Thanks guys, nice diffs.
Nice invisible bubblemonstrata wrote:
Looks good! Bubbled!
MadHypnofrog wrote:
yo m4m
easy
fix BG, audio preview, kiais and countdown fixed all except kiai
00:20:974 (3) - I'd make this a reverse-slider as well, ctrl-j, put at the same place and move this 1/2 slider somewhere near changed
00:22:879 (1,2,3) - make it a 90 degree angle? since it looks like a square this was changed as a result of the above
00:31:927 (2) - stack this with 00:30:022 (5) - maybe like you did in the previous section? ok
00:50:974 (2,1) - this could be a nice blanket ok
00:58:593 (3,1) - same. not really a fan of (3) being placed like this though but w/e ok
01:03:831 (2) - a bit of nitpicking, tweak this somehow so it won't overlap with 01:01:927 (2) - ok
01:15:022 (2) - make this more curvy like you did in the kiai plz actually adjusted all of them to be less curved but i changed it to match
01:21:450 (2) - don't really get why this note exists i don't either
01:27:165 (2) - 126 250 for the perfect stack kekeke no jk
01:33:355 (3) - same as 00:20:974 (3) -
02:04:546 (2) - same as 01:15:022 (2) -
02:05:260 (3) - I'd split those into 2 circles ok
02:19:070 (1) - end this here 02:20:974 - maybe? makes more sense for me as it's the downbeat ok
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Shad0w1and wrote:
[mao]
01:02:879 (1,2) - this does not look good tbh Any reasoning?
02:10:260 (2) - 158-279
02:10:498 (3) - 105-280 so it looks better Applied these!
Thanks guys :3MadHypnofrog wrote:
normal
CS 3.5?
00:13:355 (1,2) - ugh I'd do something like this instead Changed it slightly to get the transition smoother but not as much as you did.
00:24:784 (1,2) - same, you got the idea
00:51:450 (1,2) - is this kind of polarity even fine to use in normals cause bakari told me it's not maybe that's because I had normal as my easiest diff whatever Irre should know that better I think it should be fine, we have got an Easy. I really wouldn't do that on a lowest diff yeah
01:00:974 - idk if you're using sv changes in kiai I'd make this part a bit slower, like 0.9x Uhm, I didn't want to cluster the difficulty with many SV changes and I already used one for the Kiai :/
01:02:879 (1,2) - >_> ? ._.
01:12:402 (1,2) - I hate this kind of patterns, just some feedback on that. :<
01:50:022 (1,1) - >___> ? ._.
02:02:879 (2) - be careful with this one, it's fine for me but this might be offscreen for someone else Objects just need to be onscreen in 4:3 and 16:9 and they are. (Is there even a mode this is offscreen? It's usually more for the left and ride side of the screen)
02:05:260 (3) - same as in easy, I'd split those In case Nekomata splits these, I will do so as well to keep it consistent throughout the set.
02:35:736 - y u no note (though it sounds good without it anyway) Because I am not following the vocals here!
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Thanks!Shad0w1and wrote:
[High]
00:30:379 (5) - maybe not a real problem, but consider it is a blue stick slider. i suggest lower the spacing. also consider 00:30:498 - has a drum, so unless you nc, i guess might be confusing fixd
00:45:260 (2) - nc for sv and jump on 00:45:498 (3) - fixd
01:57:641 (1) - consider the spacing b4 and after, even with nc, it is still confusing, 01:56:927 (1,1) - 213-197 is fine imo
02:05:260 (1) - ^
02:11:450 (5) - nc?
02:13:355 (8) - nc
02:15:260 (11) - nc
02:28:593 (5) - nc? fixed all NC
no comment = fixed! thx!-Hakurei- wrote:
[LOW QUALITY /runs]
- incomplete hitsounds (except for the chorus part and some other parts) + some hitsounds that are not relatable based on a song
- 00:22:165 - would be better if you add a note here for following a vocal + other notes nah
- 00:23:831 (1,2) - why is this spacing different from the rest of these 3? her voice is stronger
- 00:39:070 (4,5) - not proper stack here
- 00:40:022 (1,2) - not a proper blanket here m8
- 00:43:831 (1) - random slider whistle
- 00:51:451 (1,1,1,1,1) - LMAO those finishes tell me something about it
- 00:56:927 (7) - remove finish and clap please. it doesn't make any sense for me here need to redo hitsounds xD
- 01:01:927 (3) - clap, not finish
- 01:03:831 (2) - ^
- 01:04:546 (3) - remove finish
- 01:34:070 (3,4,1,2) - this note is kinda trap one for me during a testplay same as before tho, this time trickier
- 01:46:451 (1,2,3,1) - what a boring copy paste here LOL. i prefer something different here
- 01:54:665 (2,3) - i think this blanket is not really neat here
- 02:09:546 (1,2,3) - yo, go for blankets, tq
- 02:11:450 (5) - NC should be good to go
well played, but i think that you're kinda lazy to map the other notes as well
thank yiou a lot!MadHypnofrog wrote:
insane
unsnapped objects
00:15:260 (1,2,1,2) - idk low spacing and nc spam on those doesn't seem right for me her voice tells me to
00:22:284 (4,5) - Y U DO DIS make those stacked please ;_; beats are strong tho
00:33:355 (7) - I'd move this to the left a bit
00:43:831 (1) - spaced stream instead of this pls are you real XD
00:48:355 (4) - stack this with (2)'s tail? increased spacing
01:04:546 (3) - circle at 01:04:546, slider like 01:05:260 (1) - at 01:04:784 - follows the voice
01:14:546 (2,3) - >___> plays really fun you shoudl give it a try
01:28:355 (1,1,1,1) - I'd tweak those NCs but I guess you did that to indicate SV changes so it's fine
01:29:665 (4) - same spacing pls i considered it but i've done it for a reason, bcuz like this the difficulty doesn't spike and it accentuates the voice well
01:46:212 (2) - hard to read since 01:45:617 (2) - is in the same position but is only 1/4 spaced yes
01:48:593 (1,2) - MORE SPACED STREAMS hahaha i wish
02:03:593 (7) - why, nerf this a bit it's the last emphasized part tho
02:04:070 (2,3) - >_____> :O
02:23:593 (1,2,1) - 3/4 reverse slider maybe? no thanks
02:28:593 (5) - NC
02:30:498 (9) - NC fixed both
02:31:212 (1,2,1) - ^ also those are harder to play since there are lyrics in the background so those look like 1/2s moved further
fun diff
oh god k-pop <3 good luck in ranking this!
thx! <3Marianna wrote:
#HIGH QUALITY
- 00:18:951 (1,1) - Start the slider on the white tick, the most noticeable sound is the white tick ok <3
- 00:34:308 - You could put more speed here to give highlight more (It's my favorite part hehehe) yaeh but i think the slow stuff and the good patterns help this better !
- 01:07:998 (1,1,1,1) - Remove the NC please, is beautiful but in multiplayer (co-op) is impossible well.. i prefer beauty
Gl~ :3
20:59 Irreversible: hey hula
20:59 Hula: hi
21:00 Hula: sup
21:00 Irreversible: can u hlpe me with hitsounds
21:00 Hula: mayb
21:00 Irreversible: brb relog
21:03 *Irreversible is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/833967 BoA - Lookbook [HIGH QUALITY]]
21:03 Irreversible: idk if it's good D:
21:03 Hula: you were once qat :|
21:03 Irreversible: i never hitsounded stuff
21:03 Irreversible: and it sounds horrible tbh...
21:03 Irreversible: can u fix for me xD
21:03 Hula: trying to dl
21:03 Hula: osu really hates you if you're not supporter
21:04 Hula: it's quite bad tbh
21:04 Hula: 504 gateway timeout
21:04 Hula: lolkay peppy
21:04 Hula: dling now
21:05 *Hula is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/833967 BoA - Lookbook [HIGH QUALITY]]
21:06 Irreversible: XD..
21:06 Hula: 00:22:403 (2) - clap
21:06 Hula: on both ends?
21:06 Irreversible: about these parts
21:06 Hula: soft
21:06 Irreversible: 00:22:403 - can u hear this sound
21:06 Irreversible: i think it's emphasized poorly
21:07 Irreversible: can you advise me how to make it btter?
21:07 Hula: i hitsound wise?
21:07 Hula: - the i
21:07 Irreversible: yes
21:07 Irreversible: you could also apply stuff you think is needed
21:07 Irreversible: and send me .osu
21:07 Irreversible: it saves us both time
21:07 Irreversible: XD
21:08 Hula: well
21:08 Hula: i never hitsounded kpop before
21:08 Hula: this is hitsounded fine so far imo
21:08 Hula: listyening to rest
21:08 Irreversible: yeah it has weird spots tho :(
21:08 Hula: you're being consistent
21:08 Irreversible: 00:22:284 (1,2) -
21:08 Hula: which is
21:08 Hula: good
21:08 Irreversible: and i don't like this
21:09 Hula: 00:22:284 (1) - drumwhistle? 00:22:403 (2) - soft clap? and drum finish on end?
21:09 Hula: smth like that maybe?
21:09 Hula: idk
21:09 Hula: or soft clap on end as well
21:09 Irreversible: nice
21:09 Hula: idk i just made smth up
21:09 Irreversible: nono too spammy
21:11 Hula: i like this so far
21:11 Hula: i think i worked out your reasnoning for some things
21:11 Irreversible: what
21:11 Hula: 01:19:784 (2) - should be normal whistle too imo
21:11 Irreversible: how to like it :( xD
21:12 Hula: ufuknwotm8
21:12 Hula: that english
21:12 Irreversible: How should I possibly like such unprofessionally made hitsounds?
21:12 Hula: 01:20:022 (1) - place soft whistle or finish on slide end
21:12 Hula: 01:21:927 (1) -
21:12 Hula: same
21:12 Hula: eh, you're being consistent and it's really creative
21:12 Irreversible: done
21:13 Hula: on 3rd kiai now
21:13 Hula: >_>
21:13 Irreversible: sup? xD
21:13 Hula: but too many drum finishes?
21:13 Irreversible: where
21:13 Irreversible: ohh
21:13 Irreversible: i really like this part
21:14 Irreversible: because the drum hitfinishes kinda accentuate the speed
21:14 Hula: 01:24:546 (3) - soft whistle on start and end cos keeps it consistent
21:14 Hula: with later on when you do that with the vocals
21:14 Hula: 01:26:451 (3) -
21:14 Hula: same?
21:14 Irreversible: 01:26:451 (3) - same
21:14 Irreversible: ok
21:14 Irreversible: xd
21:14 Hula: i think it sounds better
21:15 Irreversible: yes
21:15 Hula: since you're hitosounding the vocals here
21:15 Hula: 01:32:403 (1,1,2,3,1) - i like how you're keeping this consistent
21:16 Hula: 01:34:665 (1,2,3) - hitsound this like earlier
21:16 Hula: i guess
21:16 Irreversible: done
21:17 Hula: 01:46:450 (1,2,3,4) - eh
21:18 Hula: 01:46:927 (2) - clap on end 01:47:879 (4) - clap on end
21:18 Irreversible: this kinda ugly
21:18 Irreversible: :( what to do
21:18 Hula: yep
21:18 Hula: okay
21:18 Hula: imo the sliders are bad
21:18 Hula: strong sounds are on the end
21:18 Hula: >_>
21:18 Irreversible: fixed sounds better
21:19 Irreversible: i made weak hitsounds on the end now
21:19 Irreversible: so it fits
21:19 Irreversible: XD
21:19 Hula: k
21:19 Hula: fix da hitsounds though
21:19 Hula: you wanna have your claps in there
21:19 Irreversible: done
21:19 Irreversible: yea
21:19 Hula: cos you're HSing the drums here cos that's what you're following
21:20 Hula: 01:48:593 (5) - NC
21:20 Irreversible: done
21:20 Hula: 01:59:784 (4) - missing your normal hitwhistle which you had here in the first kaii
21:21 Irreversible: lol applied
21:22 Hula: 02:31:212 (1,2,1) - RHYTHM
21:22 Hula: WTF IRRE
21:22 Irreversible: yeah D:
21:22 Irreversible: the bg
21:22 Hula: wat
21:22 Irreversible: 02:23:593 (2) -
21:22 Irreversible: same
21:22 Hula: you blaming bg?
21:23 Hula: it matters less there
21:23 Irreversible: background o.o
21:23 Hula: cos at least it's red tick
21:24 Irreversible: nuhh
21:25 Hula: hitsounds aren'tt oo bad irre
21:25 Hula: not how i'd do them, but i like em
21:26 Irreversible: ok :D
21:26 Irreversible: thanks
21:26 Hula: nice use of all the samples
21:27 Irreversible: haha okay thanks a lot :D you can post if u want
21:27 Hula: cos it's you
21:27 Hula: yeah
21:27 Hula: usually i wouldn't
21:27 Irreversible: why?
21:27 Hula: 01:43:831 (4) - missing HS
21:28 Hula: well
21:28 Hula: it feels missing
21:28 Hula: 01:40:022 (4) - same
21:28 Irreversible: applied
21:28 Irreversible: xd
21:28 Irreversible: a whistl0r is there
21:28 Hula: hitsounding is about being consistent
21:28 Hula: bad hitsounding only happens when you're not or you pick the worst samples
21:29 Hula: which blend in with the music too much
21:29 Hula: or you're Fort and you use screams which last 10 seconds for samples
21:29 Hula: V:
21:29 Irreversible: XD
21:29 Irreversible: or applause
21:29 Irreversible: or YOHU
21:29 Hula: lol
Marianna wrote:
Hellow
Nekomata's Easy
- 00:51:450 (1,2) - These two sliders are a bit ugly together this was changed before but not updated in the current version
- 00:55:260 (1) - Remove NC i doubled nc usage in kiai parts
- 00:57:641 (2,3) - The flow would go better if you left the (2) pointed to the (3) keeping this
- 01:10:498 (1) - Remove NC
- 01:52:403 (1) - ^
<3ThoomyyxD wrote:
I still love you Irre:c
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20:44 Krfawy: wait
20:44 Krfawy: working on what
20:44 Irreversible: schoolwork
20:44 Irreversible: but instead im trying to rank my mapset
20:44 Irreversible: XD
20:45 Krfawy: you could try to learn how to be patient
20:45 Krfawy: XD
20:49 Krfawy: BTW change the combo colours in your Lookbook into something darker than the actual colours, they are hard to read while they are that bright since the approachcircles and the hitcircles blend very very well with the BG 00:18:117 (1,2,3) - like this in the highest diff and it is hard to see and feel there are three and not two notes in the row LOL
20:49 Krfawy: yes me looking at your stuff because I want to know why you haven't mapped the rest of your diff for my anime map
20:49 Krfawy: XD
20:50 Irreversible: vocals
20:50 Irreversible: XD
20:50 Irreversible: suggest sum colerz
20:50 Krfawy: ogay
20:51 Irreversible: inb4 4 times the same pink
20:51 Krfawy: the pink colours is ogay though
20:51 Irreversible: XDDDDDD
20:54 Krfawy: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4513649 Combo1 : 236,236,0 Combo2 : 255,81,168 Combo3 : 0,236,236]
20:54 Irreversible: send forum pm plz
will reply to rest in a bitHappyRocket88 wrote:
Hellow, ByBy13 the page you provided for looking for the metadata is the discography of BoA, which is totally different of the official site where her name appears romanised. Arguable but, as we already discussed on game, going to pop the bubble only for metadata issues.
[General]
Metadata
- According to her official websites, they suggest her name is written in Korean, which is 보아 despite is commonly known as BoA.
Facebook | Official Site | Wikipedia - Add "Kiss My Lips" and "Beat of Angel" because they are the album name and the retro-acronym of it, respectively. Correspondingly, "ショートVer." should be included too because the music video is a cut version of the original song. okay
- I just wonder what's the relation of putting sushi and kimchi on tags. The lyrics of the song itself doesn't show any sense of compatibility with them. Would you mind explaining this further? Otherwise consider to remove them. removed
- Just a funfact but the "ルックブック" is the correct romanization of Lookbook in case you wanted to add it on tags or as well as the rominsed title of the song. you tell me to fix metadata and stuff, but now i'm not sure if this belongs to romanised..?
Settings[HIGH QUALITY] Can I ask why this diff name is capitalized? Yup, basically it has to do with 01:28:355 (1,1) - . I think this is a really emphasized point in the map and I want it to be specially emphasized. This also goes together with an explanation down below
- I'm still worried about the anime background. I honestly don't see relation with the song itself. Just because it's a girl it might have relate with the singer? I do consider looking for another bg would be more suitable for this Japanese song. And yeah, IT IS JAPANESE! XD (according to this website) I think this picture very well fits this music and topic of the song. The song is about checking her lookbook, if you don't know what it is, look it up. The girl in the background has this very sassy pose which is kinda provoking, basically an invitation to check it out.
- The offset of the video is slightly off when you check the parts after the increases of SV. For example here, 00:53:355 - 01:00:974 - 01:58:117 - etc Therefore, it would be better if you set up the offset around 140 - 120 to fix this. 140 - 120?
- Can I know what's the purpose of placing a kiai from 01:39:070 - to 01:40:974 - and not over the one from 00:34:308 - to 00:36:212 ? As they are almost the same part where the song goes slow, wouldn't it be better to place it as a kiai too? Yes, you can! There's this fhhshhhh in the background, which deserves a kiai, but not in the first one haha
- Not sure if the Countdown is intentional but it just looks and plays really odd. Same with Widescreen Support. fixed
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- 00:22:284 (1,2) - nuuu, this is too much. Starting from the DS and the non-intuitive 1/4 pattern here. It would be better if you made (2) more curve to improve this forced jump. done
- 02:02:879 (1,2,3,4) - The distance of these objects should be consistent to avoid making such as a big jump from 3 - 4. I've put this big jump to emphasize the last jumpy pattern.
- 01:28:593 (1) - this is too much XD and I guess it's the only time you used a high ds over the kiais. It would be better if it were over 2.0x to simplify things here. Goes together with the explanation above. I hope this is okay!
- 01:06:212 (3,4,5) - Please, unstack them because this could be misleading to players due the way you stacked 1/2 objects before, making this tack rather unexpected for them. Uhm, well.. where would you put it? I don't see a need of unstacking it
- 01:18:355 (1,2) - Variety is important, but don't place such as big jumps where the song goes rather calm. good point
- 01:23:355 (1,2) - Would you mind reducing the distance of these a bit? It would flow better if you let 01:23:831 (1) - be less close to (2) to emphasize it properly. I really believe that this acceleration is needed to give the player the speed up for the upcoming part.
- 01:34:665 (1,2) - Not really sure what you were intending here but players will be really unaware that pattern is a 1/4 double which probably won't tap properly because they were with the motion of the previous 1/2 pattern 01:34:070 (1,2) - Has to do with playstyle, if you are an alternater it is really fun. It has the same intention as all the other patterns that sound like this: more emphasis to the drums.
- 01:50:260 (2) - By doing ctrl + G you will develop a more intuitive flow according on how it flows from 01:50:022 (1) - to 01:50:498 (1) - That's not true. Going up twice and then down flows better
- 02:30:379 (4) - This feels overmapped compared on the places you used 1/4 ticks in this end. but there are other sounds in the song x(
woof
HappyRocket88 wrote:
Hellow, ByBy13 the page you provided for looking for the metadata is the discography of BoA, which is totally different of the official site where her name appears romanised. Arguable but, as we already discussed on game, going to pop the bubble only for metadata issues. This popped is unjustified and unnecessary, you should remember and take in mind that artists from Korean or from Japan have their own sites and both are valid so if you try to find Lookbook track on her korean website you won't find it, why? simple cause this song is Jpop not Kpop.
[General]
Metadata
- According to her official websites, they suggest her name is written in Korean, which is 보아 despite is commonly known as BoA. Indeed that is her real name but on her official japanese site and even on her official korean site it shows as BoA without the "보아" (hangul) so using BoA only is okay.
Facebook | Official Site | Wikipedia
Facebook/Wikipedia and sites like that are not even valid so you don't have to take them in a serious way.
HappyRocket88 wrote:
[Geroversible's Hard] Hola Gero. Modeo en español para que el Irre no se entere. <3 xDDD Esta bien.
SettingsComposing
- OD - 1 to have consistency in the way the OD increases among the diffs, because the jump from Normal to Hard is quite high is you set up the OD over 7. Setting it over 6 would hurt no one. Settings are okay for me.
- From 00:45:736 - to 01:00:974 - consider increasing 10% the volume of the green lines. This is to let players know this part is more intense than the previous pattern that should be emphasized with the hitsounds too. Fixed.
Gero
- 00:28:593 (6) - NC aquí y remueve el NC acá 00:29:546 (1) - para que así guardes consistencia con la manera que manjeaste el NC en el patrón anterior a este. Tienes razón.
- 00:28:831 (8,9) - Aquí el DS es algo alto considerando este patrón como referencia 00:25:974 (5,6) - Tenerlo por debajo de 2 generaría un mejor flujo para para darle más énfasis a la próxima nota. Yo creo que esta bien así, no hay cambios.
- 00:26:212 (6,1) - Deberías de ubicar el 1 más alejado del 6 para guardar consistencia con los patrones similares que le siguen a este: 00:29:546 (1,2) - 00:31:450 (3,4) - etc Estoy haciendo un blanket con el siguiente slider, así que no es gran cosa.
- 00:30:498 (1) - Un DS un poco alto si tomamos en cuenta el que el slider inmediatamente anterior termina en un tick azul. Ubicarlo sobre 244|16 no molestaría a nadie. Compara la parte de Irreversible en 01:23:831 - por lo que quise mantener la consistencia con su estilo por eso el tipo de spacing entre notas 1/4.
- 00:30:498 (1,3) - Nazi pero este blanket se podría mejorar sutilmente al mover el tercer puntico gris dos pixeles hacia arriba. <3 Yo lo veo bien.
- 01:14:665 (1) - 01:15:379 (1) - podrían tener ctrl + g para mejorar significativamente el flow, así mismo como lo hiciste aquí 00:51:450 (1,1,1,1,1) - Prefiero dejar una variación de flujo en esta parte, es por eso que ahora solo van hacia una misma dirección.
- 01:41:927 (4) - GEROOOOOOOOOOOO, ¿aquí no deberías de hacer lo mismo que hizo Irre con 00:37:164 (4,5) - siguiendo los claps? Quizás es tu manera de percibir las cosas, pero tendría más sentido si siguieras los isntrumentos allí y hacer el patrón, que son vastante similares, más uniforme. En realidad no le veo problema en dejar eso con un repeat ademas de que rompería la simetría que he hecho con esos sliders.
- 02:14:308 (2,1) - Este overlap se ve feito. x.x Moverlo un poco hacia la izquiera permitiría que se viera mejor el jump. Es intencional.
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HappyRocket88 wrote:
Also, I don't know if you looked up this site http://boa.smtown.com/?ver=08 where, over the profile menu it shows clearly her name is written in those Japanese characters. Here I attached I prove in case you wonder:
Those are actually Korean characters, and it is valid only if this was a Korean release. However, this is a Japanese release. And because this was released under a Japanese record label (avex), the correct artist is BoA. Thus, the official and correct metadata is only obtained from http://avex.jp/boa/discography/. Other sources may incorrectly list Korean characters in connection to Lookbook because BoA is Korean. The current metadata is correct and the bubble pop is not justified.
HappyRocket88 wrote:
[Mao's Normal] Meow =3=
Timing
Overall the volume of some green lines aren't as suitable because they should be lowered ot increased according on how the parts are. Here I listed some suggestions:
- 00:45:736 - Should be 70% as well as this is part of the whole kiai. Done
- 01:40:974 - 01:48:593 - 01:50:022 - should be any value but not 70% because this isn't part of the upcoming kiai. Changed
- Some mini spacing problems with these objects which are rather minor 00:14:070 (5,6) - 01:00:498 (25,26) - 01:31:212 (14,15) - They are intentional to fit the SV changes.
- 01:41:927 (2,3) - The flow of this section is a bit awkward because the transition of the slider-tail isn't intuitive to redirect to the upcoming note. What if we placed in a straight line to develop a more perceptive pattern? Like this. Consider doing something similar over this pattern 02:27:641 (3,4) - Transitions don't always have to be super fluent, it's just a small zigzag thing here.
- 01:57:641 (3) - Oh please, no. The slider-head and the slider-tail are overlapping each other which could mislead the proper readability of this 1/2 slider. It would be better if you tried to reduce the curve-ness of it. What about this? While I disagree with it being hard to read for newer players, I increased the distance slightly but still kept the head and tail overlapping.
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thx again XDHappyRocket88 wrote:
Irreversible
- 00:13:117 (4,1) - The transition of these two objects isn't really intuitive because (4) is stacked under the slider-head which makes a very hard pattern to follow. It would be better if you placed (4) around 308|288 to fix this. ok
- 00:17:879 (2,3) - DS please. This might be confusing because players could think (3) is a 1/2 circle due the high distance from 2 to 3. Placing that pattern as you did here 00:18:474 (3,4) - would make stuff more readable. but the stress should be like this
- 01:25:736 (1) - Please, stack it over two as well as you did here 01:29:546 (1,2) - but why? xD i like the stress
- 01:53:236 - Add a note here just as well as you did in the first kiai. o.o i haven't added one i think?
- 01:55:498 (5) - Stacking so many objects over this segment looks a bit untidy in comparison on how fluent you built up the previous patterns. What about placing (5) here 336|40 to reduce it? i added NC
- 02:00:974 (5,6,7,8) - Taking this pattern as a reference to avoid such as overlaps on the patterns, what about if you place them like a star pattern to avoid the monotonous up and down flow? well i just think up and down fits more..