[kite]
you can snap the preview point if you care or something lol
you reverted quite a bit of what you agreed on during our irc or i remember it wrongly
00:51:849 (8,1) - should be http://puu.sh/o22Qj/8841ad1431.jpg according to drums and guitar
01:41:824 (2) - seems inconsequent with the way you did every other thing as a triplet in that section tbh, i think a quadruplet is a rather odd choice here, mind explaining this?
01:55:434 (9,11) - 04:25:288 (9,11) - would fit closer to the song and give more stress to 01:55:361 - 01:55:507 - if these wouldn't be forcefully mapped out imo because the sounds if there are any on these blue ticks are MUCH weaker than the ones on white and red so i'd recommend focusing these
02:17:898 (6,1) - swap nc lol xd (see 02:16:727 (1) - )
after you forced such a huge 1/4 jump onto 02:24:922 (1,2) - 02:25:654 (4,5) - feels much too close, can you find an arrangement for either of these to address this / make it more predictable?
03:11:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - are these following guitar? i think the is doing dumb stuff that's neither 1/4 nor 1/3 but i think it fits best as 1/4 ... actually pretty confusing lol
03:55:654 (4,5,6,7,1) - should have more streamspacing instead of less i mean the guitar is climaxing :\\\
03:57:410 - can you give me a reason to not have an object there i mean you mapped stuff like 01:08:824 (1) - 07:10:316 (1) - so ...?
04:53:020 (4,5) - this is not 1/2 this is not 1/2 and 04:53:312 (6) - shouldn't end on 1/4
04:54:410 - ?? why is this here and not on 04:54:263 - ?
05:21:117 (4) - 08:15:291 (4) - etc could also be a 2/1 stream like i think drums are strong enough to support more circles for this measure but that's up to you
07:42:526 (4,5,1) - did you revert this i thought we agreed on sth else ..?
07:46:608 (5) - i think this is better off as 1/1 plus 1/3 triplet like http://puu.sh/o2524/effb5113db.jpg
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i can't comment on anything i can't play properly so here's stuff about the stuff i can play properly
03:14:020 - id recommend deleting this because that would fit the structure you had in this part better (nothing went from 1/2 before a downbeat until 1/2 after it except this lol)
07:33:697 - this doesn't seem necessary at all, you don't even do it again in this part
07:53:047 (528,529,530) - 07:57:730 (550,551,552) - 08:00:266 (562) - i think kite's snapping for these (i hope they're mapped to vocals) is correct and these should be 3/4 rhythms otherwise find an agreement with kite
you can snap the preview point if you care or something lol
you reverted quite a bit of what you agreed on during our irc or i remember it wrongly
00:51:849 (8,1) - should be http://puu.sh/o22Qj/8841ad1431.jpg according to drums and guitar
01:41:824 (2) - seems inconsequent with the way you did every other thing as a triplet in that section tbh, i think a quadruplet is a rather odd choice here, mind explaining this?
01:55:434 (9,11) - 04:25:288 (9,11) - would fit closer to the song and give more stress to 01:55:361 - 01:55:507 - if these wouldn't be forcefully mapped out imo because the sounds if there are any on these blue ticks are MUCH weaker than the ones on white and red so i'd recommend focusing these
02:17:898 (6,1) - swap nc lol xd (see 02:16:727 (1) - )
after you forced such a huge 1/4 jump onto 02:24:922 (1,2) - 02:25:654 (4,5) - feels much too close, can you find an arrangement for either of these to address this / make it more predictable?
03:11:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - are these following guitar? i think the is doing dumb stuff that's neither 1/4 nor 1/3 but i think it fits best as 1/4 ... actually pretty confusing lol
03:55:654 (4,5,6,7,1) - should have more streamspacing instead of less i mean the guitar is climaxing :\\\
03:57:410 - can you give me a reason to not have an object there i mean you mapped stuff like 01:08:824 (1) - 07:10:316 (1) - so ...?
04:53:020 (4,5) - this is not 1/2 this is not 1/2 and 04:53:312 (6) - shouldn't end on 1/4
04:54:410 - ?? why is this here and not on 04:54:263 - ?
05:21:117 (4) - 08:15:291 (4) - etc could also be a 2/1 stream like i think drums are strong enough to support more circles for this measure but that's up to you
07:42:526 (4,5,1) - did you revert this i thought we agreed on sth else ..?
07:46:608 (5) - i think this is better off as 1/1 plus 1/3 triplet like http://puu.sh/o2524/effb5113db.jpg
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i can't comment on anything i can't play properly so here's stuff about the stuff i can play properly
03:14:020 - id recommend deleting this because that would fit the structure you had in this part better (nothing went from 1/2 before a downbeat until 1/2 after it except this lol)
07:33:697 - this doesn't seem necessary at all, you don't even do it again in this part
07:53:047 (528,529,530) - 07:57:730 (550,551,552) - 08:00:266 (562) - i think kite's snapping for these (i hope they're mapped to vocals) is correct and these should be 3/4 rhythms otherwise find an agreement with kite