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No kds
[Ovoui]
off Wide screen support
00:35:998 (8) - Move to 268 252
Nice map, I can't find any problem GL
[Ovoui]
off Wide screen support
00:35:998 (8) - Move to 268 252
Nice map, I can't find any problem GL
Topic Starter
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa so much staaaaaaaaaaaaaaaars olalaAldwych wrote:
Constipé star
you're crazy boys ><
Ok nozhomi j'ai encore merdé, je vais essayer d'arranger ça. Orz
tyUnLock- wrote:
No kds
[Ovoui]
off Wide screen support
00:35:998 (8) - Move to 268 252 the spacing used in this diff is very consistent, so i can't change it sry :c
Nice map, I can't find any problem GL
Torpedo:
01:07:569 (2) - why does spacing go from high to low? dont really get it.. not empthasizing anything
00:23:473 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would nerf this just a tiny bit, just my opinion though considering the map is pretty hard by itself
00:28:573 (1,2,3,4,1) - I would space this instead of letting it sit under that slider
00:33:073 (1,2,3,4,5) - same with 23:473, just my opinion
01:00:523 (5,6) - kinda off, doesnt sound very good
01:16:423 (9) - maybe end a bit more quieter to make it sound a bit better?
Enzoho's Extra
00:03:073 (6,7) - a bit to much spacing imo
00:24:523 (4,5) - would sound better if there was a beat in between these
00:36:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - personally, I would probaly hold this stream a bit longer until the reverse sliders but its fine if its kept the same.
00:42:673 (1,2,3,4,5) - arrange these a bit better please
00:44:623 (2,3,4,5,6) - this random spacing is kind of weird but thats just my opinion
00:52:273 (3,4,5,6,7) - same with 42:673
01:16:573 (8) - sounds weird, maybe lower volume idk
Ovoui's Insane:
00:03:823 (2,3) - I feel like this would sound better with something in between.
00:05:623 (4,5,6) - Maybe make angle a bit sharper?
00:28:198 (2,3) - might be a bit too hard.
00:47:398 (2,3) - ^
rest is fine, but 00:02:473 (1,2,3) - the double after this slider's spacing may be a bit over board and this reoccurs, but its probaly ok.
Insane:
00:06:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I would improve this pattern a bit, kind of weird to read.
other than this, this is very well done, congrats!
Well, I guess this concludes it. Good Luck!!!
BOSKIDI
also not sure about bikini bg but nothing is showing really so it should be ok
01:07:569 (2) - why does spacing go from high to low? dont really get it.. not empthasizing anything
00:23:473 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would nerf this just a tiny bit, just my opinion though considering the map is pretty hard by itself
00:28:573 (1,2,3,4,1) - I would space this instead of letting it sit under that slider
00:33:073 (1,2,3,4,5) - same with 23:473, just my opinion
01:00:523 (5,6) - kinda off, doesnt sound very good
01:16:423 (9) - maybe end a bit more quieter to make it sound a bit better?
Enzoho's Extra
00:03:073 (6,7) - a bit to much spacing imo
00:24:523 (4,5) - would sound better if there was a beat in between these
00:36:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - personally, I would probaly hold this stream a bit longer until the reverse sliders but its fine if its kept the same.
00:42:673 (1,2,3,4,5) - arrange these a bit better please
00:44:623 (2,3,4,5,6) - this random spacing is kind of weird but thats just my opinion
00:52:273 (3,4,5,6,7) - same with 42:673
01:16:573 (8) - sounds weird, maybe lower volume idk
Ovoui's Insane:
00:03:823 (2,3) - I feel like this would sound better with something in between.
00:05:623 (4,5,6) - Maybe make angle a bit sharper?
00:28:198 (2,3) - might be a bit too hard.
00:47:398 (2,3) - ^
rest is fine, but 00:02:473 (1,2,3) - the double after this slider's spacing may be a bit over board and this reoccurs, but its probaly ok.
Insane:
00:06:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I would improve this pattern a bit, kind of weird to read.
other than this, this is very well done, congrats!
Well, I guess this concludes it. Good Luck!!!
BOSKIDI
also not sure about bikini bg but nothing is showing really so it should be ok
ty!-GriM- wrote:
Ovoui's Insane:
00:03:823 (2,3) - I feel like this would sound better with something in between. indeed
00:05:623 (4,5,6) - Maybe make angle a bit sharper? done
00:28:198 (2,3) - might be a bit too hard. i think it's okay, even if i'm a bad player, i can play it easily
00:47:398 (2,3) - ^ ^
rest is fine, but 00:02:473 (1,2,3) - the double after this slider's spacing may be a bit over board and this reoccurs, but its probaly ok. i don't know , i will consider it!
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348,240,32473,6,0,P|361:281|395:308,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,308,32698,1,0,0:0:0:0:
395,308,32773,1,0,3:0:0:0:
468,188,32923,2,0,L|470:100,1,88.000002685547,2|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
472,92,33148,1,0,3:0:0:0:
472,84,33223,1,0,3:0:0:0:
472,76,33298,1,0,3:0:0:0:
472,68,33373,1,0,3:0:0:0:
360,152,33523,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,100,33673,6,0,L|230:187,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,187,33898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,187,33973,1,0,3:0:0:0:
100,236,34123,2,0,L|97:148,1,88.000002685547,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
97,148,34348,1,0,0:0:0:0:
97,148,34423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
230,187,34573,2,0,P|272:196|328:184,1,88.000002685547,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
370,144,34798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,212,34873,6,0,P|344:256|304:264,1,88.000002685547,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,263,35098,1,0,0:0:0:0:
318,263,35173,1,0,3:0:0:0:
236,376,35323,2,0,P|224:320|244:276,1,88.000002685547,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,292,35548,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,292,35623,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,168,35773,2,0,P|236:192|256:220,1,88.000002685547,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,256,35998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,292,36073,6,0,L|155:299,11,44.0000013427735,8|8|8|8|8|8|8|8|8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,328,36973,2,0,L|46:335,3,44.0000013427735,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,364,37273,2,0,P|-4:308|76:56,1,308.000009399414,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,36,37873,2,0,P|164:28|216:40,1,88.000002685547,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,68,38098,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,132,38173,2,0,P|300:176|284:220,1,88.000002685547,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,216,38473,6,0,P|120:172|124:125,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,125,38698,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,125,38773,1,0,3:0:0:0:
212,240,38923,2,0,L|212:340,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,336,39148,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,336,39223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,244,39373,2,0,B|320:196|320:196|360:152,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,92,39598,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,108,39673,6,0,B|268:144|268:144|220:144,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,144,39898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,144,39973,1,0,3:0:0:0:
88,88,40123,2,0,P|68:144|88:192,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
77,177,40348,1,0,0:0:0:0:
77,177,40423,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,144,40573,2,0,L|280:56,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,60,40798,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,128,40873,6,0,P|380:172|432:220,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,209,41098,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,209,41173,1,0,3:0:0:0:
500,324,41323,2,0,L|372:352,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
406,344,41548,1,0,0:0:0:0:
406,344,41623,1,0,0:0:0:0:
262,344,41773,2,0,L|168:323,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,304,41998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
98,232,42073,6,0,L|98:124,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,136,42298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
98,136,42373,1,0,3:0:0:0:
208,228,42523,2,0,B|256:244|256:244|308:220,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
308,220,42748,1,0,3:0:0:0:
316,216,42823,1,0,3:0:0:0:
324,212,42898,1,0,3:0:0:0:
332,208,42973,1,0,3:0:0:0:
412,92,43123,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,220,43273,6,0,P|468:280|424:312,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,302,43498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,302,43573,1,0,3:0:0:0:
332,208,43723,2,0,L|332:92,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,112,43948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,112,44023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,20,44173,2,0,P|196:64|188:128,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,164,44398,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,228,44473,6,0,P|160:248|84:244,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,250,44698,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,250,44773,1,0,3:0:0:0:
95,108,44923,2,0,B|144:95|144:95|199:112,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,108,45148,1,0,0:0:0:0:
187,108,45223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,160,45373,2,0,B|363:173|363:173|412:160,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,124,45598,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,196,45673,6,0,L|476:264,11,47.9999985351563,8|8|8|8|8|8|8|8|8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,244,46573,2,0,L|404:296,3,47.9999985351563,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,340,46873,6,0,P|232:344|120:212,1,287.999991210938,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,152,47398,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,80,47473,1,0,3:0:0:0:
304,32,47773,2,0,L|288:128,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,260,48073,6,0,P|400:224|420:168,1,95.9999970703126,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,199,48298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
413,199,48373,1,0,3:0:0:0:
288,126,48523,2,0,L|160:138,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,134,48748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,134,48823,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,208,48973,2,0,L|196:220,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,232,49198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,260,49273,6,0,P|272:295|216:304,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,305,49498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
226,305,49573,1,0,3:0:0:0:
244,164,49723,2,0,L|256:28,2,95.9999970703126,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,164,50098,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,164,50173,1,0,3:0:0:0:
184,32,50323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,16,50473,6,0,P|344:76|320:140,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,108,50698,1,0,0:0:0:0:
337,108,50773,1,0,3:0:0:0:
308,248,50923,2,0,P|302:295|317:340,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,340,51148,1,0,0:0:0:0:
317,340,51223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,204,51373,2,0,P|308:176|260:192,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,216,51598,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,244,51673,6,0,P|104:247|65:221,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
65,221,51898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
65,221,51973,1,0,3:0:0:0:
148,104,52123,2,0,B|216:88|216:88|284:88,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
252,88,52348,1,0,3:0:0:0:
260,88,52423,1,0,3:0:0:0:
268,88,52498,1,0,3:0:0:0:
276,88,52573,1,0,3:0:0:0:
404,156,52723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,236,52873,6,0,P|272:312|296:344,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,325,53098,1,0,0:0:0:0:
279,325,53173,1,0,3:0:0:0:
405,251,53323,2,0,L|403:123,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,156,53548,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,156,53623,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,236,53773,2,0,B|240:256|240:256|188:232,1,95.9999970703126,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,196,53998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,148,54073,6,0,P|64:200|84:248,1,95.9999970703126,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,238,54298,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,238,54373,1,0,3:0:0:0:
204,304,54523,2,0,L|328:308,1,95.9999970703126,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,307,54748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,307,54823,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,332,54973,2,0,P|408:276|407:217,1,95.9999970703126
427,185,55198,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,152,55273,6,0,L|496:84,11,47.9999985351563,8|8|8|8|8|8|8|8|8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,116,56173,2,0,L|426:68,3,47.9999985351563,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,64,56473,6,0,P|308:144|204:156,1,191.999994140625,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,64,56923,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,224,57073,2,0,L|104:168,4,47.9999985351563,0|0|0|0|0,3:0|0:0|0:0|0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
272,324,57673,6,0,P|324:284|352:216,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,236,57973,1,0,3:0:0:0:
220,216,58123,1,2,0:0:0:0:
335,157,58273,2,0,L|351:257,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,320,58573,2,0,B|470:275|470:275|460:204,1,120,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,207,58873,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,272,59023,2,0,P|256:288|140:236,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,208,59473,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,44,59773,1,0,3:0:0:0:
464,248,60073,6,0,P|396:276|324:260,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,272,60373,1,0,3:0:0:0:
264,180,60523,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,260,60673,2,0,L|72:256,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,352,60973,2,0,B|228:328|228:328|260:264,1,120,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,275,61273,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,148,61423,2,0,P|357:219|288:280,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,275,61873,2,0,P|207:270|170:253,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
19,93,62173,2,0,P|66:98|103:115,1,80,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,201,62473,6,0,L|311:176,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,177,62773,1,0,3:0:0:0:
405,100,62923,1,2,0:0:0:0:
433,224,63073,2,0,B|420:263|420:263|375:294,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,319,63373,2,0,P|265:246|297:202,1,120,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,208,63673,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,136,63823,2,0,P|304:168|196:128,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,80,64273,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,312,64573,1,0,3:0:0:0:
328,336,64873,6,0,P|260:336|208:316,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
211,318,65173,1,0,3:0:0:0:
168,196,65323,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,260,65473,2,0,P|324:260|360:236,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,120,65773,2,0,B|300:184|300:184|244:160,1,120,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,162,66073,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,36,66223,2,0,P|362:43|400:138,1,200
352,176,66673,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,48,66973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,304,67273,6,0,L|88:172,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,189,67573,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,144,67723,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,271,67873,2,0,L|120:307,1,80,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,224,68173,2,0,P|32:144|84:116,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
59,122,68473,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,196,68623,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,268,68773,2,0,L|380:256,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,44,69223,2,0,L|408:52,2,80,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,144,69673,6,0,P|352:128|324:44,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
322,77,69973,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,204,70123,1,0,0:0:0:0:
254,113,70273,2,0,P|286:85|334:77,1,80,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,188,70573,2,0,P|192:156|180:104,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
179,113,70873,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,20,71023,2,0,B|324:72|324:72|348:176,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,354,71473,2,0,P|191:282|232:216,1,160,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,120,72073,6,0,P|460:188|424:236,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,229,72373,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,320,72523,1,0,0:0:0:0:
218,354,72673,2,0,L|120:320,1,80,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,228,72973,2,0,B|116:208|116:208|180:232,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,229,73273,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,352,73423,2,0,P|280:300|296:204,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,60,74023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
105,192,74173,2,0,P|161:228|201:224,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,216,74473,6,0,B|380:196|380:196|416:136,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,163,74773,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,284,74923,2,0,L|260:308,1,80,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
172,228,75223,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,216,75373,2,0,B|380:196|380:196|416:136,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,163,75673,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,104,75823,2,0,B|144:104|144:104|88:136,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,148,76273,2,0,B|296:148|296:148|424:68,1,280,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Enon M4M req
good luck~!
General
- AudioLeadIn: 2000
Easy
- 00:02:473 (1,1) - stack you can be better
- 00:08:473 (2) - i think blanket too near how do you like this?
- 00:11:173 (3,1) - avoid stack
- 00:19:273 (1,2,3) - just use 1.2 DS?
- 00:30:073 (1,1) - remove NC
Normal
- 00:00:073 (1,2) - why not symmetry?
- 00:15:673 (3,4) - blanket you can be better
- 01:01:873 (4) - curve too much suggest like this
- 01:07:273 (1) - this slide looks better
Aia's Hard
- 00:00:073 - add finish sound?
- 00:01:273 (5) - remove NC? just use 2downbeat NC term
- 00:11:323 (7,8,9) - how do think you this rhythm? 00:11:623 (8) - and add note stack here slidehead 00:11:773 (9) -
- 00:15:673 (1) - remove NC
- 00:27:373 (4) - make half stack? for reading
- 01:16:798 - end here like another diff
Insane
- 00:06:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - add some slide circles too much
- 00:18:673 (1) - remove NC? and 00:18:373 (3,1) - make follow point
- 00:55:273 (1,3) -00:55:573 (2,4) - make same space
- 00:00:073 (1) - add finish?
- 00:00:073 (1,2,3) - use same DS 00:02:473 (1,2,3) - like here
- 00:08:473 (7) - NC? just use one downbeat NC term
- 00:17:173 - remove didn't used greenline
- 00:27:673 (1,2,3) - avoid jump stream pattern because that's EX pattern too hard
- 00:37:273 (3) - NC 00:27:673 (1) - like here
Enozho's Extra
- 00:00:073 (1) - add finish sound?
- 00:07:198 (11) - use same ds x185 y65
- 00:13:273 (1,2) - avoid stack
- 00:18:973 (1) - remove NC? 00:09:373 (7) - like here 00:28:573 (1) - same
- 00:31:273 (1,4) - blanket space like here?00:32:023 (5,7) -
- 01:11:623 (1) - remove NC and suggest
- 00:03:073 (6,7) - i think blanket too near here is pattern suggest
- 00:05:473 (5,6) - blanket you can be better
good luck~!
아니 님아_Gezo_ wrote:
아니
m4m.
[easy]
00:06:673 (3,1) - I think this overlap is not good in Easy.
00:08:473 (2,1) - 1.23x
00:19:273 (1,2,3) - why they are 1.4x?
00:33:073 (2,1) - I think this not perfect blanket.
00:42:673 (3,2) - why this is overlap?
[normal]
00:26:323 (4,1) - I think this stack is difficult for beginners.
01:03:673 (2,1) - stack error?
01:06:073 (2,3,4) - How about make triangle?
[aia's hard]
00:23:473 (7) - http://puu.sh/mWr46/c0611c71c6.jpg
00:35:923 (1) - NC is not necessary...
00:57:973 (2,3,7) - these are too near.
01:12:373 (1) - Remove NC.
[Insane]
00:00:073 (1,2) - beat is in 00:00:298 - here. http://puu.sh/mWrgD/d560253518.jpg
00:20:173 (5,4) - Why they are overlap? I Think stack is better.
00:57:973 (2,1) - http://puu.sh/mWrns/d4ff21101e.jpg
[ovoui's insane]
00:05:398 (2,4) - stack error
00:26:473 (1,2) - this reverse slider is hard to read. http://puu.sh/mWrvQ/8b7778a88e.jpg this is recommand.
00:36:073 (1,2) - ^
00:45:673 (1,2) - ^
00:55:273 (1,2) - ^
01:01:873 (8,1) - This overlap looks bad.
01:13:423 (7) - stack error?
[enozho's extra]
01:11:623 (1,1) - I think this stack is bad...
[torpedo]
nothing to say
[easy]
00:06:673 (3,1) - I think this overlap is not good in Easy.
00:08:473 (2,1) - 1.23x
00:19:273 (1,2,3) - why they are 1.4x?
00:33:073 (2,1) - I think this not perfect blanket.
00:42:673 (3,2) - why this is overlap?
[normal]
00:26:323 (4,1) - I think this stack is difficult for beginners.
01:03:673 (2,1) - stack error?
01:06:073 (2,3,4) - How about make triangle?
[aia's hard]
00:23:473 (7) - http://puu.sh/mWr46/c0611c71c6.jpg
00:35:923 (1) - NC is not necessary...
00:57:973 (2,3,7) - these are too near.
01:12:373 (1) - Remove NC.
[Insane]
00:00:073 (1,2) - beat is in 00:00:298 - here. http://puu.sh/mWrgD/d560253518.jpg
00:20:173 (5,4) - Why they are overlap? I Think stack is better.
00:57:973 (2,1) - http://puu.sh/mWrns/d4ff21101e.jpg
[ovoui's insane]
00:05:398 (2,4) - stack error
00:26:473 (1,2) - this reverse slider is hard to read. http://puu.sh/mWrvQ/8b7778a88e.jpg this is recommand.
00:36:073 (1,2) - ^
00:45:673 (1,2) - ^
00:55:273 (1,2) - ^
01:01:873 (8,1) - This overlap looks bad.
01:13:423 (7) - stack error?
[enozho's extra]
01:11:623 (1,1) - I think this stack is bad...
[torpedo]
nothing to say
@Ovoui
I already take kudos in this mapset so i dont want to mod other diffs, sor
I already take kudos in this mapset so i dont want to mod other diffs, sor
Topic Starter
I'm answering for Aia this time only, she'll do the other.
Updated
Exa wrote:
Aia's Hard:
00:01:273 (1,2) - These...
00:01:873 (3,4) - And these contain the exact same sounds and should be represented using the same rhythm! Diversity is cool but skipping sounds that you've mapped before when you are clearly not following something else is a no-no.
00:01:273 (1,2,3,4) - Also again the sounds that are contained with these...
00:06:073 (5,6,7,8) - Are the exact same with these. Please be consistent... - Used now same rhythm for both, consistency is better.
00:06:523 (6) - And please do not try to justify misrepresenting the SAME sounds by saying "Variety." because you end up mapping sounds out of the blue, making the rhythm confusing as if the song already isn't enough.
00:11:323 (7) - Like... There are some really prominent sounds on the background but you decide to map this... You even skip actual bass beats in the process which makes it even more weird. I get that you are trying to make it somehow interesting but try doing that using diverse movement, no false/inconsistent/on-weak-sounds rhythm.
00:13:873 (7) - Ctrl+G, stack it nicely and Ctrl+G back. - Fix
00:09:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These...
00:14:473 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - And these also contain the same sounds. Despite that, they are rhythmically inconsistent, partly treated with different spacing and their comboing is not the same. I would very much like to provide you with alternatives but that would require changing the whole pattern, as well as some stuff before and after it but I will leave this to you so you can change it according to your linking; if you actually do change it. - That's fine for me, just changed 00:09:673 (1) - and 00:14:473 (1) - who was inconsistent wih 00:15:673 (1) - .
00:18:973 - While the difficulty level is rising, you are allowed to map more sounds, therefore I feel like this one should not be left untreated for. How about placing a 1/2 slider 24,164 rotated by roughly 6 degrees like so? - Not a necessity imo.
00:21:673 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The inconsistencies are pretty clear if you take a look of 10 seconds. However, looking though the map once again I am starting to feel like this map's fun is defined by the diversity of rhythm and spacing on constantly repeating sounds which unfortunately requires inconsistencies to be made. I will not be pointing out any more inconsistencies from now on nor how they might affect the playability of certain patterns since I seem like I want you to change everything. - Just changed 00:25:273 (5,6) - who was really too inconsistent and imo really hard.
00:28:573 (7) - If you used a slider on the same sound as I recommended before, please do so here as well. - Rip
00:43:273 (1,2) - This very much looks like a 1/2 time gap due to the narrow object placement and due to the comboing being constant.
(If only you'd be using a slider instead of a note for this sound just like you have been doing up until now) - Changed it to have an enough good spacing.
00:53:773 (4,5) - This really sounds like a sound that would be generated by holding something down. It even feels better if there is a slider on it! How about trying something like this? - So yeah it could be, but honestly not worth with the jump and pattern. Also works for drums here so it's k.
01:07:273 (1,2,3) - Not using constant DS here is pretty much pointless. Not only that but you end up with two slider touching each other in a really ugly way, which I find to be very inappropriate. (In other words: You can get rid of the overlap, do it!) - Fix
01:16:798 - Since almost every other difficulty ends here, it is recommended that this does as well. - Her choice is a valid one tho.
- I kinda explained my feeling for this difficulty whilst modding it. So yeah, if the song is consistent and you are actually making a map representing the song, that map should also be consistent. Don't go against the basic structure of the map for the sake of making it more "fun" because that only results in more confusing rhythm -> not fun.
-GriM- wrote:
Torpedo:
01:07:569 (2) - why does spacing go from high to low? dont really get it.. not empthasizing anything - This part is calm compared to before, so I wanted to do it like that to relax players from all this tension.
00:23:473 (1,2,3,4,5) - I would nerf this just a tiny bit, just my opinion though considering the map is pretty hard by itself - Hard yes.
00:28:573 (1,2,3,4,1) - I would space this instead of letting it sit under that slider - Dunno but it's fine for me.
00:33:073 (1,2,3,4,5) - same with 23:473, just my opinion - ^^
01:00:523 (5,6) - kinda off, doesnt sound very good - Agree, fixed.
01:16:423 (9) - maybe end a bit more quieter to make it sound a bit better? - 10%
Enzoho's Extra
00:03:073 (6,7) - a bit to much spacing imo - Use standard spacing.
00:03:073 (6,7) - I would space these, it would just be over all better to play - You failed your copy/pasta
00:24:523 (4,5) - would sound better if there was a beat in between these - I prefer let it more simple than kill the pattern.
00:36:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - personally, I would probaly hold this stream a bit longer until the reverse sliders but its fine if its kept the same. - I prefer keep the 3 reverses sliders.
Insane:
00:06:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I would improve this pattern a bit, kind of weird to read. - Changed.
other than this, this is very well done, congrats!
Well, I guess this concludes it. Good Luck!!!
BOSKIDI
also not sure about bikini bg but nothing is showing really so it should be ok
Taeyang wrote:
Enon M4M req
- AudioLeadIn: 2000 - No need, the game put it one itself at start of a map.
- 00:02:473 (1,1) - stack you can be better - Fix
- 00:08:473 (2) - i think blanket too near how do you like this?
- 00:11:173 (3,1) - avoid stack - The stack is ok, because NC makes it readable.
- 00:19:273 (1,2,3) - just use 1.2 DS? - Fix
- 00:30:073 (1,1) - remove NC - Fix
- 00:00:073 (1,2) - why not symmetry? - Because rest of pattern won't work. Anyway I changed it.
- 00:15:673 (3,4) - blanket you can be better - Fix
- 01:01:873 (4) - curve too much suggest like this - Fix
- 01:07:273 (1) - this slide looks better - Fix
- 00:06:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - add some slide circles too much - Fix added 2.
- 00:18:673 (1) - remove NC? and 00:18:373 (3,1) - make follow point - Fix
- 00:55:273 (1,3) -00:55:573 (2,4) - make same space - Fix
- 00:00:073 (1) - add finish sound? - Did for all diffs.
- 00:07:198 (11) - use same ds x185 y65 - Fix
- 00:13:273 (1,2) - avoid stack - Fix
- 00:18:973 (1) - remove NC? 00:09:373 (7) - like here 00:28:573 (1) - same - Added NC instead of removing it.
- 00:31:273 (1,4) - blanket space like here?00:32:023 (5,7) - - Not needed, I like it like this.
- 00:03:073 (6,7) - i think blanket too near here is pattern suggest - Just move a little slider to the right.
- 00:05:473 (5,6) - blanket you can be better - Done on purpose because of note stacking.
good luck~!
Thx all you guys~Neoskylove wrote:
m4m.
[easy]
00:06:673 (3,1) - I think this overlap is not good in Easy. - Fix
00:08:473 (2,1) - 1.23x - Fix
00:19:273 (1,2,3) - why they are 1.4x? - Fix
00:33:073 (2,1) - I think this not perfect blanket. - Fix
00:42:673 (3,2) - why this is overlap? - Fix by redo ALL PATTERN ;w;
[normal]
00:26:323 (4,1) - I think this stack is difficult for beginners. - Ok with NC.
01:03:673 (2,1) - stack error? - Fix
01:06:073 (2,3,4) - How about make triangle? - Fix
[Insane]
00:00:073 (1,2) - beat is in 00:00:298 - here. http://puu.sh/mWrgD/d560253518.jpg - I prefer use a simple rhythm here.
00:20:173 (5,4) - Why they are overlap? I Think stack is better. - Not visible in-game and could destroy spacing.
00:57:973 (2,1) - http://puu.sh/mWrns/d4ff21101e.jpg - Fix
[enozho's extra]
01:11:623 (1,1) - I think this stack is bad... - That's fine and easy to read.
[torpedo]
nothing to say
Updated
Taeyang wrote:
Enon M4M req
- 01:11:623 (1) - remove NC and suggest ✐ 전 지금이 더 나은 것 같네요. 슬라이더 방향만 고쳤습니다.
good luck~!
Neoskylove wrote:
m4m.
[enozho's extra]
01:11:623 (1,1) - I think this stack is bad... ✐ 슬라이더 방향만 고쳐 봤습니다.
모딩 감사합니다~~
@Nozhomi: 01:11:623 - Please change it like this. CTRL + J?
Topic Starter
@Enon done~
Tired and from #modreq
[Insane]
Sorry I didn't find more, it looks pretty close to ready for me ;;
[Insane]
- 00:03:373 (6) - Blanket the 5 better.
- 00:14:923 (3) - Reposition the 3 to better make a triangle with 2 and 4.
- 00:03:223 (4,5,6,1) - Having to change direction (6>1) like that from a straight line jump just plays really awkwardly.
- 00:33:073 (1,2,3,4,5) - Inconsistent DS
- 00:08:773 (2,3,4,5,6) - Conceptually, I get the difference in spacing, but in execution it looks kind of shotty. Perhaps make the transition a bit more gradual near the end?
- 00:09:373 (7,8,9,10,1) - ^
Sorry I didn't find more, it looks pretty close to ready for me ;;
ty ~Taeyang wrote:
Hi Taeyang!
- 00:00:073 (1) - add finish? there is already a finish here
- 00:00:073 (1,2,3) - use same DS 00:02:473 (1,2,3) - like here fixed
- 00:08:473 (7) - NC? just use one downbeat NC term done
- 00:17:173 - remove didn't used greenline done
- 00:27:673 (1,2,3) - avoid jump stream pattern because that's EX pattern too hard that's not a stream, it's a triplet. I don't think i'ts too hard because i make a lot of pattern with the same spacing before this moment.
- 00:37:273 (3) - NC 00:27:673 (1) - like here
good luck~!
Thanks for the mod!Neoskylove wrote:
Hi Neoskylove
[ovoui's insane]
00:05:398 (2,4) - stack error i think you failed your copy/paste
00:26:473 (1,2) - this reverse slider is hard to read. http://puu.sh/mWrvQ/8b7778a88e.jpg this is recommand. it's not hard at all to read imo! It follows well the song imo and the ar9 make it easy to read
00:36:073 (1,2) - ^
00:45:673 (1,2) - ^
00:55:273 (1,2) - ^
01:01:873 (8,1) - This overlap looks bad. fixed
01:13:423 (7) - stack error? fixed
thank you o/CrypticMech wrote:
Hi CrypticMech
[Ovoui's Insane]
- 00:03:223 (4,5,6,1) - Having to change direction (6>1) like that from a straight line jump just plays really awkwardly. why not, but can you give me a suggestion ? i really don't know what to do
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Ahoy, from m4m'ing 
General
Edit: My 100th kudosu, wheeeeeeeeeeeeee!
General
- 01:07:273 - I'm pretty sure this is only 100BPM from here on, dunno whether or not it needs to be correct for rank but I just wanted to point it out ^^
- Maybe raise the offset by +2ms, I sounds a bit too early in the outro and I was noticably late when playing with HalfTime too
- This mapset needs at least 1 Easy/Normal diff. jk, SV is stronk ^^
- tbh I think the AR might be too low considering the BPM and stacks like 00:11:173 (3,1) and 01:03:673 (2,1) - You can potentially see 4/1 ahead which is a bit too much / too dense I think
- 00:11:173 (3,4) - This might be kinda weird to play, adding to the stack it might confuse the beginners too
- 01:01:573 (3,2) - Heil stacking!
- 01:07:273 - Maybe lower the SV from here on, to represent that the BPM is halfed here? This isn't forbidden in Easy y'know
- 00:25:723 (2,3,4,1) - Using stacked and spaced 1/1s right after another might be too confusing, dunno, you didn't use it anywhere else either so I'd recommend changing that one too - I don't see any particular reason to stack (4,1) anyways, I'd rather stack (3,4) and unstack those, might be a bit easier to read too maybe
- 00:49:573 (5,6) - I feel like the note that (5) ends on is already a part of the vocal pattern of (6), so mapping it like this feels kinda weird to me
- Again suggesting to lower SV at 01:07:273
- All these 3/2-sliders in the outro may feel nice but that rhythm is not given in the song at all, there is no strong note at 01:07:723 - 01:10:123 - 01:12:523 - 01:14:923 to justify those, and tbh extending them to 2/1 feels more appropriate anyways imo since this is the outro, and half-BPM so it should be calmer to play
- 00:02:473 (1,2) and 00:07:273 (1,2) - The 3/4-gap feels very unnatural to play when it's after a tail, and especially since 00:00:073 (1) and 00:04:873 (1) have been mapped as 1/1 it's unexpected too as they are exactly the same, so I'd recommend changing those to 1/1 too, or map something on that empty white tick too
- 00:05:923 (4,5,6) - I don't really see what those are mapped too, there's isn't anything that is off-beat or syncopated, and you didn't map anything like this anywhere else in the whole diff (except the outro where the offbeat-sliders are supported by the vocals)
- 00:13:273 (5,7) - Uuuh I don't think perfectly stacking them 1/1s is good, and you didn't even perfectly stack 3/2s like 00:16:123 (2,4) so I don't see why you did it here. Also, 00:26:773 (2,4) are 3/2 too, so keep it consistent please! I don't know how sliders behave exactly now with the fae-out, so 00:34:273 (3,5) and 00:51:073 (3,5) might count as more than 3/2
- 00:29:098 (2) - All sliders like this one have a way stronger sound on their tail than on their head, so those play really bad / unnatural, plus 1/4-rhythms haven't been introduced yet (except triplets ofc) so yeah. Even I had trouble playing this bc it's so weird lol, pleeaase change all of those
- 01:10:273 (3,4,5) - Ah, seems like you don't have stacking viewed in the editor, that would explain the random perfect stacks - Here, the stack shifts the first circle exactly in the direction of the slider, causing them to overlap which isn't very pleasing, please fix that - Same with 01:12:973 (3,4,5) -, and 01:15:673 (5,6,7) could use some more space too
- 01:12:373 (1) - Why the NC?
- Seems kinda weird / imbalanced that there's only a single clickable triplet in the whole diff, at 00:09:523 (3,4,1) -, I'd say either remove that one or put more of them into the map, it's just imbalanced for no apparent reason
- 00:57:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Whoa lol, the Hard had only a single clickable triplet (and that might be deleted since it's imbalanced), and then in the next diff a stream of 9? Definitely seems to much, and the starrating drops by 0,09* too if you delete that one, soo yeah, pls nerf that one
- 00:15:673 (1,2,3) - Even without slider-leniency, those are basically spaced the same as 00:16:873 (1,2,3,4) -, adding slider-leniency to it they are spaced way too low for which I see no reason o: A consequence of that is 00:16:273 (3,1) not stacking lol
- 00:16:873 (1,2,3,4) - Why are those actually spaced way more than 00:26:473 (1,2,3,4) or 00:45:673 (1,2,3,4) or 00:55:273 (1,2,3,4) etc. anyways?
- 00:18:373 (3) - I think you could map this as a double in an Insane, feels way better to play
- 00:21:373 (5,6,1,2,3) - I kinda miss a differentiation between those two combos, at (5,6) the vocals are kinda special and the background beats are completely paused, but then it just flows nicely into the next combo which doesn't feel appropriate at all - Stacking (5,6) would fit very well imo, but yeah, just do anything you want as long as it differentiates between those combos better
- 00:38:923 (3) - Just like in Normal, all of these 3/4-sliders are just invented rhythm, not provided by the song, and feel very weird when they first occur
- 00:45:073 (5,6,7) - Pretty high spacing, also compared to 00:40:273 (4,5,6) -, and 00:45:373 (7,1) looks kinda cramped in comparision to that
- 00:03:823 (2,3,4) - Uuuh adding that circle in-between makes this incredibly stupid to play and read - The player expects to click the downbeat at 00:04:273 since that is a very important note, additionally those are extremely high spaced, even higher than for example 00:02:473 (1,2,3) or 00:04:873 (1,2,3) for some reason - All in all that is just extremely unexpected, weird and hard to play, pleeaase re-do all those patterns, they are the most difficult things in the whole diff
- 00:40:573 (7) - Absolutely everything halts at 00:40:648 so making this a slider doesn't fit at all (theoretically making it 1/4 would fit since the sound of the drum-kick is that long but that would be stupid too lol)
- 00:40:798 (8) - That doesn't seem right at all, there is no actual note here, the vocals have a barely audible change of pitch but that doesn't happen on that tick at all, and it doesn't fit to the break that the background beats have at all
- 01:11:023 (7,8) - That spacing is way too big lol, I mean that's almost the same as a 1/1-gap
- 01:15:823 (7,8) - This is really bad to play but I can't really explain why : \
- 00:22:423 (5) - I don't see the reason for this one to be off-beat, the vocals have a very strong note on the tail but very weak on the head - That applies to a lot of sliders until the Kiai ( 00:24:823 (5) - 00:29:623 (5) - 00:32:023 (5) - 00:34:423 (5) -), they all play very weird as nothing has that rhythm, the vocals have a 3/2-3/2-2/2-rhythm
Also, 00:19:723 (4,5) is the only time where you didn't map it like that, so yeah, at least make it consistent either way, but I highly advise to change those offbeat-sliders, they make nice patterns and all but the patterns don't fit to the song bc of the rhythm - 00:37:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Maybe differentiate a bit between the first four notes and the rest? Right now there isn't even the direction change there, and the notes that start on (5) are so strong they definitively deserve to be differentiated!
- 00:38:773 (3,4) - All spacings like this one seem a bit too low bc of slider-leniency, the next note isn't emphasized at all, I'd raise them all : \ This section seems cramped anyways since there is so much overlapping although they are far away in the timeline, raising the spacing would help that too
- 00:37:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Same as in Extra, differentiate at (5) please
- 00:55:273 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - I don't see the system of at which notes you make the turns, at (6) it's a very weak beat being the turning point, at (11) the turning point is a strong beat and (16) is weak again - Both ways of when-to-turn are good, but they shouldn't be mixed up, that's pretty confusing! (I see in the editor that it's a triangle but that's not that noticable in-game anyways, just unnecessarily confusing, I'd say make the second turn on (10) or (12), that way it's consistent with (16) being a turning point instead of (1) )
- 00:57:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Again I'd suggest differentiating at (5) as that is an extremely prominent beat there
- Nothing more to say, on Half-Time it played very nicely (can't play it nomod, I'm weak ;_;), good job!
Edit: My 100th kudosu, wheeeeeeeeeeeeee!
Bonsai wrote:
Ovoui's Insane
- 00:03:823 (2,3,4) - Uuuh adding that circle in-between makes this incredibly stupid to play and read - The player expects to click the downbeat at 00:04:273 since that is a very important note, additionally those are extremely high spaced, even higher than for example 00:02:473 (1,2,3) or 00:04:873 (1,2,3) for some reason - All in all that is just extremely unexpected, weird and hard to play, pleeaase re-do all those patterns, they are the most difficult things in the whole diff it's ok, it's ar9, it's easy to read + this diff is almost a 5* diff so it's for people who have some reading skills
- 00:40:573 (7) - Absolutely everything halts at 00:40:648 so making this a slider doesn't fit at all (theoretically making it 1/4 would fit since the sound of the drum-kick is that long but that would be stupid too lol) fixed
- 00:40:798 (8) - That doesn't seem right at all, there is no actual note here, the vocals have a barely audible change of pitch but that doesn't happen on that tick at all, and it doesn't fit to the break that the background beats have at all fixed
- 01:11:023 (7,8) - That spacing is way too big lol, I mean that's almost the same as a 1/1-gap i think a jump here fits well
- 01:15:823 (7,8) - This is really bad to play but I can't really explain why : \ it's ok imo
Good luck!
Edit: My 100th kudosu, wheeeeeeeeeeeeee! grats
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Maybe something like this. (I'm using 2.0 DS, 00:03:523 (6) - is on the repeat of 00:02:473 (1) - and 00:03:673 (1) - is on the beginning of 00:04:423 (4) - . Hope this helps.Ovoui wrote:
thank you o/CrypticMech wrote:
Hi CrypticMech
[Ovoui's Insane]
- 00:03:223 (4,5,6,1) - Having to change direction (6>1) like that from a straight line jump just plays really awkwardly. why not, but can you give me a suggestion ? i really don't know what to do
Topic Starter
CrypticMech wrote:
Tired and from #modreq
[Insane][Enozho's Extra]
- 00:03:373 (6) - Blanket the 5 better. - Was not blanket on purpose.
- 00:14:923 (3) - Reposition the 3 to better make a triangle with 2 and 4. - Fix
[Torpedo]
- 00:33:073 (1,2,3,4,5) - Inconsistent DS - Fix
Sorry I didn't find more, it looks pretty close to ready for me ;;
- 00:08:773 (2,3,4,5,6) - Conceptually, I get the difference in spacing, but in execution it looks kind of shotty. Perhaps make the transition a bit more gradual near the end? - Fix
- 00:09:373 (7,8,9,10,1) - ^ - Fix
Bonsai wrote:
Ahoy, from m4m'ing
GeneralEasy
- 01:07:273 - I'm pretty sure this is only 100BPM from here on, dunno whether or not it needs to be correct for rank but I just wanted to point it out ^^ - Probably, but not necessairy at all, and now there is a SV down on this part everywhere on my diffs so it's k.
- Maybe raise the offset by +2ms, I sounds a bit too early in the outro and I was noticably late when playing with HalfTime too - Fix
Normal
- This mapset needs at least 1 Easy/Normal diff. jk, SV is stronk ^^ - Won't touch it tho, still thinking it's fine, and really don't want to redo all of it when it works.
- tbh I think the AR might be too low considering the BPM and stacks like 00:11:173 (3,1) and 01:03:673 (2,1) - You can potentially see 4/1 ahead which is a bit too much / too dense I think - AR3.5
- 00:11:173 (3,4) - This might be kinda weird to play, adding to the stack it might confuse the beginners too - Combo color is enough to read it easiely.
- 01:01:573 (3,2) - Heil stacking! - Fix
- 01:07:273 - Maybe lower the SV from here on, to represent that the BPM is halfed here? This isn't forbidden in Easy y'know - Fix and redo it.
Insane
- 00:25:723 (2,3,4,1) - Using stacked and spaced 1/1s right after another might be too confusing, dunno, you didn't use it anywhere else either so I'd recommend changing that one too - I don't see any particular reason to stack (4,1) anyways, I'd rather stack (3,4) and unstack those, might be a bit easier to read too maybe - Fix
- 00:49:573 (5,6) - I feel like the note that (5) ends on is already a part of the vocal pattern of (6), so mapping it like this feels kinda weird to me - Vocal yes, but reverse is definitly on a stronger and different part of it.
- Again suggesting to lower SV at 01:07:273 - Fix and redo.
- All these 3/2-sliders in the outro may feel nice but that rhythm is not given in the song at all, there is no strong note at 01:07:723 - 01:10:123 - 01:12:523 - 01:14:923 to justify those, and tbh extending them to 2/1 feels more appropriate anyways imo since this is the outro, and half-BPM so it should be calmer to play - Fix but was a little sad to use same rhythm than Easy for them.
Enozho's Extra
- 00:57:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Whoa lol, the Hard had only a single clickable triplet (and that might be deleted since it's imbalanced), and then in the next diff a stream of 9? Definitely seems to much, and the starrating drops by 0,09* too if you delete that one, soo yeah, pls nerf that one - Okok fixed ;w;
- 00:15:673 (1,2,3) - Even without slider-leniency, those are basically spaced the same as 00:16:873 (1,2,3,4) -, adding slider-leniency to it they are spaced way too low for which I see no reason o: A consequence of that is 00:16:273 (3,1) not stacking lol - Fix
- 00:16:873 (1,2,3,4) - Why are those actually spaced way more than 00:26:473 (1,2,3,4) or 00:45:673 (1,2,3,4) or 00:55:273 (1,2,3,4) etc. anyways? - Simply because they're here head to head when other are on the side.
- 00:18:373 (3) - I think you could map this as a double in an Insane, feels way better to play - Never ! This is too hard and don't like it.
- 00:21:373 (5,6,1,2,3) - I kinda miss a differentiation between those two combos, at (5,6) the vocals are kinda special and the background beats are completely paused, but then it just flows nicely into the next combo which doesn't feel appropriate at all - Stacking (5,6) would fit very well imo, but yeah, just do anything you want as long as it differentiates between those combos better - Fix pattern ;w;
- 00:38:923 (3) - Just like in Normal, all of these 3/4-sliders are just invented rhythm, not provided by the song, and feel very weird when they first occur - An other would be too hard, and works with music imo.
- 00:45:073 (5,6,7) - Pretty high spacing, also compared to 00:40:273 (4,5,6) -, and 00:45:373 (7,1) looks kinda cramped in comparision to that - That's k, just spaced a little from reverse.
Torpedo
- 00:22:423 (5) - I don't see the reason for this one to be off-beat, the vocals have a very strong note on the tail but very weak on the head - That applies to a lot of sliders until the Kiai ( 00:24:823 (5) - 00:29:623 (5) - 00:32:023 (5) - 00:34:423 (5) -), they all play very weird as nothing has that rhythm, the vocals have a 3/2-3/2-2/2-rhythm
- 00:37:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Maybe differentiate a bit between the first four notes and the rest? Right now there isn't even the direction change there, and the notes that start on (5) are so strong they definitively deserve to be differentiated! - I hate that lol.
- 00:38:773 (3,4) - All spacings like this one seem a bit too low bc of slider-leniency, the next note isn't emphasized at all, I'd raise them all : \ This section seems cramped anyways since there is so much overlapping although they are far away in the timeline, raising the spacing would help that too - Enon's part so will see with him.
Good luck!
- 00:37:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Same as in Extra, differentiate at (5) please - Same as Extra.
- 00:55:273 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - I don't see the system of at which notes you make the turns, at (6) it's a very weak beat being the turning point, at (11) the turning point is a strong beat and (16) is weak again - Both ways of when-to-turn are good, but they shouldn't be mixed up, that's pretty confusing! (I see in the editor that it's a triangle but that's not that noticable in-game anyways, just unnecessarily confusing, I'd say make the second turn on (10) or (12), that way it's consistent with (16) being a turning point instead of (1) ) - Want to keep this perfect triangle.
- 00:57:073 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Again I'd suggest differentiating at (5) as that is an extremely prominent beat there - Same as Extra.
- Nothing more to say, on Half-Time it played very nicely (can't play it nomod, I'm weak ;_;), good job! - Thx ><
Edit: My 100th kudosu, wheeeeeeeeeeeeee! AYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
Thx guys :3
Updated~
CrypticMech wrote:
Maybe something like this. (I'm using 2.0 DS, 00:03:523 (6) - is on the repeat of 00:02:473 (1) - and 00:03:673 (1) - is on the beginning of 00:04:423 (4) - . Hope this helps. nice idea i made kinda the same pattern but i use 1.5 spacing
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blablabla we irc'd
Topic Starter
Okoratu wrote:
blablabla we irc'd
le irc avec Oko
2016-02-10 18:12 Okoratu: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/803418 saradisk - 168 - 401 [Torpedo]]
2016-02-10 18:12 Okoratu: do i need like
2016-02-10 18:12 Okoratu: gorilla hands to accu this or what
2016-02-10 18:12 Nozhomi: Rumia- did a 96% if I remember
2016-02-10 18:13 Nozhomi: still have screen of the differents tries
2016-02-10 18:13 Okoratu: i don't like your hitnormal
2016-02-10 18:13 Okoratu: like for most thingsi t just seems unfitting
2016-02-10 18:14 Okoratu: and that you layer things like 00:37:575 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - into the same stream
2016-02-10 18:14 Okoratu: like
2016-02-10 18:15 Okoratu: 00:37:575 (1,2,3,4,5) - have drums 00:37:950 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - have melody
2016-02-10 18:15 Nozhomi: I don't have anything elso who could fit hitnormal :/
2016-02-10 18:15 Okoratu: 2 completely different things mashed together into one chain of circles
2016-02-10 18:16 Okoratu: 00:56:775 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - is same thing but slightly different
2016-02-10 18:17 Nozhomi: it that a real problem ? For me it's just following 1/4 and I have when streams are separated and I don't the idea to increase spacing
2016-02-10 18:18 Okoratu: you didn't even get what i was trying to say
2016-02-10 18:18 Okoratu: can you not do continuous 1/4 by combining drums and melody into huge chains of 1/4 :x
2016-02-10 18:19 Nozhomi: so you want me to do kick sliders or 2 differents streams ?
2016-02-10 18:21 Okoratu: example woudl be something like http://puu.sh/n2Vzy/816279717f.jpg
2016-02-10 18:22 Nozhomi: o
2016-02-10 18:22 Nozhomi: I see
2016-02-10 18:22 Okoratu: gives a small rest and separates 2 different kinds of stream
2016-02-10 18:24 Okoratu: some of your triplets have their stacks broken btw
2016-02-10 18:24 Nozhomi: like ?
2016-02-10 18:24 Okoratu: 00:00:525 (3,4,5) -
2016-02-10 18:24 Okoratu: 00:02:175 (8,9,1) -
2016-02-10 18:25 Okoratu: 00:08:400 (9,1) -
2016-02-10 18:26 Nozhomi: I like how triplet broken themselves
2016-02-10 18:26 Nozhomi: orz
2016-02-10 18:26 Okoratu: 00:15:675 (1,7,1) - this looks a bit dumb ingame, how about moving 00:18:675 (7,1,2,3,4,1) - by 4x 4y to have 00:18:375 (3,4,5,6,7) - as a straight line
2016-02-10 18:26 Okoratu: http://puu.sh/n2VRZ/18a1d5998b.jpg -> http://puu.sh/n2VSO/01945a5015.jpg
2016-02-10 18:27 Okoratu: i'd recommend doing the same kind of 1/4 short sliders instead of doublets in the kiai
2016-02-10 18:28 Nozhomi: you mean 00:41:325 (4,5) - ?
2016-02-10 18:28 Okoratu: like 00:31:725 (5,6) - is far easier to comprehend than playing doublets doublet doublet triplet triplet circle 5plet doublet doublet
2016-02-10 18:29 Okoratu: and if you simplify doublets you can do bigger spaced streams for 00:42:675 (1,2,3) - which would be cool
2016-02-10 18:29 Nozhomi: so why I put doublets in kiai :
2016-02-10 18:30 Okoratu: idk i think they play like ass
2016-02-10 18:30 Nozhomi: simply because I put 1/4 sliders before. It's the same rhythm but harder because it's the highest diff of the set
2016-02-10 18:30 Nozhomi: I can try but think it will just be zzz
2016-02-10 18:30 Okoratu: like if that was taiko i'd see doublets all over the place but
2016-02-10 18:30 Okoratu: i really think spamming doublets and triplets with only circles in quick succession will make ppl hate you lol
2016-02-10 18:31 Nozhomi: well they already hate me lol
2016-02-10 18:31 Nozhomi: will do some test for this tho
2016-02-10 18:32 Okoratu: http://puu.sh/n2Wdo/e4e263c48c.jpg
2016-02-10 18:32 Okoratu: ew
2016-02-10 18:33 Okoratu: you seemed to care a lot about how your triplets stack so
2016-02-10 18:33 Okoratu: 01:00:975 (8,5,6,7) -
2016-02-10 18:33 Okoratu: 01:06:675 (3,6,7,1) -
2016-02-10 18:36 Nozhomi: sry I'm still trying with 00:18:975 (1,2,3,4,1) - lol
2016-02-10 18:37 Nozhomi: because k it solve it for 00:18:375 (3,4,5,6,7) - but destroy 2nd one
2016-02-10 18:41 Okoratu: do you still want taikos XD
2016-02-10 18:42 Nozhomi: no
2016-02-10 18:42 Nozhomi: lel
2016-02-10 18:42 Okoratu: sad
2016-02-10 18:42 Nozhomi: you wanted to do taiko really ? cmon
2016-02-10 18:42 Nozhomi: it's really late lol
2016-02-10 18:43 Okoratu: i just found an intuitive way to map this song
2016-02-10 18:43 Okoratu: :d:d
2016-02-10 18:45 Nozhomi: :c
2016-02-10 18:45 Nozhomi: well fixed these stupid stacks
2016-02-10 18:52 Okoratu: wtf are the 1/8 in extra
2016-02-10 18:53 Nozhomi: 00:38:475 - from this point, it's Enon part
2016-02-10 18:53 Nozhomi: don't blame me
2016-02-10 18:53 Okoratu: kill enon's 1/8
2016-02-10 18:53 Okoratu: and 01:11:625 (1) -
2016-02-10 18:54 Okoratu: 00:08:775 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - same as what i talked about in torpedo
2016-02-10 18:54 Okoratu: 00:19:275 (1,2,3,5) - looks a bit dumb if your skin is half-transparent
2016-02-10 18:55 Okoratu: 00:30:375 (4,5) - i don't think a jump this big is warranted by the song
2016-02-10 18:57 Okoratu: why does she say "bathing is nice"
2016-02-10 18:57 Okoratu: the whole time
2016-02-10 18:59 Nozhomi: how I could know ??? XD
2016-02-10 18:59 Nozhomi: I didn't play the game lol
2016-02-10 18:59 Nozhomi: it's some of her quotes
2016-02-10 19:01 Okoratu: tell aia to not mix different length repeat sliders
2016-02-10 19:02 Okoratu: like she has http://puu.sh/n2Y53/24678ea5d9.jpg
2016-02-10 19:02 Okoratu: http://puu.sh/n2Y6A/fe1435eb96.jpg
2016-02-10 19:02 Okoratu: noone who just comes from a normal will be able to comprehend how long to hold each
2016-02-10 19:02 Nozhomi: k
2016-02-10 19:03 Okoratu: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/841828 Last Note. feat.mirin - Fake out [Seikatu's Hyper]]
2016-02-10 19:03 Okoratu: had the same issue
2016-02-10 19:03 Nozhomi: oh
2016-02-10 19:03 Okoratu: and we just made all repeat sliders the same length
2016-02-10 19:03 Okoratu: so whenever you see a repeat slider there it'll be the same thing and that actually made the diff wayy more intuitive
2016-02-10 19:04 Okoratu: and doublecheck her comboing with her
2016-02-10 19:05 Nozhomi: okay~
2016-02-10 19:05 Okoratu: can you do less spacing for 00:16:875 (1,2,3,4,1) - in insane
2016-02-10 19:05 Okoratu: that way it's more obvious that these are 1/4
2016-02-10 19:06 Okoratu: because other sliders look similar in terms of spacing but are 1/2 from each other
2016-02-10 19:06 Okoratu: 00:57:075 (1,2) - pls
2016-02-10 19:06 Okoratu: pls
2016-02-10 19:06 Okoratu: pl s
2016-02-10 19:06 Nozhomi: pls 2s
2016-02-10 19:07 Nozhomi: for 00:16:875 (1) -
2016-02-10 19:07 Nozhomi: my problem is
2016-02-10 19:07 Nozhomi: do I have to kill stacks for the sake of spacing or do you have an idea in mind ?
2016-02-10 19:10 Okoratu: somethin like http://puu.sh/n2YyJ/d880bf5c6f.jpg
2016-02-10 19:10 Nozhomi: uh
2016-02-10 19:10 Nozhomi: rip aesthetic
2016-02-10 19:11 Nozhomi: also where the fk start 00:16:875 (1) - ?
2016-02-10 19:11 Nozhomi: did you stack it with 00:16:725 (5) - ?
2016-02-10 19:12 Okoratu: i didn't move it from where it is now
2016-02-10 19:13 Nozhomi: o_o
2016-02-10 19:16 Nozhomi: so I guess
2016-02-10 19:16 Okoratu: use AR 6 in normal, really lol.
2016-02-10 19:16 Nozhomi: I have to rearange this 00:18:075 (1,2,3,4) -
2016-02-10 19:17 Okoratu: having to read like 6 objects at a time is not something a normal player can do easily
2016-02-10 19:19 Okoratu: easy
2016-02-10 19:19 Okoratu: 01:15:975 (2,3) -
2016-02-10 19:19 Okoratu: wtat hte fuck happened
2016-02-10 19:19 Okoratu: 00:10:875 (2,3,4,1) - seems super forced
2016-02-10 19:20 Nozhomi: k lol spacing rip
2016-02-10 19:20 Okoratu: can you avoid 1/2 repeat sliders, you have like 3 of them in the whole diff
2016-02-10 19:20 Okoratu: and short sliders aren't thaat intuitive for news since they don't really know how many times these repeat or how these sliders work exactly
2016-02-10 19:21 Nozhomi: 00:11:475 (4) - If I ctrl+g it's feel less forced ?
2016-02-10 19:21 Okoratu: yes
2016-02-10 19:21 Nozhomi: k
2016-02-10 19:22 Nozhomi: for repeat sliders...one repeat is not like okay in theory ?
2016-02-10 19:22 Okoratu: the problem i observed with these is that
2016-02-10 19:22 Okoratu: people don't know how long to hold them
2016-02-10 19:22 Okoratu: when they start playing
2016-02-10 19:23 Nozhomi: so
2016-02-10 19:23 Nozhomi: 00:52:275 (3) - these kind have to rip too ?
2016-02-10 19:23 Nozhomi: I mean
2016-02-10 19:23 Nozhomi: yeah
2016-02-10 19:24 Okoratu: uh
2016-02-10 19:24 Nozhomi: there is 2 of them
2016-02-10 19:24 Okoratu: if the slider is long enough they can follow through
2016-02-10 19:24 Nozhomi: yeah k
2016-02-10 19:24 Okoratu: rest of the diff is cool
2016-02-10 19:27 Nozhomi: k
Also I have to :
- Try 1/4 sliders instead of doublets on Torpedo
- Double check NC with Aia on Hard.
Bonsai wrote:
Ahoy, from m4m'ing
Enozho's ExtraGood luck!
- 00:38:773 (3,4) - All spacings like this one seem a bit too low bc of slider-leniency, the next note isn't emphasized at all, I'd raise them all : \ This section seems cramped anyways since there is so much overlapping although they are far away in the timeline, raising the spacing would help that too ✔ Increased distance between 3, 4
Edit: My 100th kudosu, wheeeeeeeeeeeeee!
Thank you for modding, guysNozhomi wrote:
✐ I don't understand why I have to fix the 1/8 objects on my diff.
there are distinct 1/8 sounds at that part. so, I mapped those sounds.
What's wrong?
I changed my part a bit
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you map sounds that torpedo doesn't and the sv makes these misreadable as 1/4, also 1/8 sliders are wayy easier to break on and noz's part has the same sounds as circles only
it's your decision in the end, those are the reasons why i'd personally like them gone
it's your decision in the end, those are the reasons why i'd personally like them gone
ok done
rip 1/8
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Source:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
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119,201,47175,1,8,0:0:0:0:
150,206,47250,1,8,3:0:0:0:
182,212,47325,1,8,0:0:0:0:
214,217,47400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,224,47475,2,0,L|312:235,1,45
425,173,47775,6,0,L|339:174,1,45,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
341,197,47925,2,0,L|255:198,1,45
248,224,48075,6,0,B|158:227|158:227|217:254,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,247,48300,1,0,0:0:0:0:
222,259,48375,2,0,L|350:259,1,107.999996704102,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,336,48675,2,0,L|362:336,1,53.9999983520508,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,336,48825,2,0,L|308:282,1,53.9999983520508,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,228,48975,2,0,L|362:228,1,53.9999983520508,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,228,49125,2,0,L|416:282,1,53.9999983520508,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,336,49275,6,0,L|224:268,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
343,206,49575,2,0,L|446:289,1,125.999996154785,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,304,49800,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,324,49875,2,0,P|484:268|496:232,1,62.9999980773926,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,232,50025,2,0,P|468:235|433:227,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,216,50175,2,0,P|402:255|393:294,1,80.9999975280763,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,337,50325,2,0,P|351:327|307:335,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,248,50475,6,0,P|255:178|270:109,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,88,50700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,88,50775,2,0,P|196:104|160:88,1,107.999996704102,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,80,51000,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,64,51075,2,0,L|130:156,1,53.9999983520508,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,148,51225,2,0,L|155:202,1,53.9999983520508,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,232,51375,2,0,L|201:209,1,53.9999983520508,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,256,51525,2,0,L|244:172,1,53.9999983520508,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,196,51675,6,0,L|246:121,1,53.9999983520508,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,96,51825,2,0,L|320:100,1,53.9999983520508,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,104,51975,5,0,3:0:0:0:
392,104,52125,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,264,52275,2,0,P|296:276|272:280,1,26.9999991760254,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,296,52350,2,0,P|255:285|236:269,1,26.9999991760254,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,284,52425,2,0,P|220:258|220:233,1,26.9999991760254,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,236,52500,2,0,P|218:213|237:198,1,26.9999991760254,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,188,52575,2,0,P|238:184|262:189,1,26.9999991760254,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,168,52725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
411,222,52875,6,0,B|387:254|387:254|320:264,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,248,53100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,232,53175,2,0,L|392:212,1,107.999996704102,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,152,53475,2,0,L|120:172,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,188,53775,2,0,L|140:208,1,107.999996704102,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,224,54075,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,248,54225,6,0,L|78:257,1,53.9999983520508,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,270,54375,2,0,L|176:280,1,53.9999983520508,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,290,54525,2,0,L|276:300,1,53.9999983520508,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,308,54675,2,0,L|319:327,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,224,54975,2,0,L|348:204,1,107.999996704102,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,104,55275,6,0,P|360:72|324:56,3,53.9999983520508,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,140,55575,2,0,P|461:101|450:63,3,53.9999983520508,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,216,55875,2,0,P|503:197|525:165,3,53.9999983520508,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,284,56175,2,0,P|468:299|507:295,3,53.9999983520508,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,340,56475,2,0,P|356:288|376:228,1,107.999996704102,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,122,56775,2,0,P|475:163|424:176,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,180,57075,2,0,P|264:157|316:168,1,107.999996704102,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,184,57300,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,200,57375,6,0,L|144:216,1,180,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,316,57675,6,0,L|158:324,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,277,57975,2,0,L|216:284,1,90,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
45,213,58275,2,0,L|159:221,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,174,58575,2,0,L|216:180,1,90,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,96,58875,5,8,0:0:0:0:
216,180,59025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
306,174,59175,1,0,3:0:0:0:
162,102,59325,2,0,L|72:108,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
306,174,59625,2,0,L|395:167,1,90,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
432,84,59925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
341,89,60075,6,0,L|252:96,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,181,60375,2,0,L|305:174,1,90,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,215,60675,2,0,L|476:126,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,166,60975,2,0,L|402:255,1,90,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
342,337,61275,6,0,P|383:354|427:353,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,290,61575,2,0,P|222:272|178:273,1,90,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,299,61875,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,299,62025,1,2,0:0:0:0:
157,361,62175,1,0,3:0:0:0:
157,361,62325,1,2,0:0:0:0:
178,273,62475,6,0,L|197:157,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,127,62775,2,0,L|102:243,1,90,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
157,361,63075,2,0,L|245:346,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,259,63375,2,0,L|177:273,1,90,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
17,201,63675,2,0,L|105:215,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,127,63975,2,0,L|32:112,1,90,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,36,64275,2,0,B|196:56|196:56|264:24,1,180,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
332,72,64725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,72,64875,6,0,L|236:120,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,156,65175,2,0,L|412:115,1,90,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,36,65475,2,0,P|500:88|496:140,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
510,259,65775,2,0,P|476:230|463:188,1,90,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,344,66075,6,0,L|391:362,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
325,298,66375,2,0,L|413:279,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,212,66675,2,0,B|272:228|272:228|180:152,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,96,67275,6,0,P|152:148|144:192,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,224,67725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,224,67875,2,0,P|112:276|120:320,1,90,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,352,68325,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,352,68475,2,0,L|192:344,1,45,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,356,68775,2,0,L|280:348,1,45,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,360,69075,2,0,P|304:320|336:268,1,90,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,248,69525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,248,69675,6,0,B|384:264|384:264|384:328,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,368,70125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,368,70275,2,0,L|448:296,1,90,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,268,70725,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,268,70875,2,0,P|460:228|464:180,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,140,71325,1,0,0:0:0:0:
500,100,71475,1,0,3:0:0:0:
420,68,71625,6,0,L|392:64,5,22.5
420,68,72075,6,0,L|326:81,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,88,72525,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,88,72675,2,0,L|381:101,1,90,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,108,73125,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,108,73275,2,0,P|428:136|420:164,1,45,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,196,73575,2,0,P|404:224|412:252,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,280,73875,1,0,3:0:0:0:
428,280,74025,2,0,L|480:288,2,45,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,336,74475,6,0,P|364:288|352:240,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,208,74925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,172,75075,2,0,P|307:128|315:84,1,90,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,44,75525,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,64,75675,2,0,P|264:72|240:68,1,45
208,52,75975,2,0,P|216:80|212:104,1,45,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,136,76275,2,0,P|224:128|248:132,1,45,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
283,118,76575,2,0,P|281:153|293:186,1,67.5,0|0,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Updated Ovoui and Collab diffs~
Is it time to get bubble? XD
Hello, here I am again!
Aia's Hard:
00:01:275 (1,2) - This...
00:06:075 (1) - Is inconsistent with this! The first rhythm that you've used seems to work much better.
00:20:475 (3,4) - And this...
00:22:875 (6,7,8) - Is inconsistent with this. I get that this part is pretty monotone, but you've already provided a nice variety of rhythms that follow the song well. Now the least you can do is be consistent throughout this part.
00:29:475 (4) - How about doing something like this instead? Changing the horizontal direction while you advance upwards seems like a better way to "spice things up" than keeping an almost linear path. Of course you should select and move the patterns afterwards accordingly.
00:30:075 (7) - NC here...
00:32:475 (6) - And here. Up until now you kept your combos rather small, please continue to do that so there are no HP regain spikes.
00:34:875 (1,2,3,4) - Justifying the change of combos from before. Look at this one.
// Read but don't apply yet //
00:40:275 (8,9) - All of this should be a 1/4 reverse slider as is...
00:42:675 (8,9) - This one. There's even 1/4 bass beats in that which you skip atm.
00:45:075 (8,9) - And for the sake of consistency, again, change this accordingly.
00:49:875 (3,4) - I notice that you stay consistent throughout the kiais on that part. Which made me think twice if whether or not my suggestions to change the patterns before were right. Since you stay consistent, it's objectively ok; therfore it turns into a subjective matter. Try out the rhythms I suggested and if you don't like them, don't use them. But if you do use them, change the ones in the whole of the second kiai afterwards.
// Now you shall apply //
00:59:475 (8) - I would really like to see this as 2 1/2 sliders, one starting at this one's head and the other one at it's tail. Since it's clearly two separate sounds. Heck, there's even a strong enough beat on the red tick which you currently skip as it's in the body of the slider!
01:00:375 (2) - Be consistent! This should be 2 notes. (Or the notes before should be a 1/2 slider, both seem fine).
01:08:775 (6,7) - Either unstack those...
01:11:175 (7,8) - Or stack these ones. Stay kinetically consistent as well since you are given the option to.
01:13:575 (6,7) - After seeing that, I suggest that you better unstack the ones on my previous suggestion.
01:16:125 (8) - I also would rather see that become 2 1/2 sliders since there are two separate sounds contained within this one. One of them completely stops in the sliderbody if this slider, so it's unclear what it actually follows.
Aia's Hard:
00:01:275 (1,2) - This...
00:06:075 (1) - Is inconsistent with this! The first rhythm that you've used seems to work much better.
00:20:475 (3,4) - And this...
00:22:875 (6,7,8) - Is inconsistent with this. I get that this part is pretty monotone, but you've already provided a nice variety of rhythms that follow the song well. Now the least you can do is be consistent throughout this part.
00:29:475 (4) - How about doing something like this instead? Changing the horizontal direction while you advance upwards seems like a better way to "spice things up" than keeping an almost linear path. Of course you should select and move the patterns afterwards accordingly.
00:30:075 (7) - NC here...
00:32:475 (6) - And here. Up until now you kept your combos rather small, please continue to do that so there are no HP regain spikes.
00:34:875 (1,2,3,4) - Justifying the change of combos from before. Look at this one.
// Read but don't apply yet //
00:40:275 (8,9) - All of this should be a 1/4 reverse slider as is...
00:42:675 (8,9) - This one. There's even 1/4 bass beats in that which you skip atm.
00:45:075 (8,9) - And for the sake of consistency, again, change this accordingly.
00:49:875 (3,4) - I notice that you stay consistent throughout the kiais on that part. Which made me think twice if whether or not my suggestions to change the patterns before were right. Since you stay consistent, it's objectively ok; therfore it turns into a subjective matter. Try out the rhythms I suggested and if you don't like them, don't use them. But if you do use them, change the ones in the whole of the second kiai afterwards.
// Now you shall apply //
00:59:475 (8) - I would really like to see this as 2 1/2 sliders, one starting at this one's head and the other one at it's tail. Since it's clearly two separate sounds. Heck, there's even a strong enough beat on the red tick which you currently skip as it's in the body of the slider!
01:00:375 (2) - Be consistent! This should be 2 notes. (Or the notes before should be a 1/2 slider, both seem fine).
01:08:775 (6,7) - Either unstack those...
01:11:175 (7,8) - Or stack these ones. Stay kinetically consistent as well since you are given the option to.
01:13:575 (6,7) - After seeing that, I suggest that you better unstack the ones on my previous suggestion.
01:16:125 (8) - I also would rather see that become 2 1/2 sliders since there are two separate sounds contained within this one. One of them completely stops in the sliderbody if this slider, so it's unclear what it actually follows.
Topic Starter
Still want some more mods on both Extra tbh from pro modders (don't even know how to catch one lol).Enon wrote:
Is it time to get bubble? XD
And I have too see things on Hard with Aia too.
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Hello I just try this map modding for M4M :3
Ovoui's Insane and Extra it's fine imo Good Luck
[General]
■ Ovoui's Insane the timing point is 00:19:123. You are a change timing move 00:19:125
[Easy]
■ 00:16:875 (1) - The spinner is too short. Ithink, this should be changed spinner and this point add long 1/1 slider here
example 00:26:475 (1) here.
■ 00:36:075 (1) - ^ Same
■ 00:45:675 (1) - The slider is overscreen. You a little move this slider
■ 00:55:275 (1) - You already know this spinner
■ 01:07:275 (1) - You check this slider spcing. you need change this spacing is wrong
[Normal]
■ 00:16:875 (1) - This is spinner end move to 00:18:675 ?
■ 00:36:075 (1) - ^ The same spinner issue
■ 00:40:275 (4,5,6) - I think, this slider rhythm a little strange. I felt a little confused this sliders rhythm,
remove 00:39:975 (5) repeat and (6) note, next 00:40:275 this point add 1/4 slider and repeat here.
■ 01:07:275 (1) - Easy same the spacing issue here.
[Aia's Hard]
■ 00:01:725 (3) - I don't think the add 1/8 slider rhythm here, it's not. also I can't heard 1/8 rhythms.
I think, this section add 1/4 slider and repeat
■ 00:07:075 (1) - Why you this slider end to 00:00:300 here? I don't think it. I recommend this slider rhythm to drum
■ 00:09:375 (1) - Remove NC. You don't consistency NCs
■ 00:09:675 (2) - Add NC
■ 00:11:475 (3,4,5) - I think, this rhythm to follow electric(?) sound here. I just recommend this part add 1/2 sliders
■ 00:16:125 (3,4,5) - ^ Same
■ 00:54:975 (4) - Ctrl+G?
■ 00:58:875 (6,7,8) - You are ignore a lot of rhythm and Here are other beats are emphasized.
I recommend change this rhythms. You can try this
■ 01:01:425 (6,7,8) - ^
■ 01:03:675 (6,7,8) - The same this part rhythm issue
Your fix this diff NCs issue
[Insane]
■ 00:14:025 (1) - Please consistency new combo. remove NC please
■ 00:18:975 (5) - ^
■ 00:28:575 (1) - ^
■ 00:32:475 (6) - Add New combo
■ 00:33:075 (1) - Remove New combo
■ 00:42:675 (1) - ^
■ 00:47:775 (1) - ^
■ 00:57:075 (1) - ^
■ 01:08:475 (6) - Add new combo here
■ 01:10:875 (6) - ^
■ 01:13:275 (6) - ^
■ 01:15:675 (6) - ^
■ Ovoui's Insane the timing point is 00:19:123. You are a change timing move 00:19:125
[Easy]
■ 00:16:875 (1) - The spinner is too short. Ithink, this should be changed spinner and this point add long 1/1 slider here
example 00:26:475 (1) here.
■ 00:36:075 (1) - ^ Same
■ 00:45:675 (1) - The slider is overscreen. You a little move this slider
■ 00:55:275 (1) - You already know this spinner
■ 01:07:275 (1) - You check this slider spcing. you need change this spacing is wrong
[Normal]
■ 00:16:875 (1) - This is spinner end move to 00:18:675 ?
■ 00:36:075 (1) - ^ The same spinner issue
■ 00:40:275 (4,5,6) - I think, this slider rhythm a little strange. I felt a little confused this sliders rhythm,
remove 00:39:975 (5) repeat and (6) note, next 00:40:275 this point add 1/4 slider and repeat here.
■ 01:07:275 (1) - Easy same the spacing issue here.
[Aia's Hard]
■ 00:01:725 (3) - I don't think the add 1/8 slider rhythm here, it's not. also I can't heard 1/8 rhythms.
I think, this section add 1/4 slider and repeat
■ 00:07:075 (1) - Why you this slider end to 00:00:300 here? I don't think it. I recommend this slider rhythm to drum
■ 00:09:375 (1) - Remove NC. You don't consistency NCs
■ 00:09:675 (2) - Add NC
■ 00:11:475 (3,4,5) - I think, this rhythm to follow electric(?) sound here. I just recommend this part add 1/2 sliders
■ 00:16:125 (3,4,5) - ^ Same
■ 00:54:975 (4) - Ctrl+G?
■ 00:58:875 (6,7,8) - You are ignore a lot of rhythm and Here are other beats are emphasized.
I recommend change this rhythms. You can try this
■ 01:01:425 (6,7,8) - ^
■ 01:03:675 (6,7,8) - The same this part rhythm issue
Your fix this diff NCs issue
SPOILER
00:19:875 (1) Remove NC.
00:20:475 (3) Add NC
00:22:875 (6) ^
00:23:475 (1) Remove NC
00:24:075 (3) Add NC
00:30:075 (7) ^
00:32:475 (6) ^
00:39:675 (6) ^
00:42:075 (6) ^
00:44:475 (6) ^
00:51:675 (6) ^
00:58:875 (6) ^
01:01:275 (5) ^
00:20:475 (3) Add NC
00:22:875 (6) ^
00:23:475 (1) Remove NC
00:24:075 (3) Add NC
00:30:075 (7) ^
00:32:475 (6) ^
00:39:675 (6) ^
00:42:075 (6) ^
00:44:475 (6) ^
00:51:675 (6) ^
00:58:875 (6) ^
01:01:275 (5) ^
[Insane]
■ 00:14:025 (1) - Please consistency new combo. remove NC please
■ 00:18:975 (5) - ^
■ 00:28:575 (1) - ^
■ 00:32:475 (6) - Add New combo
■ 00:33:075 (1) - Remove New combo
■ 00:42:675 (1) - ^
■ 00:47:775 (1) - ^
■ 00:57:075 (1) - ^
■ 01:08:475 (6) - Add new combo here
■ 01:10:875 (6) - ^
■ 01:13:275 (6) - ^
■ 01:15:675 (6) - ^
Ovoui's Insane and Extra it's fine imo Good Luck
Thanks for the mod o/
Noz tu peux fixer pour moi ? Merci jtm
Noz tu peux fixer pour moi ? Merci jtm
Topic Starter
Thx for mod~Gloria Guard wrote:
Hello I just try this map modding for M4M :3[General]
■ Ovoui's Insane the timing point is 00:19:123. You are a change timing move 00:19:125 - Fix
[Easy]
■ 00:16:875 (1) - The spinner is too short. Ithink, this should be changed spinner and this point add long 1/1 slider here
example 00:26:475 (1) here. - The minimum score is ok, and recovery time too. Should be k.
■ 00:36:075 (1) - ^ Same - ^
■ 00:45:675 (1) - The slider is overscreen. You a little move this slider - Fix
■ 00:55:275 (1) - You already know this spinner
■ 01:07:275 (1) - You check this slider spcing. you need change this spacing is wrong - It's due to SV change so that's k.
[Normal]
■ 00:16:875 (1) - This is spinner end move to 00:18:675 ? - No for recovery time.
■ 00:36:075 (1) - ^ The same spinner issue - ^
■ 00:40:275 (4,5,6) - I think, this slider rhythm a little strange. I felt a little confused this sliders rhythm,
remove 00:39:975 (5) repeat and (6) note, next 00:40:275 this point add 1/4 slider and repeat here. - Just changed circle for a 1/2 slider.
■ 01:07:275 (1) - Easy same the spacing issue here. - Same as Easy.
[Insane]
■ 00:14:025 (1) - Please consistency new combo. remove NC please
■ 00:18:975 (5) - ^
■ 00:28:575 (1) - ^
■ 00:32:475 (6) - Add New combo
■ 00:33:075 (1) - Remove New combo
■ 00:42:675 (1) - ^
■ 00:47:775 (1) - ^
■ 00:57:075 (1) - ^
■ 01:08:475 (6) - Add new combo here
■ 01:10:875 (6) - ^
■ 01:13:275 (6) - ^
■ 01:15:675 (6) - ^
- I fixed the unconsistent NC only~
Ovoui's Insane and Extra it's fine imo Good Luck
Hellooo M4M
[Enozho's Extra]
I feel like, instead of what you are currently doing, you should focus more on the melody in this diff, since the melody is incredibly loud but you still decide to focus on the drums.
Following the melody can be done by for example moving 00:02:775 (3) - to 00:02:700 - and deleting 00:02:625 (2) - . If you focus more on patterns like this and make it fit in the map it will turn out way better.
[Torpedo]
[Enozho's Extra]
- A visual thing is 00:23:475 (4,5,6,7,8) - can be curved better around 00:23:175 (3) -
- 00:24:825 (5) - 's sliderend is confusing because it ends on an important sound
- 00:30:225 (2,3,4,5) - This rythm would fit better imo: http://puu.sh/npAOX/2dab90e12e.jpg
- 00:43:125 (6) - to x240y219 works way better imo
- This diff is pretty messy in general because all the hitobjects are extremely close together. Maybe you want to clean it up, that's up to you though
- 00:17:325 (2) - Should end at 00:17:475 -
- 00:18:450 (3) - There is a very important sound on this sliders' sliderend, which makes it very confusing.
- 00:18:825 (4,5,6,7) - Imo this rythm would work better http://puu.sh/npB9c/9ee6b387bc.jpg
- You ignore a lot of sounds by placing sliders over them, like 00:37:275 (1) - . This does not work too well. I recommend you change this!
I feel like, instead of what you are currently doing, you should focus more on the melody in this diff, since the melody is incredibly loud but you still decide to focus on the drums.
Following the melody can be done by for example moving 00:02:775 (3) - to 00:02:700 - and deleting 00:02:625 (2) - . If you focus more on patterns like this and make it fit in the map it will turn out way better.
[Torpedo]
- 00:16:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - Stream shape/positioning/spacing is not visually appealing at all imo.
- 00:17:475 (9) - you can probably nc this if you want to
- Uh I've noticed few of NC inconsistencies here, so let me try to help you:NCs00:22:725 (8) - NC
00:32:325 (8) - NC
I thought there were gonna be more but w/e - 00:31:425 (2,3,4,5) - Uhh this does neither look good nor flow well
- 00:37:950 - skipping a sound here by putting a slider over it; confusing
- 01:06:075 (1,2,3) - You should probably NC these for clarity
- 01:11:625 - Skipping sound, and no, the slider shape does not make up for it because it's not even synced properly
- Try to work on your stream shapes a bit more in this diff. Most of them are already good to go but a few longer ones like 00:16:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - have some parts that can be curved better etc, like 00:17:700 (12,13,14,15,16) - 00:16:875 (1,2,3) - 3
00:26:475 (1,2,3,4,5) - can be curved better
00:36:825 (11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - Can really have more consistent spacing, aswell as better curving
00:38:100 (6) - why is this behind the slider? D:
00:57:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - can also be curved better
00:58:125 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
thanks for the mod !Zectro wrote:
Hellooo M4M
hello
[Ovoui's Insane]
- 00:17:325 (2) - Should end at 00:17:475 - no
- 00:18:450 (3) - There is a very important sound on this sliders' sliderend, which makes it very confusing. i will consider it, but it's ok how it is because i do not want to make a gap between 00:18:450 - 00:18:675 - to show the difference between those two moment : 00:18:450 - 00:18:675 ; 00:18:675 - 00:18:825
- 00:18:825 (4,5,6,7) - Imo this rythm would work better http://puu.sh/npB9c/9ee6b387bc.jpg no because i mapped on the vocal during the whole song
- You ignore a lot of sounds by placing sliders over them, like 00:37:275 (1) - . This does not work too well. I recommend you change this! i'm allowed to undermap some stuff in insane^^
Good luck!
double shioi
Topic Starter
Thx~Zectro wrote:
Hellooo M4M
[Enozho's Extra][Insane]
- A visual thing is 00:23:475 (4,5,6,7,8) - can be curved better around 00:23:175 (3) - - Done around (1) due to stacked notes.
- 00:24:825 (5) - 's sliderend is confusing because it ends on an important sound - Fixed
- 00:30:225 (2,3,4,5) - This rythm would fit better imo: http://puu.sh/npAOX/2dab90e12e.jpg - No because triplet fit on vocal.
- 00:43:125 (6) - to x240y219 works way better imo - Stacking them would break the dynamic of this part.
- This diff is pretty messy in general because all the hitobjects are extremely close together. Maybe you want to clean it up, that's up to you though - Don't really thing that's messy ^^'
I feel like, instead of what you are currently doing, you should focus more on the melody in this diff, since the melody is incredibly loud but you still decide to focus on the drums.
Following the melody can be done by for example moving 00:02:775 (3) - to 00:02:700 - and deleting 00:02:625 (2) - . If you focus more on patterns like this and make it fit in the map it will turn out way better. - I prefer keep stuff like this, simply because focusing rhythm drums here is on purpose to have a low Insane, to fil the gap with Hard and Ovoui's Insane. Doing rhythm like you mention would be way too hard in the end, and that's not what I'm looking for.
[Torpedo]Good luck!
- 00:16:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - Stream shape/positioning/spacing is not visually appealing at all imo. - Don't see any problem here.
- 00:17:475 (9) - you can probably nc this if you want to - K
- Uh I've noticed few of NC inconsistencies here, so let me try to help you: - They are on purpose because of close NC soon after.
NCs00:22:725 (8) - NC
00:32:325 (8) - NC
I thought there were gonna be more but w/e- 00:31:425 (2,3,4,5) - Uhh this does neither look good nor flow well - Wtf happend here :/ fixed.
- 00:37:950 - skipping a sound here by putting a slider over it; confusing - Was on purpose to emphasis the sound in the middle.
- 01:06:075 (1,2,3) - You should probably NC these for clarity - Ok fair.
- 01:11:625 - Skipping sound, and no, the slider shape does not make up for it because it's not even synced properly - Follow vocal here that's good.
- Try to work on your stream shapes a bit more in this diff. Most of them are already good to go but a few longer ones like 00:16:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - have some parts that can be curved better etc, like 00:17:700 (12,13,14,15,16) - 00:16:875 (1,2,3) - 3
00:26:475 (1,2,3,4,5) - can be curved better
00:36:825 (11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - Can really have more consistent spacing, aswell as better curving
00:38:100 (6) - why is this behind the slider? D:
00:57:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - can also be curved better
00:58:125 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^ - Fixed some of them.
thank you for modding!Zectro wrote:
Hellooo M4M
[Enozho's Extra]Good luck!
- 00:43:125 (6) - to x240y219 works way better imo ✘ It would make this map more messy than now
- This diff is pretty messy in general because all the hitobjects are extremely close together. Maybe you want to clean it up, that's up to you though ✘ I could be known my mapping skill is not good enough to satisfy for you(or more). However, Did you consider that if that was more far than now on this map? That'd clean than now, Really? I don't think like that?
;;;;;;;;;;;Moeka wrote:
double shioi