1. LET THE BASS KICK - 7Key (4.37 stars, 4011 notes)

SanadaYukimura wrote:

10/10 BG

EedowChyan0w0 wrote:

The diff name should be "LET THE BASS KICK"

Critical_Star wrote:

HI Kuo-nyan 'w')
sorry for the long delay
just go through some stuff here
column 1 2 3 4 5 6 7

BASS BASS KICK KICK BASS KICK KICK

00:18:857 (18857|4,19034|6,19210|4,19387|6,19563|4,19740|6,19916|4,20093|6) - CTRL+G? maybe try other pattern layering those drum kick. i will kept because it sound same as last part
00:28:563 - add a note here for vocal? could be nice too since u have a note at 00:28:387 (28387|1) - i think 1/1 vocal was enough
00:43:916 (43916|2,43916|5,44093|3,44093|6,44093|0) - the note usage should be CTRL+G, white tick has a louder sound impact okay
01:02:446 (62446|3,62622|6,62622|0,62799|3,62975|6,62975|0,62975|1,63152|3,63328|4,63328|0,63504|3,63681|4,63681|0,63681|1,63857|3,64034|6,64034|0,64210|3,64387|4,64387|1,64387|0,64563|3,64740|4,64740|0,64916|3,65093|1,65093|0,65269|3,65446|6,65446|0,65622|3,65799|6,65799|1,65799|0,65975|3,66152|4,66152|0,66328|3,66504|4,66504|1,66504|0,66681|3,66857|6,66857|0) - CTRL+H? my right hand also want to play the kick pattern too good one
02:03:328 - add another note at 4, make 5 note for crash here
03:50:887 - should be double here too, refer 03:49:475 (229475|3,229475|0) - no, the reason i double it because of vocal
04:12:946 - add a note here like u have at 04:12:240 (252240|1) -
05:28:034 - 5 note for ending crash? u just gonna bass that kick! i think it would be fine for 3 notes

nothing here just ignore this

why u want to open lol, really nothing

just another empty box

see? 'w')

don't get fooled the third time 'w')

ok u got me moew~ ;w;

hhh hope it help~ good luck! K.KICK

Kuro Izaya wrote:

late for mod
mod by reque
you told me just one diff , indeed......

let the bass kick oooooo(???)

00:18:857 to 00:20:269 - try this look bad imo for a 7k set
00:46:034 to 00:56:622 - add 1/2 note (eh...can you understand my meaning _(:3 i want to focus vocal and bass only here
02:03:681 to 02:04:563 - add a little notes? it would be bad
05:16:034 to 05:16:740 - add a long note in any column can't due to sv changes
eh...i havent experience in 7K , but i think this's a nice map XD
forgive me for inability orz

Digression

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it sure really good, thank you

my reque

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/437518 i didnt told you before lol

sure thing

Fresh Chicken wrote:

iiiiiiha

Good map overall, here's some suggestion for you

1. 00:11:799 - ~ 00:16:740 - Those patterns kinda bored when I was testing it, how about make some 1/4 notes in right hand too? Like 00:00:681 - this pattern. i have same think with you as start but i found it pretty bad and i think focus on bass snare was already enough
   Suggest to add some notes here.
2. 00:17:446 - Long and same pattern may able to break the hand balance or make players boring, how about try to change a little bit from 00:18:857 - here? Here's an example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5050737 this is the second time someone also pointed this i will make a change here
3. 00:21:328 - It's not important things but seems it breaks some consistency on here. let's take a look 00:20:269 - 00:20:622 - 00:20:975 -: The four notes are not fit with here I guess.
4. 00:59:446 - Should add a one more note if you want to keep consistency in here. (Use two notes in just kick sound and use three notes if there has another sound too) here's the example 00:57:328 - 00:58:034 - 00:58:740 - 00:56:975 - let me explain, 1st column for bass, 2 for snare and 3 for none, 4 for background sound if you noticed, 5 for kick vocal,6 for none and 7k for bass vocal
5. 01:02:269 - 01:05:093 - Is this your intention or just copied...? I'm confuse now because here's the no reason why it should be two notes lol
6. 03:18:152 - Try to Ctrl + H here. For more different feeling with 03:12:504 - here. it will be great! it has like 4 parts of it each, so i split it with two parts, one on right hand, one for left hand if you notice: 03:12:504 (192504|6,192857|6,193210|6,193475|6,193740|6,194004|6,194269|6,194622|6,194975|6,195328|6,195681|6,196034|6,196299|6,196563|6,196828|6,197093|6) - 03:23:799 (203799|0,204152|0,204504|0,204769|0,205034|0,205299|0,205563|0,205916|0,206269|0,206622|0,206975|0,207328|0,207593|0,207857|0,208122|0,208387|0) -
7. 03:56:622 (236622|5,236740|1,236857|5) - You can make a jack if you want. It's not hard to play also would be give more fun! i tried, look bad to me, i need suggestion
8. 03:57:328 - To be honest. This SV is completely unreadable. 03:57:593 - This 1.5x SV is TOO fast for read in this short section. How about this?
   03:57:328 - 1.5x
   03:57:504 - 0.2x
   03:57:637 - 1.5x
   Here is my suggestion. rearranged
9. 05:21:681 - 05:11:093 - these are too, make some distance to add more SV for good readable like my suggestion before, would be great removed sv change anyways, i bad at it

And like my word here:
Seems patterns are too repeat I think even I can feel that when I was playing it.
As you know, the "Small" change in pattern makes completely different feeling. How about try it? the reason i'm repeating the patterns because it fit the music well and well balanced with the map
one it's left and one it's right would come in mind and i think it great for this
Also it was very clean and good map overall. Good luck for rank!

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Difficulties Available:

1. LET KICK THE BASS - 7Key (4.34 stars, 3959 notes)

SpectorDG wrote:

Hi KK here the mods

Click me baby

1. 00:28:387 (28387|1) - Move to 3 or 4 ? it's really good pattern for vocal. one is bass, one is kick, considered to not, also it's still beginning, i will let players have some warming up with musi
2. 00:32:622 - It's better i guess.
ex : 00:31:563 (31563|4,31828|4,32093|4,32269|2,32446|4,32622|2) - rrrrrr sound, , for 00:31:563 (31563|0,31916|0,32269|0,32622|0) - is kick and 00:31:740 (31740|6,32093|6,32446|6,32799|6) - for hihat
3. 00:44:622 (44622|3,44799|3,44975|3) - Triple vocal jacks? or ? maybe you can re-arrange this.
ex : for this vocal "LET THE BASS KICK" it's special vocal so i will let it on same column
4. 01:07:210 - Same of #3.
5. 02:13:210 - It's just suggestion.
no, this patterns is good enough, fit with bass well here
6. 02:14:975 - ^
02:25:210 - Why your single LN's starting only 4? i saw starting 4 ending 4 02:20:269 - added another long note here
7. 03:09:681 - There are have a too many strong beats, so try this ?
consider 1/2 hihat, 1/1 for each main bass and 1/4 for these bass stairs, i kept that till the rest of the map, only 02:13:210 - is different because it got big snare in the middle, not like other
8. 05:04:381 - Same of #3.
9. 05:26:975 - blablblabla

goodluck for rank~ ♥

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

please open

Feerum wrote:

Requested Check


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Hello Kuo Kyoka
Sorry for the huge delay. no prob
Here's my check for your 2nd Bubble!

General

Artist: Right
Title: Right
Source: Right
Tags: Right
AiMod: Right
Background: Uhm yeah. Your BG is 1200x768. That means it's not 4:3 neither 16:9. Ya know. I have here a 1024x768 vers for ya. That what was best possible wihtout cutting the Song or charter name: click // Of course only if you want it! i tried to apply it, but it look weird even than the currently so i better choose to keep
BPM/Offset: Right
mp3/Hitsounds: Right
Other: -

LET THE BASS KICK

AYY. Like we talked in Discord about the OD/HP. Please consider to change it. Even when the Map is pretty easy to play, the ending is very dense and yeah.. HP 9,5 is nono.HP 8.7 OD 9.2 that's

00:16:740 (16740|0,16740|4,16740|2,17093|2,17093|4,17093|0) - would like to know why you used there three notes notes suddenly. This sound isn't louder, also no additional sound in this, at least for me D: 00:17:269 - added a note on 1st, because main bass 00:16:740 (16740|4,16740|0,17004|0,17004|4,17093|0,17093|4,17269|4,17269|0) - here so and snare still head up like 00:14:622 (14622|2,14975|2,15328|2,15681|2,16034|2,16387|2,16740|2,17093|2) - (hard to explain but i tried to testplay some and it really hard to play with only 2 notes and also this part sound more different from other bass snare so add more notes for it

00:22:210 (22210|4,22563|3) - These two notes have the same Pitch. Even when the Keysound file is different, the pitch is same, you could put them on the same column. appearancely it's same pitch, yes but somehow i feel it is a little bit different 00:22:563 (22563|3) - is lower than 00:22:210 (22210|4) - that's why

00:45:681 - Suggestion from here to reduce the volume of the E5 Keysound (Kick) because the music is here also pretty quiet. I recommend to use 10~15% volume and make it louder when the melody get's louder from here. 00:56:975 - Like you did with the Vocal Keysound.
The kick hitsound is otherwise very loud (kinda louder than the music) holy, i did mistake here, no wonder is sound so loud

01:40:563 (100563|6,100740|6,100916|6,101093|6,101269|6,101446|6,101622|6,101799|6,101975|6,102152|6) - Are you played these 10 jacks intentional? Because i can't hear any sound or anything that could justify these pattern. 00:22:210 (22210|4) - i continue the patterns like before and 01:40:740 (100740|6,100916|6,101004|3,101093|6,101269|6,101357|1,101446|6,101622|6,101710|1,101799|6,101975|6,102063|1,102152|6) - i follow the main melody if you noticed them, i would like to move it but it would break the rhythm

My suggestion would be following. Follows Pitch and removed the jacks.

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01:51:946 (111946|1) - Ghost note? It's same like these breaks 01:49:122 - , 01:50:534 - etc etc.no, it isn't, there is a hihat contains on there, i would try to make a different ending for this melody on this part

02:08:975 (128975|2,128975|5,129152|5,129152|2) - Ayy the only "jack" pattern you have in this Part, not very tragic but maybe arrange? rearranged some before end this melody

02:11:093 (131093|4,131093|0,131357|5,131357|1,131622|6,131622|2) - And for what are these LN's? I really can't hear there andy sound that can justify these.. I mean, something like this i could understand:

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There 4 Sounds so 4 ln's would fit pretty good.. but 3?
I mean when you can explain it me, maybe i just overhear it.. well, actually, i just follow main bass here, no other sound i would like to follow before ending, it's main bass now so i choose to follow them but these long notes also not really recomended to follow bass, but well: what should i do, because i like to keep it, it look good for me and some short holds here will heat up the fun imo, like i follow main bass on 02:12:681 (132681|6,132681|2,132857|4,132857|0,133034|2,133034|6) - too

02:13:210 - Add here a note? You can hear we have a really heavy cymbal here, emphasize it! will it be too hard? i tried once but i'm not able to pass it well but added anyway

02:27:328 - From here, it's kinda sad that you doesn't look at PR (Pitch Relevancy) if i doesn't look at pitch so what the heck i'm following now to make this better to feel. Especially when you use only single notes.
Following notes have the same Pitch and could be placed on the same column. However, this is just a suggestion and you are of course not forced:
02:28:034 (148034|3,148387|2) -
02:29:446 (149446|4,149799|3) -
02:32:093 (152093|2,152446|3) -
02:33:681 (153681|3,154034|2) -
02:35:093 (155093|4,155446|3) -
02:37:740 (157740|2,158093|3) -

And so on, basically every time the 1st and 3rd note have the same pitch.
Please consider to rearrange here. To follow PR is especially in the higher keymodes a really cool extra.
like hell it would break the patterns but okay, i rearranged them all

03:11:622 (191622|4,191975|3) - Also same Pitch explained

03:34:034 (214034|6,214210|6) - These notes doesn't have the same pitch. To put them on the same column seems not very effective here. moved to 4

03:49:740 (229740|0,229916|0,230093|0,230269|0,230446|0,230622|0) - These Jacks doesn't fit very well, you followed probably vocal (something else doesn't make really much sense).
The vocals are "Kick, bass, bass, kick, kick" That's why i recommand to jack only the same vocal.
Use same column for "bass" and then an other column for "kick"
Maybe you like something like this:

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03:45:328 (225328|0,225504|0,225681|0,225857|0,226034|0,226210|0,226387|0,226652|0,226916|0,227181|0,227446|0,227799|6,228063|6,228328|6,228504|6,228857|6,229210|0,229475|0,229740|0,229916|0,230093|0,230269|0,230446|0,230622|6,230799|6,231063|6,231328|6,231593|6,231857|6,232034|0,232299|0,232563|0,232828|0,233093|0,233446|6,233710|6,233975|6,234152|6,234504|6) - this is bms style, somehow i want to keep them on only 1st column too but it would hard to catch them up because of balance (but i would like to do it on 7+1K) so i remains follow vocal on 1st and 7th columns

03:56:269 - Suggestion for PR:

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it will be good on 4K tbh but for 7K i would like to make them balanced here

04:41:975 (281975|4,282328|3) - same Pitch. explained

Thats all

Call me back when you are done here Kuo c:

Pope Gadget wrote:

spotting some stuff which I would personally reconsider

actually, when you insert time on box code, i can't click that time but just have to scroll to that timing you're mentioning

00:11:799 -

00:12:063 (12063|1,12328|5,12769|5,13034|1) - Adding notes here and having these reiterate. actually yes i tried, but the space actually really really hard to put some good patterns here, and i think i focus bg sound (KH and KI as custom hitsound -name from BMS-) at first then the bass coming louder so i just only focus on that bass
This is in order to make the minijacks at 00:17:004 (17004|0,17004|4,17093|4,17093|0) - less harsh. yes, sure, i tried once too, but i testplayed like 10 times for them but it's really hard to catch them well, so i better add 2 notes on here to make it more balance for hand-feeling so that it's more easy to catch them (actually i testplayed them too, and i actually passed them well: 00:16:034 (16034|2,16387|2,16740|2,17093|2) - kick 00:16:034 (16034|0,16387|0,16740|0,17004|0,17093|0,17269|0) - snare 00:16:740 (16740|4,17004|4,17093|4,17269|4) - drum snare


ALTERNATIVELY / IN ADDITION


00:17:004 (17004|4,17004|0) - move to |1 and |5 so that the minijacks disappear and it's more fluent to play. Listening to this section on 25%, I'm not sure why minijacks are used here as the sounds at 00:17:004 - are not synonymous or included at 00:17:093 - i just notice it, but still same answer, sorry

01:30:857 -

01:31:210 (91210|6,91563|3,91740|5,91916|4) - Delete notes here, same with every iteration.
I would not have smooth streams here when the synth is broken/fragmented.
Would also suggest rearranging the remaining notes so that they still incline in pitch relevancy, for example;


01:30:857 (90857|0,91210|0,91563|0,91916|0) - for kick sound, 01:31:034 (91034|1,91387|1,91740|1,92093|1) - for that tock sound and 01:31:034 (91034|4,91122|5,91299|4,91475|4,91652|2,91740|5,91828|3,92004|5,92093|6) - for the main melody following and 01:31:210 (91210|6,91563|3,91916|4) - extra bass

IN ADDITION


01:42:152 - This patterning tends to get tedious extremely fast. Not sure whether this is personal preference or not but I would change this to fit with the background noise, such as you've done with the left hand of 00:23:093 - although have this fit into 3 keys rather than 4, for example;

Have this done with every iteration.

like i explained about pitch, bass, tock earlier, this one is just same but in order not to make players too boring, i increase the difficult by add one more note for bass

02:03:504 -

Notes missed at 02:03:504 - and 02:03:681 - have these be one-handed, for example;


i want players to have a little break after that full rain notes before start with snare, bass (4 notes for bass and 5 notes for snare) so i better focus only vocal here and actually it's great
02:03:504 (123504|1,123681|2) -

02:13:210 -

Would just appreciate a bit more variance here. The patterns aren't necessarily awkward or out of place, but they just seem fairly uncreative.
For example;

02:13:210 (133210|0,133210|4,133299|5,133299|2,133387|6,133387|1,133475|2,133475|5,133563|0,133563|4,133652|1,133652|6,133740|5,133740|2,133828|1,133828|6,133916|4,133916|0,134004|6,134004|2,134093|5,134093|0,134181|4,134181|1,134269|5,134269|0,134357|2,134357|6,134446|4,134446|1,134534|0,134534|5,134622|1) -

02:13:210 (133210|3) - for cymbal and 02:13:916 (133916|3) - for snare, let just say these two are special keys and also 02:13:210 (133210|4,133210|0,133563|0,133563|4,133916|4,133916|0,134269|0,134269|4,134622|0,134622|4) - for main kick, 02:13:299 (133299|1,133299|5,133387|6,133387|2,133475|1,133475|5,133652|5,133652|1,133740|2,133740|6,133828|1,133828|5,134004|1,134004|5,134093|2,134093|6,134181|5,134181|1,134357|5,134357|1,134446|6,134446|2,134534|1,134534|5) - for 1/4 basskick, the sould itself it already repetitive so i would make a easy patterns after these rain notes (again) here

03:56:269 -

03:56:269 - The SVs here are actually quite difficult to sightread.
What I would personally do is have this be one simple slowdown SV and the notes here be very short LNs, consistent with the length of the notes in the song.
i actually try to add small holds and igrone the svs change but they're are bad really, so this balance patterns compared with sv are fit together, i tested all svs i made, with this too, i can get no 200 100 50 or miss either

04:30:681 -

04:30:681 (270681|0,271034|0) -
04:30:681 (270681|2,271034|1,271387|0) - Rearrange to these positions so it's not one long straight jack;
i would like a make a mini jack here to fit with the vocal (kick), however, i was put them on right side before but it's too hard to catch it well so I ctrl + h it, i fc that part but i doesn't notice i get easy 300 or not but it's a very easy to catch all of them now
As well as to resimulate the sort of downward stairs presented here;
^

05:22:387 -

Same issue as I have with 01:42:152 - 05:22:387 (322387|6,322740|6,323093|6,323446|6,323799|6,324152|6,324504|6,324857|6,325210|6) - for kick; 05:22:387 (322387|4,322740|4,323093|4,323446|4,323799|4,324152|4,324504|4,324857|4,325210|4) - kick too (extra); 05:22:720 - hihat and 05:22:387 (322387|0,322563|1,322740|2,322916|0,323093|1,323269|2,323446|0,323622|1,323799|2,323975|1,324152|0,324328|2,324504|1,324681|0,324857|2,325034|1,325210|0) - for snare ; i actually can make a repetitive patterns on here but i like something different and make a little balance patterns here

Otherwise a fairly solid chart and I commend you for it!