Hey, Tarrasky and GDers! I don't feel comfortable to mod harder diffs yet, I'm still practicing, will mod till Platinum diff.
[Mari's Bronze]
-Well, first issue that I note here is the gap between Easy and Normal - it's very bad. On Easy we have a lot of 2/1 rhythm with a low spacing and SV, and on Normal we have a difficulty with high SV, SV changes, and some 1/2 with the rest 1/1. To make the gap better, I'd suggest increasing SV on Easy to 0.80 and increase the spacing to 1/1.1 in order that 1/1 rhythm do not overlap each other. Consider adding more 1/1 rhythm too, otherwise gap would still be high.
[SrTarra's Silver]
[Gold]
[Platinum]
[Mari's Bronze]
-Well, first issue that I note here is the gap between Easy and Normal - it's very bad. On Easy we have a lot of 2/1 rhythm with a low spacing and SV, and on Normal we have a difficulty with high SV, SV changes, and some 1/2 with the rest 1/1. To make the gap better, I'd suggest increasing SV on Easy to 0.80 and increase the spacing to 1/1.1 in order that 1/1 rhythm do not overlap each other. Consider adding more 1/1 rhythm too, otherwise gap would still be high.
- I feel your NC very inconsistent in a lot of parts, I'd recommend you let 2 stanzas cuz a lot of use of 2/1. I'll list the parts that you need to fix NC.
00:08:662 (1) - Add NC.
00:13:995 (3) - ^
00:21:662 (1) - ^
00:27:662 (1) - ^
00:53:662 (1) -
And keep doing like that in all parts you feel that is inconsistent (there are a lot more) Just let 2 downbeats on every nc measure and it should be fine :> - Overall, I didn't like the way you ignored downbeats making slider finishes on them, they are important cause usually they have start of vocals and instrumentals, and ignoring them on slider ends feels weird.
00:07:662 (2) -
00:12:995 (2) -
00:26:328 (3) - Strong case here.
[SrTarra's Silver]
- 00:00:329 (1,2) - minor thing here but I'd suggest a 1/2 slider then add a circle, it feels a better rhythm imo. http://puu.sh/nzBrd/cda1f35350.jpg
- http://puu.sh/nzBtF/27c00db51d.png Why not put green in the same time as red? But be careful, set the same volume for both, so both have to be 40% volume.
- 00:37:662 (1) - For sure that 1 beat is not enough to recover time after the spin, with this BPM, I'd recommend 2 or 3 ~ http://puu.sh/nzBTR/f93f96e7ee.jpg This is a good choice too, just leting a break XD (And later add a 1/2 slider with 1x slider multiplier)
- 00:42:328 (3,1) - It completely seems that (3) is reversing twice with (1) overlaping under it, very bad idea if you ask me. I'd recommend removing that overlap between (1) and (3)
- 00:47:662 (2,1) - ^ And same for another parts like that on kiai.
- 00:57:662 (1) - Add NC here to fit your comboing pattern.
- 00:56:995 (3) - It'd flows better if you move (3) a bit higher on the grid :> x:344 y:68 seems good.
- 01:13:662 (2) - I really think that this is confusing for beginners, the way you put (2) close to (1)'s head will make Normal players will think that this is a faster rhythm like 1/2 and that's not what we want for a Normal diff. Consider moving them apart.
- 02:05:495 (3,1) - Mini DS problem here :3
[Gold]
- 01:11:495 (3) - I saw maps getting DQeid because of that, just remove the gray point, it's useless.
- 00:07:995 (3) - A pity that the end of the slider is not clickable, you should do something clickable there, it's a really strong beat.
- 00:44:995 (3) - This slider here is so non sense, in my opinion, you missed a really strong beat on the end of it. I'd recommend doing that http://puu.sh/nBL4q/3eba6ccb35.jpg
- 00:05:995 (1) - I understand the slider changes and etc, but this is not a reasons to make this spacing seems like 1/2, I'd suggest you spacing (1) more of (4).
- 00:16:995 (3,4,1) - Instead of increase spacing for (4) why you don't increase it for (1), it'd be even more reasonable
- 00:18:328 (3,4,1) - ^
- 00:20:995 (3,4) - Try different sliders shapes on this one http://puu.sh/nzDyJ/dda002e3af.jpg
- 00:24:995 (3,4) - ^
- 00:26:662 (4,5,1) - http://puu.sh/nzDEA/7ddb7c09d3.jpg Jumpy sessions on parts like that sounds good, the stack is even better cuz it emphasyze the beats better. Try it!
- 00:39:995 (1,2,1) - OMG! It's the start of a super strong beat and (1) is stacked, this is bad... Try to unstack the notes, it feels better trust me. http://puu.sh/nzDQs/af06f6dbb2
- 00:57:662 (5) - Add NC ;D
- 00:57:662 (5) - I was thinking if you could do the same shape as (3), it'd be better for patterning
- 01:00:328 (1) - New combo here
[Platinum]
- Same as Normal about green and red point.
- 00:16:828 (2) - I'd add a note here, it feels even funnier!
- 00:18:162 (2) - ^
- 01:18:995 (5) - Space it a bit more... Like... Move it to x:192 y:264
- 01:28:328 (1,2) - I'm pretty sure that you can improve your blanket here Vuuush! http://puu.sh/nzEDa/a0f96305ac.jpg