Few things that caught my eyes and ears.
01:08:774 (2) - What beat did you map this to? I cannot hear anything but silence with the drums
00:42:251 (1,2,1) - If mapped to voice (ok) if mapped to drums its stream speed here.
01:30:524 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Is this really necessary? I think the spacing should be reduced, not by much but it needs reducing in my opinion.
01:50:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You are missing alot of beats here, it feels like you ignored them completely which is weird considering what the rest of the map is mapped to.(drums)
02:07:615 - Remove kiai, this is a verse not a chorus, hence not a highlight in the song, kiai feels really out of place here
02:16:342 - Keep Kiai, this is where the song pushes power.
02:25:070 - Remove kiai, this is a build up section.
02:45:797 - Add Kiai, (choir singing and triumphant rythms/chords implies this.)
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03:06:524 (1,2) - Reverse hits are out of beat completely with the toms. (They are in 1/6)
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03:34:887 (4) - Just make this a normal circle, no need for a reverse.
03:50:909 (1) - Cool to highlight the "halt" the singer creates here with his voice(which you did) but feels overmapped, (still cool)
04:13:614 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Reduce spacing abit or change the pattern this is excessive
04:17:432 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Creative considering how the guitar ascends and descends but this ( 04:18:522 (1,2,3,4) - ) gets hard to read, maybe reverse slider those 4 instead?
05:11:500 (6) - This ghost circle you added before appears again, I understand that it feels right to play, but there really is no beat that this is placed on
05:28:000 (5,6,7) - Really awkward pattern, all I can say about this, creative but weird
06:43:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ?? Why
07:03:250 - End kiai
07:52:271 - Kiai here to mark that this is where the finale is
Good luck
Cheers! // -vea-
01:08:774 (2) - What beat did you map this to? I cannot hear anything but silence with the drums
00:42:251 (1,2,1) - If mapped to voice (ok) if mapped to drums its stream speed here.
01:30:524 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Is this really necessary? I think the spacing should be reduced, not by much but it needs reducing in my opinion.
01:50:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You are missing alot of beats here, it feels like you ignored them completely which is weird considering what the rest of the map is mapped to.(drums)
02:07:615 - Remove kiai, this is a verse not a chorus, hence not a highlight in the song, kiai feels really out of place here
02:16:342 - Keep Kiai, this is where the song pushes power.
02:25:070 - Remove kiai, this is a build up section.
02:45:797 - Add Kiai, (choir singing and triumphant rythms/chords implies this.)
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03:06:524 (1,2) - Reverse hits are out of beat completely with the toms. (They are in 1/6)
==========================================================================
03:34:887 (4) - Just make this a normal circle, no need for a reverse.
03:50:909 (1) - Cool to highlight the "halt" the singer creates here with his voice(which you did) but feels overmapped, (still cool)
04:13:614 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Reduce spacing abit or change the pattern this is excessive
04:17:432 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Creative considering how the guitar ascends and descends but this ( 04:18:522 (1,2,3,4) - ) gets hard to read, maybe reverse slider those 4 instead?
05:11:500 (6) - This ghost circle you added before appears again, I understand that it feels right to play, but there really is no beat that this is placed on
05:28:000 (5,6,7) - Really awkward pattern, all I can say about this, creative but weird
06:43:068 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ?? Why
07:03:250 - End kiai
07:52:271 - Kiai here to mark that this is where the finale is
Good luck
Cheers! // -vea-