Sorry for the huge delay.
LET THE BASS KICK
AYY. Like we talked in Discord about the OD/HP. Please consider to change it. Even when the Map is pretty easy to play, the ending is very dense and yeah.. HP 9,5 is nono.
00:16:740 (16740|0,16740|4,16740|2,17093|2,17093|4,17093|0) - would like to know why you used there three notes notes suddenly. This sound isn't louder, also no additional sound in this, at least for me D:
00:22:210 (22210|4,22563|3) - These two notes have the same Pitch. Even when the Keysound file is different, the pitch is same, you could put them on the same column.
00:45:681 - Suggestion from here to reduce the volume of the E5 Keysound (Kick) because the music is here also pretty quiet. I recommend to use 10~15% volume and make it louder when the melody get's louder from here. 00:56:975 - Like you did with the Vocal Keysound.
The kick hitsound is otherwise very loud (kinda louder than the music)
01:40:563 (100563|6,100740|6,100916|6,101093|6,101269|6,101446|6,101622|6,101799|6,101975|6,102152|6) - Are you played these 10 jacks intentional? Because i can't hear any sound or anything that could justify these pattern.
My suggestion would be following. Follows Pitch and removed the jacks.
01:51:946 (111946|1) -
Ghost note? It's same like these breaks 01:49:122 - , 01:50:534 - etc etc.
02:08:975 (128975|2,128975|5,129152|5,129152|2) - Ayy the only "jack" pattern you have in this Part, not very tragic but maybe arrange?
02:11:093 (131093|4,131093|0,131357|5,131357|1,131622|6,131622|2) - And for what are these LN's? I really can't hear there andy sound that can justify these.. I mean, something like this i could understand:
There 4 Sounds so 4 ln's would fit pretty good.. but 3?
I mean when you can explain it me, maybe i just overhear it..
02:13:210 - Add here a note? You can hear we have a really heavy cymbal here, emphasize it!
02:27:328 - From here, it's kinda sad that you doesn't look at PR (Pitch Relevancy) to make this better to feel. Especially when you use only single notes.
Following notes have the same Pitch and could be placed on the same column. However, this is just a suggestion and you are of course not forced:
02:28:034 (148034|3,148387|2) -
02:29:446 (149446|4,149799|3) -
02:32:093 (152093|2,152446|3) -
02:33:681 (153681|3,154034|2) -
02:35:093 (155093|4,155446|3) -
02:37:740 (157740|2,158093|3) -
And so on, basically every time the 1st and 3rd note have the same pitch.
Please consider to rearrange here. To follow PR is especially in the higher keymodes a really cool extra.
03:11:622 (191622|4,191975|3) - Also same Pitch
03:34:034 (214034|6,214210|6) - These notes doesn't have the same pitch. To put them on the same column seems not very effective here.
03:49:740 (229740|0,229916|0,230093|0,230269|0,230446|0,230622|0) - These Jacks doesn't fit very well, you followed probably vocal (something else doesn't make really much sense).
The vocals are "Kick, bass, bass, kick, kick" That's why i recommand to jack only the same vocal.
Use same column for "bass" and then an other column for "kick"
Maybe you like something like this:
03:56:269 - Suggestion for PR:
04:41:975 (281975|4,282328|3) - same Pitch.
Thats all