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Remo Prototype[CV: Hanamori Yumiri] - Sendan Life

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Narcissu
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年4月19日 at 18:32:20

Artist: Remo Prototype[CV: Hanamori Yumiri]
Title: Sendan Life
Source: ガラスの花と壊す世界
Tags: Little CloudSplash16 Crystal vocaloid Chukka やしきん yashikin Glass no Hana to Kowasu Sekai GARAKOWA Restore the World Vitreous Flower Destroy the World
BPM: 227
Filesize: 4341kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Crystal's Garakowa (6.18 stars, 332 notes)
  2. Easy (1.3 stars, 70 notes)
  3. Extra (5.62 stars, 335 notes)
  4. Little's Hard (3.3 stars, 219 notes)
  5. Little's Insane (4.53 stars, 294 notes)
  6. Normal (2.17 stars, 127 notes)
Download: Remo Prototype[CV: Hanamori Yumiri] - Sendan Life
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changed mp3, REDL 3/29 Orz

H/I by Little , Garakowa by Crystal
SPOILER
very very thx Crystal do GD, add fav, shoot 3 star, find bn…… …… ……

Shad0w1and ps BG （delete logo）

yf_bmp fix mp3

4k mania set, my ENH and Dellvangel's MX
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ZZHBOY
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ZZHBOY
这啥歌 我记得我当时看动画的时候没听到有这么快的歌 刚刚发现动画没删就又打开翻了下似乎没听到这歌也
Narcissu
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Narcissu
動畫裏面的插入歌和片尾曲都是慢歌，這個應該是OP , 宣傳片

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look like i can't map full and my hard/insane need delete , will cut :o

fuck myself , add easy diff , normal remaped …… for full , just need GD and more time

can't map full , cut cut cut , keep easy diff

Pururut
488 posts
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Pururut
我差点以为是面码
SuperMIC
420 posts
Joined July 2011
SuperMIC
queue

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[Easy]

00:44:789 (3) - I think (2) overlaps this too much... consider moving this up more along with the rest of the pattern?
00:48:886 (3,4) - make parallel?
00:58:533 (4) - move the middle slider point up by 1 grid and it will blanket better.
01:11:221 (4) - Again, I think there's too much overlap. Move it down?

clean.

[Normal]

00:10:560 (3,4) - 1/2 at 227 bpm is basically 1/4 at 113.5 bpm; I think it's too fast for a Normal. Just make this a 1/2 slider.
00:33:159 (3) - Make this parallel to the side of 00:32:102 (1)
00:37:917 (3,1) - Blanket can be better; either adjust (3) or move (1)
00:39:238 (2,3) - Make parallel?
00:40:560 (1,2) - ^
00:54:040 (4,1) - I still think 1/2 is too fast for a Normal, but maybe it's ok here since (1) is a slider.
00:58:269 (2,3) - ^
01:01:970 (1,2) - too much overlap. move (2) and (3) up?
01:03:027 (3,1) - make parallel?
01:06:727 (2,3) - 1/2
01:08:842 (2) - This should be extended so that it ends on 01:09:370 (next white tick) to match the vocals
01:15:978 (4) - Move middle slider point left one grid to make a better blanket

[Extra]

00:12:410 (4,5) - This should also be a jump.
00:19:679 (2) - consider ctrl+g
00:20:736 (2) - just stack this under the start of (1)
00:25:626 (4) - Move this so it makes an equilateral triangle with (3) and with the end of (2)
00:26:287 (3,4) - Make parallel?
00:28:137 (2,3,4,5) - (2,3) and (4,5) are spaced too close together. There should at least be some space between them.
00:38:181 (6,1) - Make (6) parallel to (1)
00:41:353 (1,2) - Make (1) parallel to (2)
00:53:247 (1,2,3) - I think these should be jumps.
01:04:348 (3) - Try ctrl+g here then move (2) to the new start of (3)
01:19:943 (2) - should be further away from (1)

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cool mapset and song! GL

-SMIC
Narcissu
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SuperMICrophone wrote:

queue

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[Easy]

00:44:789 (3) - I think (2) overlaps this too much... consider moving this up more along with the rest of the pattern?……i think it's ok
00:48:886 (3,4) - make parallel?……i dislike parallel 233
00:58:533 (4) - move the middle slider point up by 1 grid and it will blanket better.……1 grid too nazi lol
01:11:221 (4) - Again, I think there's too much overlap. Move it down?

clean.

[Normal]

00:10:560 (3,4) - 1/2 at 227 bpm is basically 1/4 at 113.5 bpm; I think it's too fast for a Normal. Just make this a 1/2 slider. …… note for drum better …… 1/2 no problem imo
00:33:159 (3) - Make this parallel to the side of 00:32:102 (1)
00:37:917 (3,1) - Blanket can be better; either adjust (3) or move (1)
00:39:238 (2,3) - Make parallel?
00:40:560 (1,2) - ^
00:54:040 (4,1) - I still think 1/2 is too fast for a Normal, but maybe it's ok here since (1) is a slider.
00:58:269 (2,3) - ^
01:01:970 (1,2) - too much overlap. move (2) and (3) up?
01:03:027 (3,1) - make parallel?
01:06:727 (2,3) - 1/2
01:08:842 (2) - This should be extended so that it ends on 01:09:370 (next white tick) to match the vocals …… yes，i mistake
01:15:978 (4) - Move middle slider point left one grid to make a better blanket

[Extra]

00:12:410 (4,5) - This should also be a jump. …… e , i not want add too many jump
00:19:679 (2) - consider ctrl+g
00:20:736 (2) - just stack this under the start of (1) …… dislike slider stack 【【
00:25:626 (4) - Move this so it makes an equilateral triangle with (3) and with the end of (2) ……ok
00:26:287 (3,4) - Make parallel?
00:28:137 (2,3,4,5) - (2,3) and (4,5) are spaced too close together. There should at least be some space between them.…… for the voice …… space it a bit hard
00:38:181 (6,1) - Make (6) parallel to (1)
00:41:353 (1,2) - Make (1) parallel to (2)
00:53:247 (1,2,3) - I think these should be jumps.……anti-jump is jump too ?
01:04:348 (3) - Try ctrl+g here then move (2) to the new start of (3)……ok
01:19:943 (2) - should be further away from (1)

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cool mapset and song! GL

-SMIC
Dellvangel
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Dellvangel
Omg, i like this song so much >w<b

*Throw stars :)
Narcissu
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Narcissu
;w;

thx very much ><

i like your map song too XD
Dellvangel
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Dellvangel

Narcissu wrote:

;w;

thx very much ><

i like your map song too XD
lol, your mod really surprised me xD
actually, i want to mod your map but i don't know about std at all :(

btw, can you add me as your friends? >w<
09kami
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09kami
辅导员我来摸你了！


Flower
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Flower
玻璃的我 破碎之世

[Extra]
不错哦，这个屌
00:46:507 - 有一个音，加上有更好的连贯感
00:48:555 - vocal有一个音，加上1/4的note或者把00:48:357 (2) - 改成3/4比较合曲
00:54:569 (2,3,4,5) - 是我的话会给它加上normal sample，当然随你喜欢
00:56:815 - 我认为这里有一个circle比较合曲，即把00:56:683 (2) - 拆开比较舒服
01:03:423 (4,5,6) - 个人觉得改成normal sample比较不错

[Insane]
0108?
01:02:630 (1) - it seems to be a complete stack. recommended moving right and down 4px respectively
no much problem

[Hard]
00:32:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is a over obvious difficulty peak. considering it is not a part where it should be hard, recommend making some adjustment here

没了
最近摸力越来越烂了，对不起

祝早日rank~
Narcissu
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Narcissu

Flower wrote:

玻璃的我 破碎之世 …… 玻璃之花和崩壞的世界


[Extra]
不错哦，这个屌
00:46:507 - 有一个音，加上有更好的连贯感……這樣後面有感覺一點
00:48:555 - vocal有一个音，加上1/4的note或者把00:48:357 (2) - 改成3/4比较合曲……好 …… 改不動
00:54:569 (2,3,4,5) - 是我的话会给它加上normal sample，当然随你喜欢……加了whistle
00:56:815 - 我认为这里有一个circle比较合曲，即把00:56:683 (2) - 拆开比较舒服……現在的好打一點，做七星的話加上
01:03:423 (4,5,6) - 个人觉得改成normal sample比较不错……好

没了
最近摸力越来越烂了，对不起

祝早日rank~
KaedekaShizuru
625 posts
Joined January 2013
KaedekaShizuru
[General]
you need add little's used ID CloudSplash16 in tags.
and del excess timing points in little's insane ＆hard.
SPOILER

[Extra]
00:09:767 (2,3,4,5) - 我觉得完全可以摆的随机一点
00:13:335 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ↑
00:19:679 (2) - CTRL+G如何
00:38:445 - 这里开始的减速段我觉得可以再慢点 1.0以下都可以的样子 让slider不至于过长搞得比较难排列 整体速度都挺快的
00:58:005 (3) - 目测并不在00:57:740 (2) 和00:57:476 (1) 的正中间
感觉没什么可说的……


[Insane]
00:28:005 (1,3) - maybe this two need a little bit apart of each other
00:38:181 (6) - anti-jump NC plz
00:52:851 (3,4,5) - hmmm...maybe here also need NC？

other diffs all fine.
加油低阶了他们
good luck~
Kibbleru
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Kibbleru
><
01:21:000 - imo you could just cut the vocals out here.

extra
00:09:370 (3,1) - stacking,, works but imo it's kinda anticlimatic for me. what i would suggest is maybe something like this
SPOILER
00:11:485 (3,1) - ^
00:32:630 (4) - for overlapping jump patterns i would recommend putting nc here.
00:46:507 - add circle and stack it on 00:46:639 (2) - here? would improve readability
00:53:247 (1,2) - u can try turning these into 3/4 sliders imo.
idk what i did lmao. just thought it might be cool
SPOILER

roberto
00:24:436 (6) - uhm
SPOILER
00:53:776 (3) - u can increase the spacing here

little
00:32:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is a bit of a difficulty spike for hard, not really the spacing but the tapping is rather hard for this bpm.
00:45:846 (3,4,1) - don't really like the way u layed out the spacing here, 00:45:846 (3,4) - these could be further

uh couldn't really find anything for easy and normal :<
09kami
828 posts
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09kami
[Extra]

00:19:943 (3,4,5) - 3放到5的位置 5放到4位置 4放到3的位置

00:23:644 (1,2,3,4) - 这个地方 其实很难读 打的时候实际测试出来的 大概太弱

00:24:635 (7) - 这地方没有音

00:32:498 (3,4,5) - 这个地方可以换成一个1/4的滑条比较好

01:15:978 (3,4,5,6) - 这个地方比起前面来说却好读得多

卧槽辅导员的EX做得好流畅

[Little's Insane]

very beautiful.....but what's this? 01:18:622 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) -


这图好难摸啊 感觉已经找不到什么摸的地方了 要不这个就当NM得了 或者我先欠着个M4M 可以随时找我再摸一张图 我晚上基本都有空
Narcissu
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Narcissu

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

[General]
you need add little's used ID CloudSplash16 in tags.
and del excess timing points in little's insane ＆hard.
SPOILER

fix

[Extra]
00:09:767 (2,3,4,5) - 我觉得完全可以摆的随机一点
00:13:335 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ↑
00:19:679 (2) - CTRL+G如何
00:38:445 - 这里开始的减速段我觉得可以再慢点 1.0以下都可以的样子 让slider不至于过长搞得比较难排列 整体速度都挺快的……lfj 的圖基本是1.8*0.75~1.1，我已經遠低於偶像【【
00:58:005 (3) - 目测并不在00:57:740 (2) 和00:57:476 (1) 的正中间 …… 稍微修了一下……四級網格差不多極限了
感觉没什么可说的……

other diffs all fine.
加油低阶了他们
good luck~

Kibbleru wrote:

><
01:21:000 - imo you could just cut the vocals out here. …… i tried , but will impact 01:20:736 - finish Orz

extra
00:09:370 (3,1) - stacking,, works but imo it's kinda anticlimatic for me. what i would suggest is maybe something like this …… no jump more easy …… if i do EXEX
SPOILER
00:11:485 (3,1) - ^
00:32:630 (4) - for overlapping jump patterns i would recommend putting nc here. …… don't mind xd
00:46:507 - add circle and stack it on 00:46:639 (2) - here? would improve readability……ok
00:53:247 (1,2) - u can try turning these into 3/4 sliders imo.……hate 3/4 :?
idk what i did lmao. just thought it might be cool
SPOILER

roberto …… 納尼 ???
00:24:436 (6) - uhm
SPOILER
00:53:776 (3) - u can increase the spacing here

uh couldn't really find anything for easy and normal :<

09kami wrote:

[Extra]

00:19:943 (3,4,5) - 3放到5的位置 5放到4位置 4放到3的位置 ……no , jump here 00:20:340 (1) -

00:23:644 (1,2,3,4) - 这个地方 其实很难读 打的时候实际测试出来的 大概太弱

00:24:635 (7) - 这地方没有音 …… overmap have fun 【【

00:32:498 (3,4,5) - 这个地方可以换成一个1/4的滑条比较好…… 1/4 滑條人玩？

01:15:978 (3,4,5,6) - 这个地方比起前面来说却好读得多

这图好难摸啊 感觉已经找不到什么摸的地方了 要不这个就当NM得了 或者我先欠着个M4M 可以随时找我再摸一张图 我晚上基本都有空 …… don't mind 233
@little : i fix tag （CloudSplash16）and delete unused green line （after 1:20）, update plz :roll:
Little
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Joined November 2012
Little
Flower

Flower wrote:

[Insane]
0108? 0108??? lol I don't think so
01:02:630 (1) - it seems to be a complete stack. recommended moving right and down 4px respectively ok, changed it.
no much problem

[Hard]
00:32:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is a over obvious difficulty peak. considering it is not a part where it should be hard, recommend making some adjustment here Yeah... it was originally 1/1 but SR too low and I made diff spike xd. Changed it, and also change some other parts of the map to maintain difficulty.
KaedekaShizuru

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

[Insane]
00:28:005 (1,3) - maybe this two need a little bit apart of each other It's fine.
00:38:181 (6) - anti-jump NC plz ok, change combo.
00:52:851 (3,4,5) - hmmm...maybe here also need NC？No.
Kibbleru

Kibbleru wrote:

roberto
00:24:436 (6) - uhm I like my pattern better.
00:53:776 (3) - u can increase the spacing here (3,4) gets a little crazy if I do that.

little
00:32:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is a bit of a difficulty spike for hard, not really the spacing but the tapping is rather hard for this bpm. Yeah, changed stuff.
00:45:846 (3,4,1) - don't really like the way u layed out the spacing here, 00:45:846 (3,4) - these could be further I think this is fine. I'm conforming to distance snap and the angle makes it feel further than it is.
09kami

09kami wrote:

[Little's Insane]

very beautiful.....but what's this? 01:18:622 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - lol nerfed it.
Thanks.

http://puu.sh/n2q5y/79bea5e18f.zip
Kamio Misuzu
580 posts
Joined November 2012
Kamio Misuzu
[Extra]
00:22:586 (1) - ctrl g？
00:36:992 (5) - 和00:36:595 (3) - 这个折返形状弄成对称的？一样的调子，弄成向下弯（笑脸形状）的会不会比较好
00:46:507 (2) - 这个去掉？从这里00:46:639 (3) - 开始加速比较好
01:09:965 (7) - 算overmap？你看要去掉不

[Insane]
00:18:754 (2,3) - try this
SPOILER
01:01:970 (2,1) - safe?
01:12:212 (6) - delete

[Hard]
00:28:798 (4) - change into a slider+note. For example
SPOILER
00:34:613 (3) - delete
01:11:749 (5,6) - why 1/4 reverse sliders? 4 notes or 2 sliders are enough imo

抱歉normal和Easy实在不会提什么意见。给你个星星以表歉意- -

GL
Narcissu
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Topic Starter
Narcissu

Kamio Misuzu wrote:

[Extra]
00:22:586 (1) - ctrl g？ …… 差不多，後面還是想跳跳
00:36:992 (5) - 和00:36:595 (3) - 这个折返形状弄成对称的？一样的调子，弄成向下弯（笑脸形状）的会不会比较好 …… 好
00:46:507 (2) - 这个去掉？从这里00:46:639 (3) - 开始加速比较好……一開始就是沒有的，不過花花和kibb都讓我加個圈，我再看看別人怎麼說
01:09:965 (7) - 算overmap？你看要去掉不……大丈夫萌大奶

GL
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@Little : maybe will add Crystal'diff , let me 3P
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little

Kamio Misuzu wrote:

[Insane]
00:18:754 (2,3) - try this I like my placement better.
01:01:970 (2,1) - safe? idc if it's safe. It's fun this way.
01:12:212 (6) - delete Why?

[Hard]
00:28:798 (4) - change into a slider+note. No... I prefer my rhythm.
00:34:613 (3) - delete Why?
01:11:749 (5,6) - why 1/4 reverse sliders? 4 notes or 2 sliders are enough imo I think 1/4 repeat slider fits here.
Thanks.
@Narcissu: For difficulty spread, where will Crystal diff go? I mapped my diffs to fit this current spread, so maybe I need to adjust...
Factorial
691 posts
Joined August 2013
Factorial
Hi, modding here!
[Easy]
Looks good and the diff plays well to the music.
[Normal]
  1. 01:00:384 (4,5) - Fix blanketing
  2. 00:56:419 (3) - Should be this like 00:58:401 (3) ?
  3. 01:04:877 (3) - ^
  4. 01:20:604 - Add circle here? This fits the instrument.
[Little's Hard]
  1. 01:29:194 - There are timing points outside of the song
  2. 00:34:613 (3) - Remove? To be consistent with 00:25:758 (1,2)
[Little's Insane]
  1. 01:29:194 - Same as Hard
  2. Nothing's wrong with the diff. Nice!
That's all I can mod. Good luck :D
Narcissu
1,744 posts
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Topic Starter
Narcissu

Neil Leo wrote:

Hi, modding here!
[Easy]
Looks good and the diff plays well to the music.
[Normal]
  1. 01:00:384 (4,5) - Fix blanketing …… fix
  2. 00:56:419 (3) - Should be this like 00:58:401 (3) ? …… too many 1/2 Orz , and drum when 1/1 , i want skip some 1/2
  3. 01:04:877 (3) - ^
  4. 01:20:604 - Add circle here? This fits the instrument. …… 1/2 * 3 a bit hard
That's all I can mod. Good luck :D
@Little : i don't know , i guesses 6~7 star （because he have 6000 pp）…… just he say he want to do a gd …… if you dislike it , i will reject it

edit :

look like Crystal'insane rip , he want to map 5~6 , but he say he need wait because t/420223 …… 我完全無法理解這人是怎麼想到這個規則的
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Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little

Neil Leo wrote:

[Little's Hard]
  1. 01:29:194 - There are timing points outside of the song Already removed those...
  2. 00:34:613 (3) - Remove? To be consistent with 00:25:758 (1,2) No, I think it's ok
[Little's Insane]
  1. 01:29:194 - Same as Hard
  2. Nothing's wrong with the diff. Nice!
That's all I can mod. Good luck :D
Thanks.

@Narcissu, if it's 6-7 star, then it's ok.
liaoxingyao
864 posts
Joined November 2013
liaoxingyao
only 骂娘(
[EZ]
00:20:934，00:21:133 你在抓鼓把 add一下
00:27:873 这一段怎么突然就1/1了..?
00:32:102 (32102|0) - ^
00:37:784 (37784|2) - 这里突然放个这么长的面条不太好吧
01:10:296 (70296|2) - 抓鼓的话还是1/1
[NM]
00:13:996 (13996|0) - 这个note删了吧 后面有相同的地方也删掉
00:59:591 这里突然抓人声会不会不太好
01:08:049 ^
我觉得这个完全就是HD
[HD]
00:12:542 (12542|1) - 这个面条可以不放 换成2note 然后00:12:674加个note这样
00:42:674 (42674|3) - 这里为什么要放面条啊..
00:59:591 这一段突然这人声是不是不太好
01:03:754 (63754|0) - 这个要不要delete
01:08:049 突然抓人声不太好吧
01:20:207 试试这样
大概就水这么多了 GL~
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu

liaoxingyao wrote:

only 骂娘(
[EZ]
00:20:934，00:21:133 你在抓鼓把 add一下 …… 好
00:27:873 这一段怎么突然就1/1了..? …… 弄錯了……
00:32:102 (32102|0) - ^
00:37:784 (37784|2) - 这里突然放个这么长的面条不太好吧 …… 縮了一點
01:10:296 (70296|2) - 抓鼓的话还是1/1 …… 好
[NM]
00:13:996 (13996|0) - 这个note删了吧 后面有相同的地方也删掉 …… 不要，我作圖的原則就是塞爆
00:59:591 这里突然抓人声会不会不太好 …… 這樣有感覺點
01:08:049 ^
我觉得这个完全就是HD
[HD]
00:12:542 (12542|1) - 这个面条可以不放 换成2note 然后00:12:674加个note这样 …… 好
00:42:674 (42674|3) - 这里为什么要放面条啊.. …… 餓……不知道……換了
00:59:591 这一段突然这人声是不是不太好…… 這樣有感覺點
01:03:754 (63754|0) - 这个要不要delete……刪了
01:08:049 突然抓人声不太好吧
01:20:207 试试这样

……好
大概就水这么多了 GL~
難道沒什麼問題？
Lavender
886 posts
Joined January 2014
Lavender
先随便写一点

Ex和其他几个diff的Widescreen Support不一样
In Extra:
00:09:767 (2,3,4,5) - 这里间距比起同样音程的前后是不是少了
In Hard:
01:20:472 (4,5,6) - Because of 01:19:547 (1) - overlap,distance change at these three circles is hard to recognize, try to nerf a bit.
In Easy:
因为是bpm减半做的，导致漏了大部分clap，要不要用tick补上呢

还弄hybrid，这样更难找bn了orz
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu

Lavender wrote:

先随便写一点

Ex和其他几个diff的Widescreen Support不一样 …… fix
In Extra:
00:09:767 (2,3,4,5) - 这里间距比起同样音程的前后是不是少了…… 音程不是高八度什麼的麼……
In Hard:
01:20:472 (4,5,6) - Because of 01:19:547 (1) - overlap,distance change at these three circles is hard to recognize, try to nerf a bit.
In Easy:
因为是bpm减半做的，导致漏了大部分clap，要不要用tick补上呢 …… 根本填不上的，空太多了

还弄hybrid，这样更难找bn了orz …… 再過幾天就有很多BN 了Orz
_Zenith
326 posts
Joined June 2015
_Zenith
From QQ!
Great song.
here's my mod
[General]
Title: OK!
Artist: OK!
Hitsound: OK!
Disabled countdown: OK!
Widescreen support: OK!

[NM]
00:33:159 (33159|3) - Single note?
Overall,NM diff should be doesn't have big problem.But you need pay attention on jack and balance.
#Buticanthelpyouonbalanceandjackyouknowhahaha
[HD]
00:19:811 (19811|1) - Diffierent sound change to 2?
00:21:000 (21000|0,21066|1,21133|2) - Are you following the piano?If yes just rearrange to 1/8.if not here is still okay.
00:23:908 (23908|3) - Double note? Because here is same sound on 00:24:436.
00:26:551 (26551|0) - ^
00:28:005 (28005|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4538242 That better than use chain of jacks.
00:40:296 (40296|0,40560|0,41353|0,41749|0) - Balance dude.
00:58:798 (58798|3,58798|2,59062|2,59062|3,59326|2,59326|3) - Actually i don't know what are you following for.

That's all
Good luck!
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
moonlightleaf
[Normal]

来个别样mod
SPOILER

[Hard]

00:09:370 (3,4) - 叠 ,stack

00:11:484 (2,3) - ^

00:32:630 (3,4,5) - 这仨换个折返? change to a reverse

00:34:613 (3,4,5) - 试试删3 , 4放2上 再移下5调DS delete 3 , 4put on 2 then move 5 to make the same DS

00:41:749 (2) - 有点那啥, change to a reverse from 00:41:617 to 00:41:881

00:43:071 有音,后面 补note? end , then 00:43:203 add note ?

00:44:128 ^

00:49:282 (2,3) - 也换滑条吧 slider too ?

[Extra]

00:19:943 (3,4) - ctrl+g

00:23:776 (2,3) - ^

00:27:212 (2) - ^

00:28:798 (1) - ^

00:35:009 (4) - ^

00:31:044 (1,2) - 试试1ctrl+g 然后2叠在00:31:970 (1) -

00:36:066 (3,1) - try
SPOILER

00:57:212 (5) - 下移? (386,304)?

00:59:326 (6) - ctrl+g? 后面的1好接一些

01:18:093 (3,4,5,6) - 这2对换一下位置

切歌不好!
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu

-[Apple]- wrote:

From QQ!
Great song.
here's my mod
[General]
Title: OK!
Artist: OK!
Hitsound: OK!
Disabled countdown: OK!
Widescreen support: OK!

[NM]
00:33:159 (33159|3) - Single note? …… no , 2note downbeat
Overall,NM diff should be doesn't have big problem.But you need pay attention on jack and balance.
#Buticanthelpyouonbalanceandjackyouknowhahaha
[HD]
00:19:811 (19811|1) - Diffierent sound change to 2? …… ok
00:21:000 (21000|0,21066|1,21133|2) - Are you following the piano?If yes just rearrange to 1/8.if not here is still okay.……don't mind 233
00:23:908 (23908|3) - Double note? Because here is same sound on 00:24:436. …… e , skip some beat …… all 2 note a bit hard
00:26:551 (26551|0) - ^
00:28:005 (28005|0) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4538242 That better than use chain of jacks.…… ok
00:40:296 (40296|0,40560|0,41353|0,41749|0) - Balance dude.……no , for the voice
00:58:798 (58798|3,58798|2,59062|2,59062|3,59326|2,59326|3) - Actually i don't know what are you following for.…… changed

That's all
Good luck!

moonlightleaf wrote:

[Normal]

来个别样mod …… 不要短折返啦
SPOILER
[Extra]

00:19:943 (3,4) - ctrl+g …… 和正常的不一樣會有感覺一點

00:23:776 (2,3) - ^……↑↑↑

00:27:212 (2) - ^……↑↑↑

00:28:798 (1) - ^……↑↑↑

00:35:009 (4) - ^……↑↑↑

00:31:044 (1,2) - 试试1ctrl+g 然后2叠在00:31:970 (1) -

00:36:066 (3,1) - try …
SPOILER

我是想這樣的重複平行↓↓↓
SPOILER

00:57:212 (5) - 下移? (386,304)?……好

00:59:326 (6) - ctrl+g? 后面的1好接一些……滑條沒難度的

01:18:093 (3,4,5,6) - 这2对换一下位置……好

切歌不好!…… 我做不了full 啊Orz
use chinese mod little's diff plz
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little

moonlightleaf wrote:

[Hard]

00:09:370 (3,4) - 叠 ,stack

00:11:484 (2,3) - ^

00:32:630 (3,4,5) - 这仨换个折返? change to a reverse

00:34:613 (3,4,5) - 试试删3 , 4放2上 再移下5调DS delete 3 , 4put on 2 then move 5 to make the same DS

00:41:749 (2) - 有点那啥, change to a reverse from 00:41:617 to 00:41:881 Changed this.

00:43:071 有音,后面 补note? end , then 00:43:203 add note ? Changed.

00:44:128 ^ Changed.

00:49:282 (2,3) - 也换滑条吧 slider too ?
The other ones are also valid points, but I want to keep the current because those changes will make the diff too easy, relative to Insane diff. Will be large difficulty gap between Hard and Insane if I change those.
Thanks.
http://puu.sh/n9yFe/f733fa8afc.zip
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu

IamKwaN wrote:

Subject: KwaN's Metadata Checking Queue ヽ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ

Narcissu wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/411894

thx xd
你好!

Unicode Artist 應該是 リモ Prototype[CV：花守ゆみり], 那 Romanised Artist 就是 Remo Prototype[CV: Hanamori Yumiri]. 其他沒問題! Good luck~

根據:
http://puu.sh/na5V5/37c7621577.jpg from http://garakowa.jp/ticket/
@little : sorry . update plz ::>_<::
Dellvangel
1,269 posts
Joined November 2014
Dellvangel
Oh, Osu!mania diff? really? lemme mod it for you >w<

1|2|3|4
[EZ]
00:12:807 - change to LN? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550443
00:20:207 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550454 better flow imo.
00:22:851 - i know your intention here, but it just not balance imo, may be https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550460 for balance and better flow too imo.
00:24:701 (24701|2) - move to col 4 for balance.
00:25:758 (25758|2) - ^ emphasis the piano sound too.
00:26:815 (26815|2) -
00:26:419 (26419|0,26551|1,27080|0,27212|1) - it's better to avoid same pattern because somehow it feels boring to play, may be https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550477 .
00:37:520 (37520|2) - move to 2, for balance, also the sound is different with 00:37:256 (37256|2) - .
00:46:771 (46771|1) - move to 1 for balance.
00:51:397 (51397|2) - ^
00:53:247 (53247|2,53511|2,53776|2,54040|2) - something like 3|2|3|2 is better imo.
01:07:124 (67124|2) - move to 1? for balance.
01:07:784 (67784|1) - move to 4? the sound is different with 01:07:520 (67520|1) - .
01:19:414 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550491 better flow and more balance.

[NM]
00:13:203 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550503 more balance and better flow.
00:14:657 (14657|3,14789|3) - move to col 1, then 00:14:921 (14921|1,15053|1) - to col 4.
00:27:080 (27080|2,27212|3) - ctrl+h is better imo.
00:44:525 (44525|1) - move to col 3, for balance, because the col 3 is too empty at this part.
00:48:357 (48357|2) - move to col 4, easier for play.
00:50:472 (50472|0) - ^
00:54:436 (54436|2,54569|0) - move to right side 1x easier for play and better flow.
01:03:820 (63820|3) - move to col 2, better flow and more comfortable for play.
01:09:899 (69899|0,70031|1) - move to right side 1x.

[HD]
00:24:701 (24701|1) - move to col 4, emphasis the piano sound and more comfortable for play.
00:41:353 (41353|0,41749|0) - ... etc, i know the kick sound still same, but it's better if you variate the col (mostly osumania chart always like that).
00:48:225 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550534 .
00:48:886 (48886|3,49282|3) - it's better to avoid a pattern like this may be try like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550537 .
00:50:472 (50472|1) - move to col 1, ^

overall, the pitch relevancy is good, all you need is learn about balance, and the pattern that comfortable for play if you want to map a o!m mapset.

actually i already map this song just fur fun, may be around 3 weeks ago, i can give you mine for the MX diff if you want https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550552 .

good luck! >w<b
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Topic Starter
Narcissu

Dellvangel wrote:

Oh, Osu!mania diff? really? lemme mod it for you >w<

1|2|3|4
[EZ]
00:12:807 - change to LN? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550443
00:20:207 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550454 better flow imo.
00:22:851 - i know your intention here, but it just not balance imo, may be https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550460 for balance and better flow too imo.
00:24:701 (24701|2) - move to col 4 for balance.
00:25:758 (25758|2) - ^ emphasis the piano sound too. …… the part slow than other part , so i give up 2 note ;w;
00:26:815 (26815|2) -
00:26:419 (26419|0,26551|1,27080|0,27212|1) - it's better to avoid same pattern because somehow it feels boring to play, may be https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550477 .
00:37:520 (37520|2) - move to 2, for balance, also the sound is different with 00:37:256 (37256|2) - .
00:46:771 (46771|1) - move to 1 for balance.
00:51:397 (51397|2) - ^
00:53:247 (53247|2,53511|2,53776|2,54040|2) - something like 3|2|3|2 is better imo. ……for i add 3 extra clap , i think 333 fine
01:07:124 (67124|2) - move to 1? for balance.
01:07:784 (67784|1) - move to 4? the sound is different with 01:07:520 (67520|1) - .
01:19:414 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550491 better flow and more balance.

[NM]
00:13:203 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550503 more balance and better flow.
00:14:657 (14657|3,14789|3) - move to col 1, then 00:14:921 (14921|1,15053|1) - to col 4.
00:27:080 (27080|2,27212|3) - ctrl+h is better imo.
00:44:525 (44525|1) - move to col 3, for balance, because the col 3 is too empty at this part.
00:48:357 (48357|2) - move to col 4, easier for play. …… ln - note easy play for me Orz , maybe other not same as me ?
00:50:472 (50472|0) - ^
00:54:436 (54436|2,54569|0) - move to right side 1x easier for play and better flow.……↑↑↑
01:03:820 (63820|3) - move to col 2, better flow and more comfortable for play. …… same as 01:03:555 (63555|2,63555|3) - look like more feeling
01:09:899 (69899|0,70031|1) - move to right side 1x.

[HD]
00:24:701 (24701|1) - move to col 4, emphasis the piano sound and more comfortable for play.
00:41:353 (41353|0,41749|0) - ... etc, i know the kick sound still same, but it's better if you variate the col (mostly osumania chart always like that). …… i still want to all 1 Orz , my map is std chart and rating #1 xd
00:48:225 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550534 . …… same as NM
00:48:886 (48886|3,49282|3) - it's better to avoid a pattern like this may be try like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550537 . …… ↑↑↑
00:50:472 (50472|1) - move to col 1, ^

overall, the pitch relevancy is good, all you need is learn about balance, and the pattern that comfortable for play if you want to map a o!m mapset. …… ye i don't know everything about mania now , but i still want believe myself according my std experience , make different and have fun ! i will try find some mod and BN for mania , if its not enough to rank , i will delete it ……

actually i already map this song just fur fun, may be around 3 weeks ago, i can give you mine for the MX diff if you want https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4550552 .

i think the song need a diff about 4 star , but i can't play mania > 3star , could you give me your diff ? if you don't mind maybe i will delete mania set XD

good luck! >w<b
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