Term Akatski wrote:

from my queue
First of all i think its better if u add kiai from 00:58:988 to 01:09:655 (imo)

Normal
00:02:099 (1,2) - fix blanket
00:07:877 (2) - make it look like the image below(because i suck at explaining)

SPOILER

00:11:433 (1) - make it look like the image below

SPOILER

00:45:655 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:46:988 (3,4) - fix blanket
00:47:433 (4,5) - fix blanket
01:50:988 (1) - make it look like the image below

SPOILER

Hard
00:15:433 (3,4) - blanket this
00:46:544 (1,2) - fix blanket
01:50:766 add a hit circle here


good luck on getting this map ranked

trongamer wrote:

HARD
00:54:099 (5,6) - Maybe put a circle between those two.
NORMAL
00:28:766 (1,2) -You can fuse them into one slider, because under 00:28:766 (1) - the aproach circles slightly overlaps with the slider circle (http://i.imgur.com/9VaN7JI.png?1) when the slider ends , I think that looks & plays rly weird for a normal map. You could just do it like that: http://i.imgur.com/RmX479G.png?2 , it stills overlaps but you have more time to react. But I guess that is something completly subjective ~

01:13:210 (1) - Two pixle to the top so it lines up perfectly with 01:12:099 (2) -

Hope I can help a bit because i am very new to modding and mapping .-.

GL with the map, felt realy nice to Play~

1. 00:26:988 (1) - This can be somewhat confusing because of the DS being literally half. I'd suggest moving it further away so it also doesn't look randomly placed. It doesn't match well with the previous note.
2. 00:30:099 (3,4,5) - This is actually confusing for a couple reasons. The DS on these was changed from 1.1 to 1.0, and most importantly the fact that it has been placed under the previous slider. I highly suggest keeping the 1.1 DS and placing these notes below so they don't end up under or over the repeat 1/2 sliders. I'd also like to mention this is a lot of 1/2s in a row. Maybe simplify it a bit more?
3. 00:48:321 (5,1) - Could be improved on slightly. Try making the (1) feel like it's part of the (5) with a blanket or something. It could also flow naturally instead of having it repeat right to left.
4. 00:51:433 (3,1) - Very confusing anti jump. Please use proper DS if notes aren't more than about a measure apart!
5. 00:56:988 (6,1) - Give this a bit more distance from the previous notes. It's way too crowded.
6. 00:58:988 (1,2) - you can combine these into one slider as the tail end of (1) is pretty much pointless to map in this rhythm. It will help make the next note easier to read as well.
7. 01:02:544 (1) - ^ there's more of a sound at 01:02:766 - anyways, but it's best just to do the above again.
8. 01:21:655 (2,3,4) - would make more sense rhythmwise if you had a 1/1 slider at 01:22:321 - and then a circle at 01:22:988 http://puu.sh/m5puK.jpg
9. Also to add to above, a bit of a jump to the next note that could be reduced quite a bit.

1. 00:05:655 (4,1) - Very bad anti-jump here. The sound that carries on at 00:05:877 - makes this a bit unfair to play since the player will naturally click this because of all the previous 1/2 notes. Stack it on 00:03:877 (5) - 's head or something.
2. 00:09:210 (4) - Move this to around x288 y340 so 4->1 isn't that confusing.
3. 00:13:877 - http://puu.sh/m6suC.jpg the distance between these notes are really similar and my first test through I assumed 2->3->1 were all 1/1s instead of 1/2s. Try moving 00:13:210 (1) - 's body upwards so it somewhat mirrors 00:14:544 (1) - http://puu.sh/m6sDM.jpg
4. 00:21:210 (3,1) - Another very confusing anti. The thumps from the drum kick here and how it is spaced like a 1/2 note will cause lots of players to click early. Also 00:22:321 (2) - is confusing again since the previous was a 1/1. This inconsistency makes the map difficult to play.
5. 00:24:988 (6) - Since the map is already kind of light, you could easily skip this circle if you wanted to follow the piano properly.
6. 00:30:544 (1) - and 00:34:099 (1) - feel the exact same for me. They should use the same speed.
7. 00:44:766 - onwards. You probably don't have to overlap these 1/2 notes imo. In fact, I'd suggest you use 1.0 to 1.2 spacing for this whole part instead of 0.7. This DS switch is a bit confusing for a few notes....
8. 00:45:655 (2) - Too close to the previous note. Give it some more spacing.
9. 00:52:988 (2) - This isn't blanketed the best. I'd personally run it off the end of the (1) instead of having it tucked in like that.
10. 00:57:655 (1) - and onwards. Also some jump antis in this whole upcoming section that should probably be revised, I was able to read them a little until 01:10:988 (5,1) - hit, which then the antijumps caused issues again.
11. 01:13:210 (1,2) - Too close to each other. Especially when looking at 01:14:544 (4,1) -
12. 01:21:433 (3,4) - random spacing again, especially when coming off of 01:20:321 (1,2) - Keep them consistent please.
    
    Well hopefully some of this will help you get started. I'm a bit rusty from my break but hopefully this helps a little. The main concern is the spacing you have. I enjoyed the hitsounds, and I do enjoy the rhythms, if they were a bit easier to read. Good luck!
    
    
    

Lanturn wrote:

This isn't a very christmaslike song...

Your combo colors 1 and 2 are hard to tell apart. I'd just using more black or white to help differentiate them. The same goes for 5 and 6 (brighter / darker greens maybe). 3 and 4 should be fine though.

You can add Cytus to the tags as it appeared on it as well.

Your volume could use a little boost in various places. Like for example 00:26:988 (1) - you can't even hear the drum on the head. Lots of these drum noises are hard to hear. You also have a lot of unneeded timing points on normal as many of them are just duplicates from the SV changes. You should go through them and remove. Stuff like 00:45:210 - is pointless.

[Normal]
For a complex beat such as this on Normal, your easiest difficulty, The constant changing of DS can make it confusing to play. Especially for new players.

1. 00:26:988 (1) - This can be somewhat confusing because of the DS being literally half. I'd suggest moving it further away so it also doesn't look randomly placed. It doesn't match well with the previous note.
2. 00:30:099 (3,4,5) - This is actually confusing for a couple reasons. The DS on these was changed from 1.1 to 1.0, and most importantly the fact that it has been placed under the previous slider. I highly suggest keeping the 1.1 DS and placing these notes below so they don't end up under or over the repeat 1/2 sliders. I'd also like to mention this is a lot of 1/2s in a row. Maybe simplify it a bit more?
3. 00:48:321 (5,1) - Could be improved on slightly. Try making the (1) feel like it's part of the (5) with a blanket or something. It could also flow naturally instead of having it repeat right to left.
4. 00:51:433 (3,1) - Very confusing anti jump. Please use proper DS if notes aren't more than about a measure apart!
5. 00:56:988 (6,1) - Give this a bit more distance from the previous notes. It's way too crowded.
6. 00:58:988 (1,2) - you can combine these into one slider as the tail end of (1) is pretty much pointless to map in this rhythm. It will help make the next note easier to read as well.
7. 01:02:544 (1) - ^ there's more of a sound at 01:02:766 - anyways, but it's best just to do the above again.
8. 01:21:655 (2,3,4) - would make more sense rhythmwise if you had a 1/1 slider at 01:22:321 - and then a circle at 01:22:988 http://puu.sh/m5puK.jpg
9. Also to add to above, a bit of a jump to the next note that could be reduced quite a bit.

I believe this could still use quite a bit of work. I love the hitsounds though. I just wish I could hear some of them better.

[Hard]
The spacing for many of the notes, be it anti jumps or jumps can be extremely confusing, and not suiting in various points of the song. I think they could use a lot more work honestly.

1. 00:05:655 (4,1) - Very bad anti-jump here. The sound that carries on at 00:05:877 - makes this a bit unfair to play since the player will naturally click this because of all the previous 1/2 notes. Stack it on 00:03:877 (5) - 's head or something.
2. 00:09:210 (4) - Move this to around x288 y340 so 4->1 isn't that confusing.
3. 00:13:877 - http://puu.sh/m6suC.jpg the distance between these notes are really similar and my first test through I assumed 2->3->1 were all 1/1s instead of 1/2s. Try moving 00:13:210 (1) - 's body upwards so it somewhat mirrors 00:14:544 (1) - http://puu.sh/m6sDM.jpg
4. 00:21:210 (3,1) - Another very confusing anti. The thumps from the drum kick here and how it is spaced like a 1/2 note will cause lots of players to click early. Also 00:22:321 (2) - is confusing again since the previous was a 1/1. This inconsistency makes the map difficult to play.
5. 00:24:988 (6) - Since the map is already kind of light, you could easily skip this circle if you wanted to follow the piano properly.
6. 00:30:544 (1) - and 00:34:099 (1) - feel the exact same for me. They should use the same speed.
7. 00:44:766 - onwards. You probably don't have to overlap these 1/2 notes imo. In fact, I'd suggest you use 1.0 to 1.2 spacing for this whole part instead of 0.7. This DS switch is a bit confusing for a few notes....
8. 00:45:655 (2) - Too close to the previous note. Give it some more spacing.
9. 00:52:988 (2) - This isn't blanketed the best. I'd personally run it off the end of the (1) instead of having it tucked in like that.
10. 00:57:655 (1) - and onwards. Also some jump antis in this whole upcoming section that should probably be revised, I was able to read them a little until 01:10:988 (5,1) - hit, which then the antijumps caused issues again.
11. 01:13:210 (1,2) - Too close to each other. Especially when looking at 01:14:544 (4,1) -
12. 01:21:433 (3,4) - random spacing again, especially when coming off of 01:20:321 (1,2) - Keep them consistent please.
    
    Well hopefully some of this will help you get started. I'm a bit rusty from my break but hopefully this helps a little. The main concern is the spacing you have. I enjoyed the hitsounds, and I do enjoy the rhythms, if they were a bit easier to read. Good luck!
    
    

Namki wrote:

[Genral]
Анчек вот эту штуку в Design, ведь в твоем сб нет ничего быстро мерцающего.ок
Ты не используешь в сб файл bg-yelow.jpg, либо используешь, но в сб я его не заметил. Удали его. Использую, еще как 00:44:766
С комбо цветами вообще не понял, зачем тебе три почти одинаковых цвета, ну сделай ты темно-серый, светло-серый и зеленый.
пофиксил
[Normal]
00:02:544 (2) - то что он выходит не очень хорошо, но если при игре не выходит за игровое поле, то пойдет. Там еще несколько таких моментов.не заметил что бы при игре вылазил, соответственно не исправил
00:46:544 (1) - здесь лучше сделай прямой реверс слайдер.сделал
00:57:210 (1) - согни немного больше, чтобы согласовать с предыдущими.согнул)
01:12:099 (2) - не понял, почему хс стоит там, ниже его я тож хз что он там делает
01:26:099 (2,3) - почему тут 0.88х спейсинг? я ничего не менял там
Послекиайная часть вообще ужасна, я даже не буду это описывать. А так, хорошо.хз как поправить(

[Hard]
00:24:099 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - сделай спейсинг ровномерным.сделано
00:41:877 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - нихуя себе, сказал я, когда первый раз это увидел, мы что в 2010 году? черт, я хз что сделать(
Не знаю, спейсинг убит, флоу убито, паттерны плохие. Поработай над хардом усердно.Поработаю!

1. 00:05:655 (1,2) - Looks weird imo, maybe it's just me
2. 00:13:210 (2) - Tweak the head down a little bit so it flows smoother.
3. 00:15:433 (2,1) - I would do it like this. You might have to remap a bit there. > http://puu.sh/m84nt/0a19fad6f2.jpg
4. 00:24:544 (3,1) - Looks weird, try not to put a circle under the slider body.
5. 00:27:877 (3) - Why did you put a clap here? A single clap in entire section feels inconsistent.
6. 00:30:099 (3,1) - It's 0.76 DS, you could move 00:30:544 (1) up a bit so it won't overlap too much and for a perfect spacing.
7. 00:30:544 (1,1) - Add some whistles here?
8. 00:49:210 (2,1) - Fix blanket?
9. 00:51:877 (1) - I think this would sounds better if you didn't reduce the volume. Or change finish into a whistle instead.

1. 00:00:322 (1,2) - Blanket fix.
2. 00:01:655 (3,1) - Maybe it's just me, but I think the flow here's kinda weird. I would move 00:01:655 (3) to x:208 y:240
   00:04:321 (2,3) - Overlap, just a little bit. Same applies to 01:41:655 (1,2) .
3. 00:05:210 (4,5,1) - Are you creating your own rhythm with hitsounds here? Looks confusing imo, at least remove whistle from 00:05:433 (5) please.
4. 00:12:766 (1,2) - Try blanket this properly.
5. 00:21:210 (3,1,2,3) - Stacks kinda hard to read because 00:21:210 (3,1) has 1/1 beat spacing while the rest of them have only 1/2.
6. 00:28:766 (1,2) - Weird overlap. Same applies to 00:43:655 (3,1) .
7. 00:53:655 (1,2,3,4) - They're overlapping like sandwiches and that's kinda messy.
8. 01:50:766 - I would map this beat. Why are you leaving this empty when you're trying to emphashize 01:49:433 (2,3,4,5,6,1) ? Also, why the flow here 01:50:321 (6,1) is so linear and the rest is flowing curve?
9. 01:53:877 - I would map sth here as well, the reasons is same as above.

Electoz wrote:

As requested via PM. Well, I'm kinda late. Sorry for that.

[Normal]

1. 00:05:655 (1,2) - Looks weird imo, maybe it's just me
2. 00:13:210 (2) - Tweak the head down a little bit so it flows smoother.
3. 00:15:433 (2,1) - I would do it like this. You might have to remap a bit there. > http://puu.sh/m84nt/0a19fad6f2.jpg
4. 00:24:544 (3,1) - Looks weird, try not to put a circle under the slider body.
5. 00:27:877 (3) - Why did you put a clap here? A single clap in entire section feels inconsistent.
6. 00:30:099 (3,1) - It's 0.76 DS, you could move 00:30:544 (1) up a bit so it won't overlap too much and for a perfect spacing.
7. 00:30:544 (1,1) - Add some whistles here?
8. 00:49:210 (2,1) - Fix blanket?
9. 00:51:877 (1) - I think this would sounds better if you didn't reduce the volume. Or change finish into a whistle instead.

[Hard]

1. 00:00:322 (1,2) - Blanket fix.
2. 00:01:655 (3,1) - Maybe it's just me, but I think the flow here's kinda weird. I would move 00:01:655 (3) to x:208 y:240
   00:04:321 (2,3) - Overlap, just a little bit. Same applies to 01:41:655 (1,2) .
3. 00:05:210 (4,5,1) - Are you creating your own rhythm with hitsounds here? Looks confusing imo, at least remove whistle from 00:05:433 (5) please.
4. 00:12:766 (1,2) - Try blanket this properly.
5. 00:21:210 (3,1,2,3) - Stacks kinda hard to read because 00:21:210 (3,1) has 1/1 beat spacing while the rest of them have only 1/2.
6. 00:28:766 (1,2) - Weird overlap. Same applies to 00:43:655 (3,1) .
7. 00:53:655 (1,2,3,4) - They're overlapping like sandwiches and that's kinda messy.
8. 01:50:766 - I would map this beat. Why are you leaving this empty when you're trying to emphashize 01:49:433 (2,3,4,5,6,1) ? Also, why the flow here 01:50:321 (6,1) is so linear and the rest is flowing curve?
9. 01:53:877 - I would map sth here as well, the reasons is same as above.

I think this part should be more emphasized than earlier part in the song 00:30:544 . Try increase volume a bit more on this part but make it less than 00:44:766 .
Yeah, hope my mod helps. Good luck.

1. Rhythm changes with some basic explanations
2. Suggestions on the set's appearance were given

14:10 *Bakari is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/762567 Rabpit - Rainy Memory]
14:11 shmiklak: привет)
14:11 Bakari: Привет, пробежимся в IRC? 
14:11 shmiklak: да давай)
14:11 shmiklak: мне все равно скучно)
14:12 Bakari: Normal 
14:12 Bakari: 00:02:544 (2) - начнем с того, что тут три приерно одинаковых бита, ну может тот что в центре немного сильнее 
14:12 Bakari: И слайдер, который глушит этот бит играется странно
14:13 shmiklak: предлагаешь разбить на слайдер и ноту?
14:13 Bakari: Если уж значения десятичные, то пусть все будет убалансированно. Для самой легкой дифы сета ОД/ХП 3,5 должно быть достаточным 
14:13 Bakari: Да, слайдер + нота 
14:13 Bakari: Нота + слайдер 
14:13 Bakari: Или слайдер + репит 
14:14 Bakari: 00:05:655 (1,2) - такие вещи или заменяют переходами, или делают красивые бланкеты 
14:15 Bakari: 00:21:655 (1) - не каждый бит обязан быть замапан. Я бы убрал серл, пусть инструмент будет выделен 
14:16 Bakari: 00:24:099 (2) - начинается на слабом бите, а кончается на сильном. Из-за этого основной бит на белом тике некликабелен и играется это плохо. [http://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/FBIwPIoV.png может так]? 
14:18 Bakari: 00:42:321 (2,4) - дифа как самая легкая делалась, не стоит так много 1/2 пихать 
14:18 shmiklak: сделал все
14:19 Bakari:  Да и из-за ужатого спейсинга выглядит такое обилие 1/2 очень неаккуратно 
14:19 Bakari: 00:53:210 (3) - редуцируй-упрощай 
14:20 Bakari: 00:56:099 (2) - и тут
14:21 Bakari: Можно попробовать даже увеличить спейсинг до x1.1, чтоб свободнее игралось 
14:21 Bakari: 01:23:877 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - может спиннер ввернем вместо них? Нарастание как раз таки в музыке 
14:22 Bakari: 01:27:544 - а вот отсюда я бы поменял цвет листа. На брейки его можно обратно серым сделать 
14:23 Bakari: У тебя половину сета весит applause.wav 
14:24 shmiklak: а я и не заметил
14:24 Bakari: Сейчас еще автомодом пройдусь и мы закончим с нормалом
14:24 shmiklak: а можно что нибудь с аплаусом сделать что бы не удалять?
14:24 shmiklak: просто он мне очень нравится
14:25 Bakari: Порезать его? 
14:25 shmiklak: можно
14:25 Bakari: 20 секунд вряд ли кто-то слушать будет
14:25 shmiklak: это точно)
14:25 Bakari: Нормал чуть поменьше нагружай 1/2 и чуть посвободнее сделай, играться будет классно  
14:26 Bakari: Ритм сам по себе неплохой, разве что потом местами исправить 
14:26 Bakari: Настройки мы проверили
14:26 Bakari: Вроде все с ним 
14:27 shmiklak: я сейчас
14:28 shmiklak: проверю как будет выглядеть новый аплаус
14:28 shmiklak: я его обрезал
14:28 Bakari: Метадата в порядке, судя по скринам из игры 
14:29 shmiklak: оо теперь он просто идеальный
14:29 shmiklak: )
14:29 shmiklak: 4 секунды лучший вариант)
14:31 *Bakari is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/861978 Rabpit - Rainy Memory [Hard]]
14:31 Bakari: 00:05:877 - а вот тут 1/2 лучше ен глушить 
14:32 shmiklak: так ведь там ничего и нет
14:32 Bakari: Там эхо+ударные
14:33 Bakari: 00:18:544 (2) - два четких бита лучше сдделать двумя кругами 
14:33 Bakari: или двумя 1/2 слайдерами 
14:34 Bakari: 00:33:210 (2,1) - понимаю, что спейсинг но ведь на харде и джампы стаить можно. Я бы убрал этот оверлап 
14:35 Bakari: 00:41:877 (2,3) - выдели их и нажми Ctrl+G
14:35 Bakari: А потом скажи, нравится ли тебе такой ритм 
14:36 shmiklak: да
14:36 Bakari: 00:43:210 (2,3) - я бы попробовал что-то типа [http://bakarisu.s-ul.eu/01OXuIxJ.png такого] 
14:37 Bakari:  00:48:321 (1,1,2) - очень уж низкий спейсинг. Лучше скорость менять, если хочешь замедить карту
14:37 Bakari: Хитсаунды отличаются в нормали и харде, это как-то странно
14:38 Bakari: Очень напрягает, что на харде много 01:22:099 (1,2,3,4,5) - вот такого чуда 
14:38 Bakari: Это же 1/2, пусть они свободно будут расположены
14:39 Bakari: 01:49:433 (2,3,4) - ctrl+G? По ритму лучше звучать будет 
14:39 Bakari: [https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Music_Theory Почему лучше выделять белые тики] 
14:40 Bakari: Неплохо, но очень зажато. И все эти пересечения начинают выглядеть неаккуратно, возникают какие-то изменения в спейсинге без причины 
14:42 shmiklak: Ранк не скоро ждет меня...
14:42 shmiklak: ну ладно
14:42 shmiklak: спасибо тебе огромное
14:42 shmiklak: что не забыл про меня)
14:43 Bakari: Рад помочь :)

Ppuskalin wrote:

Soo Beautiful!

freebird42 wrote:

Easy

00:04:321 (2) - я бы посоветовал вместо него скопировать этот слайдер 00:00:322 (1) - а эту ноту 00:05:655 (3) - убрать, по 2 причинам: во-первых у тебя слайдертики идеально покрывают звуки пианино, то есть необязательно заканчивать слайдер именно здесь 00:05:210 - во-вторых пять нот здесь 00:05:655 (3,4,5,6,1) - выглядят не очень, хватит и четырех
00:14:544 (1,2,3,4) - по-моему спейсинг между 1 и 2 и между 2,3,4 разный, сделай одинаковым
01:08:321 (2) - я бы продлил этот слайдер до сюда 01:09:210 -
01:12:099 (2,3) - вместо этих нот может лучше сделать слайдер?
01:19:877 (3,1) - имхо тут лучше сделать либо стак, либо спейсинг уменьшить, аккуратнее смотреться будет
01:42:988 - сюда бы что-то такое http://puu.sh/mOU22/d39e483951.jpg не думаю

Normal

01:42:988 - сюда можно поставить такой слайдер http://puu.sh/mOUte/fe5d34872e.jpg нельзя
01:43:877 - тут начинается звук, так что нота бы не помешала звук слабый
01:50:766 - ноту сюда нет
01:50:988 (3) - 1/2
01:51:433 - ноту нет
01:51:655 - 1/2 реверс слайдер нет
01:52:321 - я бы поменял слайдер на 2 ноты вот ты и меняй, а я не буду

как-то так

извиняюсь за короткий мод, надеюсь ты найдешь в нем что-то полезное

кудосу не надо

Kotori-Chan wrote:

m4m :3

Easy

first of all, fix ds D:
because ds in easy and normal diffs need to be always the same

i think you can make this slider more beatiful 00:46:544 (2) - looks kinda boring :/
maybe like that http://puu.sh/mTfad/b9bd0eb767.jpg
,then it also better blankets with 00:48:321 (3) -

00:58:988 (1) - (just personal) maybe add finish at the end of that slider ? no

01:02:544 (1) - ^^^ (same)

Normal

fix ds too D:

i hear big note on 00:21:655 - add circle no

imo that is kinda ugly 00:36:766 (2) - make the slider curvy so it better blankets with 00:37:655 (1) -


well actually thats it,cant really find more,good luck with it :3

SuperMICrophone wrote:

queue

---

[Easy]

perfect ♥

[Normal]

00:00:322 (1,2) - These can blanket better; make their curves steeper
00:48:321 (1) - Move the middle point up a tiny bit to make a better blanket
00:58:099 (2) - Again move the middle point a tiny bit left to make a better blanket
01:11:433 (1,2) - Move (2) so that it's in a perfect line with (1)
01:21:210 (3) - Move this up so it's in a perfect line with (1) and (2)
01:22:988 (2) - Turn off grid snap and move this around a bit so it is perfectly blanketed

---

Most of my mod was Nazi, this map is ready for ranking. Just go bug some BNs.

-SMIC

1. 00:21:210 (3) - try make like (00:17:655 (4,1) - ) this? cuz, same rhythm.
2. 00:37:655 (1) - increase slider end 00:38:099 - ?
3. 00:39:210 (3) - 00:38:988 - here have more strong rhythm. try move it?
4. 00:55:433 (1) - keep ds 0.8?
5. 01:14:099 (2,3,4) - change more easier, uhh, maybe.. make slider 1 repeat. looks like 01:00:766 (1) - ?
6. 01:20:321 - head normal-finish more good fit imo.
7. 01:48:766 - same 01:20:321 -
8. 01:54:099 - ^

1. 00:14:099 (5,1) - avoid kind of this pattern. i think that difficult in easy diff. try slider increase 00:13:655 - ?
2. 00:25:210 (1) - keep ds 1.0
3. 00:39:433 (2) - ^
4. 01:20:321 - head normal-finish more good fit imo
5. 01:39:877 - hmm move break time here like normal diff?
6. 01:48:766 - same 01:20:321 -
7. 01:54:099 - ^
8. 01:56:169 (1) - spinner unsnapped check AImod(Ctrl+Shift+A)

Hello- wrote:

hi o/
sorry my modding low qual. but, this map is seems good just my suggestion. if you don't want fix, just skip it please :3

[General]
fine to me.

[Normal]

1. 00:21:210 (3) - try make like (00:17:655 (4,1) - ) this? cuz, same rhythm. no
2. 00:37:655 (1) - increase slider end 00:38:099 - ?
3. 00:39:210 (3) - 00:38:988 - here have more strong rhythm. try move it? no
4. 00:55:433 (1) - keep ds 0.8?
5. 01:14:099 (2,3,4) - change more easier, uhh, maybe.. make slider 1 repeat. looks like 01:00:766 (1) - ? kiai time can be harder then other part of mapset
6. 01:20:321 - head normal-finish more good fit imo. no
7. 01:48:766 - same 01:20:321 - same
8. 01:54:099 - ^

[Easy]

1. 00:14:099 (5,1) - avoid kind of this pattern. i think that difficult in easy diff. try slider increase 00:13:655 - ? no
2. 00:25:210 (1) - keep ds 1.0
3. 00:39:433 (2) - ^
4. 01:20:321 - head normal-finish more good fit imo
5. 01:39:877 - hmm move break time here like normal diff?
6. 01:48:766 - same 01:20:321 -
7. 01:54:099 - ^
8. 01:56:169 (1) - spinner unsnapped check AImod(Ctrl+Shift+A)

looks good song :3
good luck~

wajinshu wrote:

Nice Priority

1. Some hitsound file soft-hitfinish.wav and soft-hitfinish4.wav have possible delay > 5ms

1. 00:00:322 (1) - Try to ctrl+g that for better flow
2. 00:11:433 (2) - That 2/1 slider not really well on cover strong piano sound on here 00:11:877 - , imo yo can use a 1/1 slider + circle instead or any similiar rhythm
3. 00:28:544 (4,1,2,3,1) - Imo the 1/2 rhythm rather too long to a Normal diff, furthermore the reverse on 00:28:766 (1,2) - make the movement a bit confusing and make the whole thing complicated
4. 00:36:766 (2,1) - Spacing too far
5. 00:38:321 (2) - Spacig too closer, take a look closer on your spacing it's sometimes larger or shorter then it should be
6. 00:52:988 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Imo the 1/2 rhythm rather too long to a Normal diff, try to use more simple rhythm there like 1/1 + 1/2 slider or something that fit to the music. I know the 1/2 spam really fit with the whole piano sound there, but remember you try to make a Normal diff here, so try to use more simple rhythm
7. 01:42:988 (3,1) - Spacing again
   
   I know you are try not to make a hard diff, but some of the 1/2 spam rhythm like I mention above kinda overmapped for a Normal. I think they more fit if used on a Hard diff instead a Normal diff

1. 00:14:099 (5) - Imo that 1/2 slider not good for beginner, try to use single circle here 00:14:099 -
2. 00:19:877 (1,2,3) - Maybe you can try a rhythm like this http://puu.sh/n3Twq/4870f3b03a.jpg ? so beginner easier to distinguish the beat on red tick here 00:20:544 -
3. 00:21:210 (3) - Try to avoid stacking on lowest diff, there's several stacking like that 00:25:877 (2) - 01:19:877 (3) -
4. 01:00:766 (1) - Imo that 1/2 slider not good for beginner, maybe you should try to use 1/1 slider there
   
   Check your spacing

Mako Sakata wrote:

As requested
Small sugestion,

General

1. Some hitsound file soft-hitfinish.wav and soft-hitfinish4.wav have possible delay > 5ms

Normal

1. 00:00:322 (1) - Try to ctrl+g that for better flow
2. 00:11:433 (2) - That 2/1 slider not really well on cover strong piano sound on here 00:11:877 - , imo yo can use a 1/1 slider + circle instead or any similiar rhythm
3. 00:28:544 (4,1,2,3,1) - Imo the 1/2 rhythm rather too long to a Normal diff, furthermore the reverse on 00:28:766 (1,2) - make the movement a bit confusing and make the whole thing complicated
4. 00:36:766 (2,1) - Spacing too far
5. 00:38:321 (2) - Spacig too closer, take a look closer on your spacing it's sometimes larger or shorter then it should be
6. 00:52:988 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Imo the 1/2 rhythm rather too long to a Normal diff, try to use more simple rhythm there like 1/1 + 1/2 slider or something that fit to the music. I know the 1/2 spam really fit with the whole piano sound there, but remember you try to make a Normal diff here, so try to use more simple rhythm
7. 01:42:988 (3,1) - Spacing again
   
   I know you are try not to make a hard diff, but some of the 1/2 spam rhythm like I mention above kinda overmapped for a Normal. I think they more fit if used on a Hard diff instead a Normal diff

Easy

1. 00:14:099 (5) - Imo that 1/2 slider not good for beginner, try to use single circle here 00:14:099 -
2. 00:19:877 (1,2,3) - Maybe you can try a rhythm like this http://puu.sh/n3Twq/4870f3b03a.jpg ? so beginner easier to distinguish the beat on red tick here 00:20:544 -
3. 00:21:210 (3) - Try to avoid stacking on lowest diff, there's several stacking like that 00:25:877 (2) - 01:19:877 (3) -
4. 01:00:766 (1) - Imo that 1/2 slider not good for beginner, maybe you should try to use 1/1 slider there
   
   Check your spacing

Nice storyboard, but I highly sugest that you add a Hard diff and reduce the usement of 1/2 rhythm on Normal, so they can be played more appropriate, but it's back to you want to add Hard diff or not, after all that just my sugestion

Goodluck

Zerss wrote:

Now that you've added the hard, there's a huge gap between Normal and Hard. (between E and N it's like 0,3* and between N and H it's like 1,5*)
What I recommend is to make the E simplier (just cs->2), the N harder (add more rhythm like at 01:04:099 -), and the current H simplier (lower the AR->8 and, make it simplier lol).
You may need to add another hard diff, since the current hard is like a light insane diff. It should be 2.5* approximatively, and then, the map would be fine.
Don't put kds since you already gave me some.

Bragador wrote:

Эт короч слегка запоздавший мод.
[Easy]
00:37:655 (1,2) - поправь дистанцию.
[Normal]
00:00:322 (1,2) - поправь бланкед.
00:02:544 (2) - ^
00:12:321 (3) - next снап сильно уехал, почти 0,9
00:36:988 (2) - бланкед
00:50:099 (1) - ^ совсем капелюшечку
00:57:544 (1) - ^

Инсейн модить не смогу, сорямба.

wajinshu wrote:

Опа новый хард

Janpai wrote:

Took a long time of remapping sorry XD here it is

Janpai's Hard

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: DeeMo - Rainy Memory.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 58988
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Rainy Memory
TitleUnicode:Rainy Memory
Artist:Rabpit
ArtistUnicode:Rabpit
Creator:Shmiklak
Version:Janpai's Hard
Source:Deemo
Tags:piano Rayark selection Vol. 1 Cytus Janpai
BeatmapID:902698
BeatmapSetID:345296

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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257,150,81210,2,0,P|256:115|242:83,1,70
314,26,81655,2,0,P|314:60|328:92,1,70
408,128,82210,70,0,P|433:191|393:252,1,140
310,253,82766,1,0,0:0:0:0:
267,330,82988,2,0,L|123:328,1,140
170,243,83655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
105,181,83877,6,0,P|96:142|105:103,2,70
174,144,84544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
226,86,84766,2,0,P|264:83|297:87,1,70
354,146,85210,2,0,L|358:223,1,70
304,297,85655,69,0,0:0:0:0:
234,241,85877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
182,314,86099,2,0,P|151:308|113:314,1,70
51,248,86544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
51,248,86766,1,0,0:0:0:0:
111,189,86988,2,0,P|120:156|111:121,1,70
50,78,87433,38,0,P|120:89|184:69,1,125.999996154785
237,182,88321,2,0,L|236:308,1,125.999996154785
338,183,89210,2,0,B|329:136|351:99|351:99|329:80|330:41,1,125.999996154785
244,33,89877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,102,90099,2,0,L|112:102,2,62.9999980773926
251,159,90766,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,159,90877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,159,90988,70,0,P|221:192|253:265,1,125.999996154785
383,201,91877,2,0,P|370:148|381:75,1,125.999996154785
302,45,92544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,102,92766,6,0,P|183:90|108:114,1,125.999996154785
51,168,93433,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,227,93655,2,0,P|125:261|130:294,1,62.9999980773926
215,324,94099,2,0,P|214:290|209:257,1,62.9999980773926
271,201,94544,70,0,P|231:176|260:110,1,125.999996154785
306,276,95433,2,0,B|269:288|240:275|240:275|215:288|225:332,2,125.999996154785
432,177,96766,6,0,P|424:140|439:47,1,125.999996154785
280,132,97655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,98099,12,0,99877,0:0:0:0:
114,182,100321,54,0,L|104:118,1,62.9999980773926
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315,326,101655,70,0,P|386:337|453:296,1,140
368,230,102321,2,0,B|373:176|366:128|366:128|390:152|419:146,1,140
414,62,102988,2,0,P|377:47|330:50,1,70
274,107,103433,6,0,P|285:141|278:177,1,70
217,254,103877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
308,275,104099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,253,104321,2,0,P|182:246|148:248,1,70
90,302,104766,2,0,P|70:267|68:227,1,70
128,176,105210,70,0,B|120:100|120:100|151:88|164:54,1,140
287,99,106099,2,0,B|316:180|279:179|302:248,1,140
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84,222,107655,2,0,P|132:186|213:210,1,140
342,87,108544,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,87,108766,70,0,P|349:45|337:11,1,70
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178,100,109655,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,149,109877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,236,110099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
166,290,110321,1,0,0:0:0:0:
242,319,110544,6,0,P|246:284|238:251,1,70
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326,108,111433,2,0,L|246:110,1,70
138,95,111877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
198,36,112099,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,165,112321,70,0,P|211:202|204:244,1,70
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209,356,113433,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,303,113655,2,0,L|286:225,1,70
384,136,114099,6,0,B|346:149|346:149|312:136|312:136|235:161|198:90,1,210
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256,192,116036,12,0,122464,0:0:0:0:

1. 00:04:321 (2) - Change this into a 2/1 slider+circle because the strong beat landed on 00:05:655 and that should be clickable.
2. 00:55:433 - At least you should map until here, that break doesn't look fit with the song at all.
3. 01:02:099 - Add sth here pls.
4. Not a fan of the first part until 00:19:433 because it's the calmest part and yet you put so much object that it became so dense compared to kiai or the other parts.
5. Try bump up the volume in the last kiai a bit, it deserves more imo.