1. 00:15:579 (1,2) - pls curve
  2. 00:33:079 (3) - ^
  3. 00:55:579 (2,1) - improve
  4. 01:18:391 (4) - more up
  5. 01:25:891 (1) - slow part then http://puu.sh/pWq7F/8837eaed59.jpg
  6. 01:27:454 (3) - down cufve
  7. 01:27:454 (3,6) - if no on ^, then make the same with 6 (same din eh XD)
  8. 01:28:704 (1) - http://puu.sh/pWqbH/3eec601807.jpg
  9. 01:54:954 (1) - more up
  10. 01:56:672 (6) - 36|228
[Normal]
  1. 00:21:204 (1) - same with 00:20:266 (2) -
  2. 00:25:422 (2) - idk this
  3. 00:59:172 (2) - can u make the red line middle
  4. 01:37:141 (3) - ^
How to be better Modder :c
GL~!
Janpai
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Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Janpai
No changes for me, seems like you pointed out things because you like to change them the way you want and you don't even give a reason why I should change or follow your suggestion, will kd if Aki will apply something :v no h8 please
Akitoshi
2,685 posts
Joined August 2014
Akitoshi

zeroallies wrote:

[Akitoshi's Insane]
  1. 00:29:641 (4) - curve why?
  2. 00:37:141 (2) - http://puu.sh/pWpQf/51e68be2c3.jpg ? no
  3. 01:19:172 (4) - 232|56 why? Vocal itself is still strong
  4. 01:20:579 (5,6,7) - idk this idk why is that wrong too
  5. 01:25:891 (1) - improve Improve what? Slidershape? What if I'll say I set some weird shape because of the guitar?
  6. 01:44:641 (6) - nc no. Consistency will break
  7. 01:51:984 (4) - http://puu.sh/pWpXS/6f81c9edf8.jpg That was for incoming vocals on 01:52:141 (5) - so no.
no change, sorry :<
edit: Well let me explain why I didn't applied those, I can't see the reason why I need to change it. Yes, you didn't explained at least a brief one.

Janpai wrote:

No changes for me, seems like you pointed out things because you like to change them the way you want and you don't even give a reason why I should change or follow your suggestion.
Last edited by Akitoshi , edited 3 times in total.
Squichu
1,013 posts
Joined November 2012
Squichu
hey there~~ c:

General
Consider using a different hitsound set starting here 00:26:829 - to 00:34:329 - ? The strong sound matches the other parts very well, but here it's a bit too loud, imo.
Also the break afterwards feels a little weird to me. Might be just me, but the part where the break is is different from the rest of the song and I kinda expect it to be mapped so you can show the variety the song provides. Imo it would be nice to shorten the break a bit in E/N/H, so you have at least something of it mapped. example Easy: http://puu.sh/pWHT6.jpg ; example Normal: http://puu.sh/pWHXL.jpg ; example Hard: http://puu.sh/pWI9s.jpg
00:55:891 - in all diffs - should be hitsounded, imo, players should get some feedback on accuracy here.

Easy
I like the simplicity of the beginning, but I think you could add some variety, because clicking the same rhythm for ~15 seconds gets a bit boring. You could just turn some 1/2 slider + circle rhythms into 1/2 reverses, maybe even each second one. (00:12:766 (2,3) - 00:16:516 (2,3) - 00:20:266 (2,3) - 00:24:016 (2,3) - ); same applies to the part after Kiai
00:30:579 (1) - to break the monotonous rhythm here, consider emphasizing the vocals better? http://puu.sh/pWIkC.jpg
00:42:766 (2,3) - ctrl+g rhythm would work better with the strong sound at 00:43:391 - . Also 00:42:766 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - feel compared to 00:41:829 (1) - a bit too much. You could split 00:41:829 (1) - up so it matches with the rest, or you could change the other objects to something a little simpler? example: http://puu.sh/pWIDO.jpg
00:46:516 (2,3) - ctrl+g rhythm for same reason as ^
also here 00:50:266 (2,3) - , especially because of the vocals here, matches much better imo .o.
01:47:454 (1,2) - there were so many nice blankets before, why not here? :c http://puu.sh/pWISs.jpg ?
Overall the diff looks nice, but I think you could nerf some patterns here and there, because with this bpm and so many clickables in a row (at some parts) this becomes pretty challenging for beginners. (This is just my personal preferance and you absolutely don't have to follow this, but I think you could sacrifice mapping some beats for the sake of keeping it a little easier and emphasize the vocals instead. o: )

Normal
00:15:891 (2,3) - and 00:18:704 (4,5) - maybe try reverse sliders instead, the last sounds don't have much impact, which matches better with a reverse/sliderend than another circle
00:19:329 (1) - to 00:26:829 (1) - consider re-arranging this part slightly so players don't move in a circle for the whole intro?
00:27:766 (2,3,4) - try http://puu.sh/pWJsW.jpg instead? Because sound at 00:28:391 - is clearly louder than 00:28:079 - so would be better to switch (2,3) and to keep it simple turn (3,4) into a slider? Same for 00:31:516 (2,3,4) -

Hard
00:25:891 (4,5,6) - if you listen closely you'll notice a sound on (5)s tail and that there's nothing on (4)s and (6)s, so consider changing this to http://puu.sh/pWJWA.jpg ?
00:28:079 (5) - try 1/2 reverse slider to emphasize the sound on the red tick? (00:26:829 (1) - matches better because there's no sound in the middle and 00:28:704 (1,4) - match the vocals, but (5) is different, so imo better to change)
00:31:829 (5) - same here
00:56:360 (2) - works better if snapped to 1/2, imo. There haven't been any 1/4s so far, so this looks pretty confusing compared to the rest and also plays a little Idk what to call it.. bumpy? Migth also be because of the slowdown, which isn't very clear. hmh. (Maybe you want to try emphasizing the vocals differently by using circles? example: http://puu.sh/pWKiL.jpg ; that way you'd also add a small jump to the start of Kiai)
01:41:516 (5) - why's only this one a slider, it's the same sound as (1,2,3,4) > split into circles?
01:56:204 (4) - replace with two circles? Same sounds as (5,6)

Akitoshi's Insane
I like the design of this diff. o.o But the sliders in the first part, basically until Kiai, have a little to no effect on gameplay. Players don't have to move at all to get 300, which is imo pretty boring after a while. It's just > move to slider > stay there for a few beats > clear some small jump patterns > repeat.. s:
00:32:454 - and 00:47:454 - any reasons for these gaps? You don't really need breaks, the pace of the song doesn't change, melody goes on.. feels weird to me, you could map them just as well?
01:11:360 (1) - NC looks pretty unnecessary to me. o-o

Can't pass Misery, so I'll have to skip that, sorry. u.u
Good luck!
Akitoshi
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Akitoshi

Squichu wrote:

Akitoshi's Insane
I like the design of this diff. o.o But the sliders in the first part, basically until Kiai, have a little to no effect on gameplay. Players don't have to move at all to get 300, which is imo pretty boring after a while. It's just > move to slider > stay there for a few beats > clear some small jump patterns > repeat.. s: I want to give pp to people Well, slow slider helps to emphasize the song itself imo. I can even hear it's only 96bpm, so I made it pretty calm which is some players will bored :l
00:32:454 - and 00:47:454 - any reasons for these gaps? You don't really need breaks, the pace of the song doesn't change, melody goes on.. feels weird to me, you could map them just as well? I had doubt on these parts sorry, I mapped it now xd
01:11:360 (1) - NC looks pretty unnecessary to me. o-o 01:10:891 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - is just monstrata things ▲▼▲▼▲
Thank you pikachu!
ang cute ko putaaaaaaaaaaa
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anna apple
1,245 posts
Joined March 2014
anna apple
hey -- from my queue,

idk if its the songs fault or what but every now and then a note seems unsnapped. I checked AI and it seems fine..

Misery
  1. 00:15:891 (2,3) - 00:18:860 (2) - 00:21:516 (3,4) - 00:23:391 (2,3) - how come you stack these notes? what is significant about the song to make you do this at these points? it feels kind of random. all I can say it, after listening to each instrument individually, I can't tell why you did this. so the reason should be more clear. aka what is being emphasized etc..
  2. 00:26:829 - in this section it seems a bit random too but it doesn't really matter because it slows the pace down when the pace of the song slows down
  3. 00:47:454 (1) - 00:47:141 (4) - fix blanket xd
  4. 01:08:391 (2,3) - have these unstacked bc you don't have a pattern after that where you stack that sound

akitoshi

  • I can't see any issues

hard

  • I can't see any issues
-NanoRIPE-
2,042 posts
Joined October 2013
-NanoRIPE-
Hey hey ~ NM Request from my q

[General]
looks fine ~

[Easy]
00:21:204 (1,2) - blanket (for cosistent pattern with 00:17:454 (1,2) )
01:47:454 (1,2) - it would be great if u make it blanket :>

[Normal]
none ~

[Hard]
00:44:329 (3) - ctrl j?

[Insane]
hey again xd akitoshi ~
00:11:829 until 00:26:829 hmm why u make the slider velocity to 0,80x? its too slow D: (the beat on this part looks fast)
01:09:954 (1,2) - ctrl g? (for better rhythm imo)
01:45:266 (1) - i think it would be better if u make slider here and also NC (for consistency pattern)

[Misery]
00:31:360 (3) - remove finish (it looks weird)

GL ~ and sorry for short mod ;w; and my terrible english
this mapset looks great D: it will ranked quickly
Akitoshi
2,685 posts
Joined August 2014
Akitoshi

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

[Insane]
hey again xd akitoshi ~ hi
00:11:829 until 00:26:829 hmm why u make the slider velocity to 0,80x? its too slow D: (the beat on this part looks fast) im howwol wigns xddddddddd
01:09:954 (1,2) - ctrl g? (for better rhythm imo) I know your concern, but there's two whistles(drums) both on 01:09:954 - and 01:10:110 - .
01:45:266 (1) - i think it would be better if u make slider here and also NC (for consistency pattern) I fixed after this part to make consistent with this section xd
thank you!

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Title:Through My Blood
TitleUnicode:Through My Blood
Artist:Hiroyuki Sawano feat. Mika Kobayashi
ArtistUnicode:澤野弘之 feat. 小林未郁
Creator:Janpai
Version:Akitoshi's Insane
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Janpai
1,288 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Janpai
will reply and update soon (will edit this post), I have to deal with school stuff atm xD
Squichu

Squichu wrote:

hey there~~ c:

General
Consider using a different hitsound set starting here 00:26:829 - to 00:34:329 - ? The strong sound matches the other parts very well, but here it's a bit too loud, imo. :arrow: idk what to use ;w;
Also the break afterwards feels a little weird to me. Might be just me, but the part where the break is is different from the rest of the song and I kinda expect it to be mapped so you can show the variety the song provides. Imo it would be nice to shorten the break a bit in E/N/H, so you have at least something of it mapped. example Easy: http://puu.sh/pWHT6.jpg ; example Normal: http://puu.sh/pWHXL.jpg ; example Hard: http://puu.sh/pWI9s.jpg :arrow: I think break is pretty idel for me because drum hits stops there and vocals are really quiet here
00:55:891 - in all diffs - should be hitsounded, imo, players should get some feedback on accuracy here. :arrow: sure

Easy
I like the simplicity of the beginning, but I think you could add some variety, because clicking the same rhythm for ~15 seconds gets a bit boring. You could just turn some 1/2 slider + circle rhythms into 1/2 reverses, maybe even each second one. (00:12:766 (2,3) - 00:16:516 (2,3) - 00:20:266 (2,3) - 00:24:016 (2,3) - ); same applies to the part after Kiai :arrow: but patterns and flow would be ruined here and I'm really lazy to do so maybe I'll do a remap then
00:30:579 (1) - to break the monotonous rhythm here, consider emphasizing the vocals better? http://puu.sh/pWIkC.jpg :arrow: I think the current rhythm fits more
00:42:766 (2,3) - ctrl+g rhythm would work better with the strong sound at 00:43:391 - . Also 00:42:766 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - feel compared to 00:41:829 (1) - a bit too much. You could split 00:41:829 (1) - up so it matches with the rest, or you could change the other objects to something a little simpler? example: http://puu.sh/pWIDO.jpg :arrow: It's not really a strong sound, infact the drum hit was stronger than that
00:46:516 (2,3) - ctrl+g rhythm for same reason as ^
also here 00:50:266 (2,3) - , especially because of the vocals here, matches much better imo .o. :arrow: ^^
01:47:454 (1,2) - there were so many nice blankets before, why not here? :c http://puu.sh/pWISs.jpg ? :arrow: not intended to do a blanket here xD
Overall the diff looks nice, but I think you could nerf some patterns here and there, because with this bpm and so many clickables in a row (at some parts) this becomes pretty challenging for beginners. (This is just my personal preferance and you absolutely don't have to follow this, but I think you could sacrifice mapping some beats for the sake of keeping it a little easier and emphasize the vocals instead. o: ) :arrow: Seeing the mod feels like I need to do some remap xD

Normal
00:15:891 (2,3) - and 00:18:704 (4,5) - maybe try reverse sliders instead, the last sounds don't have much impact, which matches better with a reverse/sliderend than another circle :arrow: suree
00:19:329 (1) - to 00:26:829 (1) - consider re-arranging this part slightly so players don't move in a circle for the whole intro? :arrow: don't have ideas for now xD
00:27:766 (2,3,4) - try http://puu.sh/pWJsW.jpg instead? Because sound at 00:28:391 - is clearly louder than 00:28:079 - so would be better to switch (2,3) and to keep it simple turn (3,4) into a slider? Same for 00:31:516 (2,3,4) - :arrow: fixed

Hard
00:25:891 (4,5,6) - if you listen closely you'll notice a sound on (5)s tail and that there's nothing on (4)s and (6)s, so consider changing this to http://puu.sh/pWJWA.jpg ? :arrow: yeah but for the guitar at least and a sudden pause for that part is really awkward imo
00:28:079 (5) - try 1/2 reverse slider to emphasize the sound on the red tick? (00:26:829 (1) - matches better because there's no sound in the middle and 00:28:704 (1,4) - match the vocals, but (5) is different, so imo better to change)
00:31:829 (5) - same here :arrow: fixed both ^^
00:56:360 (2) - works better if snapped to 1/2, imo. There haven't been any 1/4s so far, so this looks pretty confusing compared to the rest and also plays a little Idk what to call it.. bumpy? Migth also be because of the slowdown, which isn't very clear. hmh. (Maybe you want to try emphasizing the vocals differently by using circles? example: http://puu.sh/pWKiL.jpg ; that way you'd also add a small jump to the start of Kiai) :arrow: snapped to 1/2
01:41:516 (5) - why's only this one a slider, it's the same sound as (1,2,3,4) > split into circles? :arrow: I wan't to give players from clicking xDD
01:56:204 (4) - replace with two circles? Same sounds as (5,6) :arrow: sure

Can't pass Misery, so I'll have to skip that, sorry. u.u
Good luck!
alt F4 (unicode sucks imo)

[alt][F4] wrote:

hey -- from my queue,

idk if its the songs fault or what but every now and then a note seems unsnapped. I checked AI and it seems fine..

Misery
  1. 00:15:891 (2,3) - 00:18:860 (2) - 00:21:516 (3,4) - 00:23:391 (2,3) - how come you stack these notes? what is significant about the song to make you do this at these points? it feels kind of random. all I can say it, after listening to each instrument individually, I can't tell why you did this. so the reason should be more clear. aka what is being emphasized etc.. :arrow: It's not random imo, even if they we're stacked, it doesn't mean that it's not emphasized, I just feel that stacking those notes are better than separated because drum hit are close to each other
  2. 00:26:829 - in this section it seems a bit random too but it doesn't really matter because it slows the pace down when the pace of the song slows down :arrow: it's slows down i guess ._. idk why you feel random here
  3. 00:47:454 (1) - 00:47:141 (4) - fix blanket xd :arrow: sure
  4. 01:08:391 (2,3) - have these unstacked bc you don't have a pattern after that where you stack that sound :arrow: I think this is called variation i guess xD
-NanoRIPE-

-NanoRIPE- wrote:

Hey hey ~ NM Request from my q

[General]
looks fine ~

[Easy]
00:21:204 (1,2) - blanket (for cosistent pattern with 00:17:454 (1,2) )
01:47:454 (1,2) - it would be great if u make it blanket :> :arrow: fixed all, this one is already mentioned by many people so yeah blanket like what you want xD

[Normal]
none ~

[Hard]
00:44:329 (3) - ctrl j? :arrow: fine for me


[Misery]
00:31:360 (3) - remove finish (it looks weird) :arrow: why =w=

GL ~ and sorry for short mod ;w; and my terrible english :arrow: It's ok, Ik the feeling that you can't contribute some good things so no need to be sorry xD
this mapset looks great D: it will ranked quickly
thanks for modding guys!
Garden
Nomination Assessment Team
1,343 posts
Joined June 2013
Garden
e,n diffs look perfectly fine to me
[Hard]
  1. can emphasize quite some finishes (e.g. 01:00:579 (1) - ) with a cute jump instead of keeping ds
    well actually i don't really get where u jump and where u don't.. like 01:01:204 (4,5) - , if u jump for the drum then featuring a jump here 01:02:922 (3,4) - feels more consistent right?
[Akitoshi's Insane]
  1. 01:56:516 (3) - stack on 01:55:735 (4) - maybe cuz overlap here doesn't look that neat to me and drawing a large triangle like 01:56:047 (6,1,2,3) - plays a bit forced imo
[Misery]
  1. silence those extended sliders' ends maybe cuz some of them stand for nothing in the music, current is kinda noisy to me
  2. 00:40:891 (4) - stack this note on 00:41:047 (5) - is much more intuitive for reading imo. in similar pattern usage like 00:39:172 (5,6,7) - , there's a 1/1 gap in between, that's why i didn't react to 00:40:891 (4,5) - nicely on the first try
  3. 01:48:391 (1) - i somewhat feel this slider should be snapped to 1/6, if u listen with 25% speed and compared it with previous 1/2 drums, u will find it comes a bit later.. it doesn't intefere with gameplay tho
nothing constructive from me :? i think the set is already ready now, best of luck~
Janpai
1,288 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Janpai

Garden wrote:

e,n diffs look perfectly fine to me
[Hard]
  1. can emphasize quite some finishes (e.g. 01:00:579 (1) - ) with a cute jump instead of keeping ds
    well actually i don't really get where u jump and where u don't.. like 01:01:204 (4,5) - , if u jump for the drum then featuring a jump here 01:02:922 (3,4) - feels more consistent right? :arrow: yeah but too lazy to rearrange patterns atm xD
[Misery]
  1. silence those extended sliders' ends maybe cuz some of them stand for nothing in the music, current is kinda noisy to me
  2. 00:40:891 (4) - stack this note on 00:41:047 (5) - is much more intuitive for reading imo. in similar pattern usage like 00:39:172 (5,6,7) - , there's a 1/1 gap in between, that's why i didn't react to 00:40:891 (4,5) - nicely on the first try :arrow: sure
  3. 01:48:391 (1) - i somewhat feel this slider should be snapped to 1/6, if u listen with 25% speed and compared it with previous 1/2 drums, u will find it comes a bit later.. it doesn't intefere with gameplay tho :arrow: just made it like the following sliders
nothing constructive from me :? i think the set is already ready now, best of luck~
Thank you very much :)
Zallies
499 posts
Joined April 2015
Zallies

Janpai wrote:

No changes for me, seems like you pointed out things because you like to change them the way you want and you don't even give a reason why I should change or follow your suggestion, will kd if Aki will apply something :v no h8 please
how to be good modder?
Dailycare
Beatmap Nominator
1,074 posts
Joined May 2012
Dailycare
[Misery]
*00:12:454 (5,6) - Personally I hope they are a bit closer than 00:12:610 (6,1) -
*00:26:360 (3,4) - What about swapping their hitsounds?
*00:31:829 (2) - How about changing the spacing with the previous note to 1.0 or 1.1? (also apply it to all 3/4s if you want to change it)
*00:34:329 (1) - You expressed the change of the background well. But i was awkward to play it. That slow slider made me confused lol. Could you consider how to fix it?
*01:18:313 - It makes me questionable that you ignored this sound
*01:26:204 (2) - What about changing it to the 1/2 slider?
*01:48:391 (1,2,3,1,2) - The flow was a bit awkward for me um.. idk how you can improve it tho
*01:56:672 (1) - Why did you set NC here?

[Akitoshi's Insane]
It might be better if you used more faster SV at kiai time
*00:12:766 (1) - Did you intend this NC?
*00:38:079 (1) - How about making this slider to finish at 00:40:579 - or 00:40:891 - ? The current end point and the break are a bit ambiguous
*00:57:766 (4) - 01:00:579 (3) - Add NC
*01:11:672 (3) - What about removing the whistle? Because the symbol sound is weaker than 01:11:829 -

[Hard]
*00:56:360 (2,3) - It may make a low tier players confused. So consider making the spacing
*01:06:672 (2) - 01:14:172 (2) - 01:21:672 (2) - Using DS 1.3 would be better than current one. I think there're anything else you should make the spacing
*01:18:313 - Also consier adding a circle here.
*01:48:391 (1) - Please use DS 1.3 lol. DS 1.5 makes flow a bit messy imo.
*01:56:204 (4,5,6,7) - I think you can improve those notes but idk :p

[Normal]
*01:52:141 (1) - 01:55:891 (1) - Remove NC

Ehh, actually i'm not good at such three-quarters time sry ;w;
Janpai
1,288 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Janpai

Dailycare wrote:

[Misery]
*00:12:454 (5,6) - Personally I hope they are a bit closer than 00:12:610 (6,1) - :arrow: reduced the spacing ;w;
*00:26:360 (3,4) - What about swapping their hitsounds? :arrow: fixed
*00:31:829 (2) - How about changing the spacing with the previous note to 1.0 or 1.1? (also apply it to all 3/4s if you want to change it) :arrow: I think it's fine
*00:34:329 (1) - You expressed the change of the background well. But i was awkward to play it. That slow slider made me confused lol. Could you consider how to fix it? :arrow: I also don't know what to do here xD I'll keep it for now
*01:18:313 - It makes me questionable that you ignored this sound :arrow: ooppss sorry fixed xD
*01:26:204 (2) - What about changing it to the 1/2 slider? :arrow: I made it 1/1 instead xD
*01:48:391 (1,2,3,1,2) - The flow was a bit awkward for me um.. idk how you can improve it tho :arrow: did something
*01:56:672 (1) - Why did you set NC here? :arrow: strong drum ;w;

[Hard]
*00:56:360 (2,3) - It may make a low tier players confused. So consider making the spacing :arrow: I want to make even spacing with 00:56:829 (1) -
*01:06:672 (2) - 01:14:172 (2) - 01:21:672 (2) - Using DS 1.3 would be better than current one. I think there're anything else you should make the spacing :arrow: but I want to emphasiz that drum than claps ;w;
*01:18:313 - Also consier adding a circle here. :arrow: sure
*01:48:391 (1) - Please use DS 1.3 lol. DS 1.5 makes flow a bit messy imo. :arrow: fixed xD
*01:56:204 (4,5,6,7) - I think you can improve those notes but idk :p :arrow: i jope it's better now

[Normal]
*01:52:141 (1) - 01:55:891 (1) - Remove NC :arrow: fixed

Ehh, actually i'm not good at such three-quarters time sry ;w; :arrow: It's my first time mapping in that time signature tho :D
Thank you very much :D
Shyotamaze
916 posts
Joined December 2014
Shyotamaze
Hi, from my modding queue

General
  1. Isn't offset 00:05:266 better?
Akitoshi's Insane
  1. Preview point not consistent with the other diffs?
Misery
  1. 00:17:141 (3) - Maybe CTRL + G or add a curve or something, current flow seems a bit weird
  2. 00:25:891 (1,1) - Stack sliderends maybe
  3. 00:31:516 (1,2) - Maybe a stack or reduce the spacing? It feels more comfortable to play imo, like for example you could reduce the spacing a bit so 2 would make a blanket with 00:32:454 (1) - oh wait or just the same spacing as here 00:38:391 (2,3) - (o god that point was really long and it's going to be denied anyways sorry)
  4. 00:42:766 (1,2) - ^ (sorry lol)
  5. 01:15:579 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe a regular star shape?
  6. 01:17:141 (3,5) - Collides
  7. 01:18:235 (6) - Not sure about that, atleast something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5624021 or idk
Hmm yea nice map, the other diffs seem fine sorry for the shit mod rip
Good luck! ;)
Janpai
1,288 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Janpai

Shyotamaze wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue

General
  1. Isn't offset 00:05:266 better? :arrow: I think current is also acceptable xD
Akitoshi's Insane
  1. Preview point not consistent with the other diffs? :arrow: it was the same, this is just a minor so I will just answer for aki :v
Misery
  1. 00:17:141 (3) - Maybe CTRL + G or add a curve or something, current flow seems a bit weird :arrow: Personally, I like this flow ;w;
  2. 00:25:891 (1,1) - Stack sliderends maybe :arrow: sure
  3. 00:31:516 (1,2) - Maybe a stack or reduce the spacing? It feels more comfortable to play imo, like for example you could reduce the spacing a bit so 2 would make a blanket with 00:32:454 (1) - oh wait or just the same spacing as here 00:38:391 (2,3) - (o god that point was really long and it's going to be denied anyways sorry) :arrow: Dailycare also point out this so okay lets reduce the spacing
  4. 00:42:766 (1,2) - ^ (sorry lol) :arrow: Fixed ^_^
  5. 01:15:579 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe a regular star shape? :arrow: but (4) has no dominant sound so yeh gonna keep for now
  6. 01:17:141 (3,5) - Collides :arrow: Adjusted (5) a bit to avoid overlap
  7. 01:18:235 (6) - Not sure about that, atleast something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5624021 or idk :arrow: sure
Hmm yea nice map, the other diffs seem fine sorry for the shit mod rip :arrow: It's not shit ._.
Good luck! ;)
Thank you very much! Akitoshi where na you HAHA
Yahuri
1,400 posts
Joined July 2014
Yahuri
from queue~

General
-just personal preference but i like lighter combo colors, dark colors make the approach circles harder to see

Normal
-diff pretty solid, gameplay is good. just a few nazi things XD
00:44:641 (3,4,1) - make perfect triangle
00:45:579 (1,2,3) - ^
01:14:641 (3,4,1) - ^
00:45:579 - add whistle
01:35:891 (3,1) - improve blanket
01:53:079 (1,2,3) - ^

Hard
00:16:516 (4,5,6) - improve blanket
00:31:516 (4) - 00:32:922 (2) - stack these?
00:55:579 (2,1,2,3) - SV here confused me because sliders 2 and 1 are the same length, maybe make SV slightly faster?
01:48:704 (2,3,1) - move 1 a bit further to the left to match DS of 2-3

ayy thats it
good luck!
Janpai
1,288 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Janpai

Yahuri wrote:

from queue~

General
-just personal preference but i like lighter combo colors, dark colors make the approach circles harder to see :arrow: I removed the yellow one and replace it with gray and I adjusted the palette of violet one xD

Normal
-diff pretty solid, gameplay is good. just a few nazi things XD
00:44:641 (3,4,1) - make perfect triangle
00:45:579 (1,2,3) - ^ :arrow: fixed both ^^
01:14:641 (3,4,1) - ^ :arrow: It's already fine I guess
00:45:579 - add whistle :arrow: fixed
01:35:891 (3,1) - improve blanket
01:53:079 (1,2,3) - ^ :arrow: Fixed both ^^

Hard
00:16:516 (4,5,6) - improve blanket :arrow: fixed
00:31:516 (4) - 00:32:922 (2) - stack these? :arrow: okie
00:55:579 (2,1,2,3) - SV here confused me because sliders 2 and 1 are the same length, maybe make SV slightly faster? :arrow: just made (2) a circle for less confusion
01:48:704 (2,3,1) - move 1 a bit further to the left to match DS of 2-3 :arrow: okieeee

ayy thats it
good luck!
Thank you so much! :D
Kalibe
2,060 posts
Joined October 2013
Kalibe
cutie mumei
11:40 Kalibe: hey :3
11:41 Janpai: helloooooo kalibeeee =w=)/
11:41 Kalibe: you send me before via pm request about this one
11:41 *Kalibe is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1012197 Hiroyuki Sawano feat. Mika Kobayashi - Through My Blood]
11:42 Kalibe: well im lazy to write mod on forum
11:42 Kalibe: so i can do irc
11:42 Kalibe: xd
11:45 Janpai: orz net is DCing >//<
11:46 Kalibe: ><
11:46 Janpai: it's the main problem why I'm not into IRCs xD people always think I'm running away ;w;
11:47 Kalibe: xd
11:47 *Kalibe is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1012281 Hiroyuki Sawano feat. Mika Kobayashi - Through My Blood [Easy]]
11:47 Kalibe: 00:57:766 (2) -
11:47 Kalibe: you should add finish with normal addition on end
11:48 Kalibe: since theres a specific sound
11:48 Janpai: suree applied
11:48 Kalibe: 01:01:516 (2) -
11:48 Kalibe: same here
11:48 Kalibe: 01:04:016 (3) -
11:49 Kalibe: 01:05:266 (2) -
11:49 Kalibe: and etc
11:49 Kalibe: xd
11:49 Janpai: well I look for myself xDD i thought soft hitnormal was ok with it xD
11:49 Kalibe: ye
11:50 Janpai: since there's no really difference at that finish sound xDDD
11:50 Kalibe: xd
11:51 Kalibe: 01:47:141 (3) -
11:51 Kalibe: hmm
11:51 Kalibe: there should only whistle without anything in addition
11:51 Kalibe: 01:45:266 (3) - liek u did here
11:52 Kalibe: 01:54:954 (3,1) - and maybe add finishes on these heads?
11:52 Janpai: ok ok
11:52 Kalibe: for emphasis
11:52 Kalibe: rest is cool
11:53 Janpai: well easy is my meme xD
11:53 Kalibe: xd
11:55 Kalibe: in normal
11:55 Kalibe: 01:33:391 (4) -
11:55 Kalibe: from my personal suggestions try mayb 285/168??
11:56 Kalibe: or smth like that
11:56 Kalibe: transison feels better then imo
11:56 Janpai: okie okie i agree
11:58 Kalibe: welp your normal is ready i think
11:59 Kalibe: aaa
11:59 Kalibe: 01:17:141 (4,1) -
11:59 Kalibe: check spacing
12:00 Janpai: <---- not fan of normals xD
12:00 Kalibe: xd
12:00 Kalibe: <--- can't map normals
12:00 Janpai: okay i fixed
12:01 Janpai: (=w=)7
12:01 Kalibe: time for hard
12:01 Kalibe: xd
12:01 Kalibe: my fav diff cuz soterks
12:01 Janpai: YEESS BLAME SOTERKS
12:02 Janpai: my hard is sooo lame xD
12:03 Kalibe: 00:15:891 (2,3) -
12:03 Kalibe: tbh im not a fan of this rhythm tho
12:03 Kalibe: i would add circle 00:15:891 -
12:03 Kalibe: and 1/1 slider 00:16:047 -
12:03 Kalibe: then 00:16:204 (4) - delete it
12:04 Kalibe: to follow drums
12:04 Kalibe: 00:17:766 (2,3) - you did same thing here
12:04 Janpai: niecccccc fixeeeddd
12:05 Janpai: i'm screwed when I map this so yehaj xD
12:05 Kalibe: 00:42:766 (4,5) - also not fan >n<
12:05 Kalibe: xd
12:05 Kalibe: http://puu.sh/q9bxU/5a51733cc8.jpg
12:06 Kalibe: try this
12:06 Janpai: <---- blame for mapping almost drums in the whole song xD
12:06 Kalibe: vocal is holy thing
12:07 Kalibe: 00:55:891 (1) - are you sure using here such a low SV?
12:07 Janpai: i was a big fan of vocals before
12:07 Kalibe: it might be a bit confusing for hard players
12:07 Kalibe: cuz
12:07 Kalibe: after this low SV
12:07 Kalibe: 00:56:829 (1) -
12:08 Janpai: but it's the only thing I can think to emphasize the calm vocals xD
12:08 Kalibe: becomes more faster
12:08 Kalibe: but you can increase SV
12:08 Kalibe: on calm part
12:08 Kalibe: to 0.7
12:08 Kalibe: 0.5 - 1.0 this gap looks huge for a hard
12:09 Kalibe: 01:02:610 (2) - change to 1/1
12:09 Kalibe: 01:03:079 - then add 1/2
12:10 Janpai: wait wait i'm fixing the rhythm you suggested xDDD
12:10 Kalibe: okie xd
12:13 Janpai: okay all fixed :3
12:15 Kalibe: 01:10:110 (2) - same here 1/1
12:15 Kalibe: 01:10:579 - and add 1/2
12:16 Janpai: =w=)b
12:16 Kalibe: 01:14:172 (2,3) -
12:17 Kalibe: this spacing should be bigger than
12:17 Kalibe: 01:13:704 (1,2) -
12:17 Kalibe: tho
12:18 Janpai: but I really intended to do jumps at that drums because I got bored on emphasizing claps afufu selfish reason xD
12:18 Kalibe: 01:12:297 (2,3) - like here
12:18 Kalibe: xd
12:18 Kalibe: 01:17:610 (2) - 1/1
12:19 Janpai: well it's like I'm alternating the drum and clap emphasis
12:19 Kalibe: xd
12:19 Kalibe: 01:18:079 - 1/2
12:20 Kalibe: 01:23:547 (3) - change into 1/1 ?
12:20 Kalibe: vocal emphasis is best in hard
12:20 Janpai: Well a circle fits here, i wanna make it a triple atm xD
12:20 Kalibe: ok
12:21 Kalibe: xD
12:22 Janpai: well your right but it will be the only one that ignored the freakin drum aaaaaaaaaa why do i map this so monotonous kappa
12:22 Kalibe: allright
12:22 Kalibe: 01:40:891 (1,2,3,4,5) - wow
12:23 Kalibe: this is
12:23 Kalibe: diffspike xD
12:23 Janpai: yeh xDDDD
12:23 Kalibe: 3.41 - 3.25
12:23 Kalibe: omg
12:24 Janpai: well people will rekt me if i don't make them clickable for emphasis xD
12:24 Kalibe: you can stack it
12:24 Kalibe: 1 - 2 and 3 -4
12:25 Janpai: hloy my spacing ah okay i will try
12:25 Kalibe: will be more safety
12:25 Kalibe: 01:54:954 (1) - wheres finish?
12:25 Kalibe: :o
12:26 Janpai: i forgot but there will be one at the update xD
12:26 Kalibe: ah ok
12:26 Janpai: hey kalibbiii lemme ask your opinion about combo colors ;w;
12:27 Kalibe: but about comboing or colours? xD
12:29 Kalibe: hello again xd
12:29 Janpai: rip xDDDD
12:29 Kalibe: about comboing i have no problems
12:29 Kalibe: colours
12:29 Janpai: okie xDDD
12:29 Kalibe: this red could be more bright
12:29 Janpai: i'm bad at it tbh xD
12:29 Kalibe: but just my preferences
12:30 Kalibe: xD
12:30 Janpai: well I can adjust the palette a little
12:31 Kalibe: ye
12:31 Kalibe: and that should be all in hard
12:32 Kalibe: oo akitoshit mapped insane
12:32 Kalibe: :ooo
12:32 Janpai: xDDDD
12:32 Janpai: I never thought i would be meme'd but I respect akitoshi OwO
12:33 Kalibe: :3
12:33 Janpai: 0.70 SV totally kappa
12:34 Kalibe: rofl
12:35 Kalibe: well im not sure about modding last diff xd
12:35 Kalibe: im bad at modding extras
12:36 Janpai: <----- can't mod extras
12:36 Kalibe: but overall looks ok
12:36 Kalibe: in my eyes
12:36 Kalibe: :3
12:37 Kalibe: 01:36:672 (2,3) -
12:37 Kalibe: this stack is kinda weird
12:37 Janpai: :D
12:37 Janpai: whyyyyy
12:37 Kalibe: try 204/256 ??
12:39 Kalibe: 01:44:485 (4) -
12:39 Kalibe: ;w;
12:39 Janpai: but i like the stack mygad i'm too selfish xD
12:39 Janpai: xD
12:39 Kalibe: xD
12:40 Kalibe: that should be all
Janpai
1,288 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Janpai
Thanks for the mod kaliiiiibiiiiii <3
Gloria Guard
2,273 posts
Joined May 2011
Gloria Guard
Hello From my queue.

[General]

■ You should be the check difficulty setting AR and OD. it's a really unbalance setting it.

■ This is map the offset a little slow. I think the offset 11820 is better.

[Easy]

■ 00:15:579 (1) - The slider is a little strange shape, I recommend to slider second point move to x:300 y:136 is good shape and flow imo.
■ 01:18:391 (2) - You are missing the slider head finish sound.
■ 01:26:204 (2) - The slider end rhythm a little short imo, The electronic guitar end point is 01:26:360 here. I think the slider end point to move 01:26:360 is better.
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[Normal]

■ 00:26:829 ~ 00:34:250 - The part is a really quiet here. but you used 60% volume sound. I think the decrease volume is 40% is better.
and 00:41:829 ~ 00:55:579 the same.
■ 01:26:360 - Add note here? The same easy diff suggestion here.


[Hard]

■ 00:55:579 (2) - Hmm, The note spacing is your intention? It is not a good spacing. I think the distance should be constant here.
■ 01:55:891 (3) - Add NC here.
■ 01:26:204 (2) - The same suggestion Easy and normal diff this point.


[Akitoshi's Insane]

■ 00:39:954 ~ 00:41:672 - I'm a really confused this part break time. The break time is really short and suddenly. I don't need the break time here and add note is better imo.
■ 01:11:672 (3) - Remove the sampleset drum sound. It's really loud. also You put the other finish sound here, It is not suitable.
■ 01:56:672 (4) - I don't understand the slider end point rhythm. I think the slider end point rhythm don't need rhythm. because the slider end point is empty and quiet. remove the slider and add note is better.


[Misery]

■ 00:31:516 (1) - I don't know the 3/4 rhythm intention. it's simple a 1/1 rhythm. so You should be replaced with the 1/1 rhythm.
■ 01:26:360 - You already know this part to suggestion.



Good mapset :3. Good luck for ranking this mapset !
Akitoshi
2,685 posts
Joined August 2014
Akitoshi
Changed something tnx

Garden wrote:

[Akitoshi's Insane]
  1. 01:56:516 (3) - stack on 01:55:735 (4) - maybe cuz overlap here doesn't look that neat to me and drawing a large triangle like 01:56:047 (6,1,2,3) - plays a bit forced imo stacked on 01:55:266 (2) - instead

Dailycare wrote:

[Akitoshi's Insane]
It might be better if you used more faster SV at kiai time its fine imo
*00:12:766 (1) - Did you intend this NC?
*00:38:079 (1) - How about making this slider to finish at 00:40:579 - or 00:40:891 - ?
*00:57:766 (4) - 01:00:579 (3) - Add NC
*01:11:672 (3) - What about removing the whistle? Because the symbol sound is weaker than 01:11:829 -

Gloria Guard wrote:

[Akitoshi's Insane]

■ 00:39:954 ~ 00:41:672 - I'm a really confused this part break time. The break time is really short and suddenly. I don't need the break time here and add note is better imo.
■ 01:11:672 (3) - Remove the sampleset drum sound. It's really loud. also You put the other finish sound here, It is not suitable.
■ 01:56:672 (4) - I don't understand the slider end point rhythm. I think the slider end point rhythm don't need rhythm. because the slider end point is empty and quiet. remove the slider and add note is better. that's sth echo thingy for the instru, no need to put additional circle imo.
no comment = fixed thanks!
sorry for late reply naligaw ako sa mall :v

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Vovan
547 posts
Joined March 2014
Vovan
DON'T GIVE KUDOSU !



Here's my mod with late due to holidays.

Easy


00:27:766 (2,3,4) - This pattern seems really basic. You can change this to something like that :
2 screens inside.

Without that, your diff is pretty good, but that's really repetitive

2/1 beat slider ;
1/1 beat slider ;
Circle ;
New Combo
2/1 beat slider ;
1/1 beat slider ;
Circle ;
New Combo .... You need probably to change a bit these patterns

Normal


00:19:329 (1) - Move to x = 400 and y = 52 for a blanket with (4)

00:31:516 (2) - Move to x = 120 and y = 60 for a blanket

Sorry, I usually mod hards but I don't have time :x so I will stop here.
Underforest
5,895 posts
Joined July 2015
Underforest
Placeholding, sorry for long wait
Janpai
1,288 posts
Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Janpai

Gloria Guard wrote:

Hello From my queue.

[General]

■ You should be the check difficulty setting AR and OD. it's a really unbalance setting it. :arrow: It's fine imo

■ This is map the offset a little slow. I think the offset 11820 is better. :arrow: well it's fine for me, I'll wait opinions tho

[Easy]

■ 00:15:579 (1) - The slider is a little strange shape, I recommend to slider second point move to x:300 y:136 is good shape and flow imo. :arrow: I like this shape ;w;
■ 01:18:391 (2) - You are missing the slider head finish sound. :arrow: there are already a finish sound
■ 01:26:204 (2) - The slider end rhythm a little short imo, The electronic guitar end point is 01:26:360 here. I think the slider end point to move 01:26:360 is better.
SPOILER
:arrow: Your right but that fading sound doesn't really important to me and 1/1 is pretty ok with it


[Normal]

■ 00:26:829 ~ 00:34:250 - The part is a really quiet here. but you used 60% volume sound. I think the decrease volume is 40% is better.
and 00:41:829 ~ 00:55:579 the same. :arrow: sure, also applied in all diffs
■ 01:26:360 - Add note here? The same easy diff suggestion here. :arrow: ^^^


[Hard]

■ 00:55:579 (2) - Hmm, The note spacing is your intention? It is not a good spacing. I think the distance should be constant here. :arrow: they are using different SV so I think it's okay
■ 01:55:891 (3) - Add NC here. :arrow: even the drums are strong, i wouldn't liek to put NC here because i want to be consistent xD
■ 01:26:204 (2) - The same suggestion Easy and normal diff this point.

[Misery]

■ 00:31:516 (1) - I don't know the 3/4 rhythm intention. it's simple a 1/1 rhythm. so You should be replaced with the 1/1 rhythm. :arrow: but I want that drum to be clickable xD
■ 01:26:360 - You already know this part to suggestion. :arrow: ^^^



Good mapset :3. Good luck for ranking this mapset !

Lexis wrote:

DON'T GIVE KUDOSU !



Here's my mod with late due to holidays.

Easy


00:27:766 (2,3,4) - This pattern seems really basic. You can change this to something like that : :arrow: Basic patterns for beginners ;w;
2 screens inside.

Without that, your diff is pretty good, but that's really repetitive

2/1 beat slider ;
1/1 beat slider ;
Circle ;
New Combo
2/1 beat slider ;
1/1 beat slider ;
Circle ;
New Combo .... You need probably to change a bit these patterns :arrow: I will try

Normal


00:19:329 (1) - Move to x = 400 and y = 52 for a blanket with (4)

00:31:516 (2) - Move to x = 120 and y = 60 for a blanket :arrow: These things we're intended

Sorry, I usually mod hards but I don't have time :x so I will stop here.
Sorry for denying most all of your suggestions xD thanks for the mod guys ;w;
Underforest
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Joined July 2015
Underforest
E

00:13:704 (1,2) - blanket?
00:27:766 (2,3,4) - to be honest this pattern is very monotonous, try something different


N

fine

H

00:42:766 (4) - do this more curvered
01:18:391 (6) - new combo


You requested me to skip the highest difficulties so yeah, i'll do
gl!
Janpai
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Topic Starter
Janpai
I was nerfing my easy when you dropped your mod xD No fixes for easy because I already nerf it xD and for the NC at Hard, I will consider, will see for more opinions, thanks for modding anyway!sorry but no kds xDD
Underforest
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Joined July 2015
Underforest
rip m4m thingy
Asonate
507 posts
Joined July 2013
Asonate
NM from queue :D

[Mis(t)ery]
  1. 00:23:547 (3,1) - naziblanket burning my eyes. ok, its not THAT bad, but still adjust a little xD
  2. 00:26:360 (3,4,5) - if youre intention for these 3 was a perfect triangle, youre gonna need to adjust 5 a bit (or 3 respectively) to make 3,5 the same distance as 3,4 and 4,5
  3. apart from that, i cant really say much. Jumps flow well, some felt forced to me, but o well (id have probably mapped this a whole lot differently as well) thats probably just me. Song is awesome and the map in itself plays really well too.
  4. 01:51:204 (1,2,3) - almost missed those, they are way weaker in the song than 01:50:266 (1,2,3) - , yet you give them more spacing. if you want to emphasise the songs intensity properly, consider nerfing ds a bit for these
[Akitoshi]
  1. 00:55:891 (1,2) - consider increasing DS between those 2 even more, you have the kiai coming up :3
  2. 01:19:016 - maybe make that hittable? I personally dislike the idea of having such a strong beat passive on a sliderend, but its up to you ofc
  3. Love the diff! Low SV, awesome song. almost the same feeling as AlieZ (same composer duh lol)
[Hard]
  1. 01:55:891 (3,4,5,6,7) - consider incorporating the sliderend of 3 into the curve 4,5,6,7 create.
  2. Wonderful diff!
[Normal]
  1. 00:18:704 (4,1) - consider blanketing 1 with 4
  2. 00:32:141 (3) - Maybe make this slider a horizontal one, just as the one before it? Looks a bit off with them facing slightly different directions
  3. 01:45:579 (3,4) - consider making 4 a slider extension of 3, pretty much moving it a bit up left should do the trick.
[Easy]
  1. 00:12:766 (2,1) - gonna start with blanketnaziing straight away: 1 isnt perfectly blanketed by the sides of 2
  2. 00:51:204 (1,2) - please for my ocd make this the same positioning as 00:50:266 (2,3) -
O god this song. cant get that out of my head now WE WALK PAST THE BORDERLANDS (which is probably wrong lyrics lol)
all diffs played nicely, with akitoshis low SV diff being my favourite :D
I wish you the best of luck and leave you with a star :D
Janpai
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Joined March 2015
Topic Starter
Janpai

Asonate wrote:

NM from queue :D

[Mis(t)ery]
  1. 00:23:547 (3,1) - naziblanket burning my eyes. ok, its not THAT bad, but still adjust a little xD :arrow: okie fixed
  2. 00:26:360 (3,4,5) - if youre intention for these 3 was a perfect triangle, youre gonna need to adjust 5 a bit (or 3 respectively) to make 3,5 the same distance as 3,4 and 4,5 :arrow: I hope i did right ;w; fixed :D
  3. apart from that, i cant really say much. Jumps flow well, some felt forced to me, but o well (id have probably mapped this a whole lot differently as well) thats probably just me. Song is awesome and the map in itself plays really well too.
  4. 01:51:204 (1,2,3) - almost missed those, they are way weaker in the song than 01:50:266 (1,2,3) - , yet you give them more spacing. if you want to emphasise the songs intensity properly, consider nerfing ds a bit for these :arrow: reduced the DS
[Hard]
  1. 01:55:891 (3,4,5,6,7) - consider incorporating the sliderend of 3 into the curve 4,5,6,7 create. :arrow: made it like heptagon
  2. Wonderful diff!
[Normal]
  1. 00:18:704 (4,1) - consider blanketing 1 with 4 :arrow: intended not to blanket xD
  2. 00:32:141 (3) - Maybe make this slider a horizontal one, just as the one before it? Looks a bit off with them facing slightly different directions :arrow: I like the angled one ;w;
  3. 01:45:579 (3,4) - consider making 4 a slider extension of 3, pretty much moving it a bit up left should do the trick. :arrow: sure
[Easy]
  1. 00:12:766 (2,1) - gonna start with blanketnaziing straight away: 1 isnt perfectly blanketed by the sides of 2 :arrow: there are no blanket here :o
  2. 00:51:204 (1,2) - please for my ocd make this the same positioning as 00:50:266 (2,3) - :arrow: some objects might go overscreen xD
O god this song. cant get that out of my head now WE WALK PAST THE BORDERLANDS (which is probably wrong lyrics lol) CAN'T TOUCH NOTHING BOUT THE WORLD
all diffs played nicely, with akitoshis low SV diff being my favourite :D
I wish you the best of luck and leave you with a star :D
Many thanks for the mod :D
Natteke desu
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Joined August 2012
Natteke desu
[Misery]
00:11:829 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - some kind of pattern suggestion because current one triggers me feel free to skip
00:16:829 - you can hear intensive guitar strings here which could be emphazised by jump and some more clickable objects
00:18:860 (2,3) - pretty much the same with previous, but in this case there is no real need in changing rhythm, but only adding jump
firstly i wanted to suggest extending 00:19:016 (3) - to make it 3/4 because of guitar, but i don't think i ever saw this in your map so i skipped it, but well, if you got interested you could do something like this <if you liked this idea, you can apply this for every same guitar parts in the song on this diff
00:23:704 (4,5) - didn't really got spacing of this one, i'd say you better move it a bit closer
00:26:360 (3,4,5) - personally i'd go with jump, but this work as well, you just could gave this more emphazis by using something like this
00:40:579 (3,4,5,6) - as far i can see this main idea was emphasisng guitar, but because you added some objects on hi-hats here all emphazise on guitar screwed, try to go with something like this
00:41:829 (1) - might be personal, but whole this part seemd overdone spacing-wice for me, i can agree that increasing spacing was right decision here because song became more intense, but i think it should be nerfed a bit, because it looks same with more intense part, what i can't understand
01:16:516 (1,2,3) - moving these like this might be more interesting to play
01:25:891 (1) - what about giving this slider something about 0.5 sv and moving it even further from previous circle? This could give a nice emphazise on this moment
01:36:985 (3) - didn't really got why this is stacked with slider, it feels more like having a balanced spacing between them, but oh well

[Akitoshi's Insane]
dude nice, have my love

[Hard]
00:18:860 (5,6) - pretty much same with moment mentoined on extra, but in this case, since it's hard and you can't really add meaty jumps, you could give it better emphazise by replacing slider by circles
00:26:516 (6) - could be emphazised as circles as well
00:34:329 (1) - break is dull :(
01:48:391 (1,2,3) - it's a bit too harsh for this kind of hard, so i'd say this should be nerfed a bit (just slighty decrease spacing between them)


that's all and you people did pretty good! Only one my real complain is these breaks on easier diffs. Hope this helped and good luck with ranking!
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