Tarrasky wrote:

all bn's are lazy

1. I feel your NC very inconsistent in a lot of parts, I'd recommend you let 2 stanzas cuz a lot of use of 2/1. I'll list the parts that you need to fix NC.
   
   00:08:662 (1) - Add NC.
   00:13:995 (3) - ^
   00:21:662 (1) - ^
   00:27:662 (1) - ^
   00:53:662 (1) -
   
   And keep doing like that in all parts you feel that is inconsistent (there are a lot more) Just let 2 downbeats on every nc measure and it should be fine :>
2. Overall, I didn't like the way you ignored downbeats making slider finishes on them, they are important cause usually they have start of vocals and instrumentals, and ignoring them on slider ends feels weird.
   
   00:07:662 (2) -
   00:12:995 (2) -
   00:26:328 (3) - Strong case here.

1. 00:00:329 (1,2) - minor thing here but I'd suggest a 1/2 slider then add a circle, it feels a better rhythm imo. http://puu.sh/nzBrd/cda1f35350.jpg
2. http://puu.sh/nzBtF/27c00db51d.png Why not put green in the same time as red? But be careful, set the same volume for both, so both have to be 40% volume.
3. 00:37:662 (1) - For sure that 1 beat is not enough to recover time after the spin, with this BPM, I'd recommend 2 or 3 ~ http://puu.sh/nzBTR/f93f96e7ee.jpg This is a good choice too, just leting a break XD (And later add a 1/2 slider with 1x slider multiplier)
4. 00:42:328 (3,1) - It completely seems that (3) is reversing twice with (1) overlaping under it, very bad idea if you ask me. I'd recommend removing that overlap between (1) and (3)
5. 00:47:662 (2,1) - ^ And same for another parts like that on kiai.
6. 00:57:662 (1) - Add NC here to fit your comboing pattern.
7. 00:56:995 (3) - It'd flows better if you move (3) a bit higher on the grid :> x:344 y:68 seems good.
8. 01:13:662 (2) - I really think that this is confusing for beginners, the way you put (2) close to (1)'s head will make Normal players will think that this is a faster rhythm like 1/2 and that's not what we want for a Normal diff. Consider moving them apart.
9. 02:05:495 (3,1) - Mini DS problem here :3

1. 01:11:495 (3) - I saw maps getting DQeid because of that, just remove the gray point, it's useless.
2. 00:07:995 (3) - A pity that the end of the slider is not clickable, you should do something clickable there, it's a really strong beat.
3. 00:44:995 (3) - This slider here is so non sense, in my opinion, you missed a really strong beat on the end of it. I'd recommend doing that http://puu.sh/nBL4q/3eba6ccb35.jpg
4. 00:05:995 (1) - I understand the slider changes and etc, but this is not a reasons to make this spacing seems like 1/2, I'd suggest you spacing (1) more of (4).
   
5. 00:16:995 (3,4,1) - Instead of increase spacing for (4) why you don't increase it for (1), it'd be even more reasonable
6. 00:18:328 (3,4,1) - ^
7. 00:20:995 (3,4) - Try different sliders shapes on this one http://puu.sh/nzDyJ/dda002e3af.jpg
8. 00:24:995 (3,4) - ^
9. 00:26:662 (4,5,1) - http://puu.sh/nzDEA/7ddb7c09d3.jpg Jumpy sessions on parts like that sounds good, the stack is even better cuz it emphasyze the beats better. Try it!
10. 00:39:995 (1,2,1) - OMG! It's the start of a super strong beat and (1) is stacked, this is bad... Try to unstack the notes, it feels better trust me. http://puu.sh/nzDQs/af06f6dbb2
11. 00:57:662 (5) - Add NC ;D
12. 00:57:662 (5) - I was thinking if you could do the same shape as (3), it'd be better for patterning
13. 01:00:328 (1) - New combo here

1. Same as Normal about green and red point.
2. 00:16:828 (2) - I'd add a note here, it feels even funnier!
3. 00:18:162 (2) - ^
4. 01:18:995 (5) - Space it a bit more... Like... Move it to x:192 y:264
5. 01:28:328 (1,2) - I'm pretty sure that you can improve your blanket here Vuuush! http://puu.sh/nzEDa/a0f96305ac.jpg

HappyRocket88 wrote:

will post the mod be patient plz!

Blue Dragon wrote:

HappyRocket88 wrote:

will post the mod be patient plz!

HappyRocket88 wrote:

will not post the mod be patient plz!

Kagetsu wrote:

placeholder for gratz

Kisses wrote:

I expected cs 7 for irrelvis diff xD

Thanks ezek for the video <3

ReFaller wrote:

Thanks ezek for the video <3

Then add him to tags, he is also part of beatmap ^_^

Kagetsu wrote:

how about this bg?

ReFaller wrote:

Thanks ezek for the video <3

Then add him to tags, he is also part of beatmap ^_^

AmigoDoChroome wrote:

Irreversible wrote:

AmigoDoChroome wrote:

1. i think the gap between bronze and silver diff is quite big xd there are some places where bronze uses 2/1 gaps while silver it's filled with 1/2
   
   example

   Bronze 00:48:328 -
   
   Silver 00:48:328 -
   
2. you might want also use more sv in general for the bronze diff, the gap between 0,6 and 1,2 sv is too much tbh

1. 00:15:662 (4) - the clap sounds a bit random tbh, i think it would be better to start with the claps from here 00:16:328 - , because it's where the music changes
2. 00:18:995 (1,2) - spacing? it should be conisistent
3. 00:49:662 (3) - this type of slider is really confusing for the easier diff, hiding the sliderborder might be confusing for newbies
4. 01:30:995 (3) - this one is also kinda risky but w/e
5. 02:00:328 (1) - I understood your idea of following voice with this long slider but it doesn't work that well imo, it should start from 02:00:995 - . i think that adding a circle on 02:00:328 - then starting the slider on 02:00:995 - will fit perfectly
6. 02:05:662 (1) - more of the same

1. 00:04:995 (5) - the sv change isn't intuitive, although it's a normal it should be straightforward (i don't really recommend to use sv changes in the normal diff, it just makes all things ugly lol)
2. 00:09:662 (3,1) - so weird spacing... looks exactly like the one you used for the previous gap
3. 00:26:328 (4) - i don't recommend to use this type of slider, a single circle works the same way and it's much more beginner-friendly
4. 00:28:162 (3) - you could remove this circle in order to make the map focused to the main rhythm
5. 00:32:995 (3,4) - kinda the same as previous, these type of stuff is not that good considering how easy the bronze diff was
6. 01:17:995 (1,3) - the normal sampleset sounds odd tbh, it diminish the importance of claps... using adittions instead of the whole sampleset might be better
7. 01:40:995 (3,1) - why 0,9x tho... normal should still have constant ds
8. 01:46:328 (2,1) - ^
9. 01:48:328 (1,2,3) - i personally don't like this rhythm, the clap being on the reverse arrow bugs me a bit... consider using 00:49:662 (1,2,3) - , works much better and it's also easier
10. 01:51:662 (2,1) - check ds
11. 01:59:662 (2) - pretty much the same as 00:28:162 (3)
12. 02:02:995 (1) - the drum finish sound so random, you could add more of these in spots like 02:04:328 - 02:05:662 - 02:08:328 - etc. (basically the downbeats)

1. the hitsounds seems to be copied from the other diffs so i'm not going to point that again, but yeah... check the drum finish usage at the end of the second kiai
2. consider to decrease the ar a bit, the jump from 5 to 8 might be too much... i think 7 or so will be ok
3. 00:25:662 (1,2,3) - i don't get the reason behind the jumpy pattern here, looks a bit exaggerated to me
4. 00:34:995 (1,2) - i don't recommend to stack this i guess you wanted to follow voice with 2 so stacking it doesn't makes much sense because it kills the emphasis on it xd
5. the distance between the objetcs throughout the kiai looks kinda random and it makes the whole section to look messy...
   
   for example

   00:40:328 (1,2,3) - 1,2x
   00:41:662 (1,2,3) - 1.3x
   00:44:328 (1,2,3) - 1.0x
   00:50:995 (1,2,3) - 1.5x (which is musically the same as 00:40:328 (1,2,3))
   in general words, try to keep the same distance (visually) in order to make the map more pleasant to look at
6. 01:34:995 (1,2,3) - nazi ds