MadaoX wrote:

[revival]

00:09:837 - 00:11:386 the hitsounds here feel weird, try to make it better pls tell me better version lol
00:21:450 (5) move it into x:148 y:136 ok
00:29:579 (6) move it into x:176 y:188 ok
01:00:934 - try smth like this prefer that rhythm
01:03:063 (4,5,6) make it symmetrical no change

GL~

FCL wrote:

from your queue

• [Insane]

1. 00:10:611 (6,7) - In my option these patterns doesn't work good. You have missed strong guitar sound at 00:10:805 what sounds confusing. I think you have 3 ways to improve their (in priority):
   1. Change to 1/2 slider+circle
   2. Change to 1/2 slider+2 circles (triplet under slider I mean)
   3. Silenced end of the slider
   yes, but only take background sound at here.
2. 00:12:740 (1) - I can't see reasons for use nc here. The instumental part was started on 00:12:934 (2) - , so nc there will be more correct. will think about it.
3. 00:16:805 (4) - just move to 471 193 for aesthetic. Looks like blanket with this placement alright
4. 00:25:128 (1) - given that you tried to make distance to NC more than usually, this small spacing looks weird. Should be more spacing between same.
5. 00:28:031 (6,1,2) - flow pls. It's nearly linear flow with different spacing. I think you know that this structure of flow doesn't playng good. You can move 00:28:224 (1) - to 461 274 (looks pretty nice and like hexagon a bit xD) or 406 162http://puu.sh/nBr9K/83c4c58669.jpg
   oh yes, fixed.
6. 00:29:579 (6,1) - same as before, it's should be has more distance ^
7. 00:34:128 (6) - Overmapped. Not sure that it's so needed agreed, removed!
8. 00:36:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Hm, I have deleted patterns here and found that rhythm doesn't mapped correctly. You have undermapped some drum patterns at 00:36:450 , 00:37:031 and 00:37:611. Listen carefylly to verify this. Overall I think this model of rhythm should fit better with song http://puu.sh/nBrQp/0798b13364.jpg or something similar prfer to use my rhythm.
9. 00:48:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same issue about rhythm. http://puu.sh/nBrWx/3db5dccde8.jpg or something similar ^
10. 01:14:095 (5,6,7,8,9) - feels overmapped imo, but should work I guess it's fine to me.
11. 01:25:708 (1,2,3) - same stuff about flow, linear flow with unstable spacing doesn't play good. hmm, added new combo!
12. 01:27:257 -I feel that this tick should be clickable, sounds too strong to be, Don't forget add NC if you will apply i don't like it.
13. Also I noticed that you are often added overmapped triplets like 01:16:224 (1,2,3) - , 01:17:773 (1,2,3) - , 00:46:805 (1,2,3) - etc. I am not agree with that, but I guess you are not agree too. Just said xD maybe it's fine xD

RikiH_ wrote:

m4m desu

Revival

1. 00:04:418 (3) - Really nazi detail, but to be symmetrical to the slider this should be around 341|308 but that would put it offscreen, rip. Alternatively you can move this stuff 00:04:224 (2,4) - to 409|142 so it won't mess up anything fixed!
2. 00:28:224 (1) - Maybe move this to 467|279 just to avoid that straight line which I don't 100% like, the flow will be improved since you will create an oval flow between 4-5-6-1, just look at this screenshot ^
   
3. 00:48:160 (6) - Not 100% perfect, rotate this 3° clockwise (YES 3 DEGREES I'M SERIOUS) and move to 439|177 ok
4. 01:00:547 (3,4,5) - These blankets can be done better imo fixed a bit

Inversal wrote:

Insane

00:01:321 (3) - Ctrl+G? og good, fixed
01:14:192 (6) - Optional : You can delete this note and create jumps. it's fine to me.
Really good diif. Flawless!

Yoges wrote:

[Revival]

1. 00:14:095 (6,1,2) - I think the 00:14:482 (2) - should be pointing downwards or something, that way the flow would be emphasizing the vocals better, the flow is a bit too linear as everything is just going to the left. no change.
2. 00:28:418 (2) - Same as above. Its too anticlockwise. fixed

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