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Lily Bread

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Lily Bread 2016-01-25T13:58:53+00:00

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Snowy Wings wrote:
不好意思拖了几天:P
//不会不会，本来就是你送摸

Here We Go

[General]
Tags加上"m1223961117"
//以前的用户名不用加的
查了一下，这音乐好像是崩坏学园2的，那么改一下Tags吧
//唔，还是这样吧，我觉得没有人会去搜“崩坏学园2”，要搜也应该是搜“崩坏学园”
既然谱曲的蔡近翰有在Tags里面，那也加上"梦璟SAYA"、"郑小宇"、"夏轶瀚"吧
//saya是附赠的日语版的艺术家，不用加
//剩下两个加了

以上资料来自百度百科

[Singer]
00:28:050 (6,7,8,9,10) - 试试这样摆？
SPOILER
//...这也太难了
00:28:425 (10) - 这个应该是soft finish
//好
00:30:113 - 00:42:113 感觉这里BPM应该*0.75比较合适，0.9什么的变化太小了点
~~//嗯...可以，虽然有点麻烦~~
//还是0.9吧...0.75太慢了
00:30:113 (1) - finish，顺便吐槽一下CS2：finish的音太大声了，这个音最好用绿线把声音调低一些。
//应该用哨子，因为跟的是钢琴
00:31:238 (4) - Ctrl+G强调这个音00:31:613 (1) -
//不知道为什么要强调..这里完全跟的是钢琴，或是背景的嚓嚓声
00:32:738 (4) - ^
//同上
00:34:800 (2) - 建议NewCombo一下
//为什么？
00:41:175 (4,5,6,7,8) - 这几个角度不太对吧，至少00:41:363 (5,6,7,8) - 这四个和00:40:613 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个的圈的角度得一致吧
//事实上后面四个本来是由前面四个旋转得到的...我自己都忘了，然后前面有人提我一改，就改乱了。现在改回去了
00:46:613 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个音应该跟00:34:613 (1,2,3,4) - 这里一样吧，摆法也应该差不多，如果你是想和前面嘭嘭嘭声音的摆法相同的话最好 00:47:363 - 这里加个圈
//做得一样的话又要被说太重复...而且因为有 - 00:47:738 (5) - 的存在，做成那样的话DS比较难处理
00:52:613 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 用绿线调声音渐变
//好
00:54:113 (1) - soft-whistle
00:56:363 - soft-whistle
00:58:238 - ^
00:59:550 - 00:59:738 - ^
//都加上啦
00:59:644 - 加个圈？
//不想跟
00:54:113 - 这里用绿线降低滑条速度
//按我这理解，的确应该降SV，我改改
01:03:113 - 这里应该BPM*1.25吧
/*
为什么？这种鼓点我见过，
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/781766
主难度
00:55:938 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
当时也没人跟我说要改BPM呀..
你是说SV*1.25吗？
试了一下效果不好，不过我把 - 01:05:363 (3) - 的SV降低一下，感觉效果不错
*/
01:03:113 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 这一段我推荐个音效下法：2、6、9、10 whistle，3、4、5、8 finish
//好，不过1没音效显然不合适
01:04:894 - 01:05:175 - 上一条有改的话这里也加上whistle
//好
01:05:644 - 加个圈，把01:05:363 (3) - 和01:05:738 (4,5,6,7) - 串起来
//这个是破坏音乐结构的overmap，不好。
//要改也是把- 01:05:363 (3) -变成3/4，但是这里听起来不好所以就不改了
01:15:300 (3,7) - clap， 01:15:956 - 01:16:425 - 01:16:519 - clap, 01:16:331 - whistle。用来强调01:16:613 (1) -
//这个是怎么回事..听起来好乱..你是不是写错时间了？前面两个改了
01:16:988 (3) - 这个应该需要再加个whistle
//改了
01:17:363 - 这是不是少了个finish，背景有kiang的声音
//为了说明我跟的是vocal，所以用的哨子..其它我的难度也是一样，跟finish才用finish的音效，跟vocal就用哨子
01:18:488 (2) - 这个摆太高了，挡到血条
//F5 test, 没问题
01:25:238 (8,9) - 8的finish应该加在9那
//嗯，而且改成clap了

[Insane]
00:16:988 (2) - 移动到x=420，y=276。因为对称。有改的话顺便把00:17:363 (3,4,5) - 也移动一下
//ok
00:25:988 (2) - 形状和位置不太对，应该由 00:25:238 (4) - Ctrl+>两次得到。顺便00:25:613 (1) - 移动到x=256,y=235
//这里是为了flow..像hard那样做中心对称的话滑条一长，flow就非常别扭
00:27:113 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个好像不是正五边形，用Ctrl+Shift+D改一下
//我就是用工具做的，这肯定是正五边形。应该是因为背景的网格让你出现了视觉误差
00:28:050 (1,2,3,4,5) - 由00:27:113 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ctrl+Shift+S(Selection Centre) -> *0.5 -> 再*0.7 得到

SPOILER
//跟上面一样，太难了...我也不喜欢这种挤成一坨的梗
00:28:425 (10) - soft-finish
//好
00:30:113 (1) - finish
//钢琴用哨子
00:41:738 (7,8) - Ctrl+G,因为00:40:613 (1,2,3,4) - 和00:41:363 (5,6,7,8) - 这两组音不一样。
//这里是改不改都可以的那种地方...所以不改
00:42:113 (1) - 00:42:863 (3) - 00:43:613 (1) - 00:45:113 (1) - 00:45:863 (3) - 这几个滑条尾都弄成sampleset soft吧，怎么这Insane这里的音比Singer还多
//被你一说发现确实不太对..统统改成1/1单点
00:56:363 - soft-whistle
00:58:238 - soft-whistle
00:59:550 - 00:59:738 - soft-whistle
//好
01:03:113 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 参考Singer
//ok

[Hard]
00:15:863 (3,4) - 00:16:988 (2,3) - 这算不算blanket问题
//还是那句话，我的diff里完全没有做blanket。对称还做blanket的话会非常非常单调
00:30:113 (1) - finish
//不要，钢琴用哨子
00:34:800 - 把这个音拆出来，叠在00:35:175 (3,4) - 这里怎样。
//这种不DS的梗在hard里就真的太难了
00:56:363 - soft-whistle
00:58:238 - soft-whistle
00:59:550 - 00:59:738 - soft-whistle
//都改了
01:17:363 - finish
//跟人声用哨子
01:17:363 (4) - NewCombo
//好

[Normal]
Normal,AR4
//为什么？
00:10:613 (2) - Newcombo
//不，低难度2小节1NC
01:17:363 (4) - 这里还是跟人声吧
//一样是改不改都有道理的地方，所以我不改

[Easy]
Easy,AR3
//easy是AR3呀...

美丽
不改的地方请写点理由:3 不明白的地方欢迎PM我。
//nope的话我一直都有写理由的..除非modder没写理由

good luck!

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Lily Bread

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Lily Bread 2016-01-25T14:36:12+00:00

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T-Mac wrote:
[General]

最高的三个难度4.2 4.4 4.67，感觉好像太多
//没问题，insane有多少个都可以

[Singer]

00:04:613 (1) - 这个滑条尾的音量感觉还是大了一点，因为能比较清楚的听到，其实感觉应该要消音的
//这里确实有钢琴音呀....

00:18:675 (3,4,5) - 这节奏感觉好像有点不太好，个人意见是跟别的地方比如 00:17:363 (3,4,5,6) - 这里一样，还有这个00:20:550 (5) - ，这种鼓点放滑条尾，感觉不算是一个好的选择，3连加一个1/2滑条感觉挺好的，也不用担心多放导致的节奏太单调 ~~再单调不如 dnb~~
/*
你说的都没错，滑条尾clap是不好。但是为了难度和变化，这样做也没问题。这种下法随处可见。
不过我还是改了吧..我自己听着也不舒服..自己的insane就是按你说的那样下物件的
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00:27:863 (5) - 这地方我感觉要nc而且要和前四个分开放，前四个和第五个用了一通的音效也能看出来，这两个之间是不一样的，这时候还是这样叠起来的话可能就不太好，另外00:28:425 (10) - 建议用滑条或者转盘来表现这个有延续的声音
//我想想都该怎么改

00:40:613 (1) - 这种跳感觉在2012-13年的图里面见的比较多
//对，但是用在钢琴上很合适

00:42:113 (1) - 这种地方不如直接放在xy轴好了，另外00:45:863 (3) - （256，192）
//重新放过了

00:46:613 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个地方的节奏和间距不太能理解
/*
节奏：前四个只跟钢琴，滑条只跟鼓点
间距：1/2互相叠，1/1互相叠
*/

01:12:488 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这种地方flow太顺好像也不太好
//该变flow的地方是 - 01:13:613 (1) - ，这里顺没什么问题

01:18:488 (2) - 这地方感觉漏了音效，应该放的是那种比较清脆的鼓声，不是现在放的那种比较闷的
//呃？这是24clap呀..

01:30:113 (1) - 结尾加转盘
//讨厌转盘所以不放

另外音效还可以多下点，建议专门找个音效的摸
//嗯嗯

[Insane]

00:10:613 (1) - ctrl+G？
//这里没必要跳啦..本来就只是为了强迫玩家听完前奏而已（

00:17:738 (6) - 00:19:613 (1) - 00:22:613 (1) - 不严格的对称
//有些地方我确实无能为力呀..用最小的网格也对齐不了。不用网格就更不可能了..

00:27:113 (1,2,3,4,5) - 不严格的五边形
//我就是用工具做的，这肯定是正五边形。应该是因为背景的网格让你出现了视觉误差

00:30:488 (2,3,4) - 00:31:988 (2,3,4) - 不严格的120度梗
//修起来有点麻烦..我是看不出有哪歪了

00:28:425 (10) - Singer↑
//↑

00:52:613 (1) - 卧槽这么个跳好难看，我猜你的本意是这样的 111
//好的..这里我猜应该是什么时候不小心碰到了..

01:30:113 (1) - Singer↑
//↑

另外感觉这最后的跳放的比主难度还多啊
//单跳可比主难度的1/4滑条跳好打多啦

[Hard]

00:28:425 - Singer↑
//↑

01:05:363 (2,1) - 01:17:363 (4,1) - hard的话感觉这种变速就不是很有必要了
//就算不明显我也要做出这个意思来

01:30:113 (1) - Singer↑
//↑

[Normal]

00:10:613 (2) - nc呢？
//低难度2小节1NC

00:31:238 (2) - 很明显这个应该出现在y轴上，00:30:113 (1,3) - 这两个相应的动一下
//这样的话下面就太挤了..本来是想放Y轴的

01:25:613 (2) - nc，另外这两个可以照y轴做对称啊
//NC不要，对称好

01:30:113 (1) - Singer↑
//↑

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Snowy Wings

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Snowy Wings 2016-01-25T15:11:26+00:00

吐槽和补充:P

[singer]
00:28:050 (6,7,8,9,10) - 这个那样摆其实不难，你这singer难度既然排在insane后面，那就是代表高难度insane或者低难度EX咯，这差不多是我能打的图，至少我觉得这种连打不难。另外这么摆还有个目的是把00:28:050 (6) - 叠在00:27:113 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里，估计你不改，那我建议吧那个横着的一串叠过来吧
00:30:113 - 00:42:113 - 这个SV变化*0.9说实话我感觉≈没有变，而且背景音乐明显安静下来了很多，这里用0.75才比较合适。（当然我估计你应该还是不改-.-）
00:30:113 (1) - 这个加finish是想用来作这一段的开头音，没有跟钢琴的意思，这种空明的音效放这里感觉很合适。
00:31:238 (4) - 00:32:738 (4) - 这Ctrl+G的强调是指玩家玩的时候的感觉，原本是很顺的打到这个00:31:613 (1) - ，反向之后并不会不顺，反倒有种滑条滑出去再快速的快感（额，这词感觉有点不对...），你可以试着玩一下
00:34:800 (2) - 这个啊，前后间距不一致啊，两个音的间隔也不一样啊。
00:47:175 (3,4) - 这个不改会有读图问题的...
01:15:300 (3,7) - clap， 01:15:956 - 01:16:425 - 01:16:519 - clap, 01:16:331 - whistle。这个是自创音效，没有跟什么，只是觉得这么下音效听起来爽:P（不过这里我听了N次感觉都很不错，连着前面一起听也没有特别的违和，既然你不喜欢那也没办法╮(╯_╰)╭)
[Insane]
00:27:113 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个我又看了一下，绝对不是正五边，00:27:113 (1,5) - 这两个的间距多了0.14，可能是你不小心动到了。

另外Easy的AR我给看错了(￣ε(#￣)╰╮o(￣皿￣)

Lily Bread

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Lily Bread 2016-01-26T07:55:14+00:00

Snowy Wings wrote:
吐槽和补充:P
[singer]
00:28:050 (6,7,8,9,10) - 这个那样摆其实不难，你这singer难度既然排在insane后面，那就是代表高难度insane或者低难度EX咯，这差不多是我能打的图，至少我觉得这种连打不难。另外这么摆还有个目的是把00:28:050 (6) - 叠在00:27:113 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里，估计你不改，那我建议吧那个横着的一串叠过来吧
/*
这种一坨而且坑人的东西....我是真的很不喜欢..可能你觉得非常合适，但是我就是讨厌这样一坨
至少我自己玩的时候碰到这种东西的话，不被坑个一两次一定读不懂。再叠起来就更不用说了。
我讨厌的东西当然不会放到我的图里去。
另外我这个最多算中等insane...星数也才不到4.7
*/

00:30:113 - 00:42:113 - 这个SV变化*0.9说实话我感觉≈没有变，而且背景音乐明显安静下来了很多，这里用0.75才比较合适。（当然我估计你应该还是不改-.-）
//再说吧...变SV，有这意思就好了

00:30:113 (1) - 这个加finish是想用来作这一段的开头音，没有跟钢琴的意思，这种空明的音效放这里感觉很合适。
//你这算音效的overmap吧？跟钢琴当然用哨子，不需要别的理由

00:31:238 (4) - 00:32:738 (4) - 这Ctrl+G的强调是指玩家玩的时候的感觉，原本是很顺的打到这个00:31:613 (1) - ，反向之后并不会不顺，反倒有种滑条滑出去再快速的快感（额，这词感觉有点不对...），你可以试着玩一下
//所以说为什么要反向..音乐又没明显变化。这里就用顺flow就可以了

00:34:800 (2) - 这个啊，前后间距不一致啊，两个音的间隔也不一样啊。
//什么意思....

00:47:175 (3,4) - 这个不改会有读图问题的...
//这个节奏就算全部拆开DS都会有读图问题..不过不管怎么样比你那个一坨的好读多了，那就不能算难

01:15:300 (3,7) - clap， 01:15:956 - 01:16:425 - 01:16:519 - clap, 01:16:331 - whistle。这个是自创音效，没有跟什么，只是觉得这么下音效听起来爽:P（不过这里我听了N次感觉都很不错，连着前面一起听也没有特别的违和，既然你不喜欢那也没办法╮(╯_╰)╭)
//听着乱...

[Insane]
00:27:113 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个我又看了一下，绝对不是正五边，00:27:113 (1,5) - 这两个的间距多了0.14，可能是你不小心动到了。
//那我重新做一次...

另外Easy的AR我给看错了(￣ε(#￣)╰╮o(￣皿￣)

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Vert

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Vert 2016-01-26T14:22:54+00:00

IRCed with the mapper in QQ

record

_Vert  2016/1/26 21:42:03
比如这个地方

_Vert  2016/1/26 21:42:25
你这flow基本就是这样绕了一圈

S=U 2016/1/26 21:42:28
这里当然应该顺着
21:42:58
S=U 2016/1/26 21:42:58
都是一样的鼓点

_Vert  2016/1/26 21:43:20
恩，顺着放本身没有什么问题

_Vert  2016/1/26 21:43:36
但是这个感觉上都是钝角感觉不是很舒服

_Vert  2016/1/26 21:44:15
如果给我摆我可能会这样

_Vert  2016/1/26 21:44:16


_Vert  2016/1/26 21:44:50
鼓点一样不一定非得贪吃蛇，只要全图类似的地方都用差不多的梗问题就不打

_Vert  2016/1/26 21:44:52
大*
21:45:30
S=U 2016/1/26 21:45:30
注意到人声是一个长音一点变化没有，然后鼓点又一样，那当然应该顺着放，首先要合曲然后才是好玩

S=U 2016/1/26 21:46:14
不过现在这样有点难看是真的..

_Vert  2016/1/26 21:46:25
恩。。主要是钝角用的太多

_Vert  2016/1/26 21:47:00
而且我这种摆个三角形也算是顺着摆
21:47:13
_Vert  2016/1/26 21:47:13
相当于绕的圈小了嘛

S=U 2016/1/26 21:47:47
你把时间轴往前拉一下？

_Vert  2016/1/26 21:48:32
怎么了

_Vert  2016/1/26 21:48:41
前面是滑条啊

S=U 2016/1/26 21:48:42
我看看前面几个点怎么摆0 0

_Vert  2016/1/26 21:49:05

21:51:32
_Vert  2016/1/26 21:51:32
我记得你主页好像写过说不要推荐你去看（学）谁谁谁的图来着。。
21:51:51
_Vert  2016/1/26 21:51:51
虽然这样我还是想推荐你一个人

_Vert  2016/1/26 21:52:05
Angelhoney，这个人感觉和你风格比较像

S=U 2016/1/26 21:52:47
改成这样了
21:53:14
_Vert  2016/1/26 21:53:14


_Vert  2016/1/26 21:54:09
有个好方法可以快速看自己梗摆的怎么样，就是把ar调成0

_Vert  2016/1/26 21:55:02
比如这个位置，你调成ar0就发现4大概可以和1blanket一下（

_Vert  2016/1/26 21:55:13
不对是红5.。
21:57:44
_Vert  2016/1/26 21:57:44
还有这里（个人觉得也不是太好看

S=U 2016/1/26 21:58:13
我都不blanket的

_Vert  2016/1/26 21:59:13
我摆嘛就这样把1横过来摆了

S=U 2016/1/26 21:59:14
这种没什么意义..我一开始也这样做，后来觉得还是只要编辑器里看着不乱就好了
22:00:01
S=U 2016/1/26 22:00:01
这样摆很容易100吧..

_Vert  2016/1/26 22:00:06
不过我觉得还是有些乱（可能是我比较较真吧。。

_Vert  2016/1/26 22:00:15
其实就是一个slider kick

S=U 2016/1/26 22:00:19
我这已经相当整洁了...

_Vert  2016/1/26 22:00:36
和1/4短滑条那种打法差不多的

_Vert  2016/1/26 22:00:55
个人觉得不好看（

S=U 2016/1/26 22:01:18
主要是这里我降了SV，你这样摆效果相当于大跳..

_Vert  2016/1/26 22:01:55
反正你既然是加了滑条的变速，肯定是节奏变化的地方，相当于大跳也无可厚非啊
22:02:48
_Vert  2016/1/26 22:02:48
还有这种直线的滑条

_Vert  2016/1/26 22:03:04
有个前辈告诉我不要放的这么斜（

S=U 2016/1/26 22:03:20
而且AR0也太过了，我都是AR-3
AR0的话现在随便去rank区里拿一张都没有能看的..

_Vert  2016/1/26 22:03:56
最好和垂直水平的交角不要超过12度。。

_Vert  2016/1/26 22:04:01
15*

S=U 2016/1/26 22:04:01
这种三个3/4的滑条我想放很久了，不要拦我（
我就要这样放（
22:04:08
_Vert  2016/1/26 22:04:08

22:05:12
S=U 2016/1/26 22:05:12
这个直滑条玩起来没什么问题呀...

_Vert  2016/1/26 22:05:22
还是看起来的问题

S=U 2016/1/26 22:05:27
仔细看看好像有点不平行，修一下吧

_Vert  2016/1/26 22:05:42
玩起来确实没问题（

_Vert  2016/1/26 22:06:27
哦对，一说平行感觉你平行放的有点多

S=U 2016/1/26 22:06:32
其实真说风格的话，我的风格其实跟柚子有点像..虽然乍看一点关系都没有

_Vert  2016/1/26 22:06:41
不一定平行了就美观
22:07:19
_Vert  2016/1/26 22:07:19
然而柚子基本都是三角跳

S=U 2016/1/26 22:07:23
平行主要是flow比较爽

_Vert  2016/1/26 22:07:45
这种错开的梗应用的更多。。其实也更顺手

S=U 2016/1/26 22:08:40
排版一点不像（
节奏看起来也一点不像..实际上，跟鼓点还是跟人声，关于这个问题他跟我想法比较像..
当然这个难度我是硬要跟人声才跟成这样的..

_Vert  2016/1/26 22:08:51
还有一个这种弯一点的滑条，我觉得可以差不多的全图就用一个，然后复制

_Vert  2016/1/26 22:09:01
恩。。

S=U 2016/1/26 22:09:06
我试试..
22:10:04
_Vert  2016/1/26 22:10:04
然后

_Vert  2016/1/26 22:10:05
01:10:050 (5) - 

_Vert  2016/1/26 22:10:24
这种比较长的滑条，我觉得越弯越好看（

_Vert  2016/1/26 22:10:32
然后短一点的

_Vert  2016/1/26 22:11:07
这种大概拉到呈60度角比较好看

_Vert  2016/1/26 22:11:22
当然这只是个人的爱好

S=U 2016/1/26 22:11:42
角度我都乱拉的..玩着顺手就好
22:12:37
_Vert  2016/1/26 22:12:37
大体的flow和节奏确定了基本打起来没区别的，这个基础上肯定还是看起来越舒服越好

_Vert  2016/1/26 22:13:43
哦对然后你这个sv有点高（

_Vert  2016/1/26 22:13:58
hh我一般是200bpm才用2.0
22:14:07
S=U 2016/1/26 22:14:07
故意的

_Vert  2016/1/26 22:14:12
恩

S=U 2016/1/26 22:15:03
SV高玩起来比较爽..我节奏没下太复杂，SV再慢的话配合低BPM，有点催眠..

22:19:44
_Vert  2016/1/26 22:19:44
没着没落的说了一大堆主观因素

GL
有什么问题欢迎随时来找我XD

Momizi

275 posts

Joined June 2013

Momizi 2016-01-27T11:45:15+00:00

那就随便水一点吧
[Singer]
00:26:363 (3,4,5) - 这个三连感觉不要比较好，把4去掉，突出钢琴音的三个note摆个小跳之类的
00:27:113 (1,2,3,4,5) - 原地单点的话多了可能有点无聊（
00:40:613 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 这种等距而且距离稍微有点大的单点对我而言不太喜欢，我打不好..如果是上下左右错开跳的话可能会爽一点对我而言00:54:113 (1,2,3,4) - 这种距离的等距单点就比较符合我的胃口
01:17:363 (1) - finish
[117's Insane]
01:10:050 (5) - 这个滑条把一个clap音给带过了，总感觉哪里怪怪的，用1/2的往返试试么？
完美（结尾不试试加一个转盘么
[Insane]
00:09:113 (1,1) - 这样子感觉不好看，推荐两种摆法嵌入式https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4413499和？？（想不出名字）式https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4413493
整体看上去不错没什么好提的（
[Hard]
00:34:425 (1) - 这里改成

更加能突出钢琴那两个音？

低难度懒看了（我也感觉没什么好看的应该放心

Lily Bread

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Lily Bread 2016-01-27T11:56:21+00:00

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Momizi wrote:
那就随便水一点吧
[Singer]
00:26:363 (3,4,5) - 这个三连感觉不要比较好，把4去掉，突出钢琴音的三个note摆个小跳之类的
//我觉得改了以后肯定会有无数个modder说“circle here”，所以还是不改了

00:27:113 (1,2,3,4,5) - 原地单点的话多了可能有点无聊（
//这里原地单点很合适

00:40:613 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 这种等距而且距离稍微有点大的单点对我而言不太喜欢，我打不好..如果是上下左右错开跳的话可能会爽一点对我而言00:54:113 (1,2,3,4) - 这种距离的等距单点就比较符合我的胃口
//我也觉得这种单点比跳难，所以才放在最高难度
//其实这种就故意把笔甩个弧形好像就能打了..

01:17:363 (1) - finish
//跟人声所以用哨子

[Insane]
00:09:113 (1,1) - 这样子感觉不好看，推荐两种摆法嵌入式https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4413499和？？（想不出名字）式https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4413493
//这...根本无所谓吧...对称挺好的

整体看上去不错没什么好提的（

[Hard]
00:34:425 (1) - 这里改成更加能突出钢琴那两个音？
//因为- 00:35:175 (2,3) - 是1/1stack，所以附近我尽量避免出现1/2以免坑到hard玩家

低难度懒看了（我也感觉没什么好看的应该放心

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DreaM117er

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Joined September 2012

DreaM117er 2016-02-03T01:46:55+00:00

No KD~

[音效們啊]

我第一個想吐槽的是"soft-hitfinish2"，這是個好音效，不過比較適合長距離使用（3-4大白或更長大距離那種），我自己個人的建議下在這幾個地方比較好：
00:03:113 -
00:13:613 - 轉盤尾那個位置
00:30:113 -
00:36:113 -
00:54:113 -
01:00:113 -
大概這樣，雖然位置很少，但是足夠了
原本同樣也是放finish2的地方，就不要放了吧，自己試過改成whistle也覺得不合適
進kiai的whistle怎麼沒有13放?? 其實我是有聽到01:06:675 - 跟01:06:863 - 是有低音的鼓聲的所以才會下whistle在這邊，後面也比照辦理
01:18:113 - 建議finish，不要whistle
01:24:113 - drum-clap可以跟soft-whistle3一起使用。也就是01:24:113 - 改成S: C3，用選項改成drum
01:25:238 (8,9,10) - 這裡是3個音，建議drum-clap前後的circle用whistle3，01:26:738 (8,9,10) - 比照辦理
01:27:113 - finish吧
01:27:113 - 也是這個位置開始，不用勉強跟24，這裡幾乎沒有這種24音效的下法，可能就跟我一樣吧
※因為這裡都是每1/4都有一個一樣的音，真心只有whistle3最合適

大概這樣，希望有幫助

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Lily Bread 2016-02-03T03:39:27+00:00

DreaM117er wrote:
No KD~

[音效們啊]
我第一個想吐槽的是"soft-hitfinish2"，這是個好音效，不過比較適合長距離使用（3-4大白或更長大距離那種），我自己個人的建議下在這幾個地方比較好：
00:03:113 -
00:13:613 - 轉盤尾那個位置
00:30:113 -
00:36:113 -
00:54:113 -
01:00:113 -
大概這樣，雖然位置很少，但是足夠了
原本同樣也是放finish2的地方，就不要放了吧，自己試過改成whistle也覺得不合適
進kiai的whistle怎麼沒有13放?? 其實我是有聽到01:06:675 - 跟01:06:863 - 是有低音的鼓聲的所以才會下whistle在這邊，後面也比照辦理

01:18:113 - 建議finish，不要whistle
//kiai里跟人声的我都用哨子。虽然哨子还有用在别的地方
01:24:113 - drum-clap可以跟soft-whistle3一起使用。也就是01:24:113 - 改成S: C3，用選項改成drum
01:25:238 (8,9,10) - 這裡是3個音，建議drum-clap前後的circle用whistle3，01:26:738 (8,9,10) - 比照辦理
01:27:113 - finish吧
01:27:113 - 也是這個位置開始，不用勉強跟24，這裡幾乎沒有這種24音效的下法，可能就跟我一樣吧
※因為這裡都是每1/4都有一個一樣的音，真心只有whistle3最合適

大概這樣，希望有幫助

//基本都改了，只回没改的地方
//这么多，还是给KD吧

Chibi Maruko

857 posts

Joined January 2015

Chibi Maruko 2016-02-06T14:43:42+00:00

Hi. From my queue

Hard

00:34:425 (1) - Why new combo. These are no reason to make new nc
01:05:738 (1) - Maybe change this slider into stream because sound stream was here
01:17:738 (1) - U don't need to spam nc here. Fix this

Insane

00:41:363 (5) - NC here?
00:58:050 (3) - Blanket because this kinda awkward

Singer

00:22:988 (2) - Maybe blanket can be improved like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4477945
00:34:613 (1,2) - Use DS coz look random spacing
00:37:425 (1) - Why new combo
00:39:113 (1) - Ctrl + G coz slider kinda awkward
00:48:113 (6) - NC here?
01:00:394 (2) - Delete this note coz no rhythm twice
01:11:738 (6) - Ctrl + G coz awkward

Ok, gl with ur map
sorry /me run away

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

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Lily Bread 2016-02-06T15:00:52+00:00

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Chibi Maruko wrote:
Hi. From my queue

Hard
00:34:425 (1) - Why new combo. These are no reason to make new nc
//because there is a bar line here.
01:05:738 (1) - Maybe change this slider into stream because sound stream was here
//it's Hard, not Insane.
01:17:738 (1) - U don't need to spam nc here. Fix this
//the DS here looks a bit unusual, because the SV changed.

Insane
00:41:363 (5) - NC here?
//nope
00:58:050 (3) - Blanket because this kinda awkward

Singer
00:22:988 (2) - Maybe blanket can be improved like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4477945
00:34:613 (1,2) - Use DS coz look random spacing
//it's already DSed.
00:37:425 (1) - Why new combo
//because there is a bar line here.
00:39:113 (1) - Ctrl + G coz slider kinda awkward
//really? i think it can't play after Ctrl+G.
00:48:113 (6) - NC here?
//ok
01:00:394 (2) - Delete this note coz no rhythm twice
//there does have rhythm here.
01:11:738 (6) - Ctrl + G coz awkward
//it's ok imo

Ok, gl with ur map
sorry /me run away
//0 0 thanks

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Rakuen

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Joined March 2013

Rakuen 2016-02-21T08:58:28+00:00

( =`･ω･´) Rakuen's Modding Queue

抱歉来晚了，有些小忙

Legend

Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

Hard

00:32:363 (3) - 跳太远了，跟00:37:988 (2,3,4) - 的吧
00:47:738 (3) - DS好像不对
01:04:800 - 加些圈圈吧，这部分带感

Insane

00:04:613 (2) - 00:07:613 (2) - NC?
00:35:175 (3,4) - 用1.3DS，比较容易玩，和00:46:613 (1,2,3,4) - 一样

基本上没什么问题了

送你颗星星

Good luck!
~(=^･ω･^)/｡･:*:･ﾟ★，｡･:*:･ﾟ☆

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Lily Bread 2016-02-21T09:13:54+00:00

Rakuen wrote:
( =`･ω･´) Rakuen's Modding Queue

抱歉来晚了，有些小忙
//没事

Legend
Default = Normal mods
Blue = Strongly recommended
Red = Unrankable issue

Hard
00:32:363 (3) - 跳太远了，跟00:37:988 (2,3,4) - 的吧
//00:30:863 (3) - 是为了不跟这个重叠..感觉这种形状挺常见的，应该没问题
00:47:738 (3) - DS好像不对
//改了
01:04:800 - 加些圈圈吧，这部分带感
//好

Insane
00:04:613 (2) - 00:07:613 (2) - NC?
//好
00:35:175 (3,4) - 用1.3DS，比较容易玩，和00:46:613 (1,2,3,4) - 一样
//00:34:425 (4,1,2,3,4,1) - 其实这些是一组，你说的这两个我觉得只要DS足够大，能让人看得出是1/1就可以

基本上没什么问题了

送你颗星星
//谢谢~

Good luck!
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Asserin

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Joined August 2013

Asserin 2016-02-23T09:06:44+00:00

~Hello!

Singer

00:03:113 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1) - Idk if u mapped this for vocal or rhythm but btw 00:09:113 (1,1) - Have wrong rhythm :/ Correct it pls
00:15:863 (4,7) - Correct blanket
00:27:113 (1,2,3,4,5) - U shouldn't stack it imo
00:36:488 (2,3) - Correct blanket

Maps look a little random .-.

117's Insane

00:09:206 (1,1,1) - it works better => http://puu.sh/niivr/e54be29f30.jpg
00:54:300 - Add note if u want it for vocal xd

Insane

00:24:113 (1) - y: 114
01:07:238 (4) - y: 41

Hard

00:15:863 (3,4) - Correct blanket
00:15:863 (3,4,2,3) - ^
00:19:613 (1) - y:320
00:21:863 (3,4) - Correct blanket
00:22:238 (4,1) - ^
00:22:988 (2) - ^
00:24:488 (2,3) - ^
00:25:238 (4,1) - ^ Ehh okey im done xD just correct all blankets cus there is a lot
01:11:738 (4) - x: 485
01:13:238 (4) - x: 63

Good luck with this map =w=

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

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Lily Bread 2016-02-27T08:22:27+00:00

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Asserin wrote:
~Hello!
Singer
00:03:113 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1) - Idk if u mapped this for vocal or rhythm but btw 00:09:113 (1,1) - Have wrong rhythm :/ Correct it pls
//where is wrong? - 00:09:113 (1,1) - is obviously mapping vocal.
00:15:863 (4,7) - Correct blanket
//you should know that i'm not making any blanket in my maps.
00:27:113 (1,2,3,4,5) - U shouldn't stack it imo
//give reason please.
00:36:488 (2,3) - Correct blanket
Maps look a little random .-.

Insane
00:24:113 (1) - y: 114
// - 00:23:738 (6,2) - they are a pair, not - 00:23:738 (6,1) -
01:07:238 (4) - y: 41
//ok

Hard
00:15:863 (3,4) - Correct blanket
00:15:863 (3,4,2,3) - ^
00:19:613 (1) - y:320
//ok
00:21:863 (3,4) - Correct blanket
00:22:238 (4,1) - ^
00:22:988 (2) - ^
00:24:488 (2,3) - ^
00:25:238 (4,1) - ^ Ehh okey im done xD just correct all blankets cus there is a lot

01:11:738 (4) - x: 485
//ok
01:13:238 (4) - x: 63
//ok

Good luck with this map =w=

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Misure

951 posts

Joined September 2012

Misure 2016-03-01T12:11:34+00:00

好听

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2016-04-30T04:19:00+00:00

[Easy]
00:27:113 (1) - 尾巴用soft finish

[Normal]
试试CS3.5
00:27:113 (1) - 尾巴用soft finish
00:39:113 (1,2,3) - 把blanket做好
01:27:113 (1,2,3,4) - 这里的clap听着有些奇怪，还是去掉吧

[Hard]
00:28:050 (4) - 尾巴用soft finish
01:17:363 (1) - finish

[Insane]
这个AR其实可以再低一点，因为没有长连打，试试8.7

[117's Insane]
00:54:300 - 这里还是加个圈跟vocal好一些，每次都会打早
01:28:613 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里建议用0.8x的间距

[Singer]
00:40:613 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里可以四个拆分用不同的间距：

SPOILER

00:53:363 (5) - NC
01:16:050 (2) - 往下挪一些
01:16:613 (1,2,3) - 这三个间距保持一致
01:17:363 (1) - 头上加finish
01:27:863 (5) - NC

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Lily Bread 2016-04-30T04:41:23+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
[Easy]
00:27:113 (1) - 尾巴用soft finish
//好

[Normal]
试试CS3.5
//嗯...可以

00:27:113 (1) - 尾巴用soft finish
//好

00:39:113 (1,2,3) - 把blanket做好
//这附近调整了一下

01:27:113 (1,2,3,4) - 这里的clap听着有些奇怪，还是去掉吧
//好

[Hard]
00:28:050 (4) - 尾巴用soft finish
//好

01:17:363 (1) - finish
//好

[Insane]
这个AR其实可以再低一点，因为没有长连打，试试8.7
//嗯...可以

[Singer]
00:40:613 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里可以四个拆分用不同的间距：
SPOILER
//好，实际上原来我就是你这个意思...后来改摸改成现在这样...

00:53:363 (5) - NC
//ok

01:16:050 (2) - 往下挪一些
//好

01:16:613 (1,2,3) - 这三个间距保持一致
//好，后面的也调整了一下

01:17:363 (1) - 头上加finish
//嗯

01:27:863 (5) - NC
//好

//thanks..waiting for 117
//应该很快就来了..

//另外，NHI难度的kiai有一些小变动，主要是把漏掉的clap跟上了

DreaM117er

1,594 posts

Joined September 2012

DreaM117er 2016-04-30T05:52:03+00:00

@Lfj: 0.8x我改了，不過第一條那裏我不是跟vocal，我是覺得沒有必要強跟

SPOILER

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AudioFilename: yousa - bhsjdgj.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 2175
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
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TitleUnicode:崩坏世界的歌姬 Chinese Ver
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Tags:DreaM117er 填词集 初音ミク hatsune miku 崩坏学园 蔡近翰 rock 崩壊世界の歌姫 郑小宇 夏轶瀚
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jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

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jonathanlfj 2016-04-30T06:18:46+00:00

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Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Lily Bread 2016-04-30T06:40:55+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
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thanks~!

Lily Bread

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Lily Bread 2016-04-30T08:20:15+00:00

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Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2016-05-01T12:40:08+00:00

general
我覺得每個難度最尾也可以加個轉盤到01:34:238 -

singer
00:41:363 (5) - 變速度了可以NC

117
00:09:206 (1,1) - 既然音在大白線 spinner也應該停在大白線

hard
01:05:738 (1) - hard搞這些變速有點違和
01:17:363 (1,1) - ^

easy
01:10:238 - clap

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Topic Starter

Lily Bread 2016-05-01T12:50:08+00:00

Rizia wrote:
general
我覺得每個難度最尾也可以加個轉盤到01:34:238 -
//我不喜欢转盘所以不想加...

singer
00:41:363 (5) - 變速度了可以NC
//好

hard
01:05:738 (1) - hard搞這些變速有點違和
01:17:363 (1,1) - ^
//这个我觉得其实还好吧..玩起来差别不算很大

easy
01:10:238 - clap
//好

//thanks!