[Standard]
- 01:13:636 (3) - Ctrl+g, you don't need jump in standard diff
- 01:21:545 - At least add a note or a 1/4 slider like you have used, this is the only beat skipped in this section
- 01:28:364 (1,3) - Switch NC
- 02:08:727 (1) - Try not to make the slider pointing up, to avoid players from misreading
- 02:20:454 - Yea again...
- 02:52:364 (3) - NC
- 02:53:454 (1) - You can map out more instead of placing a 2/1 reverse slider, place something clickable at 02:54:545 to emphasize the downbeat, and then NC it
- 03:11:454 - Missing clap (Addition: Normal)
- 03:12:000 (6) - Missing NC
- 04:00:000 (1,2) - The angel built up here is really sharp, try something like this:
- The rhythm of section start from 00:56:727 till 01:03:136 is too intense, reduce the rhythm by leaving some 1/4 gap
- 01:05:454 to 01:09:682 as well
- 01:03:273 (1) - I don't think you need a jump to emphasize that...
- 01:05:454 (1,2,3,4) - ^
- 01:21:273 (2,3) - ^
- 02:04:909 (2,3,4) - ^, they have nothing different with 02:04:909 (2,3)
- 02:07:091 (2) - 02:08:454 (7) - 02:17:182 (6) - Try to space them out so that the spacing will be more consistent
- 02:19:636 (7,1) - 02:21:818 (5,1) - Switch NC
- 02:58:091 (6) - I guess it is not stacked correctly?..
- 02:58:909 - Try to add more 1/4 (or 1/2 when bpm is doubled) rhythm for the kiai part lol, also why don't you use spacing like 02:06:545 for a better emphasize
- 03:32:727 (4,5) - This jump is just too much...
- 00:50:182 (4) - NC i guess?
- 00:54:545 - 02:57:818 - wow the sv change is very huge, may be you can increase the sv for a bit here?
- 01:06:545 (1) - You don't need a NC here, as you NC in every downbeat
- 01:10:227 (2,3,4,5) - The flow is really weird here.. may be you can place 01:10:909 (5) - higher
- 03:34:364 - No way only the edges of objects are overlapping, increase the ds for ~0.1x
- 03:45:273 (1) - Delete NC
- 01:29:454 - The downbeat is really strong which I don't suggest you to skip it
- 01:36:545 (4) - NC
- 01:38:591 (4,1) - Switch NC
- 01:57:273 (1) - You don't need this NC
- 02:04:636 (4) - NC
- 02:10:909 - 02:19:636 - 02:21:818 - Same as 01:29:454
- 02:24:000 (1) - May be try to place it more to the right for a better flow of jump
- 01:22:500 (9,10) - Place this two closer, the jump between 01:22:636 (10,1) should be emphasized more instead
- ok testplay
- 00:57:136 (3,1,2,3) - Tbh this broke the flow of the jump, and it makes player really difficult to hit the next one 00:57:818 (1,2,3,4), especially the 3
- 03:02:727 (1,2,1,2) - Please at least decrease the ds between 03:03:000 (1,2) - as it has a lower pitch
- 03:10:364 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - The music is just the same as previous part, I don't think you need a larger jump here, This part is different from the old version if I remembered correctly, I would say it is too much.