sex and regret
[Triumph]
00:10:758 (10758|1) - how about replace this to hold like 00:10:072 (10072|2) - ? i feel like it's going down pitch
00:54:644 (54644|1,54644|0,54730|2,54730|3,54815|1,54815|0,54901|2,54901|3,54987|0,54987|1) - for this, i think if you make an insane diff to welcome advanced players to enjoy the good song, so better not use this chord (imo) and replace them by this:
http://puu.sh/p8QHe/f7d4652140.jpg01:04:587 - this patterns actually feel better to play but it's your choice, the pattern is quite bad for me too
http://puu.sh/p8QM2/8ac8234e44.png01:38:530 (98530|2,98530|3,98615|1,98615|0,98701|3,98701|2,98787|1,98787|0,98872|2,98872|3) - same reasons above
02:22:587 - add a note on here for bass feeling
02:32:358 - a little SV around here would be great, i like to suggest you this:
152358,-250,4,2,1,60,0,1
152530,-58.8235294117647,4,2,1,60,0,1
152615,-250,4,2,1,60,0,1
152787,-58.8235294117647,4,2,1,60,0,1
152872,-250,4,2,1,60,0,1
153044,-58.8235294117647,4,2,1,60,0,1
153130,-250,4,2,1,60,0,1
153302,-58.8235294117647,4,2,1,60,0,1
153387,-200,4,2,1,60,0,1
153472,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,60,0,1
153558,-200,4,2,1,60,0,1
153643,-66.6666666666667,4,2,1,60,0,1
153730,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
02:45:387 - you missed a note on here for clap sound
SV changes on here too would be great, it make a the end of kiai feel better:
02:55:330 - 0.5x
02:55:501 - 1.0x
02:55:558 - 1.25x (1/6)
02:55:615 - 1.5x (1/6)
02:55:672 - 1.0x
03:05:958 (185958|2,185958|3,186044|0,186044|1,186130|2,186130|3,186301|3,186301|0,186387|1,186387|2,186472|3,186472|0,186558|1,186558|2,186644|3,186644|0) - however from the first "little warm up" you can keep them
03:09:301 - add a note for main bg sound
04:17:787 - add a note here for bass
04:28:758 - same here too
04:55:672 (295672|3,295715|2,295758|1,295801|0,295844|3,295887|2,295930|1,295972|0,296015|3,296058|2,296101|1,296144|0,296187|3,296230|2,296272|1,296315|0) - the pitch is actually going up but how about 04:55:758 (295758|1,295801|0,295930|1,295972|0,296101|1,296144|0,296272|1,296315|0) - swtich collumn of them? the arrange will leave to you
05:12:815 (312815|3) - should add cymbal here 05:12:815 (312815|1) - and one for clap sound
05:12:987 (312987|3) - shouldn't clap here since you only follow clap on 1/1
05:13:844 (313844|3) - missed kick
05:14:872 (314872|3) - here too
05:15:558 (315558|1,315901|3,316244|3,316587|1) - add kick for them would be fit
[Regret]
HP 8.6 OD 8.8
This difficult is too easy than it look, with that amount of notes I think OD 8.8 ~ 9.2 would be fit
And HP 8.6 ~ 9.0 would be better to all players who want challenge
00:09:730 (9730|3,10415|2) - why not let these holds have a same ending like as 00:09:730 (9730|0,10072|1) - as i mentioned on another diff earlier, it would be fit for rhythm
00:11:444 - 00:12:130 - 00:12:815 - 00:13:501 - 00:14:187 - 00:14:872 - 00:15:558 - 00:16:244 - as you notice, from 00:11:101 - 00:16:587 - it remains only kick and snare, and all of them are same on 1/1 beat, so better let them have same feeling like using only 2 notes, or using only 3 notes (i would choose 2 notes only due to warm-up and make a very easy feeling to continue this map, 3 notes chord is overheat for me)
00:42:644 - how about this, this fit with pitch well
http://puu.sh/p8RPb/486defa79f.jpg00:54:987 - add a note on 1 for cymbal
01:38:872 - add a note for cymbal, it been 1/2 path of this calm part with bass drum
02:00:815 - i like the design you did on here (nicely well done)
02:09:130 - on here have kick too, seem you missed it
02:32:358 - do the sv change like i suggested you before (well, depend on you)
02:54:301 (174301|3,174472|0) - do this extend actually better for patterns:
http://puu.sh/p8S1Y/34cdb610d0.png and fit for rhythm play
03:08:787 (188787|0,188787|3) - if you follow the main instrument, one of them should be on 03:08:872 -
02:57:901 - same on here, you missed one
03:08:787 (188787|3,188787|0) - here too
03:16:930 - hypeeee, actually i would suggest to add a note on 03:17:615 - too but lol forget it
04:11:787 - actually i like the patterns you used earlier more
05:07:330 - to 05:12:815 - same problems as i mentioned on beginning, only contains bass and snare here so you better choose 2 notes or 3 notes (but for now i would like to use 3 notes due to this one now is for ending, and players are on fire so 3 notes would very fit for this part)
05:12:815 (312815|2) - two kickes here, remove on and add cymbal here
05:12:987 (312987|1) - remove clap if you only follow clap on 1/1 beat
05:13:844 (313844|2) - missed kick
05:14:872 (314872|3) - as this too
05:14:872 (314872|3,315558|3,315901|3,316244|3,316587|3) - add kick for them, would be better for rhythm flow
05:17:615 - this patterns actually fine for an
endinghttp://puu.sh/p8SsM/89d3048f16.jpg 02:55:330 - add sv here like i was suggested you would better for rhythm (depend on you)
overall, it's a good map, really! i'm really love it, and the music itself too
good job, call me later when you done
And add source:
1. Dynamix
2. Zyon 載音
If you choose Dynamix
tag: Zyon rhythm game
If you choose Zyon 載音
tag: dynamix rhythm game