Yui Sakakibara - Dokidoki kokoro flavor [CatchTheBeat] · forum

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-06-06T22:28:46+00:00

DOKIDOKI KOKORO PLACEHOLDER

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-06-08T22:30:45+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
DOKIDOKI KOKORO PLACEHOLDER

Sniped with permission

General Comments:

Song Folder: sliderslide sounds do not play in CtB, so you can delete soft-sldierslide.wav
Song Setup: No issues
Metadata: Don't forget to add Kagari to tags since he mapped a GD
Timing: No issues
Hitsounds: I'm confused as to why hitwhistle and hitnormal are almost identical - some variation like a soft cymbal or chime would be nice
AImod: No issues

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Cup

00:35:185 (1) - NC seems unnecessary here for just this one slider considering the previous combo is only 4 objects
01:02:545 (4,5) - Was not expecting this little flowstop since the vocal is quite strong. Increase the spacing here a little if possible for better flow
01:41:425 (5,1) - Consider NC swap here since these final 3 notes are all emphasized
01:42:865 (1) - Fade out spinner body volume as the song fades out for a more complimentary sound. You can still put an 80% green line on the spinner end to get the kick drum hitsound

Nothing else to say really, very clean but fitting the upbeat nature of the song. Great Cup.

Salad

00:03:985 (4,1) - Jump here? These drum sounds are very strong, and even thought it's early in the song you want to engage the player since your first "real" jump isn't until 00:09:985 (4,1) -
00:07:105 (2,3) - 00:09:025 (2,3) - Possible but awkward to catch without dash. I'd reduce these distances a little to make them more comfortable for new players
00:27:025 (3,1) - Expecting a jump here but this is catchable by walking. Try moving 00:25:585 (1,2,3) to x-232
00:27:985 (2,3) - Another potentially confusing spacing, though here you could raise the distance for a fitting dash on that vocal note
00:43:345 (2,3,4) - Problematic pattern for new players because you have flowstop on the slider> movement left > dash right. Try making (2) more linear, or reducing the spacing between (2,3)
01:09:745 (1,2) - Yeesh this is a harsh spacing, even if it does warrant more emphasis. Please reduce this to a more manageable distance such as ~ 3.0x DS
01:27:745 (2,3) - 01:29:665 (2,3) - 01:31:585 (2,3) - 01:33:505 (2,3) - etc. same as 00:07:105 (2,3) - 00:09:025 (2,3) - in the intro section. Please drop each of these spacings a little so the player is clear dash isn't required

Platter

00:03:505 (5) - Consider separating into two 1/2 sliders for the vocal so you can add a dash to the strong drum sounds at 00:04:465 (1) -
00:09:745 (4,1) - hyper coupled with double antiflow sliders is really unexpected and overly difficult for this level of difficulty. Reduce the difficulty here ny making (1) face to the right for a more natural flow
00:32:185 (3) - Feels weird to skip the drum sound on the white tick, so making (3) a 1/2 slider starting there and adding a circle on the blue tick would play much better in this case
00:58:225 (1) - C-shaped repeat slider at this SV creates awkward droplet formation that is likely to result in misses. Rotating tail ~ 30 degrees clockwise for a more fluid movement would play better
01:05:905 (1) - ^ Thought the shallower curve here esentially just leaves you with an uninteresting stand-still repeat. This time you can make an inward curve for variety if you like, since space is more limited on the right-hand border
01:13:585 (1) - ^
01:21:025 (4,1) - Vocal is strong here, a regular dashed jump would be fitting for emphasis

Rain

00:29:905 (2,3,4) - Difficult to walk these without regular pauses which break flow. Suggest increasing the distance between these for more fluid transition
00:33:625 (2,3,4) - Strong hyper into standstill creates an awkward flowstop considering (4) is then in the same direction of movement. I'd reduce the hyper strength slightly and make (3) curve more to the left e.g. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5345309

I feel vertical low-movement patterns like 00:18:865 (3,4) - 00:33:265 (1,2) - etc. are overused in the non-kiai sections. They're not bad per se, I just personally find them a little uninteresting, and would prefer a bit more horizontal movement such as 00:06:385 (1,2) - 00:08:305 (1,2,3) - I feel the kiai section is really well mapped however, so good job on that

Kagari's Paradise

00:06:385 (1,2,3) - Why is the jump to (2) when the strong drum sound is on (3)? You repeat this throughout the map, probably because you were lazy and copypasted everything (^: Additionally, the spacing is very tight, so unless you want hdashes on all of these (3)'s (not recommended due to spread balance reasons), please reduced the (2,3) jump distance when you repatattern throughout
00:07:105 (5,1) - This antiflow with dash comes quite unexpectely and is easy to miss without good reactions. I'd prefer if the distance was reduced a little
00:10:945 (5,1) - ^ Seems you have a lot of these jumps littered around too, even after the kiai 01:27:745 (5,1) - 01:31:585 (5,1) - etc. so you've got some fixing to do I'm afraid
00:25:225 (5) - hdash of this strength and high SV aren't really called for here, this is just a weak guitar sound
00:54:505 (2,3,4) - This antiflow comes really unexpectedly considering you didn't use any similar patterns elsewhere in the diff. The rhythm itself isn't that complex and your hdash pattern already provides ample emphasis, so I'd Ctrl+H (3) and move it back for a more natural flow

Vocal and kiai sections are mostly fine and the map flows well overall, but the melody sections at the start and end are blatant copy/paste and get boring to play very quickly. I suggest you revisit these two sections to firstly correct jump placement on the 5plets as I pointed out in the suggestions, and then work on bringing some more variety to make the map more interesting to play

This is all from me. If you have any questions or want to discuss things further, please don't hesitate to get back to me and I'll see what I can do to help.

Good luck! (:

Sc4v4ng3r

1,232 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Sc4v4ng3r 2016-06-09T11:21:11+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Ascendance wrote:
DOKIDOKI KOKORO PLACEHOLDER
Sniped with permission
he totally deserves a snipe without permission as he made me get sniped 2 times in his map :^)

General Comments:

Song Folder: sliderslide sounds do not play in CtB, so you can delete soft-sldierslide.wav HOW DID I MISS THIS ;w; not qualified for BN xD
Song Setup: No issues
Metadata: Don't forget to add Kagari to tags since he mapped a GD HOW DID I MISS THIS x2 ;w;
Timing: No issues
Hitsounds: I'm confused as to why hitwhistle and hitnormal are almost identical - some variation like a soft cymbal or chime would be nice Well the whistle is for the extra emphasis on the kicks in the background as the song's somewhat having lots of drums - and since a lot of ranked mapsets do this. it should be fine.
AImod: No issues

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Cup
00:35:185 (1) - NC seems unnecessary here for just this one slider considering the previous combo is only 4 objects Well in fact that NC is off the consistency lol, so fixed.
01:02:545 (4,5) - Was not expecting this little flowstop since the vocal is quite strong. Increase the spacing here a little if possible for better flow Alrighty
01:41:425 (5,1) - Consider NC swap here since these final 3 notes are all emphasized Ayy good idea
01:42:865 (1) - Fade out spinner body volume as the song fades out for a more complimentary sound. You can still put an 80% green line on the spinner end to get the kick drum hitsound Should sound better now, applied for all difficulties.
Nothing else to say really, very clean but fitting the upbeat nature of the song. Great Cup. :3

Salad
00:03:985 (4,1) - Jump here? These drum sounds are very strong, and even thought it's early in the song you want to engage the player since your first "real" jump isn't until 00:09:985 (4,1) - I was doubting myself at first, but sure
00:07:105 (2,3) - 00:09:025 (2,3) - Possible but awkward to catch without dash. I'd reduce these distances a little to make them more comfortable for new players Alrighty, they should be better now.
00:27:025 (3,1) - Expecting a jump here but this is catchable by walking. Try moving 00:25:585 (1,2,3) to x-232 Okay
00:27:985 (2,3) - Another potentially confusing spacing, though here you could raise the distance for a fitting dash on that vocal note 2.73x distance seems fine for Salad players - although I'm not sure myself lol
00:43:345 (2,3,4) - Problematic pattern for new players because you have flowstop on the slider> movement left > dash right. Try making (2) more linear, or reducing the spacing between (2,3) Done, originally (3) to (4) wasn't supposed to be a dash lol
01:09:745 (1,2) - Yeesh this is a harsh spacing, even if it does warrant more emphasis. Please reduce this to a more manageable distance such as ~ 3.0x DS Yeesh okay applied
01:27:745 (2,3) - 01:29:665 (2,3) - 01:31:585 (2,3) - 01:33:505 (2,3) - etc. same as 00:07:105 (2,3) - 00:09:025 (2,3) - in the intro section. Please drop each of these spacings a little so the player is clear dash isn't required Alrighty, all done.

Platter
00:03:505 (5) - Consider separating into two 1/2 sliders for the vocal so you can add a dash to the strong drum sounds at 00:04:465 (1) - Alright, done for consistency.
00:09:745 (4,1) - hyper coupled with double antiflow sliders is really unexpected and overly difficult for this level of difficulty. Reduce the difficulty here ny making (1) face to the right for a more natural flow I agree, applied.
00:32:185 (3) - Feels weird to skip the drum sound on the white tick, so making (3) a 1/2 slider starting there and adding a circle on the blue tick would play much better in this case Yup, you are right, and since there's another strong sound at that tick as well, applied.
00:58:225 (1) - C-shaped repeat slider at this SV creates awkward droplet formation that is likely to result in misses. Rotating tail ~ 30 degrees clockwise for a more fluid movement would play better Alrighty, rotated 21 degrees clockwise.
01:05:905 (1) - ^ Thought the shallower curve here esentially just leaves you with an uninteresting stand-still repeat. This time you can make an inward curve for variety if you like, since space is more limited on the right-hand border
01:13:585 (1) - ^ Applied the same application for both.
01:21:025 (4,1) - Vocal is strong here, a regular dashed jump would be fitting for emphasis Well that bell is also strong too, I wonder how did I miss this out ;w;

Rain
00:29:905 (2,3,4) - Difficult to walk these without regular pauses which break flow. Suggest increasing the distance between these for more fluid transition
00:33:625 (2,3,4) - Strong hyper into standstill creates an awkward flowstop considering (4) is then in the same direction of movement. I'd reduce the hyper strength slightly and make (3) curve more to the left e.g. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5345309 Yeap, totally plays out better now.
I feel vertical low-movement patterns like 00:18:865 (3,4) - 00:33:265 (1,2) - etc. are overused in the non-kiai sections. They're not bad per se, I just personally find them a little uninteresting, and would prefer a bit more horizontal movement such as 00:06:385 (1,2) - 00:08:305 (1,2,3) - I feel the kiai section is really well mapped however, so good job on that I mean I mapped this a long time ago(Rain was the first difficulty I mapped), and my style was basically using 90% vertical sliders, 10% horizontal sliders. I feel somewhat 'lazy' to change them up, as that would require me to re-pattern all of them due to the triggering distance of hypers being quite high. If more people do mention about this, I'll definitely change them up.

This is all from me. If you have any questions or want to discuss things further, please don't hesitate to get back to me and I'll see what I can do to help.

Good luck! (:

Thanks for the helpful mod

I fixed almost everything lols

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-06-11T22:04:08+00:00

call me when lazy kagari replies

Kagari

751 posts

Joined October 2013

Kagari 2016-06-11T22:13:38+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
call me when lazy kagari replies

i blame jbh for giving me headache until now :v

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-06-11T22:22:32+00:00

Kagari wrote:
i blame jbh for giving me headache until now :v

Sorry I guess I won't give up my free time to help you in future (:

Kagari

751 posts

Joined October 2013

Kagari 2016-06-11T23:25:23+00:00

took me too long to make changes not because i'm lazy okay

JBHyperion wrote:
Kagari's Paradise
00:06:385 (1,2,3) - Why is the jump to (2) when the strong drum sound is on (3)? You repeat this throughout the map, probably because you were lazy and copypasted everything (^: Additionally, the spacing is very tight, so unless you want hdashes on all of these (3)'s (not recommended due to spread balance reasons), please reduced the (2,3) jump distance when you repatattern throughout - i cant seem to agree with this since i mapped the melodic part, not the drum part and the melodic part seems much sensible to me IMO (this is the sole reason i stuck for 2 days just to figure out how to remap these parts that you've mentioned here and the rest of the parts), but yeah, I did reduced the jumps between 2 and 3 and at the same time keeping the distance between 3 and 4 fairy visible during the actual gameplay
00:07:105 (5,1) - This antiflow with dash comes quite unexpectely and is easy to miss without good reactions. I'd prefer if the distance was reduced a little - reduced the distance (i think)
00:10:945 (5,1) - ^ Seems you have a lot of these jumps littered around too, even after the kiai 01:27:745 (5,1) - 01:31:585 (5,1) - etc. so you've got some fixing to do I'm afraid - ^
00:25:225 (5) - hdash of this strength and high SV aren't really called for here, this is just a weak guitar sound - removed the absurb SV change, but decided to keep the hypers
00:54:505 (2,3,4) - This antiflow comes really unexpectedly considering you didn't use any similar patterns elsewhere in the diff. The rhythm itself isn't that complex and your hdash pattern already provides ample emphasis, so I'd Ctrl+H (3) and move it back for a more natural flow - okay
Vocal and kiai sections are mostly fine and the map flows well overall, but the melody sections at the start and end are blatant copy/paste and get boring to play very quickly. I suggest you revisit these two sections to firstly correct jump placement on the 5plets as I pointed out in the suggestions, and then work on bringing some more variety to make the map more interesting to play - I literary spent more than a day just to remap these parts and give tons of testplaying before it actually make sense with the music... seems that i dont have any option to replace the 5plets so i decided to play around with the movement and also added some more jumps to spice up the opening part and also the ending part after the kiai
This is all from me. If you have any questions or want to discuss things further, please don't hesitate to get back to me and I'll see what I can do to help.

Good luck! (:

thanks for the mod jbh

please kill me for being late as f ;_;

neko paradise

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Sc4v4ng3r

1,232 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Sc4v4ng3r 2016-06-12T15:24:55+00:00

It's been a few hours, but updated.

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-06-18T06:20:12+00:00

dokidoki placeholder v2

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Moeruattack 2016-06-18T14:51:35+00:00

meh idk how 2 mod so 4 kudosu then

*Editted : dun wan my lazy bugged me, modding after Ascendance done mod lel*

Last edited by Moeruattack 2016-06-23T18:03:50+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-06-22T18:35:11+00:00

RIP my 2 kudosu :<

im super sick so I may miss some things or make odd suggestions so if anything doesnt make sense just poke me and ill try to explain (not gonna make a fancy format, hopefully you don't mind)

general stuff looks okay, though a metadata source would be nice
the video seems a bit nsfw, would need another opinion on it
holy nekopara gud stuff

cup

00:11:185 (2) - this feels a bit weird coming out of the previous slider since it's another leftwards motion, I'd personally make this face right for a better flow out of 00:09:745 (6,1) - like this idk

00:15:025 (2) - Maybe make this a bit more slanted right? right now it kinda makes the catcher stay at a standstill which isnt cool :<

00:19:825 (3,4) - Coming out of the previous notes, I'd turn this into a repeat slider since maybe such a quick triplet going the opposite direction may be a bit tough for a newbie, also it matches the music a bit more in my opinion for the "low high low" notes you hear aaaa

00:35:185 (3) - why is it emphasized differently than 00:27:505 (3) - ? Imo, you should really make these consistent since cups are promoting rhythm simplicity.

00:46:705 (3,4,1) - these feel a bit too compressed in my opinion, especially 3,4 since 4 has a clap and a finish, leaving it underemphasized. I moved 4 to x:252 and 00:48:625 (1) - to x:416 but anything similar could work.

salad

00:10:225 (1) - 00:12:145 (1) - I'm not a huge fan of these vertical sliders since they aren't promoting any movement at all here

00:20:065 (2,3) - these feel like they could have more emphasis on them, with the double claps giving them really strong emphasis, maybe having two small jumps to them would work nicely?

00:27:505 (1,2) - these also feel like they could have quite a bit of emphasis, maybe try moving 00:27:985 (2,3) - to x:184 or similar?

Although, why does 00:28:945 - have such a strong sound on a slider end? I would turn 00:28:465 (3) - into a 1/2 slider + circle in order to give more emphasis :3

00:44:305 (4,1) - distance here could be slightly larger considering the whistle+finish combo. try x:416 for 00:44:785 (1) -

00:55:345 (1) - Same thing with the slider end here, it's missing out on emphasis because it's not it's own distinct object. changing to a circle at x:288 would be a good fit here

platter

00:07:345 (3,4) - not a big fan of these, considering the first note seems to end on the red tick, so the pattern feels off to me

ok this diff is actually really nice >w<

uhh if you wanna apply these and then call me back I can do a more formal check and place an icon

Last edited by Ascendance 2016-06-24T23:36:40+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Sc4v4ng3r

1,232 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Sc4v4ng3r 2016-06-23T09:02:52+00:00

Take your time, I don't mind even if your mod takes decades xD
Get better soon ^^
Anyway :

Ascendance wrote:
RIP my 2 kudosu :<

im super sick so I may miss some things or make odd suggestions so if anything doesnt make sense just poke me and ill try to explain (not gonna make a fancy format, hopefully you don't mind) I don't mind anything about that; more importantly you got better, and that matters more than modding

general stuff looks okay, though a metadata source would be nice Here - Took a picture directly from the game. And from the opening video, here - it shows the kanji title (ドキドキ☆ココロ☆フレーバー) and the artist's kanji name (榊原ゆい - romanised into Sakakibara Yui. How do I know this? ゆい these 2 are pronounced as Yui, so the former ones must be Sakakibara)
the video seems a bit nsfw, would need another opinion on it Yea I'm going to ask few other people about this matter, that mustard scene is quite suggestive :c But the standard version did get ranked without any problem on the video, so it should be fine... Maybe.
holy nekopara gud stuff ALL HAIL NEKOS

cup

00:11:185 (2) - this feels a bit weird coming out of the previous slider since it's another leftwards motion, I'd personally make this face right for a better flow out of 00:09:745 (6,1) - like this idk Okay

00:15:025 (2) - Maybe make this a bit more slanted right? right now it kinda makes the catcher stay at a standstill which isnt cool :< Yea that ain't cool

00:19:825 (3,4) - Coming out of the previous notes, I'd turn this into a repeat slider since maybe such a quick triplet going the opposite direction may be a bit tough for a newbie, also it matches the music a bit more in my opinion for the "low high low" notes you hear aaaa Okie

00:35:185 (3) - why is it emphasized differently than 00:27:505 (3) - ? Imo, you should really make these consistent since cups are promoting rhythm simplicity. Okie doke

00:46:705 (3,4,1) - these feel a bit too compressed in my opinion, especially 3,4 since 4 has a clap and a finish, leaving it underemphasized. I moved 4 to x:252 and 00:48:625 (1) - to x:416 but anything similar could work. Alrighty

I also made a lot more movement between notes, now it should be a little bit more intuitive to play with lesser stop-and-go flows.

salad

00:10:225 (1) - 00:12:145 (1) - I'm not a huge fan of these vertical sliders since they aren't promoting any movement at all here Tried to work around these as much as possible, there should be a little bit more movement on those now.

00:20:065 (2,3) - these feel like they could have more emphasis on them, with the double claps giving them really strong emphasis, maybe having two small jumps to them would work nicely? The rhythm's quite complex here and all, so I think they should be having a short walkable distance, to ease out the movement. They didn't encounter any of these kinds of rhythm in Cup, so this difficulty should be an introductory level of these kinds of movement, for Platter.

00:27:505 (1,2) - these also feel like they could have quite a bit of emphasis, maybe try moving 00:27:985 (2,3) - to x:184 or similar? Mm gonna keep this one for now as JBH did mention that these kinds of movements might be a little bit too hard for Salad level players. I'll see what does the next modder(s) or BN says.

Although, why does 00:28:945 - have such a strong sound on a slider end? I would turn 00:28:465 (3) - into a 1/2 slider + circle in order to give more emphasis :3 I'll keep this in mind as well, as the movement from the previous notes are quite 'hard' compared to others, so I made the rhyth m more simplistic to avoid any harsh fails or anything.

00:44:305 (4,1) - distance here could be slightly larger considering the whistle+finish combo. try x:416 for 00:44:785 (1) - That different rhythmnic snap could really catch Salad players off-guard and can get quite confusing as 3/4 and 1/2 gaps are quite different.

00:55:345 (1) - Same thing with the slider end here, it's missing out on emphasis because it's not it's own distinct object. changing to a circle at x:288 would be a good fit here Trying to keep the linear difficulty spread throughout all the difficulties by doing this - but I'll also keep this in mind.

platter

00:07:345 (3,4) - not a big fan of these, considering the first note seems to end on the red tick, so the pattern feels off to me Brought (4) closer to (3), maybe that'll help... hopefully ;-;

ok this diff is actually really nice >w< Thanks :3

uhh if you wanna apply these and then call me back I can do a more formal check and place an icon

Thanks for the mod! You did help me a lot so I won't complain

Moeruattack

762 posts

Joined June 2014

Moeruattack 2016-06-29T16:10:13+00:00

Late mod due to how good the map was :3
(rip my 5 kudosu)

General
Video need to convert to .avi type format instead of Flash Video. Just in case if no one mention about video :p
Video is not really NSFW since there`s no bath scene or something...um...maybe need more opinions :>

Kagari's Paradise

HP 7?

00:51:745 (5) - Make the slider start a bit c shaped on the beginning, like move the start point slider to x:248 y:160.
01:29:425 (3) - Flow would be a bit better if move a bit left to x:400 or lesser.
01:34:345 (3) - Move to x:240, somehow this one look a bit weird distance after played a while.

Overall, really fun to play

Rain

00:13:345 (6) - Kinda a bit hit to the wall, try move to x:32.
00:44:305 (4,5) - I wonder if move this to x:304 would make a bit emphasize the sound and distance?

I think I know the intention of the Rain map, so this is good light rain map :p

Other diff was really nice

Should rank dis but video is questionable lol.

Sc4v4ng3r

1,232 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Sc4v4ng3r 2016-06-30T15:16:15+00:00

murutattack wrote:
Late mod due to how good the map was :3
(rip my 5 kudosu)

General
Video need to convert to .avi type format instead of Flash Video. Just in case if no one mention about video :p Having a /flv file for the video is totally fine, especially when numerous ranked maps also uses .flv file type. But well, if others mention this, I'll encode this into .avi file.
Video is not really NSFW since there`s no bath scene or something...um...maybe need more opinions :>

[Rain]00:13:345 (6) - Kinda a bit hit to the wall, try move to x:32.
00:44:305 (4,5) - I wonder if move this to x:304 would make a bit emphasize the sound and distance? Applied both

I think I know the intention of the Rain map, so this is good light rain map :p [color=#00FFFF]Idk, a part of me back then thought that this was a harder rain xD [strike]how do you play ctb[/strike[]/color]

Other diff was really nice
Should rank dis but video is questionable lol.

Thanks~
For that video matter I'll contact some QATs about this.

Kagari

751 posts

Joined October 2013

Kagari 2016-06-30T20:24:28+00:00

crap i forgot about this xP

murutattack wrote:
Late mod due to how good the map was :3
(rip my 5 kudosu)
Kagari's Paradise
HP 7? - nah, not really necessary coz this is not a overdose, but a rain that it's harder than the current rain :>

00:51:745 (5) - Make the slider start a bit c shaped on the beginning, like move the start point slider to x:248 y:160. - fixed!
01:29:425 (3) - Flow would be a bit better if move a bit left to x:400 or lesser. - i'll be keeping the distance between 2 and 3 while making the stream curved
01:34:345 (3) - Move to x:240, somehow this one look a bit weird distance after played a while. - 248 instead

Overall, really fun to play - yey thanks

thanks for the mod abam murut~! :3

dokidoki no kokoro

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280,64,32185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,208,32305,2,0,L|368:264,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,264,32665,2,0,P|136:240|112:192,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,144,33025,1,2,0:0:0:0:
496,88,33265,6,0,P|472:184|432:256,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,256,33745,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,256,33985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,88,34225,2,0,P|40:184|80:256,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,256,34705,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,256,34945,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,144,35185,5,14,0:0:0:0:
280,128,35425,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,96,35665,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,64,35905,1,8,0:0:0:0:
48,64,36025,2,0,P|72:176|120:224,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,232,36625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,232,36865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,192,37105,6,0,P|456:104|336:32,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,72,37825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,136,38065,2,0,L|392:200,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,136,38545,1,8,0:0:0:0:
368,136,38785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,200,39025,5,2,0:0:0:0:
232,200,39265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,96,39505,2,0,L|96:192,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,200,39985,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,200,40225,1,2,0:0:0:0:
496,128,40465,2,0,L|392:64,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,192,40945,6,0,P|56:104|176:32,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,72,41665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,144,41905,2,0,L|120:208,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,152,42385,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,152,42625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,160,42865,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,168,43105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,160,43345,2,0,P|448:96|416:72,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,160,43825,2,0,L|280:80,1,120,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,208,44305,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,232,44425,2,0,B|24:192|192:168,1,180.000006866455,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,88,44785,6,0,P|456:136|432:264,1,240,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,272,45505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,280,45745,2,0,L|176:232,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,176,46225,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,176,46465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,176,46705,6,0,P|424:112|392:96,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,152,47185,2,0,P|136:88|160:48,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,176,47665,2,0,P|424:112|392:96,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,128,48145,1,12,0:0:0:0:
336,128,48385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,128,48625,5,8,0:0:0:0:
232,120,48745,2,0,P|272:160|232:176,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,208,49105,2,0,P|24:144|48:96,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,88,49465,2,0,P|344:128|304:144,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,160,49825,6,0,P|120:96|160:64,1,120,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,240,50305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,128,50545,5,8,0:0:0:0:
136,120,50665,2,0,P|96:160|136:176,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,208,51025,2,0,P|344:144|320:96,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,88,51385,2,0,P|24:128|64:144,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,160,51745,2,0,P|280:112|240:64,1,120,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,200,52225,1,2,0:0:0:0:
480,128,52465,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,52705,12,0,54145,0:0:0:0:
168,192,54385,5,12,0:0:0:0:
408,192,54505,2,0,P|344:112|296:96,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,96,54985,2,0,L|40:72,2,60,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,96,55345,2,0,P|248:144|192:176,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,96,55825,2,0,P|480:160|424:192,1,120,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,200,56305,6,0,P|24:120|152:72,1,240,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,72,57025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,136,57145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,200,57265,2,0,P|488:120|360:72,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,72,57985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,136,58105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,144,58225,6,0,P|104:200|152:240,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,136,58705,2,0,P|368:192|320:232,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,240,59065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,128,59185,2,0,P|88:184|136:224,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,144,59665,2,0,P|424:200|376:240,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,200,60145,6,0,P|24:120|152:72,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,72,60865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,128,60985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,200,61105,2,0,P|488:120|360:72,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,72,61825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,144,61945,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,240,62065,6,0,P|120:168|160:152,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,240,62545,2,0,P|352:168|312:152,1,120,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,63025,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,152,63145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,152,63265,2,0,P|304:112|312:48,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,160,63625,2,0,P|104:96|144:72,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,200,63985,6,0,P|496:120|368:72,1,240,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,72,64705,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,136,64825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,200,64945,2,0,P|24:120|152:72,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,72,65665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,136,65785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,144,65905,6,0,P|408:200|360:240,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,136,66385,2,0,P|144:192|192:232,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,240,66745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,128,66865,2,0,P|424:184|376:224,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,80,67345,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,80,67585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,88,67825,6,0,L|168:152,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,152,68305,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,256,68545,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,256,68665,2,0,P|488:184|432:144,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,144,69265,2,0,L|360:48,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,80,69745,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,80,69985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,160,70225,2,0,L|144:208,1,120,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,70585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,70705,5,0,0:0:0:0:
440,160,70825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,104,70945,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,96,71065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,71185,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,112,71305,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,112,71425,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,112,71545,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,200,71665,6,0,P|24:120|152:72,1,240,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,72,72385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,136,72505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,200,72625,2,0,P|488:120|360:72,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,72,73345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,136,73465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,144,73585,6,0,P|104:200|152:240,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,136,74065,2,0,P|368:192|320:232,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,240,74425,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,128,74545,2,0,P|88:184|136:224,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,144,75025,2,0,P|424:200|376:240,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,200,75505,6,0,P|24:120|152:72,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,72,76225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,128,76345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,200,76465,2,0,L|336:96,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,184,76945,2,0,L|176:88,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,72,77305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,77425,6,0,L|360:176,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,80,77905,2,0,L|192:176,1,120,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,112,78385,2,0,L|424:208,1,120,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,224,78865,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,224,78985,2,0,P|424:168|392:128,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,288,79345,5,6,0:0:0:0:
16,288,79585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,184,79825,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,168,80065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,224,80305,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,224,80545,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,152,80785,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,152,81025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,136,81265,6,0,L|424:232,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,112,81745,2,0,L|192:208,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,72,82225,2,0,P|488:136|448:176,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,184,82705,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,256,82945,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,272,83185,6,0,L|168:200,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,232,83665,2,0,P|352:160|320:152,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,184,84025,2,0,P|40:136|24:40,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,40,84625,1,12,0:0:0:0:
120,40,84865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,48,85105,6,0,P|432:112|384:128,1,120,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,136,85465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,136,85585,2,0,P|88:208|128:216,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,200,86065,1,10,0:0:0:0:
480,200,86185,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,296,86425,2,0,P|360:208|248:128,1,240,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,56,87025,6,0,P|48:120|88:152,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,160,87385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,168,87505,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,200,87625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,248,87745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,88,87985,6,0,P|112:152|152:184,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,168,88345,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,168,88465,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,208,88585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,240,88705,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,80,88945,6,0,P|152:144|192:176,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,184,89305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,200,89425,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,248,89545,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,256,89665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,80,89905,6,0,P|48:144|88:176,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,184,90265,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,192,90385,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,248,90505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,248,90625,2,0,L|280:192,1,60
464,56,90865,6,0,P|440:120|400:152,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,91225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,168,91345,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,216,91465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,224,91585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,80,91825,6,0,P|360:144|320:176,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,184,92185,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,200,92305,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,240,92425,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,264,92545,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,64,92785,6,0,P|408:128|368:160,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,93145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,200,93265,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,248,93385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,296,93505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,184,93745,6,0,P|400:128|360:80,1,120,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,80,94225,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,80,94345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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208,312,94705,6,0,P|184:248|216:216,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,96,95065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,97,95185,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,144,95305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,95425,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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240,96,96025,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,96,96145,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,144,96265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,184,96385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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24,120,97225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,168,97345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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112,120,99025,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,152,99145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Sc4v4ng3r

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Sc4v4ng3r 2016-07-01T12:51:52+00:00

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Elite Mapper

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Ascendance 2016-07-04T21:09:57+00:00

quick recheck on the higher diffs

[

Not Kagari's Rain]

General

00:04:465 (1,2,3) - This kind of pathing is really shallow, and makes for an awkward hdash between 00:05:185 (3,4) - . I'd move 00:04:945 (2) - to x:168, and 00:05:185 (3) - to x:40.
00:06:865 (2,3) - No hdash here but you have an hdash on this sound for the rest of the map?
00:06:385 - It's gonna sound harsh but I'm really disliking this part of the map because it's all left-right wall to wall jumps with really low movement in the patterns. I know you can do better than this. Try spacing out the patterns a bit more and using more direction changes so that the map isn't inherently boring.
00:20:305 (3,4) - Might wanna add hdash here for emphasis.
00:34:225 (3,4) - Quite far distance, x:376 for 00:34:705 (4) - ?
00:35:185 (1,2,3) - same point as the first one about the shallow hdash
00:44:305 (4,5) - 5 has a finish but no emphasis on it? D: Should maybe add an hdash here, or at least some more distance.
after the kiai repeats the same left-right patterns as before which have a lot of room for improvement. I'd like to see one or two more mods on this difficulty before I come back to it.

[

Kagari's Paradise]

General

To start out, I'm gonna say that this song really doesn't deserve an overdose. It's really overpatterned imo, and the fact that it comes out to be an H icon really reinforces the fact that the difficulty isn't really meant to be here. If you really want to keep it, I'll do a small mod here.
00:07:105 (5,1) - hdash for consistency, as well as here 00:08:065 (5,1) - . Or, you can remove the hdashes from 00:09:025 (5,1) - and 00:09:985 (5,1) - .
01:06:865 (4,5,6) - Harsh distance here especially with the hdash at 6,1. Makes it too easy to move early. 01:07:345 (5) - to x:232 works fine for me.
Again, the part after the kiai has some inconsistent hdashes that you might wanna fix.
If you disagree with my statement on this diff, feel free to poke me back and I'll list all the overmapped parts of the difficulty. Though, it'd probably be better to retire it.

Call me back after one or two more mods on the rain. The other diffs are fine to me.

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-07-04T22:22:54+00:00

uhh apparently the overdose is a rain in which case it needs to be remapped cuz most of it is unrankable due to new rc

Kagari

751 posts

Joined October 2013

Kagari 2016-07-05T02:37:53+00:00

did quite an amount of remaps tho, especially on nerfing some of the hypers of all non-kiai part /o/
thx for the mod ascendance

paradise

osu file format v14

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Title:Dokidoki kokoro flavor
TitleUnicode:ドキドキ☆ココロ☆フレーバー
Artist:Sakakibara Yui
ArtistUnicode:榊原ゆい
Creator:[Sc4v4ng3r]
Version:Kagari's Paradise
Source:ネコぱら vol.2 姉妹ネコのシュクレ
Tags:Nekopara Soreiyu Kaiten Shimashita Shimai Neko no Shukure eroge opening VN visual novel NEKO WORKs Sekai Project Scavanger Kagari
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192,136,65785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,144,65905,6,0,P|408:200|360:240,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,136,66385,2,0,P|144:192|192:232,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,240,66745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,128,66865,2,0,P|424:184|376:224,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,80,67345,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,80,67585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,88,67825,6,0,L|168:152,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,152,68305,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,256,68545,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,256,68665,2,0,P|488:184|432:144,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,144,69265,2,0,L|360:48,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,80,69745,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,80,69985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,160,70225,2,0,L|144:208,1,120,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,208,70585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,192,70705,5,0,0:0:0:0:
440,160,70825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,104,70945,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,96,71065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,112,71185,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,112,71305,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,120,71425,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,120,71545,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,200,71665,6,0,P|24:120|152:72,1,240,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,72,72385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,136,72505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,200,72625,2,0,P|488:120|360:72,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,72,73345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,136,73465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,144,73585,6,0,P|104:200|152:240,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,136,74065,2,0,P|368:192|320:232,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,240,74425,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,128,74545,2,0,P|88:184|136:224,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,144,75025,2,0,P|424:200|376:240,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,200,75505,6,0,P|24:120|152:72,1,240,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,72,76225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,128,76345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,200,76465,2,0,L|336:96,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,184,76945,2,0,L|176:88,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,72,77305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,80,77425,6,0,L|360:176,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,80,77905,2,0,L|192:176,1,120,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,112,78385,2,0,L|424:208,1,120,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,224,78865,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,224,78985,2,0,P|424:168|392:128,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,288,79345,5,6,0:0:0:0:
64,288,79585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,184,79825,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,168,80065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,224,80305,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,224,80545,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,152,80785,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,152,81025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,136,81265,6,0,L|416:232,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,112,81745,2,0,L|184:208,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,72,82225,2,0,P|480:136|440:176,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,184,82705,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,256,82945,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,272,83185,6,0,L|168:200,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,232,83665,2,0,P|352:160|320:152,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,216,84025,2,0,P|48:136|104:80,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,40,84625,1,12,0:0:0:0:
144,40,84865,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,48,85105,6,0,P|432:112|384:128,1,120,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,136,85465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
48,136,85585,2,0,P|88:208|128:216,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,200,86065,1,10,0:0:0:0:
480,200,86185,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,296,86425,2,0,P|360:208|248:128,1,240,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,56,87025,6,0,P|48:120|88:152,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,160,87385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,168,87505,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,200,87625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,248,87745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,88,87985,6,0,P|112:152|152:184,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,168,88345,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,168,88465,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,208,88585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,240,88705,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,96,88945,6,0,P|56:160|96:192,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,200,89305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,216,89425,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,264,89545,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,272,89665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,88,89905,6,0,P|80:120|88:176,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,184,90265,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,192,90385,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,248,90505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,248,90625,2,0,L|216:192,1,60
464,56,90865,6,0,P|440:120|400:152,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,160,91225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,168,91345,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,216,91465,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,224,91585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,80,91825,6,0,P|360:144|320:176,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,184,92185,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,200,92305,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,240,92425,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,264,92545,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,64,92785,6,0,P|448:128|408:160,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,168,93145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,200,93265,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,248,93385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,296,93505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,192,93745,6,0,P|352:136|312:88,1,120,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,88,94225,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,88,94345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,94465,2,0,L|368:136,1,60
184,312,94705,6,0,P|160:248|192:216,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,96,95065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,97,95185,1,8,0:0:0:0:
472,144,95305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,192,95425,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,232,95665,6,0,P|160:216|136:160,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,96025,1,2,0:0:0:0:
344,96,96145,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,144,96265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,184,96385,1,0,0:0:0:0:
40,248,96625,6,0,P|80:192|120:152,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,80,96985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,72,97105,1,8,0:0:0:0:
24,120,97225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,168,97345,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,232,97585,6,0,P|392:176|352:136,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,72,97945,1,2,0:0:0:0:
456,72,98065,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,120,98185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,184,98305,2,0,L|264:128,1,60
456,256,98545,6,0,P|432:216|368:184,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,98905,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,120,99025,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,152,99145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,192,99265,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,256,99505,6,0,P|384:200|328:184,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,136,99865,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,136,99985,5,8,0:0:0:0:
48,72,100105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,72,100225,1,0,0:0:0:0:
496,264,100465,6,0,P|472:200|424:176,1,120,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,112,100825,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,112,100945,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,160,101065,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,184,101185,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,224,101305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,232,101425,6,0,P|112:168|152:128,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,224,101905,2,0,P|456:176|392:160,1,120,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,120,102385,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,102625,12,2,106225,0:0:0:0:

aaa sc4 can u reapply the HS on paradise? i think i messed up a bit when doing the remapping xP

Sc4v4ng3r

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Topic Starter

Sc4v4ng3r 2016-07-05T07:11:34+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
quick recheck on the higher diffs

[ Not Kagari's Rain]

General

00:04:465 (1,2,3) - This kind of pathing is really shallow, and makes for an awkward hdash between 00:05:185 (3,4) - . I'd move 00:04:945 (2) - to x:168, and 00:05:185 (3) - to x:40. Changed it diffrently so that the hyper to (4) isn't too harsh.
00:06:865 (2,3) - No hdash here but you have an hdash on this sound for the rest of the map? Lol this ain't a hyper /o/
00:06:385 - It's gonna sound harsh but I'm really disliking this part of the map because it's all left-right wall to wall jumps with really low movement in the patterns. I know you can do better than this. Try spacing out the patterns a bit more and using more direction changes so that the map isn't inherently boring. Hell I re-patterened the whole thing out, so it gives a variety of movement compared to the second similar section.
00:20:305 (3,4) - Might wanna add hdash here for emphasis. Alrighty, although I'm not too sure if the hyper is supported or not...
00:34:225 (3,4) - Quite far distance, x:376 for 00:34:705 (4) - ? Agreed, applied.
00:35:185 (1,2,3) - same point as the first one about the shallow hdash Yea okay
00:44:305 (4,5) - 5 has a finish but no emphasis on it? D: Should maybe add an hdash here, or at least some more distance. The lower volume finish here is to emphasize on the low volume cymbals of the song here, but added some distance to it anyways.
after the kiai repeats the same left-right patterns as before which have a lot of room for improvement. I'd like to see one or two more mods on this difficulty before I come back to it. All these re-patterning is killing me xD But honestly, I can't make them all different any more, because of the difficulty settings and the style I'm using in this map. The style I'm using here makes me use 'wall dashes' or just left-and-right hypers in general, which I can't fix unless by doing a full remap(which is a lot more troublesome). Hopefully the new patterns won't bother you too much.

Call me back after one or two more mods on the rain. The other diffs are fine to me.

Thanks for the mod! Updated.
@Kagari - Checked over hitsounds, should be all good now

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

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Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2016-07-05T08:55:29+00:00

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:
Ascendance wrote:
quick recheck on the higher diffs

[ Not Kagari's Rain]

General

00:06:865 (2,3) - No hdash here but you have an hdash on this sound for the rest of the map? Lol this ain't a hyper /o/
Thanks for the mod! Updated.
@Kagari - Checked over hitsounds, should be all good now

I meant to add hyper there for consistency with the others, since all the other ones EXCEPT that one have hypers >w>

Also, did a quick playthrough and the new patterns look better. I won't bubble cause of the remap on kagari's diff, but feel free to call me back whenever you feel you're ready.

Sc4v4ng3r

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Sc4v4ng3r 2016-07-06T03:53:39+00:00

Lmao me how did I read that wrong ;-;
The reason why I didn't add hyper at that place(as well as at 00:11:185 - , etc.) is due to the 'lack' of sounds on that position compared to the others, but to emphasize on the downbeat instruments, I added a normal dash instead. As far as I can hear, other big white ticks has the distinctive electric guitar sound, which this doesn't have, which further supports the use of the normal dash.

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

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Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 2016-07-19T03:42:59+00:00

Mod as requested

[Cup]

This diff is really well mapped, but what bothers me a bit is that the Kiai time is the same, or even easier, than the rest of the song. I think it would be nice if you could spice the Kiai a bit by increasing some distance, especially on downbeats. For example, the downbeat at 00:58:225 (3) - feels really underemphasized due to the short distance to it. I'd even reduce distances on the non-Kiai parts a bit.
00:00:625 (1) - Just personal preference, in most maps I prefer to start "softly", so I would make this one have a bit less horizontal movement.
00:02:545 (3) - On a similar reasoning, I'd put this closer to the previous object (say x:376 or so) just to make the intro even more newb-friendly.
00:21:745 (1) - I think you can add a finish on this slider's head to increase the emphasis on the start of the verse.
00:29:425 (1) - ^Same stuff
00:35:185 (3) - This feels a bit undermapped considering it's a mix of strong vocal + drums, and even more considering you mapped some of these sounds on 00:27:505 (3) - . I think you could use some timeline like one of these:
or
00:48:145 (4,1) - I think you could swap the finish hitsound on these ones, as I feel (1) is a much stronger sound.
01:02:545 (4) - I think the finish hitsound isn't necessary here, as it feels a bit off from your usual usage (finish on strong downbeats). The clap alone is enough
01:09:745 (3) - Same, the finish on the repeat isn't that necessary given the way you placed your finishes.
01:17:905 (4) - Same :C
01:24:145 (2) - Same on slider tail

[Salad]

00:03:985 (4,1) - I really didn't expect this to have such a distance. I'd move 00:04:465 (1,2,3) - as a whole to the left, to make it a more walkable distance. I tried x:416 and it felt fine.
00:07:345 (3) - Missing clap on the tail?
00:10:945 (2,3) - The antiflow makes this pattern visually unappealing. I'd Ctrl+G (3) or something like that.
00:15:985 (1) - This curve is weird, as it requires the players to stop after a dash in order to get the first droplets. I think you can either make it a straight slider to the right or make change the curve to something like the image, so the slider follows the movement from the dash:
00:19:345 (4,1) - I felt the dash to (1) felt a bit off, mainly because I think 00:20:065 (2,3) - are equally or even more prominent sounds. Try putting (1) on x:200.
00:21:745 (1) - Same suggestion as in the Cup, I think you can add a finish on the head.
00:27:505 (1,2,3) - This pattern is a bit awkward to play as the distances are quite ambiguous as to whether to dash or walk. Also, you leave a finish hitsound on a really underemphasized position at the slider tail, while on a similar pattern (00:20:065 (2,3,4,5) - ) you left it alone, and requiring a dash. I think you could map it like this:
SPOILER
00:35:425 (2) - A similar stuff happens here, where you leave a slider head on strong sounds, which makes it feel underemphasized. I think the following timeline will let you emphasize the stronger sounds better:
00:51:265 (2,3) - This movement is quite unexpected considering the way you mapped 00:49:345 (2,3) - , so I suggest you Ctrl+G 00:51:985 (3) - and then re-position 00:52:465 (1) - at a similar spacing as it had before.
00:48:145 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - I think you can Ctrl+H this (and maybe move it to the left it you think 00:47:665 (2,3) - becomes too large), because it triggers me that 00:52:465 (1) - is the opposite side of where the bananas from the spinner come.
01:02:065 (1) - The same suggestion I made in the Cup for this and the other finishers in the Kiai apply on this diff.
01:03:505 (3) - Having this oriented like this makes the distance before and after be around the same, while the object that follows is a really strong vocal with a finish. Ctrl+G'in this small slider and even moving 01:03:985 (1) - to the right a bit will increase the emphasis on that finish.
01:09:505 (4,1,2) - Why are the distances placed like this? I think (1) is stronger than (2) so it makes more sense that the largest distance goes between 01:09:505 (4,1) - .
01:18:625 (3,4) - I think this distance can be quite tricky, as it's hard to decide whether to dash or walk. I'd move 01:18:865 (4) - a bit to the left (maybe x:344 or so).
01:24:145 (3,4,1) - Similar stuff here. I don't understand why the distance (3,4) is larger than (4,1). I'd Ctrl+G (4).
01:25:105 (1,2,3,4) - I think this pattern requires a lot of movement for this level. I think you could put 01:25:585 (2,3) - together as a single slider to reduce the required movement a bit.

[Platter]

00:21:745 (1) - Same as in the other diffs, you can add a finish here. And now that we're at it, maybe you can even add an hyperdash to this to emphasize the begininng of the verse.
00:28:465 (3) - Both sounds in this slider are strong as individual sounds, so I'd make them separate circles and add a nice jump between them. Something like the following:
SPOILER
Whether you accept the previous suggestions or not, you missed the finish you added on 00:28:945 - on the previous diffs.
00:35:665 (2,3) - I think this jump isn't really fitting, as the strongest sounds are 00:35:185 - (white tick), 00:35:665 - (white tick) and 00:36:025 - (blue tick). I'd use the same timeline I suggested for the Salad.
00:44:305 (4,5,1) - Having the slider mapped on the blue ticks restricts you a lot on the distances you can use, as you can't make 1/4 HDashes in Platters at this BPM. This makes the downbeat at 00:44:785 - feel really underemphasized as the distance to it is really small. I think you could replace 00:44:305 (4,5) - for a single 1/4 slider on 00:44:305 - , which will give you a larger spacing and leniency to add a nice dash/hdash to the downbeat. In case you don't understand, here's what I mean:

This also applies for similar patterns in the Kiai, like 01:03:505 (3,4) - and others.
00:57:265 (3,3) - I think vocals like this (and all the others in the Kiai) can have a larger distance to them to emphasize them a bit more.
01:05:905 (1) - Having this type of antiflow movement after the hyperdash might be a bit hard, and a huge penalty for accuracy. I'd rearrange stuff so you can have this slider go right instead, while keeping the hdash.
01:13:585 (1) - ^Same

[Rain]

00:26:425 (3) - The head is a relatively strong vocal, so I'd suggest adding a small dash to this slider.
00:28:945 (5,1) - You could try adding an hyperdash between this notes, as (1) is a strong downbeat beginning a new verse. Also, you could add a finish hitsound on (1) suggested in previous diffs.
00:30:385 (3,4,5) - I'd also add dashes here, as each new object is a strong singular vocal.
00:46:705 (1,2,3) - These notes could have a larger distance as they are pretty strong vocals.
00:48:985 (2,3) - Having this pattern like this makes the last 3 drum beats feel really underemphasized. I suggest a timeline like the following, with hyperdashes to (2) and (4):
00:50:905 (2,3) - ^Same
00:55:345 (5) - I think you could have a larger distance to this for a little bit more emphasis on the drums.
01:01:945 (7,1) - You could have an hyperdash between these notes as (1) is a strong downbeat.
01:03:505 (4,5) - You could also add an hyperdash here, as it creates a nice buildup to 01:03:985 - .
01:08:545 (3,4) - Same for this, the vocal at 01:08:665 (4) - is relatively strong.
01:17:305 (8,1) - Same for this, (1) is a strong downbeat.
01:18:985 (5) - Same as suggested previously.

[Kagari's Paradise]

00:48:625 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think the itmeline I suggested for the Rain is more adequate, as those are the strongest drum sounds.
00:50:545 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^Same
01:25:465 (2) - This is overmapped.
01:37:585 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think you should use your typical stream, because the sounds aren't that strong to justify these hyperdashes, as opposed to 01:40:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - where the drum beats justify the hyperdashes.
01:39:985 (1) - Wrongly placed NC?

The map is in a good state, but I think a couple of mods could help polishing it a bit more before pushing it to qualified. Feel free to call me back then!

Kagari

751 posts

Joined October 2013

Kagari 2016-07-19T16:52:21+00:00

ZiRoX wrote:
Mod as requested

[Kagari's Paradise]
00:48:625 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think the itmeline I suggested for the Rain is more adequate, as those are the strongest drum sounds. - okay then~
00:50:545 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^Same - ^
01:25:465 (2) - This is overmapped. - not really, the note emphasize the vocal, but I did moved that note to the left so that it emphasize (2) more than (3)
01:37:585 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think you should use your typical stream, because the sounds aren't that strong to justify these hyperdashes, as opposed to 01:40:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - where the drum beats justify the hyperdashes. - noted
01:39:985 (1) - Wrongly placed NC? - baka >.<
The map is in a good state, but I think a couple of mods could help polishing it a bit more before pushing it to qualified. Feel free to call me back then!

thanks for the mod zirox~ :3

paradaisu

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Title:Dokidoki kokoro flavor
TitleUnicode:ドキドキ☆ココロ☆フレーバー
Artist:Sakakibara Yui
ArtistUnicode:榊原ゆい
Creator:[Sc4v4ng3r]
Version:Kagari's Paradise
Source:ネコぱら vol.2 姉妹ネコのシュクレ
Tags:Nekopara Soreiyu Kaiten Shimashita Shimai Neko no Shukure eroge opening VN visual novel NEKO WORKs Sekai Project Scavanger Kagari
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Sc4v4ng3r

1,232 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Sc4v4ng3r 2016-07-25T09:00:00+00:00

ZiRoX wrote:
Mod as requested

[Cup]
This diff is really well mapped, but what bothers me a bit is that the Kiai time is the same, or even easier, than the rest of the song. I think it would be nice if you could spice the Kiai a bit by increasing some distance, especially on downbeats. For example, the downbeat at 00:58:225 (3) - feels really underemphasized due to the short distance to it. I'd even reduce distances on the non-Kiai parts a bit.
00:00:625 (1) - Just personal preference, in most maps I prefer to start "softly", so I would make this one have a bit less horizontal movement. Not really intending to change it as there's the very loud sound at the very start of the song that I really want to emphasize on.
00:02:545 (3) - On a similar reasoning, I'd put this closer to the previous object (say x:376 or so) just to make the intro even more newb-friendly. Not that close but I did reduce the distance.
00:21:745 (1) - I think you can add a finish on this slider's head to increase the emphasis on the start of the verse. Only adding finishes where I can cleary hear the actual cymbals, so since there's nothing really landing on the head of this slider adding a finish there would overemphasize that note
00:29:425 (1) - ^Same stuff Same reasoning like above.
00:35:185 (3) - This feels a bit undermapped considering it's a mix of strong vocal + drums, and even more considering you mapped some of these sounds on 00:27:505 (3) - . I think you could use some timeline like one of these: Fair enough, took the second suggestion.
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00:48:145 (4,1) - I think you could swap the finish hitsound on these ones, as I feel (1) is a much stronger sound. That is viable, but since again I'd been only emphasizing cymbals with finishes(not the verse changes), and since (4) does contain a soft cymbals, I want to emphasize that more than (1).
01:02:545 (4) - I think the finish hitsound isn't necessary here, as it feels a bit off from your usual usage (finish on strong downbeats). The clap alone is enough Somewhat like explained above, if I'm hearing the song right there's a soft cymbal on this note so I'm using a finish to emphasize on that.
01:09:745 (3) - Same, the finish on the repeat isn't that necessary given the way you placed your finishes.
01:17:905 (4) - Same :C
01:24:145 (2) - Same on slider tail Er yea basically all these notes are the same thing like the above notes, so I guess these doesn't need further reasoning.
[Salad]
00:03:985 (4,1) - I really didn't expect this to have such a distance. I'd move 00:04:465 (1,2,3) - as a whole to the left, to make it a more walkable distance. I tried x:416 and it felt fine. Well alright I guess
00:07:345 (3) - Missing clap on the tail? It looks like I'm still sick
00:10:945 (2,3) - The antiflow makes this pattern visually unappealing. I'd Ctrl+G (3) or something like that. It feels fine for me imo, as it gives a variety of movement in contrast to other patterns.
00:15:985 (1) - This curve is weird, as it requires the players to stop after a dash in order to get the first droplets. I think you can either make it a straight slider to the right or make change the curve to something like the image, so the slider follows the movement from the dash: Oh why the hell is that slider curved like that lmao
00:19:345 (4,1) - I felt the dash to (1) felt a bit off, mainly because I think 00:20:065 (2,3) - are equally or even more prominent sounds. Try putting (1) on x:200. Mmm alright I guess, I'll see what others think about this.
00:21:745 (1) - Same suggestion as in the Cup, I think you can add a finish on the head. Same reason like Cup.
00:27:505 (1,2,3) - This pattern is a bit awkward to play as the distances are quite ambiguous as to whether to dash or walk. Also, you leave a finish hitsound on a really underemphasized position at the slider tail, while on a similar pattern (00:20:065 (2,3,4,5) - ) you left it alone, and requiring a dash. I think you could map it like this: Totally agreeing with you, and this pattern plays out a lot more better than before lol
SPOILER
00:35:425 (2) - A similar stuff happens here, where you leave a slider head on strong sounds, which makes it feel underemphasized. I think the following timeline will let you emphasize the stronger sounds better: For consistency I should do this as well.
00:51:265 (2,3) - This movement is quite unexpected considering the way you mapped 00:49:345 (2,3) - , so I suggest you Ctrl+G 00:51:985 (3) - and then re-position 00:52:465 (1) - at a similar spacing as it had before. It may be unexpected, but having the exact same movement like the previous combo did just doesn't feel too 'creative' and too fun to play. Just wanted to give a little bit more variety to the movement so that they don't exactly copy the previous movement.
00:48:145 (3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - I think you can Ctrl+H this (and maybe move it to the left it you think 00:47:665 (2,3) - becomes too large), because it triggers me that 00:52:465 (1) - is the opposite side of where the bananas from the spinner come. Spinners always go against my favor ;-; Anyway fixed.
01:02:065 (1) - The same suggestion I made in the Cup for this and the other finishers in the Kiai apply on this diff. Same reason like Cup.
01:03:505 (3) - Having this oriented like this makes the distance before and after be around the same, while the object that follows is a really strong vocal with a finish. Ctrl+G'in this small slider and even moving 01:03:985 (1) - to the right a bit will increase the emphasis on that finish. Mm alright, fair enough.
01:09:505 (4,1,2) - Why are the distances placed like this? I think (1) is stronger than (2) so it makes more sense that the largest distance goes between 01:09:505 (4,1) - . This time the cymbal on (2) is actually hearable, and on the contrary (1) doens't have it. So to give extra emphasis on the cymbals it makes sense to have a jump between (1) and (2), not between (4) and (1).
01:18:625 (3,4) - I think this distance can be quite tricky, as it's hard to decide whether to dash or walk. I'd move 01:18:865 (4) - a bit to the left (maybe x:344 or so). Yea I do agree with this, moved.
01:24:145 (3,4,1) - Similar stuff here. I don't understand why the distance (3,4) is larger than (4,1). I'd Ctrl+G (4). Well the same reasoning would go here too.
01:25:105 (1,2,3,4) - I think this pattern requires a lot of movement for this level. I think you could put 01:25:585 (2,3) - together as a single slider to reduce the required movement a bit. Alrighty sure
[Platter]
00:21:745 (1) - Same as in the other diffs, you can add a finish here. And now that we're at it, maybe you can even add an hyperdash to this to emphasize the begininng of the verse. Yea the same reason like I gave for the other difficulties. And due to that I won't be adding a hyper too.
00:28:465 (3) - Both sounds in this slider are strong as individual sounds, so I'd make them separate circles and add a nice jump between them. Something like the following: Since I did in Salad I should do it here as well.
SPOILER
Whether you accept the previous suggestions or not, you missed the finish you added on 00:28:945 - on the previous diffs. Lmao how
00:35:665 (2,3) - I think this jump isn't really fitting, as the strongest sounds are 00:35:185 - (white tick), 00:35:665 - (white tick) and 00:36:025 - (blue tick). I'd use the same timeline I suggested for the Salad. Well alright sure, changed up the timeline and removed the dash.
00:44:305 (4,5,1) - Having the slider mapped on the blue ticks restricts you a lot on the distances you can use, as you can't make 1/4 HDashes in Platters at this BPM. This makes the downbeat at 00:44:785 - feel really underemphasized as the distance to it is really small. I think you could replace 00:44:305 (4,5) - for a single 1/4 slider on 00:44:305 - , which will give you a larger spacing and leniency to add a nice dash/hdash to the downbeat. In case you don't understand, here's what I mean:
This also applies for similar patterns in the Kiai, like 01:03:505 (3,4) - and others.Applied for all.
00:57:265 (3,3) - I think vocals like this (and all the others in the Kiai) can have a larger distance to them to emphasize them a bit more. I already did them with some distance increment, but since it was inconsistent applied for all similar vocals.
01:05:905 (1) - Having this type of antiflow movement after the hyperdash might be a bit hard, and a huge penalty for accuracy. I'd rearrange stuff so you can have this slider go right instead, while keeping the hdash.
01:13:585 (1) - ^Same Alright did some rearrangement.
[Rain]
00:26:425 (3) - The head is a relatively strong vocal, so I'd suggest adding a small dash to this slider. But a dash won't really fit with the dashes I'm making in this section, where I made dashes on every 1st snare of every bar. So for consistency I wouldn't make a dash here. But I made some dashes on those 1st snares that didn't have them for consistency again.
00:28:945 (5,1) - You could try adding an hyperdash between this notes, as (1) is a strong downbeat beginning a new verse. Also, you could add a finish hitsound on (1) suggested in previous diffs. Same reason for both of your suggestion.
00:30:385 (3,4,5) - I'd also add dashes here, as each new object is a strong singular vocal. Like I explained in the first point.
00:46:705 (1,2,3) - These notes could have a larger distance as they are pretty strong vocals. Yea while I was checking for those dash consistencies I found this, made a dash between (1) and (2).
00:48:985 (2,3) - Having this pattern like this makes the last 3 drum beats feel really underemphasized. I suggest a timeline like the following, with hyperdashes to (2) and (4): I'll keep this rhythm in my mind for now, only because the rhythm I'm using right now is to both emphasize on the drums and the vocals better - I'll change the rhythm up into this if more people suggest this.
00:50:905 (2,3) - ^Same ^Same
00:55:345 (5) - I think you could have a larger distance to this for a little bit more emphasis on the drums. Won't be making a dash but sure, increased a little bit.
01:01:945 (7,1) - You could have an hyperdash between these notes as (1) is a strong downbeat. Ah yes, I hear that bell, applied.
01:03:505 (4,5) - You could also add an hyperdash here, as it creates a nice buildup to 01:03:985 - . While it does create that 'build-up' you are mentioning, I wouldn't really do that unless the song explicitly shows that it is a build-up towards that next section - for example, for these set of notes, the song in the background doesn't explicitly show that this is a build-up section, so therefore I wouldn't make a build-up effect, as well as the hyper.
01:08:545 (3,4) - Same for this, the vocal at 01:08:665 (4) - is relatively strong. Alright
01:17:305 (8,1) - Same for this, (1) is a strong downbeat. Applied the hyper when checking for consistency after applying 01:01:945 (7,1) - .
01:18:985 (5) - Same as suggested previously. The same reason like I gave previously.
The map is in a good state, but I think a couple of mods could help polishing it a bit more before pushing it to qualified. Feel free to call me back then!

Thanks for the mod! Updated.

koliron

791 posts

Joined July 2014

koliron 2016-08-26T18:11:21+00:00

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recheck! im sorry for late too much ;W;

General

I dont know why but.. i cant see see the BG? i mean i see it in the beatmap page but when i download it there is nothing in my folder, try to remove it and add again? dont change the name or bg, so players who already have the map wont need to redl

Cup

🍎 00:18:865 (2,3,4,5) - about the distances, i think 5 deserves more for the cymbal, i'd move 3 a little to the left and 5 to the right(?
🍎 00:28:945 (5,1) - considering the nc i think 1 deserves a little more too
🍎 01:00:145 (1,2) - same as before, i'd move 2 a little to the right, it is possible to catch without move the catcher ))):
🍎 01:36:625 (3,4,5,6) - mmh i think you could add another diretion here, 5 notes in the same could be boring, for example with 01:37:585 (5) - ctrl+g and a little to the left, then 6 to the left etcetc

Salad

🍎 00:07:345 (3,1) - it doesnt looks like an obvious distance to me, 1 can be catched without dash but only with the edge, it could be confusing and hard for salad players, i'd move it to the left, then it would be easier to notice
🍎 00:11:185 (3,1) - ^, here is better if you move 00:10:945 (2,3) - to the left i guess, to not put 00:12:145 (1) - in the wall
🍎 00:28:465 (3,4) - same here, and specially here, it is easy to catch without dash, but for the distance that it has i guess you tried to add, consider to make 00:27:985 (2) - more horizontal (maybe 00:27:505 (1) - too if you want to keep that pattern), then 00:28:465 (3) - could be moved to the right and the player would need to dash 00:28:945 (4) - , it really deserves it! x3
🍎 00:52:945 (1,1) - the bananas ends around x170, and the next slider is in x176? ): aaay i expected a little more movement here jkfkldl consider to ctrl+h it
🍎 01:05:665 (4,1) - aaa maybe this dash is too hard for a salad(? and the sound is not that strong, so what about move 1 to x288 or x296 :3
🍎 01:40:705 (2,3) - for aesthetic, i'd make the same slider with ctrl+g x3 it would looks much better!

Platter

🍎 00:13:105 (3) - i have a great idea for a pattern here, the sound in 00:13:345 - is pretty strong for the cymal, so what about replace this with 2 circles, then something like this
🍎 00:44:065 (3,4,1) - maybe 4 a little to the left? to not be so hard
🍎 00:49:465 (4) - x224 would be nice for aesthetic, 00:48:625 (1,2,3,4) - both patern would have the same distance, like in 00:50:545 (1,2,3,4) - !~
i love this platter

Rain

🍎 00:12:145 (1,2,3) - its a little hard and uncomfortable imo, consider to 00:12:625 (3) - ctrl+g and x232 again
🍎 00:16:945 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - 2 times its fine and even aesthetic but 3 is too repetitive imo, try to find a different movement for the last one or a different pattern, for example replacing those 1/2 slider with 2 circles, then they could have more distance, etc, if you need objective example pm me on discord and i can give some
🍎 00:26:065 (2,3) - aaay i'd reduce a little the distance, it could be too hard D:
🍎 00:48:625 (1,2,3) - 00:50:545 (1,2,3) - mmmh the rhythm of these sounds weird imo, here is an example which i think follows much better the song (also there are nice patterns to make with it!):
[centre][/centre]
🍎 01:20:305 (4,5) - this can be walked, mmh in the middle of the kiai is not so expected imo, i'd add a dash here
🍎 01:22:225 (4,5) - ^
🍎 01:38:545 (1,2,3,4) - the movement of these is weird, is like a walk but looks like dash o.o i think this can be better if you make 01:39:025 (2,4) - horizontal and add dash to them
🍎 01:40:705 (2,3) - aaay same as before, this distance would be fine if is 1/2 but since it is 1/4 i think its better to reduce a little

Parad(o)se

🍎 00:06:385 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - isn't it a little pretitive? i think you could find another pattern for 00:07:345 (1,2,3,4,5) - to be a little less repetitive, or at least a ctrl+h? but if oyu want another pattern you could, for example, emphasize 00:07:825 (3) - this sound with something like this
🍎 00:10:225 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ same here, what about remove the curve in 00:11:665 (3,4,5) - to make a line of fruits? i think you didnt use a pattern like that :3 with 00:11:905 (5) - in x 320 for example
🍎 00:20:425 (4,5) - as you added a hyper to 00:20:305 (3) - , i think you could to 5 as well due that strong sound
🍎 00:29:905 (2,3) - ^
🍎 00:33:265 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - imo itss weird to jump in 00:33:265 (1,2) - 00:34:225 (4,5) - and then walk or even stop the catcher in 00:33:745 (2,3) - 00:34:705 (5,6) - , i think would be a better movement if you increase a little the distance in those 1/2
🍎 01:11:665 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe you used this pattern so many times, what about this pattern and then the same with ctrl+h?
🍎 01:25:465 (2) - sounds overmaped, i can hear nothing here even in 25%, so i think is better to keep a 1/2 hyper here (nope, the vocal is like 1/8~, so it doesnt count :c)
🍎 01:26:065 (4,5,6) - after a 1/4 hyper, i think would be better if the curve in (6) is to the left, instead of right, is mean you need to stop in a uncomfortable way there imo
🍎 01:27:985 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - a little reptetitive to me, also the jump 01:29:305 (2,3) - could be too hard D:, try to find a different pattern for 01:28:945 (1,2,3,4,5) - as i suggested before (01:29:425 (3,4,5) - ctrl+h and x92 could work! if you agree 2 a little to the left pls~)
🍎 01:30:865 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 01:38:545 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - aaaa same as before ;___; sorry for suggest the same but i think this is priority, you can try with differnt directions as well, is not necessary to be a line, 1/1 notes have a strong drums which can have a dash
🍎 aszdfchjkjhg nyan except some repetitive pattern, its a nice overdose!

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Sc4v4ng3r

1,232 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Sc4v4ng3r 2016-08-29T05:57:47+00:00

koliron wrote:
🍎 🍎 🍎 🍎 🍎 🍎 🍎 🍎 🍎 🍎 🍎

recheck! im sorry for late too much ;W;

General
I dont know why but.. i cant see see the BG? i mean i see it in the beatmap page but when i download it there is nothing in my folder, try to remove it and add again? dont change the name or bg, so players who already have the map wont need to redl Tried to do that, hopefully it's fixed now /o

Cup

🍎 00:18:865 (2,3,4,5) - about the distances, i think 5 deserves more for the cymbal, i'd move 3 a little to the left and 5 to the right(? Okeh moved accordingly
🍎 00:28:945 (5,1) - considering the nc i think 1 deserves a little more too Since I'm only having high distances on cymbals, I wouldn't put it here as there's none.
🍎 01:00:145 (1,2) - same as before, i'd move 2 a little to the right, it is possible to catch without move the catcher ))): Lol tru
🍎 01:36:625 (3,4,5,6) - mmh i think you could add another diretion here, 5 notes in the same could be boring, for example with 01:37:585 (5) - ctrl+g and a little to the left, then 6 to the left etcetc Should be better now I guess

Salad

🍎 00:07:345 (3,1) - it doesnt looks like an obvious distance to me, 1 can be catched without dash but only with the edge, it could be confusing and hard for salad players, i'd move it to the left, then it would be easier to notice Alrighty then
🍎 00:11:185 (3,1) - ^, here is better if you move 00:10:945 (2,3) - to the left i guess, to not put 00:12:145 (1) - in the wall Ahh should be fine now hopefully
🍎 00:28:465 (3,4) - same here, and specially here, it is easy to catch without dash, but for the distance that it has i guess you tried to add, consider to make 00:27:985 (2) - more horizontal (maybe 00:27:505 (1) - too if you want to keep that pattern), then 00:28:465 (3) - could be moved to the right and the player would need to dash 00:28:945 (4) - , it really deserves it! x3 Did like what you'd said, but distance didn't get increased by too much. 1/1 dashes tend to be a little bit hard for beginners so I don't want to make them too far away.
🍎 00:52:945 (1,1) - the bananas ends around x170, and the next slider is in x176? ): aaay i expected a little more movement here jkfkldl consider to ctrl+h it This is the lower difficulty after all, and I feel that the notes following the spinner should not be having too much movement, to give enough recovery and such. But I will change it if more people brings up this.
🍎 01:05:665 (4,1) - aaa maybe this dash is too hard for a salad(? and the sound is not that strong, so what about move 1 to x288 or x296 :3 Okie dokie, placed at x296.
🍎 01:40:705 (2,3) - for aesthetic, i'd make the same slider with ctrl+g x3 it would looks much better! a e s t h e t i c
I mean, fixed.

Platter

🍎 00:13:105 (3) - i have a great idea for a pattern here, the sound in 00:13:345 - is pretty strong for the cymal, so what about replace this with 2 circles, then something like this Ayy cool idea, applied but not exactly with the distances(so that it wouldn't be ambiguous).
🍎 00:44:065 (3,4,1) - maybe 4 a little to the left? to not be so hard Ye alright
🍎 00:49:465 (4) - x224 would be nice for aesthetic, 00:48:625 (1,2,3,4) - both patern would have the same distance, like in 00:50:545 (1,2,3,4) - !~ Cool, applied.
i love this platter Thanks <3

Rain

🍎 00:12:145 (1,2,3) - its a little hard and uncomfortable imo, consider to 00:12:625 (3) - ctrl+g and x232 again Applied
🍎 00:16:945 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - 2 times its fine and even aesthetic but 3 is too repetitive imo, try to find a different movement for the last one or a different pattern, for example replacing those 1/2 slider with 2 circles, then they could have more distance, etc, if you need objective example pm me on discord and i can give some Tried to make a new movement on my own, hopefully it isn't too extreme ;-;
🍎 00:26:065 (2,3) - aaay i'd reduce a little the distance, it could be too hard D: Okay reduced
🍎 00:48:625 (1,2,3) - 00:50:545 (1,2,3) - mmmh the rhythm of these sounds weird imo, here is an example which i think follows much better the song (also there are nice patterns to make with it!): The thing is, your rhythm also emphaizes on those 'blank' notes in the song, which doesn't really sound too nice imo. Instead I followed zirox's suggestion up there since everyone's asking me to change this up ;-;
[centre][/centre]
🍎 01:20:305 (4,5) - this can be walked, mmh in the middle of the kiai is not so expected imo, i'd add a dash here
🍎 01:22:225 (4,5) - ^ Applied for both.
🍎 01:38:545 (1,2,3,4) - the movement of these is weird, is like a walk but looks like dash o.o i think this can be better if you make 01:39:025 (2,4) - horizontal and add dash to them Ehh? I mean it's really clear that this is a walk after all ;-; If the distance between (1,2), and (3,4) is bothering you, I decreased the distance between them.
🍎 01:40:705 (2,3) - aaay same as before, this distance would be fine if is 1/2 but since it is 1/4 i think its better to reduce a little Okie

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Thanks for the mod!

Kagari

751 posts

Joined October 2013

Kagari 2016-08-29T07:02:29+00:00

friendly reminder that paradise isnt an overdose tyvm \o/

i'll check the mod later since i'm pretty much beaten up because of last weekend's local ACG event

SYAHME

1,072 posts

Joined January 2014

SYAHME 2016-08-29T10:52:22+00:00

Nyan, neko coming thru

Kagari

751 posts

Joined October 2013

Kagari 2016-09-03T10:29:52+00:00

lambat aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa (╯°□°）╯︵ ┻━┻

koliron wrote:
🍎 🍎 🍎 🍎 🍎 🍎 🍎 🍎 🍎 🍎 🍎

recheck! im sorry for late too much ;W;
Parad(o)se

🍎 00:29:905 (2,3) - ^ - nah i would like to keep this non-hyper
🍎 01:25:465 (2) - sounds overmaped, i can hear nothing here even in 25%, so i think is better to keep a 1/2 hyper here (nope, the vocal is like 1/8~, so it doesnt count :c) - no i still think it's appropiate for this part... no change
🍎 01:26:065 (4,5,6) - after a 1/4 hyper, i think would be better if the curve in (6) is to the left, instead of right, is mean you need to stop in a uncomfortable way there imo - remapped a bit there
🍎 aszdfchjkjhg nyan except some repetitive pattern, its a nice overdose! - RAIN!!!!!

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rest are fixed accordingly... about the repetitive patterns i do tweak a bit some of the mentioned part to make it less repetitive :>
thanks for the mod koli~!

Paradise (RAIN!!!)

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120,208,44425,2,0,P|88:160|120:112,1,120,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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80,152,63145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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328,136,64825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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240,240,66745,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,128,66865,2,0,P|424:184|376:224,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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400,80,67585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,208,70585,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Sc4v4ng3r

1,232 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Sc4v4ng3r 2016-09-03T12:43:00+00:00

Updated ahhh
you were always slow kappa

koliron

791 posts

Joined July 2014

koliron 2016-09-04T23:17:00+00:00

bubbled!

yuii- dokidoki kokoro flavor

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2016-09-13T12:35:25+00:00

Recheck by request.

Cup

No issues.

Salad

00:11:185 (3,1) - Spacing is on the border of being catchable without dash, suggest moving (1) left slightly
00:15:025 (3,1) - Again, spacing can lead players into not dashing. Could curve 00:14:065 (1) - more and move 00:14:785 (2,3) - left slightly to fix
00:43:345 (2,3,4) - Feels a little cramped for movement, I'd space these out a little more for better flow
01:09:745 (1,2) - Slightly underwhelming spacing considering the cymbal sound here, I'd increase this a little, e.g. x-416
01:25:105 (1,2,3,4) - Higher spacing to (3,4) would be better than (2) here for the addition of the vocal, could move them to x-380 or so
01:27:985 (3,1) - More spacing here to highlight the dash please
01:41:425 (4,5,1) - I would make (4,5) walkable and then include a dash to (1) for the climax, (4,5) is kinda borderline atm and (1) is underwhelming

Platter

00:51:985 (5,1) - Any chance you could flip this so that the hyper ends on the left side? The following spinner is very dense on that side so you could make better use of it with a better flow into that side. In contrast, the right side is sparsely filled, and players may exit the dash to (1) too early in order to catch more of the bananas, resulting in a possible miss
00:59:665 (2,1) - This doesn't seem strong enough for a hyper to me, the vocals are softer and pitch is lower, so this feels forced and detracts empasis from the strong vocals that do deserve a hdash. Applies also to 01:01:825 (4,1) - 01:15:025 (2,1) - 01:17:185 (4,1) - 01:22:705 (2,1) -
01:03:505 (3,1) - This is a strong vocal and instrumental sound but it doesn't even require dash, compare to 01:11:185 (3,1) - which is the same sound but has a hyper and to 01:05:665 (4,1) - which has a hyper but is much weaker. These should be made consistent. If you made the changes above, you could add a hyper back in at 01:18:865 (3,1) - also since it's the same sound
01:10:945 (2,3) - Would avoid the antiflow after hyper here, even if it's minor and can be caught by stacking, players at this level will still instinctively follow the path and could easily miss
01:21:025 (4,1) - Hyper here for the strong vocal, consistency with 01:05:665 (4,1) -
01:41:905 (8,1) - As in the Salad, I would prefer hyper on the last note for emphasis than the penultimate one

Rain

00:36:625 (5,1) - Was expecting a hyper here based on your current patterns and considering you hypered to weaker vocal sound such as 00:33:025 (5,1) - this non-hyper caught me out a little
00:43:345 (2,3,4,5) - Considering the cymbal sounds on (3,5) the spacing is really underwhelming here and presents large flowbreak opportunity. Flipping (2) to the right and making a back-to-back dash would play much better imo. example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6083918
01:26:425 (6,1) - Combining strong hyper with low BPM/SV is highly likely to result in droplet misses from overshooting here. Since you can't make this hyper any weaker, try increasing the SV on (1) slightly to make it longer and the movement more flowing
01:33:745 (4,5) - Hyper to (5) doesn't make much sense when the strong sound is on (5)'s repeat. Two 1/2 sliders with a hyper between them would work better here

Kagari's (Not an) Overdose

00:48:745 (2,3,4,5) - 00:50:665 (2,3,4,5) - Strong antiflow dashes after hypers are too difficult for a Rain, I strongly recommend reducing these to improve flow and playability
01:16:225 (2,3) - Reduce this please, 1/4 tap dash into antiflow with direction change is very uncomfortable to play
01:34:225 (3,4,5) - ^ Compounded by stronger dash and stronger hyper in a less intense part of the song, this is very unexpected

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Kagari

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Kagari 2016-09-13T14:20:31+00:00

fixed~!

paradise

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Sc4v4ng3r

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Sc4v4ng3r 2016-09-15T10:22:15+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Recheck by request.

Cup
No issues.

Salad
00:11:185 (3,1) - Spacing is on the border of being catchable without dash, suggest moving (1) left slightly If you were to move that to the left you would lower the distance, making it more ambiguous lol Pretty sure you meant to increase the distance anyway, so I move (1) slightly to the right.
00:15:025 (3,1) - Again, spacing can lead players into not dashing. Could curve 00:14:065 (1) - more and move 00:14:785 (2,3) - left slightly to fix Lol this too lmao I might be misunderstanding you though, so just correct me out if I am.
00:43:345 (2,3,4) - Feels a little cramped for movement, I'd space these out a little more for better flow So many modders have pointed this out already so I'll have to apply it.
01:09:745 (1,2) - Slightly underwhelming spacing considering the cymbal sound here, I'd increase this a little, e.g. x-416 Fair enough, applied.
01:25:105 (1,2,3,4) - Higher spacing to (3,4) would be better than (2) here for the addition of the vocal, could move them to x-380 or so Applied, and also made a dash towards 01:27:025 (1) - to signify the verse change and the cymbals.
01:27:985 (3,1) - More spacing here to highlight the dash please @Dash
01:41:425 (4,5,1) - I would make (4,5) walkable and then include a dash to (1) for the climax, (4,5) is kinda borderline atm and (1) is underwhelming Good idea

Platter
00:51:985 (5,1) - Any chance you could flip this so that the hyper ends on the left side? The following spinner is very dense on that side so you could make better use of it with a better flow into that side. In contrast, the right side is sparsely filled, and players may exit the dash to (1) too early in order to catch more of the bananas, resulting in a possible miss Moved (5) to the right side and moved (1) to the left, hopefully the pattern's better now
00:59:665 (2,1) - This doesn't seem strong enough for a hyper to me, the vocals are softer and pitch is lower, so this feels forced and detracts empasis from the strong vocals that do deserve a hdash. Applies also to 01:01:825 (4,1) - 01:15:025 (2,1) - 01:17:185 (4,1) - 01:22:705 (2,1) - Made normal dashes for 01:01:825 (4,1) - and 01:17:185 (4,1) - . But I'm not going to have the rest as normal dashes, as their purpose is to highlight the contrast between the strong vocal section and the weak one(basically trying to highlight the transition here), whereas the remaining that I applied are from weak vocal to weak vocal transition. Exception is the last one you'd mentioned, and I'm not changing that as I'm trying to follow the prominent bells(that are apparently only really prominent in this section of the kiai) for the hypers.(of course not all, that will result in too many hypers; so I'm only following the ones that are landing on the big white tick) To reflect that though I did make a hyper on 01:21:265 (1) - for consistency.
01:03:505 (3,1) - This is a strong vocal and instrumental sound but it doesn't even require dash, compare to 01:11:185 (3,1) - which is the same sound but has a hyper and to 01:05:665 (4,1) - which has a hyper but is much weaker. These should be made consistent. If you made the changes above, you could add a hyper back in at 01:18:865 (3,1) - also since it's the same sound The thing is, if I tried to make them consistent, I would have an oddly snapped hyper for both of the notes you are mentioning(3/4), which is definitely hard at the introductory level of hypers. I instead made them dashes, to at least compensate for the strength it has, hopefully it is fine that way.
01:10:945 (2,3) - Would avoid the antiflow after hyper here, even if it's minor and can be caught by stacking, players at this level will still instinctively follow the path and could easily miss Can't do much here so I made it vertical, hopefully it is fine for you.
01:21:025 (4,1) - Hyper here for the strong vocal, consistency with 01:05:665 (4,1) - Yeap fixed that above
01:41:905 (8,1) - As in the Salad, I would prefer hyper on the last note for emphasis than the penultimate one Alrighty

Rain
00:36:625 (5,1) - Was expecting a hyper here based on your current patterns and considering you hypered to weaker vocal sound such as 00:33:025 (5,1) - this non-hyper caught me out a little Well alright, fair enough, applied. To have consistency also added a hyper on 00:21:745 (1) - .
00:43:345 (2,3,4,5) - Considering the cymbal sounds on (3,5) the spacing is really underwhelming here and presents large flowbreak opportunity. Flipping (2) to the right and making a back-to-back dash would play much better imo. example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6083918 Feels a lot better, applied.
01:26:425 (6,1) - Combining strong hyper with low BPM/SV is highly likely to result in droplet misses from overshooting here. Since you can't make this hyper any weaker, try increasing the SV on (1) slightly to make it longer and the movement more flowing Not exactly sure if I made them more 'flowing' or not, but increased the SV anyway, it should feel more comfortable.
01:33:745 (4,5) - Hyper to (5) doesn't make much sense when the strong sound is on (5)'s repeat. Two 1/2 sliders with a hyper between them would work better here Fair enough, I even did that for Platter so why not

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My gosh I kudos-ed you by accident again lols
Thanks for the check! Updated.

JBHyperion

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JBHyperion 2016-09-15T22:20:25+00:00

Welp, looks like there's an unnecessary soft-sliderslide.wav in the song folder (sliderslide sounds don't play in osu!catch so muting them isn't required lol)

Once you've fixed this I'll qualify.

Sc4v4ng3r

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Sc4v4ng3r 2016-09-16T05:10:06+00:00

Alrighty the file's removed from the folder, should be good to go.

JBHyperion

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JBHyperion 2016-09-16T09:16:22+00:00

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