DeRandom Otaku wrote:

General

1. Choose Combo Colors Fixed, i missed that when i changed the bg lol
2. Recompress MP3 ~ Current one is unrankable If other mention it i will change, because i taked this mp3 from a ranked map
3. is another map for this song really needed? o3oI like the song o3o

Extra Stage

1. OD 8.5 will be fine for dis Done
2. 00:49:990 (1) - finish spinner at 00:51:338 - ~ also add a timing point to silent the spinner end My spiner will finish when the bg sound finish, so i think that 1/6 end is good, i should add the timing point thats true xD.
3. 01:03:136 (6) - start nc from this note Done
4. 01:04:653 (1,2) - they are too close compared to their distance in the timeline Thats because i want a blanket there
5. 01:16:282 (1) - remove nc lol i missed that, thanks fixed
6. 01:19:147 (6) - make it more stylish to match the sound in the background~ current one looks really simple imo Ok it should be better now, and 01:20:327 (1) - added NC here
7. 01:41:900 - make a stream of 5 notes here Done
8. 01:47:630 (6) - start nc from here Fixed
9. 01:49:990 (7,1) - fix blanket this should be ...better?
10. 01:51:675 (5) - did u accidently add whistle on this slider? if u did it on purpose , idk what the purpose is changed into clap, xd
11. 01:59:597 (3) - start nc from here NC before triplet? hmmm no, for now
12. 02:03:473 (1) - remove nc (optional) but the nc starts from here 02:03:810 (5) - not from here 02:04:147 (1) - ok
13. 02:08:529 (6) - this is not correct , u should follow this flow 02:07:687 (1,2,3,4,5) - ~ let (6) be where it is and move the end anchor point to 400,352 or something like that Done, recheck it and tell me if it is correct xD.
14. 02:12:321 (6,1) - jumpstream? please dont do this , a random jump stream out of nowhere in a 7 minute long map may be really hard to read random? :v)?
15. 02:14:260 (5) - finish the slider at 02:14:512 - and add circle on the big white tick a circle just before a mini reverse slider seems weird to me, i like my current pattern
16. 02:21:844 (7,9) - make blanket Done
17. 02:25:383 (9) - start nc from here ok
18. 02:38:866 (1) - use 2 circles instead ~ the 2 circles will match the intensity of the song better If i do that, this: 02:38:866 - will be like part of the stream, and i won't that
19. 02:39:541 - decrease volume for this long slider Done, and fixed the slider lol (it wasn't snaped correctly
20. 02:47:883 (8,1) - increase spacing between these two according to the spacing in the stream Fixed
21. 02:47:967 (1,2,3,4) - this stack can be really really hard to read on first try + 02:48:136 (2,4) - this stack is unrankable are you sure? Some friends testplayed my song and it is readable on first try e_e
22. 02:49:315 (1,2,1,2) - unrankable stack Im gonna keep that stacks
23. 03:01:619 (1,2,3,4) - this is not correct , a stream consisting of odd number of notes is always better ~ This would be alot better http://puu.sh/oRy3v/908495451d.jpg Fixed
24. 03:12:490 (8,1) - remove jump between these , its a pretty big one or use ctrl + g on 03:12:574 (1) - should be better
25. 03:12:574 (1,3) - again ~ unrankable stack
26. 03:16:787 (1) - finish slider at 03:17:040 - and add circle at 03:17:124 - Done
27. 03:23:445 (10,11) - reduce DS Fixed something
28. 03:28:669 (6,1) - ^
29. 03:28:754 (1,3) - unrankable stack
30. 03:31:450 (1,3) - ^
31. 03:35:495 (1,3) - ^
32. 03:39:372 (1,3) - ^
33. 03:42:237 (1,2,3,4) - ^
34. 03:42:911 (5) - nc Done
35. 03:48:304 (1) - such a long repeat slider is not good for a map like this ~ split it into 2 half sliders stoped it 03:48:810 - here and added 03:48:894 (2,3) -
36. 03:50:495 (5) - delete this and use a 3/4 reverse slider at 03:50:327 - Deleted the reverse slider, but added another from 03:50:495 - to 03:50:832 -
37. 03:51:001 (1) - qwq ~ split it into 3 sliders , each with 3 repeats so that each will be 4 ticks long ~ the sliders will finish here 03:51:928 - then, move 03:52:181 (2) - to 03:52:012 - i don't like it ;w;
38. 03:53:866 (2,3,4,5) - unrankable stack again
39. 04:08:360 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - are u sure about these? even a 3 digit rank player may fail on these ~ its a fast song . its not like a slow 140 bpm song ~ that pattern is not suitable at all .... convert those 12 circles into a nice stream Yeah i was just waiting this to change it XD, Fixed
40. 04:10:720 (9,11) - unrankable stack
41. 04:17:799 (7) - it would be better if u use 5 circles instead of this slider No, but the reverse slider now ends here 04:17:799 (7) -
42. 04:22:686 (2,3,4,5) - unrankable stack ~~ i wont mention anymore of these , look for yourself in the map
43. 04:28:754 (8) - nc Done
44. 04:40:046 (1,2,3) - make all these equally spaced , 2 is farther than 3 as compared to the spacing between 1 and 2 0.2x DS
45. 07:05:578 (6,7) - too much spaced Fixed
46. 07:07:517 (7) - replace with a circle No, added a timing point 07:07:517 (7) - to silence the slider

The Second Kiai is mapped surprisingly better than the first half of the map except there are some unrankable stacks there that u will need to fixThats because i left this map for a while... So i learn a lot of things on that time and it turned better.

If you have any question about this mod , ask me in game

GL Thanks for all

1. Tags: add kanjou no matenrou
   It's the romanized name of the song
2. Your soft-sliderslide.wav is unrankable because it's 58 bytes. It needs to be 44 byte in order to be qualified, so http://puu.sh/oXHug/fcf69ae9b6.rar here's the rankable file.
3. And also to quote what I wrote above, you are never using softsliderslide.wav in the entire map, if you want silent sliderslides then you could change it to drum-sliderslide.wav but it would sound completely differently, or else I recommend you removing it entirely.

1. Difficulty name is kind of mainstream, re-consider it? (Just suggestion)
2. 00:51:695 - this green tick should be on 00:52:369 -
3. 00:59:111 - Not having a circle here kind of ruins the flow, especially for an Extra. You are better off turning 00:58:942 (1) - into a slider
4. 01:11:246 (3) - stream actually stars here, so you should NC it
5. 01:12:426 (1) - don't NC here, do it 01:12:257 (11) - here
6. 01:13:606 (2) - and here
7. 01:13:437 (1) - remove NC
8. 01:14:617 - move this green tick to 01:14:785 -
9. 01:16:303 (8) - NC
10. 01:17:988 (1) - CTRL + G
11. 01:19:168 (1,2,3) - blanket this upon 01:18:663 (3) -

Alveryn wrote:

hi from modq, short modding cause busy Hi :p ... np your mod was useful

[General]

1. Tags: add kanjou no matenrou Done
   It's the romanized name of the song
2. Your soft-sliderslide.wav is unrankable because it's 58 bytes. It needs to be 44 byte in order to be qualified, so http://puu.sh/oXHug/fcf69ae9b6.rar here's the rankable file. rip, but thanks (at least im going to remove it ;w;)
3. And also to quote what I wrote above, you are never using softsliderslide.wav in the entire map, if you want silent sliderslides then you could change it to drum-sliderslide.wav but it would sound completely differently, or else I recommend you removing it entirely. Done

[Extra Stage]

1. Difficulty name is kind of mainstream, re-consider it? (Just suggestion) Well if i think on a better diffname, i should change it xD
2. 00:51:695 - this green tick should be on 00:52:369 - Is the same result, but ok
3. 00:59:111 - Not having a circle here kind of ruins the flow, especially for an Extra. You are better off turning 00:58:942 (1) - into a slider Fixed (and 00:59:618 (3,6) - converted this into a blanket
4. 01:11:246 (3) - stream actually stars here, so you should NC it 01:11:414 - Stream starts here but Im adding that NC because there is the high sound, also removing this NC: 01:10:910 (1) -
5. 01:12:426 (1) - don't NC here, do it 01:12:257 (11) - here No, im just dividing the combo of that slider
6. 01:13:606 (2) - and here 01:13:436 (1,2) - here starts a sound (cicle 1 following by slider 2) , but idk if i should do NC here: 01:13:943 (3) - ... also I do a blanket here 01:13:605 (2,3) -
7. 01:13:437 (1) - remove NC
8. 01:14:617 - move this green tick to 01:14:785 - same than before, done
9. 01:16:303 (8) - NC 01:16:640 (1,1) - Im following this NC pattern ,also stacked this (it was wrong) 01:16:809 (2,4) -
10. 01:17:988 (1) - CTRL + G Done and... 01:18:325 (2) - I do a blanket here
11. 01:19:168 (1,2,3) - blanket this upon 01:18:663 (3) - You mean stack? If is it... Done

PD: I like your avatar

Surono wrote:

Could I take Taiko for this map?

LigerZero wrote:

No kudosu

Tags added "曼衍珠汝華 Man'enjushaka comiket77 c77 seirensen Undefined Fantastic Object"

Good luck..... This song 2nd my favorite after last track higan kikou view of river styx"

Ayyri wrote:

Background: http://puu.sh/p4Bmc/9ee767c8a9.jpg

GD: http://puu.sh/p4Brd/edc47900f4.osu

(I assume a download to the .osu is easier than a code for you. ;^; )

Change title to match mine, as well as most tags. (Unsure about a couple you had in there.) rip english title

jamiesalvador wrote:

"Noob" map mod

Your map isn't worthy of a noob mod but I still have a point I'd like to point out...

In general, when not placing such notes for style, notes that come directly under another note and are within 2 1/2 beats and 4 1/2 beats from each other in time, need to be positioned so that they do not clutter up the map, stuff like this is where this is ok 01:57:090 (1,2,3) -

However parts like this 01:20:854 (3,6) - 01:27:931 (4,6,7,8) - 01:44:618 (9,1) - 02:01:640 (6,8) - 02:06:021 (7,2) - 02:09:730 (6,7,8,10,11,12) - 02:10:067 (9,1) - 02:30:292 (9,4) - 02:38:382 (5,1) - are where because this is an extra, the notes should be properly spaced or placed directly under each other so that they do not clutter up the map, allowing the map to be read easier. Of course this is on a case by case basis and things like 02:39:561 (1,3) - are ok (although it would actually be better if the circle was parallel to the slider as opposed to slightly coming off it) but in most cases you really want to avoid this as it just makes the map feel cluttered, same with some of the streams like here 02:44:786 (8,1) - and 02:47:904 (8,1) - and a few others that just don't look nice if they come off at a weird angle to the previous note)


also as a final point these triples are weird 02:11:078 (3,4,5,7,8,9) - I don't know what caused you to make them like that but yeah They're on a GoldenWolf mapset, so i took the idea xD

Seems good :v)

Ayyri's Taiko End

ZLOdeuka- wrote:

hi~ Before inserting my SB do this: song setup --> Design --> Widescreen Support and Display epilepsy warning (include)

then just unzip it to a folder.

there will be questions write to me immediately!

Ayyri wrote:

Mod:

Hello~

NM. (Some things I noticed when I was working on my GD.)

Keep in mind, these are my suggestions, don't change something I mentioned unless it seems good to you!

If I didn't make a box for something, that doesn't mean I didn't look at it. It just means I didn't find anything wrong with it.

Final Boss

01:02:314 (3) - Move this to stack on top of 01:02:483 (4) - and add a circle at 01:02:398 - Because it sounds rather off when the background is rising, and it's just a jump. I won't a triplet there
01:05:178 - This pause it rather awkward. You'd expect something to be here. If you're going to have this pause, consider moving 01:05:348 (2) - further away from 01:04:674 (1) - Not exactly what you said, but fixed
01:07:791 - Add a circle. The music is rising, and this jump feels empty for what the song is giving you. (I suggest moving 01:07:876 (3) - and 01:07:791 - onto the tail of 01:07:539 (2) - ) Fixed
01:13:016 (8) - Remove clap. Sounds crowded with it. my bad xD, (also, that clap is on circle 9 now, following the drums)
01:13:605 (2) - Remove clap on the tail of this slider. Same reason as above. Fixed
01:15:292 (3) - NC. SV change. added NC, but , sv change is there xD

Vert wrote:

nm from queue

a little sorry I forgot your first post because the song is too long
[std]
01:01:808 (1,3,4,5) - i really dont like these overlaps i do :v)
01:03:662 - I can hear something , compared with the rhythm you did in other parts i think it shouldnt be ignored i just followed the high sound (idk what instrument iis it xD)
01:04:673 (1) - blanket with a long slider is not a wisdom choice done
01:41:415 (4) - ugly meh
01:47:483 (8) - overlap i think it fits with the jump, a space there will be bad XD
02:01:640 (6,8) - why only these two is so close and even overlaped?
02:09:224 (2,6,10) - put them in same distance will make the map more clear fixed
02:11:921 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the stream can make a blanket with 02:11:415 (6) -
02:12:342 (6,1) - spacing is too large it seems good to me lol
02:13:101 (5) - rhythm here should be a 1/4 slider + a 1/2 slider maybe fixed XD
02:21:696 (6,8,1) - fixed 02:22:202 (9,2) - ovelap
02:30:292 (9,4) - ^
02:47:988 (1,2,3,4) - please dont stack perfectly with sliders :((((((((((((((

just ended here because im so lazy to point out all the similar problems in the map(it's really too long ;w;) np :p Thanks
good luck

ImBuGs wrote:

hi, mod:

mod

remap plz xd kds plz

Doxa wrote:

mod a voluntad cus soy re piolita

02:18:326 (13) - no me gusta para nada este sliderback, te recomendaría hacer algo como esto http://i.imgur.com/IfmQZ9O.png No se, sigo prefiriendo el mio, capaz lo acorte un poco al slider pero hasta ahi

03:01:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - es muy de forro poner estos sliders en un ritmo constante, es pura opinión este punto, pero te recomendaría que lo hagas un stream normal Jaja la verdad si, listo

03:51:022 (1,2) - yo se que se te puede ocurrir algo mejor acá, quedán medio mal esos slider larguisimos ahí, me gustaría ver una sección de triple - jump - triple - jump ahí, se que cualquier cosa puede quedar mejor Hasta el momento no se me ocurria nada, estaba esperando esto gracias dioxa

05:07:875 (6) - podrías remover este slider y reemplazarlo por 3 jumps, no quedaría mal imo Prefiero mantener el slider, son todos streams/triples los que estan, solo queria cambiar un poco, a parte si meto un jump seria raro en medio de tantos streams/triples

05:15:290 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://i.imgur.com/JHpQ2Ti.png No se si es igual al que pasaste, pero algo asi es (saque los reverse)

en general el map tiene unos cortes de ritmo por los sliders que vendría bien reemplazarlos por jumps, en si tenés buenas ideas, así que como player te aporto unas ideas aunque yo tampoco sepa mucho de mapping, mucha suerte Gracias dioxa

gaston_2199 wrote:

Hi!

STD mod!
Diff: Final Boss

01:06:358 (1) - Sonaría mejor si lo conviertes en triple Es verdad jaja ty

01:06:781 (4) - 01:06:780 Sacar hitcircle para que suene mejor con el triple anterior mencionado Suenan igual de bien, pero ahi simplemente VA un triple

01:26:920 (7,8,9) - Podrías alargar el slider y reemplazar 01:27:426 (1) por 01:27:257 (9)

02:06:865 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Sinceramente, el stream ahí es innecesario a mi parecer 02:08:045 (1,2,3,4) - para implementar esto (?

gaston_2199 wrote:

Taiko mod!
Diff: Ayyri's Taiko End

00:54:560 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - 01:05:347 (104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111) - kdkdk d k

00:59:953 (60,61,62,63,64) - 01:10:740 (147,148,149,150,151) - kdkdk

02:34:504 (824,825,826,827) - Suena mejor con d kkd

02:55:572 (989,990,991,992,993) - 03:17:145 (1171,1172,1173,1174,1175) - kkddd

05:15:459 (2105,2106,2107,2108,2109) - 05:37:032 (2287,2288,2289,2290,2291) - 05:58:606 (2469,2470,2471,2472,2473) - Para que no sea sólo D, es mejor kkkdd

06:50:852 (2917,2918,2919,2920,2921) - 06:56:246 (2961,2962,2963,2964) - 07:01:639 (3004,3005,3006,3007,3008) - Lo mismo que al principio sólo cambiando a kdkdk

Yahuri wrote:

from queue~

General
-mapping technique looks pretty underdeveloped, notes look kinda thrown all over the place. Try making more geometrical shapes and more recognizable patterns, and create unity within the map by utilizing the spacing between both consecutive objects (DS) and other objects. Maybe thats part of my style
-want to add a custom whistle hitsound? the normal whistle hitsound doesnt match the music. I don't know too much about hitsounding ;w; but im gonna try

Final Boss
00:56:078 (8,3,4) - bad overlap waaa true, fixed
01:02:314 (3,4,5) - ^ i would keep this
01:04:000 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - DS changes for what sounds like no reason, why? maybe... fixed
02:10:067 (9,1) - bad overlap, 1 appears to the left of 9 but the slider motion goes right ok. it may be fixed
02:13:268 (5,1) - flow of 5 into 1 not that great, angle the tail up more Before: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5381557 - After: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5381569. Better? (Tell me ingame if you think its wrong and tell me what to do XD)
02:38:297 (4,1) - bad overlap Fixed
02:39:561 (1) - any way for you to make this slider more symmetrical? eh well i tried im so bad at sliderart
04:26:078 (1) - i feel like you could do something more 'fun' with this slider since it matches up with the guitar pitch going up and down i tried xD
04:36:275 (8,9,10,1,3) - bad overlap done
04:47:314 (5,1) - ^
04:57:257 (6,8) - ^
05:01:470 (3,1) - blanket? wo, done
05:13:521 (4,5,6,7,2) - overlap fixd
05:17:987 (5,6,7,2,3,4) - ^
05:43:774 (1,3) - ^
05:45:290 (1,3) - ^
05:46:302 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - ^ just go over the diff and remove all the overlaps that you dont need
06:16:302 (1,2,3) - why 1 fast but not 3? True XD (maybe thats bcuz funorange sliderbreak'ed the fc lol)

Good luck! I was waiting for a overlap/flow mod for a long time, thanks

Mihaugoku wrote:

So you wanted me to recheck the map.
Here's what i think:

[Ayyri's Taiko End]
• It would be nice, if the map followed the drums for the most part, like in 01:58:437 because patterns later in the song look like put randomly. I think about putting k on half-beats (red lines). Imo would fit the song better.
06:16:302 (2619,2620,2621,2622,2623,2624,2625,2626,2627,2628,2629,2630,2631,2632,2633,2634,2635,2636,2637,2638,2639,2640,2641,2642) - WOAH, how did this get here? DELETE IT! place D or K

Really short, and waaaaaaaaay shorter than the 1st part, but seriously.. It's only about inconsistency. And that one part.

I hope this mod helps!
Have a good day!

Plaudible wrote:

NM from my noob queue~ p/5231294#p5231294 sup (^_^)/ Looks well modded but I'll give whatever advice I can~
_________

Final Boss
00:57:764 (1) - Turn distance snap to 0.6x then adjust this slider a bit to the left for better flow. It's a bit far right It should be better now
01:12:004 (1) - Remove NC ups xD
01:12:089 (2) - Add NC Done
01:12:594 (1) - Remove NC no, thats a triple lol (and there starts a sound)
01:12:763 (3) - Add NC ^
Honestly this whole stream feels a bit lumpy. Play around with the shape here.
01:24:560 (8) - Break this up so you can start a NC on the big white tick There is following a long sound (01:24:560 (8,9) - too)
01:27:257 (9) - ^
01:32:820 (2,4,6) - I'd bring these closer together, makes the pattern more fun + easier to play I think the distance between that circles is the fun part xD
02:08:719 (1) - Remove NC no lol
02:09:224 (2) - Add NC ok (yes, 1-1 combo)
02:17:988 (9) - Add NC I think NC is here 02:17:820 (7) - .. also (i used blue because i realized it thanks to you xD)
02:19:336 (1) - Remove NC There starts a high volume drums, i think NC is needed
02:19:504 (9) - Add NC no bcuz that^
Feels a bit lumpy as well, try playing with shape. Don't be afraid to make sharp turns on downbeats! It doesn't all need to flow. ok
02:25:067 (5) - Pull this in a bit, it's making a jagged edge on the stream. done
02:27:427 (10) - NC Done
02:44:280 (9) - NC 02:44:111 (1) - I think NC iis here (same than the other blue lol)
02:45:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Stacking then going off into a stream in a one direction stream feels odd, please either make it all straight or curve with stack, like you did at 06:35:347 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) Good idea! Done
02:49:926 (2,3,4,5,6) - Angle this stream better so it's like the one before it. D-done?
03:01:218 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Nice job here, pretty stream. Thanks, now i realized that NC seems weird (at 03:01:471 (5) - )
03:02:482 (1) - NC ups xD done
03:03:493 (1,2) - Blanket I tried XD
03:22:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Ending of this stream is a bit awkward, either straighten 9 or remake curve True lol, fixed
04:03:156 (1) to 03:47:988 (1) - Fix your NCs. Start it every 8 notes in a stream, it should land on the white ticks. Some of these you already have as 16s, just split in half I split'ed these 04:03:156 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - like u see (it fit pretty well with the music)
04:27:426 (1) - I'd pull this slider out to your inherited point coming up. Fixed (idk why it finished there lol)
04:40:067 (1,2,3) - Not stacked properly, make them all equal distances Done
04:54:560 (5) - Consider a change here, completely optional. Putting it under 3 makes it hard to read. Before the remap, it had a lot of these then it make it unreadable at all if i repeat it a lot, i just keep'ed these
05:28:942 (9) - ^
05:52:875 (3) - ^
06:30:965 (3) - ^
05:42:594 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Lumpy, consider changes wtf have i done LOL (Fixed)
05:47:313 (1) - Better align this with stream from before so it makes the arc prettier. done?
06:07:538 (7,8,9,10) - Stack over 06:06:611 (2,3,4), it'll make it look more appealing ^_^ meh im going to keep it
06:08:380 (3,4) - Lower these two to flow onto the next slider more seamlessly done
06:09:223 (3) - I'd align this with 1 and 2 ok
06:10:908 (1) - Lower this ok
06:12:594 (5,6,1) - This curve in the stream feels forced, consider adjustment. done
06:14:869 (8) - Raise done
06:20:010 (1) - NC I don't think a NC is needed there, i just going to up the volume with green lines lol

brdzxh wrote:

from my queue~

Final Boss

Going to be a quickie, but I hope its alright.

00:56:752 (3,4) - looks kinda awkward in editor but it seems good on gameplay xD
01:07:032 (1) - remove a grey anchor point in the first part so its like this Done
01:12:594 (1) - remove NC there starts a new sound (hear carefully on 25/50% playback rate lol)
01:12:763 (3) - NC nope
01:52:707 (1) - remove NC same than before
01:55:236 (1,1) - increase spacing between these two, so one can separate the single and stream while playing not for now, i did it on purpose ; also 01:55:236 (1) - remove nc done
01:55:994 (2,3) - move a bit to the left, so they are not hidden under the slider? done
02:06:358 (1) - remove nc why?
02:06:865 (3) - NC This is the continuing sound of the circle 1 lol
02:07:707 (1) - remove NC there starts a sound
02:36:696 (5) - the stream should at here imo I followed the guitar ? on the BG
02:39:560 (1) - fix the anchor points wa.. fixed XD
03:01:386 (4,5,1) - a bit inconsistent spacing here yeah, my bad xD fixed
03:03:493 (1) - this feels kinda awkward, because of how the stream is ending S:
03:28:775 (1,2,3) - should be singles imo, but feel free to ignore idk, it seems good to me..also i used the same here 03:42:257 (1,2,3,4) -
03:32:650 (2) - remove an anchor point, add a red one if needed fixed
03:35:263 (6,7) - 1x spacing between these; rest of stream is 0,9x~ wa im pretty sure i used 0.9x on all of the stream (also if you're talking about do a 1x spacing there, the answer is no :v) )

You might need to recheck the streams for inconsistent spacing kk

I think thats it for my mod! Cool map, gl with rank Thanks

1. 01:54:561 (2,3) - Ctrl + G para enfatizar la guitarra mejor así como lo venías haciendo antes.
2. 01:55:236 (5,1) - Esta transición es confusa porque el Approach Rate va demasiado rápido, por lo tanto, los jugadores tenderán a agarrar el ritmo equivocado ya que hay una pausa aquí 01:55:319 - . ¿Qué tal si ubicamos este patrón 01:55:404 (1,2,3,4) - más lejitos para evitar este overlap?
3. 01:57:005 (11) - Overmapped. x.x Considera elminar las notas de las siguientes partes también.
   
   Ábreme

   1. 02:10:319 (10) -
   2. 02:11:668 (8) -
4. 02:08:045 (1) - Quita el NC de aquí para guardar consistencia en la manera como enfatizas los instrumentos aquí.
5. 02:14:280 (5) - Remueve una repetición y coloca una nota aquí 02:14:617 - para permitir a los jugadores identificar los strong beats aquí. Juega un poco raro tenerlo como el final de ese slider.
6. 02:21:358 (5) - Dejar este slider sin hitsounds se siente un poco vacío, sabiendo que aquí los instrumentos tienen un enfoque fuerte en la canción. ¿Qué tal si le agregas un finish y con sample-set soft para subrayas mejor la batería?
7. 02:33:494 (7) - New Comboo aquí. >w</
8. 03:27:594 (5,6) - Esta dobleta encajaría mejor si la poner aquí 03:27:510 -
9. 03:36:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Siento que esta sección la podrías hacer mejor como la hiciste aquí 03:42:257 (1,2,3,4) - para darle más variedad al patrón y evaidr los mini-jumps innecesarios. Considera hacer lo mismo en el otro patrón que es similar.
10. 06:20:010 (6) - NC (el patrón de jumo que hiciste aquí es perfecto y fluye génial! Buen trabajo!)

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Ohayo! Desde mi queue. Continuando lo que estaba modeando por Mensaje Privado >w< crei que no me ibas a aceptar , se te agradece mucho

02:40:909 - Agrega una línea roja aquí con el mismo BPM para mejorar la experiencia del timing ya que el metrónomo se resetea e esta parte.
05:00:796 - Haz lo mismo aquí. Listo ambas

1. 01:54:561 (2,3) - Ctrl + G para enfatizar la guitarra mejor así como lo venías haciendo antes. okkk
2. 01:55:236 (5,1) - Esta transición es confusa porque el Approach Rate va demasiado rápido, por lo tanto, los jugadores tenderán a agarrar el ritmo equivocado ya que hay una pausa aquí 01:55:319 - . ¿Qué tal si ubicamos este patrón 01:55:404 (1,2,3,4) - más lejitos para evitar este overlap? Listo :p
3. 01:57:005 (11) - Overmapped. x.x Considera elminar las notas de las siguientes partes también. Esta bien
   
   Ábreme

   1. 02:10:319 (10) - Yo logro escuchar un sonido xd, a parte de que prefiero mantenerlo asi para mantener la consistencia de Tap + Triple
   2. 02:11:668 (8) - lo mismo
4. 02:08:045 (1) - Quita el NC de aquí para guardar consistencia en la manera como enfatizas los instrumentos aquí. Ok
5. 02:14:280 (5) - Remueve una repetición y coloca una nota aquí 02:14:617 - para permitir a los jugadores identificar los strong beats aquí. Juega un poco raro tenerlo como el final de ese slider. Ok, igual creo que lo puse un poco lejos (intente hacer un overlap con el stream que le seguia)
6. 02:21:358 (5) - Dejar este slider sin hitsounds se siente un poco vacío, sabiendo que aquí los instrumentos tienen un enfoque fuerte en la canción. ¿Qué tal si le agregas un finish y con sample-set soft para subrayas mejor la batería? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5399449 sin hitsounds? o.o (esto estaba, lo que pudo haber pasado es que cuando estaba haciendo los hitsounds hoy a la tarde no subi el map hitsoundeado, pero bueno ahi esta)
7. 02:33:494 (7) - New Comboo aquí. >w</ jaja es verdad, ahi lo puse
8. 03:27:594 (5,6) - Esta dobleta encajaría mejor si la poner aquí 03:27:510 - Done
9. 03:36:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Siento que esta sección la podrías hacer mejor como la hiciste aquí 03:42:257 (1,2,3,4) - para darle más variedad al patrón y evaidr los mini-jumps innecesarios. Considera hacer lo mismo en el otro patrón que es similar. Ok, en realidad eso era mas una prueba de ritmo a mi mismo xD solo que lo deje asi, ahora los cambio.
10. 06:20:010 (6) - NC (el patrón de jump que hiciste aquí es perfecto y fluye genial! Buen trabajo!) Solo esta aumentando el volumen del mismo instrumento, no creo que sea necesario (a parte de que si meto un NC ahí sería dificil seguir los followpoints o.o) , El patrón me lo recomendó un amigo wow creí que lo había hecho bastante mal, gracias

Creo que eso es todo. Te deseo mejor de los éxitos con tu mapa. \:3/ Muchisimas gracias

CookieKivi wrote:

Froм мy мoddιɴɢ qυeυe.

that one diff

01:02:483 (5,6) - the sliders here just.. randomly popped up lol. at least dun make them so straight. something like this should be better http://puu.sh/pvbk3.jpg ( yes i overlapped 4 with 6) Done
01:08:045 (5) - AND AI MOD DIDN'T SAYS THATS OFFSCREEN? OKAY. THEN. NOT... pls make it higher. nope :v) Its nearly offscreen.. but NO XD
01:19:168 (1) - dat random whistle whistle? there is only a finish. -now i see, seems like a bug LOL , fixed
01:32:651 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make this more creatiivvvveeeee ñe, it seems good to me o.o
01:33:663 (7,1) - blanket error. i can't see it: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5405559 ._.
01:35:011 (5) - ^ fixed
01:49:505 (5,6) - remove whistle done
01:49:673 (6) - add whistle at end ofc xD
01:50:011 (7,8) - add whistle hmm ok
01:55:236 (5) - ^ ^
01:55:404 (1) - ^^
01:55:573 (3) - ^ nope
02:02:314 (8) - remove whistle. it never came back + dun make it so square..ry. .w. only change: whistle removed
02:08:045 (5,6,7,8) - finish overload just here 02:08:045 (5) - and there 02:08:382 (7) - no xD why
02:12:595 (2) - remove if you want o.o i have no reason to do that xD
02:13:268 (5) - s l i d e r a r t s should be something similar like this http://puu.sh/pvbR4.jpg LOL I KEEPED THAT... my bad, fixed xD
02:18:326 (7) - random whistle. ups, fixed
02:19:336 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - every 2nd of dem should have clap no lol, its on purpose XD

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