from your signature
well.. i'll try to help \:D/
[General]
AiBAtInconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
Inconsistency in combo colours:
Kiai Times Not On Downbeat
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:01:321, ends on 01:28:187
[Hard]
00:08:709 (1) - new combo here for better-looking, right? well. without new combo it still looks great!
00:11:620 (1,2) - nice slider shape but it can follow (3) approach-circle's shape a bit more
code?148,156,11620,6,0,B|172:204|216:212,1,90,0|2
364,156,12067,2,0,B|340:204|292:212,1,90,0|2
00:13:858 (1) - move new combo from here to 00:13:411 (6) ?
00:13:858 (1,2) -
this shape for sliders?
00:15:426 (3) - new combo here?
00:15:426 (3,4,5,6,7) - try to make a star! don't forget to stack (8) and (7)
00:20:127 (1) - looks better?
00:23:038 (1,2,3) -
this way?
00:42:067 (8,2) - stack them?
00:44:306 (4,5,6) - same as 00:23:038 (1,2,3)
01:12:515 (4) - new combo?
01:17:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you can make it symmetrical somehow
01:23:038 (1,1) - maybe you can mke a bit better shape? this looks a bit messy ;_;
01:35:127 (1) - you want new combo here?
Normal
00:15:426 (1) - move new combo to 00:13:858 (4)
00:16:769 (1,2) - maybe this?
screen00:24:165 - i guess some spinners and sliders can help you to map this break :3
00:31:545 (2) - why don't you make this slider follow (1) approach-circle's a bit more?
00:32:441 (3) - x40 y116
00:41:844 (1) - make it a bit more symmetrical and put it in the center of playfield?
01:01:097 (3) - stack with (2)?
01:12:515 (2) - x280 y164
Easy
00:16:097 (4) - too short! can confuse new players!
00:40:948 - circle?
00:44:306 (3) - too short?
00:44:978 (1) - put in the center? make symmetrical?
00:50:351 (2) - x156 y160
00:52:590 (1,2,3) - i think it's possible to make it symmetrical
01:08:933 (2) - not symmetrical (Ctrl + h)
01:10:052 (3) - too short
01:31:097 (2) - not symmetrical?
01:35:351 (1) - remove new combo?
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/me noob -_-
if you have some time take a look at my map http://osu.ppy.sh/s/41896 if no, sorry :<~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Map is good enough.
Star!