00:22:998 (2) - Tbh if you rotate it by 40° and place it to 64:80 (like this http://puu.sh/nDV0d/c20ec0725b.jpg) makes a better flow with 00:23:773 (3) - for an Easy.
00:50:869 - I really don't understand why you didn't map this, when you did for 00:57:063 - . A break seems not really necessary here even for an Easy.
- Normal :
00:59:386 (2,4) - This overlap feels so weird when the rest of the diff is so clean. I'm sure you can avoid it for the sake of aesthetic.
01:25:708 (1,2,3) - Maybe unstack them, you never did it before and I think it could be hard to read .
- Hard :
00:40:805 (1,3) - This overlap just look bad, and make a poor flow with 00:42:160 (4,1) - imo. Something like http://puu.sh/nDW1L/bea9bc8c77.jpg would fit more the flow and map aesthetic.
01:00:547 (3) - What about to curve this one around 01:00:934 (4) - ? (http://puu.sh/nDW5R/a4b9c5a5bb.jpg)
Good start, I think it needs some revision as well as some harder versions. Check other comments for song revisions. I'm so happy someone is working on this song!