Sangzin wrote:

[Hard]

• 01:12:598 (1) - 스택
  01:49:966 (3) - 앞에꺼 180도 돌려서 배치하는게 좋을 것 같네요. 앞에꺼가 어떤건가요?
  02:03:651 (1) - 피니시? 수정
  02:11:282 (10) - 오버랩이 이상해보이네요. 약간 내려서 왼족으로 이동시켜주세요 플레이 할 때는 그닥 이상하진 않아서 그대로 두겠습니다.
  03:03:124 (5) - NC? 수정
  03:11:282 (4,5,6) - 연타 이렇게 들어가는게 좋을것 같네요. 일부러 둥글게 모양 잡은거라 조금 생각해 보겠습니다.
  
  [Light Hard]
  • 00:57:861 (1,2) - 이부분 플레이하기에 뭔가 헷갈리지 않을까요? 약간 수정
    02:03:651 (2) - 피니시? 수정
  [Normal]
  • 00:37:343 제가 알고있기로는 노멀에서 변속 쓰면 안되는걸로 알고있는데....일단 이부분은 스킵해둘게요 펭귄님 께서 대체로 안 쓰는게 좋다고 하셨지만, 이 부분도 생각해 보겠습니다 ..
    02:03:124 (1) - 끝에 피니시? 수정
    03:03:914 (4,2) - 오버랩이 이상해보이네요. 수정
  [Easy]
  • 00:24:177 (1,2,1) - 블랭캣이 조금 이상하네요. 수정해주세요 수정
    00:58:387 (2,1) - ^ ^
    02:03:651 (2) - 피니시? ^
    역시 이지모딩은 못해드리겠음.....
  굳이 이렇다 할 부분이 없네요. 스타하나 쏴드리고 갑니다. GL!

모딩과 스타 감사합니다.

Still working?

모딩 3-4개 정도 더 받은 뒤에 버블 얻는걸 목표로 두고 있습니다.

Hello, from my queue! I'll mod you easy

Good !!!!!!

Hello! Came from my queue

[Hard]
00:13:519 - just a suggest: you could add here circle to make it triple. It would fit nicely since the music calls to it a little bit.
00:32:072 (5,6) - If you wanted to, you could Ctrl + G them and replace them for better rhythm. Now you have un-clickable downbeat at 00:32:598 -
00:42:598 (8) - minor: bit too close to 00:42:861 (9) - ,
00:50:493 (2) - blanket would be improved a bit.
01:43:914 (7) - What if you stack this with (6)?
01:45:756 (6) - I don't see reason or call to do 2,00x jump. I would understand it if it was downbeat but this is on upbeat.
01:57:729 (3) - The end of slider would be more curvy. (blanket is bit off there)
[Light Hard]
00:19:440 (4) - blanket could be more curvy.
00:23:651 (3) - ^
00:43:124 (1) - blanket is bit off with 00:43:914 (2) -
00:45:229 (1,2) - ^
01:03:124 (5,1) - ^
01:20:493 (7) - Not sure about slider. Maybe make it something normal or... idk... just keep it... just wondering is that rankable.
01:54:703 (1) - blanket is bit off
02:15:229 (4) - Too close to 02:15:493 (5) -
02:36:019 (5,6,7) - I think you should not do jumps in Light Hard diff like this. You didn't use 1,4x jump anywhere else, even not in 03:10:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , so why to use there. You must rethink this, so you won't face it in ranking.
02:39:440 (1,2) - I think rhythms is wrong here (I mean like different than you did previously). You are trying to follow the vocal, so the rhythm should be like this. Do the same rhythm like in 01:04:703 (1,2) - and 02:03:651 (2,3) -
[Normal]
01:54:440 (1) - Remove NC since there is no reason to have it there. I think this is just a mistake?
03:12:072 (1) - I think there should not be NC. Even when it is last note of the diff.
[Easy]
00:14:177 (2) - blanket would be improved

I really like the mapping style!! And maps are really goods. I wish good luck with map!

smsh150 wrote:

Hello! Came from my queue

[Hard]
00:13:519 - just a suggest: you could add here circle to make it triple. It would fit nicely since the music calls to it a little bit.
00:32:072 (5,6) - If you wanted to, you could Ctrl + G them and replace them for better rhythm. Now you have un-clickable downbeat at 00:32:598 -
00:42:598 (8) - minor: bit too close to 00:42:861 (9) - ,
01:43:914 (7) - What if you stack this with (6)?

[Light Hard]
02:39:440 (1,2) - I think rhythms is wrong here (I mean like different than you did previously). You are trying to follow the vocal, so the rhythm should be like this. Do the same rhythm like in 01:04:703 (1,2) - and 02:03:651 (2,3) -
[Normal]
01:54:440 (1) - Remove NC since there is no reason to have it there. I think this is just a mistake?

I will think about this.

Thank you for modding!

hello

[Easy]

nothing

[Normal]

00:47:335 - 노말치곤 속도차이가 너무 큰거같은데 0.85..쯤..? 사실 변속은 별로 추천드리고싶지않..

[Light Hard]

00:47:335 (1) - 개인적으로 이 슬라 모양이 좀 어색해보였습니다. 노래와 맞지 않는달까..
01:02:072 (1,2,3,4) - 사각형 모양 조금 어긋낫네요
03:11:808 (6,1) - 박자가 03:10:493 (1) - 부터 2단위로 끊으신거면 이런배치도 좋을거같네요 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3859870

[제일 어려운거]

01:12:598 (1,2,3) - ds맞춰주시는게 좋을듯하네요 랜덤느낌이나서;;
01:41:282 (6,7) - 너무 가까워서 치기 조금 불편할수도..?
02:34:177 (6) - 강한비트가 아닌데 갑자기 흐름이 여기서 끊기니 조금 미묘한테 1/2슬라 한번 고려해보시는건
03:11:282 (4,5,6) - 직선형 배치 아니면 아예 겹쳐버리는게 보기도 좋고 치는데도 더 좋을꺼라 생각해요

intoon // 노말 슬라속도 를 제외하고 모두 고쳤습니다. 속도문제는 좀 더 생각해 보겠습니다 ..

Ranked it. Yuju <3

SYAHME wrote:

Ranked it. Yuju <3

YCYkiller wrote:

Good !!!!!!

Thank you <3

Several nazi suggestions.

[General]
Fine.

[Easy]
02:03:651 (2) - may be do it more symmetrical.

[Normal]
Your blankets are beautiful. ♥
00:57:335 (3) - lower this circle. 01:38:914 (3) - curve this and place it lower, to get better flow and playability. If u want u can also change other similar patterns and change them.

[Ligth Hard]
00:35:229 (2) - make more curve.
01:20:493 (7) - more symmetrical.
01:32:072 (2) - fix blanket.

[Hard]
02:29:308 (4,5) - make it more straight. 02:31:019 (3,4,5) - same here.

I really like your flow.
Good luck.

Namki wrote:

[Normal]
Your blankets are beautiful. ♥ Thanks :3
00:57:335 (3) - lower this circle.

example

[Hard]
02:29:308 (4,5) - make it more straight.

like this

02:31:019 (3,4,5) - same here.

^^I will think about this.

Thank you ford modding!!

[Hard]

1. 01:12:598 (1) - By logic of your previous chorus, this should have a NC to symbolise the break in Kiai, similar to 00:22:072 (1) -
2. 02:47:861 (1,2) - The pattern you've used here causes inconsistencies with the other choruses, like 00:22:598 (1,2) - and 01:13:124 (2,3) - . I would stick to using the same rhythm to match the vocals.
3. 02:39:440 (1) - I feel the flow of this first object is very harsh considering it's the start of the chorus. Typically, you've used quite standard and flowing slider shapes. This one however will require the player to hold the cursor in that spot for a while, causing awkward gameplay. I recommend changing the nature of this slider to make it feel less "squished"
4. 02:54:966 (7,8,9,1) - With the previous patterns, your flow has been directed counter-clockwise in a circular motion. It would make most sense to continue this movement, rather than having these kicksliders go diagonally, breaking that flow.
5. 03:11:282 (4,5,6) - The flow here is punishing in my eyes. I recommend changing the angle of this triple to be in line with 3.
6. 03:12:072 (1) - This follows the same rhythm as other parts, just like 02:19:440 (8,9,1) - . I would continue mapping it just like the other parts, rather than ignoring the beats here.

[Light Hard]

1. 00:58:387 (2,3) - This is a bit of a weird transition from vocals to the instrumentals. I recommend continuing to map the vocals for consistency.
2. 01:57:598 (2) - This can be considered similar to the above note.
3. 02:03:124 (1) - Like the previous chorus, this should be NC to indicate a note before Kiai starts.
4. 02:11:545 (1) - Again, similar to the above note.

[Normal]

1. Very nicely done.

[Easy]

1. Nothing here.

-

I love it. Good luck on ranking C:

(ノ･ω･)ノ

[Easy]

1. 00:15:756 (1) - 00:19:966 (1) - 00:24:177 (1) - 00:28:387 (1) - 00:32:598 (1) - 00:36:808 (1) - 등등 전부 콤보 풀어주세요. 한 스탠자를 콤보 주기로 설정하셨는데, 이지의 경우 박자 밀도가 낮은 편이기 때문에 2개 노트만에 콤보가 계속 바뀌게 되는 결과로 이어져서 맵에 패턴감이 잘 안느껴지게 되었습니다. 다시 말해서, 콤보 주기를 스탠자 2개로 설정해주세요.
2. 00:21:545 - 클랩
3. 00:36:808 (1) - 00:41:020 (1) - 00:45:229 (1) - 음악 안에 특수한 소리가 있어서 피니시 넣으신거잖아요. 근데 그 피니시 힛사가 00:47:335 (1)와 동일해서 음악상으로는 명백히 다른 소리임에도 그것이 잘 표현되지 않았습니다. 앞의 피니시들을 가력 드럼-휘슬이라던가 다른 것으로 바꿔주세요.

[Normal]

1. 00:47:335 (1) - 슬라 뒷부분 불균형이 너무 두드러지네요. 3점 베지어는 점들이 만드는 선 두 개의 길이가 다르면 균형잡혀보이지 않습니다.
2. 00:49:440 (1) - 00:54:703 (1) - 01:48:387 (1) - 01:53:651 (1) - 음악 템포가 느려져서 이지와 유사하게 박자 밀도가 낮아졌는데, 그 점 유념하셔서 뉴콤 풀어주세요.
3. 00:21:545 - 02:09:966 - 02:11:019 - 클랩
4. 02:28:387 (1) - 여기 뉴콤하실 건가요? 02:27:861 (1)의 단일 콤보가 상당히 어색하네요.
   박자가 쉽진 않은데, 이정도 선이라면 가능할 것 같네요.

[Light Hard]

1. 00:49:440 (4) - 00:53:387 (1) - 콤보 통일해주세요.
2. 01:11:019 - 01:12:072 - 02:09:966 - 02:11:019 - 02:45:756 - 02:46:808 - 클랩
3. 02:26:019 - 가사가 "행복--"이니까 02:26:282 박자 어색하게 시작하지 않게 노트 추가해주세요.
4. 03:04:703 (1,2) - ctrl+G했을 때 박자가 더 가사와 맞는것 같네요.
5. 03:12:072 (1) - 일관성 위해서 콤보 풀어주세요.

지금의 Hard에서 등장하는 점프/연타 봤을 때 난이도명을 Insane으로 해도 무방할 것 같네요.

Hard 를 Insane 으로 하는건 좀 더 생각 해 보도록 하겠습니다.

나머지는 모두 고쳤습니다.

모딩 감사합니다!

Nekomata wrote:

(ノ･ω･)ノ

Thank you :3

Nominated.

버블 감사합니다!

AAAAAAA
2 sar for gfriend >w<

Thank you for the stars! >w<

When qualified?

3 month old bubble.
Call me when you are ready.

yay~

BeatofIke wrote:

3 month old bubble.
Call me when you are ready.

I'm always ready.
But, I couldn't see you at the in-game.

Mapset looks good. Have fun~

Congratz~ 갓자친구 학교 시리즈 달려~

gratz

BeatofIke wrote:

Mapset looks good. Have fun~

lol
Thank you very much!

W h i t e wrote:

Congratz~ 갓자친구 학교 시리즈 달려~

감사합니다! 갓자친구!

Underforest wrote:

gratz

Thank you :>

♥♥♥

퀄축하드려요!

Euny wrote:

♥♥♥

퀄축하드려요!

축하해주셔서 감사합니다!

00:22:072 (1,1) - i liked this concept, it stopped the flow which reflected the music well, and brought contrast to 00:24:177 (1,2) -
however, 01:12:598 (1,2) - 02:11:545 (1,2) - 03:04:177 (1,1) - doesn't do this, which is kinda weird. other than the inconsistency, it uses the same rhythm and almost the same movement as 01:14:703 (1,2) - which comes right after. so they both are gonna feel similar, however the music is drastically different.

seems like dalpha has kinda pointed it out and i'm interested as to why it isn't addressed.

otherwise great song~ :d

Thank you for the tip~ :d

finally