1. 00:25:029 (2,4) - nazi, stack
2. 00:36:001 (2,3) - better to stack, may cause confusion
3. 00:43:029 (2,3,4) - an awkward flow(in fact antijump) imo, try this? http://puu.sh/mDTsC/7cac111e86.jpg
4. 00:46:457 (4,1) - make this distance a bit larger? the drum sound quite emphasizes
5. 01:28:972 (1) - 01:29:486 (2) - extend to blue tick at least thanks, it sounds like broken now
6. 01:29:829 (3,4) - the rhythm just goes wrong here, should be like http://puu.sh/mDTAN/d9fa0e878b.jpg
7. 01:39:772 (5,1) - swap nc and nc at 01:40:458 (5) - ? just my view
8. 02:33:772 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - try a decreasing ds on this stream, works better
9. 04:03:344 - why no note? why not extend 04:02:744 (1) - ????????????
10. 04:16:801 (2) - same as01:28:972 (1) -
11. 04:17:144 (3,4) - again, same as 01:29:829 (3,4) -
12. 04:27:086 (5,1,5) - same as 01:39:772 (5,1) -

Minakami Yuki wrote:

1. Just some complaints.
2. My personal suggestions.
3. Highly recommended.
4. Unrankable, you have to fix it.

Euphoria

1. 00:25:029 (2,4) - nazi, stack
2. 00:36:001 (2,3) - better to stack, may cause confusion
3. 00:43:029 (2,3,4) - an awkward flow(in fact antijump) imo, try this? http://puu.sh/mDTsC/7cac111e86.jpg
4. 00:46:457 (4,1) - make this distance a bit larger? the drum sound quite emphasizes
5. 01:28:972 (1) - 01:29:486 (2) - extend to blue tick at least thanks, it sounds like broken now
6. 01:29:829 (3,4) - the rhythm just goes wrong here, should be like http://puu.sh/mDTAN/d9fa0e878b.jpg
7. 01:39:772 (5,1) - swap nc and nc at 01:40:458 (5) - ? just my view
8. 02:33:772 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - try a decreasing ds on this stream, works better <--- I don't like ._.
9. 04:03:344 - why no note? why not extend 04:02:744 (1) - ????????????
10. 04:16:801 (2) - same as01:28:972 (1) -
11. 04:17:144 (3,4) - again, same as 01:29:829 (3,4) -
12. 04:27:086 (5,1,5) - same as 01:39:772 (5,1) -

Minakami Yuki wrote:

seems you havent change the rhythm at 01:29:829 (3,4) - also 04:17:144 (3,4) - , imo it's very obvious that the beat is at 01:30:001 - and 04:17:315 - , i cant see any reason why you dont choose to follow the music. Can you give me some explanation of keeping it?

also, extend 04:16:286 (1) - to 04:16:715 - ?

Minakami Yuki wrote:

Approved!

1. You have to add SliderBorder yo your skinset. You can do it by editing your .osu difficulty and adding something like SliderBorder: 255,255,255 (where 255,255,255 can be replaced with any RGB colour you want.(
   
   Code

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 77,253,218
   Combo2 : 28,238,255
   Combo3 : 155,255,255
   Combo4 : 32,32,255
   Combo5 : 128,128,255
   SliderBorder: 255,255,255

2. I believe that the animation of the sliderball does not work the way you intend it to. There are 10 frames and they are identical. Either add a working animation or remove the unnecessary frames.

• 
  Poggo
  

1. 00:12:172 - even though it's already been offered once, I'd like to make sure that you don't want a circle here. The beat is really strong and in spite of the fact that it's a slow part I'd strongly suggest to have it clickable.
2. 00:25:886 - there is a certain number of extended sliders which ignore beats like the one I linked. If you want more examples, 00:31:544 (1) - this one has a clear stop at 00:31:715.
   Note: 00:32:915 (1) - there are more than that, so I'd like to hear from you why it is done that way. Probably it's better to focus on stronger beats instead of using extended sliders that sound unnatural?

1. 01:56:572 (7) - probbly could use a new combo to emphasize the 1/3 beat here.

Bakari wrote:

Greetings.

I am sorry, but we've got a few things to consider before pushing this forward. Points in bold are the reasons why it was disqualified.

[General]

1. You have to add SliderBorder yo your skinset. You can do it by editing your .osu difficulty and adding something like SliderBorder: 255,255,255 (where 255,255,255 can be replaced with any RGB colour you want.(
   
   Code

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 77,253,218
   Combo2 : 28,238,255
   Combo3 : 155,255,255
   Combo4 : 32,32,255
   Combo5 : 128,128,255
   SliderBorder: 255,255,255

   <--- done
2. I believe that the animation of the sliderball does not work the way you intend it to. There are 10 frames and they are identical. Either add a working animation or remove the unnecessary frames.

<--- done

[Euphoria]

• 
  Poggo
  

1. 00:12:172 - even though it's already been offered once, I'd like to make sure that you don't want a circle here. The beat is really strong and in spite of the fact that it's a slow part I'd strongly suggest to have it clickable.
2. 00:25:886 - there is a certain number of extended sliders which ignore beats like the one I linked. If you want more examples, 00:31:544 (1) - this one has a clear stop at 00:31:715.
   Note: 00:32:915 (1) - there are more than that, so I'd like to hear from you why it is done that way. Probably it's better to focus on stronger beats instead of using extended sliders that sound unnatural?

Shadren

1. 01:56:572 (7) - probbly could use a new combo to emphasize the 1/3 beat here.

Pretty interesting mix of styles. Good luck on re-qualification.

Feel free to contact me if you want something translated/explained better. The post is written in English, so that everyone is free to join the discussion.

ztrot wrote:

Alrighty requested to check and see if all changes were applied everything looks good now and I'm going to help you get this back to qualified status good luck and fight on!

SolrosRepica wrote:

hiya~~

I've played this map.
Very nice bg,adjust,flow,About the bpm change timing.

I like it

Bakari wrote:

Doublepost for the sake of posting a lovely heart.

Qualified!

Mao wrote:

Congrats /o/