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LMT
Hi again! I think this is the second time I mod your map today ^^.
Insane
Mostly about consistency of following which instrument line you're mapping to. The main (and probably the strongest) line is the drum line so I think you should make sure at least all the prominent notes are mapped.
01:02:390 (3) - I think you sort of ignored the drum line here.
01:22:263 (3) - here as well.
01:27:804 (1) - Are you mapping by the bell (ring ding ding) line or the drum line here? If you're mapping by the bell line then there's another note where the spinner ends, I don't know but start clicking circles on the second note of the line seems weird. I'm not sure about this.
01:49:970 (6,1) - You've been following the drum line this whole part but these 2 sliders don't, maybe breaking up into a slider + a note for each of those?
01:55:894 - and 02:00:479 - There's a cymbal sound here at these positions, again it's got to do with the drum line. Maybe turning the previous circle into a slider which ends here?
02:14:046 (3) - Again drum tick not found, especially you can here a very strong snare sound at 02:14:237 -
03:01:817 - A noticeable bass kick sound here you might want to add something to it.
04:07:358 (3,4) - Between these two sliders there's a drum note that's missing. You might want to change to something that fits it more.
04:09:078 (4) - Noticeable tom sound.
Good luck on re-qualifying this map!
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Shurelia

LMT1996 wrote:

Hi again! I think this is the second time I mod your map today ^^. secong time you giving me a bit more determination
Insane
Mostly about consistency of following which instrument line you're mapping to. The main (and probably the strongest) line is the drum line so I think you should make sure at least all the prominent notes are mapped.
01:02:390 (3) - I think you sort of ignored the drum line here. yes, after a while of testing , your suggestion is good
01:22:263 (3) - here as well. ^^^
01:27:804 (1) - Are you mapping by the bell (ring ding ding) line or the drum line here? If you're mapping by the bell line then there's another note where the spinner ends, I don't know but start clicking circles on the second note of the line seems weird. I'm not sure about this. let's try that
01:49:970 (6,1) - You've been following the drum line this whole part but these 2 sliders don't, maybe breaking up into a slider + a note for each of those? naah, i'm following the vocal at here
01:55:894 - and 02:00:479 - There's a cymbal sound here at these positions, again it's got to do with the drum line. Maybe turning the previous circle into a slider which ends here? agreed
02:14:046 (3) - Again drum tick not found, especially you can here a very strong snare sound at 02:14:237 -i'm quite blind aren't i?
03:01:817 - A noticeable bass kick sound here you might want to add something to it. good
04:07:358 (3,4) - Between these two sliders there's a drum note that's missing. You might want to change to something that fits it more. yeah i pretend that i didn't hear this one
04:09:078 (4) - Noticeable tom sound i'm following the strongest sound at here.
Good luck on re-qualifying this map!
thank you thank you!
jonathanlfj
we fixed some small things in irc, lets give this another try
BeatofIke
[Easy]
  1. Reduce the drain rate lol. Normal difficulty has 3, but this one has 4.
  2. 00:11:180 (2) - Try replacing the clap with a Normal sample set on start and end of this slider. I think it sounds better with the music imo
  3. 02:08:696 (1,2) - Spacing should be 1.0x here, not 1.1x
  4. 03:47:868 (3,1) - Improve blanket?
[Solar's Normal]
  1. Good map, but I would probably increase drain rate +1 since the current drain rate is too low imo.
[Insane]
  1. 03:28:378 (6) - Shouldn't a new combo go here (and at 03:29:906) instead of 03:28:760 (1)? In addition, you should probably replace these circles at 03:28:378 (6,7) with a 1/2 slider and join this slider with the pattern group at 03:28:760 (1,2,3,4). It would be cool if you could try to make a nice star pattern with those 5 sliders 8-)
[Pho's Kaleidoscope]
  1. 03:03:728 (7) - Best star slider ever!!!!!
Nyaten's Hard is good. Anyways, call me back once you are done o3o
Topic Starter
Shurelia

BeatofIke wrote:

[Easy]
  1. Reduce the drain rate lol. Normal difficulty has 3, but this one has 4. alright
  2. 00:11:180 (2) - Try replacing the clap with a Normal sample set on start and end of this slider. I think it sounds better with the music imo sounds good to me too
  3. 02:08:696 (1,2) - Spacing should be 1.0x here, not 1.1x asfasfasgfsd
  4. 03:47:868 (3,1) - Improve blanket? i'm bad at putting blankettttt



[Insane]
  1. 03:28:378 (6) - Shouldn't a new combo go here (and at 03:29:906) instead of 03:28:760 (1)? In addition, you should probably replace these circles at 03:28:378 (6,7) with a 1/2 slider and join this slider with the pattern group at 03:28:760 (1,2,3,4). It would be cool if you could try to make a nice star pattern with those 5 sliders 8-) asdasfas yes bad combo, also for the star pattern I don't think I'm gonna use it here since I'm trying keep the current one.
Nyaten's Hard is good. Anyways, call me back once you are done o3o
Thank you !
BeatofIke
Map Qualified~
Topic Starter
Shurelia
!!
Saten


gratz
Topic Starter
Shurelia

Saten wrote:



gratz
wb saten <3
Monstrata
Solar's Normal

03:36:021 (1,1) - Risky recovery time for a Normal xP.
LigerZero
congratz Shurelia....

Selamat ya mapnya ranked juga....
riffy
A disqualification has been requested.

I have to agree with Monstrata here, the rec-very-time issue is worth considering!
Pho
Ahh mind waiting for me until weekend Shu? I want to adjust a few things from my map as well ><
shionelove
good luck i love this song and this game
Topic Starter
Shurelia
hahaha , Am I trying to rank 7 stars map ? , I don't know



@Bakari : I'll contact El Solarbeam then.
@Pho : Sure, please lemme know if you're ready.
@Everyone : Please lend me help. I don't really want to wait another 9 months just to re-qualified this map.
@shionelove : そう、いいゲームだ , カッパよし
El SolarBeam

Monstrata wrote:

Solar's Normal

03:36:021 (1,1) - Risky recovery time for a Normal xP.
changed into a new rhythm
thanks!
Topic Starter
Shurelia
Updated!

@jonathanlfj & @BeatofIke , If you please~
jonathanlfj
ok
Xinely
kalo ga ada bn mo cek gw bisa cek in beb. laptop udah gnti soalnya wkwk
BeatofIke

Pho wrote:

Ahh mind waiting for me until weekend Shu? I want to adjust a few things from my map as well ><
@Shurelia: I'll re-qualify once every GD is satisfied with their difficulty :3

EDIT: Thanks Pho for the confirmation:


Heart icon~
Niko-nyan
owo congratulations for requalify :3
lit120
grats for re-requalify!!!!!
10nya
okaeri
Topic Starter
Shurelia
Thank you (again and again) jonathanlfj!

Thank you (again) Ike!

Thank you Everyone!
LigerZero
congrats again.....

moga saja nggak DQ lagi dech
Misure
メアmoe!
Love this song, congratz :)
Yohanes
Gratz!
This time for real. :)
DeletedUser_2213373
about time lol

Congrats Shurelia !!1!11
Shimotsuki Haruka <3
Electoz
aaaaaaaaaaaa gratz
I love visual novel songssssssssss
Topic Starter
Shurelia
finalyyyy

@Electoz, I have more VNs song ready to be ranked. Feel free to check it out. Xd
Modem
Congrats Shu~ (^v^)
Kanari
congratulations Shurelia! >w<
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