Ayyri wrote:

Mod:

Hello~

NM. (Some things I noticed when I was working on my GD.)

Keep in mind, these are my suggestions, don't change something I mentioned unless it seems good to you!

If I didn't make a box for something, that doesn't mean I didn't look at it. It just means I didn't find anything wrong with it.

Final Boss

01:02:314 (3) - Move this to stack on top of 01:02:483 (4) - and add a circle at 01:02:398 - Because it sounds rather off when the background is rising, and it's just a jump. I won't a triplet there
01:05:178 - This pause it rather awkward. You'd expect something to be here. If you're going to have this pause, consider moving 01:05:348 (2) - further away from 01:04:674 (1) - Not exactly what you said, but fixed
01:07:791 - Add a circle. The music is rising, and this jump feels empty for what the song is giving you. (I suggest moving 01:07:876 (3) - and 01:07:791 - onto the tail of 01:07:539 (2) - ) Fixed
01:13:016 (8) - Remove clap. Sounds crowded with it. my bad xD, (also, that clap is on circle 9 now, following the drums)
01:13:605 (2) - Remove clap on the tail of this slider. Same reason as above. Fixed
01:15:292 (3) - NC. SV change. added NC, but , sv change is there xD

Vert wrote:

nm from queue

a little sorry I forgot your first post because the song is too long
[std]
01:01:808 (1,3,4,5) - i really dont like these overlaps i do :v)
01:03:662 - I can hear something , compared with the rhythm you did in other parts i think it shouldnt be ignored i just followed the high sound (idk what instrument iis it xD)
01:04:673 (1) - blanket with a long slider is not a wisdom choice done
01:41:415 (4) - ugly meh
01:47:483 (8) - overlap i think it fits with the jump, a space there will be bad XD
02:01:640 (6,8) - why only these two is so close and even overlaped?
02:09:224 (2,6,10) - put them in same distance will make the map more clear fixed
02:11:921 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the stream can make a blanket with 02:11:415 (6) -
02:12:342 (6,1) - spacing is too large it seems good to me lol
02:13:101 (5) - rhythm here should be a 1/4 slider + a 1/2 slider maybe fixed XD
02:21:696 (6,8,1) - fixed 02:22:202 (9,2) - ovelap
02:30:292 (9,4) - ^
02:47:988 (1,2,3,4) - please dont stack perfectly with sliders :((((((((((((((

just ended here because im so lazy to point out all the similar problems in the map(it's really too long ;w;) np :p Thanks
good luck

ImBuGs wrote:

hi, mod:

mod

remap plz xd kds plz

Doxa wrote:

mod a voluntad cus soy re piolita

02:18:326 (13) - no me gusta para nada este sliderback, te recomendaría hacer algo como esto http://i.imgur.com/IfmQZ9O.png No se, sigo prefiriendo el mio, capaz lo acorte un poco al slider pero hasta ahi

03:01:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - es muy de forro poner estos sliders en un ritmo constante, es pura opinión este punto, pero te recomendaría que lo hagas un stream normal Jaja la verdad si, listo

03:51:022 (1,2) - yo se que se te puede ocurrir algo mejor acá, quedán medio mal esos slider larguisimos ahí, me gustaría ver una sección de triple - jump - triple - jump ahí, se que cualquier cosa puede quedar mejor Hasta el momento no se me ocurria nada, estaba esperando esto gracias dioxa

05:07:875 (6) - podrías remover este slider y reemplazarlo por 3 jumps, no quedaría mal imo Prefiero mantener el slider, son todos streams/triples los que estan, solo queria cambiar un poco, a parte si meto un jump seria raro en medio de tantos streams/triples

05:15:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://i.imgur.com/JHpQ2Ti.png No se si es igual al que pasaste, pero algo asi es (saque los reverse)

en general el map tiene unos cortes de ritmo por los sliders que vendría bien reemplazarlos por jumps, en si tenés buenas ideas, así que como player te aporto unas ideas aunque yo tampoco sepa mucho de mapping, mucha suerte Gracias dioxa

gaston_2199 wrote:

Hi!

STD mod!
Diff: Final Boss

01:06:358 (1) - Sonaría mejor si lo conviertes en triple Es verdad jaja ty

01:06:781 (4) - 01:06:780 Sacar hitcircle para que suene mejor con el triple anterior mencionado Suenan igual de bien, pero ahi simplemente VA un triple

01:26:920 (7,8,9) - Podrías alargar el slider y reemplazar 01:27:426 (1) por 01:27:257 (9)

02:06:865 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Sinceramente, el stream ahí es innecesario a mi parecer 02:08:045 (1,2,3,4) - para implementar esto (?

gaston_2199 wrote:

Taiko mod!
Diff: Ayyri's Taiko End

00:54:560 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - 01:05:347 (104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111) - kdkdk d k

00:59:953 (60,61,62,63,64) - 01:10:740 (147,148,149,150,151) - kdkdk

02:34:504 (824,825,826,827) - Suena mejor con d kkd

02:55:572 (989,990,991,992,993) - 03:17:145 (1171,1172,1173,1174,1175) - kkddd

05:15:459 (2105,2106,2107,2108,2109) - 05:37:032 (2287,2288,2289,2290,2291) - 05:58:606 (2469,2470,2471,2472,2473) - Para que no sea sólo D, es mejor kkkdd

06:50:852 (2917,2918,2919,2920,2921) - 06:56:246 (2961,2962,2963,2964) - 07:01:639 (3004,3005,3006,3007,3008) - Lo mismo que al principio sólo cambiando a kdkdk

Yahuri wrote:

from queue~

General
-mapping technique looks pretty underdeveloped, notes look kinda thrown all over the place. Try making more geometrical shapes and more recognizable patterns, and create unity within the map by utilizing the spacing between both consecutive objects (DS) and other objects. Maybe thats part of my style
-want to add a custom whistle hitsound? the normal whistle hitsound doesnt match the music. I don't know too much about hitsounding ;w; but im gonna try

Final Boss
00:56:078 (8,3,4) - bad overlap waaa true, fixed
01:02:314 (3,4,5) - ^ i would keep this
01:04:000 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - DS changes for what sounds like no reason, why? maybe... fixed
02:10:067 (9,1) - bad overlap, 1 appears to the left of 9 but the slider motion goes right ok. it may be fixed
02:13:268 (5,1) - flow of 5 into 1 not that great, angle the tail up more Before: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5381557 - After: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5381569. Better? (Tell me ingame if you think its wrong and tell me what to do XD)
02:38:297 (4,1) - bad overlap Fixed
02:39:561 (1) - any way for you to make this slider more symmetrical? eh well i tried im so bad at sliderart
04:26:078 (1) - i feel like you could do something more 'fun' with this slider since it matches up with the guitar pitch going up and down i tried xD
04:36:275 (8,9,10,1,3) - bad overlap done
04:47:314 (5,1) - ^
04:57:257 (6,8) - ^
05:01:470 (3,1) - blanket? wo, done
05:13:521 (4,5,6,7,2) - overlap fixd
05:17:987 (5,6,7,2,3,4) - ^
05:43:774 (1,3) - ^
05:45:290 (1,3) - ^
05:46:302 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ^ just go over the diff and remove all the overlaps that you dont need
06:16:302 (1,2,3) - why 1 fast but not 3? True XD (maybe thats bcuz funorange sliderbreak'ed the fc lol)

Good luck! I was waiting for a overlap/flow mod for a long time, thanks

Mihaugoku wrote:

So you wanted me to recheck the map.
Here's what i think:

[Ayyri's Taiko End]
• It would be nice, if the map followed the drums for the most part, like in 01:58:437 because patterns later in the song look like put randomly. I think about putting k on half-beats (red lines). Imo would fit the song better.
06:16:302 (2619,2620,2621,2622,2623,2624,2625,2626,2627,2628,2629,2630,2631,2632,2633,2634,2635,2636,2637,2638,2639,2640,2641,2642) - WOAH, how did this get here? DELETE IT! place D or K

Really short, and waaaaaaaaay shorter than the 1st part, but seriously.. It's only about inconsistency. And that one part.

I hope this mod helps!
Have a good day!

Plaudible wrote:

NM from my noob queue~ p/5231294#p5231294 sup (^_^)/ Looks well modded but I'll give whatever advice I can~
_________

Final Boss
00:57:764 (1) - Turn distance snap to 0.6x then adjust this slider a bit to the left for better flow. It's a bit far right It should be better now
01:12:004 (1) - Remove NC ups xD
01:12:089 (2) - Add NC Done
01:12:594 (1) - Remove NC no, thats a triple lol (and there starts a sound)
01:12:763 (3) - Add NC ^
Honestly this whole stream feels a bit lumpy. Play around with the shape here.
01:24:560 (8) - Break this up so you can start a NC on the big white tick There is following a long sound (01:24:560 (8,9) - too)
01:27:257 (9) - ^
01:32:820 (2,4,6) - I'd bring these closer together, makes the pattern more fun + easier to play I think the distance between that circles is the fun part xD
02:08:719 (1) - Remove NC no lol
02:09:224 (2) - Add NC ok (yes, 1-1 combo)
02:17:988 (9) - Add NC I think NC is here 02:17:820 (7) - .. also (i used blue because i realized it thanks to you xD)
02:19:336 (1) - Remove NC There starts a high volume drums, i think NC is needed
02:19:504 (9) - Add NC no bcuz that^
Feels a bit lumpy as well, try playing with shape. Don't be afraid to make sharp turns on downbeats! It doesn't all need to flow. ok
02:25:067 (5) - Pull this in a bit, it's making a jagged edge on the stream. done
02:27:427 (10) - NC Done
02:44:280 (9) - NC 02:44:111 (1) - I think NC iis here (same than the other blue lol)
02:45:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Stacking then going off into a stream in a one direction stream feels odd, please either make it all straight or curve with stack, like you did at 06:35:347 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) Good idea! Done
02:49:926 (2,3,4,5,6) - Angle this stream better so it's like the one before it. D-done?
03:01:218 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Nice job here, pretty stream. Thanks, now i realized that NC seems weird (at 03:01:471 (5) - )
03:02:482 (1) - NC ups xD done
03:03:493 (1,2) - Blanket I tried XD
03:22:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Ending of this stream is a bit awkward, either straighten 9 or remake curve True lol, fixed
04:03:156 (1) to 03:47:988 (1) - Fix your NCs. Start it every 8 notes in a stream, it should land on the white ticks. Some of these you already have as 16s, just split in half I split'ed these 04:03:156 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - like u see (it fit pretty well with the music)
04:27:426 (1) - I'd pull this slider out to your inherited point coming up. Fixed (idk why it finished there lol)
04:40:067 (1,2,3) - Not stacked properly, make them all equal distances Done
04:54:560 (5) - Consider a change here, completely optional. Putting it under 3 makes it hard to read. Before the remap, it had a lot of these then it make it unreadable at all if i repeat it a lot, i just keep'ed these
05:28:942 (9) - ^
05:52:875 (3) - ^
06:30:965 (3) - ^
05:42:594 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Lumpy, consider changes wtf have i done LOL (Fixed)
05:47:313 (1) - Better align this with stream from before so it makes the arc prettier. done?
06:07:538 (7,8,9,10) - Stack over 06:06:611 (2,3,4), it'll make it look more appealing ^_^ meh im going to keep it
06:08:380 (3,4) - Lower these two to flow onto the next slider more seamlessly done
06:09:223 (3) - I'd align this with 1 and 2 ok
06:10:908 (1) - Lower this ok
06:12:594 (5,6,1) - This curve in the stream feels forced, consider adjustment. done
06:14:869 (8) - Raise done
06:20:010 (1) - NC I don't think a NC is needed there, i just going to up the volume with green lines lol

brdzxh wrote:

from my queue~

Final Boss

Going to be a quickie, but I hope its alright.

00:56:752 (3,4) - looks kinda awkward in editor but it seems good on gameplay xD
01:07:032 (1) - remove a grey anchor point in the first part so its like this Done
01:12:594 (1) - remove NC there starts a new sound (hear carefully on 25/50% playback rate lol)
01:12:763 (3) - NC nope
01:52:707 (1) - remove NC same than before
01:55:236 (1,1) - increase spacing between these two, so one can separate the single and stream while playing not for now, i did it on purpose ; also 01:55:236 (1) - remove nc done
01:55:994 (2,3) - move a bit to the left, so they are not hidden under the slider? done
02:06:358 (1) - remove nc why?
02:06:865 (3) - NC This is the continuing sound of the circle 1 lol
02:07:707 (1) - remove NC there starts a sound
02:36:696 (5) - the stream should at here imo I followed the guitar ? on the BG
02:39:560 (1) - fix the anchor points wa.. fixed XD
03:01:386 (4,5,1) - a bit inconsistent spacing here yeah, my bad xD fixed
03:03:493 (1) - this feels kinda awkward, because of how the stream is ending S:
03:28:775 (1,2,3) - should be singles imo, but feel free to ignore idk, it seems good to me..also i used the same here 03:42:257 (1,2,3,4) -
03:32:650 (2) - remove an anchor point, add a red one if needed fixed
03:35:263 (6,7) - 1x spacing between these; rest of stream is 0,9x~ wa im pretty sure i used 0.9x on all of the stream (also if you're talking about do a 1x spacing there, the answer is no :v) )

You might need to recheck the streams for inconsistent spacing kk

I think thats it for my mod! Cool map, gl with rank Thanks

1. 01:54:561 (2,3) - Ctrl + G para enfatizar la guitarra mejor así como lo venías haciendo antes.
2. 01:55:236 (5,1) - Esta transición es confusa porque el Approach Rate va demasiado rápido, por lo tanto, los jugadores tenderán a agarrar el ritmo equivocado ya que hay una pausa aquí 01:55:319 - . ¿Qué tal si ubicamos este patrón 01:55:404 (1,2,3,4) - más lejitos para evitar este overlap?
3. 01:57:005 (11) - Overmapped. x.x Considera elminar las notas de las siguientes partes también.
   
   Ábreme

   1. 02:10:319 (10) -
   2. 02:11:668 (8) -
4. 02:08:045 (1) - Quita el NC de aquí para guardar consistencia en la manera como enfatizas los instrumentos aquí.
5. 02:14:280 (5) - Remueve una repetición y coloca una nota aquí 02:14:617 - para permitir a los jugadores identificar los strong beats aquí. Juega un poco raro tenerlo como el final de ese slider.
6. 02:21:358 (5) - Dejar este slider sin hitsounds se siente un poco vacío, sabiendo que aquí los instrumentos tienen un enfoque fuerte en la canción. ¿Qué tal si le agregas un finish y con sample-set soft para subrayas mejor la batería?
7. 02:33:494 (7) - New Comboo aquí. >w</
8. 03:27:594 (5,6) - Esta dobleta encajaría mejor si la poner aquí 03:27:510 -
9. 03:36:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Siento que esta sección la podrías hacer mejor como la hiciste aquí 03:42:257 (1,2,3,4) - para darle más variedad al patrón y evaidr los mini-jumps innecesarios. Considera hacer lo mismo en el otro patrón que es similar.
10. 06:20:010 (6) - NC (el patrón de jumo que hiciste aquí es perfecto y fluye génial! Buen trabajo!)

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Ohayo! Desde mi queue. Continuando lo que estaba modeando por Mensaje Privado >w< crei que no me ibas a aceptar , se te agradece mucho

02:40:909 - Agrega una línea roja aquí con el mismo BPM para mejorar la experiencia del timing ya que el metrónomo se resetea e esta parte.
05:00:796 - Haz lo mismo aquí. Listo ambas

1. 01:54:561 (2,3) - Ctrl + G para enfatizar la guitarra mejor así como lo venías haciendo antes. okkk
2. 01:55:236 (5,1) - Esta transición es confusa porque el Approach Rate va demasiado rápido, por lo tanto, los jugadores tenderán a agarrar el ritmo equivocado ya que hay una pausa aquí 01:55:319 - . ¿Qué tal si ubicamos este patrón 01:55:404 (1,2,3,4) - más lejitos para evitar este overlap? Listo :p
3. 01:57:005 (11) - Overmapped. x.x Considera elminar las notas de las siguientes partes también. Esta bien
   
   Ábreme

   1. 02:10:319 (10) - Yo logro escuchar un sonido xd, a parte de que prefiero mantenerlo asi para mantener la consistencia de Tap + Triple
   2. 02:11:668 (8) - lo mismo
4. 02:08:045 (1) - Quita el NC de aquí para guardar consistencia en la manera como enfatizas los instrumentos aquí. Ok
5. 02:14:280 (5) - Remueve una repetición y coloca una nota aquí 02:14:617 - para permitir a los jugadores identificar los strong beats aquí. Juega un poco raro tenerlo como el final de ese slider. Ok, igual creo que lo puse un poco lejos (intente hacer un overlap con el stream que le seguia)
6. 02:21:358 (5) - Dejar este slider sin hitsounds se siente un poco vacío, sabiendo que aquí los instrumentos tienen un enfoque fuerte en la canción. ¿Qué tal si le agregas un finish y con sample-set soft para subrayas mejor la batería? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5399449 sin hitsounds? o.o (esto estaba, lo que pudo haber pasado es que cuando estaba haciendo los hitsounds hoy a la tarde no subi el map hitsoundeado, pero bueno ahi esta)
7. 02:33:494 (7) - New Comboo aquí. >w</ jaja es verdad, ahi lo puse
8. 03:27:594 (5,6) - Esta dobleta encajaría mejor si la poner aquí 03:27:510 - Done
9. 03:36:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Siento que esta sección la podrías hacer mejor como la hiciste aquí 03:42:257 (1,2,3,4) - para darle más variedad al patrón y evaidr los mini-jumps innecesarios. Considera hacer lo mismo en el otro patrón que es similar. Ok, en realidad eso era mas una prueba de ritmo a mi mismo xD solo que lo deje asi, ahora los cambio.
10. 06:20:010 (6) - NC (el patrón de jump que hiciste aquí es perfecto y fluye genial! Buen trabajo!) Solo esta aumentando el volumen del mismo instrumento, no creo que sea necesario (a parte de que si meto un NC ahí sería dificil seguir los followpoints o.o) , El patrón me lo recomendó un amigo wow creí que lo había hecho bastante mal, gracias

Creo que eso es todo. Te deseo mejor de los éxitos con tu mapa. \:3/ Muchisimas gracias

CookieKivi wrote:

Froм мy мoddιɴɢ qυeυe.

that one diff

01:02:483 (5,6) - the sliders here just.. randomly popped up lol. at least dun make them so straight. something like this should be better http://puu.sh/pvbk3.jpg ( yes i overlapped 4 with 6) Done
01:08:045 (5) - AND AI MOD DIDN'T SAYS THATS OFFSCREEN? OKAY. THEN. NOT... pls make it higher. nope :v) Its nearly offscreen.. but NO XD
01:19:168 (1) - dat random whistle whistle? there is only a finish. -now i see, seems like a bug LOL , fixed
01:32:651 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make this more creatiivvvveeeee ñe, it seems good to me o.o
01:33:663 (7,1) - blanket error. i can't see it: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5405559 ._.
01:35:011 (5) - ^ fixed
01:49:505 (5,6) - remove whistle done
01:49:673 (6) - add whistle at end ofc xD
01:50:011 (7,8) - add whistle hmm ok
01:55:236 (5) - ^ ^
01:55:404 (1) - ^^
01:55:573 (3) - ^ nope
02:02:314 (8) - remove whistle. it never came back + dun make it so square..ry. .w. only change: whistle removed
02:08:045 (5,6,7,8) - finish overload just here 02:08:045 (5) - and there 02:08:382 (7) - no xD why
02:12:595 (2) - remove if you want o.o i have no reason to do that xD
02:13:268 (5) - s l i d e r a r t s should be something similar like this http://puu.sh/pvbR4.jpg LOL I KEEPED THAT... my bad, fixed xD
02:18:326 (7) - random whistle. ups, fixed
02:19:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - every 2nd of dem should have clap no lol, its on purpose XD

ᴛʜᴀᴛ ᴀʀᴇ ᴊᴜsᴛ ᴛʜᴇ sᴀᴍᴇ ᴛʜɪɴɢs ᴏᴠᴇʀ ᴀɴᴅ ᴏᴠᴇʀ ᴀɢᴀɪɴ. ᴀɴᴅ ɪ sᴀɪᴅ ɪ ᴅᴜɴ ᴡᴀɴᴛ ᴛᴏ ᴍᴏᴅ sᴜᴄʜ sᴛʀᴇᴀᴍʏ sᴛʀᴇᴀᴍ ᴍᴀᴘs. rofl
ɢl Ty for mod

Hobbes2 wrote:

Mod from queue

00:55:236 (2,8) - maybe have the triplet not overlap with 8 it doesnt affect lol

01:13:100 (4,7,8,9) - I don't think you should overlap here my bad, i moved 01:13:100 (4,5,6) - and i forgot that xD

01:28:437 (1,2) - blanket needs some work fixed

01:52:707 (1) - is this NC intentional? yes

02:02:314 (8) - Position like this maybe? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5428135 sure

02:39:560 (1) - maybe reduce the SV for this meh, i tried before, but it seems better with that long slider to me

02:57:089 (1) - kinda ugly kappa.. ok i moved it a bit higher, also removed the grey point

03:24:056 (1,3,4,5) - move these a bit appart so they aren't almost touching almost :v) ... i overlaped the 6 with the 2

That's all I've got :/ Fine

Sorry for short mod, but yea as I said in my queue I'm not to good at harder maps, especially long streamy ones. Good luck! The map looks really nice and the storyboard is good. Thanks ♥

sonic8889 wrote:

my mod from my queue

Final Boss

00:52:875 (4,5,6,7,8,9,3,4,5,1,2,3,2,3,4,5,6,7,7,8,9) - You should make all these triplets move in some way, the random stacked triplets play well, but make no sense (and don't look nice imo) since there are sliders all around. too much movement imo

01:32:651 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This jump is weird to have, compared to the jumps you just had. Maybe you can make it the same triangle jumps you had before, but bigger? i nerfed it a bit, but i keeped it

01:49:000 (2,4) - I think you should nerf this jump. Atm it looks too wide and feels overmapped nerfed

02:39:560 (4,1) - Maybe you could remove the hitcircle, move the slider back (on the timeline) and make it repeat once to catch the whole guitar going on there rather than half of it. #blameothermodders ... it was just like you said, but i changed it bcuz 02:40:235 - white tic

03:45:965 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - You should make these rotate more strongly, atm they only move like 10 grid spaces. you can rotate with ctrl + shift + r ;o ok

03:54:055 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - You should replace that stream/the triplets with jumps going to the guitar. It's much more prominent in this section than anything else. ill keep it at least other modders suggest it again

04:11:162 (16,1) - With these changing combo colors, you have some inconsistencies between the streams. The cyan/blue goes into the purple, and is spaced much further than either combo's stream. In the pic, there is no visible space between the 2 colors when they touch. But in the purple, there is lots of space between every note. Should fix because it's easy to misread and someone could choke hard there ;o thats the only time it happens tho I think its fixed now

05:46:892 (2,3,4,5,6) - This stream looks weird after the slider idk what it is. It just looks like it doesn't fit. literally xd rofl, true, fixed

06:19:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Since this is near the end and a quieter part, you should start the jumps ~half the size that you have now and make them bigger towards the end of the jumps, to make them bigger than they are now. hmm nah, i wont ruin that ;w;

07:04:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - I think you should space all of these further apart. Atm is feels lack luster meh they seems well spaced imo, just need to recheck the organization of the pattern lol

Sorry for short mod but stream maps, esp. if it's almost completely stream are almost always completely perfect from the start just due to their nature.
The map plays well (even tho im trash at streaming ha) and has great flow ;o Thanks DDDDD
Good luck ranking! ;)

Agatsu wrote:

you can have a star! :3

zeka wrote:

03:01:471 (5) - Maybe move that circle upwards slightly for a smoother turn during the stream oh done
03:02:145 (1) - ^ ok
03:36:105 (4) - ^ i moved it in other way, i want an abrupt change there xD (Idk if "abrupt" is the correct word)
04:07:201 (1) - ^ but downwards ill keep this
04:11:246 (1) - Shift over to the right for a smoother turn same than 03:36:105 (4)
04:19:336 (1) - ^ downwards ill keep that

If your intention was to map that way then feel free to ignore my post I cant ignore you LOL, you're taking your time to see my map, Im glad that you can say this things because it helps me, so, Thanks

Lince Cosmico wrote:

mod this plz ;w;

Shyotamaze wrote:

Lince Cosmico wrote:

mod this plz ;w;

Sure :D

Hi, from my modding queue i totally forgot this LOL

General

1. Why is your timing not the same as the ranked mapset? https://osu.ppy.sh/b/335628

well the first red lines are unnecessary i think (but i changed 178bpm line to 02:39:560 -

Final Boss

1. 00:54:224 (6) - Weird flow, rotate by 50° done
2. 00:55:740 (7,1) - Add a curve to 1 for symmetry? ok
3. 01:13:100 (4,7,8,9) - Too close imo but not overlap :v)
4. 01:20:348 (1,2,3) - Really weird flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5533022 but it feels weird to not click this 01:20:684 (idk if its the same but i've done a better flow)
5. 01:20:854 (3,4,5,6,7) - Why not a star pattern or something? It feels a bit random right now mm it seems good imo
6. 01:26:584 (5,7) - Fix blanket fixed
7. 01:29:281 (4,5,6,7,8) - That star is a bit weird or maybe it's intended? i don't even try to do a star LUL, btw ill keep it
8. 01:34:673 (4,6) - Too close imo same than before
9. 01:35:517 (1) - It feels a bit weird having a spinner here since you can hear a stream in the background ;_; it feels likes it yeah but im following that guitar sound
10. 01:38:381 (2,1) - Too close imo same
11. 01:55:993 (2,3) - Why not a stack like this part 01:56:247 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - ? Or atleast make it 0.4x DS like here 01:55:404 (1,2,3,4,1) - because the player needs cursor movement.. (i spaced it a bit more)
12. 02:01:303 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Too close imo intended
13. 02:13:268 (5) - Try to make a wave like this http://prnt.sc/avw65y (taken from t/208596 ) yeah... thats like I always do my curve sliders, but i don't applied that thiing on this map imo bcuz i learned it recently done
14. 02:15:460 (7,2) - Fix stack ups.. fixed
15. 02:55:572 (1) - This shape looks really weird ;_; yeah... ill keep the same slider but with better curves lul
16. 05:16:808 (2) - Same as before for the wave done
17. 05:46:302 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - It looks really confusing to read, you don't need that kickslider in the middle of the stream thats on purpose kappa
18. 06:36:189 (1) - Wave again i don't even need a wave there, changed iinto a curved slider and stacked on 06:36:189 (1,4) -
19. 06:47:144 (1,2,3,4,5) - Is that a star pattern? If yes, fix it please its not
20. 06:48:998 (2,4) - Too close imo moved sliderend a bit
21. 07:00:627 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5533170 For better flow k

Nice map, osu! needs more Demetori hell yeah!
Good luck!

• [Final Boss]

1. 01:02:820 (7,1,2) - consist the spacing?
2. 01:11:414 (1) - unnecessary NC
3. 01:12:257 (1) - ^
4. 01:23:382 (2) - NC should be at here
5. 01:31:472 (2) - ^, and the spacing here is to small, there is no reason for the small spacing here
6. 01:37:033 (1) - unnecessary NC
7. 01:52:707 (1) - ^
8. 01:57:764 (3) - reverse slider cant express that well imo, why not put a stream here instead?
9. 02:12:427 (1,2,3,4) - make this part start at 02:12:594 - , fit more to the music
10. 02:14:617 (6) - NC should be at here
11. 02:21:359 (5) - NC
12. 02:32:820 (1,2) - inconsistent spacing
13. 03:17:313 (10) - NC
14. 03:45:123 (11) - NC to emphasized the instrument
15. 03:56:414 (2) - NC here instead
16. 04:26:078 (1) - this slider art =w=, can be improved
17. 04:51:021 (4) - NC
18. 05:07:875 (6) - lol change to stream
19. 05:37:369 (6) - NC
20. 06:07:875 (1) - unnecessary NC
21. 06:11:920 (1) - ^
22. 06:52:706 (9) - NC here instead

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

from my queue
aww mind do M4M instead =w=? lets try =w=
cuz i got app map need to mod either XD

• [Final Boss]

1. 01:02:820 (7,1,2) - consist the spacing? done
2. 01:11:414 (1) - unnecessary NC removed
3. 01:12:257 (1) - ^ if you hear you can see there starts a new sound lul
4. 01:23:382 (2) - NC should be at here fixed
5. 01:31:472 (2) - ^, and the spacing here is to small, there is no reason for the small spacing here fixed both XD
6. 01:37:033 (1) - unnecessary NC ups i forgot to remove that
7. 01:52:707 (1) - ^ hm i hear a new sound there.. well not exactly "new" but i cant find the word to express that XD just hear it on 25% playback rate
8. 01:57:764 (3) - reverse slider cant express that well imo, why not put a stream here instead? i think the slider can do it x'D.... ok being serious ill keep it, if its possible i wont a stream there
9. 02:12:427 (1,2,3,4) - make this part start at 02:12:594 - , fit more to the music i don't think that... that follows the music perfectly imo (if someone remarks it i will change)
10. 02:14:617 (6) - NC should be at here done
11. 02:21:359 (5) - NC done
12. 02:32:820 (1,2) - inconsistent spacing ups fixed
13. 03:17:313 (10) - NC done
14. 03:45:123 (11) - NC to emphasized the instrument sure
15. 03:56:414 (2) - NC here instead rip, fixed xD
16. 04:26:078 (1) - this slider art =w=, can be improved IM SO BAD AT SLIDERART ASDASDA ok i tried better
17. 04:51:021 (4) - NC done
18. 05:07:875 (6) - lol change to stream lol why ;w;
19. 05:37:369 (6) - NC done
20. 06:07:875 (1) - unnecessary NC fixed
21. 06:11:920 (1) - ^ ill keep this, seems good to me... there starts a new sound lol
22. 06:52:706 (9) - NC here instead done

ok GL~ Thanks
mod this map plz ;w; : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/476595 k :v)