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ryo (supercell) feat.chelly - Great Distance

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016년 6월 25일 토요일 at 오후 6:59:44

Artist: ryo (supercell) feat.chelly
Title: Great Distance
Source: ブレイブリーセカンド
Tags: chelly bravely second end layer opening theme square enix 吉田明彦 akihiko yoshida egoist nintendo Dailycare
BPM: 197
Filesize: 12116kb
Play Time: 01:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dailycare's Extra (5.4 stars, 464 notes)
  2. Easy (1.6 stars, 131 notes)
  3. Hard (3.52 stars, 309 notes)
  4. Insane (4.67 stars, 412 notes)
  5. Normal (2.16 stars, 188 notes)
Download: ryo (supercell) feat.chelly - Great Distance
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy -> Me
Normal -> Me
Hard -> Me
Insane -> Me
Dailycare's Extra -> Dailycare
Storyboard -> Me

BG pixiv
Last edited by Down , edited 44 times in total.
Kyouren
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Kyouren
First 1# =w=
Shmiklak
Elite Storyboarder
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Joined January 2015
Shmiklak
Second #2
Shmiklak
Elite Storyboarder
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Joined January 2015
Shmiklak
As promised

General

  1. Ask someone to check your timing, because I can't but it looks not perfect.
  2. Suggest to up setings for Easy and Normal except CS


Easy

  1. 00:16:020 (2) - place slider to 00:16:172 -
  2. 00:22:720 (1,2,3,4) - this place doesn't fit the music. Recomend to do sth like that http://puu.sh/oLKO8/f2b7b0b405.jpg
  3. 00:25:157 (1) - move to 00:25:005 - and hold to 00:26:070 -
  4. 00:26:375 (2,3,1) - make perfect triangle
  5. 00:34:903 (1,2,3,4) - looks not sexy. Change this pls. I'm lazzy to suggest sth
  6. 00:47:086 (1) - looks weird because u never before or later used sliders like that. More then one it doesn't fit the music. Yeah form of sliders should follow music too lol
  7. 00:51:959 (1) - if u want keep it, move red point to the middle of slider. Same for same sliders lol
  8. 01:07:796 (3) - (not important) fix overlaping of end with starting of 01:06:578 (1) - As u can see it's possible http://puu.sh/oLKwZ/a5a4d37b56.jpg
  9. 01:36:883 (2) - (not important) try to imrove a bit
  10. 01:47:999 (1,2,3,4) - same comment as 00:22:720 (1,2,3,4)


Normal

  1. looks okay from rythm stuffs, but patterns imo need be improved. Try to contact with me in game, I'll try to suggest u sth (maybe)


Hard

  1. Suggest to place small jumps here: 00:22:873 (2,3) - 00:23:329 (4,5) - 00:23:786 (6,1) - 00:24:243 (2,3) - and for same places at the end of diff
  2. imo that's all
Well beatmap is good, sorry for only 4 diffs, I'm really lazy to mod other (tbh my skills in modding diffs more then normal is very very small). U can contact with me in game. Maybe I'll try to say sth about highest diffs (and normal). Best of luck!
Last edited by Shmiklak , edited 1 time in total.
__Ag
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Joined July 2011
__Ag
from PM

Dailycare's Extra
00:15:487 - add a 5% volume green line，then00:15:563 - reduction

00:16:020 (4) - I think this is change to 2circles more good

00:16:477 (1) - I suggest this slider end at 00:16:629 - ,then 00:16:781 - use circle

00:18:989 - 5% volume

00:24:700 (4,1) - I think flow is not good,maybe you can move 00:24:700 (4) - to x104 y136

00:44:954 (1,2,3,1,2) - I think there is more suitable with circle，if you change，00:44:649 (1) - change it to slider

01:11:223 - miss note？

01:19:065 (3,3) - I suggest remove them

Insane
01:25:461 (4,5,1) - blanket

01:29:573 (1,1,1,1) - 5%volume green line at the slider end of each

01:47:999 (1) - remove nc

01:48:152 (2) - nc

00:15:715 (2) - dont tickslider，00:16:020 - use circle at here

00:22:720 (1) - remove nc，00:22:873 (2) - nc，then00:22:416 (5,6) - ctrl+G，00:22:720 (1,2) - ctrl+G also

Hard
00:22:720 (1) - remove nc

00:22:873 (2) - nc

00:23:939 (1) - remove nc

00:24:243 (2) - nc

00:47:695 (3,1) - blanket

I remember you，you modded my map，GL
Down
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Shmiklak wrote:

As promised

General

  1. Ask someone to check your timing, because I can't but it looks not perfect. Yes, I'll check
  2. Suggest to up setings for Easy and Normal except CS This is the best setting imo..


Easy

  1. 00:16:020 (2) - place slider to 00:16:172 -
  2. 00:22:720 (1,2,3,4) - this place doesn't fit the music. Recomend to do sth like that http://puu.sh/oLKO8/f2b7b0b405.jpg 1/2 sliders are dangerous rhythm for beginner. I will keep this.
  3. 00:25:157 (1) - move to 00:25:005 - and hold to 00:26:070 - By not fixed the above suggestion, I can't fix it
  4. 00:26:375 (2,3,1) - make perfect triangle Fixed
  5. 00:34:903 (1,2,3,4) - looks not sexy. Change this pls. I'm lazzy to suggest sth I'll take it under consideration. :)
  6. 00:47:086 (1) - looks weird because u never before or later used sliders like that. More then one it doesn't fit the music. Yeah form of sliders should follow music too lol Fixed
  7. 00:51:959 (1) - if u want keep it, move red point to the middle of slider. Same for same sliders lol Fixed
  8. 01:07:796 (3) - (not important) fix overlaping of end with starting of 01:06:578 (1) - As u can see it's possible http://puu.sh/oLKwZ/a5a4d37b56.jpg That's not my intention. :)
  9. 01:36:883 (2) - (not important) try to imrove a bit Fixed!
  10. 01:47:999 (1,2,3,4) - same comment as 00:22:720 (1,2,3,4) same comment as above


Normal

  1. looks okay from rythm stuffs, but patterns imo need be improved. Try to contact with me in game, I'll try to suggest u sth (maybe) Thanks!


Hard

  1. Suggest to place small jumps here: 00:22:873 (2,3) - 00:23:329 (4,5) - 00:23:786 (6,1) - 00:24:243 (2,3) - and for same places at the end of diff Fixed
  2. imo that's all
Well beatmap is good, sorry for only 4 diffs, I'm really lazy to mod other (tbh my skills in modding diffs more then normal is very very small). U can contact with me in game. Maybe I'll try to say sth about highest diffs (and normal). Best of luck!

__Ag wrote:

from PM

Insane
01:25:461 (4,5,1) - blanket Fixed.

01:29:573 (1,1,1,1) - 5%volume green line at the slider end of each Fixed.

01:47:999 (1) - remove nc

01:48:152 (2) - nc

00:15:715 (2) - dont tickslider，00:16:020 - use circle at here Fixed.

00:22:720 (1) - remove nc，00:22:873 (2) - nc，then00:22:416 (5,6) - ctrl+G，00:22:720 (1,2) - ctrl+G also



Hard
00:22:720 (1) - remove nc

00:22:873 (2) - nc

00:23:939 (1) - remove nc

00:24:243 (2) - nc

00:47:695 (3,1) - blanket

00:22:720 (1) - , 01:47:999 (1) - Except these note's NC, Fixed them.

I remember you，you modded my map，GL
Thanks for the mods!!
PlasticMemor
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Joined June 2015
PlasticMemor
hey from modding queue

[Insane]
00:16:781 (2,3,4,5,6) - i would spread this pattern out a little
00:36:121 (1,2) - instead of stack make a straight line
01:08:253 - add a circle here
01:29:573 (1,1,1,1,1) - i recommend hit sounding this
01:50:817 (1) - i would decrease spinner to the last white tick to look like https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/Rt7Fei9.png

here's a star
Down
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PlasticMemor wrote:

hey from modding queue

[Insane]
00:16:781 (2,3,4,5,6) - i would spread this pattern out a little Spread very slightly.
00:36:121 (1,2) - instead of stack make a straight line But, The rhythm is different.
01:08:253 - add a circle here It's very small sound. don't have to express that.
01:29:573 (1,1,1,1,1) - i recommend hit sounding this Already in here.
01:50:817 (1) - i would decrease spinner to the last white tick to look like https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/Rt7Fei9.png A good idea, but I want to match the end with other diff.

here's a star
Thanks for the mod and star! :)
sahuang
2,294 posts
Joined December 2014
sahuang
Uhhh I modded 2 maps with Dailycare's guest diff in a row lol

[Easy]

  • maybe cs3.2 or sth cuz the distance is too small..
  1. 00:15:258 (1,2,3,4) - imo the rhythm you choose here is kinda awkward
    consider sth like http://puu.sh/oP2zn/2f27ffa786.jpg
  2. 00:20:284 (1) - make it a reverse slider as 00:17:847 (1) - ,00:20:741 - is too loud to ignore
  3. 01:25:918 (1) - move up a bit for better flow
  4. 01:34:598 (3,4) - will be better if u move 4 to the left of 3
  5. 01:46:781 (2,3) - 01:44:345 (2,3,4) - inconsistent
  6. I think in easy there are many places where the rhythm catch is not good enough,not unrankable but when gameplay it can be confusing

[Normal]
  1. 00:43:431 (2) - delete and put a break between 00:42:213 (1,1) -
  2. 01:25:309 (4,1) - blanket

[Hard]
  1. 00:30:334 (2,1) - blanket?
  2. 01:19:218 (3,5) - NC?
  3. 01:23:025 (3,4) - why stack?
  4. 01:42:669 (5,6,7) -
    http://puu.sh/oP3oA/a4a25d9e5e.jpg
  5. 01:50:436 (1) - eh,why NC?

[Insane]
  1. 00:22:720 (1) - delete this and NC will feel better
  2. 00:47:543 (2,3) - blanket
  3. 00:48:152 (1,3) - ^
  4. 01:02:923 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 01:07:796 (1,2,3,4,5) - inconsistent
  5. 01:16:629 (2,4) - ctrl+G them?
  6. 01:25:614 (5,1) - blanket

[Extra]
  1. 00:12:213 (1,2,3,4,5) - i will make triangle jump here for less confusion,maybe move 5 to 197|130
  2. 00:16:020 (4) - make it 2 circles
  3. 00:16:324 (5,1) - dont stack,make a jump
  4. 00:27:898 (1,3) - 00:32:771 (1,3) - maybe not stack?sth like http://puu.sh/oP2VT/fb45c79fb1.jpg
  5. 00:36:121 (1,2,3) - still recommend not in a line
  6. 01:00:487 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - overmap
  7. Nice kiai

Tired now :? GL
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;)

sahuang wrote:

Uhhh I modded 2 maps with Dailycare's guest diff in a row lol

[Easy]

  • maybe cs3.2 or sth cuz the distance is too small..
  1. 00:15:258 (1,2,3,4) - imo the rhythm you choose here is kinda awkward
    consider sth like http://puu.sh/oP2zn/2f27ffa786.jpg 1/2 sliders are dangerous rhythm for beginner..
  2. 00:20:284 (1) - make it a reverse slider as 00:17:847 (1) - ,00:20:741 - is too loud to ignore I don't want to break this slider.
  3. 01:25:918 (1) - move up a bit for better flow Because of spacing, I can't do.
  4. 01:34:598 (3,4) - will be better if u move 4 to the left of 3 ?
  5. 01:46:781 (2,3) - 01:44:345 (2,3,4) - inconsistent Another mood here.
  6. I think in easy there are many places where the rhythm catch is not good enough,not unrankable but when gameplay it can be confusing

[Normal]
  1. 00:43:431 (2) - delete and put a break between 00:42:213 (1,1) - Fixed
  2. 01:25:309 (4,1) - blanket Fixed

[Hard]
  1. 00:30:334 (2,1) - blanket? Not intended blanket.
  2. 01:19:218 (3,5) - NC? Cool.
  3. 01:23:025 (3,4) - why stack? Why not?
  4. 01:42:669 (5,6,7) -
    http://puu.sh/oP3oA/a4a25d9e5e.jpg If so.. It occurs a jump.
  5. 01:50:436 (1) - eh,why NC? Because this is downbeat.

[Insane]
  1. 00:22:720 (1) - delete this and NC will feel better Once I'll consider..
  2. 00:47:543 (2,3) - blanket Not intended blanket.
  3. 00:48:152 (1,3) - ^ Fixed.
  4. 01:02:923 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 01:07:796 (1,2,3,4,5) - inconsistent The mood is different.
  5. 01:16:629 (2,4) - ctrl+G them? That's not my intention. ;w;
  6. 01:25:614 (5,1) - blanket 01:25:614 (5) - I did here a blanket.

Tired now :? GL
Thanks for the mod!!
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-NanoRIPE-
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Joined October 2013
-NanoRIPE-
HI ~

[Easy]
00:16:172 (2) - Move the circle to 00:16:020
00:19:065 (2) - Remove whistle and add clap
00:22:796 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make the rhythm like this http://prnt.sc/b3g8ra
00:36:121 (3) - Remove clap and add whistle
01:19:218 (1) - add whistle
01:47:999 (1,2,3,4) - Make the rhythm like this http://prnt.sc/b3gaer

[Normal]
None

[Hard]
00:19:979 (4) - add whistle
00:51:807 (4) - Remove finish
01:33:228 (1) - add finish

[Insane]
01:23:482 (1) - add finish
01:33:228 (1) - ^


[Dailycare's Extra]
Increase CS to 4
Increase AR to 9,5

Nice Storyboard btw ;)
Down
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-NanoRIPE- wrote:

HI ~

[Easy]
00:16:172 (2) - Move the circle to 00:16:020 More awkward, if so. This is the best.
00:19:065 (2) - Remove whistle and add clap Whistle is correct.
00:22:796 (1,2,3,4,1) - Make the rhythm like this http://prnt.sc/b3g8ra Fixed this rhythm another way.
00:36:121 (3) - Remove clap and add whistle Clap is correct.
01:19:218 (1) - add whistle Fixed.
01:47:999 (1,2,3,4) - Make the rhythm like this http://prnt.sc/b3gaer Fixed this rhythm another way.

[Normal]
None

[Hard]
00:19:979 (4) - add whistle Whistle is not necessary.
00:51:807 (4) - Remove finish Fixed.
01:33:228 (1) - add finish Fixed.

[Insane]
01:23:482 (1) - add finish Fixed.
01:33:228 (1) - ^ Fixed.

Nice Storyboard btw ;)
Thanks for the mod!!
Dailycare
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Joined May 2012
Dailycare

__Ag wrote:

Dailycare's Extra
00:15:487 - add a 5% volume green line，then00:15:563 - reduction // set to 20%

00:16:020 (4) - I think this is change to 2circles more good

00:16:477 (1) - I suggest this slider end at 00:16:629 - ,then 00:16:781 - use circle // not my type ;w;

00:18:989 - 5% volume // 20%!

00:24:700 (4,1) - I think flow is not good,maybe you can move 00:24:700 (4) - to x104 y136 // hmm.. better than mine lol but it seems little awkward for me too. So i'll consider better flow

00:44:954 (1,2,3,1,2) - I think there is more suitable with circle，if you change，00:44:649 (1) - change it to slider // Noooooooo it's intended TwT

01:11:223 - miss note？// No~

01:19:065 (3,3) - I suggest remove them // I turned the volume down to 30% instead of removing those. Also it might be a good choice imo!

sahuang wrote:

Uhhh I modded 2 maps with Dailycare's guest diff in a row lol xD

[Extra]
  1. 00:12:213 (1,2,3,4,5) - i will make triangle jump here for less confusion,maybe move 5 to 197|130 // moved it to 196, 128
  2. 00:16:020 (4) - make it 2 circles
  3. 00:16:324 (5,1) - dont stack,make a jump
  4. 00:27:898 (1,3) - 00:32:771 (1,3) - maybe not stack?sth like http://puu.sh/oP2VT/fb45c79fb1.jpg // oops
  5. 00:36:121 (1,2,3) - still recommend not in a line // but it seems fine for me TwT..
  6. 01:00:487 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - overmap // I agree it's overmapped.. but i think it is acceptable to use such streams following very weak sounds because it's just the highest diff
  7. Nice kiai // Thanks owo
@-NanoRIPE-
adjusted CS, but don't wanna make AR to 9.5. So only CS was changed

Thank you guys~ there were only nice mods :3

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Artist:ryo (supercell) feat.chelly
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Creator:Down
Version:Dailycare's Extra
Source:ブレイブリーセカンド
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100,368,73126,2,0,B|116:325|116:325|108:273,1,92,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,92,73431,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,92,73507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,92,73583,1,2,0:0:0:0:
23,214,73735,6,0,B|67:182|67:182|218:198,1,184
324,336,74192,2,0,L|209:324,1,92,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,214,74497,2,0,L|186:194,1,184,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,100,74954,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,100,75030,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,100,75106,6,0,L|321:88,1,92,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,20,75411,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,192,75563,2,0,P|249:138|241:90,1,92,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,48,75867,2,0,P|75:102|83:150,1,92,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,280,76172,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,280,76248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,280,76324,6,0,L|328:274,1,138,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,292,76629,2,0,L|364:195,1,92,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,100,76933,5,8,0:0:0:0:
302,103,77086,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,196,77238,5,2,0:0:0:0:
372,36,77390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,196,77543,6,0,L|178:185,1,92,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,248,77847,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,76,77999,2,0,L|298:167,1,92,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,367,78304,1,8,0:0:0:0:
361,367,78380,1,0,0:0:0:0:
361,367,78456,2,0,L|368:276,1,92,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,124,78761,5,2,0:0:0:0:
216,168,78913,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,200,79065,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,244,79218,5,8,0:0:0:0:
340,200,79370,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,168,79522,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,316,79675,5,2,0:0:0:0:
204,52,79827,1,12,0:0:0:0:
199,44,80588,6,0,L|204:154,1,92
228,224,81045,6,0,L|232:132,1,92,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,44,81350,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,136,81502,2,0,L|120:228,1,92,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,312,81730,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,312,81807,2,0,P|93:307|33:300,1,92,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,224,82111,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,364,82263,6,0,P|396:384|490:317,1,138,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,320,82568,1,8,0:0:0:0:
404,96,82720,2,0,L|412:187,1,92,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,264,82949,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,264,83025,2,0,P|438:229|510:221,1,92,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,224,83329,1,2,0:0:0:0:
492,52,83482,6,0,P|454:12|334:20,1,184,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,156,83939,2,0,P|154:171|201:149,1,92,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,112,84167,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,112,84243,2,0,L|262:220,1,92,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,48,84548,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,184,84700,6,0,P|402:172|478:160,1,92,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,228,85005,2,0,P|54:216|-22:204,1,92,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,344,85309,2,0,P|386:332|462:320,1,92,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,136,85614,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,136,85690,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,136,85766,1,2,0:0:0:0:
0,280,85918,6,0,P|50:268|126:256,1,92,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,288,86223,1,8,0:0:0:0:
393,203,86375,2,0,P|347:194|303:183,1,92,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,136,86680,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,0,86832,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,128,86984,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,8,87136,6,0,P|120:2|67:-1,1,92,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,88,87441,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,216,87593,2,0,L|180:104,1,92,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,8,87898,1,8,0:0:0:0:
68,184,88050,1,8,0:0:0:0:
68,184,88126,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,184,88202,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,72,88355,6,0,P|324:60|417:127,1,138,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,132,88659,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,120,88812,2,0,P|145:110|105:93,1,92,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,320,89116,2,0,P|264:284|298:258,1,92,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
38,254,89421,1,2,0:0:0:0:
38,254,89573,6,0,L|48:386,1,117.30000223732,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,345,89878,6,0,L|200:256,1,89.6999958938601,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,256,90182,6,0,L|127:359,1,103.500003948212,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,324,90487,6,0,L|281:273,1,50.6000015441895,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,136,90639,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,136,90791,6,0,P|305:134|248:126,1,92,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,76,91096,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,228,91248,2,0,P|341:222|387:220,1,92,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,232,91477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,232,91553,2,0,L|486:137,1,92,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,40,91857,1,2,0:0:0:0:
472,232,92010,6,0,P|476:308|413:371,1,138,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,368,92314,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,168,92466,2,0,L|416:114|420:60,1,92,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,0,92695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,0,92771,2,0,P|458:7|527:13,1,92,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,120,93076,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,0,93228,6,0,P|113:89|126:198,1,184,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,384,93685,2,0,P|283:325|320:271,1,92,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,240,93913,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,240,93989,2,0,L|453:244,1,92,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,184,94294,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,356,94446,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,144,94598,5,8,0:0:0:0:
248,340,94751,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,100,94903,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,256,95055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,192,95208,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,152,95360,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,152,95436,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,152,95512,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,192,95664,6,0,P|82:184|25:174,1,92,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,288,95969,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,100,96121,2,0,P|225:92|270:83,1,92,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,104,96426,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,260,96578,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,136,96730,1,2,0:0:0:0:
316,368,96883,6,0,L|484:348,1,138,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,360,97187,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,152,97340,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,284,97492,1,2,0:0:0:0:
508,96,97644,1,2,0:0:0:0:
501,231,97796,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,60,97949,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,296,98101,6,0,P|174:314|116:281,1,138,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,248,98406,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,80,98558,2,0,L|326:181,1,92,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,116,98862,2,0,P|189:109|234:98,1,92,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,200,99167,2,0,P|467:188|421:182,1,92,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,304,99472,6,0,P|227:259|345:282,1,184,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,248,99928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,248,100005,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,248,100081,2,0,P|51:238|1:223,1,92,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,172,100385,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,352,100538,6,0,P|275:259|290:138,1,184,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,0,100994,2,0,P|108:45|114:95,1,92,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,272,101299,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,112,101451,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,272,101603,2,0,P|172:317|166:367,1,92,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,144,101908,5,8,0:0:0:0:
307,230,102060,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,285,102213,5,8,0:3:0:0:
253,102,102365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,144,102517,5,4,0:3:0:0:
307,230,102669,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,285,102822,5,8,0:0:0:0:
253,102,102974,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,12,103126,6,0,P|75:58|80:122,1,92,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,144,103355,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,144,103431,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,368,103583,6,0,L|179:322|182:276,1,92,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,236,103812,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,236,103888,1,0,0:0:0:0:
374,317,104040,6,0,P|415:259|393:168,1,138,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,164,104345,5,8,0:0:0:0:
260,292,104497,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,164,104649,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,292,104801,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,364,104954,2,0,L|375:271,1,92
276,100,105258,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,100,105563,6,0,P|222:98|165:92,1,92,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,88,105791,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,88,105867,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,176,106020,6,0,P|429:171|475:170,1,92,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,164,106248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
508,164,106324,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,276,106477,6,0,P|260:244|152:256,1,138,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,268,106781,6,0,L|149:212,1,46,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,328,106933,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,244,107086,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,200,107238,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,348,107390,5,2,0:0:0:0:
136,248,107543,1,2,0:0:0:0:
148,148,107695,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,48,107847,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,48,108152,6,0,L|229:55,1,46,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,156,108304,2,0,P|324:179|260:157,1,138,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,127,108609,6,0,L|238:196,1,46,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,384,108761,2,0,L|321:246,1,138,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,212,109065,6,0,L|284:213,1,46,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
85,188,109218,2,0,P|118:152|234:176,1,138,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,172,109522,6,0,L|232:126,1,46,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,4,109675,1,12,0:0:0:0:
320,80,109827,2,0,P|359:73|443:64,1,92,2|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
140,160,110131,2,0,P|101:153|17:144,1,92,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,212,110436,6,0,P|381:208|421:206,1,46,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,280,110588,2,0,P|111:276|71:274,1,46,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,110817,12,0,115309,0:0:0:0:
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m4m

[이지]
00:15:258 (1,2) - 초보자들한테 2/3박 리딩은 어려울거라 예상됩니다, 00:12:822 (1) - 이거랑 똑같이 리버스슬라 쓰시는게 어떤가요
00:39:776 (1,2) - ^
01:35:664 (1,2) - 이런것도 살짝 어려울거라 예상하는데.... 일단 잘 모르겟네요 이런거는
01:44:649 (3,1) - 블랭킷

[노말]
00:21:807 (4,5) - 이렇게 있는 흐름은 조금 어려울 거라 예상됩니다. 이렇게 해보시는건 어떤가요
00:31:857 (5,1) - ^
00:54:395 (1,2) - 두개 평행을 노리신거 같은데 정확하지 않습니다/.
01:21:045 (1) - 이거를 01:19:675 (2) - 얘 꼬리에 스택하는게 나을것 같은데요
01:23:482 (1,4) - 머리끼리 스택

[하드]
00:22:873 (2) - 뉴콤보
01:48:152 (2) - ^

[인세인]
01:21:045 (1,3) - 오버랩 피해주세요
01:22:720 (2,3,4) - 스택 에러
01:24:091 (3,4,5,6,7) - 정삼각형
01:25:461 (4,1) - 블랭킷
01:30:791 (1,3) - 오버랩 피해주세요
01:47:999 (1,2) - 컨트롤지 하시고 2번에 뉴콤보
01:50:436 (1) - 연타로 해주세요

엑스트라 볼줄몰라요
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Neoskylove wrote:

m4m

[이지]
00:15:258 (1,2) - 초보자들한테 2/3박 리딩은 어려울거라 예상됩니다, 00:12:822 (1) - 이거랑 똑같이 리버스슬라 쓰시는게 어떤가요 이지에서 2/3박이 언랭요소가 아닌이상 두고싶어요. 이부분만 이렇게 둔 이유는 분위기상 다른부분이라고 생각해서 입니다.
00:39:776 (1,2) - ^ ^
01:35:664 (1,2) - 이런것도 살짝 어려울거라 예상하는데.... 일단 잘 모르겟네요 이런거는 ^
01:44:649 (3,1) - 블랭킷 전혀 블랭킷의도가 아닙니다.

[노말]
00:21:807 (4,5) - 이렇게 있는 흐름은 조금 어려울 거라 예상됩니다. 이렇게 해보시는건 어떤가요 Fixed.
00:31:857 (5,1) - ^ Fixed.
00:54:395 (1,2) - 두개 평행을 노리신거 같은데 정확하지 않습니다/. 최대한 노력 해봤습니다.
01:21:045 (1) - 이거를 01:19:675 (2) - 얘 꼬리에 스택하는게 나을것 같은데요 괜찮다고 생각해요.
01:23:482 (1,4) - 머리끼리 스택 스택의도가 아닙니다.

[하드]
00:22:873 (2) - 뉴콤보 Fixed.
01:48:152 (2) - ^ Fixed.

[인세인]
01:21:045 (1,3) - 오버랩 피해주세요 의도된 오버랩 패턴입니다.
01:22:720 (2,3,4) - 스택 에러 Fixed.
01:24:091 (3,4,5,6,7) - 정삼각형 흐름상 이렇게두는게 낫습니다.
01:25:461 (4,1) - 블랭킷 그 노트에 담요를 씌운게 아닙니다.
01:30:791 (1,3) - 오버랩 피해주세요 의도된 오버랩 패턴입니다.
01:47:999 (1,2) - 컨트롤지 하시고 2번에 뉴콤보 앞부분에서 사용한 같은패턴이라 두겠습니다.
01:50:436 (1) - 연타로 해주세요 곡 전체적으로 5연타이상을 사용한 부분이 있다면 이곳을 연타로 두겠는데 그런게 아닙니다. 마지막 부분만 연타로 두면 이상해질듯 해서 두겠습니다.

엑스트라 볼줄몰라요
Good luck
감사합니다!!
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Hello~~ o/


<Easy>

  1. 00:15:258 (1,2,3,4) - Weird rhythm to me lol... try this:
  2. 00:22:873 (1,2) - Hmm follow the cymbal??
  3. 00:25:005 (1) - Add finish
  4. 01:48:152 (1,2) - Same as what I suggested at 00:22:873 (1,2) -
<Normal>

  1. OD should be 4, 3 is too easy as a Normal~
  2. 00:17:695 - Maybe delete it?? The note is not necessary and consider the high BPM, too many 1/2 here IMO :3
  3. 00:21:502 - Delete clap add whistle?? Becasue you add whistle at 00:19:065 - o.o
  4. 00:22:873 (1,2,3,4) - Rotate them a bit? (maybe 10 degrees) ....Looks too straight to me lol
  5. 00:27:746 - Add a note here
  6. 01:47:238 - Maybe delete it??
  7. 01:49:827 (5) - I think this slider isn't necessary... maybe you can just delete it... sounds weird to me~ o.o
<Hard>

  1. 00:21:502 (1,2,3,4) - You can make it better! Like this: http://puu.sh/oZzLc/32eb0db16a.jpg
    436,82,21502,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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    386,10,22111,2,0,L|340:56,1,65,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    301,130,22416,2,0,L|364:148,1,65,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:42:213 - Add a 20% Green Line here fits the music better~ (Add 55% back at 00:44:649 - )
  3. 01:02:923 (1) - Put on the middle of 01:01:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - looks better??
  4. 01:05:360 (1) - ehhh same as ^
  5. 01:18:761 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I don't like the pattern.. maybe try to change it?? ;w;
  6. 01:49:065 (1,2,1,2) - Maybe Make the DS a bit larger?? Players may misread here o.o
<Insane>

  1. 00:20:741 (3,4) - Blanket better??
  2. 00:22:720 (1,2) - Ctrl + G??
  3. 00:36:730 (4) - Should be a slider to follow the music better :3
  4. 00:42:213 (1) - Same as what I said in Hard Diff.
  5. 00:52:416 (2,3) - Blanket improve plz~
  6. 01:13:888 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ehh bad flow here... try another pattern?
  7. 01:47:999 (1,2) - Ctrl + G??
  8. 01:49:827 (3,4,5,6,7) - Too close, plz seperate them~~
<Dailycare's Extra>

  1. 00:44:954 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I have a idea here, first reverse 00:45:258 (2) - then reverse 00:45:563 (3) -
    then reverse 00:45:867 (1) - and finally you will see the flow is amazing!!~ xD
  2. 00:42:213 (1) - Same as what I said in Hard Diff o.o
  3. Nice Diff.
OK that's all~~

Good Luck Down! ^^/
Down
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Topic Starter
Down

Dino99 wrote:

Hello~~ o/


<Easy>

  1. 00:15:258 (1,2,3,4) - Weird rhythm to me lol... try this: Fixed.
  2. 00:22:873 (1,2) - Hmm follow the cymbal?? I think that this rhythm is better :3
  3. 00:25:005 (1) - Add finish Fixed.
  4. 01:48:152 (1,2) - Same as what I suggested at 00:22:873 (1,2) - Same as above~
<Normal>

  1. OD should be 4, 3 is too easy as a Normal~ Fixed.
  2. 00:17:695 - Maybe delete it?? The note is not necessary and consider the high BPM, too many 1/2 here IMO :3 If I delete that, these rhythm sounds awkward.
  3. 00:21:502 - Delete clap add whistle?? Becasue you add whistle at 00:19:065 - o.o Background music has a sound of bass drum here. Otherwise, The front part has sound of snare. So now hitsounding is not wrong :)
  4. 00:22:873 (1,2,3,4) - Rotate them a bit? (maybe 10 degrees) ....Looks too straight to me lol I'll consider it. Is hard to fix now ;w;
  5. 00:27:746 - Add a note here I think that three layer notes are hard to 'Normal' player.
  6. 01:47:238 - Maybe delete it?? Now is better. IMO
  7. 01:49:827 (5) - I think this slider isn't necessary... maybe you can just delete it... sounds weird to me~ o.o It feel empty if delete.
<Hard>

  1. 00:21:502 (1,2,3,4) - You can make it better! Like this: http://puu.sh/oZzLc/32eb0db16a.jpg
    436,82,21502,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    436,82,21654,2,0,L|454:154,2,65,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    386,10,22111,2,0,L|340:56,1,65,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    301,130,22416,2,0,L|364:148,1,65,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    Thanks! I pasted the code!
  2. 00:42:213 - Add a 20% Green Line here fits the music better~ (Add 55% back at 00:44:649 - ) Fixed.
  3. 01:02:923 (1) - Put on the middle of 01:01:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - looks better?? Fixed.
  4. 01:05:360 (1) - ehhh same as ^ Fixed.
  5. 01:18:761 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I don't like the pattern.. maybe try to change it?? ;w; Stacked two each notes.
  6. 01:49:065 (1,2,1,2) - Maybe Make the DS a bit larger?? Players may misread here o.o Fixed.
<Insane>

  1. 00:20:741 (3,4) - Blanket better?? Fixed.
  2. 00:22:720 (1,2) - Ctrl + G?? I want to keep this pattern.
  3. 00:36:730 (4) - Should be a slider to follow the music better :3 I think now is better :3
  4. 00:42:213 (1) - Same as what I said in Hard Diff. Fixed.
  5. 00:52:416 (2,3) - Blanket improve plz~ This is enough. lol
  6. 01:13:888 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ehh bad flow here... try another pattern? Slightly fixed!
  7. 01:47:999 (1,2) - Ctrl + G?? I want to keep this pattern.
  8. 01:49:827 (3,4,5,6,7) - Too close, plz seperate them~~ Fixed.
OK that's all~~

Good Luck Down! ^^/
Thank you for the helpful mod!
Dailycare
Beatmap Nominator
1,073 posts
Joined May 2012
Dailycare

Dino99 wrote:

<Dailycare's Extra>

  1. 00:44:954 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I have a idea here, first reverse 00:45:258 (2) - then reverse 00:45:563 (3) -
    then reverse 00:45:867 (1) - and finally you will see the flow is amazing!!~ xD     // wow it's pretty nice.. thanks a lot!
  2. 00:42:213 (1) - Same as what I said in Hard Diff o.o
  3. Nice Diff. // ^^b
thanks for mod~!

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DeRandom Otaku
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DeRandom Otaku


Dailycare's Extra

  1. 00:44:649 (1) - replace with 1/2 slider or add circle at 00:44:801 -
  2. 00:56:528 (1) - remove nc?
  3. 00:57:136 (2) - move left to x:61
  4. 00:58:507 (4,1) - make proper blanket?
  5. 01:23:482 (1) - move it down . its touches my progress bar
  6. 01:42:517 (1,2,1,2) - u could increase DS between these

Insane

  1. 00:21:197 (4) - move down to y:313
  2. 00:31:857 (3) - move to 329,235
  3. 00:39:167 (2,4) - nazi blanket
  4. 00:52:416 (2) - move to 274,247
  5. 01:09:319 (3) - move right to x:424
  6. 01:32:923 (6) - move up to y:177
  7. 01:37:644 (5) - move right to x:302
Thats all from me , GL!~
Dailycare
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1,073 posts
Joined May 2012
Dailycare

DeRandom Otaku wrote:

Dailycare's Extra

  1. 00:44:649 (1) - replace with 1/2 slider or add circle at 00:44:801 - // don't want to make 00:44:801 - clickable ;w;
  2. 00:56:528 (1) - remove nc? // needs for separate jumps
  3. 00:57:136 (2) - move left to x:61
  4. 00:58:507 (4,1) - make proper blanket? // 00:58:507 (4,5,1) - Each slider's head makes triangle..
  5. 01:23:482 (1) - move it down . its touches my progress bar
  6. 01:42:517 (1,2,1,2) - u could increase DS between these // I'll consider fixing it xd
thanks!

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DeRandom Otaku wrote:



Insane

  1. 00:21:197 (4) - move down to y:313
  2. 00:31:857 (3) - move to 329,235
  3. 00:39:167 (2,4) - nazi blanket
  4. 00:52:416 (2) - move to 274,247
  5. 01:09:319 (3) - move right to x:424
  6. 01:32:923 (6) - move up to y:177
  7. 01:37:644 (5) - move right to x:302
Fixed all of nazi issue~
Thats all from me , GL!~
Thanks for the mod!
Zero__wind
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M4M from my queue

General
hitsound suggestions can work for other diffs as well
the volume of your soft-hitfinish99.wav is really low which makes it hardly noticeable in the map. better raise its volume up!

Easy
00:12:822 (1) - having a finish on head to emphasize the downbeat would be great!
00:16:781 (3,4) - why not whistle on all these 3 beats to follow the drum?
00:17:847 (1) - why no finish on head? you have a finish at 00:20:284 (1) - and they should be the same as I suppose
00:49:522 (1,2,3) - this doesn't flow really good imo, try to get rid of the blanket and make it like this?
01:06:578 (1) - a whistle at end should fit the music nicely
01:09:015 (1) - ^
01:24:700 (3) - missing whistle at the reversing point

Normal
00:38:101 (2,3) - it's not recommended to stack 1/2 beats like this when you already had many 1/1 stacks like 00:27:593 (1,2) - 00:30:639 (2,3) - , new players can easily get confused by the stacking notes. better just unstack 00:38:101 (2,3) - and keep the 1.0x ds instead like 00:16:477 (3,4,5) -
01:33:076 (5,1) - ^
01:01:096 (4) - I believe it should have the same hitsounds as 01:00:487 (3) - , they are really similar to each other
01:50:436 (6) - maybe add a circle here

Hard
00:19:979 (4) - whistle on head instead should match with the music better
00:22:720 (1) - no, I don't think this NC is anything necessary, please remove it to avoid misleading
01:47:999 (1) - ^
00:24:548 (1) - same here, it's obvious that in the former pattern 00:22:873 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - you have a 1/1 beat gap between every NC, so the NC on 00:24:548 (1) - can be really confusing, people may think there's 1/1 beat gap between 00:24:395 (2,1) - but in fact there's not
01:49:827 (1) - ^
00:49:827 (2) - where's the whistle on head?
01:01:705 (1,1,1,1) - this NC usage is very good
01:41:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this pattern is kinda too hard for this diff, consider make it easier.

Insane
00:32:771 (3) - this 3/4 slider feels really weird, it'd be better to stick to the 1/2 guitar beats instead
00:36:730 (4,5) - the spacing is kinda small here imo, maybe move 4 down a bit (or move 3 and 4 together)
01:03:989 (5) - I think adding a circle here can make the rhythm really interesting (just keep even distance between 01:03:837 (4,1) - ) . also at 01:06:426 (5) -
01:50:741 (2) - flows better at around (176,128) imo

Dailycare's Extra
00:19:675 (3,4) - I don't think the big jumps follow the music well, the keyboard melody in the music is getting weaker and weaker from 00:19:218 - to 00:20:131 - , so it could be much better if you larger spacing for 00:19:065 (1,2) - and smaller spacing for 00:19:675 (3,4) -
00:21:654 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is much better
00:44:649 (1) - I think this NC is not necessary and could be removed
00:58:964 (5,1) - I think the spacing is a bit small here, I'm expecting a larger jump at 1 to emphasize the downbeat
01:12:365 (1) - this NC is really redundant, better remove it to keep consistency
01:17:238 (1) - ^

generally your hitsounding is really inconsistent between diffs and betweendifferent parts of the music, try to the compare the hitsounds you used in the similar parts such as the part from 00:17:847 - with the part from 01:43:126 - . recheck if you're using the same thing for the same music. consistency is really important! and I think you could add a lot more finish sounds at heavy beats like 00:15:258 (1) -

that's all for me
good luck
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Zero__wind wrote:

M4M from my queue

General
hitsound suggestions can work for other diffs as well
the volume of your soft-hitfinish99.wav is really low which makes it hardly noticeable in the map. better raise its volume up! I raise the volume to 90%.

Easy
00:12:822 (1) - having a finish on head to emphasize the downbeat would be great! Fixed.
00:16:781 (3,4) - why not whistle on all these 3 beats to follow the drum? I forgot it.. Fixed.
00:17:847 (1) - why no finish on head? you have a finish at 00:20:284 (1) - and they should be the same as I suppose Fixed.
00:49:522 (1,2,3) - this doesn't flow really good imo, try to get rid of the blanket and make it like this? Nice suggestion! I followed it.
01:06:578 (1) - a whistle at end should fit the music nicely Fixed.
01:09:015 (1) - ^ Fixed.
01:24:700 (3) - missing whistle at the reversing point Fixed.

Normal
00:38:101 (2,3) - it's not recommended to stack 1/2 beats like this when you already had many 1/1 stacks like 00:27:593 (1,2) - 00:30:639 (2,3) - , new players can easily get confused by the stacking notes. better just unstack 00:38:101 (2,3) - and keep the 1.0x ds instead like 00:16:477 (3,4,5) - Fixed.
01:33:076 (5,1) - ^ Fixed.
01:01:096 (4) - I believe it should have the same hitsounds as 01:00:487 (3) - , they are really similar to each other but I can't listen the snare sound in here.
01:50:436 (6) - maybe add a circle here I want to keep it in Normal diff.

Hard
00:19:979 (4) - whistle on head instead should match with the music better Fixed.
00:22:720 (1) - no, I don't think this NC is anything necessary, please remove it to avoid misleading Fixed.
01:47:999 (1) - ^ Fixed.
00:24:548 (1) - same here, it's obvious that in the former pattern 00:22:873 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - you have a 1/1 beat gap between every NC, so the NC on Fixed.
00:24:548 (1) - can be really confusing, people may think there's 1/1 beat gap between 00:24:395 (2,1) - but in fact there's not Fixed.
01:49:827 (1) - ^ Fixed.
00:49:827 (2) - where's the whistle on head? idk..
01:01:705 (1,1,1,1) - this NC usage is very good
01:41:908 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this pattern is kinda too hard for this diff, consider make it easier. Fixed.

Insane
00:32:771 (3) - this 3/4 slider feels really weird, it'd be better to stick to the 1/2 guitar beats instead Fixed.
00:36:730 (4,5) - the spacing is kinda small here imo, maybe move 4 down a bit (or move 3 and 4 together) Just move (4) down.
01:03:989 (5) - I think adding a circle here can make the rhythm really interesting (just keep even distance between 01:03:837 (4,1) - ) . also at 01:06:426 (5) - Good rhythm, but I want to keep this pattern.
01:50:741 (2) - flows better at around (176,128) imo Fixed.

generally your hitsounding is really inconsistent between diffs and betweendifferent parts of the music, try to the compare the hitsounds you used in the similar parts such as the part from 00:17:847 - with the part from 01:43:126 - . recheck if you're using the same thing for the same music. consistency is really important! and I think you could add a lot more finish sounds at heavy beats like 00:15:258 (1) - Thank you for the hit sounding suggestion. I just followed the real drum sound in BGM. I put the whistle when I heard the snare sound, and the rest hitsound is the same way. So I want to keep it although there is inconsistence. :)

that's all for me
good luck
Thanks for the mod!!
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