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Irreversible
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Irreversible
Updated all , thanks!
Nekomata
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Nekomata

Marianna wrote:

Hellow

Nekomata's Easy

  1. 00:51:450 (1,2) - These two sliders are a bit ugly together this was changed before but not updated in the current version
  2. 00:55:260 (1) - Remove NC i doubled nc usage in kiai parts
  3. 00:57:641 (2,3) - The flow would go better if you left the (2) pointed to the (3) keeping this
  4. 01:10:498 (1) - Remove NC
  5. 01:52:403 (1) - ^
Sonnyc
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Sonnyc
Quality destroys PP /runs

Random Sonnyc

[Quality]
  1. 00:23:831 (1,2) - Unlike surrounding 1/2s, since this was the only extended spacing, it felt pretty random without a musical cue.
  2. 00:48:593 (1) - 00:50:498 (1) - 00:54:308 (1) - 00:56:212 (5) - 00:58:117 (3) - 01:53:355 (5) - 01:55:260 (4) - 02:00:974 (5) - 02:02:879 (4) - Although patterns are different, aiming for a consistent combo setting would benefit more.
  3. 01:00:974 (1,2,3) - 01:45:736 (1,2,1) - Hope this broken slider-note-slider stack could be better.
  4. 02:22:879 (1,2) - Why the low spacing?
Loooctav
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Loooctav
I still love you Irre:c
meii18
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Joined October 2013
meii18
Hello!

[General]
  1. No tags? I suggest to add at tags the name of GDers and maybe short version or cut version since the full lenght of the song is approximately 3 mins
  2. Metadata seems alright as you can see in the official website of the artist http://avex.jp/boa/discography/
[Easy]
  1. Nothing found ;__;
[Normal]
  1. 00:25:498(2)- Perhaps missing whistle on head?In comparison with 00:14:070(2)- where you placed the whistle on head,maybe this slider could have a whistle on head just for consistency
    Nothing more to mention.
[HIGH QUALITY]
  1. 00:22:879(1,2)- Just my personal though: I think you could make a little jump between these notes instead having an antijump to emphasize the stronger vocal here which is obviously heard enough that it is stronger and need some emphasis in my opinion plus perhaps as you did at 00:23:831(1,2)- o.o
  2. 01:07:879(1,1,1,1,1)- I guess there are no any reasons to do NC spam here since there's no any SV change let's say for example.I suggest to remove the NC for the following 4 circles since it feels kinda useless in my opinion and also you don't need to overuse new combos here since only one is enough for this part
  3. 02:04:903(2)- Here shouldn't be a NC for this SV change?
That's must be all! Easy and Hard difficulty are looking great to my eyes!
Call me back after the issues are adressed!
Irreversible
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Irreversible
Fixed all Sonnyc, thanks for your input!

Fixed all too Byby, except the NC pattern. Thanks for checking metadata, too~

GDER: Redownload please, I've added some tags and another hitclap, because I felt the echoing one didn't fit at all spots.
Irreversible
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Irreversible

ThoomyyxD wrote:

I still love you Irre:c
<3
Nekomata
807 posts
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Nekomata

ByBy13 wrote:

[Easy]
  1. Nothing found ;__; fixed
SPOILER
nothing
Mao
Elite Mapper II
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Joined December 2012
Mao
Applied the whistle.
Krfawy
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Joined March 2012
Krfawy 
[Colours]
Combo1 : 236,236,0
Combo2 : 255,81,168
Combo3 : 0,236,236

Because the previous combo colours are too bright and they blend with the BG too well. The pink combo seems okay though.

#POLISHCATTING
20:44 Krfawy: wait
20:44 Krfawy: working on what
20:44 Irreversible: schoolwork
20:44 Irreversible: but instead im trying to rank my mapset
20:44 Irreversible: XD
20:45 Krfawy: you could try to learn how to be patient
20:45 Krfawy: XD
20:49 Krfawy: BTW change the combo colours in your Lookbook into something darker than the actual colours, they are hard to read while they are that bright since the approachcircles and the hitcircles blend very very well with the BG 00:18:117 (1,2,3) - like this in the highest diff and it is hard to see and feel there are three and not two notes in the row LOL
20:49 Krfawy: yes me looking at your stuff because I want to know why you haven't mapped the rest of your diff for my anime map
20:49 Krfawy: XD
20:50 Irreversible: vocals
20:50 Irreversible: XD
20:50 Irreversible: suggest sum colerz
20:50 Krfawy: ogay
20:51 Irreversible: inb4 4 times the same pink
20:51 Krfawy: the pink colours is ogay though
20:51 Irreversible: XDDDDDD
20:54 Krfawy: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4513649 Combo1 : 236,236,0 Combo2 : 255,81,168 Combo3 : 0,236,236]
20:54 Irreversible: send forum pm plz
Irreversible
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Irreversible
Thank you
meii18
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meii18
Rechecked and made some fixies in hard difficulty plus added hitsounds in Nekomata's Easy.Nothing more to point out.
IRC Recheck
11:35 Irreversible: hiii
11:35 Irreversible: lookbook will be updated in a sec! :D
11:36 ByBy13: okay :D
11:37 Irreversible: rdy for recheck
11:38 ByBy13: okay =w=/
11:39 Irreversible: *-*
11:39 Irreversible: READY FOR BUBBLE
11:39 Irreversible: jk XD
11:39 ByBy13: XD
11:40 ByBy13: btw
11:40 ByBy13: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4513561
11:41 ByBy13: this kind of overlap could confuse some players but it's perfectly playable after all so that's why I was scared to mention it in my mod
11:43 Irreversible: oh i think the flow is clear
11:43 ByBy13: yup
11:52 ByBy13: uhm :(
11:52 ByBy13: nekomata's easy is hitsounded?
11:52 ByBy13: I don't see any hitsound in easy diff
11:52 ByBy13: ;(
11:53 Irreversible: •_•
11:53 ByBy13: D:
11:53 ByBy13: it's not hitsounded
11:53 Irreversible: fixed omg xD
11:53 Irreversible: sorry
11:54 ByBy13: XD
12:20 ByBy13: come on and follow me? ;o
12:21 Irreversible: 02:24:784 (1) -
12:24 ByBy13: can you fix for Mao?
12:26 Irreversible: already done
12:26 ByBy13: okay
12:27 ByBy13: 02:35:736 - maybe a note here? there's still sound
12:27 ByBy13: ;o
12:27 Irreversible: where
12:27 Irreversible: high quality?
12:27 *ByBy13 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/843547 BoA - Lookbook [Mao's Normal]]
12:27 ByBy13: mao
12:28 Irreversible: i don't think he would want to add one
12:28 ByBy13: okay ;o
12:50 *ByBy13 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/844581 BoA - Lookbook [Geroversible's Hard]]
12:50 ByBy13: 00:44:308 (1)- maybe remove the NC? there's no any sv change plus it feels useless and you don't need to overuse the nc here
12:51 Irreversible: done :)
12:51 ByBy13: :3
12:51 ByBy13: 01:07:165 (1,1)- ? ;o same
12:53 Irreversible: that one is the same like the pentagon flowr in my diff
12:54 ByBy13: ah XD
12:54 ByBy13: sorry
12:54 Irreversible: dont apologize always lol
12:54 ByBy13: ok XD
12:54 ByBy13: 01:49:070 (1)- same nc x
12:54 ByBy13: xD
12:58 Irreversible: fxied
12:58 ByBy13: oki :3
12:58 ByBy13: 02:01:927 (1,2)- broken stack
12:59 Irreversible: done
12:59 ByBy13: okay
13:16 ByBy13: 02:19:546 (1)- here too -_-
13:20 *ByBy13 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/833967 BoA - Lookbook [HIGH QUALITY]]
13:20 ByBy13: 01:07:879 (1,1,1,1,1) so you didn't fix it ;o
13:26 ByBy13: done recehcking.call me after you will update the map
13:47 Irreversible: no i told you why
13:47 ByBy13: oh XD
13:48 ByBy13: done?
13:48 Irreversible: yes
13:48 ByBy13: okay
13:51 ByBy13: it is ready
13:51 ByBy13: the video doesn't have audio
13:51 Irreversible: yes
13:51 ByBy13: ready? :3
13:51 Irreversible: yes xD
13:51 ByBy13: oh wait
13:51 ByBy13: nvm
13:51 ByBy13: widescreen support can be enabled since there's video
13:52 ByBy13: well
13:52 ByBy13: let's go
13:52 Irreversible: wait
13:52 ByBy13: ok
13:53 Irreversible: 2 notes in insane were unsnapped
13:53 ByBy13: oh xd
13:53 Irreversible: done
13:53 ByBy13: okay
13:54 ByBy13: which notes were unsnapped?
13:54 Irreversible: 00:10:855 (1,2,3) - 3
13:54 Irreversible: -3
13:54 Irreversible: all of the
13:54 ByBy13: ok
13:54 ByBy13: ready?
13:55 Irreversible: thans for your time
13:55 Irreversible: thanks*
13:55 Irreversible: yes
13:55 ByBy13: okay :3

Bubbled!
Mao
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Mao
yay <3
Nyukai
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Nyukai
I love this song <3
HappyRocket88
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HappyRocket88
Hellow, ByBy13 the page you provided for looking for the metadata is the discography of BoA, which is totally different of the official site where her name appears romanised. Arguable but, as we already discussed on game, going to pop the bubble only for metadata issues.

[General]
Metadata
  1. According to her official websites, they suggest her name is written in Korean, which is 보아 despite is commonly known as BoA.
    Facebook | Official Site | Wikipedia
  2. Add "Kiss My Lips" and "Beat of Angel" because they are the album name and the retro-acronym of it, respectively. Correspondingly, "ショートVer." should be included too because the music video is a cut version of the original song.
  3. I just wonder what's the relation of putting sushi and kimchi on tags. The lyrics of the song itself doesn't show any sense of compatibility with them. Would you mind explaining this further? Otherwise consider to remove them.
  4. Just a funfact but the "ルックブック" is the correct romanization of Lookbook in case you wanted to add it on tags or as well as the rominsed title of the song.
Settings
  1. I'm still worried about the anime background. I honestly don't see relation with the song itself. Just because it's a girl it might have relate with the singer? I do consider looking for another bg would be more suitable for this Japanese song. And yeah, IT IS JAPANESE! XD (according to this website)
  2. The offset of the video is slightly off when you check the parts after the increases of SV. For example here, 00:53:355 - 01:00:974 - 01:58:117 - etc Therefore, it would be better if you set up the offset around 140 - 120 to fix this.
  3. Can I know what's the purpose of placing a kiai from 01:39:070 - to 01:40:974 - and not over the one from 00:34:308 - to 00:36:212 ? As they are almost the same part where the song goes slow, wouldn't it be better to place it as a kiai too?
  4. Not sure if the Countdown is intentional but it just looks and plays really odd. Same with Widescreen Support.
[Nekomata's Easy]
Overall
  1. The NC'ing of the kiais is really awkward because of the short combos due the one measure of ticks. This is mostly because beginners are tend more to follow patterns which have 4 ~ 6 over Easy, and despite the BPM is low, it would make more sense if you tried to avoid the (1,2) on combos on the kiais to develop friendlier patterns concerning the readability and flows. Just as well as you built up the non-kiai patterns.
  2. Having of 60% on the kiai doesn't make a difference from one part of another one where it would be better to increase 10% to make players realize the kiai manages more intensity than the other parts.
Composing
  1. 00:55:260 (1,2) - These two sliders don't flow properly because of the angle of (1) which redirects players to go onto an odd movement to follow the next slider. It would be more fluent and catchy if you tried these kind of patterns to develop a neater flow over this segment:
  2. 00:57:641 (2,3) - Here it occurs something saimilar of the above case, the slider-tail isn't really suggesting the next note will be down which could be misleading due newbies are rather used to follow the slider-path to click the upcoming objects. I do believe something like this would be more intuitive for them:
  3. 01:04:784 (1) - This slider-shape isn't really going with the music. While the "ohhh" is rather an smooth and curve sound, this slider-path really doesn't match with the wave sound of her voice. It would be better if you tried something more fluent which emphasizes better the vocals and follow a smoother slider for this part.
  4. 01:01:927 (2,1) - Same thing of the flow. What's the need of creating such as forced flow after following this slider tail 01:01:927 (2) - ? Here making a more perceptive placement of the objects would make stuff easier to read and see. Placing 01:02:879 (1) - there is rather unexpected if we take account this is the lowest diff of the mapset.
  5. From 01:00:974 - to 01:08:593 - you should keep the same two measures for NC'ing because of the reason I stated above.
[Mao's Normal] Meow =3=
Timing
Overall the volume of some green lines aren't as suitable because they should be lowered ot increased according on how the parts are. Here I listed some suggestions:
  1. 00:45:736 - Should be 70% as well as this is part of the whole kiai.
  2. 01:40:974 - 01:48:593 - 01:50:022 - should be any value but not 70% because this isn't part of the upcoming kiai.
  1. Some mini spacing problems with these objects which are rather minor 00:14:070 (5,6) - 01:00:498 (25,26) - 01:31:212 (14,15) -
  2. 01:41:927 (2,3) - The flow of this section is a bit awkward because the transition of the slider-tail isn't intuitive to redirect to the upcoming note. What if we placed in a straight line to develop a more perceptive pattern? Like this. Consider doing something similar over this pattern 02:27:641 (3,4) -
  3. 01:57:641 (3) - Oh please, no. The slider-head and the slider-tail are overlapping each other which could mislead the proper readability of this 1/2 slider. It would be better if you tried to reduce the curve-ness of it. What about this?
[Geroversible's Hard] Hola Gero. Modeo en español para que el Irre no se entere. <3 xDDD
Settings
  1. OD - 1 to have consistency in the way the OD increases among the diffs, because the jump from Normal to Hard is quite high is you set up the OD over 7. Setting it over 6 would hurt no one.
  2. From 00:45:736 - to 01:00:974 - consider increasing 10% the volume of the green lines. This is to let players know this part is more intense than the previous pattern that should be emphasized with the hitsounds too.
Composing

Gero
  1. 00:28:593 (6) - NC aquí y remueve el NC acá 00:29:546 (1) - para que así guardes consistencia con la manera que manjeaste el NC en el patrón anterior a este.
  2. 00:28:831 (8,9) - Aquí el DS es algo alto considerando este patrón como referencia 00:25:974 (5,6) - Tenerlo por debajo de 2 generaría un mejor flujo para para darle más énfasis a la próxima nota.
  3. 00:26:212 (6,1) - Deberías de ubicar el 1 más alejado del 6 para guardar consistencia con los patrones similares que le siguen a este: 00:29:546 (1,2) - 00:31:450 (3,4) - etc
  4. 00:30:498 (1) - Un DS un poco alto si tomamos en cuenta el que el slider inmediatamente anterior termina en un tick azul. Ubicarlo sobre 244|16 no molestaría a nadie.
  5. 00:30:498 (1,3) - Nazi pero este blanket se podría mejorar sutilmente al mover el tercer puntico gris dos pixeles hacia arriba. <3
  6. 01:14:665 (1) - 01:15:379 (1) - podrían tener ctrl + g para mejorar significativamente el flow, así mismo como lo hiciste aquí 00:51:450 (1,1,1,1,1) -
  7. 01:41:927 (4) - GEROOOOOOOOOOOO, ¿aquí no deberías de hacer lo mismo que hizo Irre con 00:37:164 (4,5) - siguiendo los claps? Quizás es tu manera de percibir las cosas, pero tendría más sentido si siguieras los isntrumentos allí y hacer el patrón, que son vastante similares, más uniforme.
  8. 02:14:308 (2,1) - Este overlap se ve feito. x.x Moverlo un poco hacia la izquiera permitiría que se viera mejor el jump.
Irreversible
  1. 00:13:117 (4,1) - The transition of these two objects isn't really intuitive because (4) is stacked under the slider-head which makes a very hard pattern to follow. It would be better if you placed (4) around 308|288 to fix this.
  2. 00:17:879 (2,3) - DS please. This might be confusing because players could think (3) is a 1/2 circle due the high distance from 2 to 3. Placing that pattern as you did here 00:18:474 (3,4) - would make stuff more readable.
  3. 01:25:736 (1) - Please, stack it over two as well as you did here 01:29:546 (1,2) -
  4. 01:53:236 - Add a note here just as well as you did in the first kiai.
  5. 01:55:498 (5) - Stacking so many objects over this segment looks a bit untidy in comparison on how fluent you built up the previous patterns. What about placing (5) here 336|40 to reduce it?
  6. 02:00:974 (5,6,7,8) - Taking this pattern as a reference to avoid such as overlaps on the patterns, what about if you place them like a star pattern to avoid the monotonous up and down flow?
[HIGH QUALITY] Can I ask why this diff name is capitalized?
  1. 00:22:284 (1,2) - nuuu, this is too much. Starting from the DS and the non-intuitive 1/4 pattern here. It would be better if you made (2) more curve to improve this forced jump.
  2. 02:02:879 (1,2,3,4) - The distance of these objects should be consistent to avoid making such as a big jump from 3 - 4.
  3. 01:28:593 (1) - this is too much XD and I guess it's the only time you used a high ds over the kiais. It would be better if it were over 2.0x to simplify things here.
  4. 01:06:212 (3,4,5) - Please, unstack them because this could be misleading to players due the way you stacked 1/2 objects before, making this tack rather unexpected for them.
  5. 01:18:355 (1,2) - Variety is important, but don't place such as big jumps where the song goes rather calm.
  6. 01:23:355 (1,2) - Would you mind reducing the distance of these a bit? It would flow better if you let 01:23:831 (1) - be less close to (2) to emphasize it properly.
  7. 01:34:665 (1,2) - Not really sure what you were intending here but players will be really unaware that pattern is a 1/4 double which probably won't tap properly because they were with the motion of the previous 1/2 pattern 01:34:070 (1,2) -
  8. 01:50:260 (2) - By doing ctrl + G you will develop a more intuitive flow according on how it flows from 01:50:022 (1) - to 01:50:498 (1) -
  9. 02:30:379 (4) - This feels overmapped compared on the places you used 1/4 ticks in this end.
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woof
Irreversible
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Irreversible

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Hellow, ByBy13 the page you provided for looking for the metadata is the discography of BoA, which is totally different of the official site where her name appears romanised. Arguable but, as we already discussed on game, going to pop the bubble only for metadata issues.

[General]
Metadata
  1. According to her official websites, they suggest her name is written in Korean, which is 보아 despite is commonly known as BoA.
    Facebook | Official Site | Wikipedia
  2. Add "Kiss My Lips" and "Beat of Angel" because they are the album name and the retro-acronym of it, respectively. Correspondingly, "ショートVer." should be included too because the music video is a cut version of the original song. okay
  3. I just wonder what's the relation of putting sushi and kimchi on tags. The lyrics of the song itself doesn't show any sense of compatibility with them. Would you mind explaining this further? Otherwise consider to remove them. removed
  4. Just a funfact but the "ルックブック" is the correct romanization of Lookbook in case you wanted to add it on tags or as well as the rominsed title of the song. you tell me to fix metadata and stuff, but now i'm not sure if this belongs to romanised..?

Settings
  1. I'm still worried about the anime background. I honestly don't see relation with the song itself. Just because it's a girl it might have relate with the singer? I do consider looking for another bg would be more suitable for this Japanese song. And yeah, IT IS JAPANESE! XD (according to this website) I think this picture very well fits this music and topic of the song. The song is about checking her lookbook, if you don't know what it is, look it up. The girl in the background has this very sassy pose which is kinda provoking, basically an invitation to check it out.
  2. The offset of the video is slightly off when you check the parts after the increases of SV. For example here, 00:53:355 - 01:00:974 - 01:58:117 - etc Therefore, it would be better if you set up the offset around 140 - 120 to fix this. 140 - 120?
  3. Can I know what's the purpose of placing a kiai from 01:39:070 - to 01:40:974 - and not over the one from 00:34:308 - to 00:36:212 ? As they are almost the same part where the song goes slow, wouldn't it be better to place it as a kiai too? Yes, you can! There's this fhhshhhh in the background, which deserves a kiai, but not in the first one haha
  4. Not sure if the Countdown is intentional but it just looks and plays really odd. Same with Widescreen Support. fixed
[HIGH QUALITY] Can I ask why this diff name is capitalized? Yup, basically it has to do with 01:28:355 (1,1) - . I think this is a really emphasized point in the map and I want it to be specially emphasized. This also goes together with an explanation down below
  1. 00:22:284 (1,2) - nuuu, this is too much. Starting from the DS and the non-intuitive 1/4 pattern here. It would be better if you made (2) more curve to improve this forced jump. done
  2. 02:02:879 (1,2,3,4) - The distance of these objects should be consistent to avoid making such as a big jump from 3 - 4. I've put this big jump to emphasize the last jumpy pattern.
  3. 01:28:593 (1) - this is too much XD and I guess it's the only time you used a high ds over the kiais. It would be better if it were over 2.0x to simplify things here. Goes together with the explanation above. I hope this is okay!
  4. 01:06:212 (3,4,5) - Please, unstack them because this could be misleading to players due the way you stacked 1/2 objects before, making this tack rather unexpected for them. Uhm, well.. where would you put it? I don't see a need of unstacking it
  5. 01:18:355 (1,2) - Variety is important, but don't place such as big jumps where the song goes rather calm. good point
  6. 01:23:355 (1,2) - Would you mind reducing the distance of these a bit? It would flow better if you let 01:23:831 (1) - be less close to (2) to emphasize it properly. I really believe that this acceleration is needed to give the player the speed up for the upcoming part.
  7. 01:34:665 (1,2) - Not really sure what you were intending here but players will be really unaware that pattern is a 1/4 double which probably won't tap properly because they were with the motion of the previous 1/2 pattern 01:34:070 (1,2) - Has to do with playstyle, if you are an alternater it is really fun. It has the same intention as all the other patterns that sound like this: more emphasis to the drums.
  8. 01:50:260 (2) - By doing ctrl + G you will develop a more intuitive flow according on how it flows from 01:50:022 (1) - to 01:50:498 (1) - That's not true. Going up twice and then down flows better
  9. 02:30:379 (4) - This feels overmapped compared on the places you used 1/4 ticks in this end. but there are other sounds in the song x(
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woof
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Gero
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Gero

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Hellow, ByBy13 the page you provided for looking for the metadata is the discography of BoA, which is totally different of the official site where her name appears romanised. Arguable but, as we already discussed on game, going to pop the bubble only for metadata issues. This popped is unjustified and unnecessary, you should remember and take in mind that artists from Korean or from Japan have their own sites and both are valid so if you try to find Lookbook track on her korean website you won't find it, why? simple cause this song is Jpop not Kpop.
[General]
Metadata
  1. According to her official websites, they suggest her name is written in Korean, which is 보아 despite is commonly known as BoA. Indeed that is her real name but on her official japanese site and even on her official korean site it shows as BoA without the "보아" (hangul) so using BoA only is okay.
    Facebook | Official Site | Wikipedia
    Facebook/Wikipedia and sites like that are not even valid so you don't have to take them in a serious way.










Proof:

  1. http://avex.jp/boa/discography/
  2. http://avex.jp/boa/
  3. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wL392prSmjw
  4. http://boa.smtown.com/
HappyRocket88
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HappyRocket88
Umm... I disagree with it because the fact that the website shows BoA as the url address doesn't mean is the correct one. It could be "fine" but it's not the official.

Also, I don't know if you looked up this site http://boa.smtown.com/?ver=08 where, over the profile menu it shows clearly her name is written in those Japanese characters. Here I attached I prove in case you wonder:

Also, avex.jp is just a derivation of the main company of Avex Group which is a company that holds all these Japanese singers. Hence, it's not the official where you can find information of her personal discography. I also had the same trouble with another mapset I modded because showing that the CD or the DVD feature says: "BoA" doesn't imply her name isn't known over all sites like that.

Edit: oh and the offset video thingy, it should be around -120 ~ -100 to my eyes.
Irreversible
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Irreversible
I will ask KwaN, hold on
Gero
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Gero

HappyRocket88 wrote:

[Geroversible's Hard] Hola Gero. Modeo en español para que el Irre no se entere. <3 xDDD Esta bien.
Settings
  1. OD - 1 to have consistency in the way the OD increases among the diffs, because the jump from Normal to Hard is quite high is you set up the OD over 7. Setting it over 6 would hurt no one. Settings are okay for me.
  2. From 00:45:736 - to 01:00:974 - consider increasing 10% the volume of the green lines. This is to let players know this part is more intense than the previous pattern that should be emphasized with the hitsounds too. Fixed.
Composing

Gero
  1. 00:28:593 (6) - NC aquí y remueve el NC acá 00:29:546 (1) - para que así guardes consistencia con la manera que manjeaste el NC en el patrón anterior a este. Tienes razón.
  2. 00:28:831 (8,9) - Aquí el DS es algo alto considerando este patrón como referencia 00:25:974 (5,6) - Tenerlo por debajo de 2 generaría un mejor flujo para para darle más énfasis a la próxima nota. Yo creo que esta bien así, no hay cambios.
  3. 00:26:212 (6,1) - Deberías de ubicar el 1 más alejado del 6 para guardar consistencia con los patrones similares que le siguen a este: 00:29:546 (1,2) - 00:31:450 (3,4) - etc Estoy haciendo un blanket con el siguiente slider, así que no es gran cosa.
  4. 00:30:498 (1) - Un DS un poco alto si tomamos en cuenta el que el slider inmediatamente anterior termina en un tick azul. Ubicarlo sobre 244|16 no molestaría a nadie. Compara la parte de Irreversible en 01:23:831 - por lo que quise mantener la consistencia con su estilo por eso el tipo de spacing entre notas 1/4.
  5. 00:30:498 (1,3) - Nazi pero este blanket se podría mejorar sutilmente al mover el tercer puntico gris dos pixeles hacia arriba. <3 Yo lo veo bien.
  6. 01:14:665 (1) - 01:15:379 (1) - podrían tener ctrl + g para mejorar significativamente el flow, así mismo como lo hiciste aquí 00:51:450 (1,1,1,1,1) - Prefiero dejar una variación de flujo en esta parte, es por eso que ahora solo van hacia una misma dirección.
  7. 01:41:927 (4) - GEROOOOOOOOOOOO, ¿aquí no deberías de hacer lo mismo que hizo Irre con 00:37:164 (4,5) - siguiendo los claps? Quizás es tu manera de percibir las cosas, pero tendría más sentido si siguieras los isntrumentos allí y hacer el patrón, que son vastante similares, más uniforme. En realidad no le veo problema en dejar eso con un repeat ademas de que rompería la simetría que he hecho con esos sliders.
  8. 02:14:308 (2,1) - Este overlap se ve feito. x.x Moverlo un poco hacia la izquiera permitiría que se viera mejor el jump. Es intencional.
Geroversible's Hard
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Title:Lookbook
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Creator:Irreversible
Version:Geroversible's Hard
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Tags:Gero Mao Nekomata kimchi sushi come on and follow me now everytime we checking this out YEAH
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Nekomata
807 posts
Joined December 2013
Nekomata

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Also, I don't know if you looked up this site http://boa.smtown.com/?ver=08 where, over the profile menu it shows clearly her name is written in those Japanese characters. Here I attached I prove in case you wonder:

Those are actually Korean characters, and it is valid only if this was a Korean release. However, this is a Japanese release. And because this was released under a Japanese record label (avex), the correct artist is BoA. Thus, the official and correct metadata is only obtained from http://avex.jp/boa/discography/. Other sources may incorrectly list Korean characters in connection to Lookbook because BoA is Korean. The current metadata is correct and the bubble pop is not justified.
HappyRocket88
4,321 posts
Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
The correct artist is BoA, but the fact it was a Japanese release doesn't imply her name shouldn't be romanised as she's known on her website. Since when the language where a song was produced affects the correct romanization name of the artist? I wonder if in case I were a singer and I make a song the people will find troubles to know how my name is written since I became an artist, only because the song was released on another country.

I popped the bubble because I found issues that worried me before pushing this to the ranked page, aside from the Metadata discussion. I'm sorry if you think it wasn't "justified" but I'm the one who modded the map and suggested the changes to develop the mapset overall.
IamKwaN
osu! Alumni
3,905 posts
Joined August 2012
IamKwaN
I think this video explains everything. Add both 보아 and 권보아 to the tags?

ayy she's beautiful (drooling
Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Lanturn
BoA is the correct artist/romanized artist. Think of it as her stage name, not a real name (even though her real name is actually Kwan Boa).
Mao
Elite Mapper II
2,963 posts
Joined December 2012
Mao

HappyRocket88 wrote:

[Mao's Normal] Meow =3=
Timing
Overall the volume of some green lines aren't as suitable because they should be lowered ot increased according on how the parts are. Here I listed some suggestions:
  1. 00:45:736 - Should be 70% as well as this is part of the whole kiai. Done
  2. 01:40:974 - 01:48:593 - 01:50:022 - should be any value but not 70% because this isn't part of the upcoming kiai. Changed
  1. Some mini spacing problems with these objects which are rather minor 00:14:070 (5,6) - 01:00:498 (25,26) - 01:31:212 (14,15) - They are intentional to fit the SV changes.
  2. 01:41:927 (2,3) - The flow of this section is a bit awkward because the transition of the slider-tail isn't intuitive to redirect to the upcoming note. What if we placed in a straight line to develop a more perceptive pattern? Like this. Consider doing something similar over this pattern 02:27:641 (3,4) - Transitions don't always have to be super fluent, it's just a small zigzag thing here.
  3. 01:57:641 (3) - Oh please, no. The slider-head and the slider-tail are overlapping each other which could mislead the proper readability of this 1/2 slider. It would be better if you tried to reduce the curve-ness of it. What about this? While I disagree with it being hard to read for newer players, I increased the distance slightly but still kept the head and tail overlapping.

Code
osu file format v14

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WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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Title:Lookbook
TitleUnicode:Lookbook
Artist:BoA
ArtistUnicode:BoA
Creator:Irreversible
Version:Mao's Normal
Source:
Tags:Gero Mao Nekomata kimchi sushi come on and follow me now everytime we checking this out YEAH
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Irreversible
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Irreversible

HappyRocket88 wrote:

Irreversible
  1. 00:13:117 (4,1) - The transition of these two objects isn't really intuitive because (4) is stacked under the slider-head which makes a very hard pattern to follow. It would be better if you placed (4) around 308|288 to fix this. ok
  2. 00:17:879 (2,3) - DS please. This might be confusing because players could think (3) is a 1/2 circle due the high distance from 2 to 3. Placing that pattern as you did here 00:18:474 (3,4) - would make stuff more readable. but the stress should be like this
  3. 01:25:736 (1) - Please, stack it over two as well as you did here 01:29:546 (1,2) - but why? xD i like the stress
  4. 01:53:236 - Add a note here just as well as you did in the first kiai. o.o i haven't added one i think?
  5. 01:55:498 (5) - Stacking so many objects over this segment looks a bit untidy in comparison on how fluent you built up the previous patterns. What about placing (5) here 336|40 to reduce it? i added NC
  6. 02:00:974 (5,6,7,8) - Taking this pattern as a reference to avoid such as overlaps on the patterns, what about if you place them like a star pattern to avoid the monotonous up and down flow? well i just think up and down fits more..
thx again XD

all updated, recheck pls!
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HappyRocket88
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Irreversible wrote:

thx for mod! :D recheck pls?
Nekomata hasn't replied yet to the issues.
Nekomata
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Nekomata

HappyRocket88 wrote:

[Nekomata's Easy]
Overall
  1. The NC'ing of the kiais is really awkward because of the short combos due the one measure of ticks. This is mostly because beginners are tend more to follow patterns which have 4 ~ 6 over Easy, and despite the BPM is low, it would make more sense if you tried to avoid the (1,2) on combos on the kiais to develop friendlier patterns concerning the readability and flows. Just as well as you built up the non-kiai patterns. i don't see how it's really awkward - outside of kiai it is a nc every other measure and in kiai it's every measure. since i'm using more 1/2 in a row, i'm letting the player get adequate hp return.
  2. Having of 60% on the kiai doesn't make a difference from one part of another one where it would be better to increase 10% to make players realize the kiai manages more intensity than the other parts. i'm not really managing the hitsounds, but i'll do that anyway
Composing
  1. 00:55:260 (1,2) - These two sliders don't flow properly because of the angle of (1) which redirects players to go onto an odd movement to follow the next slider. It would be more fluent and catchy if you tried these kind of patterns to develop a neater flow over this segment:
  2. 00:57:641 (2,3) - Here it occurs something saimilar of the above case, the slider-tail isn't really suggesting the next note will be down which could be misleading due newbies are rather used to follow the slider-path to click the upcoming objects. I do believe something like this would be more intuitive for them:
  3. 01:04:784 (1) - This slider-shape isn't really going with the music. While the "ohhh" is rather an smooth and curve sound, this slider-path really doesn't match with the wave sound of her voice. It would be better if you tried something more fluent which emphasizes better the vocals and follow a smoother slider for this part. that shape is not for the main vocals, there is another back vocal which also stands out
  4. 01:01:927 (2,1) - Same thing of the flow. What's the need of creating such as forced flow after following this slider tail 01:01:927 (2) - ? Here making a more perceptive placement of the objects would make stuff easier to read and see. Placing 01:02:879 (1) - there is rather unexpected if we take account this is the lowest diff of the mapset.
  5. From 01:00:974 - to 01:08:593 - you should keep the same two measures for NC'ing because of the reason I stated above. changed, that seemed to be overlooked on my part
no changes about the flow, however. to keep things interesting for the player, i chose that flow while maintaining a fairly smooth movement. with this bpm, it's not very sharp for 1/1.

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Despite I disagree with the flow of the Easy difficulty, I think Nekomata's explanation about it was good and represents the diff itself. Let's see what happens then. Sorry for the metadata trouble though. I have to admit I was unsure about it so I consider to pop it rather than asking for opinions from someone else. Good luck!
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HQ

  1. 00:10:855 (1) - as I told you in game this make me retry like 3 times until I figure out the rhythm, I'd just add a circle in 00:10:736 - like you did on hard diff
  2. 00:18:951 (5) -00:20:855 (4) - touching hp bar, that's fine, but I'm not sure how much you care about mods, because this object is really on the border when you play with HR, just move it some grids down :
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  3. 01:07:879 (1,1,1,1,1) - I don't see the need of those NCs, its readable enought without them
  4. 01:17:879 (2,1) - nazi stack is a bit off
  5. 01:23:355 (1,2,1) - I think you should reduce the spacing between 1 and 2, since 2 doesn't have big emphasis in the music, and add more spacing between 2 and 1, because there is a high emphasis on 1
  6. 01:34:665 (1) - similar as the first one, I'd add a circle at 01:34:546 - just to make things play better, 01:34:308 (2,1) - polarity change its a bit tricky to get when not done by sliders~ (rhythm at hard diff can be cool too!)
  7. 01:42:879 (1,2) - nazi, stack
  8. 01:45:260 (1,1) - this combos are really necessary? because I can't find the reasoning behind them
  9. 02:30:260 (3) - normal sampleset and soft additions sounds better, as you did at hard diff
  10. 02:30:498 (1) - finish instead of whistle, normal sampleset and drum additions, as hard diff too
Hard:

  1. 00:26:212 (6,1) - don't overlap them, I was looking at other patterns 00:23:355 (2,3,4) - etc, and you usually avoid doing overlaps so..
  2. 00:47:165 (7,1) - nazi blanket gerito
  3. 01:30:498 (1,2,3) - 02:04:903 (1,1) - stacks are a bit off here
  4. 02:05:736 (1) - this slider kinda stop the cursor movement and its really hard to preddict at first play, can you just make the shape less confuse?
  5. 02:19:070 (1,2) - this should be 1/6, also those normal whistles.. just add soft like the HQ diff
Easy:

  1. this diff play fine, flow is linear as any other easy diff o.o
  2. anyways 1/2 slider to slider transitions are fine at this bpm for an easy diff, but the slider to circle aren't ok in my opinion, so basically:
  3. 00:33:831 (4) - use a circle instead
  4. 00:59:070 (1,2,3) - remove 3 and add a repeat in 2, remember to fix te spacing, also this apply for all other similar parts
Nekomata
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Natsu wrote:

Easy:

  1. this diff play fine, flow is linear as any other easy diff o.o
  2. anyways 1/2 slider to slider transitions are fine at this bpm for an easy diff, but the slider to circle aren't ok in my opinion, so basically:
  3. 00:33:831 (4) - use a circle instead this is similar to 00:22:403 (4) - , where the music section changes. it's pretty simple to catch after the first slider-slider 1/2.
  4. 00:59:070 (1,2,3) - remove 3 and add a repeat in 2, remember to fix te spacing, also this apply for all other similar parts well, not only does this change ruin the highlight of the map/song, it also unnecessarily creates a 1/2 to 00:53:355 (1) - when i actually intended the 1/1 in between to help emphasize the peak of the vocal. similar reason to above, there's the slider-slider 1/2 which prepares the player. it is also clear that i'm following the lead vocals here..
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Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu

Nekomata wrote:

Natsu wrote:

Easy:

  1. this diff play fine, flow is linear as any other easy diff o.o
  2. anyways 1/2 slider to slider transitions are fine at this bpm for an easy diff, but the slider to circle aren't ok in my opinion, so basically:
  3. 00:33:831 (4) - use a circle instead this is similar to 00:22:403 (4) - , where the music section changes. it's pretty simple to catch after the first slider-slider 1/2.
  4. 00:59:070 (1,2,3) - remove 3 and add a repeat in 2, remember to fix te spacing, also this apply for all other similar parts well, not only does this change ruin the highlight of the map/song, it also unnecessarily creates a 1/2 to 00:53:355 (1) - when i actually intended the 1/1 in between to help emphasize the peak of the vocal. similar reason to above, there's the slider-slider 1/2 which prepares the player. it is also clear that i'm following the lead vocals here..
no changes
talked with him at IRC and we did agree in something (talked with bakari as well) + added some claps :D

@Irre, Bakari also want to know why an anime BG?
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Irreversible

Natsu wrote:

yo

HQ

  1. 00:10:855 (1) - as I told you in game this make me retry like 3 times until I figure out the rhythm, I'd just add a circle in 00:10:736 - like you did on hard diff fait enough
  2. 00:18:951 (5) -00:20:855 (4) - touching hp bar, that's fine, but I'm not sure how much you care about mods, because this object is really on the border when you play with HR, just move it some grids down : ah yeah why not
    SPOILER
  3. 01:07:879 (1,1,1,1,1) - I don't see the need of those NCs, its readable enought without them this one is not about readability tbh but i feel like it needs special emphasis, like, it leads in the next kiai, i'd really like to keep it
  4. 01:17:879 (2,1) - nazi stack is a bit off find a map of mine without stacks off and ill give you 5$ , fixed
  5. 01:23:355 (1,2,1) - I think you should reduce the spacing between 1 and 2, since 2 doesn't have big emphasis in the music, and add more spacing between 2 and 1, because there is a high emphasis on 1 good
  6. 01:34:665 (1) - similar as the first one, I'd add a circle at 01:34:546 - just to make things play better, 01:34:308 (2,1) - polarity change its a bit tricky to get when not done by sliders~ (rhythm at hard diff can be cool too!) well i think you are right and it feels smoother with it. i wanted to emphasize the background better but yeah, fixed
  7. 01:42:879 (1,2) - nazi, stack oki
  8. 01:45:260 (1,1) - this combos are really necessary? because I can't find the reasoning behind them idk this pattern annoys me anyway, redone LOL
  9. 02:30:260 (3) - normal sampleset and soft additions sounds better, as you did at hard diff
  10. 02:30:498 (1) - finish instead of whistle, normal sampleset and drum additions, as hard diff too fixed both
that was a really cool mod. thank you, fixed all except this NC

updated insane and easy

As for the background, I will post my answer again: "I think this picture very well fits this music and topic of the song. The song is about checking her lookbook, if you don't know what it is, look it up. The girl in the background has this very sassy pose which is kinda provoking, basically an invitation to check it out." Sorry, but I just think if I put a boring picture by BoA it will represent exactly nothing.
Gero
4,438 posts
Joined March 2012
Gero
I've applied everything, thanks a lot Natsu.

Geroversible's Hard
osu file format v14

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Natsu
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Natsu
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Yuii-
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Yuii-
Yeeeah, congratulations Irreeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!
Natteke desu
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Natteke desu
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